1. Easy (1.46 stars, 219 notes)
2. Hard (3.28 stars, 520 notes)
3. Normal (2.08 stars, 324 notes)

• General Changes:

1. Your maps really lack hitsounds right now!

• Hard:

1. Raise CS! Even though there have been ranked Hard maps lately with CS lower than 4, they're never really anything below 3,8 so I'd definitely consider changing it to at least 3,8
2. Raise OD! 5 is a little too easy :3 I recommend 6
3. Disable Countdown. Even though there's not even enough time for it to actually appear, the box is checked
4. 00:02:934 (1,2,3) - Spacing between these notes (1 and 2 specifically) feels weird, especially considering this kind of uneven jump doesn't appear anywhere else in this map
5. 00:28:734 (5,6,7) - Make it so that each slider is a copy of the one before but rotated 90 degrees anticlockwise
   
   SPOILER

   not exactly like this though i did a bad job lol
6. 00:33:134 (1,2) - similarly to the point above, make them rotated copies of each other. Looks better
7. 00:44:734 (1) - move it closer to the next sliders and rotate it to fit the flow
8. 00:58:734 (5,6) - make these two 180 degree rotated copies of each other
9. 01:01:934 (1,2) - same here ^
10. 01:08:934 (1,3) - make 3 a copy of 1 but apply CTRL+G
11. 01:11:534 (5,6) - make them 180 degree rotated copies of each other
12. 01:24:134 (4) - move it two little grid squares to the left so that it's directly underneath the 3 that comes right before it
13. 03:21:134 (5,6) - make them 180 degee copies of each other
14. 03:21:134 (5,6) - ^
15. 03:33:934 (5,6) - ^
    All in all you have great ideas! Just imagine you need to get a bit more comfortable with copying, flipping, inverting and rotating sliders to make pixel-perfect symmetry when you want to! Can't wait for future versions.

• Normal:

1. CS too big! Generally speaking, Normal diffs lately have been CS3-3,5 so in this map I'd imagine CS3 is the way to go
2. 02:20:534 (4) - Move to 02:20:734 and adjust shape to end close to 02:21:534 (5)
3. 03:14:734 (1) - Undo new combo
4. 03:14:934 (2) - Start new combo, move to 03:15:134 but have it end at the same time

• Easy:
  Easy maps are a really grey area as far as JUST how low you should set CS, AR, OD and HP... but I think yours are fine!
  As far as the actual map goes, I think it's great and couldn't spot any flaws. Well done!

Kuki wrote:

irc mod, nice map

SPOILER

2015-05-23 17:53 Kuki: can irc mod if you likee
2015-05-23 17:54 Victorica: Sure :3
2015-05-23 17:54 Victorica: But remember to post it on the forum so I could give kudosu~
2015-05-23 17:54 Kuki: yep sure
2015-05-23 17:55 Kuki: okay
2015-05-23 17:55 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/697772 Suzaki Aya - Chinjufu No Asa [Easy]]
2015-05-23 17:57 Kuki: 00:28:534 (4) - could make this one beat repeat?
2015-05-23 17:57 Kuki: 00:29:534 - and if you do that you can place a note here
2015-05-23 17:59 Victorica: Okay, got it. :3
2015-05-23 18:00 Kuki: 01:25:934 (4) - not sure about this?
2015-05-23 18:00 Kuki: it begins on the beat but reverses on the vocal and no beat?
2015-05-23 18:01 Kuki: could just extend 01:25:934 (4) and just not reverse instead
2015-05-23 18:02 Victorica: Fixed. xD
2015-05-23 18:04 Kuki: k
2015-05-23 18:04 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/697774 Suzaki Aya - Chinjufu No Asa [Normal]]
2015-05-23 18:06 Kuki: 01:01:934 (1,2) - could curve these two
2015-05-23 18:06 Kuki: would fit better imo
2015-05-23 18:07 Victorica: Okay. xD
2015-05-23 18:07 Kuki: 01:19:534 (3) - perhaps curve this under not over?
2015-05-23 18:07 Kuki: that way 01:19:134 (2)
2015-05-23 18:08 Kuki: doesn't overlap
2015-05-23 18:09 Kuki: 02:41:134 (1) - this is out of playfield but it's alright if you do want to leave ity
2015-05-23 18:09 Victorica: Fixed, I blanketed instead of just curving it upwards.
2015-05-23 18:09 Kuki: great
2015-05-23 18:10 Kuki: do that same thing here
2015-05-23 18:10 Kuki: 03:38:334 (2,3)
2015-05-23 18:10 Victorica: Okay.
2015-05-23 18:10 Kuki: to avoid the overlap
2015-05-23 18:10 Kuki:
2015-05-23 18:10 Victorica: I lowered that one a bit. x3
2015-05-23 18:10 Kuki: 03:41:534 (2,3) - here too >//<
2015-05-23 18:11 Kuki: 03:50:734 (4) - could currve thus
2015-05-23 18:11 Kuki: this*
2015-05-23 18:11 Kuki: to blanket 03:51:534 (5) -
2015-05-23 18:11 Kuki: kay
2015-05-23 18:11 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/697773 Suzaki Aya - Chinjufu No Asa [Hard]]
2015-05-23 18:12 Kuki: 00:01:134 (1) - starting with a curve would be nice I think
2015-05-23 18:12 Victorica: Okay
2015-05-23 18:14 Kuki: 01:10:334 (4) - could curve this
2015-05-23 18:14 Kuki: I would also suggest ar 7.5 or even 8
2015-05-23 18:14 Kuki: actually not 8
2015-05-23 18:15 Kuki: 7.5 though definitely
2015-05-23 18:15 Victorica: 7.5?
2015-05-23 18:15 Kuki: yeah
2015-05-23 18:15 Victorica: Mm..
2015-05-23 18:15 Victorica: But it's a slow relaxing song..
2015-05-23 18:15 Victorica: >.<
2015-05-23 18:15 Kuki: 03:11:534 (3) - this can be removed I think
2015-05-23 18:16 Kuki: It is
2015-05-23 18:16 Kuki: map is still ar7.5
2015-05-23 18:16 Kuki: ar-9 can be relaxing too lol
2015-05-23 18:16 Victorica: xD
2015-05-23 18:16 Victorica: I guess.
2015-05-23 18:16 Kuki: 03:11:534 (3) - if you remove it imo it suits more to the song (since it isnt mapped to a beat orr vocal)
2015-05-23 18:17 Kuki: and imo it's stronger there
2015-05-23 18:17 Victorica: If I remove that note, it'd abruptly stop the flow. >.<
2015-05-23 18:17 Kuki: Yeah, I see that
2015-05-23 18:18 Kuki: 03:58:534 - you can probably put a slow slider here?
2015-05-23 18:18 Kuki: a circle one maybe?
2015-05-23 18:18 Kuki: since the last note is held
2015-05-23 18:18 Kuki: 03:59:534 - and end here

-Light - wrote:

General: I think there should be blankets for everything that can be blanketed without looking dumb 8)


No Kudos if I suck too much lel

Easy

I think you should just blanket everything possible that
doesn't mess with the rhythm of the sliders (maybe
i'm the worst mod for ez maps ever) but other than that it's perfectly fine I think

Normal

General: there's a lot of stacking it doesn't look pretty to me imo
so if you feel like you want to you can change that, but that is just
my opinion,

maybe I just really like blankets? does that make me cold?

00:01:134 (1,2) - blanket maybe?


