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YAMAZARU - Kaze

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WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 07, 2015 at 5:00:34 PM

Artist: YAMAZARU
Title: Kaze
Source: NARUTO -ナルト- 疾風伝
Tags: opening 17 hanabi wind naruto shipudden
BPM: 161.97
Filesize: 15540kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.5 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Hanabi's Another (4.74 stars, 309 notes)
  3. Hard (3.06 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Insane (3.8 stars, 265 notes)
  5. Normal (2.11 stars, 160 notes)
Download: YAMAZARU - Kaze
Download: YAMAZARU - Kaze (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready for mods!

Thanks to ByBy13 for the metadata check!
Last edited by WildCry , edited 25 times in total.
Kuuma
133 posts
Joined November 2014
Kuuma
I may be able to map an extra diff. How many stars do you estimate your insane to be?
WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry

-Hanabi- wrote:

I may be able to map an extra diff. How many stars do you estimate your insane to be?
Sorry for not answering, i think will continue the map on Friday(August 10). remodelare the hard and insane difficulty and the stars of insane will be between 4.5 and 5 stars...

with that time you can make a good difficulty. :)

Sorry for my bad English :(
Thanks!!
Kuuma
133 posts
Joined November 2014
Kuuma
Oh sorry. I wanted to do this but now I have so much stuff to do I won't have time :((
WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry

-Hanabi- wrote:

Oh sorry. I wanted to do this but now I have so much stuff to do I won't have time :((
Ok, no problem, if you arrive to have time and you want to make the difficulty , say me :)
Kuuma
133 posts
Joined November 2014
Kuuma
Actually, I think I'll have time to do one more GD. So I can map an extra If you want. You are going to need a better audio though so I will look for one for you
Kuuma
133 posts
Joined November 2014
Kuuma
Better Audio File (Click -> Download)

New offset would be 248
WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry

-Hanabi- wrote:

Better Audio File (Click -> Download)

New offset would be 248
Oh thanks , and yes make the extra map.
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
Hola, vi tu request en #modreqs y como tenemos el mismo mapa decidí echarle una ojeada.
Diré cosas no relevantes a tu estilo, o sino te estaría diciendo cosas de mi mapa y se estaría perdiendo la idea de todo xD
Recuerda que son solo sugerencias :D

[General]
Si crees que ya está listo tu mapa, deberías moverlo a la sección de pending.
yamazaru kaze tv size wild cry naruto shippuden saca esto de los tags ya que no son necesarios, porque ya están básicamente.
El beatmap empieza muy rápido, pone AudioLeadIn en 1752 (esto a todas las diffs). Para hacer eso vas a Archivo->Abrir osu en Bloc de Notas y lo buscas
Para canciones entre normal e easy te recomiendo usar el nivel de rejilla entre 2 o 3.

[Easy]
00:07:286 (1) - Borra NC
00:36:180 (3) - este slider lo correría a 00:35:810 -
00:50:627 (1) - Borra NC
00:54:332 (1) - ^
00:58:036 (1) - ^
00:59:518 (1) - Deberías sacar ese spin ya que lo que viene a continuación llega muy rápido y puede ser difícil para gente nueva
01:00:999 - agrega una nota ahí
01:17:669 - siento que falta una nota ahí
01:19:336 (1) - Borra NC

[Normal]
00:03:026 (1) - Borra NC
00:03:211 (2) - Agrega NC
00:07:286 (1) - Borra NC
00:23:770 (1) - ^
00:24:141 (2) - Agrega NC
00:24:882 (1) - Borra NC
00:48:775 (6) - sugiero no dejarlas stackeadas
00:53:776 (4) - Borra NC
00:54:146 (2) - ^
01:19:892 (1) - Te sugiero hacer este slider un poco más curvo a la derecha
01:24:152 (1,2,1) - No las dejes stackeadas, se sienten mal al jugar
01:24:522 (1) - Borra NC

[Hard]
00:09:694 (1) - Borra NC
00:28:030 (1,2,3,4) - Podrías probar algo como esto

00:32:846 (6) - Agregar NC
00:38:773 (5) - ^
00:41:551 (5) - ^
00:43:033 (1) - Borra NC
00:43:218 (2) - Agrega NC
00:44:700 (6) - ^
00:45:997 (1) - Borra NC
00:46:182 (2) - Agrega NC
00:47:664 (6) - ^
00:50:627 (6) - ^
00:53:591 (6) - ^
00:54:146 (1) - Borra NC
01:00:629 (1) - Borra esta nota y alarga el spin hasta ahí
01:03:407 (5,1) - Mejorar blanket un poquito
01:23:967 (1) - Te sugiero que no la sobrepongas al slider
Perdona si te molesto mucho con los New Combo, pero básicamente es agregar uno nuevo en los ticks blancos grandes, aunque depende también de la música. Ahí sigues viendo tú para las otras diffs.

[Insane]
00:01:544 (1,2,3,4) - Mejora la distancia entre las notas
00:17:843 (5) - Podrías mover esa nota un poco más a la derecha-arriba
00:33:031 - Falta una nota acá por la música
00:40:255 - ^
00:54:702 (3,4,5) - Podrías hacer que este stream durara hasta 00:54:980 -
01:00:629 (1) - Lo mismo que en Hard
01:04:704 (3,4) - El flow que hay entre estas dos notas es muy poco enredado
01:17:854 - Agrega una nota acá

[Hanabi's Extra]
Consider HP Drain 7 since 8,5 is way too much imo.
00:00:618 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap
00:04:508 (5,6) - Try to do a mini jump just like in 00:03:767 (3,4) - here
00:09:138 (2,3) - DS
00:10:990 (8,9,10) - Try to make some distance here since after that you make a huge jump
00:14:879 (3,4) - DS
00:24:696 - Consider add a note here
00:25:252 (1,2) - DS
00:29:882 (9) - You can make this slider look better imo.
00:31:179 (3,4,5,6) - DS
00:32:475 (6,1) - Maybe it's better without stack
00:33:216 (2,3,4) - DS
00:36:736 (7,8) - DS
00:48:774 (5) - Move a little to the right
01:03:037 - Missing a note here
01:03:593 - ^
01:14:890 (10,11,12) - why no jump here?
01:17:669 - missing note
01:18:781 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:521 (1) - Also you can improve this slider alot.

Eso es todo, espero haberte ayudado ^^
WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry

iYiyo wrote:

Hola, vi tu request en #modreqs y como tenemos el mismo mapa decidí echarle una ojeada.
Diré cosas no relevantes a tu estilo, o sino te estaría diciendo cosas de mi mapa y se estaría perdiendo la idea de todo xD
Recuerda que son solo sugerencias :D

[General]
Si crees que ya está listo tu mapa, deberías moverlo a la sección de pending. Ok!
yamazaru kaze tv size wild cry naruto shippuden saca esto de los tags ya que no son necesarios, porque ya están básicamente.
Mmhh eso no lo sabia.
El beatmap empieza muy rápido, pone AudioLeadIn en 1752 (esto a todas las diffs). Para hacer eso vas a Archivo->Abrir osu en Bloc de Notas y lo buscas Ok!
Para canciones entre normal e easy te recomiendo usar el nivel de rejilla entre 2 o 3.Gracias la proxima vez lo usare.

