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LynneMusic - Motiv8

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Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 22 de julio de 2017 at 18:15:16

Artist: LynneMusic
Title: Motiv8
Tags: neosounds techno trance happyrocket88 -sh1n1-
BPM: 170
Filesize: 20207kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,79 stars, 281 notes)
  2. Insane (4,47 stars, 583 notes)
  3. Normal (2,05 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Rocket's Hard (3,62 stars, 451 notes)
  5. Sh1n1's Easy (1,49 stars, 165 notes)
Download: LynneMusic - Motiv8
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sh1n1's Easy: By -Sh1n1-.
Normal: By me.
Advanced: By me.
Rocket's Hard: By HappyRocket88.
Insane: By me.
Storyboard: By XinCrin.
Hitsound assistance: By Yuii-.

All the modders so far
  1. HappyRocket88
  2. Lumael
  3. Osuology
  4. Yuii-
  5. Euny
  6. J1NX1337
  7. Hiyori
  8. Gear
  9. Loughje
  10. jyu
  11. OrangeYouGlad
  12. Zaphkael
  13. neonat
  14. ErunamoJAZZ
  15. cheezstik
  16. CptBlackBird
  17. <strong>CDFA</strong>
  18. Sc4v4ng3r
  19. ByBy
  20. Exa
  21. Trosk-
  22. FCL
  23. Celeste
  24. pishifat
  25. RVMathew (it doesn't let me give you kudosu for some reason, rip)
Last edited by Serraionga , edited 127 times in total.
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Hi Serraionga

It was a pleasure to help out with your project. I'll reply this forum later with my GD. >-< Thanks you so much. See you around. o3o

Un mod muy incompleto pero bueno o3o
2015-05-25 11:39 Serraionga: ¿Tienes un momento?
2015-05-25 11:40 HappyRocket88: Claro. o.o
2015-05-25 11:40 Serraionga: Es que acabo de terminar la diff de uno de mis mapas y quería que alguien le hiciera un testplay
2015-05-25 11:40 Serraionga: Para ver si me ha salido un shitmap o algo.
2015-05-25 11:40 Serraionga: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/705759 LynneMusic - Motiv8]
2015-05-25 11:40 Serraionga: Solo un testplay, nada más.
2015-05-25 11:41 HappyRocket88: Ah... Pensé que me preguntabas por una GD. ;w;
2015-05-25 11:41 Serraionga: xDD
2015-05-25 11:41 Serraionga: Bueno, puedes hacer una si quieres.
2015-05-25 11:41 Serraionga: La canción es excelente, su mapper no tanto :<
2015-05-25 11:42 HappyRocket88: ¿Te puedo preguntar algo?
2015-05-25 11:42 HappyRocket88: ¿Cómo hacés... para que...
2015-05-25 11:42 HappyRocket88: la insane tenga tantas estrellas? o3o
2015-05-25 11:42 Serraionga: La hice algo difícil
2015-05-25 11:42 Serraionga: Tiene bastantes jumps y 2 streams largos xD
2015-05-25 11:42 HappyRocket88: Pero yo aunque intente...
2015-05-25 11:43 HappyRocket88: no logro pasar de las 4 estrellas. ;w;
2015-05-25 11:43 HappyRocket88: Estoy resignada a mapear Easy/Normal/Hard. 
2015-05-25 11:43 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-05-25 11:43 HappyRocket88: *destinada
2015-05-25 11:43 HappyRocket88: Bueno, aquí ya descargó. o.o
2015-05-25 11:43 Serraionga: Hazla en HT. :^)
2015-05-25 11:47 Serraionga: ¿Qué tal?
2015-05-25 11:47 HappyRocket88: Nada mal. En los dobles es un poco confuso conseguir una buena acc
2015-05-25 11:48 HappyRocket88: Hay una parte que llega hasta los 20 del mismo color.
2015-05-25 11:48 Serraionga: ahhh
2015-05-25 11:48 Serraionga: Debo hacerle algunos retoques entonces
2015-05-25 11:50 HappyRocket88: Si bien sigues el ritmo de los instrumentos y no del fondo...
2015-05-25 11:50 HappyRocket88: Se afecta mucho la polaridad para aquel jugador que no sabe la canción.
2015-05-25 11:50 HappyRocket88: Por lo tanto, es pertinente subir el volumen.
2015-05-25 11:51 HappyRocket88: 01:03:734 (7) 
2015-05-25 11:51 HappyRocket88: Este slider es un poco confuso. 
2015-05-25 11:52 HappyRocket88: No en el sentido que no encaje en la música.
2015-05-25 11:52 HappyRocket88: sino que la posición respecto al fondo es unánime. 
2015-05-25 11:52 Serraionga: Sí
2015-05-25 11:52 HappyRocket88: en este orden de ideas, un Ctrl+G
2015-05-25 11:52 Serraionga: Me salió algo extraño ahí xD
2015-05-25 11:52 HappyRocket88: encajaría bien. o3o
2015-05-25 11:53 Serraionga: Ahora tiene más sentido |-)
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: :D/
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: 01:31:793 (9) Nuevo combo.
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: 01:31:793 (9)
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: Nuevo combo
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: ahora sí
2015-05-25 11:53 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-05-25 11:54 Serraionga: fixedd
2015-05-25 11:54 HappyRocket88: La forma de este slider... o3o
2015-05-25 11:55 HappyRocket88: 01:40:264 (9)
2015-05-25 11:55 HappyRocket88: Es poco rara... pero es sólo una cuestión de estética.
2015-05-25 11:55 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-05-25 11:55 HappyRocket88: Si quieres lo dejas así.
2015-05-25 11:55 Serraionga: es mi slider art :^)
2015-05-25 11:55 Serraionga: No sabía como hacerlo así que lo dejé así xD
2015-05-25 11:56 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-05-25 11:56 HappyRocket88: Bien...
2015-05-25 11:56 HappyRocket88: Hablando de ese slider... 
2015-05-25 11:56 Serraionga: ¿El approach rate está bien, verdad?
2015-05-25 11:57 HappyRocket88: Yeah, Con tal que la Hard sea un Ar 7 u 8 o3o
2015-05-25 11:57 Serraionga: yesh
2015-05-25 11:57 HappyRocket88: Quizás no encajaría mejor este slider de acuerdo a la canción?
2015-05-25 11:57 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/i0545/2408847224.jpg
2015-05-25 11:59 Serraionga: hmmm
2015-05-25 11:59 Serraionga: tal vez
2015-05-25 11:59 Serraionga: Sí, voy a cambiarlo |-)
2015-05-25 12:00 HappyRocket88: ¿Qué tal si ubicar un nuevo combo aquí 01:46:617 (8) - ?
2015-05-25 12:00 HappyRocket88: *s
2015-05-25 12:01 Serraionga: fixedd
2015-05-25 12:01 HappyRocket88: Este parte aquí podría ser más simétrica. o3o
2015-05-25 12:01 HappyRocket88: 01:54:558 (6,7) - 
2015-05-25 12:02 HappyRocket88: Quizá algo así...
2015-05-25 12:02 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/i05kR/554b571dad.jpg
2015-05-25 12:03 Serraionga: Ya
2015-05-25 12:03 HappyRocket88: 01:57:911 (8) - Nuevo combo aquí también. (/u\)
2015-05-25 12:04 Serraionga: hecho
2015-05-25 12:04 HappyRocket88: Me encanta
2015-05-25 12:04 Serraionga: eso se me pasa por alto al hacer tanto copy-paste :^)
2015-05-25 12:04 HappyRocket88: el stream. >-<
2015-05-25 12:05 HappyRocket88: I mean, the way you put the notes making an awesome flow is incredible!
2015-05-25 12:05 Serraionga: bueno, algo bueno salió
2015-05-25 12:05 HappyRocket88: Good hob
2015-05-25 12:05 Serraionga: oh YE
2015-05-25 12:05 HappyRocket88: Aumenta el DS a 13x
2015-05-25 12:05 HappyRocket88: 1.3, perdón.
2015-05-25 12:06 HappyRocket88: Alt gr y dónde dice, Beat Snap Divisor, lo aumentas. o3o
2015-05-25 12:07 Serraionga: ya
2015-05-25 12:07 Serraionga: creo
2015-05-25 12:07 HappyRocket88: 02:50:499 (8) 
2015-05-25 12:07 HappyRocket88: Nuevo combo. o3o
2015-05-25 12:08 Serraionga: done
2015-05-25 12:08 HappyRocket88: 02:56:146 (8) - ^
2015-05-25 12:08 HappyRocket88: Me encanta este jump de aquí. o3o
2015-05-25 12:09 HappyRocket88: 03:05:676 (9) - ^
2015-05-25 12:09 Serraionga: Ese jump tenía un nombre, pero no recuerdo cual :<
2015-05-25 12:09 Serraionga: fixedd
2015-05-25 12:10 HappyRocket88: 03:08:499 (9) - No estoy segura de esto o3o 
2015-05-25 12:10 HappyRocket88: No crees que encajaría mejor dos sliders de 1/2 o 4 círculos en cada palito balco y rojo. o.o
2015-05-25 12:11 Serraionga: Lo de los círculos me parece una buena idea
2015-05-25 12:11 Serraionga: osea, los 4 círculos
2015-05-25 12:11 HappyRocket88: Sí. xD
2015-05-25 12:12 HappyRocket88: 03:19:088 (6) - Nuevo combo. o3o
2015-05-25 12:12 Serraionga: done
2015-05-25 12:12 HappyRocket88: Bueno, creo que eso es todo. Lo más posible que te sugieran en los próximos mods es blanket
2015-05-25 12:13 Serraionga: No sé si añadir algo más, después del último stream
2015-05-25 12:13 HappyRocket88: y círculos en cada palito rojo. o3o
2015-05-25 12:13 HappyRocket88: Serra, tu sabes que no. o3o
2015-05-25 12:13 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-05-25 12:13 HappyRocket88: Así está perfecto. \(o.o)/
2015-05-25 12:13 Serraionga: |-)
2015-05-25 12:13 Serraionga: yesh
2015-05-25 12:14 HappyRocket88: Por ejemplo, lo que te "pueden" llegar a sugerir es: add a note here
2015-05-25 12:14 HappyRocket88: 03:15:381 - 
2015-05-25 12:14 HappyRocket88: Por cuestiones de polaridad. o3o
2015-05-25 12:14 HappyRocket88: 03:09:734 - ^
2015-05-25 12:15 HappyRocket88: 03:02:676 ^
2015-05-25 12:15 HappyRocket88: Pero es sólo una especulación... 
2015-05-25 12:15 HappyRocket88: Yo no sé muy bien de esto, porque es tu forma de mapear. o3o
2015-05-25 12:15 HappyRocket88: Así que buena suerte. n.n
2015-05-25 12:16 HappyRocket88: Recuerda agregar más hitsounds. (/u\)
2015-05-25 12:16 Serraionga: Sí
2015-05-25 12:16 Serraionga: Aun tengo que investigar en eso :<
2015-05-25 12:17 Serraionga: Thanks for your modding, mein freund. :}
2015-05-25 12:17 HappyRocket88: YAY! :D/
2015-05-25 12:17 HappyRocket88: Una última cosa...
2015-05-25 12:17 Serraionga: Una cosa más
2015-05-25 12:17 Serraionga: uh
2015-05-25 12:18 Serraionga: Esto normalmente los mappers suelen subirlo al tema
2015-05-25 12:18 Serraionga: Osea, la conversación
2015-05-25 12:18 HappyRocket88: 02:28:970 (5,6,7) - Setiar estos objetos como claps encajan en la canción. o3o
2015-05-25 12:18 HappyRocket88: Ah... por lo de kudosus? o.o
2015-05-25 12:19 HappyRocket88: Neh, yo no me preocupo tanto por eso. xD 
2015-05-25 12:19 HappyRocket88: Pero si me quieres dar, bienvenido sos. \(o.o)/
2015-05-25 12:20 Serraionga: Tengo que hacer mi deber de buen samaritano :^)
2015-05-25 12:20 Serraionga: Aunque no sé como subir la conversación
2015-05-25 12:20 Serraionga: D:
2015-05-25 12:21 HappyRocket88: Yo lo hago. o3o
2015-05-25 12:21 HappyRocket88: Pero te enseñarçe como hacerlo.
2015-05-25 12:21 HappyRocket88: Vas a la carpeta de osu...
2015-05-25 12:21 HappyRocket88: Y colocas chats.
2015-05-25 12:22 HappyRocket88: Sólo si tienes la opción activada de guardar los mensajes privados (como esta conversación) en tu carpeta. 8)
2015-05-25 12:22 HappyRocket88: Sino, lo puedes activar en las opciones de juego de osu. o3o
2015-05-25 12:22 Serraionga: ah, bien
2015-05-25 12:22 Serraionga: EXCELLENT
2015-05-25 12:23 HappyRocket88: Ohhhh...
2015-05-25 12:23 HappyRocket88: Una pregunta antes de modear otro mapa...
2015-05-25 12:23 HappyRocket88: ¿Si me permites hacer la GD? o3o
2015-05-25 12:23 Serraionga: No veo porque no, adelante. :>
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
Updated.

