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Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you , roflninja & arken1015 :)
Teras
Aight, I'm back now. :P
Astom
Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi).osb and fullsubmit
-Change soft hitnormal to hitnormal in kiai time

[Hard]
-Semi-Stack of 01:05:622 (7) and 01:06:137 (2) confuse me, can u move (2) to another place?

Star~ and good luck
Topic Starter
banvi

Astom wrote:

Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Delete MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi).osb and fullsubmit
-Change soft hitnormal to hitnormal in kiai time

[Hard]
-Semi-Stack of 01:05:622 (7) and 01:06:137 (2) confuse me, can u move (2) to another place?

Star~ and good luck
All fixed. Thank you very much~ :)
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Easy:
00:43:851 (4) - [pattern] I think having this one hidden by (2) is a bit confusing.
That's about it for Easy.

Normal:
Nothing wrong there.

Hard:
00:59:622 (2) - [hitsound] I wouldn't add any hitsound to this note.
01:03:565 (1) - [pattern] This note is hidden by the 300/100 of the completed spinner, you should move it elsewhere, where it wouldn't be hidden.
01:04:080 (2,3,1) - [pattern] This part is very confusing, because of the sudden change in distance snapping.


Teras' Insane:
Said I might not mod Insanes... And won't, I need more experience.

Well, you get a star sir.
Topic Starter
banvi

Odaril wrote:

Easy:
00:43:851 (4) - [pattern] I think having this one hidden by (2) is a bit confusing. :arrow: oh really. fixed
That's about it for Easy.

Hard:
00:59:622 (2) - [hitsound] I wouldn't add any hitsound to this note. :arrow: ok
01:03:565 (1) - [pattern] This note is hidden by the 300/100 of the completed spinner, you should move it elsewhere, where it wouldn't be hidden. :arrow: changed pattern
01:04:080 (2,3,1) - [pattern] This part is very confusing, because of the sudden change in distance snapping.
:arrow: changed pattern
thank you very much~ :)
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

  • • 01:05:794 (green timing section) - Volume: 8
[Easy]

  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737

[Normal]


  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
[Hard]

  • • 01:06:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:06:480 and here 01:06:651
    • 01:07:851 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:07:851 and here 01:08:022
    • 01:09:308 (4) - Delete this circle
    • 01:10:680 (4) - ^
    • 01:12:394 (4) - ^
    • 01:13:765 (4) - ^
    • 01:15:137 (4) - ^
    • 01:16:509 (4) - ^
    • 01:17:108 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:17:108 and here 01:17:280
    • 01:18:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:18:480 and here 01:18:651
    • 01:23:022 (3) - Delete this circle
Topic Starter
banvi

xxheroxx wrote:

[General][/b]
  • • 01:05:794 (green timing section) - Volume: 8
:arrow: ok
[Easy]
  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
:arrow: ok
[Normal]
  • • 01:24:994 (1) - End this spinner here 01:27:737
:arrow: ok
[Hard]
  • • 01:06:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:06:480 and here 01:06:651 :arrow: k
    • 01:07:851 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:07:851 and here 01:08:022
    • 01:09:308 (4) - Delete this circle
    • 01:10:680 (4) - ^
    • 01:12:394 (4) - ^
    • 01:13:765 (4) - ^
    • 01:15:137 (4) - ^
    • 01:16:509 (4) - ^ :arrow: k
    • 01:17:108 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:17:108 and here 01:17:280 :arrow: n
    • 01:18:480 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 01:18:480 and here 01:18:651 :arrow: n
    • 01:23:022 (3) - Delete this circle
:arrow: k
Thank you very much :D
IceBeam
[Normal]
00:39:737 (1) - Make some similar timing sections with different voume.And increase it step by step.

[Hard]
01:13:679 (3,4) - Stack with slider.

Others are fine.

Can't spot anything wrong with it,have a star~
Topic Starter
banvi

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Normal]
00:39:737 (1) - Make some similar timing sections with different voume.And increase it step by step. :arrow: ok!!
[Hard]
01:13:679 (3,4) - Stack with slider. :arrow: fixed
thank you very much~ :)
mayosiiiiii
star~ :)
Topic Starter
banvi
thank you for star :D
orioncomet
Sorry for really delay modding T-T my exam just over.

just some suggestions about hitsound

[Easy]
00:19:165 (1) - add sound finish
I'm not fan of whistle so no idea about hitsound here Orz

[Normal]
00:18:480 (5) - add sound finish at begin of silder and end of silder

[Hard]
00:18:480 (1,3) - add sound finish ~

[Teras' Insane]
- why different preview point >_<?

other thing seem fine.. >A< star
Topic Starter
banvi

orioncomet wrote:

Sorry for really delay modding T-T my exam just over.

just some suggestions about hitsound

[Easy]
00:19:165 (1) - add sound finish

[Normal]
00:18:480 (5) - add sound finish at begin of silder and end of silder

[Hard]
00:18:480 (1,3) - add sound finish ~

[Teras' Insane]
- why different preview point >_<?

other thing seem fine.. >A< star
fixed. Thank you very much~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
star~ :)
Topic Starter
banvi

H-boy wrote:

star~ :)
thanks for star : )
lovhin456
Hi banvi ~

General;
- Use another BG for Teras' Insane ??
- Umm, when you use normal whistles, I think they're too loud and I can't listen very well to the song ...

Easy;
- 00:06:298 (4,5,6) >> add whistle to (4,6), remove whistle from (5)
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:34:080 >> add whistle
- 01:16:422 (4-1) >> remove clap from (4) and add finish OR add finish to (1)
- 01:22:594 (1,2) >> add whistle ??
- 01:22:080 >> kiai time ends here ON ALL DIFF. Check kiai time on all diff.

Normal;
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:50:194 >> add a note with whistle
- 01:28:765 >> remove whistle

Hard;
- The only thing I didn't like are the claps in the short sliders are the start of the song, is a very quiet start but the clap sounds are too much for it.

Teras' Insane;
- 00:04:683 >> remove whistle from the body of the slider, just add it on the start and end of it.

Star ~ :3
Yunochi_old
:)
Muya
:)
Mizu_banned
wow wow wow o.o"
Nyah~
Star =3=
Topic Starter
banvi

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi banvi ~

General;
- Use another BG for Teras' Insane ??
- Umm, when you use normal whistles, I think they're too loud and I can't listen very well to the song ...

Easy;
- 00:06:298 (4,5,6) >> add whistle to (4,6), remove whistle from (5)
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:34:080 >> add whistle
- 01:16:422 (4-1) >> remove clap from (4) and add finish OR add finish to (1)
- 01:22:594 (1,2) >> add whistle ??
- 01:22:080 >> kiai time ends here ON ALL DIFF. Check kiai time on all diff.

Normal;
- 00:09:990 >> silence this spinner end or silence the whole spinner ??
- 00:50:194 >> add a note with whistle :arrow: no...
- 01:28:765 >> remove whistle

Hard;
- The only thing I didn't like are the claps in the short sliders are the start of the song, is a very quiet start but the clap sounds are too much for it.

Teras' Insane;
- 00:04:683 >> remove whistle from the body of the slider, just add it on the start and end of it.
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fixed. Thank you very much : )
KLong977
No offence to however suggested this, but:

[Hard]
00:29:841 (12) I'm not a huge fan of the finish here, I feel like a clap might be more appropriate here. Just a suggestion.

Great map! You got a star!
Topic Starter
banvi

KLong977 wrote:

No offence to however suggested this, but:

[Hard]
00:29:841 (12) I'm not a huge fan of the finish here, I feel like a clap might be more appropriate here. Just a suggestion.

Great map! You got a star!
Fixed. Thank you very much :)
wring
star~
James2250
Put 2 second lead-in time
Audio sounds slightly loud on kiai, lower it by a tick or 2

Easy:
Use claps on kiai time, not whistles (sounds better to me) for 01:05:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Same for 01:17:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (you don't need to remove all whistles, just make the one every 2 white ticks be a clap
00:27:394 (4) - nazi: could be slightly more symmetrical
01:16:422 (4) - add clap
01:19:508 (5) - extend to red tick

Normal:
01:20:708 (4,5,6,7,8) - this sounds odd when all the notes before this have followed the music (white ticks) and this switches to red...I would map this part on white ticks
01:28:080 (1) - I would prefer if this note was more centered for a Normal

Hard:
Raise hp so it is higher than Normal?
00:09:298 - add another small slider here like the others
00:39:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use timing sections like on Normal to make this gradually get louder?
01:11:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - add some hitsounds here

Teras' Insane:
Start of the map sounds slightly empty, add some more whistles?
00:37:337 (7,1) - anti jump doesn't feel good

Looks pretty nice
*star*
Topic Starter
banvi

James2250 wrote:

Put 2 second lead-in time
Audio sounds slightly loud on kiai, lower it by a tick or 2

Easy:
Use claps on kiai time, not whistles (sounds better to me) for 01:05:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Same for 01:17:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (you don't need to remove all whistles, just make the one every 2 white ticks be a clap
00:27:394 (4) - nazi: could be slightly more symmetrical
01:16:422 (4) - add clap
01:19:508 (5) - extend to red tick

Normal:
01:20:708 (4,5,6,7,8) - this sounds odd when all the notes before this have followed the music (white ticks) and this switches to red...I would map this part on white ticks :arrow: ummm.I tried but I wanna keep this.
01:28:080 (1) - I would prefer if this note was more centered for a Normal

Hard:
Raise hp so it is higher than Normal?
00:09:298 - add another small slider here like the others
00:39:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use timing sections like on Normal to make this gradually get louder?
01:11:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - add some hitsounds here

Teras' Insane:
Start of the map sounds slightly empty, add some more whistles?
00:37:337 (7,1) - anti jump doesn't feel good

Looks pretty nice
*star*
most of fixed. Thank you very much :)
Teras

James2250 wrote:

Teras' Insane:
Start of the map sounds slightly empty, add some more whistles? Nah, I'm bad with normal whistles gah.
00:37:337 (7,1) - anti jump doesn't feel good Fixed, I think it should be better now..I mapped this a "long" time ago so I don't really like the map too much. But dah, fixed this atleast and added one or two notes to some empty places.

Looks pretty nice
Thanks for your mod!
banvi, feel free to do delete my diff if you want to make an insane by yourself. This diff isn't that insane I've realized >: But I will try to change it when the mods come so that I can make the map harder >.<

Download: MARIA - Kanashimi Rensa (TV size) (banvi) [Teras' Insane].osu
Patchouli
:)
Cuuuuri
awesome song~★
I love Teras xD
all diff :D
loli_milk
:)
Topic Starter
banvi
Thx for star TwT
Topic Starter
banvi
um , deleted Teras' Insane by his request & instead of added my Insane diff.
But I got hint to map insane.

thanks & sorry , Teras :cry:
Meiri
Hi There Banvi, There Is My Mod :D
Hope You Like It & Feel Free Ignore It If You Don't Need It :D

SPOILER
Easy
00:06:298 (4) - Remove Whistle ?
00:07:221 (5) - Add Whistle ?
00:08:144 (6) - Remove Whistle & Add Quick Break ?
00:19:866 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:20:537 (3) - Remove Whistle At Start & Add Whistle At End ?
00:23:280 (5) - Whistle At Reverse ?
00:26:022 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:29:451 (4) - Remove Whistle & Let (5) Whistle It ?
00:31:508 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:33:908 (5) - Move This To 00:34:251 ?
00:38:365 (2) - Add Whistle ?
00:41:446 (1) - Remove Whistle & Add Finish ?
00:46:251 (6) - Add Whistle ?
00:47:965 (2) - Remove Whistle ?
00:51:737 (6) - Add Whistle ?
00:53:451 (2) - Remove Whistle ?
00:57:222 (6) - Add Whistle ?
00:57:925 (1) - Remove Whistle ?
01:11:965 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:12:308 (2) - Remove Clap ?
01:13:337 (3) - Add Clap ?
01:13:680 (4) - Remove Clap ?
01:14:708 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:15:051 (2) - Remove Clap ?
01:16:080 (3) - Add Clap ?
01:16:422 (4) - Add Clap ?
01:17:108 (1) - Add Finish ?
01:19:508 (5) - Remove Whistle & Add Clap ?
01:20:365 (5) - Remove Whistle ?
01:28:937 (1) - Remove Whistle & Add Finish ?

SPOILER
Normal
00:08:144 (4) - Add A Quick Break After (4) ?
00:30:480 (1) - Remove New Combo ?
00:41:451 (1) - ^ ?
01:05:794 (1) - ^ ?
01:11:977 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:13:337 (3) - ^ ?
01:23:965 (1) - Remove New Combo ?

SPOILER
Hard
00:01:452 (4) - Add Whistle ?
00:03:298 (4) - ^ ?
00:05:144 (4) - ^ ?
00:06:990 (4) - ^ ?
00:08:836 (4) - ^ ?
00:09:529 (5),(6) - ^ ?
00:38:365 - Add A Quick Break ?
01:09:908 (1) - Add Clap ?
01:10:594 (3) - ^ ?
01:11:280 (1) - ^ ?
01:12:308 (3) - ^ ?
01:13:680 (7) - ^ ?
01:15:051 (3) - ^ ?
01:15:222 (4) - ^ ?
01:17:965 (4) - ^ ?

SPOILER
Insane
00:13:851 - Add A Quick Break ?
00:19:165 (1) - Remove New Combo ?
00:23:280 (1) - ^ ?
00:34:251 - Add A Quick Break Or Fill This With A Note

Okay, Only " That "
Hope Usefull For You :D

Nice Map :D
Star !
Topic Starter
banvi
Too many hitsound mod lol
very helpful for me :)
most of fixed
Thank you very much!! :)
thekillerhjkhjk
i need a new rule saying 'no maps which don't need modding' or something like that -_-

star
Sakura
1st Offset -6 ms
2nd Offset -16ms
Some tags would be nice
I'm not sure, does the BPM really have that much of a jump?
Remove audo from the video to reduce filesize.

[Normal]
01:20:708 (4) - Why not align this slider start with (2)?

Fix and i'll bubble
Topic Starter
banvi

Sakura Hana wrote:

1st Offset -6 ms :arrow: done
2nd Offset -16ms :arrow: done
Some tags would be nice :arrow: done
I'm not sure, does the BPM really have that much of a jump? :arrow: by soradg123
Remove audo from the video to reduce filesize. :arrow: removed audio

[Normal]
01:20:708 (4) - Why not align this slider start with (2)? :arrow: fixed

Fix and i'll bubble
Thank you very much!
Sakura
Alright then, let me work some magic here

Topic Starter
banvi
thx!! :)
Alace
Second offset:+12ms and resnap all notes

<Normal+Hard+Insane>
Use BPM 65 for the first offset and remove the green line
Topic Starter
banvi

Alace wrote:

Second offset:+12ms and resnap all notes

<Normal+Hard+Insane>
Use BPM 65 for the first offset and remove the green line
Fixed.
Thank you very much Alace sensei.
Alace
rebubble
Larto
Easy:
Make the first BPM 65 instead of 130. You can easily change that, as you don't even have sliders in that part.

Fix and I rank. This map is really good, when it's ranked, I might even nominate it for the next charts!
Andrea
Larto beated me to mod it D:
Topic Starter
banvi

Larto wrote:

Easy:
Make the first BPM 65 instead of 130. You can easily change that, as you don't even have sliders in that part.

Fix and I rank. This map is really good, when it's ranked, I might even nominate it for the next charts!
Fixed! Thank you very much!

osuplayer > omg , sorry...
Larto
Poor andrea. =p
Cyril Scarlet
.☆.+:^ヽ(∇ ̄*)o♪Congratulations♪o(* ̄∇)ノ^;+.☆.
Topic Starter
banvi
Thank you!!! :)
NatsumeRin
lol ava.
lovhin456
Congrats Banvi ~ :3
Topic Starter
banvi
Rin > lol

lovhin456 > Thx :)
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