00:39:534 (1,2,3) - it's pretty cold out here. 8)

02:56:734 (1,2,3,4) - should prob move this off the off beat
seems kinda off

Hard

seems great overall. maybe some more blankets in places everywhere but
isn't completely needed

02:56:734 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make it like this? http://puu.sh/iGkhY/72617aef49.jpg
seems better with the rattle at the end but its really long lol

MokouSmoke wrote:

~Poof~

black = personal suggestions
blue = something serious

Flow and spacing are very nice across all diffs. Might want to work on the difficulty spread if you want to get this ranked though (especially normal)

[Easy]
General

Map
00:04:734 (1) - remove spinner. there's not enough rest between spinner and next note for this diff
00:37:934 (4) - slider looks weird. I'd recommend moving the red point to the right about 10 grid spaces
00:53:734 (1) - same spinner problem
00:57:134 (2) and other similar spots - feels like the slider should fall on 00:56:934 - but easy diff = map downbeats so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
01:53:134 (1) - another spinner
02:42:734 (1) - ^
03:14:934 (1) - incorrect rhythm imho. move to 03:15:134 -
03:15:334 (2) - move start of slider to 03:15:534 - end of slider is fine. also recommend you make this slider straight for nicer symmetry with 03:16:334 (3) -
03:33:934 (3) - shorten slider end to 03:35:134 - and add another slider from 03:35:334 - to 03:36:134 - so that it matches 03:27:534 (3,4) - . Your current rhythm isn't very intuitive
03:48:334 (1,2) - i would change both of these notes to 1/1 sliders since you're missing strong offbeats on 03:48:734 - and 03:49:534 -

Nazi stuff:
00:26:734 (1) - can blanket better
02:34:734 (2) - possibly blanket underneath first slider

Apart from the spinner stuff, this diff plays nicely!

[Normal]
General
This is very easy for a normal diff and could use some beefing up. Try following more vocals by mixing in some 1/2 rhythms and breaking up a few 2/1 sliders into 1/1 sliders.
Along those lines, I would also prefer CS=3 and OD=4 and SV=1.1, but up to you

Map
00:04:734 (1) - same thing as easy. The first slider starts in the corner of the map which makes it even harder for beginners!
00:07:534 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion below (also works for other similar sections)

SPOILER

00:16:734 - add 1/2 slider to follow vocals
00:53:934 (1) - spinner
01:53:134 (1) - ^
02:05:534 - add 1/2 slider
02:18:334 - ^
02:19:534 (2,3,4) - what part of the music are you mapping here? I recommend following vocals (and then drums when vocal finishes)
02:42:534 (1) - spinner
02:53:534 (1,2) - a lot of vocals you can map here
03:03:534 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:14:734 (1,2) - I'd recommend using 1/2 sliders here to follow vocals
03:16:334 (1) - can replace with circular slider

[Hard]
General

Map
00:01:734 (2) - try to avoid overlap
00:13:534 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:13:934 (2) -
00:13:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - i have no idea how to hitsound but this is too much cymbal :/
00:26:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sooo muuch cymbal x.x
00:29:934 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:134 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:42:734 (2) -
00:42:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - ok last time I mention the cymbal, but these really need to change
01:26:134 (1) - remove NC
01:58:934 (4) - add a note here and move slider to 01:59:134 - to follow vocals better
01:59:534 (1,2,3,1,2) - rhythm suggestion to follow vocals

SPOILER

02:02:334 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 02:02:734 (2) -
03:28:934 (3) - can blanket with slider (1)
03:35:934 - missing note here
03:38:534 - ^
03:48:534 (1) - remove NC
03:57:934 (1,2,3,4) - either remove this or map it in the other difficulties. You need to be consistent with the song endpoint.

Overall, cute song and fun mapset

Boobs wrote:

WARNING! I'm new to modding and I am not always accurate. I will probably make mistakes also.

Hard (3.37 stars, 486 notes) Quick Modding

00:47:734 (4) - This note here should be stacked with 00:47:534 (3) because it then follows the pattern really nicely with 00:46:534 (2,1) and plays out very nicely. Thanks for suggesting~ ^^ Changed it and it does look a bit nicer~

Normal (1.8 stars, 258 notes) Quick Modding

00:21:534 (2) - Try spacing this note with the same spacing as you did 00:20:134 (6) and 00:20:734 (7). I'm not really sure what you mean here. >< But I did change this part slightly after hearing your suggestion. :3

01:24:334 (7) - Maybe this part could be quieter and could have a slower slider velocity? Changed it to 0.75 SV~ Ty for suggesting~

Litharrale wrote:

Red = MUST CHANGE
Blue = Opinion
Orange = Strong opinion that someone else will almost definitely call you out on
[General/Metadata]

Background needs to be 1366x768 Fixed~ Ty for the help <3

Countdown inconsistency: countdown is on for easy and normal but not hard Fixed~

the break in the middle of the song is a different length for all 3 difficulties Idk if it really matters... xD

use of whistles is pretty intense, generally not a good idea to have whistles on almost every hit. They're meant to accent the song. Resetting all hitsounds!

Claps need to go on 1 and 3, I'd suggest using a custom hitsound for this, http://puu.sh/iX5iS/b5144e075c.wav <-- sounded pretty good to me. I'll try to use it. xD But be warned, I'm terrible with hitsounds! ><

[Hard]

00:02:934 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency on the triangle (292,268 fixes it) Fixed~ (I think? xD)
00:03:934 (5) - out of playfield, not sure if it's enough for unrankable but...eh maybe fix? Idk about this one... ><
00:14:734 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The crashes are intense. Keep in mind that if something sounds fine on your skin, it might not on others. (If you do decide to keep them for some reason please use a custom hitsound) Resetting all hitsounds. >< Now that I listened to it, it's quite messy. xD
00:21:534 (3,1,2) - Spacing again
00:24:734 (2,3) - slightly different y values, doesnt really add anything except make it look odd by making the 3 four units lower (I get the slider lookalike reason but circles are circles, not sliders)[/color] Picky. xD It's hardly noticeable but I fixed it~
00:42:734 (1) - crashes again Hitsound reset~
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reason for the different gradients on the first 1,2?
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - No reason for the NC, no spacing oddities so NC isnt really needed, just makes it harder to read It's sort of a taste in design. x3 I'll keep them. ><
00:52:334 (1,2) - jump feels out of place, no jump in the music Fixed~
01:11:334 (4,5) - move the 5 slightly left to keep spacing consistent Fixed~
01:11:534 (5,6) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380788[/color] Fixed~
01:12:934 (1,2) - missing a critical 1 drumbeat in the middle (map to the song, not the lyrics) Fixed~
01:25:934 (1,2,3) - crashing again, I'm gonna stop mentioning it Hitsound reset~
02:30:934 (4,5,6) - belongs in an extra/insane more than a hard
02:38:334 (2,3) - jump doesnt belong Fixed~
02:41:134 (1,2) - ^Fixed~
Just if you dont know what I mean with the jumps, 02:44:734 (3,4) - this is a correct useage of jumping[/color] ;-;
03:09:134 (1,2,3,4) - largest jumps in the map on one of the quietest sections? The patterns here and 02:41:534 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here should be swapped Fixed~
03:51:934 (2,1,2,1) - make the spacing between the jumps (both the 2 to 1's) the same plox
03:57:934 (1,2) - This is a trill so there should be a note between[/color] I can't hear it.. ><
00:28:134 (4) - NC Okay~
00:37:534 (1) - make this part of the prev combo Okay~
00:40:934 (4) - NC I think it's fine the way it is. ><
That's all for now ^^

1. Disable widescreen support for Normal and Hard.
2. Disable letterbox during breaks for all difficulties.
3. You have hitsounds, why aren't you using them? Or if you already added them in, it is pretty soft, I can't even hear them in Easy :/ Increase the volume.

1. SV feels really slow, consider increasing it.
2. Keep the DS same. What I mean by that is, don't disable DS temporarily (shift), I am pretty sure this is an unrankable issue.
3. 00:04:334 (2,1) - Space between these 2 notes are too big. In Easy you want to avoid unnecessary life drains, so you can add a spinner up to 00:05:734.
4. 00:07:134 (1,2) - Avoid stacking on Easy, this confuses beginners.
5. 00:17:934 (3,1) - Space between these 2 notes are again too big, try this :
   
   
6. 00:25:134 (2,2) - These 2 are overlapping, not only this blocks the approach circle, it also messes up the placement of 00:25:134 (2). Avoid this by moving 00:27:134 (2) - somewhere to the left.
7. 00:27:534 (3,4) - If you are trying to follow the vocals, try to use this, current one feels like it is not fitting into the rhythm.
   
