deetz wrote:

dude naruto is my favourite animay ever im so happy u mapped it

[General]
mp3 sounds really really quiet and hitsounds overpower all the other sounds so I hope you are looking for a new one. increased volume

[Easy]
00:18:680 (1,2) - you don't really do overlaps like this anywhere else in the map and it's kind of ehhh in an easy so you could just let them not touch i think
00:51:956 (1,2,3,4) - kinda forced imo, you could rearrange like this but neater w/e https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2966142

[Normal]
00:20:404 (1,2,3) - feels really forced and jammed up, especially for a normal. let the pattern breathe and be read easier :v plus 00:20:404 (1) - misses a beat. You could map it the same way you do most of these sounds. woops fixed
00:53:680 (2,3,4,1) - pentagon shape would be cooler pls no for reasons, i dont like the angles
01:22:990 (3,1) - idk you could put a 1/2 circle between these two to avoid missing that sorta important beat shure y not

[Hard]
00:31:439 (2) - why? ;_; YA
01:02:645 (4,1) - slight overlap looks blah YGA
01:10:921 (4,5,6,7,1) - I think this is too difficult considering Normal has no 1/4 notes at all. its k cuz low bpm
01:17:128 (2,3,4) - pretty big jump for a hard?
01:18:163 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:16:439 (3) - this is actually good now that I think about it lel gh
01:18:507 (4,5,6) - why sudden 1/1 circles killing momentum? you could do 1/2 sliders general variation i guess

[COAXED INTO AN ULTRA EXTREME SNAFU]
00:34:197 (2,3,4,5) - that kind of back and forth doesn't suit this sound, maybe something along these lines would be better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2966202 Just an example, prolly better for you to use your imagination fixed differently~
01:19:973 (6,1) - stream jump feels excessively large, should just move 1's side closer doable

also a suggestion for all diffs to which it may apply. it's kind of weird ending as her voice trails off, so you could map something like this rhythm. up to you. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2966208 naisu

Additionally, in my opinion the spre blahblahb blah currently i think its fine, will think about it.

Solid work otherwise. good luck

Frey wrote:

My screen exploded ;w;

General

1. Because your song's volume is a little low, so the hitsounds are REALLY loud in contrast. Find a louder one if you can. increased volume
   
2. Hitsounds in Kiai need more work

Easy

1. 00:46:783 (1) - unify the DS fixed~
2. 01:14:025 (1) - For better blanket, move it to x497 y191 something else, but better blanket yep

Normal

1. 00:31:956 (3) - add whistle like you did before ok
2. 00:33:852 (1,4) - not sure of this, the stack seems risky should be ok, end is visible
3. 00:34:714 (3) - add wthistle ok
4. 00:51:611 - remove clap? no, i think its fine.
5. 01:02:990 (1,2) - overlap? seems more dangerous than 00:33:852 (1,4) because 1 is on top of 2, it is more readable, should be ok!
6. 01:04:887 (3) - remove finish? In kiai, normal-hitfinish just too weird, lower its volume or just remove it soft-hitwhistle! :3
7. 01:20:749 (1,2) - ah...not sure of this too, but I believe it's risky should be ok~

Hard

1. 00:07:128 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved ok
2. 00:24:197 (4) - Ctrl+G, then flow is better (but increase the difficulty) hard to compromise, so nope
3. 00:48:335 (2,3) - blanket can be improved ok
4. 01:21:266 (2) - add whistle nope, i dont see why
5. 01:27:473 (1) - cancel NC its even more slow slider.. so i will think first~

Insane

1. 00:31:266 (1) - Ctrl+g, then 00:31:611 (2) too do for 1 only
2. 00:40:232 (3) - add NC, because it changes into 1/3 ok~
3. 00:55:059 (3) - add clap then remove clap of 00:55:232 (5) don't need
4. 01:09:542 (4) - add clap don't need

SNAFU

1. 00:40:232 (4) - add NC ok~
2. 00:50:232 (4) - it's the highest diff, so you should ctrl+g this okay, looks fun~
3. 00:51:611 (4) - ctrl+g cool!

Good luck handsome thanks!

