1. Onozuka's Journey on the Sanzu River - 4Key (3,66 stars, 3034 notes)

Desperate-kun wrote:

The Kiais need more HW-Style 1/4. Kudosu please

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi Feerum~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( √ )
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio :( √ )
Background :( √ )
Hitsounding :( √ )

4K = |1|2|3|4|

In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding above
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments

bum

because you are using pitched piano, then it is natural to take into account pitch relevancy into consideration when mapping o(>﹏<)o so。。。
00:01:965 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴add another B6, 40% volume
00:03:353 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴^ Booth done. Feels nice to play! Thanks!
00:09:595 (9595|1) - to 3 Yes, thanks.
00:11:503 - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴F#7, 30%ｖｏｌｕｍｅ Added. I Also Added a G6H on the next White line with 20% Volume. It's great! Thsnks!
00:22:601 (22601|2) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴＾^ Yes. Sounds good!
00:21:908 - http://puu.sh/gU7iH/a3b3a1efa2.jpg Great. Thanks! I also added a F#7 sound with 40% on the last Red line before the LN's start!

00:27:110 (27110|0) - to 2 Very nice. Was a bad jack before. Done!
00:31:098 - http://puu.sh/gU7o8/288a9c0b20.jpg Very nice Handbalance. Thanks!
01:19:306 (79306|2) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ends at 01:20:000 - Done
01:21:387 (81387|3,81734|1) -(⊙o⊙)？ should be 4/4 instead of 2/4? I'll try to follow the Vocal. So i will leave it how it is
01:30:405 (90405|1,91098|0) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ should be 1 LN, not 2. combine them Booth LN's follow her voice. i Leave it how it is.
01:32:486 (92486|1) - Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ lengthen by another 2/4 Vocal LN's. It's fine how it is

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~ T-Thanks grune <3
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

- Bad Apple - wrote:

Suprise Mod \(°-° )/

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Gonna keep the mod in german, just for easier understanding and communication.

- Lé Mod -

General
- 04:50:173 - Kiai kürzer als 15 Sekunden, manche BN's machen da Stress. Geht zwar schlecht länger, aber du findest bestimmt 'ne Lösung
- Rügenwalder Rübenfest Zitat: "Don't worry no one will notice"