[Easy]
00:07:286 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:36:180 (3) - este slider lo correría a 00:35:810 - Me gusta,va muy bien con el ritmo.
00:50:627 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:54:332 (1) - ^ ^
00:58:036 (1) - ^ ^
00:59:518 (1) - Deberías sacar ese spin ya que lo que viene a continuación llega muy rápido y puede ser difícil para gente nueva Claro
01:00:999 - agrega una nota ahi Listo!
01:17:669 - siento que falta una nota ahí De hecho.
01:19:336 (1) - Borra NC Listo!

[Normal]
00:03:026 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:03:211 (2) - Agrega NC Listo
00:07:286 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:23:770 (1) - ^ ^
00:24:141 (2) - Agrega NC Listo!
00:24:882 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:48:775 (6) - sugiero no dejarlas stackeadas Ya que lo veo bien opino lo mismo.
00:53:776 (4) - Borra NC Ehh..Aqui no hay ningun NC XD
00:54:146 (2) - ^ Listo!
01:19:892 (1) - Te sugiero hacer este slider un poco más curvo a la derecha Listo!
01:24:152 (1,2,1) - No las dejes stackeadas, se sienten mal al jugar Claro.
01:24:522 (1) - Borra NC Listo!

[Hard]
00:09:694 (1) - Borra NC Mmmh..creo que haci esta bien, el ritmo que sigue el NC es el del tambor,es por eso que puse un NC Para que las notas no se miren tan repentinas.
00:28:030 (1,2,3,4) - Podrías probar algo como esto
Me parece bien.
00:32:846 (6) - Agregar NC Listo!
00:38:773 (5) - ^ ^
00:41:551 (5) - ^ ^
00:43:033 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:43:218 (2) - Agrega NC Listo!
00:44:700 (6) - ^ ^
00:45:997 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
00:46:182 (2) - Agrega NC Listo!
00:47:664 (6) - ^ ^
00:50:627 (6) - ^ ^
00:53:591 (6) - ^ ^
00:54:146 (1) - Borra NC Listo!
01:00:629 (1) - Borra esta nota y alarga el spin hasta ahí Mmmh me gusta asi para que valla mejor con el ritmo.
01:03:407 (5,1) - Mejorar blanket un poquito Listo!
01:23:967 (1) - Te sugiero que no la sobrepongas al slider Me parece bien.
Perdona si te molesto mucho con los New Combo, pero básicamente es agregar uno nuevo en los ticks blancos grandes, aunque depende también de la música. Ahí sigues viendo tú para las otras diffs. No hay problema la verdad es lo ultimo que hago al terminar alguna dificultad,lo hago lo mas rapido posible supongo que por eso me equivoco XD

[Insane]
00:01:544 (1,2,3,4) - Mejora la distancia entre las notas Me parece bien.
00:17:843 (5) - Podrías mover esa nota un poco más a la derecha-arriba Si la verdad no se alcanza a mirar bien la primera vez que alguien la llegara a jugar se equivocaria ahora es un poco menos probable.
00:33:031 - Falta una nota acá por la música De hecho.
00:40:255 - ^ ^
00:54:702 (3,4,5) - Podrías hacer que este stream durara hasta 00:54:980 - No escuche bien aqui pense que eran 3 circulos solamente hasta que me dijiste y volvi a escuchar y no eran 4 XD
01:00:629 (1) - Lo mismo que en Hard Me parece mejor asi como esta.
01:04:704 (3,4) - El flow que hay entre estas dos notas es muy poco enredado De hecho.
01:17:854 - Agrega una nota acá Listo!

[Hanabi's Extra]
Consider HP Drain 7 since 8,5 is way too much imo.
00:00:618 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap
00:04:508 (5,6) - Try to do a mini jump just like in 00:03:767 (3,4) - here
00:09:138 (2,3) - DS
00:10:990 (8,9,10) - Try to make some distance here since after that you make a huge jump
00:14:879 (3,4) - DS
00:24:696 - Consider add a note here
00:25:252 (1,2) - DS
00:29:882 (9) - You can make this slider look better imo.
00:31:179 (3,4,5,6) - DS
00:32:475 (6,1) - Maybe it's better without stack
00:33:216 (2,3,4) - DS
00:36:736 (7,8) - DS
00:48:774 (5) - Move a little to the right
01:03:037 - Missing a note here
01:03:593 - ^
01:14:890 (10,11,12) - why no jump here?
01:17:669 - missing note
01:18:781 (1,2,3) - DS
01:24:521 (1) - Also you can improve this slider alot.

Eso es todo, espero haberte ayudado ^^
Muchas gracias :) Es la primera vez que aplico un mod a un mapa pero mas o menos se que hacer.
Por cierto una pregunta,Si quiero seguir mejorando el mapa con mods,es mejor ponerlo en pending o en in progress?
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo

WildCry wrote:

Muchas gracias :) Es la primera vez que aplico un mod a un mapa pero mas o menos se que hacer.
Por cierto una pregunta,Si quiero seguir mejorando el mapa con mods,es mejor ponerlo en pending o en in progress?
Normalmente cuando ya quieres empezar a recibir mods, es buen momento de pasarlo a pending ya que estaría "listo" para el "público" y así te lo empiezan a modear.
WildCry
154 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
WildCry

iYiyo wrote:

WildCry wrote:

Muchas gracias :) Es la primera vez que aplico un mod a un mapa pero mas o menos se que hacer.
Por cierto una pregunta,Si quiero seguir mejorando el mapa con mods,es mejor ponerlo en pending o en in progress?
Normalmente cuando ya quieres empezar a recibir mods, es buen momento de pasarlo a pending ya que estaría "listo" para el "público" y así te lo empiezan a modear.
Oh ok, Gracias por la ayuda!
Kuuma
133 posts
Joined November 2014
Kuuma

iYiyo wrote:

[Hanabi's Extra]
Consider HP Drain 7 since 8,5 is way too much imo. 7 is too little. I made it 7.5
00:00:618 (2,3,4) - Distance Snap
00:04:508 (5,6) - Try to do a mini jump just like in 00:03:767 (3,4) - here Fixed
00:09:138 (2,3) - DS Fixed
00:10:990 (8,9,10) - Try to make some distance here since after that you make a huge jump Fixed
00:14:879 (3,4) - DS No
00:24:696 - Consider add a note here No, I am following the guitar here, not the drum
00:25:252 (1,2) - DS No
00:29:882 (9) - You can make this slider look better imo. Changed slider
00:31:179 (3,4,5,6) - DS Fixed
00:32:475 (6,1) - Maybe it's better without stack I like stack here
00:33:216 (2,3,4) - DS Fixed
00:36:736 (7,8) - DS Fixed
00:48:774 (5) - Move a little to the right Nope, I like it the way it is
01:03:037 - Missing a note here Fixed
01:03:593 - ^ I want a little break here
01:14:890 (10,11,12) - why no jump here? Fixed
01:17:669 - missing note No, following vocals
01:18:781 (1,2,3) - DS Fixed
01:24:521 (1) - Also you can improve this slider alot. Attempted fix. Hard to make slider perfect
Thank you for mod.

