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cheezstik

Joined October 2013

cheezstik 2015-07-30T11:56:17+00:00

Hi, everything about the normal looks good (Or at least good to my eyes, I don't play normals) but I see that you also made the Insane, and I can see some things that could be improved, so I modded that instead, sorry if that's not what you wanted. No kd.

[Insane]

00:25:440 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This repeating pattern isn't the best to read, doesn't feel like good flow, and doesn't look that good imo, maybe you can leave the third 1,2,3 and just ctrl+h the second 1,2,3 or move it some how
01:31:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Another overlapping repeat, but with longer pattern, this is another massive reading (and appearance?) problem, and doesn't necessarily even suit the music. I think you should definitely consider changing this.

Mostly nice looking map, sounds and feels good to play, love the look of these patterns, GL.

gregest

809 posts

Joined February 2014

gregest 2015-07-30T15:03:44+00:00

Hi, mod as requested

[Insane]

00:33:734 - note here, the reason is because you put notes on the red ticks which had the same sounds, if you do that then put note on all of them or none of them (only just in the beginning ofc)

00:36:558 - ^

00:39:381 - ^

00:42:205 - ^

01:30:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern doesn't really look that good and not the easiest thing to play

01:34:617 (5) - ctrl+g? flows better

01:58:617 (1) - this slider doesn't really look good

01:59:323 (4) - ^

02:00:558 - note here so no awkward "now what" feeling

02:09:734 (4,1) - I would change this to this

02:12:558 (4,1) - same thing here

02:40:264 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't really play well

02:48:734 (1,2,3) - ^

02:52:264 (1,2) - I would use notes here

03:20:323 (1) - ^

03:22:440 - note here maybe?

that's everything, hope it helped!

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-08-01T05:35:15+00:00

cheezstik

cheezstik wrote:
Hi, everything about the normal looks good (Or at least good to my eyes, I don't play normals) but I see that you also made the Insane, and I can see some things that could be improved, so I modded that instead, sorry if that's not what you wanted. No kd. It's alright, not that I get a lot of mods anyways. ;w;

[Insane]
00:25:440 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This repeating pattern isn't the best to read, doesn't feel like good flow, and doesn't look that good imo, maybe you can leave the third 1,2,3 and just ctrl+h the second 1,2,3 or move it some how ✓ Did a Ctrl+H on the second one.
01:31:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Another overlapping repeat, but with longer pattern, this is another massive reading (and appearance?) problem, and doesn't necessarily even suit the music. I think you should definitely consider changing this. ✘ It's definitely hard to read, but I don't have any other way to represent this section. Looks fine to me.
Mostly nice looking map, sounds and feels good to play, love the look of these patterns, GL.

Thank you very much~!

CptBlackBird

CptBlackBird wrote:
Hi, mod as requested

[Insane]

00:33:734 - note here, the reason is because you put notes on the red ticks which had the same sounds, if you do that then put note on all of them or none of them (only just in the beginning ofc) ✓ Good reasoning. Fixed!

00:36:558 - ^ ✓^

00:39:381 - ^ ✓^

00:42:205 - ^ ✓^

01:30:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern doesn't really look that good and not the easiest thing to play ✘ It's hard indeed, but I really want to keep it. I don't really know how to map this in any other way.

01:34:617 (5) - ctrl+g? flows better ✓ ye

01:58:617 (1) - this slider doesn't really look good ✓ Improved its appearance.

01:59:323 (4) - ^ ✓ ^

02:00:558 - note here so no awkward "now what" feeling ✓ Done!

02:09:734 (4,1) - I would change this to this ✓ dank pattern m8

02:12:558 (4,1) - same thing here ✘ No, I want to keep that blanket. ;w;

02:40:264 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't really play well ✓ Did the same as 02:43:087 with some changes.

02:48:734 (1,2,3) - ^ I actually did a Ctrl+G here, should be OK now.

02:52:264 (1,2) - I would use notes here ✓ Done, I actually don't why I used sliders there lol.

03:20:323 (1) - ^ ✘ No changes here, sorry!

03:22:440 - note here maybe? ✓ Not sure if this sounds right... gonna try it anyways.

that's everything, hope it helped!

thx for the mod m80
although it needs more water 9.8/10 IGN

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2015-08-03T07:10:07+00:00

better find a way to motiv8 me to mod this map

hahahah

Overall:
hitsounds are kinda overbearing. Maybe consider using soft-hitnormals?

Insane:
01:31:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this only looks decent, it plays terribly. Never overlap patterns like this ;w;
01:38:146 (9,10) - This could have been a nice U shaped pattern but you didn't do that and im a little sad.
01:52:264 (7) - Make this quieter, since it's following something in the background?
02:44:323 (3,4,5,6,7) - It doesn't feel super great to have to tug back like this.
02:49:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this away so it isn't an icky anti-jump. Apply to all similar patterns.
03:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - Same with this too. Apply to all similar patterns.

It's a good start which is nice but a lot of the time it needs more continual flow. Right now you have a bunch of good ideas, but someones they don't really flow together. The map will play like "IDEA!. . . IDEA!" Instead of a constant train of ideas with transitions added to them.

Hard:
Claps consistent on 2 and 4. It's what the backing track does.
00:22:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm against overlapping patterns like this

00:50:852 (1,2,3,4) - But why is (3) the shorter one if the 3 note grouping doesn't end until (4)?
00:58:617 (5,6,7) - anti-jumps like this are not good. They make the map feel jerky and rigid, which you never want. For an effect, sure, but for an entire definition of how the map plays, that's no good. Apply to all anti-jumps
01:45:028 (3) - While it's good you're using symmetry, cramped sliders like this are no good. Plus, it's not perfectly symmetrical. Plan your symmetry ahead so you're not forced to do that.
01:48:205 (5) - You should be able to CTRL + H the slider and see no change at all. For me, since I'm bad at that, I use Grid Snap 2 for all of my sliders, but you can do whatever you want. Apply to all similar patterns.
01:52:264 (9,10) - Overlapping patterns like this are hard to see. Don't do that. Apply to all similar patterns.

Normal:
00:29:676 (3) - multiple repeats like this are no fun unless it's an effect.

It's just really standard, but good enough.

A decent start on things. Focus on flow a lot, and focus on making the entire map one cohesive idea, rather than a group of multiple ideas.

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-08-04T04:40:41+00:00

Reditum wrote:
better find a way to motiv8 me to mod this map

hahahah this actually cracked me up lmao, no kidding

Overall:
hitsounds are kinda overbearing. Maybe consider using soft-hitnormals? it's because i'm using stupidly high volume, gonna lower it a bit

Insane:
01:31:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this only looks decent, it plays terribly. Never overlap patterns like this ;w; ✓ I should fix it, it's been pointed out many times already. orz
01:38:146 (9,10) - This could have been a nice U shaped pattern but you didn't do that and im a little sad. ✓ It's done already. assuming I understood what you meant :<
01:52:264 (7) - Make this quieter, since it's following something in the background? ✓ ye
02:44:323 (3,4,5,6,7) - It doesn't feel super great to have to tug back like this. ✓ Re-arranged.
02:49:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this away so it isn't an icky anti-jump. Apply to all similar patterns. ✓ Fixed all similar patterns!
03:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - Same with this too. Apply to all similar patterns. ✓ ^

It's a good start which is nice but a lot of the time it needs more continual flow. Right now you have a bunch of good ideas, but someones they don't really flow together. The map will play like "IDEA!. . . IDEA!" Instead of a constant train of ideas with transitions added to them.

Normal:
00:29:676 (3) - multiple repeats like this are no fun unless it's an effect. ✓ No one likes these. orz

It's just really standard, but good enough.

A decent start on things. Focus on flow a lot, and focus on making the entire map one cohesive idea, rather than a group of multiple ideas.

Many thanks for the mod and the tips, I really appreciate it!

