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Owata-P, Signal-P - Paradichlorobenzene x Anti-chlorobenzene

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Topic Starter
Absolute Zero
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 22, 2015 at 10:55:13 AM

Artist: Owata-P, Signal-P
Title: Paradichlorobenzene x Anti-chlorobenzene
Tags: vocaloid c6h4cl2 chemistry
BPM: 90
Filesize: 23408kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Anti-chlorobenzene (Insane) (4.64 stars, 588 notes)
  2. Benzene (Normal) (1.87 stars, 209 notes)
  3. Chlorobenzene (Hard) (2.92 stars, 257 notes)
  4. Paradichlorobenzene (Insane) (4.47 stars, 562 notes)
  5. Rain (4.4 stars, 476 notes)
Download: Owata-P, Signal-P - Paradichlorobenzene x Anti-chlorobenzene
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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RE-DOWNLOAD IF YOU GOT IT BEFORE MAY 22nd, 2015!
UPDATE: this is becoming a ctb set now, that's a huge change....
Thanks to:
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JBHyperion for Logistics!
S v p e r for Video!

Mili for Mod!
OSUjanaiKATSURA for Mod!
-TakoYaki- for Mod!
-Magic Bomb- for Mod!
WildOne94 for Mod!
Razor Sharp for Mod!

murutattack for Mod and Star!
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Zoe
In-game mod for Afk's rain.

Afk's Rain
2015-04-17 01:33 Mili: Lemme check in editor.
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: 00:12:708 (5) - Try move it closer so it's not a massive jump, or further away to make it a hyper if you want.
2015-04-17 01:35 afk98: gimme a moment computer being slow
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: K
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: Lemme restart osu, snapping is being retarded,.
2015-04-17 01:37 Mili: Also, try use some different patterns.
2015-04-17 01:38 afk98: any specific places where patterns get repetitive?
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: 00:27:967 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: All or maybe most of your 1/4 reverse sliders are kinda the same.
2015-04-17 01:38 afk98: ah
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: You could change some to triple notes or even change the sv for a wider slider.
2015-04-17 01:39 afk98: kewl.
2015-04-17 01:39 afk98: anything else?
2015-04-17 01:39 Mili: 00:48:876 (7) - this triple you could rever the direction, the 2 before it are the same direction.
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: 00:31:376 (9) - Change to NC and get rid of 00:31:490 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:42 afk98: NC?
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: 00:33:194 (5) - & 00:33:990 (1) - ^ same with NC
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: NC = new combo.
2015-04-17 01:43 Mili: 00:50:921 (1) - remove NC?
2015-04-17 01:44 Mili: 01:04:330 (7) - Add NC here
2015-04-17 01:44 Mili: 01:11:603 (7) - ^
2015-04-17 01:45 Mili: 01:13:876 (1) - Remove NC
2015-04-17 01:45 Mili: 01:19:558 (9) - Add NC here and remove the one at 01:19:785 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:46 Mili: 01:20:467 (7) - Add NC, remove the NC at 01:21:603 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:46 Mili: General rule, new combo every 8 or so combo, 12 possible max.
2015-04-17 01:47 afk98: ah, okay.
2015-04-17 01:47 afk98: might have to go back and fix that in the std diffs
2015-04-17 01:47 Mili: NC here 01:25:012 (10) - and remove the one just after it
2015-04-17 01:48 Mili: 01:24:671 (9) - COnsider moving this note to 01:24:785 (9) - (the red line just after it) to match the song.
2015-04-17 01:48 Mili: If you do that, may as well change that to the NC instead of the (0)
2015-04-17 01:49 Mili: 01:35:467 (1) - remove NC, and add here: 01:37:285 (4) - then remove this NC 01:39:103 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:49 Mili: 01:44:558 (5) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: Yeah, I'm not sure how different the combo's are for std since they don't show up on a platter etc.
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: And explode after a NC
2015-04-17 01:50 afk98: also what diff would you rank this
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: 01:57:058 (5) - Add NC and remove the NC at 01:57:512 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Atm it's sorta between rain and overdose.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: if i fix some of the repetitive 1/4 sliders
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Yeah, if you fix some of that it should fit under rain.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: 4* kind of implies it's rain but idk
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Dw about stars :p
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: I've seen some hell 4-5 star maps.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: k :P
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Rankings are retarded.
2015-04-17 01:52 Mili: 02:03:421 (7) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:52 Mili: 02:08:876 (7) - Change to NC and remove the one at 02:09:103 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:53 Mili: 02:28:421 (6) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:53 afk98: you think those back and forths are unneccessarily long
2015-04-17 01:53 Mili: 02:42:512 (5) - Add NC.
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: Which back and forths?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: The one with the 2 notes then jump to 1?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: And repeat?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: 02:45:694 (7) - Add NC here.
2015-04-17 01:54 afk98: that, and
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: how do i write the things?
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: times?
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: Just click the note and copy it (ctrl+c)
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: Then paste in chat or forums.
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: 02:52:285 (1) - remove NC and add NC 02:53:194 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: 02:09:103 (2) - and 02:10:467 (6) -
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: idk if those are a little long
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: And could probably remove 02:55:012 (9) - NC
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: You can convert streams to slider instead of using them 1/4 reverse slider streams.
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: For curved streams
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: Makes the map a bit nicer and removes the repetitiveness.

Feel free to call me back for a mod in future, and goodluck with this :)
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero

Mili wrote:

In-game mod for Afk's rain.