Milan- wrote:

shitty mod (i do watch naruto wtf)

• General

1. slider tick rate 2 fits better this song. do u tink im garven
   
   Easy
2. 00:18:680 (1,2) - these can be placed on a more natural way aaaaaaaaaaa
3. Altho, you could also keep the same rhythm that you use afterwards twice in a row http://puu.sh/h0wIP/ec687b6f33.jpg like you did here 00:29:714 (2,3) - aaaaaa
4. 00:29:714 (2) - NC. you did it here too 00:18:680 (1) - yeee
5. 00:29:714 (2) - Also, it's very recommended to Not use these kind of sliders on easy. Cuz new players are newbies (?, so make it more smoother. k. Same goes for 00:49:197 (1) - , 01:05:749 (1) - just make the trail visible as much as you can >< c r e a t i v i t y
6. 00:41:266 (1) - I think you can delete this note, you dont really need as there's no real beat here nor vocals. Same goes for 00:46:783 (1) -
7. 00:42:301 (3) - what about this instead http://puu.sh/h0xgP/49b13c3844.jpg ? 00:47:818 (3) - here you can shorten by 1/1 and leave a 2/1 cool gap wut.. nah long sliders 4 lyf
8. 01:15:404 (3,1) - would be cool to improve the flow here (rotating 1, 45° should be fine i guess) yaaaa
   
   Normal
9. 00:12:301 (2,1) - oh my.. I believe this is quite confusing for 100k player like me. Try to, atleast, give move visibility where 1 starts. Like 1 grid or something big change
10. 00:14:370 (3) - NC? to keep constancy on this section yaaaa
11. 00:18:335 (2) - I'd try to make this cymbal clickable cuz it's a normal. something http://puu.sh/h0z6a/93a8a9186c.jpg . Same with 00:29:197 (1,2) - doing this will make rhythms 'weird', like lots of connecting stuff which i dun like, or odd rhythm.
12. 00:34:542 - Try to map this vocal out, imo fits how you mapped this map. Maybe make 00:34:370 (2) - 1/2 reverse keeping it simple
13. 00:44:197 - same with this vocal. cuz how clear it is keeping it simple
14. 00:48:852 (3) - you can move this note to 00:49:025 - to fits vocals better. Also there's no like a "woooooo such a beat" where it's right now YA
15. 00:50:921 (2) - move it a bit more up? lol. Like x304 y194 t r i a n g l e s
16. 01:02:990 (1,2) - 01:20:749 (1,2) - altho, it looks cool and stuff, the flow is so broken here ;w;. Or, atleast make the 2nd slider a bit more visible seems fine to me :<
17. Uhm i think you could add some whistles at some section where your rhythms destroy the hitsounding. More noticiable from 00:40:921 - to 00:51:956 - there are just some few samples ;w,
    
    Hard
18. 00:12:990 (5,1) - give these more space cuz the big buummm my structure tho ;-; cosnider~!
19. 00:18:680 - here you could make this clickable like i said on normal. Same with 00:26:611 (4) - nah, i don't want weird gaps when the sliderends correspond to nothing, i think its alright.
20. 00:29:714 (1,2) - just as a 1/1 sliders fits better the music imo. cuz there's nothing noticiable where 1 ends yesss <33
21. 00:34:887 (4,2) - would be cool to avoid this ugly overlap. and yes, you can see it on gameplay yeeee
22. 01:10:921 (4,5,6,7,1) - kinda wierd you map this stream but avoid some triples like 00:59:714 (1,2) - .. I'd rather not map this as stream but as a 1/4 repeat noooo, i didnt do the 'triple' cuz starting with a triple after a spinner is too difficult to time, but when player is ~in teh flow~ during the chorus this should be simple.
23. 01:21:956 (4,5) - give these a bit more space? like 0.6 or 0.7x instead feels better cuz how fast your sliders are, in addition to your jumps. YA
24. 00:20:059 (4,1) - i'd swap these NCs, cuz the new rhythm starts from 4 not from 1.. Sames goes for 00:22:818 (4,1) - 00:25:576 (4,1) - AAAA <3
    
    Insane
25. There were a couple of overlaps that doesnt look cool playing ;w, 01:12:301 (4,2) - ; 00:41:611 (3,1) - 3 tail could be on 1 body instead of its head loooooll
26. 00:23:680 (3) - nc to be constant here remboed other one
27. 01:27:473 (4) - nc ? like you did on hard yeeee
28. 01:27:473 (4) - cool slider :3 zerherejtezj
    