Map
- Rapetrain incoming!
- 00:02:486 -, 00:03:873 -, 00:06:127 -, 00:06:647 -, usw - müssten alle gemappt werden, wenn du die Töne hier; 00:11:503 (11503|0,11676|2) - auch mappst Gesagt, getan. Spielt sich überraschend gut!
- 00:13:410 - add 2 für's Drum? Man kann's Hit-Hat raushören (hier hast du's auch gemappt; 00:14:798 - , same drum-sound) Done für consistency! Thanks!
- 00:17:225 (17225|1) - move 1, damit der doppel jack auf 2 weg ist Yap
- 00:18:439 (18439|2) - move 1 od. 2, damit der doppel jack auf 3 weg ist Isch nehmene einse!
- 00:21:214 (21214|1) - move 1 und dafür 00:21:561 (21561|0) - auf 3? Nehm ich doch vorerst mal!
- 00:38:208 - wieso doppel-chord? remove 4 (außer du mappst das Piano damit, dann muss hier aber noch eine dazu; 00:38:382 - ) Note entfernt. Danke!
- 00:43:410 (43410|3,43410|2,43757|2,43757|3) - same here, falls du nicht das Piano mappst muss jeweils eine weg. Done! Consistency is pflicht :3
- 00:44:971 - snare-drum hörbar, add auf 1 (hast bei späteren stücken auch 2 noten für die snare bei solchen fills benutzt) Thanks!
- 01:04:220 (64220|1) - move 1, sonst doppel jack auf 2 Yes!
- 01:06:821 - ich persönlich finde 4 hier etwas übertrieben, man könnte aber für das ausklingende cymbal eine LN einbauen, die hier; 01:07:688 - endet. (dann hast du drei noten für die Kick und eine für's Cymbal, die Lücke wäre auch weg) wenn nicht, hier hast du für den selben sound auch nur 3 noten benutzt: 02:24:509 - Ne LN fänd ich da unpassend. Hab eine entfernt!
- 01:16:792 (76792|0) - Ghost-Note, remove (zumindest höre ich da keinen Ton und die anderen Ghosts hast du im Stream auch weggelassen) Aye! Wie konnt ich das überhören. Dabei bin ich die Streams 3x durchgegangen
- 01:27:803 (87803|3) - move 1? würde für den flow jacks vermeiden, soweit möglich Done!
- 01:46:358 - selber cymbal sound wie am anfang erwähnt, add 4 od. 1 Add bei 4
- 01:51:040 - wenn double-chords für's piano, dann add 4 Eine Note ist für Piano, die andere für die Snare oder wie das heißt. jedenfals für den anderen ton da! xD
- 01:51:908 - add 3 für's drum? Yup
- 01:56:069 - wenn double-chords fürs piano, dann muss hier noch eine note dazu Mh.. ich hör bei den 2 davor noch anderes sounds nebenbei mit raus. Neben Piano. Hier nicht. Darum las ich das erst mal so.
- 02:20:000 - Cymbal+Snare drum hier, würde noch ne note dazu machen da sehr laut und deutlich hörbar (auf 2) Added
- 02:24:509 - add auf 4, falls du den Quad-Chord vorher nicht rausgenommen hast, add LN falls du die LN hinzugefügt hast. No Change weil andere bearbeitet
- 02:27:543 (147543|3) - müsste ne Ghost Note sein, falls sie den Synth mappt. Nein. Ton vorhanden
- 02:28:931 (148931|3) - die auch Entfernt
- 02:33:613 (153613|0) - nicht ganz sicher, könnte aber auch eine sein. allgemein, die auf den blauen linien sind öfter ghostnotes, vllt nochmal selber drüberschauen Nein. Ton vorhanden
- 02:34:653 (154653|0) - ^ Auch hier Ton vorhanden
- 02:43:931 - remove 2, hast sonst nie 2 singles+LN für die Kick drums benutzt (während der LN parts.)
- 02:43:757 - wenn ^ befolgt ^, dann move 2 Beides done
- 03:00:289 (180289|2,180578|3) - Strg+G für Pitch
- 03:08:439 (188439|3,188786|2) - ^
- 03:02:370 (182370|2,182543|1,182717|0) - ^
- 03:04:740 (184740|0,185318|2) - ^
- 03:07:225 (187225|0) - move 2, damit nicht 2x note auf 1
- 03:08:266 (188266|1,188439|3) - Strg+G für Pitch Glaub da is dir ein kleiner fehler unterlaufen. Beim anklicken des Timings wird mir nur eine note Marktiert.
- 03:15:087 (195087|3,195549|2) - ^
- 03:16:416 (196416|3) - move 1 für pitch
- 03:16:936 (196936|0) - move 2 für pitch
- 03:17:225 (197225|1) - move 1 ^
- 03:19:538 (199538|2) - move 2, damit 03:19:884 (199884|1) - auf 4 kann und der pitch wieder stimmt Komplett angenommen bis auf das was ich erwähnt hab!
- 03:34:046 (214046|2,214220|2,214393|2,214566|2,214740|2) - kokoro itaii I'm so sorry (Lösung; http://puu.sh/gUcgI/e875031073.jpg, grüne Linie auf 03:33:873 - ) Ich wusste sofort das dir das auffallen wird. Ich wusste einfach keine lösung dafür. Vielen dank <3
- 03:36:301 - move 2 auf 3 oder 4 auf 3 (sonst haste den doppel jack auf 2 und 4) ersteres!
- 03:39:249 (219249|3) - move 1, sonst doppel jack auf 4 Yes
- 03:40:289 (220289|1) - move 2 sonst doppel jack auf 2 Schau dir das bitte nochmal an :^)
- 03:40:462 (220462|3) - wenn ^ befolgt ^, move 1, sonst 3 noten hintereinander auf 4 Nich bei mir
- 04:30:578 (270578|1) - move 1, sind ohnehin schon so viele auf 2 Done

Das wäre für den Moment erstmal alles. Sieht nach viel aus,ist es auch, aber solange es hilft, ist es das doch wert!
Hoffe ich konnte helfen.