Afk's Rain
2015-04-17 01:33 Mili: Lemme check in editor.
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: 00:12:708 (5) - Try move it closer so it's not a massive jump, or further away to make it a hyper if you want.
2015-04-17 01:35 afk98: gimme a moment computer being slow
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: K
2015-04-17 01:35 Mili: Lemme restart osu, snapping is being retarded,.
2015-04-17 01:37 Mili: Also, try use some different patterns.
2015-04-17 01:38 afk98: any specific places where patterns get repetitive?
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: 00:27:967 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: All or maybe most of your 1/4 reverse sliders are kinda the same.
2015-04-17 01:38 afk98: ah
2015-04-17 01:38 Mili: You could change some to triple notes or even change the sv for a wider slider.
2015-04-17 01:39 afk98: kewl.
2015-04-17 01:39 afk98: anything else?
2015-04-17 01:39 Mili: 00:48:876 (7) - this triple you could rever the direction, the 2 before it are the same direction.
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: 00:31:376 (9) - Change to NC and get rid of 00:31:490 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:42 afk98: NC?
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: 00:33:194 (5) - & 00:33:990 (1) - ^ same with NC
2015-04-17 01:42 Mili: NC = new combo.
2015-04-17 01:43 Mili: 00:50:921 (1) - remove NC?
2015-04-17 01:44 Mili: 01:04:330 (7) - Add NC here
2015-04-17 01:44 Mili: 01:11:603 (7) - ^
2015-04-17 01:45 Mili: 01:13:876 (1) - Remove NC
2015-04-17 01:45 Mili: 01:19:558 (9) - Add NC here and remove the one at 01:19:785 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:46 Mili: 01:20:467 (7) - Add NC, remove the NC at 01:21:603 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:46 Mili: General rule, new combo every 8 or so combo, 12 possible max.
2015-04-17 01:47 afk98: ah, okay.
2015-04-17 01:47 afk98: might have to go back and fix that in the std diffs
2015-04-17 01:47 Mili: NC here 01:25:012 (10) - and remove the one just after it
2015-04-17 01:48 Mili: 01:24:671 (9) - COnsider moving this note to 01:24:785 (9) - (the red line just after it) to match the song.
2015-04-17 01:48 Mili: If you do that, may as well change that to the NC instead of the (0)
2015-04-17 01:49 Mili: 01:35:467 (1) - remove NC, and add here: 01:37:285 (4) - then remove this NC 01:39:103 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:49 Mili: 01:44:558 (5) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: Yeah, I'm not sure how different the combo's are for std since they don't show up on a platter etc.
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: And explode after a NC
2015-04-17 01:50 afk98: also what diff would you rank this
2015-04-17 01:50 Mili: 01:57:058 (5) - Add NC and remove the NC at 01:57:512 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Atm it's sorta between rain and overdose.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: if i fix some of the repetitive 1/4 sliders
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Yeah, if you fix some of that it should fit under rain.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: 4* kind of implies it's rain but idk
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Dw about stars :p
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: I've seen some hell 4-5 star maps.
2015-04-17 01:51 afk98: k :P
2015-04-17 01:51 Mili: Rankings are retarded.
2015-04-17 01:52 Mili: 02:03:421 (7) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:52 Mili: 02:08:876 (7) - Change to NC and remove the one at 02:09:103 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:53 Mili: 02:28:421 (6) - Add NC
2015-04-17 01:53 afk98: you think those back and forths are unneccessarily long
2015-04-17 01:53 Mili: 02:42:512 (5) - Add NC.
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: Which back and forths?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: The one with the 2 notes then jump to 1?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: And repeat?
2015-04-17 01:54 Mili: 02:45:694 (7) - Add NC here.
2015-04-17 01:54 afk98: that, and
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: how do i write the things?
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: times?
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: Just click the note and copy it (ctrl+c)
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: Then paste in chat or forums.
2015-04-17 01:55 Mili: 02:52:285 (1) - remove NC and add NC 02:53:194 (1) -
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: 02:09:103 (2) - and 02:10:467 (6) -
2015-04-17 01:55 afk98: idk if those are a little long
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: And could probably remove 02:55:012 (9) - NC
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: You can convert streams to slider instead of using them 1/4 reverse slider streams.
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: For curved streams
2015-04-17 01:56 Mili: Makes the map a bit nicer and removes the repetitiveness.

Feel free to call me back for a mod in future, and goodluck with this :)
Thanks, made edits. :)
OSUjanaiKATSURAda
Hi afk

some suggestions on the first 2 diffs

General
Offset = 1372 → 90 bpm

Next timing section on 22705 00:22:705 - → 132 bpm → resnap all notes

add this to Tags : vocaloid paradichlorobenzene c6h4cl2 chemistry

Source : owatap

Note : i think there is many notes are unsnapped in ur map in all diffs and many unsnapped notes maybe check it

Benzene
00:01:375 (1) - The tickrate doesn't fit better to end the slider on the white tick and add a circle on the next red tick

00:04:041 (4) - ^

00:14:708 (2) - shorten this slider until here 00:15:208 - and reverse it then add a circle here 00:16:375 -

00:20:041 (5) - remove this circle and bring the start of the next spinner here and grab the slpinner end until here 00:22:740 -

00:23:649 - add a circle here

00:31:376 (1,2,3,4) - try a better design for this sliders

00:36:830 (1) - fix the shape of this slider to make it symmetric with the following slider

since its an easy diff its confusing to hit this 00:52:058 (6) - with that spacing i suggest to put it on 00:51:830 (5) -

and make it 00:52:058 (6) - a 1/2 reverse slider until here 00:53:194 - it looks better at this easy level and for new players

put this 00:53:649 (1) - on x308 y108 or just snap it as the recpmended distance snap

00:54:103 (2,3,4,5) - snap this pattern ^

01:07:285 (4) - shorten this slider to a 1/1 slider fits better

01:08:194 - and u can add a circle here

01:18:421 (5) - remove it

01:47:285 - add a circle here and snap the next circle

01:56:149 (3) - replace with a circle then followed by a 1/1 slider that will fill that empty part

