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Anything that has not comments followed by are fixed. Thank you for the mod!Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloo~
Some small sugestion,
[General][Insane]
- Umm metadata source? I'm not familiar with vocaloid and utaite I read this wrong lol. Look at HootOwlStar's post for the sources.
- Imo combo color 1 looks same with bg, because almost 80% of the bg color consists of that color, furthermore the approach circle kinda hard to be seen in some part Yes, I agree.
- Why using tick rate 2? I don't think the extra tick represent anything Alright, fixed it to 1.
[Hard]
- Imo for a better readability maybe you can consider to add some nc on anti jump part like 00:22:669 (1,2,3) - , 00:42:145 (1,2,3) - , and 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - ? especially on 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - the 1/1 anti jump spacing there visually looks like regular 1/2 beat
- 00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
- 01:17:329 (1,1,1,1) - A bit not understand with that nc spam there It was to emphasize the ending of the chorus. But I decided to add one on the downbeats.
- 02:01:779 (3) - Missing clap I guess
- 02:18:585 (1) - Maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 (4) - ? because imo the rhythm better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, without adding weak beat such as 02:18:585 (1) - It could work, but there is a cymbal sound on 02:18:585 . Without having anything on that sound, it's rather awkward and sounds weird. Plus, the slow slider makes a nice effect for this beat.
[Normal]
- 00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
- 01:19:842 (1) - How about changed that into 1/2 slider with circle instead or something similiar to complete the guitar sequences on that part? imo the current kinda odd because you miss this beat 01:19:999 -
- 01:16:072 (1,2) - Missing clap on both head I guess
- 02:18:585 (4) - Literally same as Insane, maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 - ? Same reason as Insane, because of the beat I don't want to miss.
- 00:14:816 - 01:10:732 - 01:22:041 - Missing clap I guess
- 01:51:727 (2) - Missing clap also
- 02:18:428 (6) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so a rhythm like this might be better http://puu.sh/lYlWD/5445a5ae3c.jpg ? Pretty much the same reason.
- 02:43:402 (4,5,6) - Imo the straight pattern looks to plain, maybe rotate them like this http://puu.sh/lYmca/03d50f5684.jpg will improve the flow a bit? I made something else.
- 03:00:837 (5) - Missing clap
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Just let me know when you updated
Thanks for mod and gogogogogogogMako Sakata wrote:
Helloo~
Some small sugestion
[General][HOS' Easy]
- Umm metadata source? I'm not familiar with vocaloid and utaite
In case tweets can be a source for metadata, you can refer to one of his tweets which I managed to find https://twitter.com/madotsuki_/status/635790046566584321, in which he just states the title in the niconico video http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26055413 so I think these 2 links could be good enough.- Imo combo color 1 looks same with bg, because almost 80% of the bg color consists of that color, furthermore the approach circle kinda hard to be seen in some part sheela helped me fixed it already
- Why using tick rate 2? I don't think the extra tick represent anything my tick rate is already 1 so yep
Just let me know when you updated
- 01:10:732 - Missing clap I guess sheela helped me fixed it already
- 02:18:271 (4) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so reducing the reverse might be good there? I need to agree with sheela about the cymbal sound + I don't really want to apply more 1/2's into my difficulty so yeah
Thanks again, Ipas! I'm going to let Mako Sakata know that I applied your mod so she could check it and give a rebubble.Ipas wrote:
Continue of my mod hue
Sorry for really late >< It almost a month
[Hard][Insane]
- 00:39:632 (3,4) - Overlap looks untidy . Maybe you can try to polish the current position or avoid this overlap either
- 01:08:376 - Are you distinguishing this vocal? I guess you need to map it too, since I feel that most of your rhythm pattern follow the major vocals
- 01:53:611 - Rather strong vocal exist here, map?
- 02:01:151 - Again? Not this one, as I want to emphasize the chorus by having a gap in-between.
- 02:08:376 - I'm guessing to hit something here while there's nothing here actually, haha . Please fill if you agree with me I mostly follow the piano in this part. And I guess I wanted to vary the rhythms in the chorus, so it doesn't has to be the same as the first.
- 02:36:491 (1) - Start from this slider, please don't empty some parts with 1/1 gap . The music goes very strong (obviously you know it) and weird to skip some beats that will benefit with emphasis Okay, but I left 2 gaps. It sounded pretty weird because of the vocals.
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- 00:51:884 (4) - You can improve the flow with Ctrl+G this slider
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I did a testplay and there's nothing bad here
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Let me know after update!