Hihi~
M4M from your queue~
[General]
Insane and Six Paths have the same CS AR OD HP, maybe you can set a gap.
[Six Paths]
00:08:849 (1) - maybe ctrl+G better for almost all the slides are in that flow in this part
00:10:966 (2) - how about turn to a slider and a note? I mean slider finish at 00:11:319 -
00:12:547 (5,6,7,1) - the same flow makes a little uncomfortable
00:13:606 (2,3,4) - distance is sort of awkward
00:22:959 - maybe rhythm can be simpler for this part because of the violent part right now
00:31:444 (1,3,1,3) - down more
00:42:385 (5,2) - not stack?
00:58:252 (1,2) - obviously you ignore some vocal... maybe follow them better
01:01:795 (1,2) - ctrl+G and keep away from 01:01:266 (2) -
01:02:148 - I expect this when in my playing, but there is no ;_;
01:03:478 - add a note
01:07:096 (2,3,4) - I think sort of far
01:12:655 (3) - delete this one
01:18:037 -
01:24:213 (4) -
01:27:568 (2,3) - I think the position can be better although I don't know where
[Insane]
00:10:260 - ×0.65 better
00:20:135 (1,2,3,4) - a little difficult to read the first, maybe closer better
00:21:900 (3,4,5) - too close
00:22:253 (5) - I think using 1/8 here is unnecessary... If you must do that, better not get empty around 00:22:870 - If I were you, maybe I'll do this:
00:22:606 -
00:25:076 (1,1,2) - too close
00:32:326 (3,3) - not stack?
00:34:267 (1,2,3,4) - maybe flow not good
00:36:385 (3,4,5) - and 00:39:208 (2,3,4) - I don't think they have the same rhythm according to vocal so you know what I mean
00:39:914 (1,2) - I think sort of close, maybe 00:40:620 (2) - ctrl+G is a choice
00:40:620 (2) - rorate 40°, only when you ignore ^ mod
00:42:385 (3,1) - I prefer they keep a distance
00:56:841 (1,2,1,2,1) - slider slower one by one to make the slider shorter one by one
01:01:089 (2) - close to 00:59:678 (1) - ; 01:01:266 (3) - far from 00:59:678 (1) - , I think
01:02:148 (3) - maybe your can choose a silenter hitsound for it
01:06:743 (1) - blanket can be better
01:11:684 (3) - ctrl+G
01:12:037 (4) - ^
01:12:390 (1,2,3) - 01:13:625 (8,9,1) - why not curve the stream? I think not beautiful for now
01:13:449 (7) - to (235,120) and 01:13:625 (8) - to (84,280) or around to make flow better while blanket for 01:12:037 (4,1) -
01:27:568 (2,3) - stack and change a position
[Hard]
00:00:371 (1) - to 00:11:319 - the beginning part is gentle so I think you can delete some notes
00:13:782 - I know you want to show the rhythm like this
http://puu.sh/ih4VY/9a20389d41.jpgbut the tail of slider performs bad, I think when playing with Doubletime
00:32:326 (2) - delete and move the slider, unnecessary note I think
00:36:385 (3) - use the similar form like previous ones
00:39:208 (2,3,4) - put them (440,232) better
00:56:841 (1,2,3,4) - keep a distance for them better
01:07:449 (2) - NC here is enough
01:18:743 (2) - ^
01:12:390 - better for sure like this
01:25:096 (1) - ctrl+G better and change a position
[Normal]
well...
00:10:966 (3,4,1) - keep in a line?
00:15:194 -
00:25:781 (5,6) - difficult for a Normal diff player so turn 00:27:033 (6) - to a note and place it at 00:27:209 -
00:27:914 (1) - NC here
00:33:385 (2) - curves in opposite side
Besides I think some use of short sliders makes it difficult to read for a Normal diff player, maybe
[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1 is enough I think, for when playing I see many white points on the long sliders, which makes me swim
00:49:816 (1,2,1) - really awkward placing I think when playing with DTHRFL
00:56:512 (2) - unnecessary note, delete it
besides, you can add more empty rhythm because some part is sort of tight in rhythm now.
OK, seems I just say some unnecessary things...
Well, good luck