01:57:967 (3,4,5,6) - remove this and keep reversing the slider before its hard for new players

01:59:785 (3,4,5) - ^ 1/2 reversed slider

02:00:467 (6) - reverse it

02:01:376 (7) - remove replace the end of it with a circle

02:07:740 - add a circle

02:09:558 - ^

02:10:012 (5) - increase the length to the white tick its off

The next Break (in all other diffs) is too long i suggest to map it or a part of it atleast

02:26:376 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better design and placement

02:33:421 (1,2,3) - ^ ^ Hard remove all 1/4 triples

02:55:012 (2) - a slider until the next white tick

Colorobenzene
00:05:000 (3) - snap it its off

Increase the SV to 1.50 atleast resnap slider again i think all of ur diffs

00:06:708 (4) - a reversed slider → 00:07:708 -

00:10:708 (1,2) - a 1/2 reverse slider

00:11:875 - add a circle

00:14:541 - ^

00:17:375 (5) - a reversed 1/1 slider

00:19:375 - add a circle

00:20:708 (1) - start this spinner from here 00:20:041 - and resnap the end of it

00:24:330 - Add a circle

00:26:376 (5) - make a 1/1 reverse slider instead to fit with vocals

00:32:285 - add a circle

00:32:740 (2) - ^

00:33:990 - 00:34:103 - 00:34:217 - add a triple ( circles )

00:51:149 - add circle

00:53:194 - ^

01:01:149 - a triple

01:06:830 - add circle on

01:06:830 - add 3 circles on white ticks

01:15:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - more distance between this triples

01:40:432 - add a circle ( im modding as ur timing on both diffs, so after u fix the timing u will realize the true timing i mean for each mod )

01:47:967 (9) - put it here 01:48:194 -

02:55:467 (5,6) - replace with a slider its better

i think this what i Could Help, Goodluck with it, its a nice map :D
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Hi afk

some suggestions on the first 2 diffs

General
Offset = 1372 → 90 bpm

Next timing section on 22705 00:22:705 - → 132 bpm → resnap all notes

add this to Tags : vocaloid paradichlorobenzene c6h4cl2 chemistry

Source : owatap

Note : i think there is many notes are unsnapped in ur map in all diffs and many unsnapped notes maybe check it

Benzene
00:01:375 (1) - The tickrate doesn't fit better to end the slider on the white tick and add a circle on the next red tick

00:04:041 (4) - ^

00:14:708 (2) - shorten this slider until here 00:15:208 - and reverse it then add a circle here 00:16:375 -

00:20:041 (5) - remove this circle and bring the start of the next spinner here and grab the slpinner end until here 00:22:740 -

00:23:649 - add a circle here

00:31:376 (1,2,3,4) - try a better design for this sliders

00:36:830 (1) - fix the shape of this slider to make it symmetric with the following slider

since its an easy diff its confusing to hit this 00:52:058 (6) - with that spacing i suggest to put it on 00:51:830 (5) -

and make it 00:52:058 (6) - a 1/2 reverse slider until here 00:53:194 - it looks better at this easy level and for new players

put this 00:53:649 (1) - on x308 y108 or just snap it as the recpmended distance snap

00:54:103 (2,3,4,5) - snap this pattern ^

01:07:285 (4) - shorten this slider to a 1/1 slider fits better

01:08:194 - and u can add a circle here

01:18:421 (5) - remove it

01:47:285 - add a circle here and snap the next circle

01:56:149 (3) - replace with a circle then followed by a 1/1 slider that will fill that empty part

01:57:967 (3,4,5,6) - remove this and keep reversing the slider before its hard for new players

01:59:785 (3,4,5) - ^ 1/2 reversed slider

02:00:467 (6) - reverse it

02:01:376 (7) - remove replace the end of it with a circle

02:07:740 - add a circle

02:09:558 - ^

02:10:012 (5) - increase the length to the white tick its off

The next Break (in all other diffs) is too long i suggest to map it or a part of it atleast

02:26:376 (2,3,4,5,6) - Better design and placement

02:33:421 (1,2,3) - ^ ^ Hard remove all 1/4 triples

02:55:012 (2) - a slider until the next white tick

Colorobenzene
00:05:000 (3) - snap it its off It goes with the hit when it's snapped with 1/8.

Increase the SV to 1.50 atleast resnap slider again i think all of ur diffs

00:06:708 (4) - a reversed slider → 00:07:708 -

00:10:708 (1,2) - a 1/2 reverse slider

00:11:875 - add a circle

00:14:541 - ^

00:17:375 (5) - a reversed 1/1 slider

00:19:375 - add a circle

00:20:708 (1) - start this spinner from here 00:20:041 - and resnap the end of it

00:24:330 - Add a circle

00:26:376 (5) - make a 1/1 reverse slider instead to fit with vocals

00:32:285 - add a circle

00:32:740 (2) - ^

00:33:990 - 00:34:103 - 00:34:217 - add a triple ( circles )

00:51:149 - add circle

00:53:194 - ^

01:01:149 - a triple

01:06:830 - add circle on

01:06:830 - add 3 circles on white ticks Wasn't it put in that way?

01:15:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - more distance between this triples

01:40:432 - add a circle ( im modding as ur timing on both diffs, so after u fix the timing u will realize the true timing i mean for each mod )

01:47:967 (9) - put it here 01:48:194 -

02:55:467 (5,6) - replace with a slider its better

i think this what i Could Help, Goodluck with it, its a nice map :D
Only changes I didn't accept are commented on above :)
Moeruattack
Modding your map, cause Nothing to do xD

So yes, since this is first start mapping,
I will try to fix some sounding and some notes issues

==============================
Benzene -Normal or Easy?-
For Easy and normal, stick the distance from 0x - 1.20x, more fits on Hard

But Idk which difficulty, but since its 2+ Stars, i think this is Normal Difficulty.