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-08-07T05:01:58+00:00

!where HR88 and -Sh1n1-

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-08-07T05:21:50+00:00

Blame HR88 because her reluctance of fixing the diff!

going to apply it later. Here's so late. :>

@Reditum fixed some of the stuffs of the anti-jumps and flows. I love overlaps and I don't think they're difficult to see since they're well placed.

I have a big booty

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Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-08-08T21:04:28+00:00

Updated.

Still waiting for -Sh1n1-... :<

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2015-08-13T03:41:21+00:00

Hello there~ NM as requested in my queue~

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Just small suggestions/nazi :/

[General]

No problems (Hopefully)

[Rocket's Hard]

Love the circle pattern you are following
00:33:911 (1) - IMO kick sliders' length should be equal, so (2) should be removed and this should 1 more repeat. Just to make players less confused.
00:55:087 (4,5) - These 2 should be a 1/2 slider, with a repeat. It fits into the rhythm lot more better.
01:14:499 (3,4) - Just pointing out little stuff, why is (3) closer to (1) while (4) is bit farther away from (2)? Well why is the distance diferent? (I can't explain ;-;)
02:08:676 (5,6) - Honestly these 2 should be farther away from 02:08:146 (3,4) - , because similar circles are even more farther than this.
Pretty solid difficulty overall

[Insane]

01:00:381 (5) - Why not follow the other sliders and make this a straight one?
01:24:028 (1) - Is this SV change really necessary? You used circles previously... Or if you want to keep this, maybe increase it to 0.75x or something, right now it seems pretty small with 0.5x.
01:30:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well the circle pattern is pretty nice, but this much circles seems too overboard. I would suggest you to use 1/2 sliders on (7) and (8) on both combos, and then making a jump to the next note.
01:42:381 (4) - This slider really skips the good beats which possibly can be made into a triplet/kick sliders. Same goes to other sliders. example : 01:45:205 (4) - 01:48:028 (4) - etc.

OR
01:52:264 (7) - Odd-timed sliders should be notified to the players with a NC.
For second kiai time : You should place claps on 2nd and 4th beats, don't really hear anything which uses snares on red ticks.
02:44:146 (2,4,6) - Making these perfectly overlap on 02:43:440 (3) - would be cleaner.
02:52:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO you should reduce the DS on these, since all other streams were stacked/small in DS.
03:22:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know this is the ending part of the song, but 0.9x DS should be fine, 1x is way too far IMO.

That is all from me. Couldn't make suggestions for patterns because didn't really try to mod this type of mapping styles much :/
GL!

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-08-14T17:35:31+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
[General]
No problems (Hopefully)
[Insane]
01:00:381 (5) - Why not follow the other sliders and make this a straight one? ✓ Good catch.
01:24:028 (1) - Is this SV change really necessary? You used circles previously... Or if you want to keep this, maybe increase it to 0.75x or something, right now it seems pretty small with 0.5x. ✓ But I like variety. :< Gonna change it to 0.75x then.
01:30:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well the circle pattern is pretty nice, but this much circles seems too overboard. I would suggest you to use 1/2 sliders on (7) and (8) on both combos, and then making a jump to the next note. ✓ That sounds nice!
01:42:381 (4) - This slider really skips the good beats which possibly can be made into a triplet/kick sliders. Same goes to other sliders. example : 01:45:205 (4) - 01:48:028 (4) - etc. ✘ Yeah, and it makes sense, but I honestly prefer using sliders here since it would feel too robotic with all these triplets/kick sliders imo. Plus, the hard diff has plenty of them.

OR

01:52:264 (7) - Odd-timed sliders should be notified to the players with a NC. ✓ Fixed.
For second kiai time : You should place claps on 2nd and 4th beats, don't really hear anything which uses snares on red ticks. ✓ I suck at hitsounding. ;w; Fixed!
02:44:146 (2,4,6) - Making these perfectly overlap on 02:43:440 (3) - would be cleaner. ✓ Done!
02:52:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO you should reduce the DS on these, since all other streams were stacked/small in DS. ✘ But I like alternating between stacked and spaced streams, makes it more more fun to play imo. ;w;
03:22:617 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I know this is the ending part of the song, but 0.9x DS should be fine, 1x is way too far IMO. ✘ I want to have the last note on the center and moving the stream would mean re-arranging it, which I don't think it's worth.
That is all from me. Couldn't make suggestions for patterns because didn't really try to mod this type of mapping styles much :/
GL!

Thanks for your mod and the hitsound suggerences as well~!

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-08-15T04:28:16+00:00

Applied everything, thanks for your time.

osu file format v14

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Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-08-15T05:26:48+00:00

Updated!

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2015-08-15T06:18:38+00:00

Buscando a -Sh1n1-

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-08-15T14:08:56+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Buscando a -Sh1n1-

Ya hablé con él, ha estado bastante ocupado estos días xD

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-08-24T23:28:10+00:00

neonat wrote:
General

00:12:734 (1) - you make the player spin 1 spinner for more than 9 seconds..... I'll try to change that on my diff

Sh1n1's Easy

00:43:793 (2) - why such a warped slider though, especially on the easiest difficulty. Sometimes I feel some restraint should be exercised when dealing with making the simplest difficulty You are right, my bad, changed into another pattern
01:07:087 (3,4) - slider before circle fixed~~
02:14:852 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:29:676 (1) - making someone spin this long may be harder than actually using other objects I think that this spin is really needed but I will try to find another pattern to fix it
02:38:146 - 02:57:205 - missing hitsounds Yeah, Adding HS.....~~
03:06:381 (1,2) - can blanket them It's already blanquet o.O?

Thanks for your mod.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hola. From here: p/4300723

[shini's easy]
00:12:734 (1) - esto pudee ser demasiado largo para un easy. Considera acortarlo. Si, no es la primera vez que me lo dicen xD lo acorte de tal manera que dura 6 segundos ahora
01:07:087 (3,4) - hacer un Ctrl+G es muchisimo mejor por dos razones, primero porque llegando a un circulo y luego un slider, es más facil sacar un 100 o un 50, y segundo porque estás perdiendo la nota fuerte en 01:07:793 - si lo aplique en el mod de neonat
01:28:617 (2,3) - que feo el flow :/ wtf, verdad, seguro quedo asi despues de algun mod y no lo reacomode del todo.
01:34:617 (2,1) - ^ xD fixed~~
01:45:205 (2,3) - no es mejor un slideder que se repite como antes? No, porque primero esa parte dura desde 01:41:676 - hasta 01:51:381 - y lo dividi en tres partes, la primera y la tercera van con slider de ida y vuelta ( 01:42:381 (2) - 01:48:028 (2) - ) pero la del medio ( 01:45:205 (2,3) - ) solo le puse slider y nota para no aburrir mucho al jugador de lo mismo.
02:08:146 (2,3,1) - El problema con el flow acá es que el jugador podría confundirse entre clickear el (1) y no el (3). Puedes mejorar esto sep, por esos dias aun no sabia mucho acerca de esto xd
02:14:852 (3,4) - same before. No hay nada, debe ser porque ya lo cambie anteriormente xD
02:28:970 (3) - intenta hacerlo más simétrico: http://puu.sh/jd2HG/8baecea899.jpg Puestos a la misma altura
02:29:676 (1) - puede ser demasiado largo. Si ya me lodijeron, estoy pensando cambiarlo por notas pero considero que el spin tambien es necesario.
02:55:087 (1,2) - Que feo flow u.u jajaja esos cambios que hice son la muerte xd
03:17:676 (1,2) - ^ ^
En general no se ve mal, pero debe ser más cuidadoso con los cambios de polaridad, preferí no nombrar mucho sobre eso, pero espero trates encontrar mejores estrategias Oks, me di cuenta tambien de los espaciados asi que me tomare mi tiempo haciendo eso.

