nick_whata wrote:

star

Thanks for your star!

DiamondCrash wrote:

Easy;

00:05:925 (1,2) - Spacing. OK fixed~

Thanks for your star and modding!

loser101 wrote:

Easy

SPOILER

Long but Nothing Wrong

Normal

SPOILER

Same ^

Taiko Oni

SPOILER

Same ^

Hard

SPOILER

Same ^

Overall

SPOILER

LONG Love the song

Thanks for your modding and star!

Kanako-chan wrote:

Hard
01:20:463 (6) - spacing, might be easier just to slide (6,1,2,3) down 1 grid OK fixed~

nice map

Thanks for your modding and star!

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi hi there! ^_^

General
Your current .mp3 has a bit rate of 320kbps. It should be no higher than 256kbps, so reduce the quality a little I don't know how to reduce the quality, could you teach me how to do so? Thanks!

Easy
00:02:233 (1) - Whistle? I think adding a whistle here is a bit strange, so i didn't change this~
00:08:694 (2) - Remove whistle? OK~
00:09:617 (1) - Add whistle I think adding a whistle here is a bit strange, so i didn't change this~
01:27:617 (2) - Remove one repeat I want the slider to end at the white line, so i didn't change this~
02:03:156 (1) - Uh, very interestingly shaped slider here O_O Do you want it curved or straight? It's kind of halfway there (and your slider points are zig zagging ...) Maybe make it look nicer? OK~
02:42:617 (2) - Same thing here OK~
02:53:925 (5) - Shorten by one repeat I want the slider to end at the white line, so i didn't change this~
03:29:002 - I'm not too sure about Kiai here :S I guess you can leave it though I didn't change this for now, but i will consider about that~
03:36:386 - No claps in the chorus here? I'd suggest putting them it, it sounds kind of sparse otherwise OK~
03:53:002 (5) - How about making this slider curve nicely? OK~
Not much with this difficulty, just some minor things. The hitsounds ARE kind of quiet and there aren't very many of them, though. I'd suggest adding more in OK~ I added some more~

Normal
No clap in Kiai time sections? I think the beats are not very good for claps, but i've tried to add some~
00:26:002 (end of 3) - Finish? OK~
00:27:156 (4, 5) - Add clap I think adding a clap here is a bit strange, so i didn't change this~
01:01:309 - No clap in this section again? :S OK~ Tried to add some~
01:08:233 - Add note here with clap OK~
01:11:925 (9) - Change whistle to clap OK~
01:12:386 (1) - Add finish? OK~
01:23:002 (3) - Clap OK~
02:11:002 (2) - Add clap? OK~
02:20:694 (5) - Use finish? I think adding a finish here is a bit strange, so i didn't change this~
02:24:386 (4) - Move one grid down OK~
02:36:848 (3) - Use clap OK~
02:41:002 (1) - Finish OK~
02:51:617 (3) - Add clap OK~
03:17:925 (1) - Add finish I think adding a finish here is a bit strange, so i didn't change this~
03:39:617 (end of 7, 1 of next combo) - Change to clap, finish OK~
03:50:694 (end of 7, 1 of next combo) - Same as above OK~
03:54:386 (8, 1 of next combo) - Same thing OK~
Suddenly I've become a hitsound modder OTL lol Maybe i am not good at hitsounds

Hard
Rename this Hard+ or Insane? (Not sure though. I'm not too good on hard maps) I didn't change this for now, but i will consider about that~
01:27:156 (4) - Change whistle to finish OK~
02:44:694 (end of 2) - Same as above OK~
While I can't find anything technically wrong with this map, I'm left wondering how many of the sixteenth note runs are there just for difficulty's sake. Most of them do fit in, but a few of them I'm just like ... huh? Oh well, don't listen to me on this, I don't usually play maps like this, so whatever :S OK~ I reduced some sixteenth notes. Hope this will become better~

Overall pretty good, so +1 star for you. Good luck with your map!

Thanks for your modding and star!

EvianBubble wrote:

Hi again, I just sent you the new .mp3 file. I hope it works out for you!

OK~ Changed to new MP3~ Thanks very much!

Takuma wrote:

I actually modded Taiko for a change.

