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banvi
Easy
01:05:815 (1) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
Normal+
02:11:981 & 02:12:148 add note?
Muzukashii
00:24:315 (6,7,8) uhhh this jump is odd & suddenly for me...
02:21:482 (5) new combo?
Insane
00:18:981 (6,7) 1 grid left?
00:42:232 (3,4) spacing is close a bit
01:35:565 (3,4) ^

great map ~star :)
Topic Starter
Ra-s

banvi wrote:

Easy
01:05:815 (1) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
Normal+
02:11:981 & 02:12:148 add note?
Muzukashii
00:24:315 (6,7,8) uhhh this jump is odd & suddenly for me...
02:21:482 (5) new combo?
Insane
00:18:981 (6,7) 1 grid left?
00:42:232 (3,4) spacing is close a bit
01:35:565 (3,4) ^

great map ~star :)
All fixed. Thanks~ :)
IceBeam
[Easyl]
Ugh..I bet all stats are so low because of ranking criteria,but at least increase OD by 1 tick if it's possible.
Otherwise it's fine.

[Muzukashii]
00:36:148 - Add a note.

I can't spot any problems with it.Nice work.
Topic Starter
Ra-s

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Easyl]
Ugh..I bet all stats are so low because of ranking criteria,but at least increase OD by 1 tick if it's possible.
Otherwise it's fine. - Fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:36:148 - Add a note. - authentic

I can't spot any problems with it.Nice work.
Thanks :)
[Shalon]
star.
[DBF]
[Overall]
Lead-in is 3 second? Oh c'mon, 2 sec it's looking fine.

[Easy]
00:21:648 (4,5) - Put this sliders on 00:21:481 and fix spacing. It's just advice.
00:33:815 - So empty. Add bit with finish. It will be like 00:44:481 (1).
00:58:148 (1) - You can make slider tick like clap. Just put in your map folder hitsound clap (from osu skin folder) with
name "normal-slidertick" and make time section with "Custom Override 1".
01:10:148 (3) - ^

[Normal+]
uh.. some parts really hard to understand, ok ok, it's Normal+, but i really don't like things like
02:11:481 (5,6,7,8).

02:16:981 (5) - maybe remove it and put bit on 02:17:148.
James2250
Offset is 1 different on Taiko Inner Oni than the rest of the difficulties
Make sure all the preview points are the same
(I agree 3 lead-in seconds is too much)
I guess for taiko the background is ok but it looks very odd for osu, more than half the screen is black

Easy:
looks good

Normal+:
00:07:148 (3) - new combo
00:24:148 (3,6) - stack the endpoint of 6 with 3
00:55:148 (2) - new combo

Muzu..:
00:49:815 (1) - move this so 5 is centered in the bottom of it
01:07:815 (1) - remove new combo to match others

Taiko Oni:
resnap all notes

Insane:
00:01:815 (5) - new combo?
00:59:815 (6) - new combo to match other one
01:00:315 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:482 (5) - new combo

*star*
Topic Starter
Ra-s

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
Lead-in is 3 second? Oh c'mon, 2 sec it's looking fine.

[Easy]
00:21:648 (4,5) - Put this sliders on 00:21:481 and fix spacing. It's just advice.
00:33:815 - So empty. Add bit with finish. It will be like 00:44:481 (1).
00:58:148 (1) - You can make slider tick like clap. Just put in your map folder hitsound clap (from osu skin folder) with
name "normal-slidertick" and make time section with "Custom Override 1".
01:10:148 (3) - ^

[Normal+]
uh.. some parts really hard to understand, ok ok, it's Normal+, but i really don't like things like
02:11:481 (5,6,7,8).

02:16:981 (5) - maybe remove it and put bit on 02:17:148.

