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16:13 FCL: Hi Fort!
16:13 Fort: hello
16:13 FCL: I write in occasion monstercat project
16:14 FCL: U can add my map
16:14 Fort: what map?
16:14 FCL: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/357131
16:14 FCL: (WIP)
16:14 Fort: yeah good
16:15 FCL: By the way, can I call you to M4M?
16:15 FCL: for other map of cource
16:15 Fort: course*
16:16 FCL: sry, my English is bad xD
16:17 Fort: okay
16:17 FCL: okay, my map
16:17 FCL: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/312477
16:19 Fort: i already look that map
16:19 Fort: you want to see my thoughts?
16:19 Fort: EZ
16:19 FCL: yea!
16:20 Fort: i already played it
16:20 Fort: and looks okay
16:20 Fort: even it has overmapped parts
16:20 Fort: like on here 00:23:858 (3,4,5) -
16:21 Fort: move this to 00:35:108 (2) - and dont overlap that notes
16:22 Fort: but there are lot pattern like this
16:22 Fort: on same time
16:22 Fort: 00:55:428 (1) - move this slider because this slider border hit HP bar
16:23 Fort: 01:01:882 (4) - maybe you can fix this slider curve
16:23 Fort: and extend that slider to 01:02:230 -
16:24 Fort: 01:09:382 (1,2) - i think this overlap can be tricky
16:24 Fort: 01:09:556 - put some circle here :3
16:25 Fort: 01:11:300 - same thing, just put triplets on here
16:25 Fort: 01:12:696 - on this too
16:25 Fort: 01:14:091 (2) - yeah like this one
16:25 Fort: 01:16:882 - here too
16:26 Fort: 01:43:218 (5,6) - more distance for this notes please
16:27 Fort: looks you doing good job on kiai time
16:27 Fort: even it's skipping strong beats, it can be good for gameplay
16:28 Fort: 02:16:010 (4) - change to circle only
16:28 Fort: 02:35:719 (1) - you got same problem on here, like slider border hit HP bar
16:29 Fort: 02:41:126 (6,7,8) - i think change this one to 1/2 slider better flow
16:30 Fort: but you keep put similiar patterning at next pattern so you decide to change or no change them all
16:30 Fort: yeah i can say that one kinda overmapped
16:31 FCL: I was there sliders should be laid down, but on the advice of another modder I change them
16:32 FCL: maybe he was wrong, idk
16:32 Fort: 03:33:364 (2) - not really sure this one should be on 03:33:451 -
16:33 Fort: 04:05:980 (2,3,4) - most offbeat sliders
16:34 Fort: 04:06:504 (5) - delete this and move 04:05:980 (2,3,4) - to 04:06:068 -
16:34 Fort: 04:05:980 - and add circle here
16:36 Fort: looks that's all i can say
16:37 FCL: Thanks, it's really helped to me)
16:37 Fort: 00:01:009 (1) - and one thing
16:37 Fort: this volume is 10%
16:37 Fort: you should raise volume
16:37 Fort: to 50%
16:38 Fort: because it has good intro
16:38 Fort: good ambient sound
16:39 Fort: just keep in mind this 00:28:131 (3,4) - pattern need some revises
16:39 Fort: im sure it's 1/2 pattern
16:40 Fort: okay
16:40 Fort: you have question about your own map?
16:40 FCL: I would also like to ask
16:41 Fort: okay sure
16:42 FCL: how far away my map is to rank
16:43 Fort: on my vision your map is good enough for rank
16:43 Fort: if you keep quality on your map
16:43 Fort: basically like
16:43 Fort: prevent unrankable things
16:44 Fort: and that unrankable thing probably based on weird things on your beatmap
16:44 Fort: especially on gameplay
16:45 FCL: hmm, okay. Thanks!
16:46 Fort: the things i mentioned before is just like something you could like to fix to improve this one
16:46 Fort: maybe my say can reduce DQ chances alot
16:52 Fort: okay so any more question?
16:53 FCL: no, it's all
16:53 Fort: okay nice :3
we doing much thing about this map
+ Patterning
+ rhythm changing
+ distance fixing
- remove some awkward circles