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TrySail - Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)

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Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 8, 2016 at 12:57:47 PM

Artist: TrySail
Title: Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Source: 電波教師
Tags: denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size nadapan UchiganeNiigata Lumael
BPM: 163
Filesize: 1630kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.54 stars, 234 notes)
  2. Insane (4.35 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Lumael's Insane (4.31 stars, 284 notes)
  4. Nacchan's Easy (1.83 stars, 117 notes)
  5. Normal (2.03 stars, 138 notes)
  6. UN's Insane (4.56 stars, 296 notes)
Download: TrySail - Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my second beatmap. Hard and Normal difficulties are done by me, Easy difficulty is Nadapan's, one of the Insanes is made by Lumael, one is UchiganeNiigata and one is mine. All of them are hitsounded and ready for modding.
Hope ya like it!
Last edited by Loony , edited 17 times in total.
Sylas
Elite Mapper
1,022 posts
Joined January 2014
Sylas
Hey c:
From my queue

General

- I've noticed a number of blankets that were poorly made. Here is a link that will help you work better with sliders and blanket them properly: t/208596
- Try to avoid having overlaps

Hard

Overall, this is a good diff but you could improve some blankets, patterns and stacks. I will point out some problems that I can find:
00:05:166 (2) - Stack the slider end under 00:04:432 (3) properly
00:07:006 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:08:662 (2,3,4) - Use the distance snap tool to make all these notes the same distance apart
00:09:214 (5) - This slider is a bit exaggerated, try using less anchor points to make it more smooth kind of like this:
Image
00:19:886 (3) - Blanket this note with 00:19:518 (2)
00:50:996 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved
00:55:965 (5) - Properly stack this note under 00:55:229 (2)
00:56:333 (7,9) - Another blanket that could be improved
01:21:364 (5) - This slider is quite ugly, try changing it with the help of the links I put in general
01:25:781 (4) - NC
01:25:781 (4,5,6,7) - Try making these sliders the same distance apart and make sure they don't overlap
01:27:806 (4) - Move it to x:284 y:176 to make the square perfect
Again, try improving the patterns and sliders more.

Normal

00:06:088 (3) - DS properly
00:22:100 (3) - ^
01:20:260 (1) - Properly stack under 01:18:787 (2)
There are a few overlaps which aren't helpful towards the overall feel of the map and how it plays. I will try pointing some of them out:
00:05:352 (2) - Move the latter up so it doesn't touch the other slider. You may need to change it's shape so it fits.
00:57:070 (2,3) - Change 3's shape so the slider tails don't touch
01:06:272 (2,3,4) - Try to make it so 4 and 2 don't touch
01:08:849 (2,3,4) - ^
01:25:781 (1) - Stack under 01:24:309 (3) for aesthetic purposes
That's all I could find. This diff is already nice and after fixing the overlaps it should be even nicer c:
That's all!
Good luck with this mapset! It's really nice c:
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony

TheKoala wrote:

Hey c:
From my queue

General

- I've noticed a number of blankets that were poorly made. Here is a link that will help you work better with sliders and blanket them properly: t/208596
- Try to avoid having overlaps

Hard

Overall, this is a good diff but you could improve some blankets, patterns and stacks. I will point out some problems that I can find:
00:05:166 (2) - Stack the slider end under 00:04:432 (3) properly Fixed
00:07:006 (2,3) - Improve blanket Fixed
00:08:662 (2,3,4) - Use the distance snap tool to make all these notes the same distance apart Fixed
00:09:214 (5) - This slider is a bit exaggerated, try using less anchor points to make it more smooth kind of like this: Fixed
Image
00:19:886 (3) - Blanket this note with 00:19:518 (2) Fixed
00:50:996 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved Fixed
00:55:965 (5) - Properly stack this note under 00:55:229 (2) Fixed
00:56:333 (7,9) - Another blanket that could be improved Fixed
01:21:364 (5) - This slider is quite ugly, try changing it with the help of the links I put in general Fixed
01:25:781 (4) - NC Fixed
01:25:781 (4,5,6,7) - Try making these sliders the same distance apart and make sure they don't overlap Fixed
01:27:806 (4) - Move it to x:284 y:176 to make the square perfect Fixed
Again, try improving the patterns and sliders more.