Also, trying out some hitsounds.
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Here the diff. :'3

Rocket's Hard
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
Updated!
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael

This is a M4M Request! Visit my queue here! My active beatmap to mod: The Living Tombstone- Heavy's Pizza Song


  • [Normal]

    00:22:617 (1,2) - Blanket them properly plxxx :p
    00:25:087 (6,1) - ^
    00:25:440 (1,3) - Fix overlap
    00:27:911 (6,1) - Fix blanket
    00:31:087 (1,2) - ^
    00:33:911 (1) - I think that from here on you should map both rhythms, the one that you was mapping b4 and this weird rhythm that comes from 00:33:911 - , it's just too simplistic here
    00:43:793 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable
    00:55:264 (4,5) - Flow is really bad here, blanket them?
    00:55:793 (5,1) - ^
    01:02:146 (1,3) - Fix overlap
    01:27:558 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable
    01:30:381 (1,2) - Fix this blanket plox D:
    01:33:205 (1,2) - ^
    01:50:146 (1,3) - Kind of overlap, fix?
    01:52:970 (1,2) - Fix blanket
    01:53:676 (2,4) - Fix overlap
    01:58:617 (1,2) - Fix blanket
    02:00:381 (3,1) - Kind of overlap, fix?
    02:04:264 (1,3) - ^
    02:05:499 (3) - Shouldn't it start on the white snap?
    02:07:087 (1,3) - Kind of overlap, fix?
    02:09:205 (4,1) - ^
    02:26:852 (1,3) - Not an overlap but it looks ugly sry :s
    02:32:499 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable
    02:40:617 (7,1) - Fix overlap
    02:42:559 (4,5) - ^
    02:43:441 (7,2) - ^
    02:57:911 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable
    03:00:734 (1,2) - Fix blanket

    [Rocket's Hard]
  1. I suggest increasing the DS? I feel like circles are overlapping one another lmfao xD
    00:22:970 (1,2) - Pretty sure this DS is incosistent compared to 00:23:323 (2,3) -
  2. Same applies to the symmetrical part
    00:40:264 (2,3) - Overlap?
    00:55:440 (1,1,1,1) - This needs to be all NC?
    00:55:793 (1) - Stack on (4)?
    01:05:852 (3) - Stack on (3)?
    01:10:087 - Pretty sure there's a note here
    01:17:852 (1,3) - Almost an overlap D:
    01:18:381 (3,2) - ^ in fact this one is a overlap
    01:19:617 (3,4) - Blanket :3333333333333 http://puu.sh/iCZg6/ece80ea1a2.jpg
    01:21:205 (1) - Stack on (2)?
    01:27:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Blanket :333 http://puu.sh/iCZhJ/90929dfb83.jpg http://puu.sh/iCZiF/e84cdf7eff.jpg
    01:45:734 (5,1) - Overlap :3
    02:02:323 - add 1/2 slider starting on down beat? feels weird this blank space
    02:17:852 - Pretty sure there's a note here
    02:22:264 (3,4) - Make them the distance from 02:21:205 (1,2) - ?
    02:23:499 - Again, pretty sure there's a note here
    02:25:617 (1,3) - Overlap :3
    02:26:146 (3,2) - ^
    02:27:382 (3,4) - blanket
    02:35:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    02:38:676 (3,1) - Overlap
    02:46:087 (2,4) - ^
    02:47:146 (2,3) - blanket :3
    02:50:852 (1,2) - looks like an overlap but not sure
    02:54:558 (3,1,2) - Overlap
    02:57:205 (2,3,4) - DS inconsistency for sure here
    03:12:558 (3,1) - Overlap
    03:16:440 (7,2) - ^
    03:19:970 (2,4) - ^
    03:21:029 (2,3) - blanket :3
    03:21:029 (2,4) - ^

    [Insane]

    00:23:676 (5,1) - Overlap
    00:23:852 (6,3) - Not an overlap but kind weird
    00:28:970 (4,1) - fix blanket and overlap
    00:42:116 (4) - Remove?
    00:48:558 (3,5) - overlap
    00:49:087 (5,7) - ^
    00:52:440 (7,1) - ^
    00:59:852 (3,5) - Kinda overlap, fix it?
    01:02:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
    01:33:558 (2,3,4) - ^
    01:33:911 (3,5) - ^
    01:34:970 (6,1) - ^
    01:43:793 (7) - Blanket with 01:42:999 (5) - ?
    01:48:911 (6,7) - Overlap
    01:50:852 (3,6) - ^
    01:56:499 (3,6) - ^
    02:12:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - There's no reason for a stream here :p sry and it looks like a mess
    02:38:146 (1,3) - Overlap
    02:44:323 (3,5) - ^
    02:44:323 (3,7) - ^
    02:48:205 (7,1) - ^
    03:00:734 (1,4) - Fix blanket plox D:
    03:04:264 (4,5) - ^
    03:06:381 (1,4) - overlap and blanket and weird slider :>
    03:15:381 - add circle?
    03:20:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - There's no reason for a stream here :p sry and it looks like a mess
That's it :)
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
did I just got a random mod out of nowhere
nvm rocket asked for it lol, thanks man o/

LucaSA4 wrote:

  • [Normal]

    00:22:617 (1,2) - Blanket them properly plxxx :p ✓
    00:25:087 (6,1) - ^ ✓
    00:25:440 (1,3) - Fix overlap ✓
    00:27:911 (6,1) - Fix blanket ✓
    00:31:087 (1,2) - ^ ✓
    00:33:911 (1) - I think that from here on you should map both rhythms, the one that you was mapping b4 and this weird rhythm that comes from 00:33:911 - , it's just too simplistic here ✓ That's just me not having a clue on how to map normal diffs, lol. Tried something different.
    00:43:793 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable ✓ Spinner removed.
    00:55:264 (4,5) - Flow is really bad here, blanket them? ✓
    00:55:793 (5,1) - ^ ✓
    01:02:146 (1,3) - Fix overlap ✓
    01:27:558 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable ✓ Reduced the length of the spinner.
    01:30:381 (1,2) - Fix this blanket plox D: ✓
    01:33:205 (1,2) - ^ ? Uh, not sure how to fix something like that. I'll need a better hand on this. :{
    01:50:146 (1,3) - Kind of overlap, fix? ✘ Not changing it for now, as it would mess up the shape of the slider. I'll look into that, though.
    01:52:970 (1,2) - Fix blanket ✓
    01:53:676 (2,4) - Fix overlap ✓
    01:58:617 (1,2) - Fix blanket ✓
    02:00:381 (3,1) - Kind of overlap, fix? ✓
    02:04:264 (1,3) - ^ ✓
    02:05:499 (3) - Shouldn't it start on the white snap? ✘ No, because I'm following a previous pattern, which is used in various segments of the song like 01:41:676 (1) and later on.
    02:07:087 (1,3) - Kind of overlap, fix? ✓
    02:09:205 (4,1) - ^ ✓
    02:26:852 (1,3) - Not an overlap but it looks ugly sry :s ✘ Really? It looks aesthetically pleasing to me.
    02:32:499 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable ✓ Reduced the length of the spinner.
    02:40:617 (7,1) - Fix overlap ✓ Fixed, I guess?
    02:42:559 (4,5) - ^ ✓ ^
    02:43:441 (7,2) - ^ ✓
    02:57:911 (1) - 2 Snaps of recovery time or unrankable ✓ Reduced the length of the spinner.
    03:00:734 (1,2) - Fix blanket ✓

    [Insane]

    00:23:676 (5,1) - Overlap ✓
    00:23:852 (6,3) - Not an overlap but kind weird ✓ Fixed.
    00:28:970 (4,1) - fix blanket and overlap ✓
    00:42:116 (4) - Remove? ✘ It feels short with just 3 notes IMO.
    00:48:558 (3,5) - overlap ✓
    00:49:087 (5,7) - ^ ? Huh? I can't see it.
    00:52:440 (7,1) - ^ ✓
    00:59:852 (3,5) - Kinda overlap, fix it? ✓
    01:02:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ✓ Tried something different.
    01:33:558 (2,3,4) - ^ ✓
    01:33:911 (3,5) - ^ ✓
    01:34:970 (6,1) - ^ ✓
    01:43:793 (7) - Blanket with 01:42:999 (5) - ? ✓
    01:48:911 (6,7) - Overlap ✓
    01:50:852 (3,6) - ^ ✓
    01:56:499 (3,6) - ^ ✓
    02:12:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - There's no reason for a stream here :p sry and it looks like a mess ✘ Really wanted to put a stream here because I think it fits with the constant increase of intensity around this part. I also love streams a lot. So yeah.
    02:38:146 (1,3) - Overlap ✓
    02:44:323 (3,5) - ^ ✓
    02:44:323 (3,7) - ^ ✓
    02:48:205 (7,1) - ^ ✓
    03:00:734 (1,4) - Fix blanket plox D: ✓ Fixed, I guess?
    03:04:264 (4,5) - ^ ✓
    03:06:381 (1,4) - overlap and blanket and weird slider :> ✓ I didn't know what people meant by blankets when I made this, haha. Fixed everything.
    03:15:381 - add circle? ✓ Breaks one of the previous patterns but sounds slightly better. Fixed.
    03:20:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - There's no reason for a stream here :p sry and it looks like a mess ✘ Same as the other one.
That's it :)
Really grateful for your mod!
Now waiting for Rocket…
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

LucaSA4 wrote:

[Rocket's Hard]
[*]I suggest increasing the DS? I feel like circles are overlapping one another lmfao xD x'D
00:55:440 (1,1,1,1) - This needs to be all NC? Yeah, Just a new combing inconsistency for purpose. c:
01:10:087 - Pretty sure there's a note here It can be, but no. I listened to it at 50% and a 1/2 slider would fit
02:17:852 - Pretty sure there's a note here ^
02:22:264 (3,4) - Make them the distance from 02:21:205 (1,2) - ? This is just a jumpy pattern.
02:50:852 (1,2) - looks like an overlap but not sure no that bad though
02:57:205 (2,3,4) - DS inconsistency for sure here It was for purpose.
The rest was applied. Thanks a bunch for your mod. ♥

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Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
Updated!
Osuology
528 posts
Joined February 2014
Osuology
[Insane]
No hitsounds at beginning?
00:34:793 (2,3) - I find this hard to read. Maybe space the 3 out a bit?
00:37:617 (2,3) - Same ^
00:52:440 (7,8) - ctrl + g (it's weird yes, but it somehow seems better to me, change it only if you want)
01:24:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda big. I'm skeptical of this.

[General]
add rocket to tags

[Rockets Hard]
I didn't mod, just looked at it with AIBat and here:
00:57:558 (3) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 00:58:087 (4) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 00:59:323 (4) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 00:59:852 (1) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:00:381 (2) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:00:911 (3) -
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Unsnapped slider (end). 01:04:970 (4) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:05:499 (2) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:06:028 (4) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:06:558 (6) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 01:07:087 (8) -
Unsnapped slider (repeat). 01:07:087 (8) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 02:32:499 (2) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 02:33:029 (4) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 02:33:558 (6) -
Unsnapped slider (end). 02:34:088 (8) -
Unsnapped slider (end).
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Thanks for your AIBat mod. ♥

Im a cat
osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Motiv8
TitleUnicode:Motiv8
Artist:LynneMusic
ArtistUnicode:LynneMusic
Creator:Serraionga
Version:Rocket's Hard
Source:
Tags:lynnemusic motiv8 techno trance electronic
BeatmapID:708866
BeatmapSetID:316760

[Difficulty]
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Serraionga
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Topic Starter
Serraionga

Osuology wrote:

[Insane]
No hitsounds at beginning? ? What do you mean? There are hitsounds being used, unless you meant an specific part.
00:34:793 (2,3) - I find this hard to read. Maybe space the 3 out a bit? ✓
00:37:617 (2,3) - Same ^ ✓
00:52:440 (7,8) - ctrl + g (it's weird yes, but it somehow seems better to me, change it only if you want) ✓ Not weird at all! Fixed.
01:24:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda big. I'm skeptical of this. ✓ Now that you mention it, it feels awkward. Reduced the gap between them, but not by much.

[General]
add rocket to tags ✓
Thanks man!
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Updated!
Osuology
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Osuology

Serraionga wrote:

Osuology wrote:

[Insane]
No hitsounds at beginning? ? What do you mean? There are hitsounds being used, unless you meant an specific part. Really? I didn't notice any.
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

Osuology wrote:

Really? I didn't notice any.
It's Rocket's diff the one which doesn't have hitsounds at the beginning, all my diffs do. :<

unless I messed that up while changing things
-Sh1n1-
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-Sh1n1-
Siento la demora bro D:, me faltan agregarles mas HS, pero ya lo subo para que vayan llegando los mods

Sh1n1's Easy
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Yuii-
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Yuii-
Se viene lo bueno \:D/

Suerte con esto, muchachos!

EDIT: Mirá cómo te hago una página nueva, papá!
Serraionga
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Topic Starter
Serraionga
Ahora estamos listos, solo nos queda hacer historia (?).

Updated!
Yuii-
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Yuii-
Y... me parece que algo va a caer acá en las próximas 48 horas.
Serraionga
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Serraionga

Yuii- wrote:

Y... me parece que algo va a caer acá en las próximas 48 horas.
Un ladrillo de texto, seguro (?).
Yuii-
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Yuii-
Claro, esto se venía venir (?)
De #spanish Modding Queue!