I hope this was somewhat of a useful mod.
Good luck with ranked! :3

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Feerum-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

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4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)

Onozuka's journey

00:23:481 (23481|0,23481|3) change into normal note, check 00:45:678 for consistency Yes, done.
00:56:429 (56429|0) LN..?? if you following vocal, should start here 00:56:256 I tried to catch the "woooosh" sound. But i think to follow the vocal is better here, thanks!
01:51:053 add note, still piano sound here No thanks. The 2 Chords are for the Snare sound. At this Point it's only the Piano. More notes would be to much
01:58:684 (118684|1) remove, no sound or low No Thanks. i know the Sound is maybe low but that would destroy a little bit the LN part's. See here 02:01:098 -
02:03:366 add note consistency parttern Yes, done.
03:04:464 (184464|2,184753|2) avoid same row Yes, moved.
03:55:562 (235562|3) move to 1 Yes.
very good pattern, but i suggest you
kick beat sound = 2 note like 00:13:597 and Snare beat sound = 3 like 00:13:770
it's optioanl (afraid if it broken your pattern T_T) It's a nice suggestion.. i really think about it too.. but i'm afraid too that could destroy the patterns.. so i will leave it now how it is

Nice map
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

-Kamikaze- wrote:

holy shit I'm like 3 weeks late with mods, fml

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Keys: |1|2|3|4|

Metadata:

Source is wrong. It should be 東方Project because that's how ZUN calls it, thus how it's in original. Move touhou to tags
Tags to add: ほたる すみじゅん くまりす 東方花映塚 retour ~ riverside view 小野塚 小町 おのづか こまち Done


[Onozuka's Journey]

00:10:289 (10289|3) - Delete, ghost note //That's an echo and it's almost gone when the note is placed
00:11:503 (11503|0) - ^
00:11:676 (11676|2) - ^ Oh okay. All done!
00:23:208 - Add note Done
00:44:624 - Something like this is better to emphasize drums:
//applies to all similar patterns Thats Great! Thanks! Done for all these Parts
03:43:584 - This part feels like a prefect place for hard chordmash and not the same LN+1/2 stuff again I'll check this later.

To be honest, this map is quite solid, but it has 2 main issues so I'm not going to bother with more of technicalities. Patterns are okay/good.
1) Some triples feel like they're unneeded, for example 00:35:780 - normal beat mapped with 3 notes when crash on 00:34:913 - is also 3 notes. Suggesting to use 2 notes for those beats unless it has more stuff into it.
2) The worse issue is however, that this map is pretty boring. It's pretty much constant 1/2 patterns with occasional LNs, when there is A LOT of REALLY LOUD 1/4s just everywhere in faster parts. In order to make it enjoyable you should map those 1/4s into a jumpstream (streams with chords). This i will Check later too.

Sorry for a really lazy mod, but hope it helps o/

Crono wrote:

Hi, great song choice. I love the map but I feel it could be far better. Whether you think my mod helps or not is completely up to you just know I want to help make it better. I must stress that this is all optional and will am not demanding you implement these changes.

This will mostly be about adding more diversity to the map to make it less repetitive. It will also cover a few points that Kami mentioned but a little more detailed.

A detailed explanation of a couple issues Kami pointed out

In the majority of the map you have notes like this 1/2 beat at 00:16:358



Perhaps it should be like this?