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La canción es muy divertida... aunque de las diffs, se nota quién de uds ya rankeó algun mapa jajaja pero cuando mapie esta diff aun no rankeaba nada D:, la canción me recordó un poco a esta https://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmap?b=557815&m=0 Maldicion, no hay easy en ese mapa xDD le reclamare a Gamu :3, yo les recomiendo que le den una mirada, y pienso que se darán cuenta a qué me refiero.

En general, hay cosas del ritmo que deben mejorarlas, especialemtne por los problemas de polaridad en las diffs faciles, y por cosas que sean más intuitivas de leer en las diffs más altas. Oks, Gracias erunamo-sempai
Mucha suerte!!!

Gracias por el mod

Siento mucho la demora, aplicare mas cambios acerca de la polaridad que menciono erunamo, ya yo te mando PM con mi actualizacion o facil y posteo.

click me!

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Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-08-25T02:20:07+00:00

My computer just died and I'm having trouble getting it to work, so I can't apply those changes for now. Luckily, the beatmap was updated beforehand, so I might be able to do it on another computer. Let's hope so.

Nevermind, got it to work somehow. Updated!

meii18

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Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-08-30T09:43:11+00:00

Hello! As requested

Artist: LynneMusic
Title: Motiv8
Taken from http://ohmytracks.com/#/music/LynneMusic

The current metadata seems fine

no kudosu.Good Luck!

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-09-10T09:59:55+00:00

Updated.

Waiting for Yuii's hitsound mod, XinCrin's SB and some other mods that could drop by...

HappyRocket88

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Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-09-11T03:06:31+00:00

¿De verdad el Xin Crin le hará SB a la canción?

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-09-11T03:13:04+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
¿De verdad el Xin Crin le hará SB a la canción?

Mandé una petición en su queue y la aceptó. Me lo confirmó por #spanish un rato después así que no dispongo de ningún log para demostrarlo, pero lo recuerdo bien.

No sabía de la existencia del /savelog, básicamente.

Exa

446 posts

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Exa 2015-09-15T10:31:51+00:00

Easy

00:28:264 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
00:31:087 (3,1) - You can easily avoid that overlap.
00:42:381 (1,2) - The slider density allows for the player to transit into (2) much earlier than intended. This might be a problem since newbies tend to freak out when they see a new object and want to click it as soon as possible.
00:56:499 (1) - Do Ctrl+H and rotate by -72 degrees. Then replace at (104,196) to improve the aesthetics by making the curves go with the flow.
01:19:087 (1) - Do Ctrl+H and replace at (104,196) for the exact same reason.
01:40:617 - At least use a reverse slider to fill this in. Don't leave it like that.
01:50:852 (2) - You could have added a reverse point. Avoid leaving big time gaps cause it is easier to reach an object than to click it in time. If that time is much different from the others, it becomes confusing.
02:47:676 (2) - Do Ctrl+J and replace at (344,264). It looks better and follows the flow you've created in a smoother way.
02:54:381 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket (Ctrl+G 3 to see it).

Normal

00:45:205 (1,2,3,4,1) - Insert creativity. Not saying it's bad... It's just to simple.
00:50:146 (6) - Use 1/1 reverse slider for consistency. Actually.. You don't keep a constant repeating rhythm so nevermind. (It would be best to do so though).
01:33:205 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket and 2 looks ugly with that broken curve.
01:41:411 - Don't skip that.
01:48:558 (3,1) - Avoid that overlap.
01:52:264 (1) - No. Don't go for the background sound since you end up skipping a blue tick. Furthermore, you are forced to alter the volume since that's what that sound suggests, but the beat on the slider's head sounds loud and clear. Just end the slider 01:52:617 - here and remove the low volume.
01:52:264 (1,1) - Don't break spacing here. Especially if you made up your mind and changed the first slider according to my last suggestion.
01:53:676 (2) - Don't skip that white tick. It's too obvious to not be tapped at.
01:59:676 - Don't skip that. Please try to be consistent on what you map :>
02:04:264 - Compared to your first kiai, every rhythm is different even though the music is the same. I don't see the reasoning behind this.
- I will conclude the mod of this difficulty here since I do not intend on commenting on how to improve parts that are inconsistent in the first place. Especially on easy difficulties.

Hard

- Rocket-Chan :>
- I would use DS=12 to avoid the overlaps that remains make.
00:26:852 (5,1,4,1,4) - Since you do that here, make sure you also do it after every 2 notes from the beginning.
00:33:205 (5,6,7) - Why not reverse? Did something change in the music?
00:36:293 - Don't skip that if you are going for a triple afterwards.
00:41:940 - Same here.
00:44:676 - You can start another stream here.
00:53:676 (1,2,3) - Fix these blankets. It's cool if you end up breaking the DS a bit while doing so.
01:07:970 - Can you lower the volume of these slider's ends?
01:16:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Music gets quieter --> Use harder rhythm?
01:59:146 (2) - Why the whistles?
02:00:734 - Oh wow. Make sure the player taps here.
02:01:087 - And here. This is what happens when you start sliders on red ticks :<
02:03:028 - This is also a strong one. Tap please.
02:03:558 - Same here.
02:04:264 - Why is it not the same rhythm with the first kiai? I get that you have the freedom to variate a bit on hards but you could use the same rhythm with no problem.
02:04:969 (4) - I am extremely unsure on how well the unstable spacing will end up.
02:15:205 (7) - 1/2 slider here, this is a hold sound.
02:15:734 - Reduce these sliders's tails volumes please.
02:35:323 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
02:36:205 (4,5) - And this and the rest.
02:47:146 (3,5) - Holly mother of inconsistent slider-shapes and imperfect blankets.
02:50:852 (5,6) - The spacing here makes the time gap look like 1/2.

Insane

01:00:911 (7,2) - Avoid that overlap.
01:03:205 (5,6,7) - Very awkward flow because you reverse the circular motion you've previously created.
01:33:911 (3) - Ctrl+G. The slider density allows for smaller cursor movement which is not cool with the strong beats there.
01:34:264 (4) - Same here. (Or not, your choice on this one).
01:35:499 (8) - This screams for 2 circles.
02:26:852 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,2,4,6,8) - Remove whistles from slider ends and reduce the volumes. Do the same with the circles I indicated.
02:40:970 (1,3,5) - Aesthetically speaking - it looks a bit cramped.
02:51:205 (5,3) - Avoid the overlap.
02:52:970 (7,1) - Same here.
02:53:852 (2,3,3) - Saaaame here. Y u overlup

02:56:852 (5,2) - They touch, or they don't. Either way move it a bit further away.
03:06:911 - Don't skip that.
03:09:205 (1) - This is too strong to be treated with such low spacing.

General

- Not all difficulties start at the same time, look into it.
- Please recheck your rhythms on insane and normal and make sure they are consistent.
- Pretty good mapset overall. I did not expect the Insane difficulty to be so good compared to how monotone the song is.

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-09-16T16:08:50+00:00

Exa wrote:
Normal

00:45:205 (1,2,3,4,1) - Insert creativity. Not saying it's bad... It's just to simple. ✘ But I like simplistic patterns. :<
00:50:146 (6) - Use 1/1 reverse slider for consistency. Actually.. You don't keep a constant repeating rhythm so nevermind. (It would be best to do so though). ✓ So... it is OK or not? Either way, I changed it. ;w;
01:33:205 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket and 2 looks ugly with that broken curve. Since this is been pointed out in almost every mod on this thread and I tried to fix it a countless number of times I changed it into something completely different.
01:41:411 - Don't skip that. ✓ That's... a blue tick? I'm going to assume you meant the white tick. 01:41:323
01:48:558 (3,1) - Avoid that overlap. ✓
01:52:264 (1) - No. Don't go for the background sound since you end up skipping a blue tick. Furthermore, you are forced to alter the volume since that's what that sound suggests, but the beat on the slider's head sounds loud and clear. Just end the slider 01:52:617 - here and remove the low volume. ✓ Did everything suggested here.
01:52:264 (1,1) - Don't break spacing here. Especially if you made up your mind and changed the first slider according to my last suggestion. ✓
01:53:676 (2) - Don't skip that white tick. It's too obvious to not be tapped at. ✓
01:59:676 - Don't skip that. Please try to be consistent on what you map :> ✓
02:04:264 - Compared to your first kiai, every rhythm is different even though the music is the same. I don't see the reasoning behind this. ✓ It's not different anymore. :>
- I will conclude the mod of this difficulty here since I do not intend on commenting on how to improve parts that are inconsistent in the first place. Especially on easy difficulties.