Normal

00:06:088 (3) - DS properly Fixed
00:22:100 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:20:260 (1) - Properly stack under 01:18:787 (2) Fixed
There are a few overlaps which aren't helpful towards the overall feel of the map and how it plays. I will try pointing some of them out:
00:05:352 (2) - Move the latter up so it doesn't touch the other slider. You may need to change it's shape so it fits. Fixed
00:57:070 (2,3) - Change 3's shape so the slider tails don't touch Fixed
01:06:272 (2,3,4) - Try to make it so 4 and 2 don't touch Fixed
01:08:849 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
01:25:781 (1) - Stack under 01:24:309 (3) for aesthetic purposes Fixed
That's all I could find. This diff is already nice and after fixing the overlaps it should be even nicer c:
That's all!
Good luck with this mapset! It's really nice c:
Thank you very much for your mod!!!
Hopefully fixed everything ;)
UchiganeNiigata
44 posts
Joined February 2014
UchiganeNiigata
Hello there! :)
From my queue:

General Things
- Try to hitsound the map. Do your best, if you can't then throw it in a hitsounding queue (I'm not very good at hitsounding so I can't do it ;_;)
- Might want to get a better mp3 since the music is very quiet

Normal

00:00:383 - Add a note here and then start a break right after
01:27:806 - You can put a Clap and Finish on this slider if you want

Hard

00:00:383 - Add a circle here followed by a spinner? If you do use a spinner end the spinner here (00:02:959) and have the hitsound volume here be 5%
01:00:751 -- 01:01:855 - You can add in some notes here at this gap
01:27:990 - You can put a Clap and Finish on this circle

Overall, a great map set :D

I might do a GD for the insane if I have time
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony

UchiganeNiigata wrote:

Hello there! :)
From my queue:

General Things
- Try to hitsound the map. Do your best, if you can't then throw it in a hitsounding queue (I'm not very good at hitsounding so I can't do it ;_;) - I will hitsound it all, don't worry. ;)
- Might want to get a better mp3 since the music is very quiet - I know, I was looking for a better mp3, but I couldn't find anything :( I will try again, maybe something has changed.

Normal

00:00:383 - Add a note here and then start a break right after - Fixed
01:27:806 - You can put a Clap and Finish on this slider if you want - Added

Hard

00:00:383 - Add a circle here followed by a spinner? If you do use a spinner end the spinner here (00:02:959) and have the hitsound volume here be 5% - Added
01:00:751 -- 01:01:855 - You can add in some notes here at this gap - Well, good idea, but if I put the notes here, it will be a bit unreadable, because the first beat isn't on the white tick, is on the blue one, that means on 1/4, so I won't risk.
01:27:990 - You can put a Clap and Finish on this circle - Fixed

Overall, a great map set :D - Thanks! <3

I might do a GD for the insane if I have time
Thank you for your mod! And of course, all GD's are welcome :D
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
I started working on the GD.

I recommend you to use Custom hitsound in this song since it sounds better and it's also easier to use compare to the default ones
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Random mod~ :)

[General]
  1. Remove "(TV Size)" on title
  2. Source: 電波教師
  3. Tags: "denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size"
  4. This map must add Easy diff. The Easiest must under 2.0 star (And I check your Normal diff, too hard and too many red lines)