James2250 wrote:

Offset is 1 different on Taiko Inner Oni than the rest of the difficulties
Make sure all the preview points are the same
(I agree 3 lead-in seconds is too much)
I guess for taiko the background is ok but it looks very odd for osu, more than half the screen is black - Ah...:o

Easy:
looks good

Normal+:
00:07:148 (3) - new combo
00:24:148 (3,6) - stack the endpoint of 6 with 3
00:55:148 (2) - new combo

Muzu..:
00:49:815 (1) - move this so 5 is centered in the bottom of it
01:07:815 (1) - remove new combo to match others

Taiko Oni:
resnap all notes

Insane:
00:01:815 (5) - new combo?
00:59:815 (6) - new combo to match other one
01:00:315 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:482 (5) - new combo

*star*
All Fixed~ Thanks
Muya
:oops:
Sakura
Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, you may take or leave anything or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
Why are u using a Taiko type of BG for the whole map?
Not a problem, but for future beatmaps you may want to put your SB elements into a folder.

[General]
Taiko-Oni, Taiko Inner-Oni, Muzukashii, Insane have preview time at 54815 and Normal +, Easy have preview time at 55066 make sure your preview times are the same across all difficulties.
Pure white combo color can hurt the eyes, specially if it has kiai included, please change.

[Insane]
Cant find anything wrong here

[Taiko Inner Oni (Tatsujin)]
Unsupported BPM multipliers arent rankable yet

[Taiko Oni]
Cant find any errors here either.

[Muzukashii]
01:48:148 (X) - Probably should add a note here, feels empty otherwise.

[Normal+]
Cant find any problems here.

[Easy]
Cant find any problems here either.

Really nicely mapped, you can have this shiny star!
aRiskOfRain
Easy;

Seems a bit tough for an easy.

Insane;

A lot of the 1/4 triples and 1/4 repeating sliders don't make a lot of sense; 00:12:815 (3,4,5), 00:23:481 (2) and 00:24:981 (6,1,2), for example.
Topic Starter
Ra-s

DiamondCrash wrote:

Easy;

Seems a bit tough for an easy.

Insane;

A lot of the 1/4 triples and 1/4 repeating sliders don't make a lot of sense; 00:12:815 (3,4,5), 00:23:481 (2) and 00:24:981 (6,1,2), for example.
Thanks.
chocomint
star~:|
RandomJibberish
General
Use a different BG on the non Taiko diffs? The black space looks odd.
White combe colours look horrible during kiai, make a light grey or pale orange which I think would fit better.

Easy
The 1/2 repeating sliders often don't fit the music that well, go though and make sure it's all following something prominent in the music

Normal+
Pluses on diff names look ugly and are pointless. Call it a Normal or a Hard.
Again, the 1/2 sometimes isn't following anything in the music

Insane
Drain -1? The slow parts are very hard to beat.
There is practically no prominent 1/4 in the song apart from occasional drums so most of the triplets, streams and repeating sliders play awkwardly. Get rid of the ones that don't follow anything in the music.
01:36:981 (6,7,8,9) - Zomg mindfuck. The 3 looks like part of a five beat stream here.
01:47:148 (2) - Delete this.

Pretty good map.
NoHitter
Easy
01:10:648 (x) - Why is the kiai starting here? Shouldn't it be at 00:55:148.
01:46:815 (4,5) - Sounds odd. I would prefer if the slider started at 01:46:981 and you added one more repeat, but I suppose it's ok as is.
01:48:148 (6) - New combo

Muzukashii
Why don't you enable Taiko Skin for this difficulty since it's Taikosu?

Insane
The low volume part from 01:48:481 onwards plays ankwardly. It works with sliders like in Normal+, but not with notes.