The only issue I have with this is that the sound is stronger on the top row, usually there would be three notes on the stronger beats instead of the weaker beats like in the second picture. It may be that it's to another sound, but that sound is difficult to determine for me personally. This also applies to places like where you have LNs but pretty much the same 1/2 patterns. The picture below is an example where a single is on the stronger sound instead of a 2 note chord. Another option would to just have them both as 2 note chords.



I think it would better like this because the 3 note chord is on the stronger sound.

Options to Improve Diversity and lessen boring repetition

The main issue I have with the map as a whole is that it is almost entirely 1/2 patterns. It's too repetitive.
In some sections you could make use of the hitsounds a bit better. You could add a personal touch to your diff to make add diversity and make it less repetitive. Like some louder soft normal hitsounds to add some brief streams here and there.

Option 1: add 1/4 patterns

If you listen closely there is a fair bit of 1/4 in the background you can map to as well. Why is 00:13:064 to 00:13:584 the only place with a short stream?



Having more of these would make the map alot better imo.
Below is just a few more places where you could add 1/4 patterns:

• 00:14:277 to 00:14:451
  00:16:879 to 00:17:225 and 00:17:399 to 00:17:746
  01:23:988 to 01:24:335
  01:39:249 to 01:39:769

There are many more where you could add short streams or even jump streans like Kami's example, but when used effectively can lessen the boring repetition.

Option 2: Add more Long Notes to make a more lyrical pattern.

This may sound obvious but switching the note focus (like the sounds you are mostly focused on such as vocals, drums etc) can change the feel in a map a little and feel a little more immersed while playing your map.

Combining this with option 1 creates can make put out some more interesting effects.

...................................



There is of course a lot more advice I can't think of at the moment. The rest of this is just general modding.

[Onozuka's Journey]

///[1][2][3][4]

01:34:827 Add note to 1 Yes, done
01:44:624 change 1 to a long note and end it at the next 1/2
01:44:798 change 2 ^
01:44:971 change 3 ^
01:45:318 change 1 ^ To this all i have to say no. I don't want to Map the Piano with LN's.. it feels a little bit Random while Testplay

These are just examples and ideas that could improve this mania diff.

If any of this is helpful to you and you would like further suggestions. Let me know. I will be looking forward to seeing how you improve it. Be modding again later after your next few updates.

Jinyan wrote:

really fun Taiko diff, going to make a mod soon If you don't mind

Jinyan wrote:

really fun Taiko diff, going to make a mod soon If you don't mind

• General
  - You need create or change that BG
  - Please that HP drain no can be 7 or 6 but no 9 .w. please fix
  - AR change too
  - OD can be 7 or 7,5 i gues
  - Desactivate Widescreen Support

• Genryuu Taiko
  
  - 00:04:393 (7) - elimine this note, this note is unnecessary
  - 00:12:717 (28) - can change this to K
  - You can add d here 00:14:017 (35) -
  - this is a suggestion you can make kddkk 00:15:838 (41,42,43,44,45) -
  - add a note here k note00:18:179 (53) -
  - 00:20:000 (60,61) - Ctrl+g
  - 00:34:913 (163) - change this to k
  - Elimine this finish 00:46:012 (246) - this is unrankeable
  - Elimine this note 00:46:185 (247) -
  - ^ 00:47:572 (252) -
  - add d here 00:49:306 (259) -
  - add k here 00:51:474 (269) -
  - ctrl + g 00:52:948 (276,277) -
  - add d here 00:54:855 (285) -
  - move this note 00:56:676 (293) - to 00:57:023 (295) - and quit this finish 00:57:110 (296) -
  - add a d here 01:01:185 (318) -
  - change to k and change this to d 01:09:769 (366) -
  - change to k 01:09:942 (367) -
  - change to k 01:13:410 (396) -
  - Change this to k 01:13:931 (399) - and this too 01:14:104 (401) -
  - ^ 01:16:879 (423) -
  - ^ 01:22:081 (462) -
  - add d here 01:43:064 (609) -
  - ^ 01:47:225 (642) -
  - ^ 01:48:613 (653) -
  - change this to k 01:53:728 (699) -
  - ^ 01:57:110 (730) -
  - ^ 01:59:364 (749) -
  - add d here
  - Move this 02:28:931 (933) - to 02:28:584 (931) -
  - add this 03:02:312 (1154,1155,1156) - kkk, 03:03:006 (1157) - k and this d 03:03:353 (1158) -
  - add another k here 03:04:393 (1160) -
  - add d here 03:05:260 (1162) - and here 03:05:780 (1163) -
  - add d here 03:06:647 (1165) -
  - add k here 03:07:168 (1166) -
  - add d here 03:07:514 (1167) -
  - ^ 03:07:861 (1168) -
  - add kd here 03:08:208 (1169,1170) - and make another here 03:08:728 (1171,1172) -
  - change to d
  - can you change this to k 04:01:012 (387) -