Insane

01:00:911 (7,2) - Avoid that overlap. ✓
01:03:205 (5,6,7) - Very awkward flow because you reverse the circular motion you've previously created. ✓ Re-arranged.
01:33:911 (3) - Ctrl+G. The slider density allows for smaller cursor movement which is not cool with the strong beats there. ✓
01:34:264 (4) - Same here. (Or not, your choice on this one). ✓ Seems to flow better, so yeah.
01:35:499 (8) - This screams for 2 circles. ✓ It does.
02:26:852 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,2,4,6,8) - Remove whistles from slider ends and reduce the volumes. Do the same with the circles I indicated. ✓
02:40:970 (1,3,5) - Aesthetically speaking - it looks a bit cramped. ✓ Re-arranged.
02:51:205 (5,3) - Avoid the overlap. ✓
02:52:970 (7,1) - Same here. ✓
02:53:852 (2,3,3) - Saaaame here. Y u overlup ✓ I re-mapped this part not so long ago, that's why. :<
02:56:852 (5,2) - They touch, or they don't. Either way move it a bit further away. ✓ Moved away.
03:06:911 - Don't skip that. ✓
03:09:205 (1) - This is too strong to be treated with such low spacing. ✓ Moved away too.

General

- Not all difficulties start at the same time, look into it.
- Please recheck your rhythms on insane and normal and make sure they are consistent.
- Pretty good mapset overall. I did not expect the Insane difficulty to be so good compared to how monotone the song is.

I really appreciate your effort for making these suggestions, many thanks for the mod!

Trosk-

Technical Support Team

5,795 posts

Joined October 2013

Trosk- 2015-09-16T16:32:28+00:00

No tenía mucho que hacer y me apetecía dar un par de opiniones personales.

[Insane]

- A mi gusto, creo que sería mejor cambiar 00:50:146 (1) - y 00:55:793 (1) - por un stream de 7 notas 1/4, como lo que se puede ver en la imagen de debajo. En mi opinión le da un poco más de ritmo al mapa.

Imagen

- En 00:58:440 (8) - 00:58:440 (8) - y 01:04:087 (8) - añadiría una nota para no perder mucho el ritmo de la música. Se siente un poco raro si no añades estas notas.

- ^ Lo mismo que en el comentario en encima en las siguientes. 01:19:440 (2) - 01:19:970 (4) - 01:20:499 (6) - 01:21:028 (8) - 01:22:264 (2) - 01:22:793 (4) - 01:23:323 (6) - y 01:23:852 (8) -

- Añadiría una nota aquí, por las mismas razones que antes. 01:46:440 (8) -

- Lo mismo ^ 01:54:911 (8) -

- ^ 01:57:734 (10) -

- En el segundo Kiai Time sería la misma historia que en el primero, añadir notas para seguir más el ritmo. 02:06:205 (9) - 02:09:028 (9) - 02:11:852 (8) -

- En la parte que va desde 02:26:852 (1) - hasta 02:35:323 (1) - sería la misma historia que en mi segundo punto o comentario, añadir notas para seguir un poco más el ritmo.

- En el tercer Kiai Time, desde 02:38:146 (1) - hasta 02:49:087 (3) - sería lo mismo que en los anteriores, añadir notas en los puntos rojos para seguir un poco más el ritmo. 02:40:087 (8) - 02:42:911 (8) - 02:45:734 (8) - 02:48:558 (8) -

- Quizás añadiría una nota en 02:52:087 (4) - y 02:54:911 (4) -

- La misma historia de siempre, añadiría una nota en 03:05:499 (8) - 03:11:146 (8) - 03:13:970 (10) - 03:16:793 (9) - 03:19:617 (8) - y 03:22:440 (9) -

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Como ya dije antes, esto son simplemente opiniones personales, porque la verdad es que no tengo mucha idea de como mapear :3

Te dejo aquí el .osu por si quieres echar un vistazo a donde pondría yo los elementos y eso

http://trsk.s-ul.eu/PUrzV2FF

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-09-20T02:04:36+00:00

Trosk- wrote:
No tenía mucho que hacer y me apetecía dar un par de opiniones personales.

[Insane]

- A mi gusto, creo que sería mejor cambiar 00:50:146 (1) - y 00:55:793 (1) - por un stream de 7 notas 1/4, como lo que se puede ver en la imagen de debajo. En mi opinión le da un poco más de ritmo al mapa. ✘ No es una mala idea (y te aseguro que streams como ese me encantan) pero realmente prefiero mantener esos saltos, considero que en la sección anterior ya utilicé unos cuantos streams cortos (diferentes a los que sugieres, pero igualmente xD).

Imagen

- En 00:58:440 (8) - 00:58:440 (8) - y 01:04:087 (8) - añadiría una nota para no perder mucho el ritmo de la música. Se siente un poco raro si no añades estas notas. ✘ Es cierto, pero tal y como lo has puesto tengo la impresión de que crearía una especie de... anti-jump, el cual se volvería algo extraño de jugar imo. He intentado pensar alternativas, pero la verdad es que realmente prefiero dejarlo así.

- ^ Lo mismo que en el comentario en encima en las siguientes. 01:19:440 (2) - 01:19:970 (4) - 01:20:499 (6) - 01:21:028 (8) - 01:22:264 (2) - 01:22:793 (4) - 01:23:323 (6) - y 01:23:852 (8) - ✘ Si añado un circulo a esas partes entonces esta sección se volverá increíblemente similar al primer kiai (mismos patterns, solo que tienen forma distinta), algo que no me parece apropiado ya que tengo la impresión de que ambas partes de la canción disponen un nivel distinto de... intensidad. No sé si me explico. orz

- Añadiría una nota aquí, por las mismas razones que antes. 01:46:440 (8) - ✘ Crearía un overlap con 01:46:970 (3) - y realmente quiero dejar tiempo al jugador para que se prepare por el star pattern que viene justo después.

- Lo mismo ^ 01:54:911 (8) - ✓ Aquí si estoy de acuerdo.

- ^ 01:57:734 (10) - ✘ Lo mismo que el otro star pattern.

- En el segundo Kiai Time sería la misma historia que en el primero, añadir notas para seguir más el ritmo. 02:06:205 (9) - 02:09:028 (9) - 02:11:852 (8) - ✘ Consideré añadir la primera opción ya que el pattern era distinto al del primer kiai, pero las otras dos no me gustaron y cambiar solamente eso podría volver el ritmo algo inconsistente, así que preferí dejarlo así.

- En la parte que va desde 02:26:852 (1) - hasta 02:35:323 (1) - sería la misma historia que en mi segundo punto o comentario, añadir notas para seguir un poco más el ritmo. ✘ Se volverá similar al primer kiai entonces (lo expliqué más arriba).

- En el tercer Kiai Time, desde 02:38:146 (1) - hasta 02:49:087 (3) - sería lo mismo que en los anteriores, añadir notas en los puntos rojos para seguir un poco más el ritmo. 02:40:087 (8) - 02:42:911 (8) - 02:45:734 (8) - 02:48:558 (8) - ✘ Resultaría algo inconsistente que mapeara los puntos rojos cuando en todos los kiais previos me los he saltado (además de que si lo hiciera tendría que volver a re-organizar algunas estructuras del mapa, y... xD).