So here`s the Normal Modding,
Enable the Distance Snap for this mapping difficulty :)
00:02:708 - Make this slider and notes flow like this

00:05:375 - Same ^

00:06:708 - Make a Semi-Round Slider maybe? End the slider to 00:08:708 + Add Combo

00:31:376 - Try make this 4 of the repeated sliders not in the same area, make a gap of it using Distance snap.

00:35:012 - Add Combo
00:48:194 - Distance Spacing is high here, try make this a blanket

00:52:058 - It doesn`t fit in here. move to 00:52:285 and end this slider to 00:52:740.
00:53:194 - Add Note in this area.
01:00:921 and 01:01:376 and 01:02:285 - This a kinda high Distance, try switch 2 to 3 and 3 to 2, like this maybe?

01:04:558 - Add Combo
01:05:467 - No Combo
01:05:921 - Add Note in this timeline.
01:18:421 - Remove this note, kinda unnecessary.
01:37:399 - Thats weird, this slider is out of the White,make like this :)

01:42:171 - Wierd in this one, move this note to 01:42:058, cause it sounds more like it. Lower the Spacing. :(
01:43:990 - Same ^
01:55:467 - I like to see this notes like this timeline instead


Chlorobenzene (Hard?)
==========================
The Slider Distance isn`t justified a lot in here, make sure most of the distance must limit to 1.6x, unless this isn`t Hard Difficulty :)
Should recheck later on.

01:40:694 - You can try just make this slider into a Slider at 01:40:921 and 2 notes at 01:42:058 & 01:42:285

01:42:740 - Same ^
01:44:330 - Same ^
01:47:740 - Add Note
01:47:967 - Remove this note
02:55:921 and 02:56:376 - No need this
==========================
Paradichlorobenzene (Insane)
00:35:808 - Delete this note
00:36:717 - Delete this note too, its weird.

I think there`s some notes/sliders that isn`t sounds right, try fix the timing, sorry :(
==========================
Anti-chlorobenzene (Extra?)
I think the wallpaper is extremely small.

Same goes with Insane, it doesn`t feel right with the sound.... I can list all of it but might take too much fix :(
==========================
Afk`s Rain (I focus on this one :) )
ah....This feels Overdose to me, not sure why :(
But since this is Rain, I try fix 1 by 1

OD = AR, if AR is 9, make OD to 9.

00:12:041 - Add Combo
00:24:103 - Add Combo
00:27:967 till 00:29:558 - I Prefer if you can do this timeline, http://puu.sh/hkqGa/89c7b62bc0.jpg
also control the H-Dash, try do the slider like this:

(Copy Paste the 1st and 2nd Repeated Slider for the 3rd and 4th, and then Flip Horizontally.)
00:32:058 till 00:32:740 - Nope. This isn`t overdose.
00:35:240 till 00:35:921 - Again...Nope. This isn`t overdose.
01:19:444 and 01:19:671 - Difficulty Spikes here. Try make most of the notes to slider at this point.
01:20:467 - The end is unsnapped.

01:20:808 - Jump is wierd here, make like this :

01:28:876 - The end of the slider is unsnapped.
01:29:330 - Move this slider to 01:29:558.
02:01:149 till 02:02:285 - Again...Nope. This isn`t overdose.
02:30:240 and 02:31:149 - The end is unsnapped.
02:32:740 - same ^
02:43:876 - ^^
02:45:694 - ^^^
02:46:149 - ^^^^
02:46:603 - ^^^^^
02:50:467 - ^^^^^^

Overall need to recheck, the H-Dash is too high
========================

Nice song, map is old school design :)
But need some improvements,
Everytime timing change, remember to check this box from now on
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero

murutattack wrote:

Modding your map, cause Nothing to do xD

So yes, since this is first start mapping,
I will try to fix some sounding and some notes issues

==============================
Benzene -Normal or Easy?-
For Easy and normal, stick the distance from 0x - 1.20x, more fits on Hard

But Idk which difficulty, but since its 2+ Stars, i think this is Normal Difficulty.

So here`s the Normal Modding,
Enable the Distance Snap for this mapping difficulty :)
00:02:708 - Make this slider and notes flow like this

00:05:375 - Same ^

00:06:708 - Make a Semi-Round Slider maybe? End the slider to 00:08:708 + Add Combo

00:31:376 - Try make this 4 of the repeated sliders not in the same area, make a gap of it using Distance snap.

00:35:012 - Add Combo
00:48:194 - Distance Spacing is high here, try make this a blanket

00:52:058 - It doesn`t fit in here. move to 00:52:285 and end this slider to 00:52:740.
00:53:194 - Add Note in this area.
01:00:921 and 01:01:376 and 01:02:285 - This a kinda high Distance, try switch 2 to 3 and 3 to 2, like this maybe?

01:04:558 - Add Combo
01:05:467 - No Combo
01:05:921 - Add Note in this timeline.
01:18:421 - Remove this note, kinda unnecessary.
01:37:399 - Thats weird, this slider is out of the White,make like this :)

01:42:171 - Wierd in this one, move this note to 01:42:058, cause it sounds more like it. Lower the Spacing. :(
01:43:990 - Same ^
01:55:467 - I like to see this notes like this timeline instead


Chlorobenzene (Hard?)
==========================
The Slider Distance isn`t justified a lot in here, make sure most of the distance must limit to 1.6x, unless this isn`t Hard Difficulty :)
Should recheck later on.

01:40:694 - You can try just make this slider into a Slider at 01:40:921 and 2 notes at 01:42:058 & 01:42:285

01:42:740 - Same ^
01:44:330 - Same ^
01:47:740 - Add Note
01:47:967 - Remove this note
02:55:921 and 02:56:376 - No need this
==========================
Paradichlorobenzene (Insane)
00:35:808 - Delete this note
00:36:717 - Delete this note too, its weird.

