Red = MUST CHANGE
Blue = Opinion
Orange = Strong opinion that someone else will almost definitely call you out on
[General/Metadata]
Background needs to be 1366x768
Countdown inconsistency: countdown is on for easy and normal but not hard
the break in the middle of the song is a different length for all 3 difficulties
use of whistles is pretty intense, generally not a good idea to have whistles on almost every hit. They're meant to accent the song.
Claps need to go on 1 and 3, I'd suggest using a custom hitsound for this, http://puu.sh/iX5iS/b5144e075c.wav <-- sounded pretty good to me.
[Hard]
00:02:934 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency on the triangle (292,268 fixes it)
00:03:934 (5) - out of playfield, not sure if it's enough for unrankable but...eh maybe fix?
00:14:734 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The crashes are intense. Keep in mind that if something sounds fine on your skin, it might not on others. (If you do decide to keep them for some reason please use a custom hitsound)
00:21:534 (3,1,2) - Spacing again
00:24:734 (2,3) - slightly different y values, doesnt really add anything except make it look odd by making the 3 four units lower (I get the slider lookalike reason but circles are circles, not sliders)
00:42:734 (1) - crashes again
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reason for the different gradients on the first 1,2?
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - No reason for the NC, no spacing oddities so NC isnt really needed, just makes it harder to read
00:52:334 (1,2) - jump feels out of place, no jump in the music
01:11:334 (4,5) - move the 5 slightly left to keep spacing consistent
01:11:534 (5,6) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380788
01:12:934 (1,2) - missing a critical 1 drumbeat in the middle (map to the song, not the lyrics)
01:25:934 (1,2,3) - crashing again, I'm gonna stop mentioning it
02:30:934 (4,5,6) - belongs in an extra/insane more than a hard
02:38:334 (2,3) - jump doesnt belong
02:41:134 (1,2) - ^
Just if you dont know what I mean with the jumps, 02:44:734 (3,4) - this is a correct useage of jumping
03:09:134 (1,2,3,4) - largest jumps in the map on one of the quietest sections? The patterns here and 02:41:534 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here should be swapped
03:51:934 (2,1,2,1) - make the spacing between the jumps (both the 2 to 1's) the same plox
03:57:934 (1,2) - This is a trill so there should be a note between
00:28:134 (4) - NC
00:37:534 (1) - make this part of the prev combo
00:40:934 (4) - NC
That's all for now ^^
Blue = Opinion
Orange = Strong opinion that someone else will almost definitely call you out on
[General/Metadata]
Background needs to be 1366x768
Countdown inconsistency: countdown is on for easy and normal but not hard
the break in the middle of the song is a different length for all 3 difficulties
use of whistles is pretty intense, generally not a good idea to have whistles on almost every hit. They're meant to accent the song.
Claps need to go on 1 and 3, I'd suggest using a custom hitsound for this, http://puu.sh/iX5iS/b5144e075c.wav <-- sounded pretty good to me.
[Hard]
00:02:934 (1,2,3) - spacing inconsistency on the triangle (292,268 fixes it)
00:03:934 (5) - out of playfield, not sure if it's enough for unrankable but...eh maybe fix?
00:14:734 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The crashes are intense. Keep in mind that if something sounds fine on your skin, it might not on others. (If you do decide to keep them for some reason please use a custom hitsound)
00:21:534 (3,1,2) - Spacing again
00:24:734 (2,3) - slightly different y values, doesnt really add anything except make it look odd by making the 3 four units lower (I get the slider lookalike reason but circles are circles, not sliders)
00:42:734 (1) - crashes again
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reason for the different gradients on the first 1,2?
00:45:934 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - No reason for the NC, no spacing oddities so NC isnt really needed, just makes it harder to read
00:52:334 (1,2) - jump feels out of place, no jump in the music
01:11:334 (4,5) - move the 5 slightly left to keep spacing consistent
01:11:534 (5,6) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3380788
01:12:934 (1,2) - missing a critical 1 drumbeat in the middle (map to the song, not the lyrics)
01:25:934 (1,2,3) - crashing again, I'm gonna stop mentioning it
02:30:934 (4,5,6) - belongs in an extra/insane more than a hard
02:38:334 (2,3) - jump doesnt belong
02:41:134 (1,2) - ^
Just if you dont know what I mean with the jumps, 02:44:734 (3,4) - this is a correct useage of jumping
03:09:134 (1,2,3,4) - largest jumps in the map on one of the quietest sections? The patterns here and 02:41:534 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here should be swapped
03:51:934 (2,1,2,1) - make the spacing between the jumps (both the 2 to 1's) the same plox
03:57:934 (1,2) - This is a trill so there should be a note between
00:28:134 (4) - NC
00:37:534 (1) - make this part of the prev combo
00:40:934 (4) - NC
That's all for now ^^