Taiko:

01:38:181 ~ is this a mistake? I don't really understand why from here on it's .05x, well the piano part I do, so maybe you could put it back to 1x by the time the vocals kick in? Yeah that was my mistake I forgot to set the timing section back to 0.5X BPM after resnapping all notes. Anyway, it is fine now~
03:06:796 ~ ^ This is a rather fast part in the song, so it doesn't merit a .05x section in my opinion. OK~ I changed that part to 1X~

Other than that, nice.

Thanks for you modding and star!

1. Offset: 2,170
2. Set tick 2.
3. Hard is worth 11 million. Please consider shortening.

[23:15] <Ephemeral> the title is also too long
[23:15] <Ephemeral> if it's breaking standard nps
[23:15] <Ephemeral> just get the full. ver omitted

1. Is it okay to use kiai flashes on their own for the effect in taiko? Since they are part of the game?
2. 03:53:181 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I'm no good at taiko but this seems confusing.

1. 00:20:873 (2,3) - Overlaps slightly.
2. 00:23:873 (4,5) - ^, etc...
3. 00:30:796 (6,7,8) - Awkward
4. 01:59:411 (4,5,6) - ^

Takuma wrote:

Bubbled.

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MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:

1. Offset: 2,170 OK~
2. Set tick 2. OK~
3. Hard is worth 11 million. Please consider shortening.

After changing the tick rate to 2, it becomes 12 million, but i don't think it is good to shorten the song itself. I hope it is OK to have 12 million, sry!

[23:15] <Ephemeral> the title is also too long
[23:15] <Ephemeral> if it's breaking standard nps
[23:15] <Ephemeral> just get the full. ver omitted

I am not sure if i can directly change the title in song setup, so i don't change this for now~
Update: Should i change the title in 1 diff and use File > Open... to change the title in other difficulties?

Taiko Oni:

1. Is it okay to use kiai flashes on their own for the effect in taiko? Since they are part of the game?
   I think using kiai flashes in Taiko diff is OK imo, so i don't change this atm. Please tell me if this is unrankable.
2. 03:53:181 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I'm no good at taiko but this seems confusing.
   OK~ Now it is easier~

Hard:

1. 00:20:873 (2,3) - Overlaps slightly. I think this is OK, so i didn't change this atm~
   Edit 08/25: OK~ I have changed my mind, now fixed~
2. 00:23:873 (4,5) - ^, etc... OK~
3. 00:30:796 (6,7,8) - Awkward OK fixed~
4. 01:59:411 (4,5,6) - ^

OK fixed~

The rest looks fine but *yawn* I'm a bit tired of it to nazi.

Thanks for your modding and BAT star!

karenying wrote:

rank前star個><

謝謝你的star~

Galkan92 wrote:

I thought I starred it already? o.o Really? 0.0

Find someone to mod hitsounds, after it map will deserve to get fucking ranked.

OK~ Thanks for your suggestions and star!

Arusha Shuna wrote:

can't find anything wrong here
STAR!

Thanks for your modding and star!

Lesjuh wrote:

To change the title without uploading the map as a new one; Open the song folder > Open a difficulty > Change the title under [Metadata] to something shorter. Do this with all difficulties and it will be alright. Don't forget to full submit!

Yeah nothing wrong with this map, good work :>
Thanks!

Well, i have followed exactly what you taught me to do, but it takes some time to make it correctly uploaded
i hope this is fine now

Update 09/07
Well, i have followed the instructions in here, i full submitted the file and it displays normally. But when i redownload the file in here (from the osu server), it just didn't solve that problem. The one i downloaded in Easy has the word (Full ver.) in it and others hasn't. I retried a few times and it is still not solved.
Well, maybe i need to find a BAT for help...

Update 09/07 (2)
Well i think i have solved the problem now, thanks very much!

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ E A S Y ]

(✹) 00:10:939(2) - clap ? at the end OK~

(✹) 00:35:400(1) - put here the sound finish? Actually the 4 hitsound suggestions are at the same point. I think it is better to use whistle, so i didn't change this~

00:20:631(1) - ^ ^

01:49:246(1) - ^ ^

01:52:939(1) - ^ ^
oh... normal fine and hard...

star~

Thanks for your modding and star!