I think there`s some notes/sliders that isn`t sounds right, try fix the timing, sorry :(
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Anti-chlorobenzene (Extra?)
I think the wallpaper is extremely small.

Same goes with Insane, it doesn`t feel right with the sound.... I can list all of it but might take too much fix :(
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Afk`s Rain (I focus on this one :) )
ah....This feels Overdose to me, not sure why :(
But since this is Rain, I try fix 1 by 1

OD = AR, if AR is 9, make OD to 9.

00:12:041 - Add Combo
00:24:103 - Add Combo
00:27:967 till 00:29:558 - I Prefer if you can do this timeline, http://puu.sh/hkqGa/89c7b62bc0.jpg
also control the H-Dash, try do the slider like this:

(Copy Paste the 1st and 2nd Repeated Slider for the 3rd and 4th, and then Flip Horizontally.)
00:32:058 till 00:32:740 - Nope. This isn`t overdose.
00:35:240 till 00:35:921 - Again...Nope. This isn`t overdose.
01:19:444 and 01:19:671 - Difficulty Spikes here. Try make most of the notes to slider at this point.
01:20:467 - The end is unsnapped.

01:20:808 - Jump is wierd here, make like this :

01:28:876 - The end of the slider is unsnapped.
01:29:330 - Move this slider to 01:29:558.
02:01:149 till 02:02:285 - Again...Nope. This isn`t overdose.
02:30:240 and 02:31:149 - The end is unsnapped.
02:32:740 - same ^
02:43:876 - ^^
02:45:694 - ^^^
02:46:149 - ^^^^
02:46:603 - ^^^^^
02:50:467 - ^^^^^^

Overall need to recheck, the H-Dash is too high
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Nice song, map is old school design :)
But need some improvements,
Everytime timing change, remember to check this box from now on
Editing right now.
-TakoYaki-
Hi there from my modding queue

[Paradichlorobenzene]
You should use DS on all the streams

00:12:041 (5) - change this to a 1/1 slider sounds better
00:16:708 - add a note here fits the song
00:26:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is really weird, I suggest you to remove 6,7,8,9 and replace 5 with a reverse 1/2 slider
00:28:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same problem, but you have to make the whole thing two ticks earlier
00:33:762 (13,14,15) - Overmapped here
00:35:012 (1,2) - They are continuous, you shouldn't put them too far away from each others
00:35:808 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^^^
00:36:717 (5,1) - ^^^
00:36:830 (1,2) - I suggest you to change this two to 1/2 slider,sounds weird
00:37:967 - add a note here
01:08:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 1/1 notes are kinda boring here, you can do something here
01:15:580 (8) - extra note here,remove it
01:15:808 (1) - Same
01:17:058 (9,10,11) - Too far
01:17:512 (12,13,14,1,2) - Too far
01:17:967 (2,3) - move 3 away from 2 since 3 is not a part of the stream
01:22:285 -The stream starting here should have a constant pattern of 3 notes+reverse
01:27:967 - add a note here
01:37:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds weird, I suggest you to add a note here 01:38:080, and add a 1/2 slider after it
01:39:899 (6,7) - Ultra Far Duplet here.
01:42:285 (10) - extra note here, remove it to match the vocal
01:44:103 (10) - ^^^
01:44:558 (1,2,3,4) - suddenly single notes after streams
01:55:467 - wrong offset starting from here
02:25:012 (1) - I think you wanna make a horizontal slider here
02:36:035 (13,1) - Suddenly stopped?
02:49:558 (5,6,7) - Wrong flow
02:52:967 (2) - placement?
03:04:103 (1) - Music still goes on after this spinner, you should continue mapping

[Anti-chlorobenzene]

Wrong offset

00:14:905 (8) - not necessary, since you are not matching the song with triplet here
00:16:071 (3) - too long, doesn't match the beat.
00:18:071 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Weird, suddenly a jump after a pause
00:46:603 (2,3,4) - placement
00:54:558 (9,1,2) - ^^^
01:02:512 (1,2,3,4) - Too close
01:06:944 (11) - this slider is too slow
02:01:603 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Nope, Don't place it like this
02:54:558 (1,2,3) - Too far
03:04:558 (10) - same issue, the song still goes on.

Placement and rhythm can be improved, Good Luck.
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero

-TakoYaki- wrote:

Hi there from my modding queue

[Paradichlorobenzene]
You should use DS on all the streams

00:12:041 (5) - change this to a 1/1 slider sounds better
00:16:708 - add a note here fits the song
00:26:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is really weird, I suggest you to remove 6,7,8,9 and replace 5 with a reverse 1/2 slider
00:28:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same problem, but you have to make the whole thing two ticks earlier
00:33:762 (13,14,15) - Overmapped here
00:35:012 (1,2) - They are continuous, you shouldn't put them too far away from each others
00:35:808 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^^^
00:36:717 (5,1) - ^^^
00:36:830 (1,2) - I suggest you to change this two to 1/2 slider,sounds weird
00:37:967 - add a note here
01:08:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 1/1 notes are kinda boring here, you can do something here
01:15:580 (8) - extra note here,remove it
01:15:808 (1) - Same
01:17:058 (9,10,11) - Too far
01:17:512 (12,13,14,1,2) - Too far
01:17:967 (2,3) - move 3 away from 2 since 3 is not a part of the stream
01:22:285 -The stream starting here should have a constant pattern of 3 notes+reverse
01:27:967 - add a note here
01:37:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds weird, I suggest you to add a note here 01:38:080, and add a 1/2 slider after it
01:39:899 (6,7) - Ultra Far Duplet here.
01:42:285 (10) - extra note here, remove it to match the vocal
01:44:103 (10) - ^^^
01:44:558 (1,2,3,4) - suddenly single notes after streams
01:55:467 - wrong offset starting from here
02:25:012 (1) - I think you wanna make a horizontal slider here
02:36:035 (13,1) - Suddenly stopped?
02:49:558 (5,6,7) - Wrong flow
02:52:967 (2) - placement?
03:04:103 (1) - Music still goes on after this spinner, you should continue mapping