Good map. Though next time don't post in the queue when it's full. Only modding this since it came from a video game.
Topic Starter
Ra-s

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Use a different BG on the non Taiko diffs? The black space looks odd.
White combe colours look horrible during kiai, make a light grey or pale orange which I think would fit better. - Good Idea! wait sb plz

Easy
The 1/2 repeating sliders often don't fit the music that well, go though and make sure it's all following something prominent in the music - Fixed

Normal+
Pluses on diff names look ugly and are pointless. Call it a Normal or a Hard. - Fixed
Again, the 1/2 sometimes isn't following anything in the music

Insane
Drain -1? The slow parts are very hard to beat. - Fixed
There is practically no prominent 1/4 in the song apart from occasional drums so most of the triplets, streams and repeating sliders play awkwardly. Get rid of the ones that don't follow anything in the music. - Fixed
01:36:981 (6,7,8,9) - Zomg mindfuck. The 3 looks like part of a five beat stream here.
01:47:148 (2) - Delete this. - Fixed

Pretty good map.

NoHItter wrote:

Easy
01:10:648 (x) - Why is the kiai starting here? Shouldn't it be at 00:55:148. - Fixed
01:46:815 (4,5) - Sounds odd. I would prefer if the slider started at 01:46:981 and you added one more repeat, but I suppose it's ok as is. - Fixed
01:48:148 (6) - New combo - Fixed

Muzukashii
Why don't you enable Taiko Skin for this difficulty since it's Taikosu? - I'll think about it

Insane
The low volume part from 01:48:481 onwards plays ankwardly. It works with sliders like in Normal+, but not with notes. - Fixed

Good map. Though next time don't post in the queue when it's full. Only modding this since it came from a video game. - Sorry :(
Thanks. :)
Sanjenin Nagi
taiko inner oni 17miss >.<
star~~
MOM
아..맵 재밌다!

얼른 랭크되길 8-)
Nakagawa-Kanon
절반완성 ㅇㅇ.

I was stolen s i r i r u's SB object





Download: Takamitsu Yoko - Angel Dream (Ra-s).osb
Topic Starter
Ra-s

dksslqj wrote:

절반완성 ㅇㅇ.

I was stolen s i r i r u's SB object
minyeob
왜 Hard만 무즈카시이라고 표시를 하셨나요 ㅇㅅㅇ

[Tatsujin]
AIMOD-> Errors - More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map
언랭 요소인지는 잘 모르겠지만 뭔가가 마음에 걸리네요......
태고여서 괜찮나?

맵은 우월함
Topic Starter
Ra-s

minyeob wrote:

왜 Hard만 무즈카시이라고 표시를 하셨나요 ㅇㅅㅇ

[Tatsujin]
AIMOD-> Errors - More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map
언랭 요소인지는 잘 모르겠지만 뭔가가 마음에 걸리네요......
태고여서 괜찮나?

맵은 우월함
Muzukashii는 타이코수입니다. 태고Authentic임. Tatsujin은 아마 변속때문에 그런거 같은데 그거 변속 리피형이 직접 해주셔서 자세히는 잘 모르겠어요;
lepidopodus
@minyeob : 태고는 상관 없습니다. 어차피 이거 엄밀하게 따지면 노트 속도가 몇번 변하더라...
어쨌든 그 슬라이더 속도는 스탠다드였으면 특별한 이유 없으면 언랭 사유일테지만.

@Ra-s : 마지막으로 정통맵은 노트 확인해 주셨으면 합니다.
Skyblue_old_1
랭크 기원합니당
Nakagawa-Kanon
kino77
:3
S-Nanoha
별을 찍자 ㅋ
Dotsu
~STAR~
:D
Rigeru_old
:lol:
Cute Bunny
흠..... 외우고 그냥 풀콤하기로 했슴...
그런의미에서 별 ㅇㅅㅇ; + ㅡ.ㅡ;
Zekira

minyeob wrote:

왜 Hard만 무즈카시이라고 표시를 하셨나요 ㅇㅅㅇ

[Tatsujin]
AIMOD-> Errors - More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map
언랭 요소인지는 잘 모르겠지만 뭔가가 마음에 걸리네요......
태고여서 괜찮나?