OnosakiHito wrote:

Because I like all 4 maps you made I will give you a star~

Thanks for your star~

BattorA wrote:

K-on (;

Star =^-^=

Thanks for your star~

KanaRin wrote:

大星星送給AABC~~

謝謝你的star~

Disoy wrote:

[Easy]
AR-1
01:52:939 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish? OK~
02:06:785 (1) - ^ 好像怪怪的, 所以沒改
02:56:169 (2,3,4) - 像這裡的snap在Easy裡最好不要常出現.. OK~
03:21:554 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 同上 OK~

[Normal]
00:13:246 (1) - 加個hitfinish? OK~
00:41:862 (1,2) - 加個hitclap? OK~
00:48:093 (1) - 把這裡移到00:47:862且加個hitclap 我覺得還是 48:093 較好的, 所以沒改
01:26:170 (7) - 這裡的circle去掉? [color=8000FF]OK~[/color]
01:36:093 (1) - 加個hitwhistle? OK~
01:52:939 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish? OK~
01:55:708 (1,2) - 加個hitclap? OK~
02:07:708 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish? OK~
02:40:246 (7) - silder的尾端把hitwhistle換成hitclap? OK~
02:55:016 (6,7) - hitwhistle換成hitclap? OK~
03:35:400 (1) - 這難度是Normal所以不建議出現這東西阿.. 嗯... 一次這樣是可以的吧...
03:43:939 (3) - 同上 影響整段 spacing... 太難改了
03:47:631 (4) - 同上= = 後續有一樣的最好改改阿.. ^

[Hard]
00:47:862 (2) - 加個hitwhistle? OK~
00:49:708 (2) - ^ OK~
00:53:862 (3) - 中間來回處加個hitwhistle? OK~
01:36:093 (1) - 加個hitwhistle? OK~
03:42:785 (10) - 加個note? 好像怪怪的, 所以沒改

Hard難度做的不錯雖然好像太難了...
嗯... 其實已經比以前簡單了, 不過我會考慮再簡化一些的~

謝謝你的mod~

Zekira wrote:

...didn't I mod this song before...?
Seriously how many people are mapping/have mapped this song? >_>

Offset: +5 from current OK~

[Easy]
Some sliders look unnecessarily ugly. You probably know which ones those are. OK, fixed~

[Normal]
00:29:631 (3) - I really suggest you extend this to the white tick. OK, fixed~
01:13:939 (4) - symmetry ^
01:30:785 (1) - I suggest you shorten this to only 2/1, delete the next 5 beats and just make it a long break; I really feel like a break would fit very well there Don't really understand what is "shorten to 2/1", so i keep no changes for that part. Deleted 5 beats~
01:45:554 (1) - move 1/8 back (lol) OK~
02:29:170 (1) - suggestion: make it only 3 beats worth long then put a new circle for the start of kiai ^
03:28:246 (1,2) - delete? ^
03:41:631 (3) - symmetry ^

[Hard]
01:30:785 (1) - same comment like in Normal Don't really understand what is "shorten to 2/1", so i keep no changes for that part. Deleted 5 beats~
01:45:554 (1) - move back 1/8 and extend by 1/8 (lol) OK~

[Taiko]
Remove the fountains orz! OK~ btw, are fountains unrankable? Since actually I like fountains~
I like how it was done though. At first I thought the 4-stream notes were inappropriate, but its frequent use in correct situations kind of made it OK.
Also, maybe a bit too easy lol? But the song isn't really fit for heavy notes so this should be fine

Thanks for your modding and star~

Zekira wrote:

Special effects are highly discouraged from Taiko-only maps; fountains are a very strict case because remember that kiai affects scoring in Taiko. OK~

Anyway, hope no one kills me for this.

Thanks for your bubble~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Artist should be consistent with the other ranked version so change it to this:
"Toyosaki Aki & Hisaka Yoko - Watashi no Koi wa Hotchkiss"
Remember to do a full submission after this fix, if you've problems at fixing it read here.

OK fixed~

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

02:29:175 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing isn't consistent. Make it to something like this.

OK~

When you'll fix both I'll rank.

Don't really understand why after uploading the map, the bubble became a star.
But anyway, thanks for your modding~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Don't worry, it happens when you update your map. Anyways, this map is going to have an heart because it's going to be...

Ranked~

Thanks very much !

Galkan92 wrote:

Congratulations! o/

Thanks~

[Shalon] wrote:

congratulations, aabc!

Thanks~

OnosakiHito wrote:

Congratulation to your first ranked beatmap~!

Sallad4ever wrote:

didn't realize this is already ranked
congratz

Thanks both~