[Anti-chlorobenzene]

Wrong offset

00:14:905 (8) - not necessary, since you are not matching the song with triplet here
00:16:071 (3) - too long, doesn't match the beat.
00:18:071 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Weird, suddenly a jump after a pause
00:46:603 (2,3,4) - placement
00:54:558 (9,1,2) - ^^^
01:02:512 (1,2,3,4) - Too close
01:06:944 (11) - this slider is too slow
02:01:603 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Nope, Don't place it like this
02:54:558 (1,2,3) - Too far
03:04:558 (10) - same issue, the song still goes on.

Placement and rhythm can be improved, Good Luck.
Thanks, taking all suggestions you made. :D
MBomb
Mod requested on Wild And Hyper's modding queue with me as a guest modder.

Afk's Rain
Maybe just call this difficulty Rain? As you're the person who submitted the map, you don't need to clarify it as your own.
Make OD9, the rules for ctb maps are that OD=AR, as it does not affect gameplay in any way.
Disable Countdown, Widescreen Support, and Letterbox during breaks in the design section of the song setup (do this with the standard difficulties too), as there is no storyboard or video.
Maybe add some tags? Idk what would be relevant, but stuff like Vocaloid could work (If this is a vocaloid song, I don't have much knowledge of these things), and more tags could be researched, for example the producer of the track.
I'd up the HP of this difficulty to HP6.
Slider Velocity is very low for a rain, but at the same time, this is personal preference of course.

00:05:375 (3) - I'd move this note forward to the 1/2 at 00:05:708 - , as this currently feels like a weird sound to emphasise, and missing the beat at the 1/2 also feels weird.
00:09:375 (5,1) - Swap NC (New Combo) here.
00:12:041 (4) - NC here.
00:14:708 (1) - This feels better ending at 00:15:708 - , for the guitar here.
00:16:375 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here.
00:17:375 (2) - This feels better ending at 00:18:375 - too, as the guitar plays here.
00:26:035 - Place a circle here to fit the vocals.
00:26:262 - ^
00:28:876 (3) - This slider ends slightly before the 1/1, but I feel it'd fit ending on the 1/1.
00:29:330 (4) - ^
00:35:012 - Place a circle on the 1/1 here, the vocal combined with the strong clap in the music feels weird not mapped.
00:36:603 (1) - I feel this'd fit better ending on the 1/1 too.
00:37:967 - Place a circle on the 1/2 here to fit with the music.
00:48:876 (7) - NC this please.
00:49:785 - Place an NCed circle on here, a circle on 00:49:899 - , and remove the NC on 00:50:012 (1) - .
00:52:740 (7) - Extend this slider to end at 00:53:421 - .
00:55:126 (8) - Remove this, feels weird to me.
00:57:058 (1) - Make this a slider like 00:57:512 (2) - , fits the music better.
00:58:421 (4) - I'd just get rid of the repeat here and extend the slider so it ends where it currently ends without a repeat.
01:04:103 - I'd place a circle on the 1/1 here, maybe even a hyper from 01:03:649 (4) - .
01:08:876 (3,4) - Having placements like this on a rain feels strange to me, but hmm, up to you if you want to change it.
01:09:785 (5) - NC.
01:11:490 - Place a circle here to fit the vocals.
01:16:149 (2) - This sounds better just ending at the 1/1 to me.
01:16:717 - Place a circle here to fit with vocals.
01:17:285 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider (so make it end on the red tick).
01:19:217 (6) - There isn't a sound here that I can hear, maybe remove this note?
01:20:126 (6) - Move this forward to the red tick, fits a lot better in my opinion.
01:20:467 (1) - Make this end at the 1/4 (blue tick), feels a lot better to me and it seems weird to have sliders this short.
01:20:921 (4) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
01:21:376 (1) - Make this a 1/4 slider.
01:22:399 - Maybe put a circle here for vocals?
01:23:421 (3) - Make this slider the same as the ones before and after.
01:25:012 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
01:25:240 - Place a circle here for vocals.
01:25:694 (4,5) - Change this to just a 1/2 slider.
01:28:876 (4) - Extend this so that it ends on the 1/1.
01:37:853 - Add a circle here for vocals.
01:37:967 - ^
01:38:194 (5) - I'd start this slider at 01:38:080 - as this is when the held note starts.
01:39:671 - Add a circle here.
01:39:785 - ^
01:39:899 - ^
01:40:012 (2) - Shorten this slider down to a 1/2 slider, and put a circle on 01:40:353 - to fit the vocals better.
01:41:830 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider and move 01:42:285 (6) - back to where this slider ends currently, fits the vocals better.
01:48:194 - I would map up to here and start the break here instead, seems to fit the song better to me.
01:57:853 - Add a circle here for vocals.
01:58:308 - ^
02:00:694 (8,1) - Swap NC here.
02:07:967 (6,1) - ^
02:10:012 (4) - NC here.
02:10:921 (7) - Make this a 1/2 slider repeating once instead.
02:27:967 (7,1) - Swap NC.
02:29:671 - Add an NCed circle here and remove the NC on 02:29:785 (1) - .
02:30:240 (4) - This sounds better ending on the 1/1 to me.
02:31:149 (8) - ^
02:32:740 (5) - End this on the 1/2, it sounds better.
02:34:785 (6) - Make this a 1/4 slider (until the blue tick) for the vocals.
02:36:376 (3,4) - Change these both to circles.
02:43:876 (1) - End this on the 1/1, sounds a lot better.
02:43:876 (1,2) - Swap NC here.
02:45:694 (1,2,3) - End all 3 of these on the 1/1.
02:45:694 (1,2) - Swap NC.
02:46:944 - Place a circle on the 1/4 here for vocals.
02:47:399 - ^
02:48:194 (4) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
02:48:649 (1,2,3) - Make this section mapped like 02:49:558 (1,2,3) - instead.
02:50:467 (1) - Extend this to end on the 1/4.
02:50:921 (4) - Make this a 1/2 slider.
02:52:740 (6) - ^
02:54:558 (6) - NC.