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General



  1. 00:56:499 - 01:07:793 - Esto podría ser parte del Kiai, tranquilamente, cumple con el mismo ritmo que la parte marcada en el mapa.
  2. 02:04:264 - 02:15:558 - Y esto perfectamente, también.
El primer spinner no empieza en el mismo lugar en todas las dificultades. En las dos GDs, por ejemplo, el spinner comienza en 00:12:734 - mientras que, en tus dificultades, arrancás el mapa en 00:13:970 - haciendo que sea algo inconsistente.

Van a tener que desactivar las opciones de "Widescreen Support" y "Letterbox during breaks" ya que no están usando ningún sb/video o algo parecido.

Falta trabajar MUCHO con los hitsounds, en todas las dificultades. La que mejores hitsounds tiene es la de Sh1n1 y aún así le queda bastante para ser mejorada.

Sh1n1's Easy



General: No le veo la necesidad de poner tantos puntos blancos, sinceramente. Podría ser completamente mejor si hacés un par de cambios, ya que muchos son innecesarios. Podrías intentar hacer distintas maneras, esa clase de sliders tienen muchos puntos que pueden ser borrados para que el mapa quede más prolijo. Te voy a mostrar un ejemplo de cómo podrías mejorarse: http://puu.sh/iLoVK/ff76501734.jpg . Algunos sliders donde ocurre esto: 00:48:028 (1,2,3) - 00:56:499 (1) - 01:19:087 (1) - 01:22:969 (2) - 01:42:381 (2) - 01:45:205 (2) - .

Por otra parte, hay bastantes objetos que no terminan en algún tick, podés ver los mismos con el AiMod.

Por último y no menos importante, te recomendio usar CS, OD y HP en "3,0" para que no se quede tan por detrás de las demás dificultades.

Normal



General: A continuación, todas las líneas verdes innecesarias: 01:21:205 - 01:21:911 - 01:24:028 - 01:24:734 - 02:49:440 - .
02:15:646 - ¿Esto está mal snappeado o me parece? Es decir, para qué pondrías una línea verde antes de una pausa?

  1. 00:24:028 (3) - Intentá que este círculo también tenga una distancia de 1.00x como hacés con las demás.
  2. 00:26:852 (3,4,5,6) - No estoy entendiendo bien qué intentás lograr en esta parte si mantener un espacio perfecto entre las notas, o bien, reducir la distancia a medida que van pasando los círculos en 0.01x. En cualquiera de los 2 casos, te tocaría arreglarlo para que quede 10 puntetes.
  3. 00:28:970 (2) - El punto del medio giralo para que quede para el otro lado, en las dificultades bajas no es recomendable que el slider termine para el lado opuesto del otro objeto.
  4. 00:58:617 (2) - No revisé hitsounds, pero un Finish acá quedaría muchísimo mejor considerando que el beat resalta más por sobre los demás.
  5. 01:46:617 (4,1) - Como que son muchos repeats, ¿no? Puede sonar como una sugerencia un poco nazi, ya que es como YO mappearía esto, pero creo que podría sonar mejor considerando que en esta parte no se están siguiendo los beats constantes al pie de la letra, y eso de terminar un slider de 1/2 con 2 repeats y después agregar uno completo... sería un poco mejor. Agregá un círculo en 01:46:617 - y después el slider desde 01:46:970 - hasta 01:47:676 - con un repeat en 01:47:323 - .
  6. 01:52:264 (4) - Esto en una dificultad Normal? No lo veo como una taaaan buena idea, sobre todo considerando que es 1/6, lo que hace un poco difícil para los jugadores newbies. A veces en las dificultades bajas te va a convenir sacrificar beats no MUY relevantes para que no haya un peak de dificultad muy alto. En este caso, te conviene hacer un slider hasta 01:52:617 - (sin repeats ni nada) para hacer hincapié en el beat más fuerte de esa seguidilla.
  7. 01:57:911 (4,1) - Lo mismo que te comentaba antes.
  8. 02:03:558 (4) - Igual.
  9. 02:05:499 (3) - Acá te quedaste sordo jaja. El beat claramente comienza en 02:05:323 - y es algo que no puede ser ignorado por el hecho que puede cambiar mucho la condición de clickear en esta parte. Dejo a tu criterio qué hacer para mejorar esta parte en el caso que coincidas conmigo. Y lo peor de todo es que hacés algo muchísimo mejor en 02:10:617 (2) - haciendo que sea inconsistente al no cumplir con los mismos beats o el mismo patrón.
  10. 02:08:322 (3) - ^
  11. 02:09:205 (4,1) - Igual.
  12. 02:38:146 - A partir de este punto se crea un pico de dificultad innecesario, desde spacing inestable, stackeadas mal hechas hasta usás quadras para el tipo de dificultad que es como en 03:05:676 (4,5,6,7) - donde durante todo el resto del mapa venías usando sliders para cubrir estas partes. Esta bien que quieras marcar o diferenciar el Kiai del resto del mapa, pero esta no es la mejor manera de hacerlo. Desde el tiempo marcado, te voy a recomendar un remap... sí, es difícil tanto para mí decirlo como para vos hacerlo, pero puede ser tranquilamente mejorable.

Rocket's Hard



General: Más líneas verdes innecesarias! 01:21:205 - 01:21:911 - 01:24:028 - .
01:30:381 - ¿Green line en medio de una pausa?

  1. 00:27:911 (1,1) - Podrías intentar stackear estas dos notas con el sliderhead de 00:26:146 (1) - para que quede un cuadrado perfecto en dicho patrón.
  2. 00:55:440 (1,1,1) - Durante esta parte ocurre algo gracioso, ya que no es nada en particular, el pattern juega bien y todo eso... sin embargo, no me convencen 2 cosas. La primera es el hecho de usar 3 NCs para cada círculo. ¿Hay un por qué para esto? Ambos coincidimos en que hay un cambio en la acentuación del ritmo, donde a medida que cada círculo es puesto, la música es más fuerte, pero... el ritmo es el mismo. Y lo segundo, pero parte MUY cuestionable es, 00:55:440 (1) - donde durante estos 3 círculos estás mappeando el beat FUERTE, pero ese es el ÚNICO donde es el beat BAJO, ya que el FUERTE está en 00:55:264 - . Se me fue de tema un poco la explicación, y como dije antes, es debatible, peeeero, rompe con lo que venís haciendo acá.
  3. 00:56:499 (1,2,3,4) - Acá la agarraste mal, también. La entonación en las notas está en 00:56:499 (1,3) - y no en los 2 sliders que hacés el spacing alto. Me voy a explicar mejor para que se entienda. En 00:56:146 (1,1) - hay un spacing de 0,78x entre cada objeto, sin embargo, en 00:56:499 (1,2) - el spacing es de 1,24x, aún cuando el beat más fuerte se encuentra en (1). A lo que voy es que está mal acentuado los beats importantes porque quedan opacados por los más bajos.
  4. 01:17:852 (1,2) - Para mantener la perfección de esta secuencia, debería haber un spacing de 0.96x entre estos objetos. Esto sería justificable con lo que hacés en 02:25:617 (1,2) - donde mantenés un spacing perfecto.
  5. 01:54:911 - Siento como que en esta parte falta algo, hay un beat audible que está siendo ignorado y hace que 01:55:087 (1) - no sea posible de agarrar tan fácil en un primer intento. Por otra parte y ahora que escribo esto haciendo el re-check... 01:54:558 (2) - ese círculo sigue el mismo beat que te mencioné antes y 01:54:205 - este también, esto es MUY contradecible por tu parte y definitivamente puede ser mejorado.
  6. 01:59:146 (6) - Agregar un Whistle en el repeat de 01:59:323 - para hacer énfasis en el beat predominante, quedaría genial.
  7. 02:03:911 (1,1,1) - Lo mismo que te expliqué antes, pero esta vez es un poco distinto. Para empezar, ¿por qué el spam de NC? El otro punto sería que DEBERÍAS utilizar el spacing en 02:03:381 (3,1) - y no en 02:03:911 (1,1) - ya que en el segundo (1) de esta secuencia, el beat es casi inaudible, lo que hace que el salto sea incoherente.
  8. 02:23:499 (6) - Esto podría llegar a considerarse como overmap, no está siguiendo a nada, y decir que sigue el rasgueo de la guitarra es una excusa bastante quemada. Es un poco impredecible para los jugadores no tan experimentados que durante todo el mapa siguieron un patrón de 2-2-2 y que de repente aparezcas con algo completamente distinto. Por otra parte, y en caso que quieras mantener esto, te conviene agregar hitsounds a 02:23:323 (5,7) - para que se note cuál es la parte que realmente tiene beats!

Insane



Vamos a hablar de hombre a hombre (?)

A este mapa le falta mejor bastante en todos los aspectos habidos y por haber, es difícil dar un mod de esto ya que te estaría marcando punto por punto el por qué de las cosas y... no hay ganas!

Hitsounding: Este es el principal punto, hay bastantes problemas en general con muchos objetos que suenan bastante mal al estar en un mismo patrón.

Doubles: 01:42:911 (4,5) - como esos. No es un problema muy grande que digamos, pero estaría bueno que intentes algo diferente, TODOS los doubles que corresponden a esos beats son constantes o no están terminados en el beat correspondiente, lo que crea una posibilidad de misreading por parte de los jugadores.

Sliders: No hay muchos sliders curvados cuando en esta clase de mapas es algo esencial debido al ritmo, falta trabajar ahí.

Placement: Dale flow al mapa, la mayoría del mismo tiene un estilo un tanto robótico donde a veces se torna aburrido jugar.

Líneas verdes a borrar: 02:49:440 - .

Se viene un re-checks en unas semanitas, cuando esto progrese y tenga más mods!

Suerte hasta entonces \:D/
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Rocket's Hard



General: [color=red]
  1. 00:55:440 (1,1,1) - Durante esta parte ocurre algo gracioso, ya que no es nada en particular, el pattern juega bien y todo eso... sin embargo, no me convencen 2 cosas. La primera es el hecho de usar 3 NCs para cada círculo. ¿Hay un por qué para esto? Ambos coincidimos en que hay un cambio en la acentuación del ritmo, donde a medida que cada círculo es puesto, la música es más fuerte, pero... el ritmo es el mismo. Y lo segundo, pero parte MUY cuestionable es, 00:55:440 (1) - donde durante estos 3 círculos estás mappeando el beat FUERTE, pero ese es el ÚNICO donde es el beat BAJO, ya que el FUERTE está en 00:55:264 - . Se me fue de tema un poco la explicación, y como dije antes, es debatible, peeeero, rompe con lo que venís haciendo acá.
Tienes razón en lo que sugieres en tu segundo apartado, pero prefiero dejar el patrón de NC "random" ahí. No se ve tan mal después de todo. :^)

Apliqué el resto cómo el BN sugería. GG Me tocó mapear varias partes otra vez, pinches BNs, son todos unos pros

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Serraionga
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Serraionga
CAN'T DEFEAT THE BIG WALL OF TEXT AAAAA

Yuii- wrote:

General



  1. 00:56:499 - 01:07:793 - Esto podría ser parte del Kiai, tranquilamente, cumple con el mismo ritmo que la parte marcada en el mapa. ✓ ↓
  2. 02:04:264 - 02:15:558 - Y esto perfectamente, también. ✓ Al principio no quise hacerlo porque tenía la impresión de que estaba abusando del kiai, pero tras leer esto ya nada me detiene. Necesitaba a gente que estuviera de acuerdo en hacerlo, nada más (?). Fixed.
El primer spinner no empieza en el mismo lugar en todas las dificultades. En las dos GDs, por ejemplo, el spinner comienza en 00:12:734 - mientras que, en tus dificultades, arrancás el mapa en 00:13:970 - haciendo que sea algo inconsistente. ✓ Estaba vigilando que fuera pasable en Insane usando HR, por eso quizás quedó algo desplazado. Fixed.

Van a tener que desactivar las opciones de "Widescreen Support" y "Letterbox during breaks" ya que no están usando ningún sb/video o algo parecido. ✓ Por mi parte ya está hecho.

Falta trabajar MUCHO con los hitsounds, en todas las dificultades. La que mejores hitsounds tiene es la de Sh1n1 y aún así le queda bastante para ser mejorada. ¿Con esto te refieres a añadir más hitsounds nuevos, usar más los que ya tengo, etc? Supongo que te referirás a ambas cosas, igualmente creo que no entendí muy bien este punto. :{


Normal



General: A continuación, todas las líneas verdes innecesarias: 01:21:205 - 01:21:911 - 01:24:028 - 01:24:734 - 02:49:440 - . ✓ Fixed all.
02:15:646 - ¿Esto está mal snappeado o me parece? Es decir, para qué pondrías una línea verde antes de una pausa? ✓ ;_; ... Cruel. Después de ver la calidad de un mapa como este no sé como me haces semejantes preguntas retóricas. Fixed.