Updated
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Naruto Shippuden Opening 17.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60629
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kaze (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:風 (TV Size)
Artist:Yamazaru
ArtistUnicode:Yamazaru
Creator:WildCry
Version:Hanabi's Extra
Source:Naruto Shippuden
Tags:naruto shippuden opening 17 wild cry hanabi wind yamazaru kaze tv size
BeatmapID:759686
BeatmapSetID:308231

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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252,249,26734,6,0,P|209:267|180:267,2,70
113,185,27290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
174,37,27475,2,0,P|211:64|222:100,2,70
143,108,28030,2,0,P|101:101|64:119,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,185,28401,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,221,28586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,350,28771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,313,28957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,29142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,288,29327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,355,29512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,239,29697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,216,29883,2,0,B|328:216|328:216|336:212|336:212|344:220|344:220|352:212|352:212|364:220|364:220|372:212|372:212|380:216|380:216|424:216,1,210
272,56,30809,5,0,0:0:0:0:
419,57,30994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
249,57,31179,2,0,B|199:39|144:60|122:112,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,132,31735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,212,32105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,32476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,288,32661,6,0,P|161:340|218:341,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,344,33217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,324,33587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,284,33957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,284,34143,6,0,P|314:267|330:237,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,34513,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,34698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,188,34884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,35069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,208,35254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,44,35439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
193,29,35624,2,0,P|147:24|116:34,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,179,35995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,19,36180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,179,36365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,26,36551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,197,36736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,244,36921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,292,37106,2,0,P|56:320|100:340,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,199,37477,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,100,37662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,131,37847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,276,38032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,263,38217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,92,38403,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,293,38588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,220,38773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,256,38958,6,0,P|468:288|464:324,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,39329,2,0,B|340:328|340:328|296:328|280:264,1,140
120,248,40070,6,0,L|88:168,1,70
240,248,40440,2,0,L|272:168,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,40811,2,0,L|0:152,1,70
312,220,41181,2,0,L|360:152,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,48,41551,2,0,L|28:64,1,70
272,48,41922,2,0,L|360:72,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,124,42292,2,0,B|208:164|208:164|200:176|200:176|216:176|216:176|208:196|208:196|208:252,1,140
208,284,42848,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,224,43033,2,0,P|304:268|304:304,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,340,43404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,43589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,340,43774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,240,43959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,80,44145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,128,44330,5,8,0:0:0:0:
424,160,44515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,24,44700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,32,44885,2,0,L|260:48,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,28,45256,2,0,B|120:104|120:104|172:148,1,140
204,160,45811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,216,45997,6,0,P|188:236|224:240,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,116,46367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,272,46552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,264,46738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,46923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,168,47108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,240,47293,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,240,47478,6,0,P|400:248|428:244,1,70
364,100,47849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,148,48034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,264,48219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,48405,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,328,48497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,328,48590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,324,48682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,304,48775,2,8,P|104:284|84:256,1,70
168,232,49145,2,0,P|112:176|92:112,1,140
108,92,49701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,92,49794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,92,49886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,112,50072,2,0,L|264:64,1,70
352,104,50442,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,220,50627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,50812,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,88,50998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,88,51183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,256,51368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,51553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,51646,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,51739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,212,51924,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,212,52016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,212,52109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,120,52294,2,0,P|80:136|124:132,1,70
192,248,52665,2,0,P|232:228|248:200,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,132,53035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,53220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,244,53405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,56,53591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,56,53776,6,0,L|56:128,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,136,54146,2,0,L|136:216,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,54517,2,0,L|232:280,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,54887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,166,55072,5,4,0:0:0:0:
109,166,55258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,157,55628,5,0,0:0:0:0:
246,157,55813,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,271,56184,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,271,56369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
310,269,56739,5,0,0:0:0:0:
310,269,56925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,121,57295,5,8,0:0:0:0:
198,121,57480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,121,57666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,121,57851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,85,58036,5,4,0:0:0:0:
334,285,58221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,96,58406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,297,58592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,144,58777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,338,58962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,212,59147,5,0,0:0:0:0:
362,85,59333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,338,59518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,212,59703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,64,59888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,277,60073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,67,60259,2,0,P|154:53|120:64,2,70,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,141,60999,6,0,P|41:182|52:231,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,206,61370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,149,61555,2,0,P|272:164|316:132,1,105.000004005432
260,75,61926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,206,62111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,260,62296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,51,62481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,234,62666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,249,62852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,64,63037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,46,63222,2,0,L|461:131,1,105.000004005432
477,229,63778,5,0,0:0:0:0:
477,229,63963,2,0,P|463:283|413:306,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,319,64333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,288,64519,2,0,P|364:241|417:233,1,105.000004005432
348,136,64889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,65074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,24,65260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,236,65445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,65630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,65815,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,205,66000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,205,66186,2,0,P|389:249|371:293,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,311,66741,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,313,66927,2,0,P|145:256|197:235,1,105.000004005432
276,217,67297,2,0,P|301:166|279:125,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,56,67667,2,0,L|124:148,1,105.000004005432
348,48,68038,2,0,L|246:78,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,68408,2,0,L|137:145,1,105.000004005432
367,127,68779,2,0,B|420:136|420:136|453:177,2,105.000004005432,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,148,69334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,239,69520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,330,69705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,349,69890,6,0,P|285:289|260:252,1,105.000004005432
194,318,70260,2,0,P|150:283|132:231,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,128,70631,2,0,P|79:83|128:50,1,105.000004005432
157,129,71001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,129,71187,2,0,B|168:135|168:135|155:143|155:143|170:148|170:148|161:158|161:158|176:161|176:161|167:170|167:170|180:171|180:171|173:182|173:182|185:184|185:184|179:196|179:196|190:198|190:198|185:208|185:208|197:209|197:209|193:218|193:218|201:222|201:222|198:232|198:232|204:237,1,210.000008010865
246,292,72113,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,325,72205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,344,72298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,345,72390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,325,72483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,280,72576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
455,209,72668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
457,133,72761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,53,72854,6,0,P|374:70|361:128,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,187,73224,2,0,P|334:197|288:165,1,105.000004005432,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,46,73594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,73780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,201,73965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,29,74150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,185,74335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,46,74521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,223,74706,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,73,74891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,75076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,48,75261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,164,75632,5,0,0:0:0:0:
68,168,75817,2,0,P|42:228|52:277,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,317,76187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,317,76373,2,0,P|167:262|220:249,1,105.000004005432
223,330,76743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,223,77114,2,0,P|302:229|339:269,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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78,64,78781,5,12,0:0:0:0:
40,148,79336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,236,79892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,324,80262,6,0,P|123:302|160:247,1,105.000004005432
196,232,80633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,12,80818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,208,81003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,40,81188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,81374,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,88,81559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,88,81744,5,4,0:0:0:0:
364,156,81929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,82115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,200,82300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,82485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,112,82670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,212,82855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,60,83041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,83226,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,36,83411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,83596,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,28,83781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,84,84522,6,0,B|388:112|388:112|308:32|184:20|84:68|40:268|188:388|360:372|512:252|300:84|240:144|240:144|204:188|276:260|276:176,1,955.499970840455,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
WildCry
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(Good I updated the map one day ago, but I think that I had to put this here XD)
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WildCry
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Josefumi
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Hi! Antes que nada gracias por modear mi mapa :-)