Alright, sorry for not doing a fully detailed mod, and sorry for how long it took, I've been busy with irl stuff recently but hopefully this is good.
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero
Edits made. Thanks :)
Moeruattack
I just thinking, this map, probably taken on this song link here right?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSGyuNBo3QE

Maybe you can convert this and add video for this map :)
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero

murutattack wrote:

I just thinking, this map, probably taken on this song link here right?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSGyuNBo3QE

Maybe you can convert this and add video for this map :)
Yeah. I'm hoping it won't derp up like last time.... :)
JBHyperion
I said I wouldn't mod this as I honestly can't tolerate the song at all, but then I felt bad, so I'll just give some general comments on the song folder, song setup, etc. don't feel you have to award kudosu if it's not helpful.

General Comments:
  1. Song Folder: BG image are incorrect sizes, which is unrankable - BG images should either be 1024x768 or 1366x768, so you should try and find some new ones - the current ones look really stretched. Also, the bitrate of your current mp3 is 128kbps, which is the lowest rankable quality. I can't seem to find a link to this song online, but if you can point me in the right direction, I might be able to get you a better, 192kbps version
  2. Song Setup: Combo colours 1 and 3 are very similar - consider making 3 into more of a pink colour maybe? Also, if you're going to use a video as you suggested, don't forget to enable widescreen support and letterbox during breaks
  3. Metadata: Remove paradichlorobenzene and anti-chlorobenzene from tags, since they're already in the song title. Also, Owata-P is not a source, it's the artist. Source is used to identify if the song was made famous by other media, such as a game or film soundtrack
  4. Difficulty Spread: Chlorobenzene (Normal?) is too easy, it should be between 1.5 and 2.25 stars - this will help even the spread out, since there is currently too big a gap between this diff and Paradichlorobenzene (Hard?). Also, the difference in difficulty between this diff and Anti-chlorobenzene (Insane)is very small. Consider making this diff harder, to at around 3.5 stars (if you don't make any significant changes to Hard). Lastly, I'd just call the CtB diff Rain, "Rain-Overdose" doesn't really make sense, since you'd just refer to it as a "Hard" Rain or an "Easy" Overdose
Sorry I can't mod the maps themselves, but I just can't listen to this song, and modding without sound is pretty pointless lol. Let me know if there's anything else I can help you with and I'll try my best. Best of luck!
JBHyperion
Whoops. Not sure why this double posted >.< /ignore
Topic Starter
Absolute Zero
Yeah, I was waiting for someone to help me technically, but I've always been afraid to ask. ;)
Kyujuroku 96
Short IRC mod about diff names
16:32:12 S_v_p_e_r The Paradichlorobenzene x Anti-chlorobenzene map
16:32:49 afk98 yeah?
16:34:40 afk98 well?
16:34:54 S_v_p_e_r Those diff names are not rankable
16:35:06 afk98 why?
16:35:08 afk98 too long?
16:35:15 S_v_p_e_r They should show the progression
16:35:22 afk98 oh.
16:35:28 S_v_p_e_r Easy normal Hard and so on
16:35:46 afk98 sorry gtg
16:35:49 afk98 class now
16:36:02 S_v_p_e_r Ok
16:36:03 Afk98 :No such nick.
17:43:22 S_v_p_e_r As I was saying only diff names that show difficulty progresion are rankable so fix them
17:43:48 S_v_p_e_r However the hardest difficulties of the map can have free name
17:44:48 afk98 okay
17:44:55 afk98 can i write Custom (Diff name)
17:45:02 afk98 like Benzene (Easy)?
17:45:16 S_v_p_e_r I suppose in that case yes
17:45:33 S_v_p_e_r Yeah you can
17:45:35 afk98 cool.
17:45:38 afk98 thx for reminding me
17:47:21 S_v_p_e_r You can name the hardest standard diff Paradichlorobenzene and the ctb one Anti-chlorobenzene
17:47:48 afk98 ag
17:47:51 afk98 ah*
17:48:12 S_v_p_e_r Also you can add Len Ren Kagamine to tags
17:48:29 afk98 :P
17:49:00 S_v_p_e_r Im going to leave you a post so you dont forget

I will check it out more thorougly when I have time. I cant really mod but I suppose every little help counts :)

No kudosu
WildOne94
Hey afk :3/ here for my part of the m4m

General
Background sizes should be 1366x768 or 1024x768.
You have a lot of breaks that are not really necessary since you can still hear music.
Each diff ends at a different time which is unrankable.
Check AiMod on diffs and for your easy/normal tick the tick box in nest to refresh and fix these DS problems. should be none in a small diff
try snap the break starts to places like here (this was at 00:38:649 (3) - )


Benzene
00:17:372 (4) - Maybe make this a reverse slider instead ?


00:27:740 (7,1,2,3,4) - having a straight line of circles like this looks lazy and boring to play. try curve the patterns a bit like this


00:31:376 (1,2,3,4) - 4 of these are a bit too much. try alter the pattern a bit

00:35:012 (1,2,1,2) - ^

00:37:740 (2) - either fix the overlap or position the start of the slider better so it starts at the end of (1)

00:47:285 (3,2) - fix overlap

00:50:012 (1,2,3) - make into a better looking triangle

00:53:649 (1) - Fix overlap

00:55:467 (4) - ^

00:55:921 (5,1) - ^

01:02:740 (1) - NC

01:18:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all of this is just straight like a box and should be curved round instead ;w;

01:29:558 (4) - add circle note here?

