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Lia - My Soul, Your Beats! (TV Size)

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Ashikabi
41 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ashikabi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-29-10 at 6:57:14 PM

Artist: Lia
Title: My Soul, Your Beats! (TV Size)
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: Angel Beats keys aniplex yuri tenshi kanade tachibana otonashi lia
BPM: 145
Filesize: 16407kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.76 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 174 notes)
Download: Lia - My Soul, Your Beats! (TV Size)
Download: Lia - My Soul, Your Beats! (TV Size) (no video)
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Here's my version of the map

thx for modding!

June 9th: some hit sounds fix on Easy, Hard also some change

June 16, more edit done
Last edited by Ashikabi , edited 10 times in total.
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
General
make kiai in 00:53:339 to 01:28:077 in all diffs

Easy
make the circle size more big, it's an easy diff
use 0,8 distance spacing and re-snap all notes, when you finish to re-snap, call me again :3

Hard
make the circle size a little big, I think are very small :|
use 1,0x or + distance spacing and re-snap all notes ^^

Starred, call me again when you fix that :3
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
"lia" does not need to be in the tags, she's already the artist. "Angel Beats" doesn't need to, either, because it's the source.

Also, is the source "Angel Beats!" with the exclamation mark? That's what the BG says ._.

[Easy]

Vicho-kun wrote:

use 0,8 distance spacing and re-snap all notes, when you finish to re-snap, call me again :3
No, don't do that, that's dumb, the spacing is 100% readable. D:

00:16:908 (5,6) - Right 1 grid for nicer triangles?
00:23:528 (6) - Claps sound awkward, maybe use whistles instead?
00:40:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds weird if you use so many claps in a row like that and end it with a whistle ._.
00:42:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds weirder if you use 5 finishes and then end the combo with a clap :p, because the finishes are louder and more epic than the clap if anything you should be ending the combo with the finish and building up to it with clap and whistle
01:04:494 (2) - less sliderpoints makes a better-looking slider actually

[Hard]
Well, if you increase the circle size you'd have to change the whole map so I won't mod this one.


[Hard]
00:40:494 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing is confusing. Also clap+finish sounds incredibly bad to me.
00:45:046 (13) - not stacked properly, either stack it fully or move it off the end of the slider
Ashikabi
41 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ashikabi

Dusty wrote:

"lia" does not need to be in the tags, she's already the artist. "Angel Beats" doesn't need to, either, because it's the source.

Also, is the source "Angel Beats!" with the exclamation mark? That's what the BG says ._.

[Easy]

Vicho-kun wrote:

use 0,8 distance spacing and re-snap all notes, when you finish to re-snap, call me again :3
No, don't do that, that's dumb, the spacing is 100% readable. D:

00:16:908 (5,6) - Right 1 grid for nicer triangles?
00:23:528 (6) - Claps sound awkward, maybe use whistles instead?
00:40:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds weird if you use so many claps in a row like that and end it with a whistle ._.
00:42:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds weirder if you use 5 finishes and then end the combo with a clap :p, because the finishes are louder and more epic than the clap if anything you should be ending the combo with the finish and building up to it with clap and whistle
01:04:494 (2) - less sliderpoints makes a better-looking slider actually

[Hard]
Well, if you increase the circle size you'd have to change the whole map so I won't mod this one.


[Hard]
00:40:494 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing is confusing. Also clap+finish sounds incredibly bad to me.
00:45:046 (13) - not stacked properly, either stack it fully or move it off the end of the slider
00:16:908 (5,6) - Right 1 grid for nicer triangles?, nah, it will not respect the spacing if I done it.
01:04:494 (2) - less sliderpoints makes a better-looking slider actually, unfortunately I dun really know how to fix that but I will try to ask a friend to help.

the rest all fix
thx
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
Can you try shortening the combo's a bit. For someone playing this on ctb the fruit tend to pile up :)

Star :)
K-S-O
298 posts
Here since the beginning
K-S-O
Easy:
01:04:494 (2) - Try to make this look more symmetrical.
01:09:873 (6) - New combo.

Hard:
00:23:528 (10) - New combo.
00:30:149 (8) - ^
00:43:390 (10) - ^
01:00:356 (9) - ^
01:06:563 (7) - ^

Otherwise the map is fine.
Ashikabi
41 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ashikabi

K-S-O wrote:

Easy:
01:04:494 (2) - Try to make this look more symmetrical.
01:09:873 (6) - New combo.

Hard:
00:23:528 (10) - New combo.
00:30:149 (8) - ^
00:43:390 (10) - ^
01:00:356 (9) - ^
01:06:563 (7) - ^

Otherwise the map is fine.

done, thx
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon

Ashikabi wrote:

I knwo there are lot map on it and 2 tv size ranked already but I still wish if u can mod it
yes, so I hope you can make your map more euphonious and funny so that you can attract the players ;)

[General]
1) the size of your BG is 1228 X 767 , better to find a 1024 X 768 instead.
2) delete the .osb file~? or you want to make sb?
3) slience the sliderside?
4) the volume is too loud?
5) consider to make a [Normal] ?

[Easy]
this is [easy], so use the largest circle size?
using clap on 2 1/4 notes doesn't suit this song. (e.G. 00:21:253 (3,4) )
01:14:839 (2) end at 01:15:253 ?