  1. 00:24:028 (3) - Intentá que este círculo también tenga una distancia de 1.00x como hacés con las demás. ✓ Fixed.
  2. 00:26:852 (3,4,5,6) - No estoy entendiendo bien qué intentás lograr en esta parte si mantener un espacio perfecto entre las notas, o bien, reducir la distancia a medida que van pasando los círculos en 0.01x. En cualquiera de los 2 casos, te tocaría arreglarlo para que quede 10 puntetes. ✘ Realmente pienso que no hace falta cambiar nada aquí, un "square" pequeño por así decirlo fluye bastante bien y hace que el jugador vaya más preparado, puesto que es el mismo pattern que se utiliza en las primeras notas de la canción 00:22:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  3. 00:28:970 (2) - El punto del medio giralo para que quede para el otro lado, en las dificultades bajas no es recomendable que el slider termine para el lado opuesto del otro objeto. ✓ Fixed!
  4. 00:58:617 (2) - No revisé hitsounds, pero un Finish acá quedaría muchísimo mejor considerando que el beat resalta más por sobre los demás. ✓ Pues sí. Fixed!
  5. 01:46:617 (4,1) - Como que son muchos repeats, ¿no? Puede sonar como una sugerencia un poco nazi, ya que es como YO mappearía esto, pero creo que podría sonar mejor considerando que en esta parte no se están siguiendo los beats constantes al pie de la letra, y eso de terminar un slider de 1/2 con 2 repeats y después agregar uno completo... sería un poco mejor. Agregá un círculo en 01:46:617 - y después el slider desde 01:46:970 - hasta 01:47:676 - con un repeat en 01:47:323 - . ✓ Creo que mi falta de ideas empieza a cantar bastante... (y no, no suena nada nazi -o al menos para mi-, realmente quería hacer algo distinto xD). Fixed!
  6. 01:52:264 (4) - Esto en una dificultad Normal? No lo veo como una taaaan buena idea, sobre todo considerando que es 1/6, lo que hace un poco difícil para los jugadores newbies. A veces en las dificultades bajas te va a convenir sacrificar beats no MUY relevantes para que no haya un peak de dificultad muy alto. En este caso, te conviene hacer un slider hasta 01:52:617 - (sin repeats ni nada) para hacer hincapié en el beat más fuerte de esa seguidilla. He intentado hacer algo distinto, es similar a lo que propones pero no del todo. Eso si, debería tener más sentido que lo anterior.
  7. 01:57:911 (4,1) - Lo mismo que te comentaba antes. ✓
  8. 02:03:558 (4) - Igual. ✓?
  9. 02:05:499 (3) - Acá te quedaste sordo jaja. El beat claramente comienza en 02:05:323 - y es algo que no puede ser ignorado por el hecho que puede cambiar mucho la condición de clickear en esta parte. Dejo a tu criterio qué hacer para mejorar esta parte en el caso que coincidas conmigo. Y lo peor de todo es que hacés algo muchísimo mejor en 02:10:617 (2) - haciendo que sea inconsistente al no cumplir con los mismos beats o el mismo patrón. ✘ Esto vino en uno de los mods anteriores y me negué a hacerlo... Explico, no estoy siguiendo el beat en esta parte de la canción (pese a ser claramente audible), lo que hago es repetir un pattern que empieza en 01:41:676 (1) y se sigue repitiendo hasta entonces, para así no confundir al jugador con cambios constantes (al fin y al cabo no deja de ser una diff fácil de completar y así quiero que sea, pese mis constantes fuck-ups los cuales ya has señalado). Si alguien más protesta sobre ello -aunque no utilice razones- lo cambiaré, pero por ahora prefiero seguir manteniéndolo porque estoy seguro de que no merece cambio alguno.
  10. 02:08:322 (3) - ^ ✘ ^
  11. 02:09:205 (4,1) - Igual. ✓ Fixed!
  12. 02:38:146 - A partir de este punto se crea un pico de dificultad innecesario, desde spacing inestable, stackeadas mal hechas hasta usás quadras para el tipo de dificultad que es como en 03:05:676 (4,5,6,7) - donde durante todo el resto del mapa venías usando sliders para cubrir estas partes. Esta bien que quieras marcar o diferenciar el Kiai del resto del mapa, pero esta no es la mejor manera de hacerlo. Desde el tiempo marcado, te voy a recomendar un remap... sí, es difícil tanto para mí decirlo como para vos hacerlo, pero puede ser tranquilamente mejorable. ✓ A decir verdad, realmente me lo esperaba porque no sé mappear normales y necesitaba hacer dos diffs para que fuese rankeable xD. Voy a empezar a trabajar en ello, porque esto me va a llevar algo de rato.

Insane



Vamos a hablar de hombre a hombre (?)

A este mapa le falta mejor bastante en todos los aspectos habidos y por haber, es difícil dar un mod de esto ya que te estaría marcando punto por punto el por qué de las cosas y... no hay ganas!

Hitsounding: Este es el principal punto, hay bastantes problemas en general con muchos objetos que suenan bastante mal al estar en un mismo patrón.

Doubles: 01:42:911 (4,5) - como esos. No es un problema muy grande que digamos, pero estaría bueno que intentes algo diferente, TODOS los doubles que corresponden a esos beats son constantes o no están terminados en el beat correspondiente, lo que crea una posibilidad de misreading por parte de los jugadores.

Sliders: No hay muchos sliders curvados cuando en esta clase de mapas es algo esencial debido al ritmo, falta trabajar ahí.

Placement: Dale flow al mapa, la mayoría del mismo tiene un estilo un tanto robótico donde a veces se torna aburrido jugar.

Líneas verdes a borrar: 02:49:440 - . ✓

Todo esto casi sugiere un remap. :{
Veré que puedo hacer y tendré muy en consideración este mod, pues es el que más me ha ayudado hasta ahora.

Se viene un re-checks en unas semanitas, cuando esto progrese y tenga más mods!

Suerte hasta entonces \:D/
Realmente preferiría que todos mis mods a partir de ahora fuesen así, pero las únicas personas que los hacen de esta calidad solo hacen caso a los mappers pros/populares... w/e.
Muchísimas gracias Yuii. :>
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Esperando a -Sh1n1-...
Yuii-
2,501 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Con respecto al hitsounding me refiero al general, si querés te puedo hitsoundear una dificultad (la que elijas) para que te des una idea de cómo trabajar en las demás dificultades. Si podés conseguir custom hitsounds sería muchísimo mejor, yo soy un poco malo para dar sugerencias en hitsounds, pero si me traés uno los trabajo 10 puntos.
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

Yuii- wrote:

Con respecto al hitsounding me refiero al general, si querés te puedo hitsoundear una dificultad (la que elijas) para que te des una idea de cómo trabajar en las demás dificultades. Si podés conseguir custom hitsounds sería muchísimo mejor, yo soy un poco malo para dar sugerencias en hitsounds, pero si me traés uno los trabajo 10 puntos.
No hace falta, prefiero experimentar por mi cuenta y que los demás sigan señalando en lo que fallo. Al fin y al cabo mi criterio todavía es demasiado minúsculo como para poder hacer beatmaps sin problemas, pero gracias igualmente. :>
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny
as your request!♥ came from my queue


  • General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-sliderslide5.wav
    - soft-hitclap5.wav
  2. for metadata :
    - you dont have to put artist name and title in tag remove it.
  3. insane and hard gap feels greater bit..
  • Sh1n1's Easy
  1. check ai mod please. you can find unsnapped objects. fix them.
  2. 00:27:558 (3,1) - distance feels bit close. move 00:27:558 (3) - this for 161l354.
  3. 03:23:323 (1) - i know you put nc for every 2 measure. but i think this nc seems not necessary in easy diff. so.. remove it.
  4. pretty nice map. it seems fit for easy.
  • Normal
  1. check ai mod. distance are mess. you should fix them. its certainly unrankable.
  2. 00:29:676 (3) - over 2 reverse slider really harsh to newest player. you should need to fix.
  3. 00:31:087 (5) - nc for here cause you put nc every 2 measure.
  4. 00:47:323 (5,1) - swap these nc reason same as above.
  5. 00:53:676 (3) - put nc for here.
  6. 02:15:558 ~ 02:26:852 - nonono.. dont makes empty during kiai time. you should cut kiai or fill them.
  7. timeline seems correct. but.. you really need to replace some part for keep ds.
  • Rocket's Hard
  1. 00:26:146 (1) - remove nc. you need to keep nc for constant. i think it makes disturbance to reading cause new combo doesnt constant. i recommend put nc for every 2 measure. like this.
  2. 00:36:381 (4) - add clap here for better tempo.
  3. 00:39:028 (4) - add clap at this tail. not for reverse.
  4. 00:40:617 (3) - add clap at this front
  5. 00:42:381 (1) - i feel strong cymbals sound from this head. so.. add finish at this front.
  6. 00:55:440 (1,1,1) - these nc no need for this part imo. its no reasonable. please remove them
  7. 01:04:617 (3,3) - make perfect stack for these.
  8. 01:07:087 (8) - makes more curvy and parallel with 01:06:558 (6) - this. will be looks better imo.
    SPOILER
  9. 01:53:852 (3,4) - i think you can avoid this overlap.
  10. 03:00:734 ~ - eh,,?end? lol.. or wip?
  • Insane
  1. 01:21:205 (5) - nc cause there is sv changing.
  2. 01:24:029 (5) - ^
  3. 01:39:911 (7) - i think you need to keep jump pattern. how about move it on near by 329l207 and ..
  4. 01:40:264 (9) - if you accept above, move it on 404l295 too. and makes more pretty. i'll give you sample. try it. probably up to you.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:41:323 (10) - hmm,, why you ignore this down beat?.. i recommend add note for here.
  6. 02:00:028 (6) - ^ this too.
  7. 02:04:970 (3) - this slider must be on 02:04:793 (3) - this timing. and add note for 02:05:323 (4) - here.
  8. 02:05:676 - also you need to put note for here imo.
  9. 02:07:793 (3) - ^ also this too.
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Euny wrote:

  • Rocket's Hard
  1. 01:04:617 (3,3) - make perfect stack for these. I don't find this really useful trough playability. I'll keep it as it is.
  2. 03:00:734 ~ - eh,,?end? lol.. or wip? Yeah here's the end. the song is 100% repetitive so I don't want to repeat the same pattern at the end
The rest was applied.

Thanks a bunch for your mod, Ms. Euny. o7

I am a fish
osu file format v14

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Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

Euny wrote:

  • General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-sliderslide5.wav ✓
    - soft-hitclap5.wav ✓
  2. for metadata :
    - you dont have to put artist name and title in tag remove it. ✓ Fixed!
  3. insane and hard gap feels greater bit.. Uhh, I'll see what to do here. :{
  • Normal
  1. check ai mod. distance are mess. you should fix them. its certainly unrankable. ✓ Fixed everything! Gosh, it was hard. orz
  2. 00:29:676 (3) - over 2 reverse slider really harsh to newest player. you should need to fix. ✘ I really want to keep it since it's a fast song and it would make new players to put an actual effort into comboing this properly.
  3. 00:31:087 (5) - nc for here cause you put nc every 2 measure. ✓ You're right. Fixed!
  4. 00:47:323 (5,1) - swap these nc reason same as above. ✓ Fixed, I guess?
  5. 00:53:676 (3) - put nc for here. ✓
  6. 02:15:558 ~ 02:26:852 - nonono.. dont makes empty during kiai time. you should cut kiai or fill them. ✓ Can't believe I missed that xD. Fixed!
  7. timeline seems correct. but.. you really need to replace some part for keep ds. I... don't understand this. :<
  • Insane
  1. 01:21:205 (5) - nc cause there is sv changing. ✓ ↓
  2. 01:24:029 (5) - ^ ✓ Wouldn't that make it harder to read? Looks fine either way so... fixed!
  3. 01:39:911 (7) - i think you need to keep jump pattern. how about move it on near by 329l207 and .. ✓
  4. 01:40:264 (9) - if you accept above, move it on 404l295 too. and makes more pretty. i'll give you sample. try it. probably up to you. ✓ That... looks significantly better, wow. Fixed! :>
    SPOILER
  5. 01:41:323 (10) - hmm,, why you ignore this down beat?.. i recommend add note for here. ✓ Sounds better. Fixed!
  6. 02:00:028 (6) - ^ this too. ✓
  7. 02:04:970 (3) - this slider must be on 02:04:793 (3) - this timing. and add note for 02:05:323 (4) - here. ✓ I'll keep that! Fixed.
  8. 02:05:676 - also you need to put note for here imo. ✓
  9. 02:07:793 (3) - ^ also this too. ✓
that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
Really nice mod, thanks!
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
El gap que Euny sugiere no creo que sea tan importante. Sin embargo, puedes ver que la diferencia entre la normal y la hard siempre son grandes . x'D
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

HappyRocket88 wrote:

El gap que Euny sugiere no creo que sea tan importante. Sin embargo, puedes ver que la diferencia entre la normal y la hard siempre son grandes . x'D
Eso fue por el remap, realmente no sé como hacerla más difícil sin utilizar técnicas abusivas para el nivel en el que está. :{
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny
ah.. sorry my english really bad.
I just want to tell you, normal diff beatsnap's are fine. but need to replacing bit for keep distance. :)
Yuii-
2,501 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Guys, you should change "Rocket" for "HappyRocket88" in tags. "Rocket" means nothing.
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

Euny wrote:

ah.. sorry my english really bad.
I just want to tell you, normal diff beatsnap's are fine. but need to replacing bit for keep distance. :)
Ah, right! Will fix that as soon as posible. :>

Yuii- wrote:

Guys, you should change "Rocket" for "HappyRocket88" in tags. "Rocket" means nothing.
Will do.
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Yuii- wrote:

Red = Unrankable issue
Blue = Highly Recommended
Black = Suggestion

General



Falta trabajar MUCHO con los hitsounds, en todas las dificultades. La que mejores hitsounds tiene es la de Sh1n1 y aún así le queda bastante para ser mejorada. La verdad esque soy muy malo con los Hitsounds y no habia acabado, por lo que me gustaria una ayudadita con los HS