Aquí mi queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/357505


[Hanabi's Extra]
00:11:546 (9,10) - Put this 2 circles a little bit more far from the 00:10:435 (7,8) - slider and circle, its too close and it can cause confusion
00:20:622 (1,2) - Put them like a normal streaminghttp://puu.sh/jDAUC/bd177d1f85.jpg
00:29:883 (9) - End in 00:30:160 and if you want to do this http://puu.sh/jDAZH/a2aaf58b17.jpg
01:03:778 (1,2) - Start this combo far from the last one
01:16:743 (5) - Here, add a circle in the red tick , if you want you can do something like this: http://puu.sh/jDBbd/9741998188.jpg
01:17:114 (7) - After this try to follow the guitar rythm, maybe this:http://puu.sh/jDBhJ/ceacb3d4a5.jpg
01:24:522 (1) - Wow there is a BIG jump in here, do ctrl + G and see if its fits
Overall: Why not change the diff name to "Hanabi's Insane"? :D
[Insane]
00:07:286 (1) - Ovelap con 00:06:730 (1) -
00:41:737 (9) - Nuevo combo
01:13:224 (2) - Ponlo en la misma posición que 01:11:742 (1) -
[Hard]
Pon el HP drain en 5 y el approach rate en 7.
00:16:362 (1) - Acercarlo mas al combo anterior, un poquito nomas xD
00:59:518 (1) - Termina este spinner en 01:00:629 y elimina el circulo en su lugar
[Normal]
Pon el Approach rate en 4, no 5.
00:09:138 (1) - Empezando desde aqui, trata de no hacer tanto overlap como en 00:10:990 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - Es poco legible para la gente que juega en Normal
00:13:583 Por que no mejor añadir un spinner hasta 00:19:325 ? no se si te gusta pero yo creo que quedaria bien, no? ^^
[Easy]
Quizas lo ultimo que dije en normal iria bien aqui tambien jaja
01:00:999 (1) - Aqui no empiezes un combo nuevo y empiezes otro al segundo, simplemente empiezalo ahi y quita el nuevo combo a 01:01:370 (1) -

[Overall]
Buen mapa :) pero deberias considerar en poner otro tipo de hitsound que se escuche mas, el que tienes no esta mal pero deberias usarlo solo para añadir a uno mas fuerte, no de base.

Buena suerte con el ranking!
WildCry
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WildCry

Ferna52 wrote:

Hi! Antes que nada gracias por modear mi mapa :-)

Aquí mi queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/357505


[Insane]
00:07:286 (1) - Ovelap con 00:06:730 (1) - Listo!
00:41:737 (9) - Nuevo combo Listo!
01:13:224 (2) - Ponlo en la misma posición que 01:11:742 (1) - Listo!
[Hard]
Pon el HP drain en 5 y el approach rate en 7. Mhh podria ser pero lo siento un poco raro con ese approach rate lo dejare en 7.5.
00:16:362 (1) - Acercarlo mas al combo anterior, un poquito nomas xD Listo!
00:59:518 (1) - Termina este spinner en 01:00:629 y elimina el circulo en su lugarMe gusta asi como esta.
[Normal]
Pon el Approach rate en 4, no 5. Listo!
00:09:138 (1) - Empezando desde aqui, trata de no hacer tanto overlap como en 00:10:990 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - Es poco legible para la gente que juega en Normal Cierto.
00:13:583 Por que no mejor añadir un spinner hasta 00:19:325 ? no se si te gusta pero yo creo que quedaria bien, no? ^^ Lo considerare.
[Easy]
Quizas lo ultimo que dije en normal iria bien aqui tambien jaja Me gusta que se aprecie esa parte del video,pero como dije lo cosiderare.
01:00:999 (1) - Aqui no empiezes un combo nuevo y empiezes otro al segundo, simplemente empiezalo ahi y quita el nuevo combo a 01:01:370 (1) - Listo!


[Overall]
Buen mapa :) pero deberias considerar en poner otro tipo de hitsound que se escuche mas, el que tienes no esta mal pero deberias usarlo solo para añadir a uno mas fuerte, no de base.
Tratare de buscar otro si no le subire el volumen al hitsound Gracias

Buena suerte con el ranking!
Gracias por el mod! Si algun dia tienes algun problema con algo avisame. :)
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Dromadan
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Dromadan
Hello, i hope this can help you!

Insane
00:11:916 I would increase use of polarity here, here's a pattern that feels nice and fits the instrumental: http://puu.sh/jEjm5/8073828106.jpg
00:55:072 This slider doesn't align with the stack, align them to make it look better. Like this: http://puu.sh/jEjd6/1f9544a137.jpg
Diff settings:
OD: 6,5 > 7,5 It's a map pretty much all sliders so it won't really make a difference, make it a bit harder for DT players.
HP: 6,5 > 7
Overall good map and fun.

Hanabi's Extra
Where to begin...
Said before by a previous modder, but you should change the name to Hanabi's Insane, this does not feel like an Extra diff at all.
00:24:141 Polarity problems on this combo, try to fix all of these so the map doesn't feel so dull
00:26:734 Turn this combo into another combo with this: http://puu.sh/jEjWu/6d9c68db55.jpg
00:29:883 This slider ruins everything. Change it to something like this: http://puu.sh/jEk6e/e8c8bd5d5b.jpg
00:31:642 Polarity problems again. Since i notice you're going for the kind of jump map, fill all these gaps.
00:33:217 Polarity problems again.
00:48:682 The slider and the stream are pretty sepparated, connect them.
01:12:113 Not a good stream at all, use less distance snapping, the end can get a bit afar from the previous note but not THAT much.
01:17:299 Polarity problems again.
01:18:781 Polarity problems again. I'd use sliders for this one, or you can do another jump pattern.
01:20:262 This whole jumping session, in my opinion, it doesn't fit. Consider following his voice.
01:23:967 Nice touch, but i'd rather use a spinner.

I'm gonna be honest, the whole jump sessions since Kiai starts are just boring, imagine some good patterns!

CS: 4,2 > 4 There's really no difference.
AR: 9,3 > 9 Optional.

Good luck on the map!
WildCry
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WildCry
Oye para la otra ponlo en español si alguien es de latinoamerica(España),asi se me hace mas sencillo y a ti tambien a no ser de que haya una GD de alguien mas,todo bien.


