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MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size)

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banvi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年11月4日 at 15:12:16

Artist: MARIA
Title: Kanashimi Rensa (TV size)
Source: Valkyria Chronicles
Tags: OP Alicia Welkin
BPM: 65
Filesize: 14789kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.15 stars, 74 notes)
  2. Hard (4.44 stars, 208 notes)
  3. Insane (4.87 stars, 302 notes)
  4. Normal (2.27 stars, 99 notes)
Download: MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size)
Download: MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for mod :)
Darcsol , Nivalis , lepidopodus , Teras , I_Tatsuo_I , Mianki , valuable , Slanox , roflninja , Astom , SadKangaroo , lovhin456 , KLong977 , Peaceful Melody
Odaril , xxheroxx , James2250 , orioncomet , Sakura Hana
Alace , Larto 
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 130 , Offset 760
    2. BPM 175 , Offset 13680
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you . :)
I really appreciate your help.
alumi_old
がんばれ★
frost-b-spec
i love zone maria XD

star :)
Topic Starter
banvi

frost-b-spec wrote:

i love zone maria XD

star :)
lol
Thank you star~ :)
Darcsol
Okay, here it goes. My first Modding attempt.


[All Difficulties]
Add the (TV Size) in the title: Kanashimi Rensa (TV Size)
[Easy], [Normal] Should the Slider Velocity be over 1.10*?

[Easy]
[00:46:937] Position the slider so that the second slider is more visible
[00:52:422] Same as above

[Normal]
[01:20:708] - [01:22:080] (Optional) Felt a bit awkward, maybe add something to make the transition a bit smoother? Add Hitsounds

[Hard]
[01:18:137] - [01:19:165] Forgot to add a Hitsound somewhere?

*You may have problems with the speed and placement of the sliders if you change the Slider Velocity. There are ways to combat it such as cutting the BPM in half.


Sorry, I felt like I should give more feedback but this is my first Mod. Overall, nice map. :D
Star~
Topic Starter
banvi

Darcsol wrote:

Okay, here it goes. My first Modding attempt.


[All Difficulties]
Add the (TV Size) in the title: Kanashimi Rensa (TV Size)ok
[Easy], [Normal] Should the Slider Velocity be over 1.10*?more than 1.10 is very fast;_;
[Easy]
[00:46:937] Position the slider so that the second slider is more visibleok
[00:52:422] Same as above

[Normal]
[01:20:708] - [01:22:080] (Optional) Felt a bit awkward, maybe add something to make the transition a bit smoother? Add Hitsounds
ok
[Hard]
[01:18:137] - [01:19:165] Forgot to add a Hitsound somewhere? ok
*You may have problems with the speed and placement of the sliders if you change the Slider Velocity. There are ways to combat it such as cutting the BPM in half.
uh... I wait others opinion.

Sorry, I felt like I should give more feedback but this is my first Mod. Overall, nice map. :D
Star~
thank you very much~
Licnect
nice :)
Niva
Here's the Mod4Mod:

[General]
Eh... Why only Hard? Where's the Normal and Easy? Yesterday it's still here :?
Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (banvi).osb and full-submit.
The countdown is unused, disable?

[Hard]
00:08:144 (1,2,3,4) - One grid down all
00:38:022 (6) - Change into 1/2 slider with one repeat?
01:04:080 (2,3) - One grid right all

I'll mod the other diffs when it's available again. Star!
Topic Starter
banvi

Nivalis wrote:

Here's the Mod4Mod:

[General]
Eh... Why only Hard? Where's the Normal and Easy? Yesterday it's still here :? :arrow: sorry. when I changed title , I probably mistaked something. :o
Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (banvi).osb and full-submit. :arrow: ok
The countdown is unused, disable? :arrow: ok

[Hard]
00:08:144 (1,2,3,4) - One grid down all :arrow: ok
00:38:022 (6) - Change into 1/2 slider with one repeat? :arrow: ok
01:04:080 (2,3) - One grid right all :arrow: ok

I'll mod the other diffs when it's available again. Star! :arrow: Thank you very much~ :)
Niva
DON'T GIVE THIS POST KUDOSU
(I'm just too lazy to edit the previous post)

[Easy]
00:02:606 (2) - Whistle?
00:07:221 (5) - ^
00:35:280 (1) - Whistle at end?
00:57:051 (6,7) - Finish?
01:16:422 (4) - Clap -> Finish?

[Normal]
No problems found while playing... Just some suggestions
00:06:298 (4) - Whistle at repeat?
00:16:422 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish?
00:18:480 (5) - Finish at repeat?
00:28:765 (1) - Hmm... Whistle at start maybe?
00:39:737 (1) - Rotate 180°?
00:46:594 (x) - Add note with finish?
01:04:765 (2,4) - Add clap?
01:16:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Quite confusing for a diamond pattern... Perhaps just let it flow like this?
(Place 01:19:851 (2) below 01:17:108 (2) and place 01:20:194 (3) below 01:17:451 (3))

Duh, hitsound mod is not my speciality :P
Hope this gets ranked :P
Topic Starter
banvi

Nivalis wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:606 (2) - Whistle? :arrow: ok
00:07:221 (5) - ^ :arrow: ok
00:35:280 (1) - Whistle at end? :arrow: ok
00:57:051 (6,7) - Finish? :arrow: uh... it's strange...
01:16:422 (4) - Clap -> Finish? :arrow: ^

[Normal]
No problems found while playing... Just some suggestions
00:06:298 (4) - Whistle at repeat? :arrow: k
00:16:422 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish? :arrow: k
00:18:480 (5) - Finish at repeat? :arrow: uh... no
00:28:765 (1) - Hmm... Whistle at start maybe? :arrow: k
00:39:737 (1) - Rotate 180°? :arrow: uh... ok
00:46:594 (x) - Add note with finish? :arrow: no sorry :cry:
01:04:765 (2,4) - Add clap? :arrow: ok
01:16:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Quite confusing for a diamond pattern... Perhaps just let it flow like this? :arrow: ok
SPOILER
[attachment=0:27cfa]pageup.jpg[/attachment:27cfa]
(Place 01:19:851 (2) below 01:17:108 (2) and place 01:20:194 (3) below 01:17:451 (3))

Duh, hitsound mod is not my speciality :P
Hope this gets ranked :P
Thank you very much again~ :)
lepidopodus
counter-modding? lol
I'm just a crappy modder, so these are just suggestions and you can ignore my suggestions.

Easy
(grid = tiny grid)
00:21:908 (5) - one grid up? or one grid up & one grid right? And how about remove whistle from the body of the slider?
00:26:708 (3,4) - one grid left?
00:27:394 (4) - remove whistle from the body of the slider?
00:42:480 (2,3) - 1/2 grid down?
00:47:965 (2) - how about moving the end of the slider 1 grid down?
00:53:451 (2) - how about moving the end of the slider 1 grid up & 2 grid right?
00:56:194 (5,6,7) - one grid down?
01:07:851 (4) - one grid left?
01:08:537 (1) - one grid up?
01:09:222 (2) - two grid up & one grid left?
01:09:908 (3,4) - adjust these if you fixed 01:07:851 (4), 01:08:537 (1), 01:09:222 (2).
01:12:308 (2) - one grid down?
01:28:937 (1) - how about add whistle or finish?

Normal
Overall, you placed notes kinda limited area, how about using more area next time?
00:24:651 (3) - hwo about adjust this slider more symmetrical?
01:23:622 (2) - spacing is slightly short.
01:28:937 (4) - how about finish?

Hard
00:16:080 (2) - how about finish?
00:31:851 (6) - adjust the middle of the slider and make it more symmetrical?
00:33:222 (8) - ^
00:48:308 (3) - one grid down?
00:51:737 (7) - how about make this 1/4 beat long return slider till 00:52:080?
01:25:508 (5) - how about adjusting this and make it more symmetrical? I think it's kinda long slider so you can make it better
01:28:765 (6) - how about adding whistle, or finish in the end of the slider?

Oh, what a crappy modding I made, anyway, you helped me a lot and this time I wanted to help you. Thanks a lot!
Topic Starter
banvi

lepidopodus wrote:

counter-modding? lol
I'm just a crappy modder, so these are just suggestions and you can ignore my suggestions.

Easy
(grid = tiny grid)
00:42:480 (2,3) - 1/2 grid down? :arrow: no, sorry.
other all fixed

Normal
all fixed

Hard
all fixed

Oh, what a crappy modding I made, anyway, you helped me a lot and this time I wanted to help you. Thanks a lot!
Thank you very much~ :)
Teras
Remove anime from the tags. It can be set as the genre when this is ranked. <.<

Oh, almost forgot.
Have a star. :P
Cyril Scarlet
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
banvi
@Teras
Thank you , advice & star. :)
Can I ask you guest diff? :P

@S i R i R u
Thank you , star~ :)
Teras

banvi wrote:

@Teras
Thank you , advice & star. :)
Can I ask you guest diff? :P
I can try to make something. But I can't promise that I will finish it in time. ;)
Teras
This diff is horrible. You may delete it if you don't like it. Some parts are retarded. So feel free to do some changes there too if you think it doesn't fit. ;)

Download: MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi) [Teras' Insane].osu
Topic Starter
banvi
lol
Thank you very much! I wanted different map from my sense! :)
nicemap 8-)
Teras
Fixed the Drain again. I want it on 8. Don't change it please xD
The drain and OD. I want them to be as they are in this update. ^^

Download: MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi) [Teras' Insane].osu
toad
Nice Beatmap!

Star.
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~~

[Overall]

[Easy]
01:18:480 (3) - Spacing. It doesn't match (1)'s distance from (2). I used level 3 grid to fix it.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Why is there no preview point set for this difficulty?
01:06:480 (3,4) - Hitsounds sound funny here. 01:07:851 (3,4) sounds better.
01:17:108 (3) - Random clap here much? lol

[Teras' Insane]
Oh Teras, how I love your maps lol~ You and your non-distance snap ways~
Why is there also no preview point in this difficulty?
00:27:394 through 00:30:137 - Oh god cluster fuck, my eyes Dx Can't read it well.
I like this difficulty.

Good~
*star*
Teras

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod~~

[Overall]

[Easy]
01:18:480 (3) - Spacing. It doesn't match (1)'s distance from (2). I used level 3 grid to fix it.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Why is there no preview point set for this difficulty?
01:06:480 (3,4) - Hitsounds sound funny here. 01:07:851 (3,4) sounds better.
01:17:108 (3) - Random clap here much? lol

[Teras' Insane]
Oh Teras, how I love your maps lol~ You and your non-distance snap ways~
Why is there also no preview point in this difficulty? I guess Banvi can fix this. I don't want to put it wrong :roll:
00:27:394 through 00:30:137 - Oh god cluster fuck, my eyes Dx Can't read it well. Wut? -> It's perfectly readable. You just need to keep your eyes open. :P
I like this difficulty.

Good~
*star*
Topic Starter
banvi

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Easy]
01:18:480 (3) - Spacing. It doesn't match (1)'s distance from (2). I used level 3 grid to fix it. :arrow: ok
[Hard]
Why is there no preview point set for this difficulty? :arrow: oh , I forgot it.
01:06:480 (3,4) - Hitsounds sound funny here. 01:07:851 (3,4) sounds better. :arrow: ok
01:17:108 (3) - Random clap here much? lol :arrow: uh... no , sorry
[Teras' Insane]
Oh Teras, how I love your maps lol~ You and your non-distance snap ways~ :arrow: I think Teras is a good mapper.lol
Why is there also no preview point in this difficulty? :arrow: ok
00:27:394 through 00:30:137 - Oh god cluster fuck, my eyes Dx Can't read it well. :arrow: D:
Thank you very much~
Mianki
Normal:

00:51:908, 00:52:080 notes here? and the last one with a Finish hitsound if you add them ^^

Hard:

00:16:422 (1.2.3.4) Finish hitsounds here like in Normal?
00:46:594 note here (with a Finish hitsound?)

Alright didn't found anything else. Nice map ^^
Star~
Topic Starter
banvi

Mianki wrote:

Normal:
00:51:908, 00:52:080 notes here? and the last one with a Finish hitsound if you add them ^^ :arrow: I agree , but I add silder.

Hard:
00:16:422 (1.2.3.4) Finish hitsounds here like in Normal? :arrow: ok
00:46:594 note here (with a Finish hitsound?) :arrow: I agree , added.

Alright didn't found anything else. Nice map ^^
Star~
Thank you mod4mod~ :)
valuable_old
What happen :shock:
banvi make map NO Vocaloid song :shock: lol

[Easy]
00:25:337 (1,2,3,4) wrong a bit
01:18:480 (3) 1 left
[Normal]
01:20:708 (4) add new combo?
[Hard]
00:34:422 (2) move other side?
00:54:480 (7) finish~
[Insane]
WoW perfect

GJ
Topic Starter
banvi

valuable wrote:

What happen :shock:
banvi make map NO Vocaloid song :shock: lol :arrow: LOL

[Easy]
00:25:337 (1,2,3,4) wrong a bit :arrow: about spacing? fixed
01:18:480 (3) 1 left :arrow: ok
[Normal]
01:20:708 (4) add new combo? :arrow: uh... ok
[Hard]
00:34:422 (2) move other side? :arrow: ok
00:54:480 (7) finish~ :arrow: ok
[Insane]
WoW perfect :arrow: WoW

GJ
Thank you very much~
brilliancy
nice song :)

star~^^
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Overall]

Remove 'opening' in your tags.

[Easy]

Good !

[Normal]

- 00:19:508(1) : Delete, and make slider, end at 00:20:365 ?

[Hard]

- 00:29:794(12) : Finish it ?
- 01:15:394(1) : Spacing.


Good !
Get my star !
Topic Starter
banvi

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Overall]

Remove 'opening' in your tags. :arrow: ok

[Easy]

Good !

[Normal]

- 00:19:508(1) : Delete, and make slider, end at 00:20:365 ? :arrow: ok

[Hard]

- 00:29:794(12) : Finish it ? :arrow: ok
- 01:15:394(1) : Spacing. :arrow:ok

Good !
Get my star !
thank you very much~
roflninja
Hi, sorry for the delay, was having a monitor issue
Also can you full submit? I had a few problems downloading, and after I had I got the update message

[hard]
00:15:051 (1) - lol at the reverse arrow (don't think this actually needs fixing)

everything is fine for me, nice map ;)
arien666
Good luck yay!
Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you , roflninja & arken1015 :)
Teras
Aight, I'm back now. :P
Astom
Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi).osb and fullsubmit
-Change soft hitnormal to hitnormal in kiai time

[Hard]
-Semi-Stack of 01:05:622 (7) and 01:06:137 (2) confuse me, can u move (2) to another place?

Star~ and good luck
Topic Starter
banvi

Astom wrote:

Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi).osb and fullsubmit
-Change soft hitnormal to hitnormal in kiai time

[Hard]
-Semi-Stack of 01:05:622 (7) and 01:06:137 (2) confuse me, can u move (2) to another place?

Star~ and good luck
All fixed. Thank you very much~ :)
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Easy:
00:43:851 (4) - [pattern] I think having this one hidden by (2) is a bit confusing.
That's about it for Easy.

Normal:
Nothing wrong there.

Hard:
00:59:622 (2) - [hitsound] I wouldn't add any hitsound to this note.
01:03:565 (1) - [pattern] This note is hidden by the 300/100 of the completed spinner, you should move it elsewhere, where it wouldn't be hidden.
01:04:080 (2,3,1) - [pattern] This part is very confusing, because of the sudden change in distance snapping.


Teras' Insane:
Said I might not mod Insanes... And won't, I need more experience.

Well, you get a star sir.
Topic Starter
banvi

Odaril wrote:

Easy:
00:43:851 (4) - [pattern] I think having this one hidden by (2) is a bit confusing. :arrow: oh really. fixed
That's about it for Easy.

Hard:
00:59:622 (2) - [hitsound] I wouldn't add any hitsound to this note. :arrow: ok
01:03:565 (1) - [pattern] This note is hidden by the 300/100 of the completed spinner, you should move it elsewhere, where it wouldn't be hidden. :arrow: changed pattern
01:04:080 (2,3,1) - [pattern] This part is very confusing, because of the sudden change in distance snapping.
:arrow: changed pattern
thank you very much~ :)
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • 01:05:794 (green timing section) - Volume: 8
[Easy]

  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737

[Normal]


  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
[Hard]

  • • 01:06:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:06:480 and here 01:06:651
    • 01:07:851 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:07:851 and here 01:08:022
    • 01:09:308 (4) - Delete this circle
    • 01:10:680 (4) - ^
    • 01:12:394 (4) - ^
    • 01:13:765 (4) - ^
    • 01:15:137 (4) - ^
    • 01:16:509 (4) - ^
    • 01:17:108 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:17:108 and here 01:17:280
    • 01:18:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:18:480 and here 01:18:651
    • 01:23:022 (3) - Delete this circle
Topic Starter
banvi

xxheroxx wrote:

[General][/b]
  • • 01:05:794 (green timing section) - Volume: 8
:arrow: ok
[Easy]
  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
:arrow: ok
[Normal]
  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
:arrow: ok
[Hard]
  • • 01:06:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:06:480 and here 01:06:651 :arrow: k
    • 01:07:851 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:07:851 and here 01:08:022
    • 01:09:308 (4) - Delete this circle
    • 01:10:680 (4) - ^
    • 01:12:394 (4) - ^
    • 01:13:765 (4) - ^
    • 01:15:137 (4) - ^
    • 01:16:509 (4) - ^ :arrow: k
    • 01:17:108 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:17:108 and here 01:17:280 :arrow: n
    • 01:18:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:18:480 and here 01:18:651 :arrow: n
    • 01:23:022 (3) - Delete this circle
:arrow: k
Thank you very much :D
IceBeam
[Normal]
00:39:737 (1) - Make some similar timing sections with different voume.And increase it step by step.

[Hard]
01:13:679 (3,4) - Stack with slider.

Others are fine.

Can't spot anything wrong with it,have a star~
Topic Starter
banvi

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Normal]
00:39:737 (1) - Make some similar timing sections with different voume.And increase it step by step. :arrow: ok!!
[Hard]
01:13:679 (3,4) - Stack with slider. :arrow: fixed
thank you very much~ :)
mayosiiiiii
star~ :)
Topic Starter
banvi
thank you for star :D
orioncomet
Sorry for really delay modding T-T my exam just over.

just some suggestions about hitsound

[Easy]
00:19:165 (1) - add sound finish
I'm not fan of whistle so no idea about hitsound here Orz

[Normal]
00:18:480 (5) - add sound finish at begin of silder and end of silder

[Hard]
00:18:480 (1,3) - add sound finish ~

[Teras' Insane]
- why different preview point >_<?

other thing seem fine.. >A< star
Topic Starter
banvi

orioncomet wrote:

Sorry for really delay modding T-T my exam just over.

just some suggestions about hitsound

[Easy]
00:19:165 (1) - add sound finish

[Normal]
00:18:480 (5) - add sound finish at begin of silder and end of silder

[Hard]
00:18:480 (1,3) - add sound finish ~

[Teras' Insane]
- why different preview point >_<?

other thing seem fine.. >A< star
fixed. Thank you very much~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
star~ :)
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