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

if this get ranked we will have all mode of this song


[box=Onozuka's Journey[notice:1337:1337]]
00:02:486 (2486|1,2659|3) - move to 4,3 Nope, it's good how it is because pitch
00:08:035 (8035|1,8208|3) - ^ Again no because pitch
00:13:584 (13584|3,13584|2,13584|0) - i'd rather make this note double
and this note triple 00:13:757 (13757|2,13757|1) - but it's your style. so, i'm just follow it Well you are the 3rd one who tell me this! Alright i will change it over the next Days
00:45:145 - http://puu.sh/hJlCW/bba4cdee86.png No it's good how it is.
01:00:405 (60405|3) - move to 2 Okay
03:00:578 (180578|0) - i think it should at 03:00:665 - all in blue tick
02:59:191 (179191|1) - this should end at 03:00:665 -
03:00:578 (180578|2) - move this to 03:00:665 -
03:01:965 (181965|3) -remove. i think this KN is unnesessary cuz this LN not follow anything
03:07:514 (187514|0) - ^ same case
03:08:902 - 03:10:289 - add LN
03:10:289 (190289|3,191676|1,191676|2) - same case with above. (blue tick)
03:13:064 (193064|0) - same with remove LN
03:18:613 (198613|0) - ^
03:20:024 - 03:21:387 - same with add LN
03:23:815 (203815|3) - move to 3[/notice:1337] To the whole part i have to say no :/ All LN's follow a sound and the single notes follow the flute

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

Taiko Mod req

k= small kat
K= Big kat
d= small don
D= Big don

• General
  - You need create or change that BG
  - Please that HP drain no can be 7 or 6 but no 9 .w. please fix I'll decrease it to 7.5
  - AR change too AR is absolutely irrelevant for Taiko.
  - OD can be 7 or 7,5 i gues Nah, I'll stick with this.
  - Desactivate Widescreen Support