Dromadan wrote:

Hello, i hope this can help you!

Insane
00:11:916 I would increase use of polarity here, here's a pattern that feels nice and fits the instrumental: http://puu.sh/jEjm5/8073828106.jpg Mmh me parece bien Ok!
00:55:072 This slider doesn't align with the stack, align them to make it look better. Like this: http://puu.sh/jEjd6/1f9544a137.jpg Listo! Ok!
Diff settings:
OD: 6,5 > 7,5 It's a map pretty much all sliders so it won't really make a difference, make it a bit harder for DT players.Listo! Ok!
HP: 6,5 > 7 Listo! Ok!
Overall good map and fun. Gracias!
Bueno Gracias por el mod! y recuerda poner en español el mod a latinoamericanos(Españoles).
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Dromadan
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Dromadan

WildCry wrote:

Oye para la otra ponlo en español si alguien es de latinoamerica(España),asi se me hace mas sencillo y a ti tambien a no ser de que haya una GD de alguien mas,todo bien.


Dromadan wrote:

Hello, i hope this can help you!

Insane
00:11:916 I would increase use of polarity here, here's a pattern that feels nice and fits the instrumental: http://puu.sh/jEjm5/8073828106.jpg Mmh me parece bien Ok!
00:55:072 This slider doesn't align with the stack, align them to make it look better. Like this: http://puu.sh/jEjd6/1f9544a137.jpg Listo! Ok!
Diff settings:
OD: 6,5 > 7,5 It's a map pretty much all sliders so it won't really make a difference, make it a bit harder for DT players.
HP: 6,5 > 7
Overall good map and fun.

Hanabi's Extra
Where to begin...
Said before by a previous modder, but you should change the name to Hanabi's Insane, this does not feel like an Extra diff at all.
00:24:141 Polarity problems on this combo, try to fix all of these so the map doesn't feel so dull
00:26:734 Turn this combo into another combo with this: http://puu.sh/jEjWu/6d9c68db55.jpg
00:29:883 This slider ruins everything. Change it to something like this: http://puu.sh/jEk6e/e8c8bd5d5b.jpg
00:31:642 Polarity problems again. Since i notice you're going for the kind of jump map, fill all these gaps.
00:33:217 Polarity problems again.
00:48:682 The slider and the stream are pretty sepparated, connect them.
01:12:113 Not a good stream at all, use less distance snapping, the end can get a bit afar from the previous note but not THAT much.
01:17:299 Polarity problems again.
01:18:781 Polarity problems again. I'd use sliders for this one, or you can do another jump pattern.
01:20:262 This whole jumping session, in my opinion, it doesn't fit. Consider following his voice.
01:23:967 Nice touch, but i'd rather use a spinner.

I'm gonna be honest, the whole jump sessions since Kiai starts are just boring, imagine some good patterns!

CS: 4,2 > 4 There's really no difference.
AR: 9,3 > 9 Optional.

Good luck on the map!
Aaah, no me di cuenta :cry: Si quieres edito el otro mod a español, no tengo problema.
WildCry
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No esta bien solo ya sabes que hacer para la proxima. :)
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Kuuma
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Dromadan wrote:

Hello, i hope this can help you!

Insane
00:11:916 I would increase use of polarity here, here's a pattern that feels nice and fits the instrumental: http://puu.sh/jEjm5/8073828106.jpg
00:55:072 This slider doesn't align with the stack, align them to make it look better. Like this: http://puu.sh/jEjd6/1f9544a137.jpg
Diff settings:
OD: 6,5 > 7,5 It's a map pretty much all sliders so it won't really make a difference, make it a bit harder for DT players.
HP: 6,5 > 7
Overall good map and fun.

Hanabi's Extra
Where to begin...
Said before by a previous modder, but you should change the name to Hanabi's Insane, this does not feel like an Extra diff at all.
00:24:141 Polarity problems on this combo, try to fix all of these so the map doesn't feel so dull
00:26:734 Turn this combo into another combo with this: http://puu.sh/jEjWu/6d9c68db55.jpg
00:29:883 This slider ruins everything. Change it to something like this: http://puu.sh/jEk6e/e8c8bd5d5b.jpg
00:31:642 Polarity problems again. Since i notice you're going for the kind of jump map, fill all these gaps.
00:33:217 Polarity problems again.
00:48:682 The slider and the stream are pretty sepparated, connect them.
01:12:113 Not a good stream at all, use less distance snapping, the end can get a bit afar from the previous note but not THAT much.
01:17:299 Polarity problems again.
01:18:781 Polarity problems again. I'd use sliders for this one, or you can do another jump pattern.
01:20:262 This whole jumping session, in my opinion, it doesn't fit. Consider following his voice.
01:23:967 Nice touch, but i'd rather use a spinner.

I'm gonna be honest, the whole jump sessions since Kiai starts are just boring, imagine some good patterns!

CS: 4,2 > 4 There's really no difference.
AR: 9,3 > 9 Optional.

Good luck on the map!
Ok wont be able to make changes until wednesday :(
Um You say "polarity" problems, I dont know what that means so can you please explain?
Dromadan
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Joined January 2014
Dromadan
Ok wont be able to make changes until wednesday :(
Um You say "polarity" problems, I dont know what that means so can you please explain?
It's a really simple trick, but hard to explain, here's everything you need to know about polarity: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
meii18
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meii18
Hello! As requested

  1. Artist: 山猿
  2. Romanised Artist: YAMAZARU


  3. Title: 風
  4. Romanised Title: Kaze
  5. Source: NARUTO -ナルト- 疾風伝
    Add to tags: Naruto Shipudden,the alternative title of the anime
    Taken from http://www.yamazaru.net/disco.html https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/feng-single/id1006562295 and http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/naruto/news/news09/index.html

Checked the official website of the anime and I didn't found the title with this :arrow: (TV Size) http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/naruto/goods/cd/cd09/index.html

no kds. Good Luck!
Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli
[General]
The star rating between Insane and Hanabi's Extra is maybe a bit big. Consider making another Insane or remapping the current Insane.