맵은 우월함
I think it's been established that Taiko maps are exceptions to this error
arien666

Zekira wrote:

minyeob wrote:

왜 Hard만 무즈카시이라고 표시를 하셨나요 ㅇㅅㅇ

[Tatsujin]
AIMOD-> Errors - More than three unique slider speeds are used in this map
언랭 요소인지는 잘 모르겠지만 뭔가가 마음에 걸리네요......
태고여서 괜찮나?

맵은 우월함
I think it's been established that Taiko maps are exceptions to this error
Agree with Zekira's comment.
As this diff is Taiko-diff, it doesn't matter :3
Zekira
[General]
-Offset: 488 (+6 from current). Move other timing points appropriately.
-Not a technical difficulty, but I really don't like the storyboarded sounds that happen in between the sliders. This is rankable, but I just say I highly disapprove of it. Won't force you to change this.
-Some orzness in the New Combo placings, but I won't point those out since they apparently look fine (not to me though, lol, but I'll let it pass)

[Storyboard]
00:55:148 [w.png] - I really think that the flashes here are too quick. If you want to keep them, please extend their fade out time to be at least 1/1 long, because they are just plain annoying. In terms of rankability this isn't a problem, but this is seriously annoying. I will not let this pass; I am forcing you to change this.
EDIT: The repeated flashes in 01:15:231 and 02:19:231 is even more annoying and I say remove them please. Damn. You are making a wonderful song have really annoying visuals.
EDIT2: I seriously think things would be much better if you didn't storyboard the white in :/

[Insane]
00:22:981 (11) - align with wither 8 and 9 or 7 and 10? Looks weirdright now. Just a suggestion.
01:48:815 (2) - delete?
Topic Starter
Ra-s

Zekira wrote:

[General]
-Offset: 488 (+6 from current). Move other timing points appropriately. - Fixed
-Not a technical difficulty, but I really don't like the storyboarded sounds that happen in between the sliders. This is rankable, but I just say I highly disapprove of it. Won't force you to change this.
-Some orzness in the New Combo placings, but I won't point those out since they apparently look fine (not to me though, lol, but I'll let it pass)

[Storyboard]
00:55:148 [w.png] - I really think that the flashes here are too quick. If you want to keep them, please extend their fade out time to be at least 1/1 long, because they are just plain annoying. In terms of rankability this isn't a problem, but this is seriously annoying. I will not let this pass; I am forcing you to change this.
EDIT: The repeated flashes in 01:15:231 and 02:19:231 is even more annoying and I say remove them please. Damn. You are making a wonderful song have really annoying visuals.
EDIT2: I seriously think things would be much better if you didn't storyboard the white in :/ - remove "w.png"

[Insane]
00:22:981 (11) - align with wither 8 and 9 or 7 and 10? Looks weirdright now. Just a suggestion.
01:48:815 (2) - delete? - Fixed
Thanks~ :)
ac17407
star~
Zekira
[Timing]
The start of kiai on all difficulties (except Inner Oni for some odd reason) are off by +1ms -- 55155->55154 and 119155->119154

[Files]
Delete "w.png" from the folder and Full Submit again

[Inner Oni]
The 1.20HS should be 1.25.
Foster Don
:lol:
Topic Starter
Ra-s

Zekira wrote:

[Timing]
The start of kiai on all difficulties (except Inner Oni for some odd reason) are off by +1ms -- 55155->55154 and 119155->119154 - Fixed

[Files]
Delete "w.png" from the folder and Full Submit again - Fixed

[Inner Oni]
The 1.20HS should be 1.25. - Fixed
Thanks! :)
Zekira
I like it so much now

I accidentally highlighted the heart icon and almost pressed Submit lol

EDIT: ...totally did not see the immense number of bubbles at the moment, but w/e
Topic Starter
Ra-s

Zekira wrote:

I like it so much now

I accidentally highlighted the heart icon and almost pressed Submit lol

EDIT: ...totally did not see the immense number of bubbles at the moment, but w/e
Thanks! :D
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