[Normal]
  1. Every notes must follow Distance Snap, Please fix
  2. Up sound volume to 50-70, too low (Same as Hard diff)
    00:01:855 - add circle (coz this point still have sound here, add circle here will be nice)
    00:20:628 (6,1) - Ctrl+G, try, maybe you like it (Still follow voice)
    00:28:358 (1) - For Normal, between spinner and next note must have two white line space: Example. So I give you a suggestion: change a long slider to replace it (same 00:44:554 (1) - )
    00:33:879 (3,4) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i1m1G/d9669f5771.jpg
    00:37:192 (1,2) - maybe you like: http://puu.sh/i1m72/ccb5f5f8c0.jpg, same rhythm: 00:48:971 (1,2) -
    01:12:162 (3) - -1 reverse
    01:18:419 (1,2) - Ctrl+G, and then 01:18:971 (2,3) - Ctrl+G again
    01:22:468 - add circle
    01:27:806 (1) - change two circles more good for end

[Hard]
  1. Follow DS can help you fix this diff to looks more pretty
    00:00:383 (1,1) - I think Normal's Start more nice than Hard
    00:16:763 - add a circle
    00:18:966 (5) - remove this circle (If you like, my suggestion :) )
    00:35:720 - this part use slow speed more nice, not speed up
    01:05:904 (4) - stack better
    01:21:364 (5) - too below
    01:24:125 (9) - use this rhythm: 01:15:475 (5,6) -

Good luck :)
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony

DreaM117er wrote:

Random mod~ :) Oh, I'm lucky then :D

[General]
  1. Remove "(TV Size)" on title Why? I cut this song, it was a lot longer :o
  2. Source: 電波教師 Fixed!
  3. Tags: "denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size" Fixed!
  4. This map must add Easy diff. The Easiest must under 2.0 star (And I check your Normal diff, too hard and too many red lines) Easy difficulty is on the way! Also Insane.

[Normal]
  1. Every notes must follow Distance Snap, Please fix I think I fixed everything
  2. Up sound volume to 50-70, too low (Same as Hard diff) Fixed!
    00:01:855 - add circle (coz this point still have sound here, add circle here will be nice) Fixed!
    00:20:628 (6,1) - Ctrl+G, try, maybe you like it (Still follow voice) Sorry, I think it's okay as it is right now :P
    00:28:358 (1) - For Normal, between spinner and next note must have two white line space: Example. So I give you a suggestion: change a long slider to replace it (same 00:44:554 (1) - ) How to do that? Sorry, idk what to do :(
    00:33:879 (3,4) - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/i1m1G/d9669f5771.jpg Will consider it
    00:37:192 (1,2) - maybe you like: http://puu.sh/i1m72/ccb5f5f8c0.jpg, same rhythm: 00:48:971 (1,2) - Will consider it
    01:12:162 (3) - -1 reverse Fixed!
    01:18:419 (1,2) - Ctrl+G, and then 01:18:971 (2,3) - Ctrl+G again Fixed!
    01:22:468 - add circle Fixed!
    01:27:806 (1) - change two circles more good for end Fixed!

[Hard]
  1. Follow DS can help you fix this diff to looks more pretty Hopefully fixed everything
    00:00:383 (1,1) - I think Normal's Start more nice than Hard Hmm, will consider it, maybe I'll add two circles too, not sure for now.
    00:16:763 - add a circle Sorry, I don't hear anything there.
    00:18:966 (5) - remove this circle (If you like, my suggestion :) ) I won't remove it, cuz it has to be as hard as well :P
    00:35:720 - this part use slow speed more nice, not speed up So shall I left it as it is, or make it even more slower?
    01:05:904 (4) - stack better Fixed!
    01:21:364 (5) - too below Fixed!
    01:24:125 (9) - use this rhythm: 01:15:475 (5,6) - Fixed!


Good luck :)

Thanks a lot for your 'random' mod! I'm not sure about some your ideas, and some I just didn't understand :?
Hope so the rest is okay now!
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
[General]
Umm...TV size, you should check from official website, if have "TV Size", you can add it in title, if no, remove it (BN say). But I help you add "tv size" in tags, you can remove on title, don't worry. :)

[Normal]
00:28:358 (1) - long slider like this: http://puu.sh/i27dx/563fc635c8.jpg

[Hard]
00:35:720 - yes, you can do this. If you don't want to fix that, you can ignore :)
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony
Okay, TV Size in the title isn't necessary for me then ;)
I solved the problem with too short space between the end of the spinner and the next notes in a diffrent way, but thanks for picking this problem out!
Thanks again then :D
Aihuro
329 posts
Joined January 2015
Aihuro
Hey!~ NM from my queue Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! { NM Open }
Well, here goes nothing.

