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ChouCho - BLESS YoUr NAME

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Shad0w1and
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Shad0w1and
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月9日 at 1:42:12

Artist: ChouCho
Title: BLESS YoUr NAME
Source: ハイスクールD×D BorN
Tags: highschool high school dxd opening ちょうちょ m1223961117 DreaM117er
BPM: 190
Filesize: 21246kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Insane (4.07 stars, 295 notes)
  2. Hard (2.9 stars, 224 notes)
  3. Normal (1.82 stars, 121 notes)
  4. WHAT'S YoUr NAME (5 stars, 379 notes)
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High School DxD BorN
Anime OP Theme | 2015

117's Insane By DreaM117er

ED mapped by xxdeathx

Thanks jonathanlfj, handsome and Hollow Wings for pushing this map forward.
===============
中文译名：
為妳祈福
crf=20
把别人坑上船了怎么能坑！就算是Kibbleru，我也肛给你看！肛不动Orz
留个念：初版Insane，无test play看着auto打图做出来的。做得真TM好。http://puu.sh/h9uUz/33ae8aedcd.zip
玛德这游戏能玩？！自己做的图打球不动，谢特。
Last edited by Shad0w1and , edited 118 times in total.
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
完成了，加上音效

http://puu.sh/h3wNL/6a55a75eea.zip

如果Spread不行的話，把我的難度CS改成4，難度名稱改成117's Hard+

Edit:

懶的改，難度在這:
117's Hard+
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: optc.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65938
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22832,23938,67517
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:BLESS YoUr NAME
TitleUnicode:BLESS YoUr NAME
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:117's Hard+
Source:ハイスクールD×D BorN
Tags:highschool OP
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
From qq群 m4m =w=
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/290683
[Insane]
  1. Letterbox設定調成0
  2. 00:01:517 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
    00:11:622 (1,2,3,4) - 滑條角度最好對稱會好看點
    00:12:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這幾個跳說真有點像亂放的，雖然是日本流但是flow的不太好，可以試下用不同的梗，例如
    大型三角梗（圖中5和8重疊）
    SPOILER

    對跳梗（比較考驗玩家讀圖）
    SPOILER

    也是比較對稱的三角跳
    SPOILER
    總之放點對稱點的跳玩起來和看起來都會不錯
    00:19:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個梗試試我上面說的對跳梗，會挺好玩的
    00:32:622 (4,5) - blanket吧，這樣放不好看，順便後面三角跳換個角度flow
    01:04:595 (6) - 這連打凸出來了
    01:07:517 (2,3,4,5,6) - 放對稱點吧
    01:19:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這個也用對跳梗吧
  3. 00:57:569 (2) - 這個要注意，擋HP條了
    01:24:885 (1) - ^
  4. 整體來說排版整潔點會更好，日本流想做的好也要對稱
[117's Hard]
  1. hard排版相對整潔
  2. 00:57:095 (1,2) - 滑條尾的角度對著2會好點吧，大概逆時針15度就好看了
    01:20:306 (3,5) - blanket
  3. 摸不出什麼了，只能說nice diff√
[Normal]
  1. Letterbox設定調成0
  2. normal排版相對也整潔
    00:17:938 - 到00:18:885 - 這裡這麼多音不該空掉吧
    00:38:780 (1) - 擋HP條
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Last edited by Kencho , edited 1 time in total.
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

ken2010123 wrote:

From qq群 m4m =w=
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/290683
  • [Insane]
  1. Letterbox設定調成0
  2. 00:01:517 (1,2) - 沒blanket好
    00:11:622 (1,2,3,4) - 滑條角度最好對稱會好看點
    00:12:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這幾個跳說真有點像亂放的，雖然是日本流但是flow的不太好，可以試下用不同的梗，例如
    大型三角梗（圖中5和8重疊）
    SPOILER

    對跳梗（比較考驗玩家讀圖）
    SPOILER

    也是比較對稱的三角跳
    SPOILER
    總之放點對稱點的跳玩起來和看起來都會不錯
    ^一切爲了讀圖，實際打的時候我這種最好讀，先不改
    00:19:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個梗試試我上面說的對跳梗，會挺好玩的
    ^先不改
    00:32:622 (4,5) - blanket吧，這樣放不好看，順便後面三角跳換個角度flow
    01:04:595 (6) - 這連打凸出來了
    01:07:517 (2,3,4,5,6) - 放對稱點吧
    01:19:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這個也用對跳梗吧
  3. 00:57:569 (2) - 這個要注意，擋HP條了
    01:24:885 (1) - ^
  4. 整體來說排版整潔點會更好，日本流想做的好也要對稱
  • [Normal]
  1. Letterbox設定調成0
  2. normal排版相對也整潔
    00:17:938 - 到00:18:885 - 這裡這麼多音不該空掉吧
    ^主攻vocal
    00:38:780 (1) - 擋HP條
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DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
效率。4.06...我耍狠CS5上陣 :)

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120,24,68780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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88,328,69411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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88,220,74701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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328,200,76517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Narcissu
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M4M ： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293888

General

  1. 01:05:780 - 建議的預覽點，保證能聽清楚人聲
  2. mp3 → 192 kbps
  3. delete soft-hitnormal4.wav , drum-sliderslide2 & soft-sliderslide4 , 你完全沒有使用它們
  4. 建議四色

Insane

00:04:359 - 00:04:832 - 00:05:306 - 加圈或者00:04:201 (2,4,6) - 改成1/2滑條

01:20:148 - 01:20:622 - 01:21:095 - ^

00:07:359 (3) - 1/2 slider

額……我不清楚你為什麼不跟全音樂，空掉1/4就算了……但是1/2甚至1/1都空掉非常影響手感，本來完整連貫的音樂打起來卻斷斷續續的很奇怪

00:12:885 - 這後面一堆太難了

00:05:464 (1) - 儘量不要使用超過1/1的滑條除非很適合

00:08:464 (3,4,5) - 儘量不要堆疊超過兩個的1/2，這不僅浪費排版，而且音樂並沒有停頓

normal 和 hard 一堆橫平豎直我覺得你根本沒有認真做，尤其是hard 的版面非常亂

gd 的insane 挺不錯的 ，01:08:780 - 似乎漏了個clap
Shad0w1and
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Narcissu wrote:

M4M ： https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293888

General

  1. 01:05:780 - 建議的預覽點，保證能聽清楚人聲
  2. mp3 → 192 kbps
    ^192k音质比不上vbr的这个
  3. delete soft-hitnormal4.wav , drum-sliderslide2 & soft-sliderslide4 , 你完全沒有使用它們
    ^删掉了4的两个
  4. 建議四色^不

Insane

00:04:359 - 00:04:832 - 00:05:306 - 加圈或者00:04:201 (2,4,6) - 改成1/2滑條
^vocal减速降调，故意漏音保证衔接

01:20:148 - 01:20:622 - 01:21:095 - ^
理由相同，vocal减速时的转移track的overmap必须继续考虑vocal的节奏放缓，否则会违和
00:07:359 (3) - 1/2 slider
^一样理由
額……我不清楚你為什麼不跟全音樂，空掉1/4就算了……但是1/2甚至1/1都空掉非常影響手感，本來完整連貫的音樂打起來卻斷斷續續的很奇怪
^vocal>drum>rhythm
00:12:885 - 這後面一堆太難了
^使用的对读图帮助最高的排列法，应该相当容易了
00:05:464 (1) - 儘量不要使用超過1/1的滑條除非很適合

00:08:464 (3,4,5) - 儘量不要堆疊超過兩個的1/2，這不僅浪費排版，而且音樂並沒有停頓

normal 和 hard 一堆橫平豎直我覺得你根本沒有認真做，尤其是hard 的版面非常亂

gd 的insane 挺不錯的 ，01:08:780 - 似乎漏了個clap
已确认并加上了
嗯。。谢谢摸。。但估计按人声下的人很少并且很少有人做好，所以没有标准供你参考。但就我找多人测试的结果大家都觉得打得很顺利，与vocal衔接恰到好处
Shad0w1and
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Fine. I am ok with that now
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Narcissu
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跟人聲是最廣泛的做法，按人声下的人很多并且很多人做的很好。比如 http://osu.ppy.sh/b/425385 的kiai 段落。但是這個圖的 kiai 沒有超過1/2的空拍。

找Fycho ，lkx_Shore 去試圖，他們要是說你“与vocal衔接恰到好处” 我把星全給你

00:04:359 - 00:04:832 - 00:05:306 - 加圈或者00:04:201 (2,4,6) - 改成1/2滑條
^vocal减速降调，故意漏音保证衔接

人聲是升調。我不明白減速是什麼意思，希望你能解釋一下。我想如果漏音是明智的選擇，作者一開始就不會下這個鼓點，為什麼你認為你的選擇比作曲家的會要好。

另外01:21:727 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這段你似乎稍微跟了下鼓點，對於鼓點來說基本都是白線downbeat，所以01:21:885 (6) - 這個滑條是錯的，這還同時導致了01:22:122 (7,8,9,1) - 四連打的詭異情況

^vocal>drum>rhythm

vocal>drum這點我也贊同，但是首先，osu是個 rhythm game …… 然後vocal和drum 都是屬於節奏內的。換個比喻就是你的說法是 “蘿莉 > 禦姐 > 女性”

00:12:885 - 這後面一堆太難了
^使用的对读图帮助最高的排列法，应该相当容易了

不管你用什麼排列什麼flow，實實在在的間距在哪裡，毋庸置疑這個梗是你全圖最難的梗，你無法找到任何一個比它占星級比重更高的梗。的確可以利用讀圖和flow在低星級情況下超過這個過梗的難度，然而你的圖裏面並沒有……另外最重要的不是梗的難度而是梗的位置，我想知道為什麼你要在前奏下一個，難度甩副歌一條街的梗
Shad0w1and
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Narcissu wrote:

跟人聲是最廣泛的做法，按人声下的人很多并且很多人做的很好。比如 http://osu.ppy.sh/b/425385 的kiai 段落。但是這個圖的 kiai 沒有超過1/2的空拍。

找Fycho ，lkx_Shore 去試圖，他們要是說你“与vocal衔接恰到好处” 我把星全給你

00:04:359 - 00:04:832 - 00:05:306 - 加圈或者00:04:201 (2,4,6) - 改成1/2滑條
^vocal减速降调，故意漏音保证衔接

人聲是升調。我不明白減速是什麼意思，希望你能解釋一下。我想如果漏音是明智的選擇，作者一開始就不會下這個鼓點，為什麼你認為你的選擇比作曲家的會要好。
你可以试试把这里音填满，嘈杂程度可以直接压住vocal，所以放空。
为什么是减速降调？　　その胸の声　（7个音节7个拍）　聞 （1个音节2个拍） こえ　（两个音节1.5拍）　だら（两个音节4.5拍）
何度でも（加强重音，并拉长，那么这句的note摆点不可能比上句少太多，我这部分不是按鼓声map的节奏段，鼓声只是点缀）
你这种下法确实更安全些
另外01:21:727 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這段你似乎稍微跟了下鼓點，對於鼓點來說基本都是白線downbeat，所以01:21:885 (6) - 這個滑條是錯的，這還同時導致了01:22:122 (7,8,9,1) - 四連打的詭異情況
这个部分我伤了很久的脑筋，因为那里确实是没有音的，最后是抄的kibbleru那边的梗，用起来很顺
^vocal>drum>rhythm

vocal>drum這點我也贊同，但是首先，osu是個 rhythm game …… 然後vocal和drum 都是屬於節奏內的。換個比喻就是你的說法是 “蘿莉 > 禦姐 > 女性”

00:12:885 - 這後面一堆太難了
^使用的对读图帮助最高的排列法，应该相当容易了

不管你用什麼排列什麼flow，實實在在的間距在哪裡，毋庸置疑這個梗是你全圖最難的梗，你無法找到任何一個比它占星級比重更高的梗。的確可以利用讀圖和flow在低星級情況下超過這個過梗的難度，然而你的圖裏面並沒有……另外最重要的不是梗的難度而是梗的位置，我想知道為什麼你要在前奏下一個，難度甩副歌一條街的梗
我并不认为这一段梗很难，实际上这一段的确难度加成高，但对我来说并不是难点，摆放清晰的跳对于很多人来说比连打接跳简单多了。并且我打这么多图实际上很多TV Size的难点本身就不在Kiai中。再者我找人测的他们认为最难的部分就是kiai那附近那几个stream接跳，前奏小跳几下根本不是事（对我也一样）
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DreaM117er
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現在又是什麼狀況... :?