    snafun
29. 00:58:076 (8,1) - give these more space. like you did here 00:15:318 (8,1) - ? sure
30. 01:27:473 (4) - nc? ok
31. 00:42:473 - i think mapping this snare out is important. it fits vocals as well. Same here 00:47:990 - and 00:50:749 - considered but it just makes rhythm too dense imo.
32. Fk it i cant even play this
    Hitsounds:
33. didnt know what diff to mod hitsounds so i took these timestamps from snafn lol: 00:07:128 (1,3,5) - would be nice to add claps to these. (or something to give feedback on this stream) ok
34. 00:07:990 (2) - 00:10:749 (2) - 00:12:817 (11) - 00:13:507 (2) - 00:15:490 (2) - add clap ok
35. 00:15:576 (3,5) - drum clap sounds a lot better here
36. 00:18:163 (3) - and 00:18:335 - should be your custom clap imo, cuz snaress. same here 00:29:197 (3,4) -
37. 00:21:439 (1) - add clap too? on head. same with 00:24:197 (1) - .
38. 00:32:301 - cuz you arent mapping this snare, add clap on Hard or any diff where you mapped this. Same with 00:35:059 - 00:37:818 - 00:50:749 -
39. 00:40:461 (3,4,5,6) - if you change these to drum finish, sounds really cool
40. 00:45:749 (3,4) - i'd add drum-clap on 3 tail. and drum-finish on 4 head and tail na
41. 00:49:197 (1) - finish on head. 00:51:611 (4) - head also has cymbal i think, or it just sounds ok with it aaa.
42. 00:54:714 (1) - ; 00:59:887 (3) - head ; 01:00:232 (1) - head ; add finish
43. 00:58:163 (1) - auto-clap sounds better here
44. 01:00:232 - sampleset normal doesnt sounds good at all, it's quite annoying with these kind of peaceful songs >< (or atleast change the sampleset where there's no clear beat like 01:10:404 (3) - tail.) hmmm
45. 01:01:094 (4) - if you're gonna add drum clap where the kick are uhm well add to every big white line i guess. like 01:01:611 (1) - 01:02:990 (1) - etc
46. 01:09:197 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream could use some drum addittions, but with normal sampleset over it doesnt good ;w;
47. 01:11:094 (7) - add clap so this stream sounds less empty. altho the whole stream could use clap
48. 01:19:542 - for this long stream, i'd add some claps so it gives some kind of feedback or something something something (specially the second part lol)
49. 01:25:749 (1) - add drum clap pls fixed most ^ ^

yes, im copying ur modding format

Euny wrote:

• Easy

1. 00:09:887 (1) - i recommend rotate this slider with -10 degrees(with selection centre) and place it on x116y52 i think it give better flow for your diff. (dont worry about touching hp bar. i checked that) ok
2. 00:12:301 (3,2) - you can avoid this overlap. ok
3. 01:00:232 (1,2) - how about make these objcets for symmetry?(ctrl J G) don't need
4. 00:49:197 (1) - add whistle? cause new part start.(recommend that for other diffs) don't need

• Hard

1. 00:20:404 (1) - just suggest. using my code for better blanket and place tried
2. 00:54:714 (1) - how about move it on x243y325 for better overlap and flow? no, now is flipped triangle pattern.

• Insane

1. 00:12:645 (5) - place this on x169y73 for make better place with 00:13:163 (1) - this slider? triangle pattern
2. 00:17:990 (4) - remove nc and..
3. 00:18:163 (1) - should be put nc here right? help for reading, nope.
4. 00:20:921 (1) - remove that nc cause you dont put nc other diffs. yep
5. 00:24:714 (2) - move this slider on x250y119 for better place? ok
6. 00:42:301 (1) - i recommend move it on x278y68 for better overlap with 00:41:611 (3) - this. different change

• SNAFU

1. 00:17:818 (1,3) - as same as insane diff. 00:17:818 (1) - remove nc and put for 00:18:163 (3) - here. nope~

thats it.
normal diff looks fine to me:)
always thank you and sorry for late. thanks again ^^[/centre]

Litharrale wrote:

All these fancy mod formats. imma go back to basics.

http://puu.sh/h0ZLf/a0e9b9f4bc.png What even.

Snafu:

00:08:163 (3) - These streams are just lazy, I'm sure you can do something better here. low volume = low spacing
00:25:059 (4,3) - stack ok
00:34:542 (4,1) - ^ no
00:40:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing and shape are way more difficult than the rest of the song. Alumetorz am wrong. not really, its 1/3.
00:50:576 (1,2,3,4) - confusing to read nope
00:53:507 (1,2,3,4) - Nice blanket ty
01:00:232 (1) - I disagree with the SV change but I mean, that's probably because I broke my S on it lmao kiai high sv forever
01:11:439 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Fix NC, this without followpoints is annoying i would say the opposite
01:21:870 (10,1,2,3,4,1) - Damn this is sexy ty

Insane:
01:10:921 (4,5,6,7) - ouch seems fine to me
01:19:887 (2,3) - shift the 2 away what for?
00:32:128 (4) - should end on the white tick ill consider it, but ill try to stick to the extended sound
00:34:887 (6) - ^ There are beats in the middle of both these sliders ^

Hard:
00:41:611 (2,3) - Space further antijumps
00:43:680 (1,3) - Add something between these sliders? e.g keeping low-density rhythm
01:17:128 (2,3,2,3) - unstack what for?
01:27:473 (1) - Nothing wrong with this, but I liked your fancy shape in your insane fancyshape'd this

All from me atm.