   
8. 00:58:734 (3,4) - This is kind of flow-breaking, move (4) down so that it is on a straight flow with (3).
9. 00:55:534 - Don't reduce SV here, it is the chorus of the song, so if you want to make a speed change, may as well increase it.
10. 01:53:134 (1,1) - Spacing between a spinner and the note after that must be 4 beats long or longer, if not this is unrankable. So it should be something like this :
    
    
11. 02:05:934 (1,2) - One of the serious DS problems, keep it constant.
12. 02:31:534 (1,2) - This pattern looks really weird, try something like this maybe :
    
    
13. 03:22:734 (4) - The instrument you were trying to fit into starts at 03:22:534.
14. 03:27:534 (3,4) - One of the reasons why you should increase the SV, they are too close to each other, beginners will have hard time reading the approach circles.
15. 03:57:934 (1) - The end of this slider doesn't fit into anything; remove the repeat.
16. Nice patterns, but this difficulty needs more work on rhythm.

1. 00:02:534 (3,4) - This doesn't fit into the rhythm, try this :
   
   
2. 00:04:334 (6) - Again, you can avoid too big of a spacing between the next note and this note by using a spinner up to 00:05:934. You will have to remove 00:06:934 (1) though.
3. 00:07:534 (2,3,4) - Don't make (4) overlap on the tail of (2), beginners will get confused by this.
4. 00:20:334 (6,1) - NC should be starting at downbeats, or the big white ticks for easier difficulties. Add NC at (6) and remove NC at (1).
5. 00:32:734 (2) - Listen carefully, a slider doesn't fit in here. Use a single circle instead.
6. 00:33:134 - After adding a circle this part should be too empty, add a 1/1 slider to match the song.
7. 00:43:534 (4,5) - Weird pattern again, do something like I mentioned in Easy, picture :
   
   
8. 00:47:934 (3,1) - Don't do this, stacking like this is not encouraged for easier difficulties.
9. 00:52:534 (1,1) - Spacing between these notes must be 4 beats long or longer also in Normal, 2 beats long is unrankable. To also fit into the song, reduce the spinner to 00:53:734.
10. 01:53:134 (1,1) - ^^
11. 02:18:334 (4,1) - All your previous stack had a 1/2 space, but this one has a 1/1 space. Either unstack these or unstack all other stacks, this will confuse beginners.
12. 03:14:934 (1,1) - And again the spacing.
13. The problems are recurring throughout the whole difficulty and for all difficulties. Check for NCs, they are supposed to be on downbeats. Flow should be managed, and a remapping will also help the map's quality

moonlightleaf wrote:

[DS]
很乱, Inconsistent x.x
Normal可能需要统一一个DS : Normal maybe need a std DSI usually use AR Circles for distance.
hard里有些高音的地方可以+0.3 +0.5 +0.7这样加一点距离 hard can use large DS in some high sound , like DS+0.3 +0.5 +0.7 and so on I'm not really familiar with this.. ><
[音效 hitsound]
很乱,当然我自己也不会音效= =莫名 Inconsistent , also i am shit in hitsound ... I'm also bad at hitsounding. xD
[Normal]

HP4 OD4 感觉好 HP4 OD4 feel better Done~

DS有点乱,都按照1.0x来吧? maybe use 1.0x DS I think I will remap Normal... ><

就挑前面几个好了: pick some to mod:

00:02:534 (3,4) - 试试这样↓ like ↓

SPOILER

00:06:934 (1,2) - 我是觉得这样叠不好 stack is not so good

00:12:734 (4,5,6) - 试试这样↓ like ↓

SPOILER

00:14:734 (2,3) - ↓

SPOILER

00:16:534 (4,1) - 分开不叠吧 apart ?

00:19:734 (5,6,7) - 都可以简化用滑条坑掉2连的情况↓ try↓

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:04:534 (1) - 可以结束在00:06:534 , 不然后面接的太快 ,不容易打 end at 00:06:534

00:10:134 (3,4,5,6) - DS有点太远,试试 DS is a little far , try ↓ I tried using a different pattern. xD

SPOILER

00:16:534 (1,2) - ctrl+g 顺flow ctrl+g better flow Fixed~

00:27:934 (3) - 放00:27:734 (2,1) 的下方会好些 put under 00:27:734 (2,1) Done~

00:45:134 (2) - 太远了 too far Fixed...I think. xD

00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 单点太多了,试试这种节奏↓ single note too many , try ↓ Okay. x.x

SPOILER

02:34:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - ^ 也是单点太多 same as before Changed~

01:11:334 (4,6) - 叠好 stack Isn't it stacked already? o.o

01:16:134 - 加note add note [/color]

01:17:734 - ^

03:38:534 - ^

03:40:134 - ^

01:23:934 (3,4) - 换成一个滑条? change a slider ? I think I'll keep it as it is.

01:26:734 (5,6) - ^

03:11:334 (2,3) - ^

03:49:134 (5,6) - ^

03:51:934 (2,1) - ^

01:30:734 - 01:53:134 break 有20s了吧?感觉要做点什么 break maybe too long , feel can do something I can't think of anything to add here... ><

02:00:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 叠得太厉害,56也不顺flow apart some ? I'm not sure how to change this...But I'll try~ ^^

02:07:134 - 加个note不错的 feel good to add a note Done~

02:15:134 (1) - 试试换个小滑条 ^ I think I'll keep this one.

02:31:534 (1,2,3) - 试试这种节奏↓ like ↓ Changed~

SPOILER

02:41:534 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个好看,不过好像不是正五边形,试用用ctrl+shift+d摆正多边形 look nice, ctrl+shift+d can make more beautiful Done~

02:45:734 (6) - 弄成直线滑条吧,5和6的头尾成一条直线 change to a straight line Fixed~

03:58:534 (4) - 加一个 静音.wav 吧 滑条就不会有那个声音了 maybe add a no sound's .wav I'll think of something. >.<

加油 fightting~ Hai hai~!

Edit : pink word is translation

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ M4M from your queue

I will point out general things, will not list down ALL problems.

[General]

1. Disable widescreen support for Normal and Hard. Done~
2. Disable letterbox during breaks for all difficulties. Done~
3. You have hitsounds, why aren't you using them? Or if you already added them in, it is pretty soft, I can't even hear them in Easy :/ Increase the volume. I know. >< I'm still working on my hitsounding. x3

[Easy]

1. SV feels really slow, consider increasing it. Increased~ (To 0.8 xD)
2. Keep the DS same. What I mean by that is, don't disable DS temporarily (shift), I am pretty sure this is an unrankable issue. Changed the distance to make the notes stick together.
3. 00:04:334 (2,1) - Space between these 2 notes are too big. In Easy you want to avoid unnecessary life drains, so you can add a spinner up to 00:05:734. Added a small break time here. ><
4. 00:07:134 (1,2) - Avoid stacking on Easy, this confuses beginners. Okay~
5. 00:17:934 (3,1) - Space between these 2 notes are again too big, try this : Changed~
   
   
6. 00:25:134 (2,2) - These 2 are overlapping, not only this blocks the approach circle, it also messes up the placement of 00:25:134 (2). Avoid this by moving 00:27:134 (2) - somewhere to the left. Changed~
7. 00:27:534 (3,4) - If you are trying to follow the vocals, try to use this, current one feels like it is not fitting into the rhythm. Changed~
   
   
8. 00:58:734 (3,4) - This is kind of flow-breaking, move (4) down so that it is on a straight flow with (3). I recently changed this part and others that are similar. ^^
9. 00:55:534 - Don't reduce SV here, it is the chorus of the song, so if you want to make a speed change, may as well increase it. Fixed~
10. 01:53:134 (1,1) - Spacing between a spinner and the note after that must be 4 beats long or longer, if not this is unrankable. So it should be something like this : Okay~
    
    
11. 02:05:934 (1,2) - One of the serious DS problems, keep it constant.
12. 02:31:534 (1,2) - This pattern looks really weird, try something like this maybe : I changed to something else. xD
    
    
13. 03:22:734 (4) - The instrument you were trying to fit into starts at 03:22:534. Changed to something else~
14. 03:27:534 (3,4) - One of the reasons why you should increase the SV, they are too close to each other, beginners will have hard time reading the approach circles. Changed~
15. 03:57:934 (1) - The end of this slider doesn't fit into anything; remove the repeat. I think it's fine the way it is. ><
16. Nice patterns, but this difficulty needs more work on rhythm. Thank you~ Will try to improve~