- Quizás añadiría una nota en 02:52:087 (4) - y 02:54:911 (4) - ✘ La primera opción me gustó bastante, pero debo descartarla ya que si realmente añadiera una nota ahí esta parte tendría algunos problemas de inconsistencia con las secciones anteriores.

- La misma historia de siempre, añadiría una nota en 03:05:499 (8) - 03:11:146 (8) - 03:13:970 (10) - 03:16:793 (9) - 03:19:617 (8) - y 03:22:440 (9) - ✘ Lo mismo que el punto de arriba. Realmente añadiría más notas, el problema es que ya tengo mi estructura hecha y añadiendo más notas tengo que modificarla una barbaridad para que no parezca fea visualmente hablando. ;w;

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Como ya dije antes, esto son simplemente opiniones personales, porque la verdad es que no tengo mucha idea de como mapear :3

Te dejo aquí el .osu por si quieres echar un vistazo a donde pondría yo los elementos y eso http://trsk.s-ul.eu/PUrzV2FF

No cambié muchas cosas, pero igualmente te agradezco mucho el .osu de referencia y el haberle echado un vistazo básicamente.
Danke. :'D

HappyRocket88

4,322 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-09-26T01:44:29+00:00

After a long time making it, here's the hard diff. It has a surprise factor. IT''S COMPLETELY HITSOUNDED \(ºuº

Waka waka eh eh waka waka EH EH

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Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-09-26T01:57:48+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
After a long time making it, here's the hard diff. It has a surprise factor. IT''S COMPLETELY HITSOUNDED \(ºuº

holy shit i love you
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Advanced diff finished. Moar mods please.

FCL

1,497 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2015-10-09T17:04:20+00:00

NM from my queue

[Easy]

00:27:558 (3) - move on 151 344 for better flow
00:33:911 (1,2) - place them symmetrically to the center
00:54:734 (2) - move on 450 199 for flow
01:00:381 (2) - again.. move on 262 286. And indeed reconsider all flows via Shift
01:37:440 (2,1) - make parallel tail (2) and head (1)
02:29:676 (1) - begin this spinner on 02:32:499 would be better

[Normal]

00:51:205 - Do not skip this bit, he is very important
01:40:264 (1) - why nc?
01:41:323 (1) - ^
This difficulty is made in very strange style for me, so I don `t know how it modded

[Adavance]

01:47:146 (6,1) - make better blanket
01:59:852 (4) - you make very curved slider, what is not very nice

oh, stop. This mapset really has an unusual mapping style for me, so I'm sorry, but I hardly can something help in further
Good luck

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-10-11T20:32:09+00:00

FCL wrote:
[Normal]
00:51:205 - Do not skip this bit, he is very important ✘ But I'm following a different instrument here. :<
01:40:264 (1) - why nc? ✓ Because I'm retarded.
01:41:323 (1) - ^ ✘ This one is different though. I wanted the player to notice the change in the music by placing some NCs. Looks quite neat that way.
This difficulty is made in very strange style for me, so I don `t know how it modded Uh, I don't actually know how to take that. Thanks, I guess? ;w;

[Adavance]
01:47:146 (6,1) - make better blanket ✓ Oops, good catch.
01:59:852 (4) - you make very curved slider, what is not very nice ✘ Ya, but it's the only slider curved that way on the entire difficulty, I don't think it's too much noticeable. Besides, changing it would kinda ruin my structure. ;w;

oh, stop. This mapset really has an unusual mapping style for me, so I'm sorry, but I hardly can something help in further
Good luck

No worries, it was still helpful! Thanks for the mod~! :>

Raiden

osu! Alumni

2,419 posts

Joined January 2013

Raiden 2015-10-11T20:38:35+00:00

GL con el rank tronco/a

mola ver más mappers españoles

Serraionga

11,484 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-10-11T20:48:16+00:00

Raiden wrote:
GL con el rank tronco/a

mola ver más mappers españoles

Sí, la verdad es que hay muy pocos que seamos activos. :<
vamos A TOPE!!1!!!11

Everything

81 posts

Joined September 2013

Everything 2015-10-17T15:18:59+00:00

Hi, thanks for checking out my queue!

Sh1n1's Easy

00:23:676 - I think a note would work well here
00:45:205 (1,2,3) - Everything before this was followed by a rhythm ,but these notes and the following are being mapped by the song rather than its rhythm (if you understand what I mean) It does flow with the music, but this is also a difficulty intended for beginner users. Also, you are mapping on two different beats
01:07:793 (4) - should make this NC
01:34:617 (2) - i think you can make the flow better if this slider had stopped at 01:35:676.
01:40:617 - You should add some notes here
01:44:499 (1,2) - Notes are landing on different beats. It's suggested that most of them should land and end on a white tick
01:51:911 - should add a note
01:52:970 (1,2,3) - Again as stated previously, these notes and the following notes are following the music pattern rather than the overall rhythm. This may cause confusion to players
02:15:558 (4) - should make this NC
02:39:205 - same as 01:52:970

Normal

00:22:617 (1,2) - improve the blanket
Well, I think this difficulty was mapped well

Other things to look at is the mapping consistency with the patterns and how closely some of the objects are together.
00:33:911 - 00:39:205 - It seems to flow well but I feel like the rhythms you mapped it to are not flowing well. One part is mapped with a certain amount of beats while the other isnt
00:57:558 (3,4,5) - This flows well but since they are so bunched together, it could cause confusion. Consider changing the pattern if you can

Other difficulties are mapped well, anyways I hope this was able to help you in any way. Best of luck to you!

Serraionga

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Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Serraionga 2015-10-20T08:09:14+00:00

Celeste wrote:
Normal
00:22:617 (1,2) - improve the blanket ✓ Done!
Well, I think this difficulty was mapped well Other things to look at is the mapping consistency with the patterns and how closely some of the objects are together.
00:33:911 - 00:39:205 - It seems to flow well but I feel like the rhythms you mapped it to are not flowing well. One part is mapped with a certain amount of beats while the other isnt ✘ I understand your reasoning but I was aiming for a bit of variety here. This difficulty has enough Ctrl+C/Ctrl+V already. :<
00:57:558 (3,4,5) - This flows well but since they are so bunched together, it could cause confusion. Consider changing the pattern if you can ✘ The problem with doing so is that there's a lot of patterns similar to that one used through the difficulty. I would need to change every single one for the sake of consistency, which I don't think it's worth imo. Plus, I think it's appropiate to leave it as it is because I always want to make kiai parts a bit harder than any other sections.
Other difficulties are mapped well, anyways I hope this was able to help you in any way. Best of luck to you!

Thanks for your mod~!
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!where -Sh1n1-

-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2015-10-24T22:24:54+00:00

Exa wrote:
Easy

00:28:264 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket. omg, how you detect that? fixed~~
00:31:087 (3,1) - You can easily avoid that overlap. Yes I can easily avoid but is not a big issue cuz I played ranked maps with this pattern, if you take a look 00:31:087 (3) - is between 00:33:911 (1,2) -
00:42:381 (1,2) - The slider density allows for the player to transit into (2) much earlier than intended. This might be a problem since newbies tend to freak out when they see a new object and want to click it as soon as possible. it's not an issue cuz I were following the same distance with my previous sliders
00:56:499 (1) - Do Ctrl+H and rotate by -72 degrees. Then replace at (104,196) to improve the aesthetics by making the curves go with the flow. Great, nice catch Exa
01:19:087 (1) - Do Ctrl+H and replace at (104,196) for the exact same reason. Polarity, yes, you are right
01:40:617 - At least use a reverse slider to fill this in. Don't leave it like that. Nope, If you take a look I don't have enough breaks, here is the best oportunity the add a little rest
01:50:852 (2) - You could have added a reverse point. Avoid leaving big time gaps cause it is easier to reach an object than to click it in time. If that time is much different from the others, it becomes confusing. follow the song nice imo, I'll keep in mind and wait for more opinions
02:47:676 (2) - Do Ctrl+J and replace at (344,264). It looks better and follows the flow you've created in a smoother way. fixed into another way cuz your current pattern looks weird xd
02:54:381 (3,1) - Imperfect blanket (Ctrl+G 3 to see it). fixed~~