Normal:
  1. 00:15:843 (2,3) - The distance between these two notes are too far, please fix it
  2. 00:27:622 (2) - Move this note at X: 208 Y: 84 to avoid the overlap with 00:26:149 (5) -
  3. 00:37:192 - Mm, don't really like this pattern, why not try something like this instead
  4. 00:50:628 - This doesn't sound right, try something that fits more with the music. Maybe something like this instead.
  5. 01:08:849 (2,3,4) - Don't really like this overlap here. Try stacking 01:08:849 (2) - on 01:09:585 (4) - head. Something like this maybe
  6. 01:12:898 (1) - Don't really like where you placed this note. Why not place it here at X: 212 Y: 320
  7. 01:20:996 (3,5) - Why not stack these two notes? To avoid the overlap
  8. This diff looks good :3

Hard:
  1. 00:00:567 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit here at all 0.0 Place insert a break here or map this part.
  2. 00:32:407 (3,5) - Please stack these two notes better
  3. 00:38:665 (2,3) - Why not blanket these two sliders instead. It looks better imo
  4. 00:55:229 (2,5) - The stack is a little bit off. Move 00:55:965 (5) - at X: 220 Y: 194 to improve the stack
  5. 01:05:168 (2,4) - ^ Just move 01:05:904 (4) - at X: 134 Y: 274
  6. 01:14:186 (4) - Add a note here maybe?
  7. This diff is also nice 030

This mapset has a lot of potential~
Hope my mod was helpful!
Good Luck :)
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony

Mau-nyan wrote:

Hey!~ NM from my queue Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! { NM Open }
Well, here goes nothing.

Normal:
  1. 00:15:843 (2,3) - The distance between these two notes are too far, please fix it Fixed!
  2. 00:27:622 (2) - Move this note at X: 208 Y: 84 to avoid the overlap with 00:26:149 (5) - Fixed!
  3. 00:37:192 - Mm, don't really like this pattern, why not try something like this instead You are another person that actually doesn't like this pattern, I need to change it then. Will consider it, I mean, seriously!
  4. 00:50:628 - This doesn't sound right, try something that fits more with the music. Maybe something like this instead. Fixed!
  5. 01:08:849 (2,3,4) - Don't really like this overlap here. Try stacking 01:08:849 (2) - on 01:09:585 (4) - head. Something like this maybe Fixed!
  6. 01:12:898 (1) - Don't really like where you placed this note. Why not place it here at X: 212 Y: 320 It's a bit too low, I think it is good as it is.
  7. 01:20:996 (3,5) - Why not stack these two notes? To avoid the overlap Fixed!
  8. This diff looks good :3

Hard:
  1. 00:00:567 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit here at all 0.0 Place insert a break here or map this part. Fixed, made as it is in Normal
  2. 00:32:407 (3,5) - Please stack these two notes better Fixed!
  3. 00:38:665 (2,3) - Why not blanket these two sliders instead. It looks better imo Fixed!
  4. 00:55:229 (2,5) - The stack is a little bit off. Move 00:55:965 (5) - at X: 220 Y: 194 to improve the stack Fixed!
  5. 01:05:168 (2,4) - ^ Just move 01:05:904 (4) - at X: 134 Y: 274 Fixed!
  6. 01:14:186 (4) - Add a note here maybe? Fixed!
  7. This diff is also nice 030

This mapset has a lot of potential~
Hope my mod was helpful!
Good Luck :)
Thanks a lot for your mod! You've been very heplful! :)
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
I'm done with the GD

I recommend you to use custom hitsounds. I used the default hitsounds for now in case you're not planning to add any custom hitsounds.