[Hanabi's Extra]
AR9 should fit fine with this map.
00:00:248 (1) - Curve this the other way?
The jump between 00:00:988 (4) - and 00:01:359 (5) - feels awkward for me
Maybe add some distance between 00:02:655 (6) - and 00:03:026 (1) - ?
00:03:767 (3) - Too close to the sliderend
00:05:434 (1) - Add some distance or stack with 00:04:693 (6) - sliderend
00:17:843 (7,8,9) - Maybe relocate these sliders. The jumps between them feel awkward.
00:31:735 (4) - Add some space to the slider before
00:33:217 (2) - ^
00:35:439 (1,2) - Stack these two?
00:48:682 (4,5) - What is this space?
00:49:701 (7,8,9) - Add some distance to the slider before
01:04:333 (3) - ^
01:08:038 (5,6) - Maybe relocate these. Awkward flow.
01:12:483 (5,6,7,8,1) - I understand what you're trying to do here but this is too much spacing
01:15:447 - add note here
01:15:632 (1,2) - stack these two?
01:16:928 - add note here
01:17:484 - 01:20:077 - Why so few notes at this part?
01:20:262 (1,2) - Add some distance

[Insane]
00:20:622 (4,1) - This jump feels awkward
00:26:919 (6,7) - Add some space between these two
00:31:179 (2,3) - ^
00:34:884 (4) - x:332 y:120
00:35:069 (5) - x:472 y:192
00:40:440 (4,5) - Add some space between these two
00:46:552 (4) - Maybe stack this to 00:46:182 (2) - ?
00:49:701 (1,2) - Add some space between these two
01:18:781 (1,1) - Jump between these two feels awkward
01:21:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This feels pretty lame for the ending. Maybe take out some sliders and add some jumps?

[Hard]
00:04:693 (1,1) - these two seem to be a bit too close for me
01:15:261 (1) - ctrl+h this slider

Didn't really find anything worth mentioning in this diff. Seems pretty solid to me.

[Normal]
00:13:398 - 00:23:585 - I don't think you should add breaks in TV Size maps because 1:26 drain isn't really anything.
00:45:997 - Maybe add a note here?

[Easy]
00:13:398 - 00:23:585 - Here too. Pls no breaks in TV Sizes
01:22:485 (3,4) - Stacks might be confusing for newbies

These are all just suggestions.
Good luck with your map!
WildCry
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WildCry

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! As requested

  1. Artist: 山猿
  2. Romanised Artist: YAMAZARU


  3. Title: 風
  4. Romanised Title: Kaze
  5. Source: NARUTO -ナルト- 疾風伝
    Add to tags: Naruto Shipudden,the alternative title of the anime
    Taken from http://www.yamazaru.net/disco.html https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/feng-single/id1006562295 and http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/naruto/news/news09/index.html

Checked the official website of the anime and I didn't found the title with this :arrow: (TV Size) http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/naruto/goods/cd/cd09/index.html

no kds. Good Luck!
Thanks! Oh..sorry i not look.
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WildCry
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Topic Starter
WildCry

Maakkeli wrote:

[General]
The star rating between Insane and Hanabi's Extra is maybe a bit big. Consider making another Insane or remapping the current Insane.Ok!


[Insane]
00:20:622 (4,1) - This jump feels awkward Ready! I added only a little distance to the circle
00:26:919 (6,7) - Add some space between these two Ok!
00:31:179 (2,3) - ^ Ok!
00:34:884 (4) - x:332 y:120 Good for me.
00:35:069 (5) - x:472 y:192 ^
00:40:440 (4,5) - Add some space between these two Ok!
00:46:552 (4) - Maybe stack this to 00:46:182 (2) - ? Ok!
00:49:701 (1,2) - Add some space between these two Ok!
01:18:781 (1,1) - Jump between these two feels awkward Ok!
01:21:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This feels pretty lame for the ending. Maybe take out some sliders and add some jumps? Ok!

[Hard]
00:04:693 (1,1) - these two seem to be a bit too close for me I like as well is a bit more with the rhythm also teach players to wait.
01:15:261 (1) - ctrl+h this slider Ok!
Didn't really find anything worth mentioning in this diff. Seems pretty solid to me. Thanks!

[Normal]
00:13:398 - 00:23:585 - I don't think you should add breaks in TV Size maps because 1:26 drain isn't really anything.I will consider.
00:45:997 - Maybe add a note here? Ok!

[Easy]
00:13:398 - 00:23:585 - Here too. Pls no breaks in TV Sizes More than anything ,i want to that they will appreciate this part in addition to slightly reduce the difficulty.
01:22:485 (3,4) - Stacks might be confusing for newbies Ok!

These are all just suggestions.
Good luck with your map!

Thanks for the mod!
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Update
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Ferna52 wrote:

[Hanabi's Extra]
00:11:546 (9,10) - Put this 2 circles a little bit more far from the 00:10:435 (7,8) - slider and circle, its too close and it can cause confusion done, thanks
00:20:622 (1,2) - Put them like a normal streaminghttp://puu.sh/jDAUC/bd177d1f85.jpg no thanks, I like the way it is
00:29:883 (9) - End in 00:30:160 and if you want to do this http://puu.sh/jDAZH/a2aaf58b17.jpg changed it to something different from your idea but it is similar, thanks
01:03:778 (1,2) - Start this combo far from the last one fixed
01:16:743 (5) - Here, add a circle in the red tick , if you want you can do something like this: http://puu.sh/jDBbd/9741998188.jpg no thanks
01:17:114 (7) - After this try to follow the guitar rythm, maybe this:http://puu.sh/jDBhJ/ceacb3d4a5.jpg no thanks
01:24:522 (1) - Wow there is a BIG jump in here, do ctrl + G and see if its fits changing whole jump pattern :)
Overall: Why not change the diff name to "Hanabi's Insane"? :Dwill change name

Dromadan wrote:

Hanabi's Extra
Where to begin...
Said before by a previous modder, but you should change the name to Hanabi's Insane, this does not feel like an Extra diff at all. will change name
00:24:141 Polarity problems on this combo, try to fix all of these so the map doesn't feel so dull Ok, all of your points on "polarity problems" dont make sense. The video you showed me explained to me that polarity problems occur when you make a sudden change from red/white ticks to blue ticks, however my diff is always mapped on red/white ticks. So in all the places where you mentioned polarity problems I do not know what to do :(
00:26:734 Turn this combo into another combo with this: http://puu.sh/jEjWu/6d9c68db55.jpg no thanks
00:29:883 This slider ruins everything. Change it to something like this: http://puu.sh/jEk6e/e8c8bd5d5b.jpg changed to something else
00:31:642 Polarity problems again. Since i notice you're going for the kind of jump map, fill all these gaps. ? about filling in gaps, i do not want the map to just be jumps after jumps after jumps. i want some variety and some breaks between the jumps
00:33:217 Polarity problems again. ?
00:48:682 The slider and the stream are pretty sepparated, connect them. that was on purpose. If more people tell me to fix then I will consider, but i like how this plays
01:12:113 Not a good stream at all, use less distance snapping, the end can get a bit afar from the previous note but not THAT much. fixed
01:17:299 Polarity problems again.?
01:18:781 Polarity problems again. I'd use sliders for this one, or you can do another jump pattern.
01:20:262 This whole jumping session, in my opinion, it doesn't fit. Consider following his voice. fixed
01:23:967 Nice touch, but i'd rather use a spinner. maybe

I'm gonna be honest, the whole jump sessions since Kiai starts are just boring, imagine some good patterns! will do!

