Generalsry...was lazy and didn't make url links D:...just copy and PASTAA
when i say same shape i mean copy and paste
please blanket properly i didnt point them all out..
the straight sliders should be angled abit to help the flow of the map
Hard00:01:378 (4) - I know this is a bit meh...but it would look better the same shape as 00:00:567 (2) -
00:05:837 (2) - same shape as 00:05:026 (5) -
00:06:445 (3,4,5) - when you play this part it feels weird cuz they are the same sounds and same beat apart but the distances are different. A jump doesn't fit here, try:http://puu.sh/iKCqX/7e2fe7fe0f.JPG
01:11:716 (1,2,3) - ^
00:15:567 (5,1) - blanket properly
00:21:851 (4) - why is this so far away D:
00:21:243 (3) - try keep it consistent with 00:23:472 (3,4) - i like the jump here. ur choice tho.
00:39:486 (1) - why repeats here...no beats there. this is better:http://puu.sh/iKCNO/865d17f358.JPG
00:45:364 (3) - not everything must be stacked...
00:11:918 (4) - ^, i will leave it up to u to decide on the positions...there are many good ones
00:11:107 (2,4) - same shape..ctrl+c, ctrl+v please and rotate...looks better
00:58:540 (1) - ctrl+j feels better
00:57:324 (3,4,5) - straight sliders don't have to be horizontal or vertical all the time...here it feels better on an angle like this:http://puu.sh/iKD71/6a0781cfb4.JPG
01:13:134 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:432 (1) - ^
00:44:756 (2) - ^
00:27:324 (4) - ^
00:16:378 (2) - rotate 20 degrees is better
i could ask u to rotate like every straight slider...making it vertical and horizontal all the time makes the flow really weird. I think u could play the map and find the errors so keep in mind i havent listed them all.
00:16:783 (3,4) - more beautiful
D (ask me if u don't know how to make it more beautiful
D)
00:59:351 (3,4) - ^
00:37:459 (1,2,3,4) - looks nice but the flow is weird
00:48:202 (5) - the flow is weird...its directly above the last slider :\
00:52:864 (1,2) - more beautiful blanket/slider
01:07:053 (2,3) - ^
Normalsame thing as hard...straight sliders
00:07:459 (1) - better blanket
00:39:891 (2,2) - same shape
00:42:729 (1,2,3,1,2) - woah...weird maybe move 00:43:134 (2) - to x:324 y:112
00:45:567 (3,4) - ^
00:47:189 (2,4) - same shape please
00:41:107 (2,3) - same shape
00:53:270 (1,2) - more beautiful
D
01:13:945 (1,2,3) - consistent shapes just rotated please
Crimmi's Flashlight00:11:716 - note here??
00:11:107 (4,5,6,1) - Distances makes this really difficult to read fix this please
00:44:553 (2,3,4) - fix the triplet please
00:53:270 - u could have a note here as well, make a jump
00:57:121 (4,5,1) - don't understand this rhythm
00:05:432 (6) - move to x:256 y:272
00:21:040 (6) - make more beautiful
D
00:49:621 (3,5) - same shape
could improve and hope i helped GL~