[Normal]
Remapping Normal~

1. 00:02:534 (3,4) - This doesn't fit into the rhythm, try this :
   
   
2. 00:04:334 (6) - Again, you can avoid too big of a spacing between the next note and this note by using a spinner up to 00:05:934. You will have to remove 00:06:934 (1) though.
3. 00:07:534 (2,3,4) - Don't make (4) overlap on the tail of (2), beginners will get confused by this.
4. 00:20:334 (6,1) - NC should be starting at downbeats, or the big white ticks for easier difficulties. Add NC at (6) and remove NC at (1).
5. 00:32:734 (2) - Listen carefully, a slider doesn't fit in here. Use a single circle instead.
6. 00:33:134 - After adding a circle this part should be too empty, add a 1/1 slider to match the song.
7. 00:43:534 (4,5) - Weird pattern again, do something like I mentioned in Easy, picture :
   
   
8. 00:47:934 (3,1) - Don't do this, stacking like this is not encouraged for easier difficulties.
9. 00:52:534 (1,1) - Spacing between these notes must be 4 beats long or longer also in Normal, 2 beats long is unrankable. To also fit into the song, reduce the spinner to 00:53:734.
10. 01:53:134 (1,1) - ^^
11. 02:18:334 (4,1) - All your previous stack had a 1/2 space, but this one has a 1/1 space. Either unstack these or unstack all other stacks, this will confuse beginners.
12. 03:14:934 (1,1) - And again the spacing.
13. The problems are recurring throughout the whole difficulty and for all difficulties. Check for NCs, they are supposed to be on downbeats. Flow should be managed, and a remapping will also help the map's quality

That is all from me. Sorry my mod was short, problems are basically recurring. Be sure to check all of them.
GL! This song is so moe Squeee~ >////<

No_Gu wrote:

orz already full in my queue
so sorry I can't give a mod here
but in return,a star for you.thanks for modding

1. Velocity changes (multipliers) in an Easy diff is extremely rarely heard and I don't think it'd be easy for typical Easy players to read these changes, especially with all the variations. Seriously consider not having any speed changes.
2. Why is this difficulty completely devoid of hitsounds?
3. 00:10:734 (1) - This kind of slider is not really recommended due to how "crumpled" it is near the red node. Find something... safer.
4. 00:17:534 (2,3) - Change these into a 3/2 slider that starts at 00:17:534 to cover the instrument at 00:18:134?
5. 00:28:534 (4,5,1) - Change the rhythm to this? Much simpler and follows the cymbal at 00:29:934.
6. 00:31:734 (1) - Uh, why does this have an NC?
7. 01:08:334 (1,2) - Just wanting to say that the blanket doesn't really look good; try turning of the grid snapping for a more accurate blanketing.
8. 01:56:334 (1,2) - Don't you think they're a little too close?
9. 02:03:534 (3,4) - Keep in mind that this kind of spacing inconsistency isn't allowed in easier diffs.
10. 02:05:334 (5) - Change this into a 3/2 slider to make the rhythm simpler and easier to play?
11. 02:12:334 (3,4) - Yep, this seems to be a little too close. (Actually, please check for spacing inconsistencies by yourself, and try not to have any kind of inconsistency except if there is a long pause between two objects. This applies for both Easy and Normal.)

1. The spacing here is very inconsistent. Make all of them consistent, really. It helps with making your map neater and more playable. No need to fully remap; just move notes here and there. Also, while Normal is more lenient with slider velocity changes, the amount of changes is still quite a lot, and I think it should be minimized.
2. 00:01:134 - This would be better with a finish due to the characteristic of the cymbal which feels more "elongated".
3. 00:02:534 - ^
4. 00:01:734 (2) - Use the Drum sampleset for the head and tail (not the path) of the slider to follow the drums?
5. 00:02:934 - Use Drum sampleset followed by a clap? The "rebounding" (?) sound sounds fitting with the instrument here.
6. 00:03:134 (4) - Try to add a whistle? I'm sorry I can't explain this; it just... kind of fits.
7. 00:04:334 (6) - A finish is enough. A clap doesn't really fit with the instrument.
8. 00:04:334 - Add a break here? Because, you know, why would you keep this without one?
9. 00:06:934 (1) - It's not recommended to have a 1/4 repeat slider in a Normal diff because the rhythm is a bit too complex for it. Try just using a 1/2 slider.
10. 00:18:134 (2,3) - Just a tip: This kind of pattern makes for a nicer flow.
11. 00:20:334 (6,1) - Swap the NC because the measure begins at 00:20:334 (and there's a strong instrument too)?
12. 00:23:534 (5,1) - ^
13. 00:26:734 (4,1) - ^
14. 00:32:734 (2) - Don't skip the important instruments like 00:33:134, which is the beginning of another measure. These are usually a must to follow because they are a part of the song's main rhythm line.
15. 00:36:334 (1) - End this at 00:36:934? You can't really ignore stronger instruments in favor of the weaker one, you know...
16. 01:59:134 (1) - You should map 01:59:534 with something clickable (a circle or the beginning of a slider) as it gives more impact and emphasizes the downbeat more. Right now, it's slightly awkward to play because the more important instrument is mapped with something passive (that only needs you to hold your fingers, not hit it).
17. 03:49:534 (3) - Same as 00:06:934 (1).

1. 00:10:734 (5,1) - Again, an awkward NC placement. Try only placing an NC on a note that begins or is around the beginning of every measure. (And yeah, your NC placement looks really random, to be honest. It looks quite unstructured. Try starting with placing an NC every two measures, at the beginning of one.)
2. 00:36:334 (1,2) - This is technically okay, but you know, might as well make them fully symmetrical...
3. 00:42:134 (1) - This is odd to play as it is skipping a syllable from the vocal and two instrument notes at 00:42:334 - 00:42:434. You know... try mapping them?
4. 02:39:734 (2) - Try moving this to (404,276) for more flow at 02:39:534 (1,2,3)?

Hinsvar wrote:

So here I am anyway (forget the IRC mod; I feel like doing this lol)...

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. Velocity changes (multipliers) in an Easy diff is extremely rarely heard and I don't think it'd be easy for typical Easy players to read these changes, especially with all the variations. Seriously consider not having any speed changes. Okay. >.<
2. Why is this difficulty completely devoid of hitsounds?I'm still planning on histounding. >.<
3. 00:10:734 (1) - This kind of slider is not really recommended due to how "crumpled" it is near the red node. Find something... safer. Changed~ It does sort of look ugly as well. x.x
4. 00:17:534 (2,3) - Change these into a 3/2 slider that starts at 00:17:534 to cover the instrument at 00:18:134? I'm not sure what's a 2/3 slider supposed to be but I'll try to change it! ><
5. 00:28:534 (4,5,1) - Change the rhythm to this? Much simpler and follows the cymbal at 00:29:934. Fixed~
6. 00:31:734 (1) - Uh, why does this have an NC? I probably double clicked or something when I mapped it. xD
7. 01:08:334 (1,2) - Just wanting to say that the blanket doesn't really look good; try turning of the grid snapping for a more accurate blanketing. Fixed~
8. 01:56:334 (1,2) - Don't you think they're a little too close? Changed~
9. 02:03:534 (3,4) - Keep in mind that this kind of spacing inconsistency isn't allowed in easier diffs. Fixed. >.<
10. 02:05:334 (5) - Change this into a 3/2 slider to make the rhythm simpler and easier to play? I'll try to make it simple. x3
11. 02:12:334 (3,4) - Yep, this seems to be a little too close. (Actually, please check for spacing inconsistencies by yourself, and try not to have any kind of inconsistency except if there is a long pause between two objects. This applies for both Easy and Normal.)

I'll recheck the whole difficulty to see if there's any spacing problems. ><

>Normal

I'm currently remapping Normal so yeah. xD What you modded was the old Normal, I should have an improved Normal up soon!