CS: 4,2 > 4 There's really no difference. uh, yes there is a difference haha, but fine.
AR: 9,3 > 9 Optional.ok

Maakkeli wrote:

[Hanabi's Extra]
AR9 should fit fine with this map. ok
00:00:248 (1) - Curve this the other way? ok, why not
The jump between 00:00:988 (4) - and 00:01:359 (5) - feels awkward for me never felt awk for me, but you are right. this was probs unintentional, fixed
Maybe add some distance between 00:02:655 (6) - and 00:03:026 (1) - ? fixed
00:03:767 (3) - Too close to the sliderend fixed
00:05:434 (1) - Add some distance or stack with 00:04:693 (6) - sliderend no thanks
00:17:843 (7,8,9) - Maybe relocate these sliders. The jumps between them feel awkward. they dont feel awkwards to me gasp emoticon if more mods tell me then i will
00:31:735 (4) - Add some space to the slider before fixed
00:33:217 (2) - ^ fixed
00:35:439 (1,2) - Stack these two? yes, thank you
00:48:682 (4,5) - What is this space? everyone complains about this, i GUESS i will fix :/
00:49:701 (7,8,9) - Add some distance to the slider before fixed
01:04:333 (3) - ^ fixed
01:08:038 (5,6) - Maybe relocate these. Awkward flow. not awk for me
01:12:483 (5,6,7,8,1) - I understand what you're trying to do here but this is too much spacing ok, made normal stream
01:15:447 - add note here ok
01:15:632 (1,2) - stack these two? ok
01:16:928 - add note here nope, following vocals
01:17:484 - 01:20:077 - Why so few notes at this part? build up for final jumps
01:20:262 (1,2) - Add some distance ok


thanks for mods :D
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-Sh1n1-
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Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Standard mod


Nadie pidio mod pero yo estoy aqui porque creo que hay pocos mapas de Naruto en Osu! y este mapa tiene mucho potencial.

Easy


  1. 00:00:248 (1) - avoid weird and complicated sliders at easy, it's hard to read for newbie players
  2. 00:03:952 (2) - esta siendo tapada por 00:01:729 (2) - evita que notas o sliders caigan en el mismo sitio o puede ser complicado para los novatos
  3. 00:03:952 (2,3) - aca hay un problema serio porque despues de clickear 00:03:952 (2) - para un nuevo puede ser complicado distinguir donde empieza el slider 00:04:693 (3) - por que si miras bien pusistes 00:03:952 (2) - justo en el medio trata de arreglar eso.
  4. 00:11:546 (1,2,3) - aca ocurre el mismo problema pero con estos dos 00:12:287 (2,3) - por despues de clickear 00:11:546 (1) - noc cual de los dos slider es el que sigue, osea poniendome en los zapatos de un nuevo
  5. no uses cambios de velocidad en easys ni en normales, es unrankeable
  6. 00:29:883 (3,1) - el blanquet (la curva) estre estas notas puede ser mejorado
  7. 00:25:437 (1) - este slider es demasiado feo para una easy, con esto no te digo que este mal ponerle formas a los slider solo trata de que no sean tan pegados, el mejor ejemplo de los slider bonitos que hicistes son :00:29:883 (3) - 00:36:180 (3) -
  8. 00:46:182 (1) - yo eh escuchado que solo esta permitido un regreso para easys y normales, asi que mejor cambialo por un reverse hasta 00:46:923 - y de ahi agregas una nota en 00:47:293 -
  9. 01:01:370 (2) - muevelo un poco hacia la izquierda, de tal manera que quede un triangulo entre la cola de 00:59:518 (4) - este slider y 01:00:999 (1,2) -
  10. 01:18:040 (1) - este debio haber sido solo un slider hasta 01:18:410 -. porque en 01:18:781 - hay un high pitch, entonces debio haber un nuevo combo y una nota para clickear, aparte de eso 01:19:336 (2) - luce muy solitario en medio de un kiai, como te dije del primer slider: 01:18:040 (1) - empieza en 01:18:040 - y acaba en 01:18:410 - luego pones nuevo combo y haces otro slider con reverse, empieza en 01:18:781 - acaba en 01:19:336 - y agregas reverse hasta 01:19:892 -, despues es ovio que borraras 01:19:892 (1) - y agregas una nota en 01:20:262 -
  11. 01:23:596 (5) - hace poco tuve un problema parecido en una GD por estos tipos de sliders, hazlo mas simple porque los BN te van a molestar xD
  12. 01:23:596 (5) - debio acabar en 01:24:337 - y el slider empezar en 01:24:522 -
  13. 00:23:585 - me parece que debistes empezar aqui como en la Normal.

Normal


  1. 00:09:138 (1,2,3,4) - demasiado junto bro, separalos como venias haciendo con tus patrones anteriores, ejemplo: 00:03:026 (6,1,2,3) -
  2. cuando te posicionas en 00:10:990 (1) - no sabes si la nota que sigue es 00:11:546 (1) - o 00:11:916 (1) - , demasiado confuso a mi parecer, mueve 00:11:916 (1) - hacia la derecha para evitar futuros problemas con los BN
  3. 00:34:328 (1) - No debistes dejar que se dirija hacia arriba por que lo hace un patron antiestetico al momento de verlo, ya que choca con 00:33:402 (4) -
  4. 00:55:072 (1,1) - estos me encantan, pero no puedo decir lo mismo de 00:56:184 (1,1) - porque se ven muy juntos, y aunque quede bien (a mi parecer en una diff Hard o Insane) en Normal no queda.
  5. 01:04:333 (2,4) - lucen demasiado juntos, puedo apostar que sera un problema cuando preguntes por BN.
  6. 01:24:615 (1) - acerca de este spin digo lo mismo que en la easy.
    La normal me gusta mas que la Easy, bien ahi~~

Hard


  1. 00:01:914 (2,4) - No hay un buen blanquet entre estas notas, considera mejorarlo
  2. eh visto que al principio usas mucho jump, y no quiero que lo muevas porque se ve bien, pero sinceramente no veo la necesidad de un jump aqui: 00:03:767 (2,3) -
  3. Igual aqui: 00:05:434 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:06:730 (1) - si lo subes un poquitin mas para hacer un buen blanquet con 00:06:175 (1) - ?
  5. 00:35:810 (5,6) - mmm. que feo patron xD, 00:35:810 (5) - señala hacia otro lado pero 00:36:365 (6) - este esta en otro, haz algo como esto 00:51:553 (4,1) -
  6. 00:39:329 (3,4) - cuida la distancia entre estas notas.
  7. 00:43:218 (1,2) - lo mismo aqui ^ No quiero abundar en esto asi que cuida bien tus distancias, recuerda que estas usando 1.2
  8. es un buen blanquet si, pero muevelo un poco de tal manera que la cola termine justo en la posicion de la cabeza de este slider 00:54:332 (3) -
  9. 01:00:999 (2) - nuevo combo por el high pitch o tonada alta del que te hable previamente en easy
  10. 01:08:408 - 01:12:854 - 01:13:965 - 01:15:817 - 00:35:624 - 00:44:700 - 00:55:072 - todos estos son nuevos combos, fijate muy bien a los costados y remuevo algunos new combos
    Buena Hard omg creo que a medida de que sube la dificultad lo haces mejor

Insane


  1. 00:36:551 (10,11) - Ctrl+G a estas notas por estructura y sonido
  2. 01:06:741 (10,1) - un stack entre estas notas hubiera quedado muy bien
    Muy buena Insane, hay solo pequeños problemas que pueden ser solucionados con mas mods

Best of Lucks~~
WildCry
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-Sh1n1- wrote:

Standard mod


Nadie pidio mod pero yo estoy aqui porque creo que hay pocos mapas de Naruto en Osu! y este mapa tiene mucho potencial.