Sh1n1's Easy



General: No le veo la necesidad de poner tantos puntos blancos, sinceramente. Podría ser completamente mejor si hacés un par de cambios, ya que muchos son innecesarios. Podrías intentar hacer distintas maneras, esa clase de sliders tienen muchos puntos que pueden ser borrados para que el mapa quede más prolijo. Te voy a mostrar un ejemplo de cómo podrías mejorarse: http://puu.sh/iLoVK/ff76501734.jpg Entiendo lo que me dices pero ese slider que me mandastes en el puush es muy curveado, hasta exagerado a mi parecer, no se si considerarlo un estilo pero siempre hago mis mapas con este tipo de slider, 00:48:028 (1,2) - en esos dos si siento que debe haber una mejora, pero los demas los considero mas moderados. Algunos sliders donde ocurre esto: 00:48:028 (1,2,3) - 00:56:499 (1) - 01:19:087 (1) - 01:22:969 (2) - 01:42:381 (2) - 01:45:205 (2) - . Siento que siguen muy bien el ritmo D: pero se que pueden ser mejorados en el recheck espero me mates con un pro mod como los que sabes hacer, siento que fuistes muy general aqui u.u

Por otra parte, hay bastantes objetos que no terminan en algún tick, podés ver los mismos con el AiMod. Si lo fixie y sorry , no se que paso aqui D:

Por último y no menos importante, te recomendio usar CS, OD y HP en "3,0" para que no se quede tan por detrás de las demás dificultades.
Si, tienes mucha razon todo cambiado aqui

Se viene un re-checks en unas semanitas, cuando esto progrese y tenga más mods! Lo espero con ansias y si te encuentro in game, derrepente aclaro algunas dudas con los sliders

Suerte hasta entonces \:D/
Gracias por el mod~~ *-*/

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥ came from my queue


  • Sh1n1's Easy
  1. check ai mod please. you can find unsnapped objects. fix them. Yes, Idk what happen here, sorry for that, fixed
  2. 00:27:558 (3,1) - distance feels bit close. move 00:27:558 (3) - this for 161l354. fixed, but I have a dude because I uncheck grid snap to fix it
  3. 03:23:323 (1) - i know you put nc for every 2 measure. but i think this nc seems not necessary in easy diff. so.. remove it. I'm not sure about that, at 03:23:323 - start a new kind of sound, I like to see a lot of ranked maps and this is normal on Easy
  4. pretty nice map. it seems fit for easy. Happy to hear that

that's it :)
hope this is helpful... ;)
omg a mod from Euny sempai *-*/ Thank you very much

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[General]
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Motiv8
TitleUnicode:Motiv8
Artist:LynneMusic
ArtistUnicode:LynneMusic
Creator:Serraionga
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
Source:
Tags:techno trance electronic happyrocket88 sh1n1
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u.u to Serraionga: Tags should be -Sh1n1- no Sh1n1
J1NX1337
248 posts
Joined February 2014
J1NX1337
Normal Mod


Skipped the Hard

Easy

1) 01:30:381 (1,2,3) - 01:36:028 (1,2,3) - Confusing, I suggest you begin reverse slider at 01:31:793 and end it at 01:32:499, add circle at
01:35:676, and then same for 01:37:440 to 01:38:146. Fine otherwise!

Normal

1) 00:43:793 - You could place something here too. (maybe a spinner or another reverse?)

2) 01:46:970 (5) - Might wanna cut the combo here in some way and start a new one.

3) 01:57:911 (4) - Maybe make this a half beat slider to emphasize that high note in the song?

4) 01:58:264 (5) - Same as 3).

5) 02:01:440 (1,2,3) - These gaps (and all the similar gaps following up) are confusing and break the flow of the map.
Consider moving the (3) slider to 02:02:499, or adding a hit circle at 02:02:499 for example.

6) 02:03:558 (4) - You should make this slider end at 02:03:911 (the beat).

7) 02:09:205 (4,5) - This part could use maybe like 2 sliders to map for that sound repeated twice in the song. I'd say remove the reverse slider
completely, it also needs a new combo.

8) 02:38:146 (1,2,3) - Here's an example where everything flows well and follows the song just fine. :) Although maybe you could add some variation
and replace some of those reverse sliders with a slider + circle?

9) 02:54:381 (5) - Again, these sliders don't exactly follow the song, I'd say make it a slider + circle or a reverse, but stop at the next beat (02:54:734).

10) 02:57:911 (1) - End this spinner at 03:00:028.

11) 03:02:499 (3) - I'd move this to 03:02:323 and maybe make it a half beat slider or just add another circle to 03:02:499, or leave it as it is
at 03:02:323. Same thing for the following patterns like 03:07:970 (3) and 03:16:617 (3).

12) 03:11:323 (5) - Same as 7).

Insane


1) 00:12:734 (1) - Okay this spinner is ginormously long, I recommend starting it at 00:19:793 where that sound in the background gets most intense.

2) 00:34:793 (7,8) - These parts don't flow well at all with the map. Either make them a slider or remove the 8 and place notes on 00:34:970 and 00:35:146.
Fix this for the following parts as well until 00:43:793 (1).

3) 00:38:146 (9,10,11,12,13) - Start a new combo here. Also, move the stack of circles (9-12) on top of the slider, they're slightly off.

4) 01:21:205 (1) - Make this a jump of 3 circles like 01:26:852 (1,2,3).

5) 01:49:970 This could use a note.

6) 02:01:705 (2) - This circle in unnecessary, there's no quarter beats in the song at this point. Don't overmap.

7) 02:03:117 (8,9) - If you listen closely, the quarter beats continue until 02:03:470, you could make this a stream.

8) 02:03:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very unpredictable and awkward to play. Please make these sliders, multiple reverse sliders or a single reverse slider.

9) 02:09:734 (12) - I think you should make this a quarter beat slider, I think it fits alright if you listen closely.

10) 02:12:028 (9,10,11) - The song emphasis here calls for jumps. So make these more jumpy at least, or replace them completely with jumps.

11) 02:12:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Okay this stream is just waaaay too long for what the song would
allow. First of all, there's no clear quarter beat sounds going on in the song so this is quite overmapped. You can make a short stream
in the end but replace the majority of it with regular sliders or notes. If you for some reason (even though it's overmapped) wanna keep it,
at least add some reverse sliders in between for a break or something. TL;DR: Remove the giant stream and remake the whole thing pretty much.

12) 02:32:499 (1) - The spinner here is way too long as well. Start it at 02:35:323 and replace the empty space before it with other notes.

13) 03:00:999 (2) - Same as 6). Also place a note on 03:01:264.

14) 03:02:676 - Could place a note here too.

15) 03:03:823 (2,3) - Overmapped as well. Remove these, continue the slider to 03:03:911, and then add those circles to 03:04:087 and 03:04:176.

16) 03:06:029 (3,4) - The tone in the song changes here and doesn't fit this pattern, make them different from (1) and (2).

17) 03:06:646 (2) - Same as 6).

18) 03:06:911 - Start a stream here, end it here: 03:07:264 (remove the slider) and place a circle on 03:07:440.

19) 03:08:058 (6,7) - You can continue this as a stream until 03:08:411, would feel quite nice.

20) 03:09:470 (2) - Same as 6).

21) 03:10:176 (5) - Same as 6).

22) 03:11:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 8).

23) 03:19:793 (4,5,6) - Same as 10).

24) 03:20:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as 11).

There were also loads more quarter beat parts where the song didn't have any matching sound at that point, but I left those out since they played
relatively well, like 02:04:264 (1,2) or 02:05:499 (5,6,7). etc. etc.

If my mod was of help, consider giving me some kudosu for it. :)
Hiyori
151 posts
Joined May 2015
Hiyori


Sh1n1's EASY:
  1. 01:37:440 - Add circle here?
  2. 02:05:852 (2) - i don't think this is mapped to anything, maybe try this instead?
  3. 02:29:676 - spinner is too long, maybe start here - 02:32:499
  4. 02:38:146 - there's nice downbeat here. map this?

NORMAL:
  1. 00:25:087 (6,2) - fix overlap
  2. 00:35:323 (3) - whistle is too loud, try reducing it to 50% maybe?
  3. 00:35:323 (3,1) - ^^ ... so on so forth
  4. 02:49:970 (2) - ctrl g this
  5. 02:51:029 (4) - ctrl g
  6. 03:04:617 (4,5) - do not stack with a reverse slider
  7. 03:10:264 (3,4) - ^^
  8. 03:13:087 (3,4) - ^^

Rocket's HARD:

  • I think this should be AR9
  1. 01:22:617 (4,5) - remove this and make it into aslider instead
  2. 01:26:852 (8,9,10) - triangle better
  3. 01:27:558 (1,2,3) - blanket better
  4. 01:28:617 (5,6,7) - ^^
  5. 02:38:676 (3,4,5) - try this a bit cleaner
  6. 03:21:029 (3,4) - blanket better

Cute map! Hope this mod helps you. Goodluck! :)
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

J1NX1337 wrote:

Easy

1) 01:30:381 (1,2,3) - 01:36:028 (1,2,3) - Confusing, I suggest you begin reverse slider at 01:31:793 and end it at 01:32:499, add circle at
01:35:676, and then same for 01:37:440 to 01:38:146. Fine otherwise! Happy to hear that and Yeah, you are right but I tried to fix with other rhythm and keeping consistency with previews patterns
Thanks for your mod bro

Hiyori wrote:

Sh1n1's EASY:
  1. 01:37:440 - Add circle here? You are right but I previously changed in another pattern on J1NX1337's mod
  2. 02:05:852 (2) - i don't think this is mapped to anything, maybe try this instead? No, a little rest here will be better
  3. 02:29:676 - spinner is too long, maybe start here - 02:32:499 Yeah but I'm keeping consistency with the first spin 00:12:734 (1) - anyway I'll keep in mind
  4. 02:38:146 - there's nice downbeat here. map this? Ohh, I want, really xDD but rules says that on easy diffs you must add a break after spinner, so I'll keep it
Thanks for your mod Hiyori-chan

Update
osu file format v14

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Artist:LynneMusic
ArtistUnicode:LynneMusic
Creator:Serraionga
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
Source:
Tags:techno trance electronic happyrocket88 -sh1n1-
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HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Hiyori wrote:

Rocket's HARD:

  • I think this should be AR9 Nope. AR:9.0 is too much for this map. Besides, the insane has AR9:0. I'd consider increasing the approach rate but I'll wait for a second opinion about this.
  1. 01:22:617 (4,5) - remove this and make it into aslider instead I'd rather keep it as it is, but both fits and works well.
  2. 01:27:558 (1,2,3) - blanket better I don't see any problem with it. ;__;
  3. 01:28:617 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
  4. 02:38:676 (3,4,5) - try this a bit cleaner This is actually a nice suggestion but I like the symmetric pattren I use here. Sorru. ;__;


The rest was applied.


Cute map! Hope this mod helps you. Goodluck! :) Thanks for your time and mod. :D/
I am a bitch
osu file format v14

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128,276,194852,6,0,B|168:276|168:296|212:296,1,83.9999974365235
256,224,195205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,195381,2,0,B|344:296|344:276|384:276,1,83.9999974365235
384,192,195734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,108,195910,2,0,B|344:108|344:88|304:88,1,83.9999974365235
256,160,196263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,196440,2,0,B|168:88|168:108|128:108,1,83.9999974365235
256,216,196969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,197146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,197322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,228,197676,6,0,B|412:200|412:200|408:176|408:176|412:144,1,83.9999974365235
420,60,198029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,198206,2,0,B|328:196|328:196|324:172|324:172|328:140,1,83.9999974365235
336,52,198559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,198735,2,0,B|244:188|244:188|240:164|240:164|244:132,1,83.9999974365235
252,48,199088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,208,199264,2,0,B|160:180|160:180|156:156|156:156|160:124,1,83.9999974365235
408,228,199794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,199970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,200147,2,0,P|312:280|284:308,1,83.9999974365235
188,300,200500,6,0,P|164:266|159:224,1,83.9999974365235
168,132,200853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,52,201029,2,0,P|256:36|300:56,1,83.9999974365235
252,128,201382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,120,201559,2,0,P|368:88|368:52,1,83.9999974365235
448,36,201911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,108,202088,2,0,B|480:160|480:160|452:192,1,83.9999974365235
336,296,202617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,202794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,304,202970,2,0,P|120:288|152:192,1,167.999994873047
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
2 mods in a row, what's going on（○Ａ○）

J1NX1337

J1NX1337 wrote:

Normal

1) 00:43:793 - You could place something here too. (maybe a spinner or another reverse?) ✓ Added another reverse.

2) 01:46:970 (5) - Might wanna cut the combo here in some way and start a new one. ✓

3) 01:57:911 (4) - Maybe make this a half beat slider to emphasize that high note in the song? ✓ Sounds better!

4) 01:58:264 (5) - Same as 3). ✓

5) 02:01:440 (1,2,3) - These gaps (and all the similar gaps following up) are confusing and break the flow of the map.
Consider moving the (3) slider to 02:02:499, or adding a hit circle at 02:02:499 for example. ✓ Added a hitcircle! (I actually did something similar near the end of the song, lol)

6) 02:03:558 (4) - You should make this slider end at 02:03:911 (the beat). ✓

7) 02:09:205 (4,5) - This part could use maybe like 2 sliders to map for that sound repeated twice in the song. I'd say remove the reverse slider
completely, it also needs a new combo. ✓ After some tweaking, I think its fixed.