Chaoslitz wrote:

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[Easy]

1. 00:42:301 (3) - I don't think it is suitable to use a long slider, end 00:42:301 (3) at 00:42:990 and then add a note at 00:43:335, will suit rhythm more
2. 00:47:818 (3) - Same thing as above slow part = low density rhythm~

[Normal]

1. 01:06:266 (2,3) - 1/2 slider in here not really fit the vocal, try this?: keeping for the clap hitsound

[Hard]

1. 00:19:542 (3) - Curve up instead?, nearly outside the screen ~_~ antiflow to show better 1/1 spacing
2. 00:30:232 (2) - Placed too low in my opinion its not offscreen so its okay
3. 00:37:990 (1,2) - It touches hiterror ;_; does it matter @_@

[Insane]

1. 00:06:783 (4,1) - Distance here is too far its fine
2. 00:12:301 (3,4) - Too close for the whole random jump changed
3. 00:14:370 (4) - Using curve down slider would give a better movement don't like it
4. 00:16:439 (3) - Too many reverse D: it fits the sound
5. 00:32:990 (2) - Well still place too low its fine, not offscreen
6. 00:36:094 (5) - ^ fixed, was offscreen
7. 00:43:507 (4) - ^, and some others -w- its fine, not offscreen

[SNAFU/hitsound]

1. Not going to mod it but I have streams are overmapped in the beginning no overmap

A short mod, since I can't find much to mod OAO
good luck~

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. Offset is wrong. It should be 00:07:645 so that the big white tick is in its proper position. Therefore you have to re-do NCs (and don't say this is wrong, because it's not. Listen to when the finishes are) no, it is wrong. listen to the clap pattern. well its not like this matters much :p
2. That background is already been used for another map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/90647 ok
   Try and find another different one

SNAFU

1. In regards to the streams at the start of the map, having a hit circle above the stream on a different beat is very hard to read.
   Eg. 00:07:990 (2,3) - You should probably move the first circle away from the stream didn't see people struggling with it
2. 00:19:197 (2) - Not stacked properly done
3. 00:39:025 (5) - This looks hard to read. Maybe move it away from the previous slider didn't see people struggling with it
4. 00:49:197 (1) - Not stacked properly ok
5. 01:04:714 (3) - Move this down a bit what for?
6. 01:20:749 (1) - Damn, I'm impressed. What an amazing slider thanks <3

Insane

1. 00:13:680 (2) - Not stacked properly ok
2. 00:17:990 (1) - Deletethere is a sound
3. 00:31:266 (1) - Not stacked properly ok
4. 00:47:818 (1) - ^ ok
5. 01:01:266 (4) - ^ ok

Hard

1. 01:27:473 (1) - Try and make this more circular it would kill readability, imo.

CelsiusLK wrote:

As requested

[General]

1. preview point is unsnapped on every diffs fixed`
2. add silent sliderslide hitsound? nope

[easy]

1. 00:15:404 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
2. 00:20:059 (2) - end this slider here 00:20:921 - sound better imo really dont like to switch polarity @_@
3. 00:22:818 (2) - end this slider here 00:23:676 - sound better imo , don't worry about polarity if the beat there is really emphasized beginners can still play that note perfectly ( apply to others too ) really dont like to switch polarity @_@
4. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
5. 01:22:301 (1,2) - this overlap might be too tricky for beginner fixed~

[normal]

1. 00:15:921 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
2. 00:20:404 (1,2) - stack play better imo no fix, its consistent rhythm/pattern.
3. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo , delete nc so it make pattern easier to read no fix
4. 01:02:990 (1,2) - this overlap might be a bit tricky for normal fixed.
5. 01:20:749 (1,2) - ^ fixed.

[hard]

1. 00:06:439 (1,2) - lower spacing a bit so it a bit easier to play for hard diff ? done.
2. 00:15:921 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read i think NC makes it easier to read, lol.
3. 00:41:611 (2,3,1) - anti-jumps is a bit weird here for hard diff , stacking or spacing would work better imo stacked
4. 00:47:128 (2,3,1) - ^ stacked
5. 00:54:714 (1) - nc here is not really necessary imo, delete nc so it make pattern easier to read why ;-;
6. 00:54:714 (1) - add a note ? sound better imo what
7. 01:10:921 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4 repeat slider work better here , stream is kinada a bit too hard for hard diff imo i think it is okay, there is good builldup.

[insane]

1. 00:41:611 (3) - curve at tail a bit ? would make pattern looks nice cool
2. 00:56:094 (1,2) - swap place of these two notes so the flow here 00:55:749 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - might be better imo altho its nice, it makes 00:55:749 (8,1) - unplayable

[snafu]

1. 01:08:163 (5) - place it somewhere around x24 y160 would make flow here 01:07:818 (4,5) - nice i like the back and forth
2. 01:21:956 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here might be too much , it a bit weird for , I'd use 0.8x spacing stream here instead i think its good for emphasis!

I think hitsound pattern can be improved a bit

good luck thanks~