This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Κυριακή, 28 Νοεμβρίου 2010 at 4:34:31 πμ

Artist: Scorpions
Title: Raised On Rock
Tags: DiamondCrash
BPM: 125
Filesize: 6222kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:

1. DC's Hard (4,39 stars, 247 notes)
2. Easy (2,65 stars, 137 notes)
3. Insane (4,92 stars, 322 notes)
4. Normal (3,96 stars, 214 notes)

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap,I hope you enjoy it!

Mods, please check and...thanks in advance!

*DiamondCrash's Diff added!
*Storyboard edit (added a pulse)

I'm not a mod, but I'll try to help

Easy: I see it perfect

Hard: The beats are good, but I found some mistakes:

-00:10:858 (4) It's too close to the previous
-00:10:978 (5) "
-00:29:758 (6) "
-00:40:378 (7) "
-00:40:498 (8) "
-00:43:498 (4) "
-00:43:618 (5) "
-01:04:198 (4) It's too far to the previous
-01:07:618 (3) "
-01:08:038 (4) "

Open AImod,I think there are more Spacing mistakes.

Ask the mods. I think this beatmap will be ranked

General;

The timing is wrong. Get a good timer to have a look.
You need an easy.
Remember to add a preview point in the timing menu.

Easy;

Not an easy; this is a normal. Rename appropriately.
01:03:598 (3) - New combo.
01:13:198 (6) - This overlap is unrankable.
02:18:478 (6) - This overlap is unrankable.

Hard;

This is an insane. Rename appropriately.
This should not have to use 1/8s. Use 1/4 for ALL notes.
The overuse of kiai fountains is unrankable.
01:14:398 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is unreadable.
02:19:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Message me when you have that done and I'll recheck.

Offset was about 35ms late, so 9,563 should work much better. Remember to set the snapping divisor to 1/4 and resnap all beats on both diffs.

For the beginning of Hard, I think that a beat every 1/2 starting at 00:07:883 would work better than random 1/4th / 1/8th snapped beats.

[Hard] 01:14:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - haha I love this but I think the overlapping is a bit hard-to-read or unrankable. XP

Not bad at all for your first map, and I'd actually enjoy modding this once you have everything set and in Pending

Edit 1

Done everything DiamondCrash said and timing fixxed, thanks to Derekku Chan.
Also added Easy difficulty.Awaiting orders!

If you're content with your difficulties and not planning on adding anything else, then go ahead and move it to Pending; especially since most people won't serious-mod until it's out of WIP. :V

Derekku Chan wrote:

If you're content with your difficulties and not planning on adding anything else, then go ahead and move it to Pending; especially since most people won't serious-mod until it's out of WIP. :V

Added an Easy one already and waiting for further modding

Easy;

00:59:483 (2) - New combo.
01:03:083 (2) - Delete?
02:04:763 (2) - New combo.
02:08:363 (2) - Delete?

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock (balvag) [DCiNiS].osu

Done!

Also added your difficulty Diamond, really thanks for making a diff on my map!

sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!

[Easy]
00:28:763 (4) - spacing, try not to have any jumps on this difficulty.
01:34:043 (4) - ^
00:55:643 (5) - new combo
01:03:323 (2) - ^
01:05:483 (5) - ^
02:00:923 (5) - ^
02:08:603 (2) - ^
02:10:763 (6) - ^
01:01:883 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:163 (1) - ^
02:07:163 (1) - ^
02:12:443 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:02:603 (3) - add clap at the end
02:07:883 (3) - ^
01:09:083 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 1 grid down
02:14:363 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid up
02:47:003 (6) - new combo

[DCiNiS]
01:37:163 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right
01:44:843 (5,6,7) - ^
01:37:883 (8) - move 1 grid down
01:45:563 (8) - ^
01:49:403 (7) - ^
01:52:523 (5,6) - move 1 grid left
02:00:203 (5,6) - move 1 grid right

[Insane]
01:08:363 (5,6) - move 1 grid right


Pretty good insane for a first map. Good luck!

I didn't do what he said, but I did what I thought he was trying to get me to do, if you know what I mean

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock (balvag) [DCiNiS].osu

Done,
thank you for modding DJ KRZY and for the star

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete the osb file and Full Submit next time.