8) 02:38:146 (1,2,3) - Here's an example where everything flows well and follows the song just fine. :) Although maybe you could add some variation
and replace some of those reverse sliders with a slider + circle? ✘ I rather not mess with this part anymore, its one of the best segments of the song as you said. :{

9) 02:54:381 (5) - Again, these sliders don't exactly follow the song, I'd say make it a slider + circle or a reverse, but stop at the next beat (02:54:734). ✓ Slider + circle looks fine here. Fixed!

10) 02:57:911 (1) - End this spinner at 03:00:028. ✓

11) 03:02:499 (3) - I'd move this to 03:02:323 and maybe make it a half beat slider or just add another circle to 03:02:499, or leave it as it is
at 03:02:323. Same thing for the following patterns like 03:07:970 (3) and 03:16:617 (3). ✓ Added some half beat sliders.

12) 03:11:323 (5) - Same as 7). ✓

Insane


1) 00:12:734 (1) - Okay this spinner is ginormously long, I recommend starting it at 00:19:793 where that sound in the background gets most intense. ✘ It's passable even with HR so no problem here. Plus, this helps keeping consistency with the other difficulties, since they start the spinner at the same beat.

2) 00:34:793 (7,8) - These parts don't flow well at all with the map. Either make them a slider or remove the 8 and place notes on 00:34:970 and 00:35:146.
Fix this for the following parts as well until 00:43:793 (1). ✓ I did a slider for them, looks better IMO.

3) 00:38:146 (9,10,11,12,13) - Start a new combo here. Also, move the stack of circles (9-12) on top of the slider, they're slightly off. ✓ Should be OK now!

4) 01:21:205 (1) - Make this a jump of 3 circles like 01:26:852 (1,2,3). ✓

5) 01:49:970 This could use a note. ✓

6) 02:01:705 (2) - This circle in unnecessary, there's no quarter beats in the song at this point. Don't overmap. ✓ Alright, alright. orz

7) 02:03:117 (8,9) - If you listen closely, the quarter beats continue until 02:03:470, you could make this a stream. ✓ Done!

8) 02:03:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very unpredictable and awkward to play. Please make these sliders, multiple reverse sliders or a single reverse slider. ✓ A single reverse slider is fine.

9) 02:09:734 (12) - I think you should make this a quarter beat slider, I think it fits alright if you listen closely. ✓ Done!

10) 02:12:028 (9,10,11) - The song emphasis here calls for jumps. So make these more jumpy at least, or replace them completely with jumps. ✓ Replaced completely with jumps.

11) 02:12:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Okay this stream is just waaaay too long for what the song would
allow. First of all, there's no clear quarter beat sounds going on in the song so this is quite overmapped. You can make a short stream
in the end but replace the majority of it with regular sliders or notes. If you for some reason (even though it's overmapped) wanna keep it,
at least add some reverse sliders in between for a break or something. TL;DR: Remove the giant stream and remake the whole thing pretty much. ✓ ...No one likes these streams, it seems. Removed them and did larger jumps instead, since I feel the intensity of the song increases around this part.

12) 02:32:499 (1) - The spinner here is way too long as well. Start it at 02:35:323 and replace the empty space before it with other notes. ✓ Fixed!

13) 03:00:999 (2) - Same as 6). Also place a note on 03:01:264. ✓

14) 03:02:676 - Could place a note here too. ✓

15) 03:03:823 (2,3) - Overmapped as well. Remove these, continue the slider to 03:03:911, and then add those circles to 03:04:087 and 03:04:176. ✓ Done!

16) 03:06:029 (3,4) - The tone in the song changes here and doesn't fit this pattern, make them different from (1) and (2). ✓ Made a triangle.

17) 03:06:646 (2) - Same as 6). ✓

18) 03:06:911 - Start a stream here, end it here: 03:07:264 (remove the slider) and place a circle on 03:07:440. ✘ I don't see how a stream would fit here, so no changes, sorry.

19) 03:08:058 (6,7) - You can continue this as a stream until 03:08:411, would feel quite nice. ✓ I don't see why, but it actually feels nice. Added!

20) 03:09:470 (2) - Same as 6). ✓

21) 03:10:176 (5) - Same as 6). ✓

22) 03:11:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 8). ✓ Did some sliders instead.

23) 03:19:793 (4,5,6) - Same as 10). ✓ Replaced completely with jumps, too.

24) 03:20:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as 11). ✓ Same changes applied. ;_;

There were also loads more quarter beat parts where the song didn't have any matching sound at that point, but I left those out since they played
relatively well, like 02:04:264 (1,2) or 02:05:499 (5,6,7). etc. etc. Kudos to Euny for that. :>

If my mod was of help, consider giving me some kudosu for it. :)
Holy hell, of course. Took some time to fix all that but it helped a lot. Thanks a bunch! Now I understand why no one liked my insane ;_;

Hiyori

Hiyori wrote:

NORMAL:
  1. 00:25:087 (6,2) - fix overlap ✓
  2. 00:35:323 (3) - whistle is too loud, try reducing it to 50% maybe? ✓ Dunno why I left it on 80%, haha. Fixed!
  3. 00:35:323 (3,1) - ^^ ... so on so forth ✓ This just needed a change on the previous inherited point, though. All done!
  4. 02:49:970 (2) - ctrl g this ✘ I would leave it as it is, it seems a bit awkward to me, sorry.
  5. 02:51:029 (4) - ctrl g ✘ ^
  6. 03:04:617 (4,5) - do not stack with a reverse slider Why?
  7. 03:10:264 (3,4) - ^^ ^
  8. 03:13:087 (3,4) - ^^ ^

Cute map! Hope this mod helps you. Goodluck! :)
Thank you for your time!

Updated!
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

A wild mod in the insane diff.


  1. We check some symmetryc patterns.
  2. Some blankets.
  3. New combos.
  4. And some rthymical issues.
I'm a car
2015-07-08 10:03 Serraionga: bzzt
2015-07-08 10:03 HappyRocket88: Me recuerdas los zumbidos de Messenger
2015-07-08 10:04 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:04 Serraionga: la nostalgia
2015-07-08 10:04 Serraionga: ;_;
2015-07-08 10:04 HappyRocket88: xD
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: Bueno empecemos. c:
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: 00:42:381
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: 00:42:381 - 
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: No crees que falta algo ahí?
2015-07-08 10:05 Serraionga: estás en la insane, vdd?
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: Pues no sé, siento que hay un espacio dónde puedes colocar notas para seguir ritmo.
2015-07-08 10:05 HappyRocket88: sip
2015-07-08 10:05 Serraionga: let's see
2015-07-08 10:07 Serraionga: cual espacio? :<
2015-07-08 10:07 HappyRocket88: 00:42:381 (5) - 
2015-07-08 10:07 HappyRocket88: A mí esta parte la canción me pide 1/4
2015-07-08 10:07 HappyRocket88: de notas. 
2015-07-08 10:07 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:08 Serraionga: hmmm
2015-07-08 10:08 HappyRocket88: Quizá un 1/4 slider encaje bien.
2015-07-08 10:09 Serraionga: un 1/4 slider es
2015-07-08 10:10 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/iREvr/7e2c7816a0.jpg
2015-07-08 10:10 Serraionga: dos sliders pequeños o algo así, no?
2015-07-08 10:10 Serraionga: ahh
2015-07-08 10:10 Serraionga: ahora si entiendo :^)
2015-07-08 10:11 Serraionga: si, realmente queda mejor
2015-07-08 10:11 HappyRocket88: :D/
2015-07-08 10:11 HappyRocket88: Mira ahora el spacing de estas notas
2015-07-08 10:11 HappyRocket88: 00:45:205 (1,2,3) - 
2015-07-08 10:11 HappyRocket88: No están overlap (una encima de otra)
2015-07-08 10:12 HappyRocket88: y tiene un espacio "significativo" que las separa.
2015-07-08 10:12 HappyRocket88: Ahora mira esto.
2015-07-08 10:12 HappyRocket88: 00:45:734 (3,4,5) - 
2015-07-08 10:12 HappyRocket88: El espacio entre el slider 3 y 5 
2015-07-08 10:12 HappyRocket88: es diferente que el del 1 y el 3
2015-07-08 10:14 Serraionga: cierto
2015-07-08 10:14 HappyRocket88: Y este es el patrón que tienes.
2015-07-08 10:14 Serraionga: me ha costado verlo, en verdad
2015-07-08 10:14 Serraionga: xD
2015-07-08 10:14 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/iRENd/da83e4cbd3.jpg
2015-07-08 10:15 HappyRocket88: Que podría verse mejor así.
2015-07-08 10:15 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/iREPg/95861a771a.jpg
2015-07-08 10:16 Serraionga: como haces
2015-07-08 10:16 HappyRocket88: reduzco el AR a 0
2015-07-08 10:16 Serraionga: para que se vean todas las notas a la vez? :<
2015-07-08 10:16 Serraionga: ah, claro
2015-07-08 10:16 Serraionga: ACTION feels newb
2015-07-08 10:16 HappyRocket88: ACTION pats Serraionga 
2015-07-08 10:16 Serraionga: :B
2015-07-08 10:17 Serraionga: solo cambia la posición de un slider, entonces
2015-07-08 10:17 HappyRocket88: Sí. 
2015-07-08 10:17 HappyRocket88: XDD
2015-07-08 10:17 HappyRocket88: Pero te quería dar la explicación más completa. :>
2015-07-08 10:18 Serraionga: kek
2015-07-08 10:18 Serraionga: la verdad es que ahora puedo ver las cosas con mejor claridad
2015-07-08 10:18 Serraionga: fixed |-)
2015-07-08 10:20 Serraionga: después del ladrillo de J1NX1337 realmente me cuesta encontrar algo malo
2015-07-08 10:20 Serraionga: hitsounds aparte
2015-07-08 10:20 HappyRocket88: xD
2015-07-08 10:20 HappyRocket88: 01:33:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2015-07-08 10:21 HappyRocket88: Esto no se ve mal, pero pensé que manejarías algo con el mismo DS
2015-07-08 10:21 Serraionga: eso lo hice sin el distance snap activado, porque todos sliders estaban overlap los unos a los otros
2015-07-08 10:21 Serraionga: realmente no sabía que hacer ahí
2015-07-08 10:21 Serraionga: xDD
2015-07-08 10:21 HappyRocket88: xD
2015-07-08 10:22 HappyRocket88: podrías intentar un patrón octagonar de sliders. :^)
2015-07-08 10:23 Serraionga: o copiarle algún patrón a skystar
2015-07-08 10:23 Serraionga: slider art never enough :^)
2015-07-08 10:23 HappyRocket88: xD
2015-07-08 10:23 Serraionga: entonces, cual es la sugerencia?
2015-07-08 10:23 Serraionga: o era esa realmente D:
2015-07-08 10:25 HappyRocket88: mira esto quizás...
2015-07-08 10:25 HappyRocket88: http://puu.sh/iRFmr/aafdeafa53.jpg
2015-07-08 10:25 HappyRocket88: Obviamente con AR0 se ve horrible.
2015-07-08 10:26 Serraionga: whoa
2015-07-08 10:27 HappyRocket88: tell me when you're done
2015-07-08 10:27 Serraionga: se ve mucho mejor, pero no encuentro el 1
2015-07-08 10:27 HappyRocket88: x
2015-07-08 10:27 Serraionga: D:
2015-07-08 10:27 HappyRocket88: Empieza en el lado derecho
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:28 Serraionga: iré haciendo la forma mientras tanto xDD
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: Luego va izquiero
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: Y así. xD
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: Wait. 
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: Este patrón de estrella
2015-07-08 10:28 HappyRocket88: 01:46:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - 
2015-07-08 10:29 HappyRocket88: No está mal, pero esta un poco asimétrico por el slider, sugiero que lo ubiques aquí.
2015-07-08 10:31 HappyRocket88: 01:47:323 (1) - 
2015-07-08 10:31 HappyRocket88: Ubícalo en
2015-07-08 10:31 HappyRocket88: x=192 | y= 196
2015-07-08 10:33 Serraionga: la estrella queda algo abierta por arriba ahora
2015-07-08 10:33 HappyRocket88: Entonces iguala el nivel con el (2)
2015-07-08 10:33 HappyRocket88: en el eje x
2015-07-08 10:33 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:35 Serraionga: ya
2015-07-08 10:35 Serraionga: creo
2015-07-08 10:36 HappyRocket88: Vale.
2015-07-08 10:36 HappyRocket88: Lo que te diré ahora es puro estética
2015-07-08 10:36 HappyRocket88: :>
2015-07-08 10:38 Serraionga: ACTION waves
2015-07-08 10:39 HappyRocket88: 01:51:381 (4,7) - 
2015-07-08 10:39 HappyRocket88: Blanket.
2015-07-08 10:39 Serraionga: fixedd
2015-07-08 10:40 HappyRocket88: 02:53:676 (8) - 
2015-07-08 10:40 HappyRocket88: NC
2015-07-08 10:41 Serraionga: ye
2015-07-08 10:41 HappyRocket88: Remove nc
2015-07-08 10:41 HappyRocket88: 03:06:381 (1) - 
2015-07-08 10:41 HappyRocket88: 03:07:617 (4) - 
2015-07-08 10:41 HappyRocket88: Add nc
2015-07-08 10:42 Serraionga: gud
2015-07-08 10:43 HappyRocket88: that's all.
2015-07-08 10:43 HappyRocket88: :>
2015-07-08 10:43 Serraionga: la wea
2015-07-08 10:43 Serraionga: aun tengo que hacer esa cosa octagonal
2015-07-08 10:44 Serraionga: 2majestic4me
2015-07-08 10:44 Serraionga: de todas formas, si el 1 empieza a la derecha los jugadores van a tener que hacer un jump monstruoso, creo
2015-07-08 10:45 HappyRocket88: O intenta hacer una flor.
2015-07-08 10:45 HappyRocket88: *puesta de sol
2015-07-08 10:45 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:46 Serraionga: |-)
2015-07-08 10:46 HappyRocket88: _\|/_
2015-07-08 10:46 Serraionga: no, eso que me has mostrado se ve pro
2015-07-08 10:46 HappyRocket88: Algo así, no sé.
2015-07-08 10:46 HappyRocket88: XD
2015-07-08 10:46 Serraionga: me tiro más por los sliders octagonales
2015-07-08 10:46 Serraionga: symmetry ftw
2015-07-08 10:47 HappyRocket88: yeah
2015-07-08 10:47 Serraionga: si esto ahora lo subes en el thread te puedo volver a dar kudos?
2015-07-08 10:47 HappyRocket88: Sí.
2015-07-08 10:47 HappyRocket88: :>
2015-07-08 10:47 Serraionga: hagalo men
2015-07-08 10:48 Serraionga: el patrón octagonal se lo agracerá
2015-07-08 10:48 Serraionga: agradecerá* dislexia
Serraionga
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Topic Starter
Serraionga
Updated. :^)
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
Go Go~~ :3
Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
Almost every queue is reluctant on modding +3 minute songs. :{
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
anybody says no if you ask for M4M :3 Let's try
Gear
148 posts
Joined November 2012
Gear
Hello, from my modding queue. These are all suggestions, do consider them though.