I also recommend you to change the Mp3 file since the volume in this song is pretty low and I had a hard time being able to hear where to put a note and were to not put a note.

Nacchan's Easy
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62223
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3327,12162,18051,23941,29830,35720,62223,87990
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:Denpa Kyoushi
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song Kagami
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
383,368.098159509202,4,2,0,25,1,0
3327,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
12162,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
18051,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
23941,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
29830,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
35720,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
62223,-100,4,1,0,55,0,1
87990,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0


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Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony
Sorry, I don't really know what are these custom hitsounds, and how to add them.
And finally, I found better Mp3, and now it's really good! Better check it out, cause I had to make completely new offset, and maybe it can be improved.
And thanks of course for your Guest Difficulty! I've added it right now ;)
KantanDez
255 posts
Joined February 2015
KantanDez
from my queue:

Nacchan's Easy
these objects are not snapped fix them by making them again at the same position
00:04:683 (2) -
00:11:677 (3) -
00:19:407 (2) -
00:37:996 (2) -
00:42:230 (1) -
00:45:174 (1) -
00:49:591 (2) -
00:56:953 (1) -
01:04:315 (4) -
01:19:039 (4) -
01:27:137 (2) -

Advice: Press Ctrl,Shift A (Opens AiMod) to find problems

Normal
put this 00:30:819 (1) - here 00:30:635
then just add a hit circle here: 00:31:188 and 00:31:372





Advice: since osu! is a rhythm game, sensible rhythm is very important in beatmapping. try playing the beatmap with the playback rate of 25% or 50%

Hard
add some objects here:
01:01:372 to 01:02:568

Advice: same as Normal but no problem with timing

Good luck! :D
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
I'll fix the map tomorrow :3

Btw add my username to the tags. Everyone who made a GD or a collab needs to have their names in the tags
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Topic Starter
Loony

Term Akatski wrote:

from my queue:

Nacchan's Easy
these objects are not snapped fix them by making them again at the same position
00:04:683 (2) - FIXED
00:11:677 (3) - FIXED
00:19:407 (2) - FIXED
00:37:996 (2) - FIXED
00:42:230 (1) - FIXED
00:45:174 (1) - FIXED
00:49:591 (2) - FIXED
00:56:953 (1) - FIXED
01:04:315 (4) - FIXED
01:19:039 (4) - FIXED
01:27:137 (2) - FIXED

Advice: Press Ctrl,Shift A (Opens AiMod) to find problems

Normal
put this 00:30:819 (1) - here 00:30:635
then just add a hit circle here: 00:31:188 and 00:31:372

/\
|
I can't do it, since it has to be at least one white-tick between the spinner end and the next notes. I need to check it though, cause I know, there are missing notes.



Advice: since osu! is a rhythm game, sensible rhythm is very important in beatmapping. try playing the beatmap with the playback rate of 25% or 50%

Hard
add some objects here:
01:01:372 to 01:02:568 Hmm you are the second person who says that to me, so I will consider it.

Advice: same as Normal but no problem with timing

Good luck! :D
Thanks for your quick mod! I have modded your beatmap already as well ;)
EDIT: Sorry nadapan, I made the fixes by myself, cuz that was my bad. I wrongly snapped them to the new timing, but I have fixed it all, hope so you aren't angry. And I'll add your nickname to the tags, don't worry ;)
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y
#modding queue

[General]
SPOILER
I think offset should be +36ms (1040), please hear it by 25% by yourself, as 36ms is not a small number