• Genryuu Taiko
  
  - 00:04:393 (7) - elimine this note, this note is unnecessary
  - 00:12:717 (28) - can change this to K Changed to D.
  - You can add d here 00:14:017 (35) - If you mean the following gap, then no.
  - this is a suggestion you can make kddkk 00:15:838 (41,42,43,44,45) - I followed the piano and still pronounced the bass, causing a kkkdk-pattern. I think it fits much better.
  - add a note here k note00:18:179 (53) - Bass is more important.
  - 00:20:000 (60,61) - Ctrl+g Again, bass and piano.
  - 00:34:913 (163) - change this to k
  - Elimine this finish 00:46:012 (246) - this is unrankeable From the ranking criteria: I have checked this ingame, and the note does not overlap the prior one by 50% or more.
  - Elimine this note 00:46:185 (247) -
  - ^ 00:47:572 (252) -
  - add d here 00:49:306 (259) - but there is a d already..
  - add k here 00:51:474 (269) - I don't know why that would be nessecary.-
  - ctrl + g 00:52:948 (276,277) - Vocals on 00:53:988 -, thus k
  - add d here 00:54:855 (285) - already has one..
  - move this note 00:56:676 (293) - to 00:57:023 (295) - and quit this finish 00:57:110 (296) - Then I would ignore the important beat at 00:56:676 - and I don't think kdkd makes sense.
  - add a d here 01:01:185 (318) -
  - change to k and change this to d 01:09:769 (366) - I think there is a link missing here.
  - change to k 01:09:942 (367) -
  - change to k 01:13:410 (396) -
  - Change this to k 01:13:931 (399) - and this too 01:14:104 (401) -
  - ^ 01:16:879 (423) -
  - ^ 01:22:081 (462) -
  - add d here 01:43:064 (609) -
  - ^ 01:47:225 (642) -
  - ^ 01:48:613 (653) -
  - change this to k 01:53:728 (699) - Added since it might be easier to play
  - ^ 01:57:110 (730) - I don't know for what reason.
  - ^ 01:59:364 (749) - ^
  - add d here
  - Move this 02:28:931 (933) - to 02:28:584 (931) - Unchanged because of consistency.
  - add this 03:02:312 (1154,1155,1156) - kkk, 03:03:006 (1157) - k and this d 03:03:353 (1158) -
  - add another k here 03:04:393 (1160) -
  - add d here 03:05:260 (1162) - and here 03:05:780 (1163) -
  - add d here 03:06:647 (1165) -
  - add k here 03:07:168 (1166) -
  - add d here 03:07:514 (1167) -
  - ^ 03:07:861 (1168) - I kept this whole part more quiet to make the upcoming bit more outstanding. Also, at this point, I used the exact beginning pattern.
  - add kd here 03:08:208 (1169,1170) - and make another here 03:08:728 (1171,1172) -
  - change to d
  - can you change this to k 04:01:012 (387) - Would be inconsistent.

well that's my mod :3 i hope it helped you to ranked this ^^ Good luck

[R] wrote:

hi, come from queue (Feerum reQ)

[Genryuu Taiko]
OD:6 and HP:5 would be nice for it

00:06:301 - d ,sounds better
00:06:821 - d ,emphasize

00:28:497 - d ,sems weird here
00:32:486 (142,143) - ctrl+G ,following sound I am following the piano via ks so that should actually be correct D:
00:32:832 (144,145,146,147,148) - this not following the rythm , move 1/2 forward in red tick , let there empty for bit break
00:37:341 - following 00:28:497 - mod
00:43:584 (224,225) - following 00:32:486 (142,143) - mod
00:43:930 (226,227,228,229,230) - following 00:32:832 (144,145,146,147,148) - mod I'm following the drums that follow the piano. They need to be there.
00:46:012 - finisher unrankable in 1/4 ? try ddddk It is rankable. The two prior notes have to be small and in the same colour iirc.

00:47:399 - d ? calm here
00:59:364 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - try add triplet here
01:00:751 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316) - ^

01:14:451 - d ? A new syllable starts here. I want to indicate that via k.
01:50:173 (657,658) - ctrl+G ? Why?
02:27:890 - move 02:28:064 - maybe triplet sound in here Made this similar to 02:30:925 (933,934,935,936) -

that's all from me, hope helpfull
Good Luck ~

Surono wrote:

just no have to do.. so me mod thiz.