The Mods
[-Sh1n1-'s Easy]
01:40:264 - 01:41:676 - i think you should map something here, big empty space feels weird imo, your choice

I don't have much to say about this difficulty, it's well done

[Normal]
00:31:087 (1,2,3) - maybe arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/iUMoQ/8bdd32afe3.jpg - i think it'd feel better since 00:29:676 (3) slider end points downwards to the right
00:39:558 (1) - maybe point this slider down in a 45 degree~ish angle and move 00:40:264 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/iUMwQ/8fb7228749.jpg
00:42:028 (6,1) - is the spacing between these two intended? pretty big for a normal
00:49:440 (4,5,6) - intentional spacing? i'd make the spacing between 4 and 5+6 1.00x
01:24:028 (5,1) - now 2.0x feels really huge for a jump in normal, maybe lower it
01:34:617 (2) - the shape could be improved to fit the slider before it http://puu.sh/iUMUS/6effe8e72b.jpg (you'd have to rearrange the sliders after this a little bit though)
01:30:381 (1,2) - the spacing here is 1.0x but after that it starts to use 1.1x until 01:59:322 (2) which i know isn't really a big difference but is there a reason? the beginning part of the map also used 1.0x (well most of it)
02:43:793 (1,2,3) - spacing between these went small of a sudden, make it 1.0x? (or 1.1x idk)

normal is fine, some sliders could be neater and the distance spacing is a little weird (dunno if it's intentional but it feels random most of the time)

[Rocket's Hard]
00:36:381 (8,9,10) and 00:42:028 (8,9,10) - being the only two triplets using circles feels weird, since they only appear at the beginning of the map when they can also appear later. maybe use some in other parts of the map?
00:37:264 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - feels really messy, consider changing
i think 01:16:793 (1) - and 01:17:852 (1) - shouldn't have new combos on them
02:24:558 (1) - and 02:25:617 (1) - same as above ^
03:00:734 - 03:12:028 - i highly recommend mapping this part, the other difficulties have it mapped as well.

also, what's up with the hitsounding? there is barely any but there are a few random ones on objects such as 01:45:734 (5)
it plays nicely imo, the use of symmetry is neat too, but most patterns could look a little neater, like this star 01:51:381 (4,5,6,7,8)

[Insane]
00:35:676 (5) - i think this slider should end on the white tick 00:36:028 - and just use a circle on 00:36:205 - for the stream and also add a circle at 00:36:562 - for the end of the stream
00:38:499 (5) - same thing as above
00:41:676 - 00:43:793 - feels empty because of things like the white tick at 00:41:676 - and 00:43:087 - being ignored
01:47:146 (4) - could move it up a bit, makes for a neater pattern http://puu.sh/iUOec/4c7b807315.jpg
01:48:558 (1) - remove new combo, keep it consistent with the other previous patterns like 01:41:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since they sound the same
02:06:381 (9) - make this slider a jump pattern like the ones ahead such as 02:09:205 (1,2,3,4)
02:12:558 (1) - remove NC, add NC at 02:12:734 (2)
02:14:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe flip this stream vertically and rotate it anti-clockwise by like, 15? just a small suggestion
02:54:381 (1,3) - maybe ctrl-G these for the jump, placing 1 under the stream feels weird
03:22:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - feels too close to the previous slider (0.79x) consider moving it

was fun to play, just a few minor things I noticed.

Good luck with the set~
Loughje
379 posts
Joined December 2014
Loughje
Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!
General
You have too much time left unmapped at the end of the song, consider cutting it
'Easy' has no kai times unlike the rest of the difficulties.
Perhaps a more colorful nice looking background would be better.
Normal
00:29:676 (3) - Perhaps have a single reverse than a circle at 00:30:734
00:32:499 (4) - No need for a finish here.
00:36:028 - Circle here to match the beat.
00:38:852 - ^
00:41:676 (5,6) - Consider moving these somewhere else. They're colliding with 00:40:264 (2) which makes it look a little ugly.
00:58:617 (2) - Move this just a bit more away from 00:59:323 (1) for a cleaner look.
01:21:205 (5,5,5) - A different hitsound would go better with these.
01:34:617 (2) - Don't have a locked point as the point on this, just have a regular point for a better looking slider imo
Hard
00:26:146 (3) - Move this to 00:27:205 so its not out of place and can start the pattern.
00:32:499 (4) - Move this over 00:30:734 (6) - to keep the square pattern going.
00:37:793 - Add a circle here and put a clap on it.
00:42:028 (8) - Clap here.
01:09:911 (5,6) - Turn these into 1/2 sliders to match the song.
01:12:734 (5,6) - ^
01:29:676 (8) - This slider feels out of place, maybe do something else here rather than a reverse.
01:55:793 (1,2,3) - Different spacing looks weird here, Id recommend to readjust 01:56:323 (2)
02:17:676 (5,6) - Same as before with the 1/2 sliders
02:20:499 (5,6) - ^
02:23:323 (5,6) - ^^
02:37:440 (8) - Same weird looking slider.
02:39:734 (7) - Don't lock the first point, keep the smooth curve going on this one.
02:42:381 (6) - Move this under the sliders rather than over so it isn't hitting 02:43:087 (8,9)
02:46:970 (2) - Move this to the right a bit so it isn't hitting 02:47:499 (4)
02:48:205 (7) - Don't lock the point. Feels like it ruins the flow.
03:13:616 (7) - ^
Even though you guys have so many hitsounds, the hitsound placement is really lacking.
Insane
01:42:205 - Circle here
01:42:293 - ^
01:43:617 - ^
01:44:411 - ^
01:45:028 - ^
01:45:117 - ^ (And so on throughout this part)
03:11:323 (1,2,3,4) - Very sure this is unrankable, very oddly placed on the timeline.
Pretty average looking map, with a bit more work I feel it should be rankable. Tell me if my suggestions were helpful or not. Please vote on how good my modding was on my queue page. My Modding Queue
HappyRocket88
4,322 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Gear wrote:

[Rocket's Hard]
00:36:381 (8,9,10) and 00:42:028 (8,9,10) - being the only two triplets using circles feels weird, since they only appear at the beginning of the map when they can also appear later. maybe use some in other parts of the map? As you're right, but I want to keep them as they are because I was alternating patterns here
i think 01:16:793 (1) - and 01:17:852 (1) - shouldn't have new combos on them This is intentional. c:
02:24:558 (1) - and 02:25:617 (1) - same as above ^ ^
03:00:734 - 03:12:028 - i highly recommend mapping this part, the other difficulties have it mapped as well. Nope, this is my gest difficulty. and I just decide to don't map this part because the song is 2 repetitive.

also, what's up with the hitsounding? there is barely any but there are a few random ones on objects such as 01:45:734 (5) I don't know how to set hitsounds. ;__;

jloughman14 wrote:

Hard
00:37:793 - Add a circle here and put a clap on it. To what for? The purpose here was to emphasize 1/4 beats and I don't think that could fit
01:12:734 (5,6) - ^ Did something different, but it was a nice suggestion.
02:20:499 (5,6) - ^ ^
02:48:205 (7) - Don't lock the point. Feels like it ruins the flow. I don't think it ruins the flow. o.o
Thanks a bunch you both for modding the map. What I pointed here was what I disagree because anything else was applied.

I am a Bananase
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Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga
Gear

Gear wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:087 (1,2,3) - maybe arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/iUMoQ/8bdd32afe3.jpg - i think it'd feel better since 00:29:676 (3) slider end points downwards to the right ✓ Feels better. Fixed!
00:39:558 (1) - maybe point this slider down in a 45 degree~ish angle and move 00:40:264 (2) - like this http://puu.sh/iUMwQ/8fb7228749.jpg ✓ Done!
00:42:028 (6,1) - is the spacing between these two intended? pretty big for a normal ✘ It's intended. Also, this is the only "huge" jump that takes place in the beginning, should be fine I guess.
00:49:440 (4,5,6) - intentional spacing? i'd make the spacing between 4 and 5+6 1.00x ✓ Huh, I though it was 1,00x already. Fixed! stupid AI mod orz
01:24:028 (5,1) - now 2.0x feels really huge for a jump in normal, maybe lower it ✓ That wasn't intentional. Fixed!
01:34:617 (2) - the shape could be improved to fit the slider before it http://puu.sh/iUMUS/6effe8e72b.jpg (you'd have to rearrange the sliders after this a little bit though) ✓ That was exactly what I wanted to do, but I didn't have the skills to do it properly. q_q Fixed!
01:30:381 (1,2) - the spacing here is 1.0x but after that it starts to use 1.1x until 01:59:322 (2) which i know isn't really a big difference but is there a reason? the beginning part of the map also used 1.0x (well most of it) ✓ That's just me being forgetful, haha. Fixed!
02:43:793 (1,2,3) - spacing between these went small of a sudden, make it 1.0x? (or 1.1x idk) ✘ This is also intended. I wanted to do some symmetry in exchange of some spacing. The player should expect it at this point of the song imo.

normal is fine, some sliders could be neater and the distance spacing is a little weird (dunno if it's intentional but it feels random most of the time)

[Insane]
00:35:676 (5) - i think this slider should end on the white tick 00:36:028 - and just use a circle on 00:36:205 - for the stream and also add a circle at 00:36:562 - for the end of the stream ✘ I... don't think it feels right imo, sorry.
00:38:499 (5) - same thing as above ✘ ^
00:41:676 - 00:43:793 - feels empty because of things like the white tick at 00:41:676 - and 00:43:087 - being ignored ✓ It does feel empty. Tried doing something different!
01:47:146 (4) - could move it up a bit, makes for a neater pattern http://puu.sh/iUOec/4c7b807315.jpg ✓ Neato. Fixed!
01:48:558 (1) - remove new combo, keep it consistent with the other previous patterns like 01:41:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since they sound the same ✓
02:06:381 (9) - make this slider a jump pattern like the ones ahead such as 02:09:205 (1,2,3,4) ✘ It would surely look awesome, but I want to keep these kind of jumps for later, as I don't feel like using them right when the kiai part begins.
02:12:558 (1) - remove NC, add NC at 02:12:734 (2) ✓ Fixed!
02:14:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe flip this stream vertically and rotate it anti-clockwise by like, 15? just a small suggestion ✘ Not convinced about that, sorry.
02:54:381 (1,3) - maybe ctrl-G these for the jump, placing 1 under the stream feels weird ✓ Fixed!
03:22:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - feels too close to the previous slider (0.79x) consider moving it ✓

was fun to play, just a few minor things I noticed.

Good luck with the set~
Really grateful for your mod! :>

-Sh1n1- is on the way...

Jloughman14 and DahplA

jloughman14 wrote:

[General]
You have too much time left unmapped at the end of the song, consider cutting it As long as we're using more than 80% of the song is fine.
Perhaps a more colorful nice looking background would be better. Looks decent enough for me!