1. The spacing here is very inconsistent. Make all of them consistent, really. It helps with making your map neater and more playable. No need to fully remap; just move notes here and there. Also, while Normal is more lenient with slider velocity changes, the amount of changes is still quite a lot, and I think it should be minimized.
2. 00:01:134 - This would be better with a finish due to the characteristic of the cymbal which feels more "elongated".
3. 00:02:534 - ^
4. 00:01:734 (2) - Use the Drum sampleset for the head and tail (not the path) of the slider to follow the drums?
5. 00:02:934 - Use Drum sampleset followed by a clap? The "rebounding" (?) sound sounds fitting with the instrument here.
6. 00:03:134 (4) - Try to add a whistle? I'm sorry I can't explain this; it just... kind of fits.
7. 00:04:334 (6) - A finish is enough. A clap doesn't really fit with the instrument.
8. 00:04:334 - Add a break here? Because, you know, why would you keep this without one?
9. 00:06:934 (1) - It's not recommended to have a 1/4 repeat slider in a Normal diff because the rhythm is a bit too complex for it. Try just using a 1/2 slider.
10. 00:18:134 (2,3) - Just a tip: This kind of pattern makes for a nicer flow.
11. 00:20:334 (6,1) - Swap the NC because the measure begins at 00:20:334 (and there's a strong instrument too)?
12. 00:23:534 (5,1) - ^
13. 00:26:734 (4,1) - ^
14. 00:32:734 (2) - Don't skip the important instruments like 00:33:134, which is the beginning of another measure. These are usually a must to follow because they are a part of the song's main rhythm line.
15. 00:36:334 (1) - End this at 00:36:934? You can't really ignore stronger instruments in favor of the weaker one, you know...
16. 01:59:134 (1) - You should map 01:59:534 with something clickable (a circle or the beginning of a slider) as it gives more impact and emphasizes the downbeat more. Right now, it's slightly awkward to play because the more important instrument is mapped with something passive (that only needs you to hold your fingers, not hit it).
17. 03:49:534 (3) - Same as 00:06:934 (1).

>Hard

1. 00:10:734 (5,1) - Again, an awkward NC placement. Try only placing an NC on a note that begins or is around the beginning of every measure. (And yeah, your NC placement looks really random, to be honest. It looks quite unstructured. Try starting with placing an NC every two measures, at the beginning of one.) I wasn't trying to be random...Well unless NC'ing based on what you hear is random...But I'll try to redo the NC. ><
2. 00:36:334 (1,2) - This is technically okay, but you know, might as well make them fully symmetrical... Fixed~
3. 00:42:134 (1) - This is odd to play as it is skipping a syllable from the vocal and two instrument notes at 00:42:334 - 00:42:434. You know... try mapping them? Fixed~
4. 02:39:734 (2) - Try moving this to (404,276) for more flow at 02:39:534 (1,2,3)? Ooh, that actually looks better~ Changed!

Well yeah... in short, this map really needs way more work put into it. Make a map that is well structured, comfortable to play, and of course with suitable hitsounding. I can't really offer anything for now but a star to help raising awareness for this map (if it's even possible lol). This is potentially good, but for now, I seriously can't let this pass, especially with how Easy and Normal look. *Looks around sheepishly...* Thank you~ ><

I've already given examples above, so I hope you'll get the general idea. I did! Ty! x3

Good luck

[ Ernasis ] wrote:

Easy
You posted the mod while I was fixing the issues the previous modder pointed out. xD Most of the things you have pointed out has already been fixed save for the first one you mentioned. ^^ Thank you though~

• 00:04:334 (2) - Shouldn't this be closer to 00:02:934 (1) because of how closely you blanket sliders together?. You can put it x:188 y:120
  00:09:134 (3,1) - same as above ^^^
  00:17:934 (3,4) - I recommend the blanket be closer together to keep it consistent with other sliders since this is easy diff.
  00:18:534 (4,5,1) - ^^^
  00:29:934 (6) - Add a note here so it beat mirrors 00:27:534 (3). keeping it consistent
  00:31:734 (1) - Remove nc
  01:00:534 (4,5) - move them closer
  02:06:334 (1,2,3) this one i'm not so since the slider starts on red tick but you can make a perfect triangle with this. I think the original works too so just a suggestion
  02:15:534 (1,2,3,4) ^^^

Hard

• 00:17:134 (4) - 00:17:934 (5) - 00:18:534 (6) make a triangle? I'm not really sure what you mean here.. ><
  00:36:334 (1,2) - this could be blanket-ed better and then copy the same bend to 00:37:734 (4) to keep it consistent I intended to not make it like a blanket.
  01:05:734 (1) - Try matching the bend of this slider better to 01:06:534 (3). Fixed~
  01:59:134 (5,1) - Blanket these 2? Was changed before your mod. ^^
  02:36:534 (6) - With the increase of DS move it to x:320 y:112 Changed before the mod.
  03:15:934 (6) - Move to x:280 y:48 Changed.
  03:18:334 (3) - move to x:132 y:40, makes a better triangle Fixed~
  03:52:534 (1) - move to x:324 y:112, makes a better square Changed before the mod.

Saw this on your m4m queue however this mod is quite bad and short so I won't be asking for a mod in return. Feel free to deny kds if this mod doesn't help you at all since it is quite bad.

-Harpuia- wrote:

~M4M~
Hello

[Easy]
00:19:934 (4,1,2) - Make them something like this for a more aesthetic look: Changed~

00:28:534 (4) - I guess you can make its position at x:368 y:280 for a good flow Okay~
00:49:134 (1,2,1) - I think you can make use of this pattern, this feels better for me: I think I've already used this pattern. o.o

02:17:334 (4) - Position at x:44 y:176 for a better flow. Okay~
03:14:934 (1) - End at 03:17:134 I was told a spinner should end 3 full beats before the next note. ><
03:49:934 (3,4,1) - I think this is better: How should I map it? xD Anyway, I'll figure something out~

[Hard]
01:00:134 (4) - x:40 y:268. It looks better in that way in my opinion. Changed~
01:27:134 (1) - Just make this mirror to 01:25:934 (1) - (Unstack with 01:26:934 (6) - ) I'm not sure what you mean. It looks fine the way it is.
02:10:334 (3) - Position at x:420 y:268 (?) Changed, along with the rest of the section that needed fixing due to the new positioning. x3
02:14:534 (8) - Change into a slider extending to 02:15:134 (1) - I don't think I need to change it into a slider.
03:49:534 (1) - Just make this mirror to 03:48:334 (1) - (Unstack with 03:49:334 (6) - ) ????

Everything else seems fine. Nothing much to point out.
Good luck!

Ataraxia wrote:

just a thing on hard, i think is important consider a constant snap her 00:26:130 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'm not sure exactly what you meant here, I did turn on snap when I mapped this. o.o Thank you for your input though I think there's nothing to change.

btw this map is really really CUTE >w< Ty! >////<

gl with rank

Kibbleru wrote:

ur normal is too easy to support the hard diff spread wise.

with hards like these you want to make those kinds of normals with spaced 1/2 and cs 3.3 or something

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. few suggestions for rhythm changes, I'll just post my suggestions if you want me to go over why i think my suggestions are more ideal hit me up later I can explain
2. 00:17:120 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/vdaYG/84c3980756.jpg I changed this a bit. xD
3. 00:30:920 (2) - move to 00:30:720 (2) - Changed to a small slider.
4. 00:32:120 (4) - hitsound on head would preferable for the loud sound on top Okay~
5. 00:41:120 (3) - http://puu.sh/vdb7Q/79c6e5d12e.jpg Changed~
6. 00:55:520 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/vdb9N/f264ac856d.jpg Changed~
7. 00:58:720 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/vdbc5/57a5bda399.jpg Changed too~
8. 01:01:920 (1,2,3) - ^ Changed it my own way~
9. 01:05:120 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/vdbgQ/bb9ac7f418.jpg or http://puu.sh/vdbhr/de500e90fb.jpg Changed~

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and it pretty much repeats from there, feel free to reject everything if you don't like any of them w It'sh okies~

GL!

Incomp wrote:

Hey there! From #modreqs.

[Easy]

00:18:520 (1,2,1) - The blanket here isn't perfect -- the blanketed slider just needs a nudge towards the right. Fixed~
01:14:320 (1) - This shouldn't have a new combo. Changed~
02:24:720 (3,1) - The slider is a little too sharp here; it basically squeezes the 3 out from its blanket. I made the blanket slightly better I think..
02:50:320 (4,1) - ^ Same as above~

Very nice job done here. The only real problems I can find are aesthetic hiccups. You've got the gameplay nailed down. Thank you~ The minor aesthetic hiccups that you pointed out are sort of minor but I guess it just means more polishing!