01:30:012 (5) - ^

01:45:921 (2,3,4,5) - Curve for better flow

01:48:194 (2) - add circle note with a finish ?

01:55:467 (1) - this section is weird because it goes from easy to much harder! try consider changing this bit (till 02:00:467 (4) - )

02:02:740 (1,2) - These are not the same are they >w< ? i can tell by the curve. copy and paste on of them and flip it for mirror

02:17:740 (5) - i know i mentioned in general but really why the sudden break here D: ?

02:26:376 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same reason as 01:55:467 (1) -

02:33:421 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (well if these were DS together then maybe it's okay)

02:40:921 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

02:50:921 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^

Cholrobenzene
00:05:038 (3) - funny timed note here but the sound is played at 00:04:983 (3) - meaning the snap divisor would need to be on 1/12

00:24:103 (1,2,3) - not snapped correctly and sounded a bit off time to me

00:30:955 (7) - ^

00:33:872 (4,5,6) - Not sure from the name of the diff but i presume this is a normal diff? this triplet note is too hard for normal and unexpected so delete 00:33:990 (5) - to make it easier

00:38:205 (3,4,5) - Resnap (3) to the white tick and just delete (4) and (5) since there is no strong sound to have them on

00:38:649 (4) - Could add a slider here ending on the timing point and start of break and have a finish on the end of it

00:51:149 (2,3,4) - resnap the distance between (1) and (2) (and the rest followed) and have them positioned like this. It also fixes the overlap with (1) and (4)


00:58:421 (3,4,1) - It would be better if these were curved more as it flows nicer


01:00:694 (1,2,3) - same reason as earlier. Too hard (remove 01:00:808 (2) - )

01:06:149 (6) - for a bit of a break here i would remove this note. Gives more emphasis on (7) then too

01:15:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Curve all these notes instead of a straight line please D:

01:15:467 (3) - not sure about if you are leaving hitsounds till later (so i won't mention anymore hitsound suggestions) but add a finish here.

01:17:740 (1) - fix overlap with (8) and (9)

01:21:376 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the patterns here get so spaced out now like it's an easy diff O.o try add some more

01:29:217 (7) - Remove thing again

01:29:558 (9) - add circle note here and 01:30:012 (10) - (but if you do then NC 01:29:103 (6) - )

01:33:649 (1,2,3,4) - this is such a basic and repetitive pattern. Try something new like curving around the screen or something

01:40:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh god it continues :(! please change more! look at other maps to get some ideas of variety

01:55:808 (3) - remove

01:56:149 (5) - I would change this part to something like this


01:57:285 (6) - try replace these notes with a reverse with 2 reverses on instead. Be a lot easier

01:59:444 (3,6) - remove again

02:00:921 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the random normal diff to easy change again. Consider adding notes and changing things here

02:25:921 (1) - i would just have a slider like this instead to make it easier


02:26:830 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - now it gets way to hard :c. Change this around with removing some of the blue notes like i have said >w< (also be more creative and not have just straight line patterns again)

02:35:921 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - ^

02:42:285 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

02:51:603 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

on the previous diff the song ended at 02:55:467 (5) - (which i mention in general)

Paradich... LONG DIFF NAME DIFF XD
00:05:038 (2) - Same problem as in last diff

00:15:372 (3) - should be at 00:15:205 (3) - instead

00:16:038 (4) - should be at 00:15:705 (4) - instead

00:16:316 (5) - should be a note here

00:29:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - won't mention this again but no straight lines :c

01:06:944 (7) - Nc

01:16:603 (6) - Too close to previous note

01:39:899 (6) - move to the red tick before it

01:59:785 (1) - NC

02:03:421 (7) - NC

02:10:467 (7) - ^

02:10:921 (9,10,11,12,13) - For a hard diff (i think) this is quite a big jump. Reduce please

02:30:808 (8) - NC

02:34:330 (7) - ^

02:42:058 (8) - ^

02:46:376 (8) - ^

Last spinner should start at 03:12:853 (1) -

EDIT : Right lets finish this now i have free time :) sorry for the big wait ;w;

Okay i am finished now :D. Won't be doing last diff as it is too hard for me and kinda strange for me to mod ;w;
Goodluck
Moeruattack
I like to re-mod when I have free time, maybe after cwc.
I think there`s some timing might check out

The 132.000bpm offset is 22705
But after change that, tick this box :

I figured out after I double check song, its kinda off.

No kudosu
Razor Sharp
Here is mod :D

GENERAL

Source: Why is the artist's name in the source? You should remive it.
Hitsounds: Add some hitsounds. ;w;

RAIN

00:35:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - Timing jump after a hyper jump is unrankable. Reduse distance on 00:35:467 (2,3) and 00:35:921 (4,5) -
00:38:080 (2,3,4,5) - Have (2) and (3) as hypers please. This is too hard for Rain, and some users may use multiple tries on this. Please change.
00:47:967 (1,2,3) - Move this more to the right to make it hyper to the next part.
01:22:399 (6) - Move this more to the left. This is a timing jump after the hyper.
02:47:740 (1,2,3,4) - There is a hyper from (2) too (3). Reduce distance!

Fun to play :3 Good luck!
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Absolute Zero
Apologies,
Razor Sharp: was finishing some other stuff, adding mods right now. I need to find someone to hitsound ;_;
muruattack: Will work on the timing.
Kyujuroku 96
Here is the video as I promised. If there is something wrong about it, let me know and I will fix it. Dont forget to add it to all diffs!!! Sorry for the delay
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