[NM]
SPOILER
00:03:984 (1,2) - blanket
00:06:745 (3) - ^
00:12:818 (1) - curve
00:14:291 (4) - blanket
00:15:395 (6,1) - ds
00:17:788 (5,1) - ds
00:20:180 (4) - nc
00:29:015 (1) - not a good place for spinner
00:37:665 - missing notes
00:38:769 (2) - one reverse only, and 00:39:506 (1) - start at 00:39:322 - ended 00:40:058 -
00:44:659 (1) - del nc
01:05:825 (1) - blanket
01:07:849 (4,5) - blanket
01:24:230 (2,3) - ^
01:28:647 (2) - spinner? (ended 01:32:328 - ) or end with 1/2 slider (01:28:463 - )
[HD]
SPOILER
00:04:316 (2) - blanket
00:10:942 (3) - ds
00:13:151 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:16:832 (3,4,5,6,7) - map according to vocal? or follow what you did in 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4) -
00:41:679 (1) - ds
00:42:784 (3) - blanket
00:42:231 (2) - nc should be here
00:43:704 (5) - ^
00:51:066 (2) - blanket
00:52:538 (6) - nc
00:56:771 (6) - ds
01:06:526 (4) - seperate from 01:05:790 (2) -
01:14:256 (3) - move to 01:14:256 (3) - nc , and then 3/4 beat slider at 01:14:255 - and del 01:14:992 (1) -
01:21:618 (3) - blanket
01:28:612 (1) - 1/2 beat slider
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
The volume was too low so I raised it

Nacchan's Easy
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Youthful Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62844
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3948,12783,18672,24562,30451,36341,62844,88611
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.400006

[Metadata]
Title:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Youthful Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Loony
Version:Nacchan's Easy
Source:電波教師
Tags:denpa kyoushi op opening song 鑑 純一郎 かがみ じゅんいちろう Kagami Junichiro tv size
BeatmapID:708269
BeatmapSetID:309391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Denpa Kyoushi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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3948,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
12783,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
18672,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
24562,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
30451,-100,4,2,0,75,0,0
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464,204,88058,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,276,88426,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Loony
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Loony

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

[General]
SPOILER
I think offset should be +36ms (1040), please hear it by 25% by yourself, as 36ms is not a small number - Well, I did as you said, and I listened to the new offset over and over again, with 25% slower, and I really heard something earlier. I will make a request for checking the offset, but now it stays as it is.

[NM]
SPOILER
00:03:984 (1,2) - blanket Fixed!
00:06:745 (3) - ^ Fixed!
00:12:818 (1) - curve Fixed!
00:14:291 (4) - blanket Fixed!
00:15:395 (6,1) - ds Fixed!
00:17:788 (5,1) - ds Fixed!
00:20:180 (4) - nc Fixed!
00:29:015 (1) - not a good place for spinner Fixed!
00:37:665 - missing notes I changed the whole construction of this part, now it should be okay!
00:38:769 (2) - one reverse only, and 00:39:506 (1) - start at 00:39:322 - ended 00:40:058 - Fixed!
00:44:659 (1) - del nc You mean from the spinner? If not, I removed this New Combo from this ending slider with reverse arrow.
01:05:825 (1) - blanket Fixed!
01:07:849 (4,5) - blanket Fixed!
01:24:230 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!
01:28:647 (2) - spinner? (ended 01:32:328 - ) or end with 1/2 slider (01:28:463 - ) Hmm, will consider it, so much things to consider :o

[HD]
SPOILER
00:04:316 (2) - blanket Fixed!
00:10:942 (3) - ds Fixed!
00:13:151 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:16:832 (3,4,5,6,7) - map according to vocal? or follow what you did in 00:24:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's good as it is right now.
00:41:679 (1) - ds Fixed!
00:42:784 (3) - blanket Fixed!
00:42:231 (2) - nc should be here I think there's a New Combo on the first note.
00:43:704 (5) - ^ Fixed!
00:51:066 (2) - blanket Fixed!
00:52:538 (6) - nc Well, I don't hear here anything wich would suggest to make here a New Combo.
00:56:771 (6) - ds Fixed!
01:06:526 (4) - seperate from 01:05:790 (2) - Fixed!
01:14:256 (3) - move to 01:14:256 (3) - nc , and then 3/4 beat slider at 01:14:255 - and del 01:14:992 (1) - Fixed!
01:21:618 (3) - blanket Fixed!
01:28:612 (1) - 1/2 beat slider Fixed!
Thank you for your mod! Hopefully fixed everything!
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