Easy


  1. 00:00:248 (1) - avoid weird and complicated sliders at easy, it's hard to read for newbie players Mmhh ya veo.
  2. 00:03:952 (2) - esta siendo tapada por 00:01:729 (2) - evita que notas o sliders caigan en el mismo sitio o puede ser complicado para los novatosOk!
  3. 00:03:952 (2,3) - aca hay un problema serio porque despues de clickear 00:03:952 (2) - para un nuevo puede ser complicado distinguir donde empieza el slider 00:04:693 (3) - por que si miras bien pusistes 00:03:952 (2) - justo en el medio trata de arreglar eso.Listo!
  4. 00:11:546 (1,2,3) - aca ocurre el mismo problema pero con estos dos 00:12:287 (2,3) - por despues de clickear 00:11:546 (1) - noc cual de los dos slider es el que sigue, osea poniendome en los zapatos de un nuevo.Listo!
  5. no uses cambios de velocidad en easys ni en normales, es unrankeable Demonios! No sabia XD
  6. 00:29:883 (3,1) - el blanquet (la curva) estre estas notas puede ser mejorado Listo!
  7. 00:25:437 (1) - este slider es demasiado feo para una easy, con esto no te digo que este mal ponerle formas a los slider solo trata de que no sean tan pegados, el mejor ejemplo de los slider bonitos que hicistes son :00:29:883 (3) - 00:36:180 (3) - Ami me gusta y no es por bonito si no por el blanket con 00:26:919 (2) -
  8. 00:46:182 (1) - yo eh escuchado que solo esta permitido un regreso para easys y normales, asi que mejor cambialo por un reverse hasta 00:46:923 - y de ahi agregas una nota en 00:47:293 - Ok la verdad se me hacia confuso supongo que lo que escuchaste es cierto.
  9. 01:01:370 (2) - muevelo un poco hacia la izquierda, de tal manera que quede un triangulo entre la cola de 00:59:518 (4) - este slider y 01:00:999 (1,2) - Listo!
  10. 01:18:040 (1) - este debio haber sido solo un slider hasta 01:18:410 -. porque en 01:18:781 - hay un high pitch, entonces debio haber un nuevo combo y una nota para clickear, aparte de eso 01:19:336 (2) - luce muy solitario en medio de un kiai, como te dije del primer slider: 01:18:040 (1) - empieza en 01:18:040 - y acaba en 01:18:410 - luego pones nuevo combo y haces otro slider con reverse, empieza en 01:18:781 - acaba en 01:19:336 - y agregas reverse hasta 01:19:892 -, despues es ovio que borraras 01:19:892 (1) - y agregas una nota en 01:20:262 -
  11. 01:23:596 (5) - hace poco tuve un problema parecido en una GD por estos tipos de sliders, hazlo mas simple porque los BN te van a molestar xD Supongo.
  12. 01:23:596 (5) - debio acabar en 01:24:337 - y el slider empezar en 01:24:522 - Listo!
  13. 00:23:585 - me parece que debistes empezar aqui como en la Normal.
Ok ya vere que le pongo.

Normal


  1. 00:09:138 (1,2,3,4) - demasiado junto bro, separalos como venias haciendo con tus patrones anteriores, ejemplo: 00:03:026 (6,1,2,3) - Listo quite un slider ya se ve menos confuso.
  2. cuando te posicionas en 00:10:990 (1) - no sabes si la nota que sigue es 00:11:546 (1) - o 00:11:916 (1) - , demasiado confuso a mi parecer, mueve 00:11:916 (1) - hacia la derecha para evitar futuros problemas con los BN Listo!
  3. 00:34:328 (1) - No debistes dejar que se dirija hacia arriba por que lo hace un patron antiestetico al momento de verlo, ya que choca con 00:33:402 (4) -Listo!
  4. 00:55:072 (1,1) - estos me encantan, pero no puedo decir lo mismo de 00:56:184 (1,1) - porque se ven muy juntos, y aunque quede bien (a mi parecer en una diff Hard o Insane) en Normal no queda. Ya vere que pngo aqui.
  5. 01:04:333 (2,4) - lucen demasiado juntos, puedo apostar que sera un problema cuando preguntes por BN.Listo!
  6. 01:24:615 (1) - acerca de este spin digo lo mismo que en la easy.Listo!
    La normal me gusta mas que la Easy, bien ahi~~
Gracias!

Hard


  1. 00:01:914 (2,4) - No hay un buen blanquet entre estas notas, considera mejorarlo
  2. eh visto que al principio usas mucho jump, y no quiero que lo muevas porque se ve bien, pero sinceramente no veo la necesidad de un jump aqui: 00:03:767 (2,3) - Listo!
  3. Igual aqui: 00:05:434 (1,2) - ^ Me gusta como esta(asi interpreto esta parte)
  4. 00:06:730 (1) - si lo subes un poquitin mas para hacer un buen blanquet con 00:06:175 (1) - ? Listo!
  5. 00:35:810 (5,6) - mmm. que feo patron xD, 00:35:810 (5) - señala hacia otro lado pero 00:36:365 (6) - este esta en otro, haz algo como esto 00:51:553 (4,1) - Hice algo parecido.
  6. 00:39:329 (3,4) - cuida la distancia entre estas notas.Listo!
  7. 00:43:218 (1,2) - lo mismo aqui ^ No quiero abundar en esto asi que cuida bien tus distancias, recuerda que estas usando 1.2 Claro.
  8. es un buen blanquet si, pero muevelo un poco de tal manera que la cola termine justo en la posicion de la cabeza de este slider 00:54:332 (3) - Listo!
  9. 01:00:999 (2) - nuevo combo por el high pitch o tonada alta del que te hable previamente en easy
  10. 01:08:408 - 01:12:854 - 01:13:965 - 01:15:817 - 00:35:624 - 00:44:700 - 00:55:072 - todos estos son nuevos combos, fijate muy bien a los costados y remuevo algunos new combos Listo!
    Buena Hard omg creo que a medida de que sube la dificultad lo haces mejor
De hecho las hards es en lo que me especialiso.

Insane


  1. 00:36:551 (10,11) - Ctrl+G a estas notas por estructura y sonido Ohh.. buena observacion.
  2. 01:06:741 (10,1) - un stack entre estas notas hubiera quedado muy bien Listo!
    Muy buena Insane, hay solo pequeños problemas que pueden ser solucionados con mas mods
Ok!

Best of Lucks~~
Gracias por el mod!
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why is this map still unranked ?
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