[Hard]
hmm.. the circle is too small?
00:17:115 (10) move it to 00:17:321?
00:52:494 (9) add 2 more backs?
01:09:873 (1,2,3,4) the spacing is confusing unless they are same as 01:09:046 (5,6,7,8)

the suggestions of this post is a little bit small, so you can give me no kudosu.
But I would like you to listen to other mappers' hitsound and learn form that, also you need more modders to mod the map.
Finally, good luck~! hope I can see your map get ranked in the future.
Star~
Ashikabi
41 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ashikabi

Vikon wrote:

Ashikabi wrote:

I knwo there are lot map on it and 2 tv size ranked already but I still wish if u can mod it
yes, so I hope you can make your map more euphonious and funny so that you can attract the players ;)

[General]
1) the size of your BG is 1228 X 767 , better to find a 1024 X 768 instead.
2) delete the .osb file~? or you want to make sb?
3) slience the sliderside?
4) the volume is too loud?
5) consider to make a [Normal] ?

[Easy]
this is [easy], so use the largest circle size?
using clap on 2 1/4 notes doesn't suit this song. (e.G. 00:21:253 (3,4) )
01:14:839 (2) end at 01:15:253 ?

[Hard]
hmm.. the circle is too small?
00:17:115 (10) move it to 00:17:321?
00:52:494 (9) add 2 more backs?
01:09:873 (1,2,3,4) the spacing is confusing unless they are same as 01:09:046 (5,6,7,8)

the suggestions of this post is a little bit small, so you can give me no kudosu.
But I would like you to listen to other mappers' hitsound and learn form that, also you need more modders to mod the map.
Finally, good luck~! hope I can see your map get ranked in the future.
Star~

thx
but I think the circle size is just fine
kudos!
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
hello~~

Volume 60% is better for me

[Easy]
Cricle size -1
00:53:942 (X) - long break time,plz make some note is here
01:09:873 (6) - new combo

[hard]
Cricle size -1?
00:17:321 (10) - new combo
00:26:218 (7,8) - spacing
00:26:632 (1,2) - ^
00:34:494 (5) - new combo
01:11:115 (5) - ^
i think you'd rechcek spaicing,is big problem :P

star!
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
[Overall]
~I'm not sure, does whole spacing in Hard and Normal isn't good, please use AimMod to check errors.~

[Easy]
00:36:770 (1) - new combo
00:53:231 - 01:01:597 - this part feels empty, please map it

[Hard]
00:45:459 (5,6,7,1) - confusing

~star
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi There :D

[General]
- The BG size is still 1228x767 you have to resize it to 1024x768, My suggestion is to find another BG, your current one have too many words on it and doesn't look very good :(
- The osb file is still there, delete it again and the full-submit
- Easy have 1.76 star rating and hard have 4.74 star rating, either make the easy into normal or add another diff with 3 or more star rating
- I really think you're overusing hitsound here, you don't have to use hitsound on every single note, try to leave some note with normal sound
Here's some example
00:20:839 (3) - remove whistle
00:21:253 (4) - ^
00:21:666 (6) - ^
00:21:873 (7) - remove clap at the end
00:22:287 (8) - change to whistle
I'm remove all the clap/whistle/finish on the red tick, in other word I'm using the 1/1 pattern. You can use your own idea but try not to abuse hitsound
- I strongly suggest you to fill the break in easy diff, why? because it's in the chorus. Putting break in chorus is not a good idea IMO :o

Good Luck :D
Ashikabi
41 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
Ashikabi

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi There :D

[General]
- The BG size is still 1228x767 you have to resize it to 1024x768, My suggestion is to find another BG, your current one have too many words on it and doesn't look very good :(
- The osb file is still there, delete it again and the full-submit
- Easy have 1.76 star rating and hard have 4.74 star rating, either make the easy into normal or add another diff with 3 or more star rating
- I really think you're overusing hitsound here, you don't have to use hitsound on every single note, try to leave some note with normal sound
Here's some example
00:20:839 (3) - remove whistle
00:21:253 (4) - ^
00:21:666 (6) - ^
00:21:873 (7) - remove clap at the end
00:22:287 (8) - change to whistle
I'm remove all the clap/whistle/finish on the red tick, in other word I'm using the 1/1 pattern. You can use your own idea but try not to abuse hitsound
- I strongly suggest you to fill the break in easy diff, why? because it's in the chorus. Putting break in chorus is not a good idea IMO :o

Good Luck :D
done, and kudos
Sonic Fumes
228 posts
Joined November 2009
Sonic Fumes
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Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello

[General]
1) Your video offset is late, the video offset should be -240ms
2) Delete "angel beats" in tags, since that word in title. Also, delete "lia" in tags, since that word in title
3) You need more diff!!

[Easy]
00:23:528 (6) - Make symetric?
00:26:839 (2) - ^
00:36:770 (1,2) - Seems copy-paste with 00:33:459 (1,2), maybe? If yes, I suggest you to find another pattern
00:41:735 (5) - Mix with clap and whistle is not good, IMO
00:45:045 (6) - ^
00:53:321 ~ 01:01:597 (B) - Please map this break
01:08:632 (5) - New combo, it's long for easy diff

[Hard]
The hitcircle is too smalllllllll, and please check spacing, sometimes it's have a spacing error

00:38:425 (7) - Mix with clap and finish is not good, IMO
00:57:253 (2) - Is not stack with 1 at the end
01:27:666 (1) - Silence this spinner?

Good song
STAR
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