General

- Not all difficulties start at the same time, look into it. I think that the main issue start on my diff lol, sorry for that D:

Thanks for your mod :3

FCL wrote:
NM from my queue

[Easy]
00:27:558 (3) - move on 151 344 for better flow you are right about flow~~, but I don't want to move (3) cuz I'll need to move the next note and the next note and.... I fixed it adding a curve at 00:25:440 (2) -
00:33:911 (1,2) - place them symmetrically to the center yay, fixed without grid snap
00:54:734 (2) - move on 450 199 for flow yes, now is exact
01:00:381 (2) - again.. move on 262 286. And indeed reconsider all flows via Shift Ok, fixed~~
01:37:440 (2,1) - make parallel tail (2) and head (1) there is parallel actually O.o?
02:29:676 (1) - begin this spinner on 02:32:499 would be better I remaped this part following neonat's advice

Thanks for your exact mod xD

Celeste wrote:
Hi, thanks for checking out my queue!
[Sh1n1's Easy]
00:23:676 - I think a note would work well here Totally agree, unnfortunally I can't put a note here because rules say "you must add a break of 3 1/1 after spins at easy"
00:45:205 (1,2,3) - Everything before this was followed by a rhythm ,but these notes and the following are being mapped by the song rather than its rhythm (if you understand what I mean) It does flow with the music, but this is also a difficulty intended for beginner users. Also, you are mapping on two different beats Yes and it was a purpose cuz the song is monotone, I made parts with variety to avoid boring easy
01:07:793 (4) - should make this NC fixed~~
01:34:617 (2) - i think you can make the flow better if this slider had stopped at 01:35:676. No because song decrease at 01:35:323 - and it's a better place to add a little rest like 01:40:264 (2) - furthermore to enphasize 01:36:028 (1) - that marks the beginning of the next stanza
01:40:617 - You should add some notes here Why? there is no melody only drums, easy should follow only general patterns and add breaks when it's needed
01:44:499 (1,2) - Notes are landing on different beats. It's suggested that most of them should land and end on a white tick Isn't necessary to keep consistency with 01:50:852 (2) -
01:51:911 - should add a note Nope, if you take a look at 01:51:911 - you can't hear the same sound as 01:52:264 - and 01:52:617 -
01:52:970 (1,2,3) - Again as stated previously, these notes and the following notes are following the music pattern rather than the overall rhythm. This may cause confusion to players I know what you mean, but where is variety? it will be too boring following the same sound cuz the song is monotone as I said before
02:15:558 (4) - should make this NC fixed~~
02:39:205 - same as 01:52:970 same reason as above

Thanks for mod~~ *-*/

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132,240,67087,2,0,L|120:164,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
104,80,67793,5,4,0:0:0:0:
104,196,79087,6,0,B|100:167|105:143|105:143|109:120|105:88,2,105
216,272,80676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,168,81205,2,0,P|344:164|380:172,1,70
436,236,81911,6,0,P|408:288|369:320,1,105
240,348,82970,2,0,B|188:342|188:342|136:320,1,105
32,236,84028,2,0,L|32:164,1,70
84,92,84734,6,0,P|126:58|184:52,2,105
180,188,86323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,264,86852,2,0,B|332:268|332:268|372:264,1,70
404,180,87558,6,0,P|416:124|400:76,1,105
264,76,88617,2,0,P|249:125|262:176,1,105
368,260,89676,2,0,L|328:320,1,70
248,356,90381,6,0,P|149:346|114:251,1,210,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,168,91793,2,0,B|195:116|195:116|250:165|327:152,1,210
416,152,93205,6,0,P|444:268|376:320,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,94617,2,0,B|257:292|229:300|229:300|197:308|157:300,1,140
40,160,96028,6,0,P|79:66|176:36,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,68,97440,2,0,B|280:132|243:195|243:195|284:267,1,210
204,312,98852,6,0,B|161:248|161:248|87:254|37:210,1,210
36,120,100264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,282,101676,6,0,L|405:222,1,70
476,172,102381,2,0,B|480:148|476:120|476:120|472:92|476:68,2,105
392,208,103793,2,0,P|356:212|316:208,1,70
248,160,104499,6,0,P|213:157|178:161,1,70
96,204,105205,2,0,B|92:232|96:256|96:256|100:280|96:308,1,105
224,352,106264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,284,106617,2,0,P|299:251|324:219,1,70
408,200,107323,6,0,P|428:171|443:140,1,70
420,52,108028,2,0,P|368:40|316:52,2,105
472,124,109440,2,0,L|424:192,1,70
344,204,110146,6,0,L|296:272,1,70
244,332,110852,2,0,P|192:344|140:328,1,105
108,104,112264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,84,112617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,108,112970,6,0,B|309:120|329:122|329:122|354:125|383:138,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,248,114028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,114558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,292,115087,2,0,P|192:288|156:292,1,70
84,240,115793,6,0,B|67:217|59:194|59:194|51:171|33:144,1,105
148,68,116852,2,0,P|200:56|260:80,1,105
196,196,117911,2,0,B|198:209|193:223|193:223|190:237|194:265,1,70
176,356,118617,6,0,P|227:355|269:325,1,105
316,196,119676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,148,120205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,44,120734,2,0,P|317:38|282:42,1,70
204,92,121440,6,0,P|154:107|105:91,1,105
36,208,122499,2,0,B|32:260|32:260|36:320,1,105
168,344,123558,2,0,P|202:349|237:345,1,70
308,288,124264,6,0,B|304:258|307:234|307:234|311:211|308:183,2,105,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,352,125852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,228,126381,2,0,B|480:196|480:196|484:156,1,70
488,68,127087,6,0,P|440:52|384:68,1,105
292,164,128146,2,0,P|241:177|192:161,1,105
80,84,129205,2,0,P|44:76|8:84,1,70
44,168,129911,6,0,B|40:200|44:220|44:220|48:240|44:284,2,105
164,104,131499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,120,132028,2,0,B|312:156|316:192,1,70
260,260,132734,6,0,P|216:276|156:252,1,105
116,128,133793,2,0,P|164:111|213:129,1,105
340,176,134852,2,0,P|372:180|412:176,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
476,116,135558,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,224,146852,6,0,P|128:168|140:112,2,105
256,288,148440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,224,148970,2,0,B|380:184|376:148,1,70
308,92,149676,2,0,P|256:104|204:92,1,105
76,52,150734,2,0,L|64:168,1,105
68,292,151793,2,0,L|148:296,1,70
192,224,152499,2,0,P|244:212|300:228,2,105
240,352,154087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,336,154617,2,0,L|428:276,1,70
256,192,155323,12,0,158146,0:0:0:0:
116,156,159205,6,0,P|168:144|228:164,1,105
316,248,160264,2,0,P|356:252|392:244,1,70
476,240,160970,6,0,L|456:352,1,105
320,352,162028,2,0,B|290:353|269:339|269:339|243:325|214:326,1,105
92,276,163087,2,0,L|92:204,1,70
164,148,163793,6,0,P|216:136|248:88,2,105
40,92,165381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,228,165911,2,0,B|44:264|44:264|40:308,1,70
112,356,166617,6,0,P|166:340|201:303,1,105
252,180,167676,2,0,P|290:145|340:135,1,105
476,120,168734,2,0,L|480:48,1,70
392,28,169440,6,0,P|340:16|284:28,2,105
336,152,171028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,284,171558,2,0,P|337:289|302:285,1,70
216,260,172264,6,0,L|144:336,1,105
40,248,173323,2,0,B|43:195|43:195|52:140,1,105
152,52,174381,2,0,L|222:52,1,70
300,104,175087,6,0,P|316:48|300:0,2,105
171,151,176676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,177205,2,0,B|252:300|252:300|248:336,1,70
160,352,177911,6,0,P|108:364|56:348,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,178970,2,0,P|60:161|45:112,1,105
164,44,180028,2,0,L|248:44,1,70
292,112,180734,6,0,L|368:112,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,124,181440,2,0,B|462:102|466:74|466:74|470:45|480:24,2,105
456,216,182852,2,0,P|422:229|382:236,1,70
304,209,183558,6,0,P|269:215|236:229,1,70
168,292,184264,2,0,P|116:308|64:288,1,105
44,160,185323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,185676,2,0,B|148:96|148:96|188:100,1,70
268,132,186381,6,0,B|304:136|304:136|340:132,1,70
412,184,187087,2,0,P|426:134|414:84,2,105
424,276,188499,2,0,L|376:344,1,70
304,288,189205,6,0,L|256:356,1,70
172,352,189911,2,0,P|116:360|68:348,1,105
48,216,190970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,132,191323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,88,191676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,68,192028,6,0,P|303:57|353:68,2,105
298,195,193617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,194146,2,0,P|436:244|432:280,1,70
376,348,194852,6,0,B|348:356|322:348|322:348|296:340|271:348,1,105
156,276,195911,2,0,P|144:220|156:172,1,105
256,80,196970,2,0,L|328:80,1,70
400,132,197676,6,0,P|416:73|394:19,2,105
264,144,199264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,264,199793,2,0,B|332:300|332:300|328:336,1,70
240,352,200499,6,0,P|188:364|136:348,1,105
48,248,201558,2,0,B|56:196|56:196|48:144,1,105
156,60,202617,2,0,L|240:60,1,70
308,104,203323,5,12,0:0:0:0:

Siento la demora Serra, gracias por el PM, acerca del Hitsound noc si esto te sirva pero deberian tener todos el mismo HS, solo opinion no es necesario pero para evitar DQ innecesarias usa el mejor HS que tengas y aplicalos en todas tus diffs y mi diff, preguntale a HR88 acerca de esto, anyways here is the link: t/131540

Last edited by -Sh1n1- 2015-10-24T22:54:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2015-10-24T22:34:29+00:00

Omg! Sh1n1 apareció. Debe ser por Patricia.

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-10-24T22:41:18+00:00

And... updated!

|-) |-) |-) |-) |-)

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-10-24T22:56:50+00:00

xDD siento la demora encerio chicos y vean lo que edite al final de mi post, nose si estan enterados de eso, por mi parte me gustaria que copien los Hs a mi diff porque se me da fatal xD

pishifat

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pishifat 2015-10-26T05:44:07+00:00

Serraionga wrote:
please notice me BNs and other experienced people

hey thats me!!

normalwhistle5 has a delay

your poop brown combo color would blend in with the bg less if it were more pale (meaning do that)

easy
02:29:676 (4) - 02:32:499 (7) - uh you forgot some hitsounds lol
02:35:323 (1,1) - dunno how well it's gonna work to have a 3 measure gap here while the recommended for this difficulty is 4. it fits the song but yea you might be screwed
some hitsound stuff i complained about below would apply here too

normal
00:33:911 (1) - onwards is an example of what im not getting with the clap changes. the song's drumbeat is the exact same so skipping out on the drumbeat hitsounds is super weird
01:21:205 (5) - 01:24:028 (5) - 01:26:852 (5) - lol claps just don't fit at all here. probably should be using another hitsound sample, like whistles
01:27:558 (1) - 02:32:499 (1) - same with that finish lol, it just isn't supported by the song at all
01:30:381 (1) - so like this section you just completley gave up on claps until 01:34:970 (3) - , where you decide to use drum sampleset as your clap hitsound for whatever reason like what
01:41:323 (1) - 02:03:558 (1) - 03:11:323 (1) - uh this double new combo thing is pretty unnecessary
01:36:028 (1,2) - spacing tho wha
01:41:676 (1) - so here onward you're using the default clap as your clap...butwhy when the song isn't any different for those
01:59:852 (4,5) - unrelated to hitsounds for once, 5 pointing to the left probably less misleading

disliking how you guys switch between different hitsound samples to cover the same sounds in the song. like in one difficulty 3 different hitsounds to express the same sound, which is like nonsense. if the sound isn't changing, the hitsound you're using to compliment it shouldn't be either (plus there's how every other clap is being ignored or something, which i'm not understanding a purpose for too much). i'm not really gonna go over much regarding hitsounds in the rest of the mod, but just know that the current hitsounds in all difficulties (yes, gds too) are pretty gross for these reasons

advanced
02:50:852 (4) - 02:56:499 (4) - when you're using such consistent rhythm, not emphasizing the tick that you usually emphasize (where the reverse is right now) stands out a lot. should be clicking there
02:53:676 (4) - samething, but this one would work better if the rhythm were something like bleh to emphasize the 4 circles in a row thing. if it's 5 circles in a row, the thing you're bringing out with the new combo isn't as impactful
03:14:675 (2) - not sure what you're trying to express with that bass hitsound at all. song doesn't really support it, so like use a different hitsound (or no hitsound at all woudl work)

hard
00:42:028 (7,2) - what's with this brokenstack thing doesn't look intentional and if it is it's gross
00:45:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm consistency is kinda important. from 00:50:852 (1) - onwards you map the 3/2 rhythm as the main thing, yet the stuff before it is all 1/1 (and ignoring the 3/2 thing). ideally you'd map the same sound when it repeats to show like "this is how i structured my rhythm, it's not random circles and slidesrs!!!"
00:55:087 (4) - kinda similar to ^ should be clicking on that reverse since that's the thing you've been clicking til here.
03:13:440 (6) - ya um this whole section is like the same thing as ^ where things you should be clicking are tails g
so im noticing a lot of placements that are making rhythm interpretation confusing. if you're mixing 1/1 and 1/2 gaps, make them more clear. right now you've got 1/2 gaps that look like 1/1 and 1/1 gaps that look like 1/2 everywhere, which makes stuff especially confusing. like some examples are:
02:14:323 (7,8) - 8 looks like it should be 1/2 given how the previous circles were placed similarly close to the previous sliderz
02:15:205 (10,1) - p much the same thing. spacing for 8,9,10 is visually the same as 10,1 but 10,1 is 1/1 and the other stuff is 1/2
02:28:440 (7,8,9) - then here youve got 1/1 for 7,8 and 1/2 for 8,9,10 with the same visual spacing. like peopel dont do that
02:50:852 (5,6,7,8) - and like this i dont even know what you're trying to do

insane
01:52:264 (1) - really should have raised volume
02:39:028 (4,6) - should be clicking on that 3/2 rhythm thing. the one that you emphazied everywhere up til this point i think you know what i mean
03:08:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - what is consistent spacing

pew pew

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-10-26T21:44:35+00:00

pishifat wrote:
hey thats me!! hello!!!!!