~Easy~
No problems here~

~Normal~
No problems here~

~DCiNiS~
No problems here~

~Insane~
01:03:083 (5) - Fix Spacing.
02:08:363 (5) - ^

Meh, almost anything, don't kudosu this xDD
Cool map and song, though, try to not to copypaste the first half of the map and make it the second half of it for your next songs, sometimes it doesn't work that well. Anyways, good luck with this, pretty nice for a first map. *star*

Hello.

[Easy]
00:31:643 (2) - You may end it at 00:32:123 and add a circle to 00:32:363.
00:41:243 - Add a note here.
00:41:723 (7) - Move to 00:41:963.
00:44:363 - Add a note.
00:44:603 (6) - Move to 00:44:843.
01:45:803 - Add a note.
01:46:043 (6) - Move to 01:46:283.
01:49:643 - Add a note.
01:49:883 (5) - Move to 01:50:123.
01:58:763 (4) - Why it starts so early? 01:59:243 or at least 01:59:003.And don't forget to fill the space before it.

[Normal]
00:31:643 (3) - End at 00:32:123 and add a circle at 00:32:363.
00:36:203 (4) - New combo.
00:36:203 (4,5,6) - Allign to previous moment,please.
00:59:483 - Why don't you add a circle here?
01:36:923 - End it at 01:37:403 and add a circle at 01:37:643.
02:04:763 - Add a circle?
02:37:163 (5) - New combo.

[DCiNiS]
Yep,iNiS style.It's fine,but...colours are different with the same BG.I don't think it's acceptable.

[Insane]
Seems fine.

Good luck,star~

Done almost everything.
Thanks Beuchi-chan and SadKangaroo for modding.

PS. Didn't do everything SadKangaroo said,sorry dude but in some of those I didn't like how it sounded,but did most of them

[Easy]

00:31:643 (2) - Clap at the end
00:56:123 (1,1,1) - Remove these new combo? Also, finish-flood.
01:09:563 (1,3) - "Incomplete" sliders. Move the last waypoint in the direction of the slider.
01:39:563 (1) - Finish or clap at the start
01:46:763 (7) - Clap
01:50:603 (7) - Clap at the start
02:01:403 (1,1,1) - Remove these new combo? Also, finish-flood.
02:06:203 (2) - Incomplete slider
02:14:843 (1) - As above

[Normal]

00:31:643 (3) - Clap at the end
01:36:923 (3) - As above
02:48:923 (1) - Make this spinner 1/1 longer.

[DCiNiS]

Oh gawd. No problems found.

[Insane]

Lovely, considering this is your first map. Very funny to play, my favourite difficulty.

Starred. ^^

Done!
Thanks for modding Armin

Hello :3

mod

Nice map~ Especially , Rhythm is very good.
star & gl

Done!
Thanks for modding banvi

The only road I know leads out of town~

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock (balvag) [DCiNiS].osu

General:

-- Omg delete the .osb

Easy:

00:42:203 (1) - Add finish to the start.
01:46:523 (x) - Add note.
01:46:763 (7) - Remove clap?
01:47:483 (1) - Add finish to the start.
01:50:603 (7) - Remove clap from the start.

Minor hitsound stuff, nice difficulty.

Normal:

-- + 1 Overall Difficulty.

00:42:203 (1) - Add finish to the start.
01:47:483 (1) - Add finish to the start.
02:35:483 (1) - Add finish.
02:38:363 (x) - Add note?
02:39:323 (1) - Add finish.
02:42:203 (x) - Add note?
02:43:163 (1) - Add finish.
02:47:003 (1) - ^
02:48:443 (4) - Remove finish.

Minor suggestions =P

DCiNiS:

Some notes skim the HP Bar in game, but I don't think that's important XD

02:35:483 -- This kiai burst looks lonely on it's own D:

Insane:

00:08:363 (1,1,1,1) - Are these new combo's really necessary? Maybe remove new combo from 00:08:603 (1) - and 00:09:083 (1) -
00:42:203 (1) - Add finish.
01:03:083 (5) - Well a 1/8 returning slider is fine but it doesn't really fit the music imo.
01:47:483 (1) - Add finish.
02:08:363 (5) - