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Aya Hirano - Unnamed World (TV Size)

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Eirene
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 25 février 2011 at 19:09:33

Artist: Hirano Aya
Title: Unnamed World (TV Size)
Source: Nijuu-Mensou no Musume
Tags: scar1410 Sushi
BPM: 162
Filesize: 13062kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 269 notes)
  2. Normal (3,39 stars, 105 notes)
  3. Scar's Etna (4,75 stars, 143 notes)
  4. Sushi's Easy (1,37 stars, 61 notes)
Download: Hirano Aya - Unnamed World (TV Size)
Download: Hirano Aya - Unnamed World (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Insane] : 100% kind of collab with scar =D
[Scar's Sliders] : 100% scar's crazy map *.*
[Normal] : 100% Eirene's boring easy =D
[Sushi's Easy] : 100% harder than the Normal xD
Kurai
Etoile moi je dis~
Topic Starter
Eirene

Kurai_ wrote:

Etoile moi je dis~
je t'ai rien demandé connard *.*
Scar
Bouh o.o
Kurai

Eirene wrote:

Kurai_ wrote:

Etoile moi je dis~
je t'ai rien demandé connard *.*
De rien :)
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Easy~
No problems here~

~Scar's Sliders~
- Maybe decrease Overall Difficulty by 1 tick?
- Etna sliders <33333

~Hard~
- Uhh, rename to Insane? It looks more like it imo =x

00:42:406 (3,1) - Nice trap ;w;

Meh, don't kudosu this, it's almost flawless xD
Really nice map, Scar's diff is love, and Hard is really fun. Take a deserved *star*~
Sushi
For normal and scar's , make the final spinner finish at the same time.


[Normal]
Nothing to say

[Scar's]
Etna~

[Hard]
Hmm, nothing



That was more a final check for me as I helped a little on this map.

As I told you, nice map, great Hitsounds 8D
This deserves a star from four favourite food
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks both :3
Doomsday
Lesse here:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

I really like the sounds you used. Good job on that one. :)

  1. Offset: 4,458 (yours feels a bit early)
  2. Since this song is pretty short, maybe you could make an Easy? Would be nice to have a whole set of difficulties for a short song.
[NORMAL]

Looks good

[SCAR'S SLIDERS]

Nothing bugged me in this. Maybe you could rename this to "Scar's Etna"?, since Etna sliders is the technical term for loads of little sliders one after the other, like in this.

[INSANE]

Having those massive jumps in the slow bit felt weird. Right now, the slow bit is harder than the louder, quicker bit. Shouldn't it be the other way around? :P

Its a fun map though. Nice work.

Hmm. I enjoyed this map. nicely made, looks nice, and plays nice too. All it needs now is an easy, and then its pretty much perfect.

Starred
Topic Starter
Eirene

Doomsday93 wrote:

  1. Offset: 4,458 (yours feels a bit early) i will try that :s
  2. Since this song is pretty short, maybe you could make an Easy? Would be nice to have a whole set of difficulties for a short song. sushi will make a true easy xD
[NORMAL]

Looks good *.*

[SCAR'S SLIDERS]

Nothing bugged me in this. Maybe you could rename this to "Scar's Etna"?, since Etna sliders is the technical term for loads of little sliders one after the other, like in this. done

[INSANE]

Having those massive jumps in the slow bit felt weird. Right now, the slow bit is harder than the louder, quicker bit. Shouldn't it be the other way around? :P
sorry, I love jumps *.* and it's really easy for an Insane diff =D

Its a fun map though. Nice work. thanks :3
DeadAlready
kawaii chiko <3 (?)

Nice map and nice aya song~ >w</

star~ :D
Yuji Tokaji
Star~
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks for stars :3
btw, Sushi's boring boring boring easy added *.*
Sonic Fumes
why TV SIZE?
There is no video.
Oh well, good map.
Scar

SonicArena1 wrote:

why TV SIZE? Because it's TVSize
There is no video. Yeah I have only found video in youtube quality, and me and Eirene don't want this shit :|
Oh well, good map.
Thanks for star~
iDwarf
Invasion

o.o
Topic Starter
Eirene

Midget wrote:

Invasion

o.o
O.O
Leorda
Bonjour

[File]
Your bg (Untitled.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 910x768)

[Sushi's Easy]
I think the HP Drain Rate is too low, IMO

00:47:787 (x) - Add note with whistle?
00:56:305 (1) - This object is too far from spinner, because is too hard for new player
01:15:379 (1) - Why this spinner start on red tick, but other diff is white tick???

[Normal]
00:06:305 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15204
00:07:787 (4) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15205
00:24:083 (x) - Add note with clap??
00:27:046 (x) - ^
00:30:009 (x) - ^

[Scar's Etna]
Lots of repeating slider, Fuck yeah

00:07:416 (4,5) - Sound odd to me..... Replace to slider? Like other slider?
00:10:750 (5,6) - ^

[Insane]
Fine~

Not bad
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Topic Starter
Eirene

Leorda wrote:

Bonjour

[File]
Your bg (Untitled.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 910x768) done

[Sushi's Easy]
I think the HP Drain Rate is too low, IMO

00:47:787 (x) - Add note with whistle?
00:56:305 (1) - This object is too far from spinner, because is too hard for new player
01:15:379 (1) - Why this spinner start on red tick, but other diff is white tick???

[Normal]
00:06:305 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15204 done
00:07:787 (4) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15205 done
00:24:083 (x) - Add note with clap?? too hard >.<
00:27:046 (x) - ^
00:30:009 (x) - ^

[Scar's Etna]
Lots of repeating slider, Fuck yeah

00:07:416 (4,5) - Sound odd to me..... Replace to slider? Like other slider?
00:10:750 (5,6) - ^

[Insane]
Fine~ *.*

Not bad
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Scar

Leorda wrote:

[Scar's Etna]
Lots of repeating slider, Fuck yeah

00:07:416 (4,5) - Sound odd to me..... Replace to slider? Like other slider? Done
00:10:750 (5,6) - ^ ^
Thanks~
Sushi

Leorda wrote:

Bonjour Leorda~

[Sushi's Easy]
I think the HP Drain Rate is too low, IMO

00:47:787 (x) - Add note with whistle? Done
00:56:305 (1) - This object is too far from spinner, because is too hard for new player Done
01:15:379 (1) - Why this spinner start on red tick, but other diff is white tick??? Because the spinner is based on something which is mapped with a note THEN a spinner on other diffs.


Not bad
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
Fight69
KOM C NUL !
Mianki
Love it ^^
Star~
braian5234
8-)
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Use this colors for the circle ??
Combo1 : 167,27,51
Combo2 : 2,119,52
Combo3 : 17,3,52
For all diff ~

Sushi's Easy;
- 00:05:935 >> make it look like this ...
- 00:14:083 >> extend to the next white tick
- 00:17:046 >> ^
- 00:53:342 >> extend to 00:55:935
- 01:04:268 >> make this a slider that reverse at 01:04:453
- 01:08:157 >> end second kiai time here

Normal;
- Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note

Scar's Etna;
- 00:55:750 >> add a note here

Insane;
- Perfect imo ~

* Star ~ :3
Topic Starter
Eirene

lovhin456 wrote:

General;
- Use this colors for the circle ??
Combo1 : 167,27,51
Combo2 : 2,119,52
Combo3 : 17,3,52
For all diff ~
too dark ! I can't see approach circles with your colors

Normal;
- Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note done, thanks *.*

Scar's Etna;
- 00:55:750 >> add a note here scar won't change

Insane;
- Perfect imo ~ thanks
lucky you are ... 2 kudo for a kiai mod xD
Sushi

lovhin456 wrote:

Sushi's Easy;
- 00:05:935 >> make it look like this ... Hmmm, no. I don't want to imply symetry here and that would put some high spacing.
SPOILER
[attachment=0:ab2c3]smth_1.png[/attachment:ab2c3]
- 00:14:083 >> extend to the next white tick Hmm no. not based on what you think.
- 00:17:046 >> ^ ^
- 00:53:342 >> extend to 00:55:935 No. this is an easy, extending up to this point would make the time between the spinner and note too short.
- 01:04:268 >> make this a slider that reverse at 01:04:453 No
- 01:08:157 >> end second kiai time hereLet Eirene decide.
Topic Starter
Eirene

Sushi wrote:

- 01:08:157 >> end second kiai time hereLet Eirene decide.
*fixed
Serval
Starzed :)
omegaflo
Etoile o.o (God, comment ca sonne mal ><)

o/*
krius_old
starred~
Derekku
[General]
*Add "Sushi" to tags since his name doesn't have the numbers anymore.
*mp3 ends kinda abruptly oxo

[Sushi's Easy]
00:26:491 (3) - This will be tricky to hit after the previous fast repeating slider. Maybe just add another repeat to the slider instead?
00:29:083 (3,4) - Similar to the above, but actually how about making these a slider instead of two red tick beats?
00:30:935 (2,3,4) - hmm could you overlap these a tiny bit to make them easier? like this maybe
00:36:305 (1) - Try to avoid kick sliders like this in easier difficulties since it's too hard to predict how many repeats there are and when to hit the next note. If you want to leave it, then could you at least make the spacing a bit closer from this to the next note?
00:37:787 (2) - ^
00:41:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this offbeat pattern will be completely unpredictable to newbies. One way to change this is like this, although you'd probably want to silence those pesky sliderticks.
00:49:083 (4,5) - Perhaps make this a single slider?
00:56:305 (1) - lol there it is (even with the sliderticks)
00:58:342 (2,1) - how about just making this a slider?
01:03:528 (1,2) - and these offbeats a slider as well
*Overall, remember that this may seem easy due to the nice sliders and spaced out hit circles (aka 1/1 as opposed to 1/2 beats), but offbeats and fast sliders can also create unnecessary difficulty for new players.

[Normal]
*Drain/AR/OD could be raised a tick each (or at least the approach rate).
*A bit fast-paced for my liking, but the bpm IS semi-high so... meh
00:06:305 (2) - Do I really need to explain? x_x
00:11:120 (6,7) - Expected this to just be one slider (7 is a bit unpredictable)
00:32:972 (6,1) - hmmm perhaps add a spinner or something in-between these?
00:54:824 (5,6) - perhaps make this one slider as well
01:05:194 (5,1) - same spinner suggestion

[Scar's Etna]
*I'd raise the approach rate a tick.
*Haven't seen an Etna diff in a while o-o
*"12 circles" xP

[Insane]
*Approach rate felt a bit slow for this difficulty. How about raising it one tick? (:
00:42:416 (3,1) - argh this trap threw me off
*Otherwise a fun insane :p
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks for your help *.*
CapnDavid
star :)
Sushi
Musty
STAR *w*
My eyes like the BG
My ears like the Sound.

AWESOME *w*
Ekoro
*.*

EDIT : Mod *.*

Rose : Grosse suggestion , t'es vraiment pas obligé de fix la~
Blue : Suggestion
Green : Tu devrais fix ça.
Red : Tu dois fix ça.

[Géneral]

Pourquoi les kiais times sont pas pareils dans chaque diffs? Mets les tous au même endroit.

[Sushi's Easy]

00:07:416 (2) - Fais un truc comme http://puu.sh/mq0 ?
00:30:935 (2,3,4) - J'trouve ça pas trop lisible :/

[Normal]

Good *.*

[Scar's Etna]

Tiens , ça grouille de sliders o/
Sinon j'ai rien vu de grave *.*

[Insane]

L'est bien cette diff *.*

00:08:713 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:14:639 (1) - ^
00:17:602 (1) - ^
00:20:565 (1) - ^

Star~
Glass
:3
arien666
[Sushi's Easy]
00:47:416 (1,2,3) - [Nazi] 0.08x spacing different but whatever :3

[Normal]
Nice

[Scar's Etna]
Floor going but whatever <3

[Insane]
Seems fine but some hard ;_;



Umm...
If possible, I would give you video :3
[But don't mind about this, just go your ways first. Since video is just option :3]

Good luck on this :3

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply REALLY
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks
I think this need not a video, but if you have a good one...why not...
jericho2442
i can easy get you a vid if you want, your choice

Sushi's Easy
01:04:268 (2) - maybe think about moving it to 01:04:453 - it plays much better for new players, atm it feels to have tricky timing

Normal
seems fine

Scar's Etna
been ages since i seen a diff like this, but nice ;)

Insane

00:17:602 (1) - im not sure on the placement of this, the jumps before all feel like a jump note what looks in the middle of the note before and after it, but due to the pattern before being like a reverse slider it makes this note play like a small jump to it then a huge jump for the next note.
i kno its just a thing of illusion but it really felt odd to me xD. maybe just try a placement like this and see if to you it flows better, because it does to me ;)

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yea small mod but these maps are great, get back to me once you have checked them tiny things out ;D
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks for modding *.*
jericho2442
here's your high quality video
http://puu.sh/MrC

video offsets is about 99ms
Topic Starter
Eirene
thanks for the video *.* (mod applied btw, thanks again)
yut_old
:)
Beuchi
Hello~ :3

Remember that these are just suggestions you can always ignore :P

~General~
- Not a big deal, but combocolors 2 and 4 look too similar~ Maybe making one of them a bit brighter or dark? Or just removing it. Ok nevermind, I fail x3;

~Sushi's Easy~
No problems here!

~Normal~
No problems here!

~Scar's Etna~
No problems here!

~Insane~
No problems here!

Ah, I remember modding this a long time ago and it was already almost flawless, good that now it's still nice x3
Call me whenever you fix that tiny thing (or not) and I'll gladly give you a bubble :3

EDIT: So it was all a mistake, sorry for that xD

BUBBLED!!
Andrea
I guess it's the time to get this out from Pending.

Ranked~
DeadAlready
oh it's really long time >.<
finally ranked~ Congratualtions~ >w</
Kurai
Ahah, tu l'as enfin rank xD
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