我想我必須了解為什麼會吵成這樣
Shad0w1and
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m1223961117 wrote:

現在又是什麼狀況... :?

我想我必須了解為什麼會吵成這樣
没有吵吧。。。只是我倾向的是用我感觉恰当的下点密度来表达和突出人声，感觉会和乐器下点方式不一样吧。我都是会先听很多次确定下点密度不会影响到人声再开始排。我只是阐明各人的下点不一样而已。并没有吵什么
DreaM117er
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Shad0w1and wrote:

没有吵吧。。。只是我倾向的是用我感觉恰当的下点密度来表达和突出人声，感觉会和乐器下点方式不一样吧。我都是会先听很多次确定下点密度不会影响到人声再开始排。我只是阐明各人的下点不一样而已。并没有吵什么
也就是說只是搭配人聲和樂器的下點不同在做辯論而已囉
我想最主要應該是樂器和人聲交疊的地方比較不好取捨而已吧

之後在線的時候再跟你說這個
liangv587
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[Insane]
00:04:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏有点乱，最好的解决办法00:04:201 (2,3,5) - 删了，或者00:04:201 (2,5) -
01:19:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同理
00:47:938 (3,1) - 这样试试http://puu.sh/h8yWi.jpg
01:17:464 (1) - 有点多余

[Hard]
可以用ar7
01:21:727 (8,9) - 向左移动些flow更顺http://puu.sh/h8zsQ.jpg

[Normal]
可以用ar5

美丽，太水了
Shad0w1and
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01:17:464 (1) - 有点多余
^这个没改，其他都改了

to Narcissu
你也许是对的。。想了想还是改了那段
Iceskulls
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[general]
  1. is the check in "enable countdown" intentionally? btw I can't see something like countdown at the beginning of the map when I try to play this
[extra]
  1. 00:14:938 (6,7) - the flow here is pretty awkward imo ,would flow better if you angle them a bit
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:674 (3,4,5) - a bit similiar to what I said above , I'd move (5) to around x36 y122 that would make flow here 00:19:832 (4,5) - a bit better
  3. 00:24:885 (2) - this could play better if it was used for 1/2 here 00:24:727 - , I usually misunderstanding this as 1/2 jumps, it would make sense to not suddenly change rhythm to 1/1 pattern so fast like this and I'd start using 1/1 from here 00:25:517 -
  4. 00:27:885 (1) - the curve or somthing idk at the tail is not really good imo this would be a bit better
    SPOILER
  5. 00:41:938 - maybe you can increase volume to about 40% the soft-normalhit here a bit inaudible for me
  6. 00:58:517 (2,3) - I feel like this part would sound cool if you use slider here instead the tone of music here pretty deserve for holding feeling imo
  7. 01:05:148 (5,6) - similiar to above , you did pretty good here 01:04:674 (1) - so why not use slider here 01:05:148 (5,6) - instead ?
[117]
  1. 01:04:674 - you can put note here and start spinner here 01:04:753 - instead would make the rhythm sound better a bit
[hard]
  1. 00:20:622 (7) - nc? this kinda feel like a new part in music now for me
  2. 00:26:780 (1,2) - pretty sharp spacing for hard diff , I'd lower spacing a bit here to around 1.5x
  3. 00:31:674 (4,1) - triplet would work better here imo
  4. 00:53:306 (2) - overlap hp bar, move down a bit ?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:58:043 (3,4) - similiar to 00:26:780 (1,2) - lower spacing a bit is not a bad idea here
  6. 01:09:727 (1,2) - this jumps is a bit big for hard imo ,lower spacing a bit ?
  7. 01:12:253 (4,5) - ^
  8. 01:28:674 (1,2,1,2) - this kinda feel a bit weird for me here , I'd use two 1/2 sliders here
    SPOILER
[normal]
  1. 00:20:148 (3,5) - not a good overlap in lower diff imo , player might get confused by this imo
  2. 00:22:832 (3,4,5,6) - make them not nearly touched each other would make the flow here better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:34:201 (3) - x392 y164 ? would make this 00:33:569 (2,3) - flow better
  4. 01:12:726 (2) - object end is not snapped
  5. 01:15:884 (3,4) - this rhythm sound better imo
    SPOILER
  6. 01:27:727 (1) - end this spinner at 01:29:148 - like the other diffs

    for some reason I'm a bit aware that you might need easy diff since some elements in normal might be too hard for beginner like
    00:19:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - (continuous usage of 1/2 sliders) something like this would sound reasonable for beginner http://puu.sh/h9RGL/71ed242e8c.png if you don't know what rhythm to choose
    00:36:727 (3,4,5,6) - (continuous usage of 1/2 )
    00:40:832 (1,2,3,4) - (continuous stack)
    just my opinion tho
good luck :)
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]
  1. is the check in "enable countdown" intentionally? btw I can't see something like countdown at the beginning of the map when I try to play this
[117]
  1. 01:04:674 - you can put note here and start spinner here 01:04:753 - instead would make the rhythm sound better a bit >OK
good luck :)
Thanks your mod :)

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Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]
  1. is the check in "enable countdown" intentionally? btw I can't see something like countdown at the beginning of the map when I try to play this
[extra]
  1. 00:14:938 (6,7) - the flow here is pretty awkward imo ,would flow better if you angle them a bit
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:674 (3,4,5) - a bit similiar to what I said above , I'd move (5) to around x36 y122 that would make flow here 00:19:832 (4,5) - a bit better
    ^no change for this
  3. 00:24:885 (2) - this could play better if it was used for 1/2 here 00:24:727 - , I usually misunderstanding this as 1/2 jumps, it would make sense to not suddenly change rhythm to 1/1 pattern so fast like this and I'd start using 1/1 from here 00:25:517 -
    ^changed DS
  4. 00:27:885 (1) - the curve or somthing idk at the tail is not really good imo this would be a bit better
    SPOILER
  5. 00:41:938 - maybe you can increase volume to about 40% the soft-normalhit here a bit inaudible for me
  6. 00:58:517 (2,3) - I feel like this part would sound cool if you use slider here instead the tone of music here pretty deserve for holding feeling imo
  7. 01:05:148 (5,6) - similiar to above , you did pretty good here 01:04:674 (1) - so why not use slider here 01:05:148 (5,6) - instead ?
[hard]
  1. 00:20:622 (7) - nc? this kinda feel like a new part in music now for me
    ^no change
  2. 00:26:780 (1,2) - pretty sharp spacing for hard diff , I'd lower spacing a bit here to around 1.5x
  3. 00:31:674 (4,1) - triplet would work better here imo
    ^bpm to high, would do if its 170bpm
  4. 00:53:306 (2) - overlap hp bar, move down a bit ?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:58:043 (3,4) - similiar to 00:26:780 (1,2) - lower spacing a bit is not a bad idea here
  6. 01:09:727 (1,2) - this jumps is a bit big for hard imo ,lower spacing a bit ?
  7. 01:12:253 (4,5) - ^
  8. 01:28:674 (1,2,1,2) - this kinda feel a bit weird for me here , I'd use two 1/2 sliders here
    SPOILER
    ^no change
[normal]
  1. 00:20:148 (3,5) - not a good overlap in lower diff imo , player might get confused by this imo
  2. 00:22:832 (3,4,5,6) - make them not nearly touched each other would make the flow here better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:34:201 (3) - x392 y164 ? would make this 00:33:569 (2,3) - flow better
  4. 01:12:726 (2) - object end is not snapped
  5. 01:15:884 (3,4) - this rhythm sound better imo
    SPOILER
  6. 01:27:727 (1) - end this spinner at 01:29:148 - like the other diffs

    for some reason I'm a bit aware that you might need easy diff since some elements in normal might be too hard for beginner like
    00:19:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - (continuous usage of 1/2 sliders) something like this would sound reasonable for beginner http://puu.sh/h9RGL/71ed242e8c.png if you don't know what rhythm to choose
    00:36:727 (3,4,5,6) - (continuous usage of 1/2 )
    00:40:832 (1,2,3,4) - (continuous stack)
    just my opinion tho
    ^I think I will fine, and i lowered the general setting a bit.
good luck :)
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tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
21:28 Shad0w1and: 我是学的日本流乱放2333希望你不觉得太丑
21:28 tutuhaha: 排版的话....其实就我来看还ok啊
21:29 tutuhaha: 但是音效有点儿..........
21:29 tutuhaha: 刺耳
21:29 Shad0w1and: lol
21:29 Shad0w1and: 我觉得好听啊
21:29 tutuhaha: 至少再多加一种whistle我觉得
21:29 tutuhaha: 嘛
21:29 tutuhaha: 你希望IRC？
21:30 Shad0w1and: 都行
21:30 tutuhaha: IRC吧IRC
21:30 Shad0w1and: 嗯
21:30 tutuhaha: 00:08:780 (5,1) - 这俩稍微拉开一点点
21:30 tutuhaha: 靠的有点太近了
21:31 tutuhaha: extra
21:31 Shad0w1and: 不能再远了
21:31 Shad0w1and: 3.2ds了
21:31 tutuhaha: 00:14:622 (4,5) - 换下位置然后4稍微拉近一点
21:31 tutuhaha: .........
21:31 Shad0w1and: 测试play的之前这里都100，所以拉近了
21:31 tutuhaha: 这样
21:32 tutuhaha: 你往左边拉动一格
21:32 tutuhaha: 我的意思是
21:32 tutuhaha: 格子用
21:32 tutuhaha: 最小的那个
21:33 tutuhaha: 00:16:201 (5) - 这个可能隔得有点太远了
21:33 tutuhaha: 00:23:306 (3,6) - 往下一点碰到hp了已经
21:35 tutuhaha: 00:34:832 (2) - 这个也是
21:36 tutuhaha: 00:41:306 (4,5,6,7) - 这边我总觉得应该要左右跳
21:37 Shad0w1and: 我感觉应该还好
21:37 Shad0w1and: 改了一部分
21:37 tutuhaha: 00:46:517 (2,3,4) - 这里建议2和4换位然后34换位
21:39 Shad0w1and: 这里没问题，测试中都很顺
21:40 tutuhaha: 01:21:569 (x) - 这里空拍很奇怪
21:40 Shad0w1and: 你说滑条？
21:40 tutuhaha: 01:28:517 (2,3) - 这俩音删掉后感觉ok
21:41 tutuhaha: 这个时间点你没放东西
21:42 Shad0w1and: 应该加滑条的意思？
21:42 tutuhaha: 恩
21:42 tutuhaha: 117是中国的？
21:42 tutuhaha: 那我这里也顺便摸他的了
21:42 Shad0w1and: 台湾
21:43 tutuhaha: 会读中文就行
21:43 Shad0w1and: 那个你分开贴出来吧，他更新
21:43 tutuhaha: 行
21:43 tutuhaha: 这部分你就不用回答了
21:43 tutuhaha: 我等会贴上去的时候粗体一下
21:43 tutuhaha: 首要槽点1就是一个insane的圈圈居然比extra还小...........................
21:44 Shad0w1and: 他的难度基本都是做出来就是rank水平的
21:44 Shad0w1and: 那个是我调的cs
21:44 Shad0w1and: 为了spread
21:44 Shad0w1and: Orz
21:46 tutuhaha: 01:27:885 (3,4) - 这里这个我觉得还是用circle+slider比较好
21:46 tutuhaha: 恩然后没了
21:46 tutuhaha: 但是这个圈圈这个必须改...........
21:46 tutuhaha: QAT很注重"面子"问题
21:47 tutuhaha: 就难度设定这块必须一定要递增，懂？
21:47 Shad0w1and: 嗯，他本来做的3.7星左右的hard
21:47 tutuhaha: 然后你音效稍微看看他的改一下
21:47 tutuhaha: 那就让他修修呗
21:47 Shad0w1and: 我感觉太吵了点LOL
21:48 tutuhaha: ..我觉得你的那个太吵了点儿
21:48 Shad0w1and: 修了，最后是4.0
21:48 Shad0w1and: 我的？Orz
21:48 Shad0w1and: 我降低点
21:48 tutuhaha: 他那个因为用了不只一个whistle来达到whistle的效果
21:48 tutuhaha: 所以听起来很丰富
21:48 Shad0w1and: 主要是铃声？
21:48 tutuhaha: 你的是一直用那一个，所以就变得很刺耳
21:48 tutuhaha: 大概就是这样吧..
21:49 Shad0w1and: 好
21:49 tutuhaha: 恩当然不排除有音量的问题
21:50 tutuhaha: 00:16:595 (6) - hard，这里就别这样了...删了删了多不善良
21:50 tutuhaha: 00:22:832 (3) - 拉低点，HP，你懂
21:50 Shad0w1and: 好
21:53 tutuhaha: 总而言之把你难度全部碰到HP的给我拉低
21:53 tutuhaha: 还有几个我没说但是看AUTO的时候绝对看到了
21:53 tutuhaha: 其他也没啥了
21:53 tutuhaha: mod找够找我recheck
21:53 Shad0w1and: 好
21:54 tutuhaha: 音效部分再搞搞
21:54 tutuhaha: hard可能要删点节奏
21:54 tutuhaha: normal把迷惑性摆法都搞掉
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and
SPOILER

tutuhaha wrote:

21:28 Shad0w1and: 我是学的日本流乱放2333希望你不觉得太丑
21:28 tutuhaha: 排版的话....其实就我来看还ok啊
21:29 tutuhaha: 但是音效有点儿..........
21:29 tutuhaha: 刺耳
21:29 Shad0w1and: lol
21:29 Shad0w1and: 我觉得好听啊
21:29 tutuhaha: 至少再多加一种whistle我觉得
21:29 tutuhaha: 嘛
21:29 tutuhaha: 你希望IRC？
21:30 Shad0w1and: 都行
21:30 tutuhaha: IRC吧IRC
21:30 Shad0w1and: 嗯
21:30 tutuhaha: 00:08:780 (5,1) - 这俩稍微拉开一点点
21:30 tutuhaha: 靠的有点太近了
21:31 tutuhaha: extra
21:31 Shad0w1and: 不能再远了
21:31 Shad0w1and: 3.2ds了
21:31 tutuhaha: 00:14:622 (4,5) - 换下位置然后4稍微拉近一点
21:31 tutuhaha: .........
21:31 Shad0w1and: 测试play的之前这里都100，所以拉近了
21:31 tutuhaha: 这样
21:32 tutuhaha: 你往左边拉动一格
21:32 tutuhaha: 我的意思是
21:32 tutuhaha: 格子用
21:32 tutuhaha: 最小的那个
21:33 tutuhaha: 00:16:201 (5) - 这个可能隔得有点太远了
21:33 tutuhaha: 00:23:306 (3,6) - 往下一点碰到hp了已经
21:35 tutuhaha: 00:34:832 (2) - 这个也是
21:36 tutuhaha: 00:41:306 (4,5,6,7) - 这边我总觉得应该要左右跳
21:37 Shad0w1and: 我感觉应该还好
21:37 Shad0w1and: 改了一部分
21:37 tutuhaha: 00:46:517 (2,3,4) - 这里建议2和4换位然后34换位
21:39 Shad0w1and: 这里没问题，测试中都很顺
21:40 tutuhaha: 01:21:569 (x) - 这里空拍很奇怪
21:40 Shad0w1and: 你说滑条？
21:40 tutuhaha: 01:28:517 (2,3) - 这俩音删掉后感觉ok
21:41 tutuhaha: 这个时间点你没放东西
21:42 Shad0w1and: 应该加滑条的意思？
21:42 tutuhaha: 恩
21:42 tutuhaha: 117是中国的？
21:42 tutuhaha: 那我这里也顺便摸他的了
21:42 Shad0w1and: 台湾
21:43 tutuhaha: 会读中文就行
21:43 Shad0w1and: 那个你分开贴出来吧，他更新
21:43 tutuhaha: 行
21:43 tutuhaha: 这部分你就不用回答了
21:43 tutuhaha: 我等会贴上去的时候粗体一下
21:43 tutuhaha: 首要槽点1就是一个insane的圈圈居然比extra还小...........................
21:44 Shad0w1and: 他的难度基本都是做出来就是rank水平的
21:44 Shad0w1and: 那个是我调的cs
21:44 Shad0w1and: 为了spread
21:44 Shad0w1and: Orz
21:46 tutuhaha: 01:27:885 (3,4) - 这里这个我觉得还是用circle+slider比较好
21:46 tutuhaha: 恩然后没了
21:46 tutuhaha: 但是这个圈圈这个必须改...........
21:46 tutuhaha: QAT很注重"面子"问题
21:47 tutuhaha: 就难度设定这块必须一定要递增，懂？
21:47 Shad0w1and: 嗯，他本来做的3.7星左右的hard
21:47 tutuhaha: 然后你音效稍微看看他的改一下
21:47 tutuhaha: 那就让他修修呗
21:47 Shad0w1and: 我感觉太吵了点LOL
21:48 tutuhaha: ..我觉得你的那个太吵了点儿
21:48 Shad0w1and: 修了，最后是4.0
21:48 Shad0w1and: 我的？Orz
21:48 Shad0w1and: 我降低点
21:48 tutuhaha: 他那个因为用了不只一个whistle来达到whistle的效果
21:48 tutuhaha: 所以听起来很丰富
21:48 Shad0w1and: 主要是铃声？
21:48 tutuhaha: 你的是一直用那一个，所以就变得很刺耳
21:48 tutuhaha: 大概就是这样吧..
21:49 Shad0w1and: 好
21:49 tutuhaha: 恩当然不排除有音量的问题
21:50 tutuhaha: 00:16:595 (6) - hard，这里就别这样了...删了删了多不善良
21:50 tutuhaha: 00:22:832 (3) - 拉低点，HP，你懂
21:50 Shad0w1and: 好
21:53 tutuhaha: 总而言之把你难度全部碰到HP的给我拉低
21:53 tutuhaha: 还有几个我没说但是看AUTO的时候绝对看到了
21:53 tutuhaha: 其他也没啥了
21:53 tutuhaha: mod找够找我recheck
21:53 Shad0w1and: 好
21:54 tutuhaha: 音效部分再搞搞
21:54 tutuhaha: hard可能要删点节奏
21:54 tutuhaha: normal把迷惑性摆法都搞掉
改了大部分。normal铃声已经被我调小了文件音量
@117，加粗的部分是你的摸。圈圈要调回4，我看了难度是4.02，先update，等你的code
还有记得加上视频代码
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Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Guu
m4m~

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
00:28:517 (3,1) - 排到一直线上如何，00:29:306 (2) - 这个也跟着调整下
00:57:095 (1,3) - 叠好
00:58:517 (4,1) - 直线
01:19:201 (2,1,2) - ^
01:16:832 (2) - 和01:15:569 (3) - 拉开点距离，连同后面的01:16:990 (3,4) - 一起排好

[117's Insane]
nice

[Extra]
00:31:517 (4) - 拖成一个1/2滑条如何
00:44:464 (1,2) - 太远了
00:45:727 (3,1) - 叠上吧
00:47:938 (3,1) - 微妙的叠一点点不如多叠点或者不叠
00:56:148 (1) - ctrl+g，并且和00:55:359 (3) - 叠好
01:27:885 (1,1) - 去掉nc
01:28:674 (4) - 加nc

恩不错挺顺手的
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Guu wrote:

m4m~

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
00:28:517 (3,1) - 排到一直线上如何，00:29:306 (2) - 这个也跟着调整下
00:57:095 (1,3) - 叠好
00:58:517 (4,1) - 直线
01:19:201 (2,1,2) - ^
01:16:832 (2) - 和01:15:569 (3) - 拉开点距离，连同后面的01:16:990 (3,4) - 一起排好
^微调

[117's Insane]
nice

[Extra]
00:31:517 (4) - 拖成一个1/2滑条如何
^节奏实际上是下面那个三连，已经修改为3连
00:44:464 (1,2) - 太远了
00:45:727 (3,1) - 叠上吧
00:47:938 (3,1) - 微妙的叠一点点不如多叠点或者不叠
00:56:148 (1) - ctrl+g，并且和00:55:359 (3) - 叠好
^微调前后
01:27:885 (1,1) - 去掉nc
01:28:674 (4) - 加nc

恩不错挺顺手的
No comment=fixed
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
PlaceHolder :D
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi (:

[Normal]
00:59:306 (1,2) - Compare the stacking done here with the ones at 00:40:832 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of mixing different patterns of stacking is not much common in Normal, even more when the Normal is the easiest diff in a set. This should be avoided because may confuse newcomers, at least at a first / second sight.
00:24:253 (1,2) - Specifically here, having the placement of the tail of the 2nd slider just at the tail of the 1st one feels misleading.
More intuitive placement...
01:25:990 (3,1) - Placement suggestion below, same reason.
More intuitive, avoiding potential misleading...

[Hard]
00:58:517 (4,1,2,3) - Try avoid such object clustering. I'd prefered a cleaner version, with a bit more flow.
just a possible suggestion -- without moving other things beyond these. There are better solutions, but they may require changing everything else too.
♥ Everything else feels nice.

[117's Insane]
* Disable "Countdown".
* Would be a good idea reduce a bit the jumps among the duplets at 00:19:674 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but not obligatory.

[Extra]
♥ It seems fine.

That's all (:
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Alarido wrote:

Hi (:

[Normal]
00:59:306 (1,2) - Compare the stacking done here with the ones at 00:40:832 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of mixing different patterns of stacking is not much common in Normal, even more when the Normal is the easiest diff in a set. This should be avoided because may confuse newcomers, at least at a first / second sight.
^added nc as hint
00:24:253 (1,2) - Specifically here, having the placement of the tail of the 2nd slider just at the tail of the 1st one feels misleading.
More intuitive placement...
01:25:990 (3,1) - Placement suggestion below, same reason.
More intuitive, avoiding potential misleading...

[Hard]
00:58:517 (4,1,2,3) - Try avoid such object clustering. I'd prefered a cleaner version, with a bit more flow.
just a possible suggestion -- without moving other things beyond these. There are better solutions, but they may require changing everything else too.
♥ Everything else feels nice.

[Extra]
♥ It seems fine.

That's all (:
TY, No comment = fixed
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
改好了 :)

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76,360,87411,5,12,0:0:0:0:
144,300,87569,2,0,L|236:292,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,87885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,296,88043,2,0,L|394:221,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,68,88359,2,0,L|456:160,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,221,88674,5,8,0:0:0:0:
296,156,88832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,236,88990,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,89148,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Count down幫我關掉，我忘了用 :?

@Alarido: 00:19:201 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Keeping, I mean :)
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[General]
  1. kiai停在01:27:411 -
[Extra]
  1. 00:25:517 (1,4) - 這兩個nc swap
  2. 00:35:464 - 這裡補個note吧 本來00:34:201 (1,2) - 節奏就夠空了這裡又空就更沒連貫性了
  3. 00:40:832 (2,3) - 這應該是先slider後note比較對的上音樂吧
  4. 00:44:464 (1,2) - 這個跳有點太牽強了 因為(1)是個緩速滑條加上(2,3,4)那邊的音樂並不是很明顯 打起來就會有點像硬被note牽著鼠標.. 照著1.8x排就行 甚至可以把(3,4)併成一個slider
  5. 00:56:464 (2) - ctrl+g? 比較flow
  6. 01:04:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 超難打 建議改成3連 / 5連 / 3連
[Hard]
  1. 01:21:253 (7) - 這改成一個1/1滑條? 連音的音樂不太明顯
沒什麼細看..感覺整體上不太有系統 排版不夠工整 而且N有點略難了可能需要個E..
GL
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Flask wrote:

[General]
  1. kiai停在01:27:411 -
^暂时不改吧。。再看看

[Extra]
  1. 00:25:517 (1,4) - 這兩個nc swap
    ^好
  2. 00:35:464 - 這裡補個note吧 本來00:34:201 (1,2) - 節奏就夠空了這裡又空就更沒連貫性了
    ^这里没音啊Orz，这里加音会很生硬。那两个滑条对于鼓声是有点空，但我做了弯曲处理和对于vocal mapping应该可以接受。
  3. 00:40:832 (2,3) - 這應該是先slider後note比較對的上音樂吧
    ^shi的音一般起始音会很长，容易听错。。实际上音是在00:40:990 (3) - ，我认为我没听错
  4. 00:44:464 (1,2) - 這個跳有點太牽強了 因為(1)是個緩速滑條加上(2,3,4)那邊的音樂並不是很明顯 打起來就會有點像硬被note牽著鼠標.. 照著1.8x排就行 甚至可以把(3,4)併成一個slider
    改了
  5. 00:56:464 (2) - ctrl+g? 比較flow
    ^我对flow的理解是这样钝角切入啊，下面那个锐角正好切断flow
  6. 01:04:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 超難打 建議改成3連 / 5連 / 3連
    ^这个是按摸改的。。我感觉确实连起来比我之前分开要好点。。之前就是分的，没有那种强烈节奏在01:05:622 (11,1) - 中断的那种爽快感
[Hard]
  1. 01:21:253 (7) - 這改成一個1/1滑條? 連音的音樂不太明顯
^这个感觉还好啦。。和鼓声相合
沒什麼細看..感覺整體上不太有系統 排版不夠工整 而且N有點略難了可能需要個E..
我再改简单点点Orz。关于排版，我学的就是按这种排间距而不是排图形的作图法，所以我的第一版没testplay直接做出来大家也说打得很顺手，之前被吐槽四不像，于是去研究了一下日本流Laurier的图，大概学了一点接flow的方法现在整体性好多了
GL
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here for the future M4M


[What's Your Name]
  1. 00:09:095 (1) - How about giving this a little more space, it's uncomfortable to the eye for me that is (Your choice)
  2. 00:08:148 (2) - This note I don't believe should be put here, you used about equal distance to form the triangle but based on what the music has to offer, it's better to put this part further away so the triple stacks can have more of an impact ~for say around here ish http://puu.sh/hdaN4/1afff8c2be.jpg
  3. 00:21:095 (9) - This should be a little further to the right, otherwise the distance changes are a bit off to play through without knowing the change, or so how SV sliders work with NC combos
  4. 00:23:780 (6) - Tail no stack on (2)? Seems off
  5. 00:48:253 (1) - Same as ^ for consistency if you chose to do so
  6. 01:06:411 (2,3) - How about doing this for more effect rather than stacking it at the tail? http://puu.sh/hdbo8/777fc8c74e.jpg
  7. 01:09:253 (5,6) - These 2 notes placed doesn't feel appealing since it kind of destroys the flow or the next sequence that is played. How about something like this so the movements of the 2 sequences can mash together a bit more and plus it looks pretty cool http://puu.sh/hdbxQ/77c2fc5484.jpg
    01:14:306 (4) - Move 4 a little bit so it blankets this a little better 01:14:306 (4,1) also how about this rotation? http://puu.sh/hdbGL/a30c6f6d2c.jpg
    01:15:885 (4) - NC here, here 01:15:885 (4) - and here 01:17:306 (1) - since it evens things out more instead of only having 3 and where the stream ends is where the next part actually starts

[117's Insane]
  1. 00:16:438 (7,8,9,1) - Use .5 DS so all these can be consistent, since 6 is further away from the stream than is necessary
    It's pretty good here
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:095 (1) - Should even out the spacing of this slider, the top is closer than the bottom, so making it similar on both ends would look better http://puu.sh/hdcgd/6c60b0cee0.jpg
  2. 00:38:306 (1,2,3) - 1.5 spacing so it is a lot more even
  3. 00:48:095 (2) - How about placing it here? So then the combo goes down instead of zigzags from up to down and it also emphasis the vocals as the and how she sings it http://puu.sh/hdcx8/2198f338da.jpg
    It's good

[Normal]
  • 00:06:569 (1,2) - Why so choppy? How about something like this so it plays out the vocals instead http://puu.sh/hdcGx/848e952496.jpg and it's a good distance to work with for the next note
  1. 00:16:674 (1) - Even out the slider from top to bottom so it looks better
  2. 00:19:674 (2) - Whoa a bit too close for comfort than any of the other ones so space them out properly and that overlap with (4) is kind of crazy
  3. 00:26:148 (2) - Distance Snap
  4. 00:40:359 (4,1,2) - Again these parts are choppy, I suggest just sticking with following the vocals since this 00:40:832 (1) breaks everything into 3 different parts to play. So delete it and extend 00:40:359 (4) - to the vocals and work from there since it's nicer that way
  5. 00:44:464 (1) - DS please
  6. 01:15:884 (3,4) - Somewhat as above here too, but this is doable
    That's about it


I hoped this helped at all in anyways. My mods are always crap so feel free to not make changes since I don't know what I'm talking about in these mods :) Goodluck with the mapset mang
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Kocari wrote:

Here for the future M4M


[What's Your Name]
  1. 00:09:095 (1) - How about giving this a little more space, it's uncomfortable to the eye for me that is (Your choice)
    ^no
  2. 00:08:148 (2) - This note I don't believe should be put here, you used about equal distance to form the triangle but based on what the music has to offer, it's better to put this part further away so the triple stacks can have more of an impact ~for say around here ish http://puu.sh/hdaN4/1afff8c2be.jpg
  3. 00:21:095 (9) - This should be a little further to the right, otherwise the distance changes are a bit off to play through without knowing the change, or so how SV sliders work with NC combos
    ^I know the DS here is kind of weird, but somehow players actually recognize the real distance between (7)(9) and (10), that's y after test plays I changed it as current.
  4. 00:23:780 (6) - Tail no stack on (2)? Seems off
  5. 00:48:253 (1) - Same as ^ for consistency if you chose to do so
  6. 01:06:411 (2,3) - How about doing this for more effect rather than stacking it at the tail? http://puu.sh/hdbo8/777fc8c74e.jpg
  7. 01:09:253 (5,6) - These 2 notes placed doesn't feel appealing since it kind of destroys the flow or the next sequence that is played. How about something like this so the movements of the 2 sequences can mash together a bit more and plus it looks pretty cool http://puu.sh/hdbxQ/77c2fc5484.jpg
    01:14:306 (4) - Move 4 a little bit so it blankets this a little better 01:14:306 (4,1) also how about this rotation? http://puu.sh/hdbGL/a30c6f6d2c.jpg
    01:15:885 (4) - NC here, here 01:15:885 (4) - and here 01:17:306 (1) - since it evens things out more instead of only having 3 and where the stream ends is where the next part actually starts
    ^no change for now

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:095 (1) - Should even out the spacing of this slider, the top is closer than the bottom, so making it similar on both ends would look better http://puu.sh/hdcgd/6c60b0cee0.jpg
  2. 00:38:306 (1,2,3) - 1.5 spacing so it is a lot more even
  3. 00:48:095 (2) - How about placing it here? So then the combo goes down instead of zigzags from up to down and it also emphasis the vocals as the and how she sings it http://puu.sh/hdcx8/2198f338da.jpg
    It's good

[Normal]
  • 00:06:569 (1,2) - Why so choppy? How about something like this so it plays out the vocals instead http://puu.sh/hdcGx/848e952496.jpg and it's a good distance to work with for the next note
  1. 00:16:674 (1) - Even out the slider from top to bottom so it looks better
  2. 00:19:674 (2) - Whoa a bit too close for comfort than any of the other ones so space them out properly and that overlap with (4) is kind of crazy
  3. 00:26:148 (2) - Distance Snap
  4. 00:40:359 (4,1,2) - Again these parts are choppy, I suggest just sticking with following the vocals since this 00:40:832 (1) breaks everything into 3 different parts to play. So delete it and extend 00:40:359 (4) - to the vocals and work from there since it's nicer that way
  5. 00:44:464 (1) - DS please
  6. 01:15:884 (3,4) - Somewhat as above here too, but this is doable
    That's about it


I hoped this helped at all in anyways. My mods are always crap so feel free to not make changes since I don't know what I'm talking about in these mods :) Goodluck with the mapset mang

^I don't agree this
no comment=fixed
Him3con
Him3con
[WHAT'S YoUr NAME]
00:43:674 (2) - 三连
00:46:201 (1) - ^
00:50:990 (2) - +note
排列不多说
[117's Insane]
00:17:780 (1) - But something strange? Try to use 1/2 with a note.
Very well.
[Hard]
00:02:464 (3,4) - 虽然没啥但是肯定会被挑刺
00:23:306 (4) - 去了 你是抓人声这里毛也没有
00:43:832 (2) - 去了
你这hard做的什么.不清楚你究竟抓的是音轨还是声轨
cs缩小一号
[Normal]
00:16:674 (1) - 一米哇喀拉那一
01:10:832 (3,4) - blanket
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
Shad0w1and

Meconopsis wrote:

[WHAT'S YoUr NAME]
00:43:674 (2) - 三连
00:46:201 (1) - ^
00:50:990 (2) - +note
排列不多说
[117's Insane]
00:17:780 (1) - But something strange? Try to use 1/2 with a note.
Very well.
[Hard]
00:02:464 (3,4) - 虽然没啥但是肯定会被挑刺
^不改
00:23:306 (4) - 去了 你是抓人声这里毛也没有
^不改
00:43:832 (2) - 去了
^不改
你这hard做的什么.不清楚你究竟抓的是音轨还是声轨
cs缩小一号
[Normal]
00:16:674 (1) - 一米哇喀拉那一
^不改
01:10:832 (3,4) - blanket
Insane 大改
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
[General]
00:15:253 - 建议停在这里，跟finish好点

[Normal]
01:16:201 (4) - 这里重音在01:16:359 - ，建议不要用slider尾跟重音
01:20:464 (2,3) - 建议合成一个slider，190BPM的1/2 stack对Normal来说太难了
01:29:148 - 这里太轻了，建议加点重点的音效

[Hard]
00:52:517 (2) - 同01:16:201 (4) - in Normal
00:53:780 (3) - ^
01:17:938 (2,1) - 这个anti-jump不怎么合曲

[117's Insane]
00:30:411 (4) - 这里重音在00:30:569 - ，建议不要用slider尾跟重音
00:39:727 - missed clap?

[WHAT'S YoUr NAME]
OD有点低，建议8
00:15:253 (8,1) - 这个spacing有点小
00:53:227 - 这里的3/4没有任何作用，00:52:990 - 这里的vocal并不是长音
01:03:885 (3,4) - 同01:16:201 (4) - in Normal
01:04:674 - 01:05:938 - 这里可以试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/heolq/fc9f8304a9.jpg （图上时间坐标01:05:148 - ）。像当前这种circle跟slider混的串不合曲也不太好打
01:06:411 (2,3) - 建议都加上NC，不然要么完全叠上要么不overlap好点
01:08:148 (6,1) - 这个spacing有点小，01:08:306 - 处理这样的重音可以用打点的跳
01:21:806 (4,5) - 这种排列建议用这样的spacing http://puu.sh/heozE/e035f63e5f.jpg spacing会更合曲，图会更好读一些，而且也不会很难打
01:28:674 (1) - 同01:16:201 (4) - in Normal，注意这个slider跟之前不同，这个的头和尾都是重音，所以只有都是circle会比较合适

我觉得你的音效有点太轻了，这么激烈的歌不太适合这么清的音效，像default的soft finish和normal hitnormal应该会更适合点
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