[Normal]

00:38:520 (2,3) - You should delete 3, turn 2 into a slider that ends where 3 started, and place a note where 3 ended. This emphasizes the clap sound on 3 by forcing the player to click on it. You probably already knew this, though. Changed~ Thanks for telling me, I actually haven't thought about that. xD
00:53:120 (1) - It's wise to avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reverses in Normal difficulties. Noted~ Changed~
01:09:920 (1) - Could move this back one notch. I'm not sure which way is 'back' xD
02:58:720 (1) - ^ ^
02:13:920 (1) - This slider is very low, consider moving it up a few units. Changed~

The flow on this difficulty is spectacular. Was a pleasant surprise. Thank you~ ^^ To be honest, mapping Easies and Normals is much harder than mapping higher difficulties so it's a relief that it's not as bad as I thought it was.

[Hard]

00:53:920 - You could put a 1/4 slider here that repeats 3 times. I decided to leave this blank because I wish to let the player rest for a bit before the kiai/chorus.
02:42:720 - ^ Same as above~
01:05:120 (1,2) - These sliders overlap a tiny bit, and it's not very pretty to look at. It's intentional, it looks fine to me but I guess everyone has their own views on aesthetics. xD
03:27:520 (1,2) - ^ Same as above~
03:08:520 (1) - I'd move this 1 out from under the 3 and 4 of the previous combo. Changed the (3) and (4) notes from the previous combo to a 1/2 slider and moved the star pattern to the left~

It's obvious that this difficulty has seen a lot of polish, and it looks and plays great as a result. Thank you~ ^^

Honestly, this mapset could get ranked very soon. Best of luck.

Kisses wrote:

Hard

1. I think replacing the claps with normalsampleset just sounds nicer http://puu.sh/vAz5A/d6adae1125.jpg Everyone has different hitsound sets due to their skins, I chose soft-clap because on my skin, it sounds nice.
2. 00:40:720 (4) - You've been following the vocals a lot prior to this verse so it seems a bit weird to me that you would opt to follow the drums (I think) for the last measure before you transition to the percussion at 00:42:720 . Also given the intensity of 00:41:920 it feels almost inappropriate to map it as a passive beat (slider end). How about a rhythm similar to this? http://puu.sh/vAyXU/a238da1c61.jpg Changed~
3. 00:56:720 (4,5) - What do you think about using this? http://puu.sh/vAz8K/49f4099698.jpg for similar reasons stated above. If you choose to do this apply it to 02:45:509 (4,5) I'm still on the fence about this suggestion after two other people suggested it. I wanted to emphasize both vocal points ina small pause, hence the spacing and rhythm pattern.
4. 01:14:120 - An addition of a circle would play well here imo for 2 reasons. It helps people keep track of the metronome in their head better (ppl normally follow 1/1 gaps better than 3/2 gaps) and also because of the fact there's actually a sound here it may cause to throw ppl off. Same applies for 03:36:509 . In the other chorus at 03:02:909 you can't do the same thing since there isn't a sound here, instead you would have to turn 03:02:509 (3) into a 1/1 slider Added~
5. 02:07:920 (2,3) - similar to 00:40:720 (4) , because you've been following the percussion prior here then it'd make more sense to follow it again for the final measure. Try a circle and 1/1 slider and see if you like it. http://puu.sh/vAznh/3b63e4f3fa.jpg The vocals were over when I mapped the part out so I didn't find the need to continue following the vocal pattern in this part. It is also the same pattern and vocal to instrumental transition here 00:18:520 (1,2,3,4) - which already introduced the pattern early in the song.
6. 02:14:520 (4,5) - As a said earlier 3/2 gaps can be a little awkward sometimes (especially to those DT players if you care about that ) You can eliminate the 3/2 gap by adding a circle at 02:14:920 or by making 02:14:520 into a 1/1 slider Added~
7. 02:31:172 (4) - lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7958844 Fixed during IRC banter. (baka.)

Don't feel pressured into changing things you do agree with yada yada, GL with BN hunting Uhu~ :3

My Angel RangE wrote:

Hello ~

My subjective thoughts Modding :d I'll respect your opinions with actual replies.

Unrank Element.

all dif Fix here Bpm, last 137 123 too. This is not an unrankable issue. The drummer of the song had a hiccup and me and Mir compensated this by timing it as precisely as we could. Part of the ranking system requires the mapset to have the closest timing possible.






Easy



Fix all Ds error :d ~ They are spaced this far apart due to the pause in between them. I don't see a reason to change that.

00:58:720 (1,2,3) - hear better good this beat This misses a lot more of the strong percussions than the pattern I currently use.

01:53:120 (1,1,2,3) - hear better good this beat too :c The spinner would be too close to the next hit object, rendering the difficulty unrankable.


I changed the blankets that I think are too noticeable and left the ones that are not even noticeable when playing out. The NCs are my own choice so I'll stick by them.

GL~

1. 01:09:920 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609516 (ignore object placement). I don't think 01:09:920 is worth mapping over 01:09:720 . It just too much of a predominant beat. A 1/1 slider + circle would also fit
2. 01:12:920 (1) - finish spam unnecessary, it's also worth noting you didn't use this hs pattern in your other 2 diffs
3. 01:53:120 (1) - the amount of recovery time after the spinner is a bit questionable, you can be even safer by ending it at 01:55:720 and it would still make sense with the song
4. 01:57:520 (3) - minor, the stack causes it to slightly touch 01:56:920 (2 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609540
5. 02:24:120 (2,3) - another minor, the stacking makes the blanket look off https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609552 here I would suggest blanketing with circle 3 to make it look neater
6. 02:30:720 (2,1) - Don't stack this way. Because object 1 appears well before 2 ends you're kinda expected to play with normal DS rules and this spacing/unique patterning would throw a player off totally. (The timing points don't justifiy it as a player isn't going to expect to know what's going on)
7. 02:38:709 (2,3,1) - recommend to not stack 3 objects like this because reasons
8. 02:52:709 (2) - Rhyhm isn't entirely fitting because both the vocals and percussion land on 02:52:909
9. 02:58:709 (1) - same as 01:09:920 (1)
10. 03:26:309 (2) - same as 02:52:709 (2)
11. 03:32:309 (1) - same as something else lol
12. 03:35:309 (1) - same as 01:12:920 (1)
13. 03:58:570 (1) - i would delete the whistle tbh. Actually, if you're gonna map a spinner here wouldn't it make sense to do the same for your hard diff too?

Kisses wrote:

Hello again So formal. o.o Hi!

Easy
sometimes you break away from your 1 NC per 2 measures in places such as 02:39:509 (1) - 00:09:120 (1) - 00:03:120 (1) - 00:50:720 (1) - . The whole section at 00:07:520 (1) to 00:20:320 (1) etc. I was just curious if there was a reason you used shorter NC lengths in some places as I can't pipoint the reason. I guess it was out of instinct. I would map and then 'feel' there should be an NC here or there. xD Fixed~

Because you map the beats 00:02:120 and 00:02:520 I feel like it's worth mapping 00:01:720 as well. It's part of the same layer and can make it easier to get the rhythm in the player's head. I'm not sure...I'll keep it as it is for now.