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Genryuu TKaiko
~ 00:27:370 (105) - change kat? *bcuz this not stronks pitch like 00:27:457 (106) - this*
~ 00:38:468 (183) - ~ ^ *lol, this fit imo*
~ 00:52:948 (263,264) - ctrl g *i hear stronks pitch for kat in 00:53:121 - here* OH now I get it. Yeah, sure.
~ 01:02:139 (308,309) - ctrl g *for consitency, like 01:00:751 (300,301) - this* You marked the wrong notes, but I saw what you meant.
~ 01:02:572 (311) - kat, *okay this just suggestion n Comment.., this 01:02:486 (310,311,312) - i dont like kdd in this pattern, bcuz 01:02:572 - in here must different for 01:02:659 - this, and this more can feeling to hit* If you mean 314 instead of 311, then I agree.
~ 01:10:723 (359,360) - *ctrl, this more fit with music* Nah, need to disagree here.
~ 01:12:717 (375,376,377) - ctrl g Why?
~ 01:13:237 (379,380,381) - ctrl g, and 01:13:497 - add kat added kat, did not use ctrl+g.
~ 01:17:312 - add katFixed
~ 01:17:572 (416) - delete for rest, ur follow voice pitch? Yes, I follow the voice here. There should be nothing wrong with this.
~ 01:21:214 (441,442,443) - ctrl g and 01:21:301 (442) - change to kat Don't think that fits well.
~ 01:29:017 (497) - don, *different pitch in this pattern* I followed the violin, so I am ignoring the drum here.
~ 01:32:312 - like in 01:21:214 (441,442,443) - Not fixed since I didn't fix that earlier.
~ 01:33:006 - ^ ^
~ 01:59:104 - make same like 01:53:642 - before.. No, with this, I have added some variation to the ddk-triplets.
~ 02:24:162 - not make stream? Oh, didn't even hear that
~ 02:27:023 - add don? Nah, it would not really pronounce anything.
~ 02:27:717 - add kat? ^
~ 02:46:705 -
~ 02:47:226 (1049) - don? Nope, I'll leave this consistent with the oter kiai.
~ 03:23:642 - add don, have pitch and this nice pattern Okay, not bad.
~ 03:24:075 - add kat, ^ No, a kat would not pronounce anything in the music.
~ 03:29:191 - this stronk pitch, so kat But I follow the drums, so this doesn't really work.
~ 03:29:624 - kat Aye
~ lol is funny starts from 3rd kiai lel Slightly modified.

lol, in next length after in 3rd kiai try to selfmod.. *its same in length before?* haha.. just need variation.. or me nub modding ww. G'Luck (sorry if this is a bad modding)

Zetera wrote:

~ 01:10:723 (359,360) - *ctrl, this more fit with music* Nah, need to disagree here. haha, sry in here XD 01:10:723 - forget this have high pitch.. then 01:10:809 (360) -
~ 01:12:717 (375,376,377) - ctrl g Why? idk haha XD but maybe is pitch like this 01:11:676 (366,367) - instrument
~ 01:17:572 (416) - delete for rest, ur follow voice pitch? Yes, I follow the voice here. There should be nothing wrong with this. yeah not wrong.. but why not to delete to give rest? *ahh my mistake sry!!! i mean in here XD 01:19:133 - must to delete, bcuz music is stop haha
~ 01:21:214 (441,442,443) - ctrl g and 01:21:301 (442) - change to kat Don't think that fits well. sry!1!
~ 01:29:017 (497) - don, *different pitch in this pattern* I followed the violin, so I am ignoring the drum here. oh..
~ 01:32:312 - like in 01:21:214 (441,442,443) - Not fixed since I didn't fix that earlier. XD
~ 01:33:006 - ^ ^
~ 01:59:104 - make same like 01:53:642 - before.. No, with this, I have added some variation to the ddk-triplets. oh not repetative XD
~ 02:27:023 - add don? Nah, it would not really pronounce anything. maybe just suggestion to feel this pitch.. 02:26:329 - this can be don.. *be 5plet* and 02:27:023 - this kat *so see kdkdd and kdkkd lel XD some nice long pattern to fill thats pitch
~ 03:24:075 - add kat, ^ No, a kat would not pronounce anything in the music.
~ 03:29:191 - this stronk pitch, so kat But I follow the drums, so this doesn't really work. but... why not to try.. this for filled XD