normalwhistle5 has a delay ✓ fixed it with my wizard powers

your poop brown combo color would blend in with the bg less if it were more pale (meaning do that) ✓ done, should be less poopier now

about hitsounding on sh1n1's diff i'm going to apply all the hitsounds suggested on his diff myself since i have his autorization to do so ~~and because he takes a lot of time to reply all the mods :^)~~

normal
00:33:911 (1) - onwards is an example of what im not getting with the clap changes. the song's drumbeat is the exact same so skipping out on the drumbeat hitsounds is super weird ✓ reversed the hitsound pattern to the first one
01:21:205 (5) - 01:24:028 (5) - 01:26:852 (5) - lol claps just don't fit at all here. probably should be using another hitsound sample, like whistles ✓ yes
01:27:558 (1) - 02:32:499 (1) - same with that finish lol, it just isn't supported by the song at all ✓ removedddd
01:30:381 (1) - so like this section you just completley gave up on claps until 01:34:970 (3) - , where you decide to use drum sampleset as your clap hitsound for whatever reason like what ✓ becos it's my hitsounding art lol !!!!1 actually i don't why did i leave it like that, that's surprising
01:41:323 (1) - 02:03:558 (1) - 03:11:323 (1) - uh this double new combo thing is pretty unnecessary ✓ welp
01:36:028 (1,2) - spacing tho wha ✓ LOL tf happened there
01:41:676 (1) - so here onward you're using the default clap as your clap...butwhy when the song isn't any different for those ✓ switched back to N:C3
01:59:852 (4,5) - unrelated to hitsounds for once, 5 pointing to the left probably less misleading ✓ d i d

disliking how you guys switch between different hitsound samples to cover the same sounds in the song. like in one difficulty 3 different hitsounds to express the same sound, which is like nonsense. if the sound isn't changing, the hitsound you're using to compliment it shouldn't be either (plus there's how every other clap is being ignored or something, which i'm not understanding a purpose for too much). i'm not really gonna go over much regarding hitsounds in the rest of the mod, but just know that the current hitsounds in all difficulties (yes, gds too) are pretty gross for these reasons ye i'm aware of that, i agreed with someone to help me on this stuff a few months ago, but he kinda forgot it seems

advanced
02:50:852 (4) - 02:56:499 (4) - when you're using such consistent rhythm, not emphasizing the tick that you usually emphasize (where the reverse is right now) stands out a lot. should be clicking there ✓ arranged
02:53:676 (4) - samething, but this one would work better if the rhythm were something like bleh to emphasize the 4 circles in a row thing. if it's 5 circles in a row, the thing you're bringing out with the new combo isn't as impactful ✓ i think it's fixed
03:14:675 (2) - not sure what you're trying to express with that bass hitsound at all. song doesn't really support it, so like use a different hitsound (or no hitsound at all woudl work) ✓ no hitsound

insane
01:52:264 (1) - really should have raised volume b-but isn't this following something on the background?? i mean i think it's appropiate to lower the volume here imo
02:39:028 (4,6) - should be clicking on that 3/2 rhythm thing. the one that you emphazied everywhere up til this point i think you know what i mean ✓ i do
03:08:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - what is consistent spacing ✓ pishi dONT HURT M E, don't hrut me, no m or e

pew pew

Thanks you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

man hitsounding is hard af

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-10-29T16:45:22+00:00

Hmm, you called me, but I think it would be better to fix the hitsounding first so I can look at it when that's done. (For example what's with the missing hitsounding at the end of the Hard? And the issues pishi mentioned, of course.)

I would prefer if you contact me ingame when the hitsounding will be fixed, since there is quite a lot to be done and talked about.

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-10-31T00:20:54+00:00

currently trying to fix these cheeky hitsounds 👌

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-10-31T04:26:32+00:00

:O esos post se ven interesantes, juro que posteo mañana bro

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-10-31T05:10:37+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
:O esos post se ven interesantes, juro que posteo mañana bro

Mira tu inbox. |-)

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-10-31T20:18:26+00:00

Copiado :3

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2015-11-03T03:35:39+00:00

Se me perdió el código del IDE ya que murió mi pc, así que tuve que comenzar de nuevo

Espero que te guste, si se me ocurre algo más te mando actualización

SB+.osb

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-11-03T15:26:27+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Se me perdió el código del IDE ya que murió mi pc, así que tuve que comenzar de nuevo
Espero que te guste, si se me ocurre algo más te mando actualización

SB+.osb

Te quedó de maravilla. Lo añadiré en cuanto Yuii- termine de ayudarme con los hitsounds, gracias por tu tiempo~
A decir verdad este me gustó más xD

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-11-08T01:36:56+00:00

OMG que buen SB :O no esperaba menos de ti Xin

~~When HS?~~

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2015-11-08T09:01:27+00:00

When Yuii- is done with it, I suppose.

I, too, would want to move this forward as well.
__

EDIT: Yuii- is done. Will update soon.
EDIT2: I still need help with some sections. Waiting for Yuii-'s response...
EDIT3: Day 98: Running out of water supplies, still waiting for Yuii- in his backyard... Rocket's hitsounding is finished though.

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2015-12-06T14:39:46+00:00

Oh... no sabía que habías arregladomis hitsounds, génial.xd

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2016-01-07T15:04:53+00:00

Hey, cuando me vean online, me acuerdan para ver cómo está el mapa xD

Serraionga

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Serraionga 2016-01-08T00:10:17+00:00

Técnicamente solo necesita unos pequeños repasos más, me falta arreglar el hitsounding (Yuii- ya terminó de proporcionarme las bases para hacerlo bien) y cambiar algunos patterns de mis diffs los cuales no me gustaron (concretamente en la Insane) para poder seguir recibiendo mods.

Mi versión tiene bastantes cambios que no he aplicado todavía, es por eso que he pedido que no lleguen mods de momento.

A ver si encuentro un hueco en mi agenda para arreglarlo, aunque ahora que mis vacaciones terminaron lo tengo bastante negro. xD

RVMathew

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RVMathew 2016-01-23T07:25:24+00:00

Hi there. 7 Months ago you posted in my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/u/5176679 for a NM request. Here I am 7 months later.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.

General
1) 00:16:970 (1) - Here the music builds up in volume. Therefore I recommend adding timing points along the slider, with each successive point increasing in volume by 3-5%, or lower if you add more points (get smoother increase in volume). The reason I would do this is that you will gradually increase the volume of the spinner, which reflects the change in the volume of the music.

Sh1n1's Easy
Nothing of major concern.

Normal
1) 01:19:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps try this arrangement? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387790 It looks a lot better than the current setup in my opinion.

2) 01:41:323 (3) - Shift this to a different location. Here is a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387793

3) 02:32:499 (1) - The music starts to build up in volume. I would manipulate the spinner volume by adding timing points, to reflect the buildup in music.

Advanced
1) 00:28:264 (1,2) - Make them the same shape. It looks better.

2) 00:48:028 (1) - Make the slider straight.

3) 01:33:205 (1,2) - Not on the same y-coordiante

4) 02:07:440 (2,3) - I am sure that this was not intentional, but here it looks like a bad attempt at a blanket. Either change the placement so it does not look like a blanket or make it a blanket.

5) 02:32:499 (1) - The music starts to build up in volume. I would manipulate the spinner volume by adding timing points, to reflect the buildup in music.

Rocket's Hard
1) 01:41:852 (2) - Make the slider vertical as it looks better.

2) 01:45:205 (6,7) - Not on the same y-coordinate. Shift 6 up to (202,124)

3) 02:24:028 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Why not do this pattern? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387769

4) 02:32:499 (1) - The music starts to build up in volume. I would manipulate the spinner volume by adding timing points, to reflect the buildup in music.

Otherwise good.

Insane
1) 00:43:793 (1) - Here the music decreases and then increases in volume. Again I would add timing points to manipulate the spinner volume as to reflect that.

2) 00:47:323 (1,2), 00:50:146 (1,2), 00:52:970 (1,2), 00:55:793 (1,2). I was thinking that with each successive par. The jump distance increases slightly.
For example:
- Pair 1: 2.0x distance
- Pair 2: 2.1x distance
- Pair 3: 2.2x distance
- Pair 4: 2.3x distance
This is so it makes it a bit more of a challenge.

3) 00:58:617 (1,2,3) - Maybe try something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4387759

This difficulty is really good. In the beatmap information page you say that it will be remapped; the rhythm is very spot on and the patterns are good to look at.

Final thoughts
Creo que esta beatmap genial.

Good luck and sorry for replying 7 months later.

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