AI says there are DS inconsistencies but I think it's fine as looking at the visual spacing it shouldn't interfere with reading patterns at all Okies~

Normal

1. 01:09:920 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609516 (ignore object placement). I don't think 01:09:920 is worth mapping over 01:09:720 . It just too much of a predominant beat. A 1/1 slider + circle would also fit Changed~
2. 01:12:920 (1) - finish spam unnecessary, it's also worth noting you didn't use this hs pattern in your other 2 diffs I've reduced the number of finisher hitsounds. I'm not sure how to change the pattern and it's still fine so I'll keep it as it is for now.
3. 01:53:120 (1) - the amount of recovery time after the spinner is a bit questionable, you can be even safer by ending it at 01:55:720 and it would still make sense with the song Shortened the spinner to 01:55:320 - ~
4. 01:57:520 (3) - minor, the stack causes it to slightly touch 01:56:920 (2 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609540 Fixed~
5. 02:24:120 (2,3) - another minor, the stacking makes the blanket look off https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8609552 here I would suggest blanketing with circle 3 to make it look neater Fixed~
6. 02:30:720 (2,1) - Don't stack this way. Because object 1 appears well before 2 ends you're kinda expected to play with normal DS rules and this spacing/unique patterning would throw a player off totally. (The timing points don't justifiy it as a player isn't going to expect to know what's going on)
7. 02:38:709 (2,3,1) - recommend to not stack 3 objects like this because reasons Changed~
8. 02:52:709 (2) - Rhyhm isn't entirely fitting because both the vocals and percussion land on 02:52:909 I'm not sure what other ways to map it but it still follows the rhythm in its own way. I'll keep it for now.
9. 02:58:709 (1) - same as 01:09:920 (1) Changed~
10. 03:26:309 (2) - same as 02:52:709 (2) Unchanged for now.
11. 03:32:309 (1) - same as something else lol Changed~
12. 03:35:309 (1) - same as 01:12:920 (1) Unchanged for now~
13. 03:58:570 (1) - i would delete the whistle tbh. Actually, if you're gonna map a spinner here wouldn't it make sense to do the same for your hard diff too? Considered~ And done~

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Victorica wrote:

Kisses wrote:

Normal

1. 01:12:920 (1) - finish spam unnecessary, it's also worth noting you didn't use this hs pattern in your other 2 diffs I've reduced the number of finisher hitsounds. I'm not sure how to change the pattern and it's still fine so I'll keep it as it is for now. hs pattern = hitsound pattern just to avoid any confusion. And you didn't change the remove the finish additions.
2. 02:52:709 (2) - Rhyhm isn't entirely fitting because both the vocals and percussion land on 02:52:909 I'm not sure what other ways to map it but it still follows the rhythm in its own way. I'll keep it for now. Well the thing is it doesn't really follow a layer in the song (vocals, percussion etc). If you needed suggestions I would suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8616629 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8616609 (ignore object placements)
3. 03:26:309 (2) - same as 02:52:709 (2) Unchanged for now. I'll bump this timestamp since I added an additional comment on a relevant one
4. 03:35:309 (1) - same as 01:12:920 (1) Unchanged for now~ If you said you were going to change the finishes for the first one then I do see much reasoning in keeping it here. Just to add, you don't have to change it as different diffs can have different hs patterns but if you said you were going to change it for 01:12:920 (1) then for the sake of conistency it would make sense to change this to match

1. 00:03:520 (2,3) - This is the only double reverse slider in the map that's stacked on top of the next object. I feel like it's better to unstack them
2. 00:55:120 (2,3,4,5) - minor, i think I would prefer this stream with hitsound additions. Same goes for all your other streams
3. 01:13:520 (2,3,1,2,1) - These stacks are a bit... awkward to read
4. 01:26:720 (3) - moving the circle to somewhere here would be nicer imho https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8616764 . Not only does this flow a litle bit better but it decreases the spacing between the start of the stream making it a tad bit easier. Same for 03:49:109 (3) -
5. 01:27:320 (5) - Becuase this is a hard I would change this to a circle instead as not many ppl at this difficulty even know how to play kicklisders properly. Same goes for 02:31:283 (5) and 03:49:709 (5) -
6. 02:01:120 (1) - Maybe it's just me but this spacing seems somewhat too high looking at the other sections and how they are structured etc.
7. 02:11:320 (3,1) - minor, eliminate underlap? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8616785
8. 02:21:520 (4) - I feel like this can come across as a single reverse slider as the head of 4 is closer to 1 than it's tail. The way you've strutured all your other reverse sliders have it where the tail is closer to the next object. Changing this to all your other reverse sliders would eliminate all ambiguity a player may experience as they could think "this reverse slider is structured differently so it must have a different rythm too"
9. 03:14:909 (2,1) - Minor, swap NCs?
10. 03:44:909 (1,2) - hmm, this small spacing for a 1/1 gap seems unfitting given that it only happens here within the map
11. 03:58:570 (4) - - Not completely necessary but it might be nice to NC this for those that play with HR to give them a bit more hp before the last spinner

1. Your mp3 is 128 kbps, please find a 192 version for better audio quality

1. You use stacking at different snaps, like here 00:02:920 (3,1) - it's 1/2 but here 00:08:720 (3,1) - it's 1/1, the inconsistency may be confusing for Normal players.
2. Your DS is inconsistent, like your normal DS is around 1.5x but then 00:14:720 (2,1) - here it's 1.0x, 00:17:120 (1) - here it's 1.6x and then right after it goes 00:17:920 (2,1) - 1.0x again. Then you have parts like 02:36:109 (1,2,3) - where it's 1/2 with 1.5x, and then 02:37:909 (1,2) - it's 1/1 with 1.0x. Visually, those DS look very similar, and that inconsistency isn't good in a Normal.
3. 00:08:120 (2,1) - Blanket fix
4. 00:10:320 (3,1,2) - I feel like this may be especially confusing because of the different levels of overlap here, you have 00:10:320 (3,1) - 1/1 overlapped here and then 00:11:320 (2) - is where 00:09:720 (2) - was which, although it's a 2 second gap, may still be unpredictable for Normal players
5. 00:30:720 (2,2) - Really not a good overlap :s
6. 00:31:320 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't this flow seem a little too difficult for a Normal?
7. 00:45:920 (1,2) - Blanket fix
8. 00:55:920 - Why did you just not map anything here? Seems like you could've put in a 1/2 circle-1/1 slider easily. The gap feels really awkward.
9. 00:59:920 (3,1) - Counter flow might be confusing for Normal players
10. 01:05:120 (1,2,3,1) - This definitely seems too hard of a pattern for Normal lol, the sharp flow corner into an overlap
11. 01:08:920 (2,3,1) - Blanket fix
12. 01:53:120 (1) - You ended this spinner in a really awkward place and left another really awkward gap, I think it would be better to end the spinner 01:55:920 - here
13. 02:16:120 (2,3) - Up to this point you did 1/1 overlaps onto 1/2 reverses, this is a bit dangerous
14. 02:15:520 - to 02:18:720 - this whole section in general has a sudden and random difficulty spike, why?
15. 02:32:709 (2,3) - Sketchy overlap
16. 02:44:709 - lol another weird gap. Please map something here.
17. 02:57:709 (2,3,1) - Blanket fix
18. 03:18:309 - Another strange gap, please map this
19. 03:22:309 (3,1) - Like before, I have concerns about this
20. 03:27:509 (1,2,3,1) - Also like before, I have concerns about this pattern
21. 03:58:570 (1) - Seems like the last sound fades out here 04:01:253 - so I think the spinner should end here instead

Zexous wrote:

M4M

Modding only Normal as requested

[General]

1. Your mp3 is 128 kbps, please find a 192 version for better audio quality Updated with a better mp3!

[Normal]