[Normal]
00:29:676 (3) - Perhaps have a single reverse than a circle at 00:30:734 ✘ No changes, sorry!
00:32:499 (4) - No need for a finish here. ✓ Alright, then. :<
00:36:028 - Circle here to match the beat. ✘ It's a nice suggestion, but I wanted this part to start lightly, which is why I started doing that at 00:39:558 and so on.
00:38:852 - ^ ✘ ^
00:41:676 (5,6) - Consider moving these somewhere else. They're colliding with 00:40:264 (2) which makes it look a little ugly. ✓ You're right on this one. Fixed!
00:58:617 (2) - Move this just a bit more away from 00:59:323 (1) for a cleaner look. ✓
01:21:205 (5,5,5) - A different hitsound would go better with these. ✘ Claps do the job pretty well here imo.
01:34:617 (2) - Don't have a locked point as the point on this, just have a regular point for a better looking slider imo ✘ I wanted to do a big spoon-like slider here -which would be hard to do without locked points- and looks fine to me already (even better, after Gear's mod).

[Insane]
01:42:205 - Circle here ✘ I believe that adding extra circles on this section is unnecesary if no changes are made to this pattern, so... no changes, sorry!
01:42:293 - ^ ✘ ^
01:43:617 - ^ ✘ ^
01:44:411 - ^ ✘ ^
01:45:028 - ^ ✘ ^
01:45:117 - ^ (And so on throughout this part) ✘ ^
03:11:323 (1,2,3,4) - Very sure this is unrankable, very oddly placed on the timeline. ✓ It's 1/6 but looks incredibly weird, dunno what was I thinking when I made this, lol. Tried something different!

Pretty average looking map, with a bit more work I feel it should be rankable. Tell me if my suggestions were helpful or not. Please vote on how good my modding was on my queue page. My Modding Queue
That last message made me really happy. I'm finally getting positive feedback. q_q
As for your modding, I voted on your poll already. Oh, and many thanks for the mod! :>
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hi! from queue :3

[General]

  1. you should delete 'electronic' from Tags because it will be added to Genre by BN when it's qualified
  2. I suggest to ask BN to show the song title and artist during this break 01:08:146 - when it's qualified. idk it seems cool
  3. also i'm quite concerned with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. just pointing it out, since many maps got dq-ed because of it
[Sh1n1's Easy]

  1. 00:45:205 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
  2. 00:56:499 (1) - ^
  3. 01:07:440 (4) - soft-finish at slider's tail seems nice. you can just change the sampleset without having to add any green line
  4. 01:21:205 (3,1) - i'm a fan of circular flow so i'm not really fond with this one, but the current one is fine. so only suggestion http://puu.sh/iYp1t/301e25d22c.jpg
  5. 01:52:970 (1) - add finish at slider's head. there's a cymbal noise
  6. 02:04:264 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
  7. 02:15:205 (4) - soft-finish at slider's tail seems nice. you can just change the sampleset without having to add any green line
  8. 02:29:676 (1) - idk i think you should end this note at 02:38:146 - because it's an important beat (start of new kiai) and leaving it without a note is somehow weird. and to keep the rhythm gap after spinner, i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/iYprN/0a7df1b730.jpg well yes it may not be better than your current one but at least there's a note at the start of kiai
  9. 02:57:911 (1) - add finish at slider's head. there's a cymbal noise
  10. 03:00:734 (1) - ^

    overall, very nice diff :)
[Normal]

  1. 00:36:381 (4) - add clap, since you added one at 00:34:970 -
  2. 00:39:205 (4) - ^
  3. 00:50:147 (6) - i'm not really fond with this shape, idk i'd delete that second red node and make something like this http://puu.sh/iYq3F/6585be4fb6.jpg
  4. 00:50:147 (6,1) - mind the ds. use the ususal 1.0x distance snap
  5. 00:56:499 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
  6. 00:58:617 (2) - ok the finishes here are quite weird since there's nothing to emphasize, like start of the chorus or a new verse
  7. 01:01:440 (2) - ^
  8. 01:04:264 (5) - ^
  9. 01:02:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems that you alternate the ds use between 1.0x and 1.1x . i suggest to use only one of them in this pattern to avoid rhythm misreading
  10. 01:21:911 (1) - move this up a bit and you'll get better appearance http://puu.sh/iYqjg/2b38be2ad6.jpg
  11. 01:31:793 (2,1) - you can fix the blanket http://puu.sh/iYqox/829aeed03e.jpg
  12. 01:51:381 (3,4) - flow can be improved by rotating 01:52:264 (4) - 33 degrees anti-clockwise
  13. 02:45:911 (3,1) - please use normal ds. player can misread the rhythm
  14. 02:52:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  15. 03:11:323 (5,6,1) - ^

    during last kiai, i think you used finish hitsound too much. it's fine if you use it at new combos like 02:40:970 - 02:38:146 - but when you used it at random places when there's no actual cymbal noises inside the song, ( like 02:40:264 - 02:42:028 - ) it feels weird. just pointing it out

    also seems that your ds is kinda inconsistent at some places. even though it's not the easiest diff, i highly suggest to use constant ds throughout the diff
[Rocket's Hard]

  • it'd be cooler if you added claps at some places like 00:22:970 (1,3,5,7) - 00:45:558 - 00:46:264 - etc
  1. 00:45:205 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
  2. 01:07:793 (1) - add soft-finish at slider's head? same reason as above
  3. 02:06:734 (9) - move to 184|348 for better triangle
  4. 02:57:911 (1) - add finish
  5. 03:12:028 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse
[Insane]

  1. 00:27:558 (4) - i'd nc this for combo consistency like 00:25:440 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:33:205 (4) - finish at slider's head seems weird
  3. 00:34:793 (7,8) - i think they should have bigger ds because of the high sv, so yeah i suggest something like this http://puu.sh/iYsaX/b2abb09acc.jpg
  4. 00:51:381 (3) - i'd move this to 192|116 for better appearance http://puu.sh/iYsfa/1caa3feead.jpg
  5. 01:41:323 (1) - i don't think nc is necessary here
  6. 01:57:028 (4) - ok this one has a weird rhythm and kinda not good to play. i suggest to make it a triplet like 01:59:852 (4,5,6) -
  7. 02:09:734 (4,1) - the gap is too cruel and the flow isn't good either. i suggest to make it like 02:12:558 (4,1) - . the flow is way better there
  8. 02:56:146 (1,3) - switch nc
  9. 03:04:264 (4,5) - i suggest to make them similiar for better appearance. you can just copy-paste one of them http://puu.sh/iYsEw/562c7a1184.jpg
  10. 03:19:088 (1) - remove nc, it's still in the same pattern with 03:17:676 (1,2,3,4,5) -

    same thing about hitsounds like normal diff. i think you used finish hitsound too much here. idk you can put this into consideration if you still prefer your hitsound pattern
Only opinion, mapping style in all diffs (except easy) is still kinda rough please don't be offended. i mean no harm it reminds me with my old mapping style. but i believe you can improve it with practices and experiences :oops:

Goodluck~
-Sh1n1-
3,404 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Gear wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. These are all suggestions, do consider them though.

[-Sh1n1-'s Easy]
01:40:264 - 01:41:676 - i think you should map something here, big empty space feels weird imo, your choice I feel that a little break here it's really necessary, so I'll keep

I don't have much to say about this difficulty, it's well done Nice to hear that :3
Thanks for your mod *-*/

jyu wrote:

Hi! from queue :3 Hi~~

[Sh1n1's Easy]

  1. 00:45:205 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse Sure
  2. 00:56:499 (1) - ^ fixed
  3. 01:07:440 (4) - soft-finish at slider's tail seems nice. you can just change the sampleset without having to add any green line Yes, sounds perfectly
  4. 01:21:205 (3,1) - i'm a fan of circular flow so i'm not really fond with this one, but the current one is fine. so only suggestion I decided to change on your way because looks weird and I like circular slider too xDhttp://puu.sh/iYp1t/301e25d22c.jpg
  5. 01:52:970 (1) - add finish at slider's head. there's a cymbal noise yes, fixed
  6. 02:04:264 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse Sure
  7. 02:15:205 (4) - soft-finish at slider's tail seems nice. you can just change the sampleset without having to add any green line Fixed~~
  8. 02:29:676 (1) - idk i think you should end this note at 02:38:146 - because it's an important beat (start of new kiai) and leaving it without a note is somehow weird (I'm agree I never thought on it but is a good point). and to keep the rhythm gap after spinner, i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/iYprN/0a7df1b730.jpg well yes it may not be better than your current one but at least there's a note at the start of kiai I'll ask to BN about that because I ranked a map with only 2 white ticks after spinner, also at 02:39:205 - there is a strong beat that I want to follow
  9. 02:57:911 (1) - add finish at slider's head. there's a cymbal noise Fixed~~
  10. 03:00:734 (1) - ^ You are right

    overall, very nice diff :) Glad to hear that
Goodluck~
Thank you very much, really useful mod because I have problems with HS but I'll do my best

Update
osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Motiv8
Artist:LynneMusic
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Creator:Serraionga
Version:Sh1n1's Easy
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Serraionga
11,484 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Serraionga

jyu wrote:

Hi! from queue :3

[General]

  1. you should delete 'electronic' from Tags because it will be added to Genre by BN when it's qualified ✓ I was seriously wondering how to change that. Fixed!
  2. I suggest to ask BN to show the song title and artist during this break 01:08:146 - when it's qualified. idk it seems cool I'll try!
  3. also i'm quite concerned with the difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. just pointing it out, since many maps got dq-ed because of it
[Normal]

  1. 00:36:381 (4) - add clap, since you added one at 00:34:970 - ✓
  2. 00:39:205 (4) - ^ ✓
  3. 00:50:147 (6) - i'm not really fond with this shape, idk i'd delete that second red node and make something like this http://puu.sh/iYq3F/6585be4fb6.jpg ✓ Done, although I tried tunning it a bit since it overlaps with 00:51:381
  4. 00:50:147 (6,1) - mind the ds. use the ususal 1.0x distance snap ✓ Fixed!
  5. 00:56:499 (1) - finish at slider's head? to emphasize the start of a new verse ✓ I like that suggestion. Fixed!
  6. 00:58:617 (2) - ok the finishes here are quite weird since there's nothing to emphasize, like start of the chorus or a new verse ✓ ^
  7. 01:01:440 (2) - ^ ✓ ^
  8. 01:04:264 (5) - ^ ✓ ^
  9. 01:02:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems that you alternate the ds use between 1.0x and 1.1x . i suggest to use only one of them in this pattern to avoid rhythm misreading ✓ Done!
  10. 01:21:911 (1) - move this up a bit and you'll get better appearance http://puu.sh/iYqjg/2b38be2ad6.jpg ✓Looks better indeed. Fixed!
  11. 01:31:793 (2,1) - you can fix the blanket http://puu.sh/iYqox/829aeed03e.jpg ✓
  12. 01:51:381 (3,4) - flow can be improved by rotating 01:52:264 (4) - 33 degrees anti-clockwise ✓ Fixed!
  13. 02:45:911 (3,1) - please use normal ds. player can misread the rhythm ✓ ^
  14. 02:52:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ✓ ^
  15. 03:11:323 (5,6,1) - ^ ✓ ^

    during last kiai, i think you used finish hitsound too much. it's fine if you use it at new combos like 02:40:970 - 02:38:146 - but when you used it at random places when there's no actual cymbal noises inside the song, ( like 02:40:264 - 02:42:028 - ) it feels weird. just pointing it out ✘ The hitsounds on that particular section aren't placed in random places, they follow a logical pattern and I thought it would be a nice idea to go all-out on the last part of the song. I do admit this section wasn't as polished as the rest of the map, though.

    also seems that your ds is kinda inconsistent at some places. even though it's not the easiest diff, i highly suggest to use constant ds throughout the diff ✓ That's been fixed already!
[Insane]

  1. 00:27:558 (4) - i'd nc this for combo consistency like 00:25:440 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ✘ It would make the square awkward to read imo.
  2. 00:33:205 (4) - finish at slider's head seems weird ✓ Changed the hitsound!
  3. 00:34:793 (7,8) - i think they should have bigger ds because of the high sv, so yeah i suggest something like this http://puu.sh/iYsaX/b2abb09acc.jpg ✓ That looks really nice. Fixed!
  4. 00:51:381 (3) - i'd move this to 192|116 for better appearance http://puu.sh/iYsfa/1caa3feead.jpg ✓ ^
  5. 01:41:323 (1) - i don't think nc is necessary here ✓ Me neither. Fixed!
  6. 01:57:028 (4) - ok this one has a weird rhythm and kinda not good to play. i suggest to make it a triplet like 01:59:852 (4,5,6) - ✓ Doesn't look that weird, but fixed it regardless.
  7. 02:09:734 (4,1) - the gap is too cruel and the flow isn't good either. i suggest to make it like 02:12:558 (4,1) - . the flow is way better there ✓ Fixed!
  8. 02:56:146 (1,3) - switch nc ✓
  9. 03:04:264 (4,5) - i suggest to make them similiar for better appearance. you can just copy-paste one of them http://puu.sh/iYsEw/562c7a1184.jpg ✓ Done!
  10. 03:19:088 (1) - remove nc, it's still in the same pattern with 03:17:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - ✓ Righto!

    same thing about hitsounds like normal diff. i think you used finish hitsound too much here. idk you can put this into consideration if you still prefer your hitsound pattern
Only opinion, mapping style in all diffs (except easy) is still kinda rough please don't be offended. i mean no harm it reminds me with my old mapping style. but i believe you can improve it with practices and experiences :oops: Kinda weird to hear that, considering its been through a lot of modding already, haha. Not offended though, I still lack a lot of experience and I'm pretty aware of that.

Goodluck~
Thanks a bunch for your mod! :>

/me slaps Rocket to notice the map
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