1. You use stacking at different snaps, like here 00:02:920 (3,1) - it's 1/2 but here 00:08:720 (3,1) - it's 1/1, the inconsistency may be confusing for Normal players. Fixed~
2. Your DS is inconsistent, like your normal DS is around 1.5x but then 00:14:720 (2,1) - here it's 1.0x, 00:17:120 (1) - here it's 1.6x and then right after it goes 00:17:920 (2,1) - 1.0x again. Then you have parts like 02:36:109 (1,2,3) - where it's 1/2 with 1.5x, and then 02:37:909 (1,2) - it's 1/1 with 1.0x. Visually, those DS look very similar, and that inconsistency isn't good in a Normal. Fixed~
3. 00:08:120 (2,1) - Blanket fix Okies~
4. 00:10:320 (3,1,2) - I feel like this may be especially confusing because of the different levels of overlap here, you have 00:10:320 (3,1) - 1/1 overlapped here and then 00:11:320 (2) - is where 00:09:720 (2) - was which, although it's a 2 second gap, may still be unpredictable for Normal players The previous slider 00:09:766 (2) - would have faded away completely by the time 00:10:766 (1) - is played. There should be plenty of time for a normal player to react.
5. 00:30:720 (2,2) - Really not a good overlap :s Fixed~
6. 00:31:320 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't this flow seem a little too difficult for a Normal? Fixed~
7. 00:45:920 (1,2) - Blanket fix Fixed~
8. 00:55:920 - Why did you just not map anything here? Seems like you could've put in a 1/2 circle-1/1 slider easily. The gap feels really awkward. It's due to the spinner rule for lower difficulties. (Or used to) It was stated that Normal/Easy difficulty must have at least two and four ticks of break after a spinner respectively from what I remembered. ><
9. 00:59:920 (3,1) - Counter flow might be confusing for Normal players I don't think it's too fast for a Normal player to be confused with the flow switch. The reason I used it here is because there is enough time to react to it (Plus I had no space.. ><)
10. 01:05:120 (1,2,3,1) - This definitely seems too hard of a pattern for Normal lol, the sharp flow corner into an overlap I'm not sure about this. I'll keep it for now. ><
11. 01:08:920 (2,3,1) - Blanket fix Fixed~
12. 01:53:120 (1) - You ended this spinner in a really awkward place and left another really awkward gap, I think it would be better to end the spinner 01:55:920 - here >< Same as the previous spinner.
13. 02:16:120 (2,3) - Up to this point you did 1/1 overlaps onto 1/2 reverses, this is a bit dangerous Fixed~
14. 02:15:520 - to 02:18:720 - this whole section in general has a sudden and random difficulty spike, why? Fixed!
15. 02:32:709 (2,3) - Sketchy overlap
16. 02:44:709 - lol another weird gap. Please map something here.><
17. 02:57:709 (2,3,1) - Blanket fix Fixed~
18. 03:18:309 - Another strange gap, please map this ><
19. 03:22:309 (3,1) - Like before, I have concerns about thisThis shouldn't be a problem though. :s
20. 03:27:509 (1,2,3,1) - Also like before, I have concerns about this pattern ><
21. 03:58:570 (1) - Seems like the last sound fades out here 04:01:253 - so I think the spinner should end here instead Changed~~

gl Ty~

• 
  OD 6 is much for fitting at for this bpm imho. I think a slightly lower AR would be nice to allow easier reading for HR and DT for this kind of map

1. 00:03:566 (2,3) - might be worthwhile to space these like your other 1/4 spaces. eg 00:32:766 (3,1) -
2. 00:19:166 (2) - perhaps this rhythm? https://i.imgur.com/JkdHTsx.png Same for 02:07:966 (2) -
3. 00:55:166 (2) - speaking in general; because of how streams can be a bit tricky for hard diffs i think it's better to make it as easy as you can making them. In this case I would think having this spaced closer to 00:54:766 (1) would be better to allow a much easier entry. Same for 01:26:966 (1) and 03:49:155 (3) -
4. 01:22:566 (1,2) - spacing?
5. 01:27:366 (5) - kicksliders are really hard to grasp for players at this level and tieing it at the end of a stream is just overkill, change to a circle 10490851
6. 02:12:366 (1) - Minor but if you could structure it to not touch 02:11:366 (3) it would look much better aesthetically
7. 02:21:566 (4) - ctrl g for spacing
8. 02:31:329 (5) - circle
9. 03:06:155 (3,4) - big spacing feels unfitting for the calmness in the song imo
10. 03:49:755 (5) - circle

1. Turn on stacking to fix stuff like 00:10:366 (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10490935
2. 00:31:966 (2,3,4) - spacing
3. 00:42:366 - do you not want to map this beat? I think making a circle
4. You have a lot of 1/1 spacings that look like 1/2, please fix them 00:43:566 (2) . Happens in the calm parts of the map; I now you might want to use a bit lower spacing for the calm part of the song but i still highly recommend spacing them out a bit more. 1.4x should do as a minimum
5. 00:52:966 - a circle would be nice here imo
6. 02:49:355 (1) - spacing
7. 03:57:955 (1) - delete finish, feels overkill

1. 00:41:166 (2) - recommend to extend to white tick
2. 00:44:366 (3,4) - Perhaps a 1/1 slider + 2 circles? It makes the 2/1 slider for the held vocals 00:47:566 (3) stand out even more. Same for 02:33:155 (3)
3. 01:12:566 (2,3) - I think this would fir your rhythms + hitsounding pattern better https://i.imgur.com/qMatmIS.png same for 03:01:355 (2,3)
4. 01:27:166 (4) - 2 circles would be nice for a more emphatic end to the section. It would also contrast well with 01:26:366 (3)
5. 03:36:755 (1) - delete NC

Kisses wrote:

Hard

• 
  OD 6 is much for fitting at for this bpm imho. I think a slightly lower AR would be nice to allow easier reading for HR and DT for this kind of map Okies~

1. 00:03:566 (2,3) - might be worthwhile to space these like your other 1/4 spaces. eg 00:32:766 (3,1) - Fixed~
2. 00:19:166 (2) - perhaps this rhythm? https://i.imgur.com/JkdHTsx.png Same for 02:07:966 (2) - I think I'll keep the current rhythm choice. :s
3. 00:55:166 (2) - speaking in general; because of how streams can be a bit tricky for hard diffs i think it's better to make it as easy as you can making them. In this case I would think having this spaced closer to 00:54:766 (1) would be better to allow a much easier entry. Same for 01:26:966 (1) and 03:49:155 (3) - Fixed~
4. 01:22:566 (1,2) - spacing? Fixed~
5. 01:27:366 (5) - kicksliders are really hard to grasp for players at this level and tieing it at the end of a stream is just overkill, change to a circle 10490851 Okies~
6. 02:12:366 (1) - Minor but if you could structure it to not touch 02:11:366 (3) it would look much better aesthetically Fixed~
7. 02:21:566 (4) - ctrl g for spacing Okies~
8. 02:31:329 (5) - circle Fixed~
9. 03:06:155 (3,4) - big spacing feels unfitting for the calmness in the song imo Fixed~
10. 03:49:755 (5) - circle Okies~

Noormal

1. Turn on stacking to fix stuff like 00:10:366 (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10490935 Okies
2. 00:31:966 (2,3,4) - spacing Oof. I think that part may have been a mistake. xD
3. 00:42:366 - do you not want to map this beat? I think making a circle Added~
4. You have a lot of 1/1 spacings that look like 1/2, please fix them 00:43:566 (2) . Happens in the calm parts of the map; I now you might want to use a bit lower spacing for the calm part of the song but i still highly recommend spacing them out a bit more. 1.4x should do as a minimum I fixed most of the spacing. ><
5. 00:52:966 - a circle would be nice here imo I think it's fine the way it is.
6. 02:49:355 (1) - spacing Fixed~
7. 03:57:955 (1) - delete finish, feels overkill Okies~

Easy

1. 00:41:166 (2) - recommend to extend to white tick Okies.
2. 00:44:366 (3,4) - Perhaps a 1/1 slider + 2 circles? It makes the 2/1 slider for the held vocals 00:47:566 (3) stand out even more. Same for 02:33:155 (3) Changed~
3. 01:12:566 (2,3) - I think this would fir your rhythms + hitsounding pattern better https://i.imgur.com/qMatmIS.png same for 03:01:355 (2,3) Changed~
4. 01:27:166 (4) - 2 circles would be nice for a more emphatic end to the section. It would also contrast well with 01:26:366 (3) Okies~
5. 03:36:755 (1) - delete NC There were no NC here. o.o

[]done~ Yay~

1. 00:03:566 (2) - by space it, i just meant overlap it a tiny bit instead of stacking
2. 03:49:755 (5) - circle
3. 03:21:755 (2) - off screen a tiny bit

Kisses wrote:

Ai mod says these are unused
soft-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav

if they aren't used delete them but if they are give me an example where Oh, I forgot about these. I don't think I'll need them any more. xD Removed~


Hard

1. 00:03:566 (2) - by space it, i just meant overlap it a tiny bit instead of stacking Fixed. xD
2. 03:49:755 (5) - circle Changed~
3. 03:21:755 (2) - off screen a tiny bit Fixed~

Norma
03:21:755 (2) - off screen a few pixels ?????

Easy
03:38:755 (1,1) - delete NCs lol Fixed~
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Kisses wrote:

easy
03:38:755 (1) - delete NC Fixed~

normal
03:24:955 (2) - the border at the bottom is off screen by just a few pixels https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10502856Fixed~
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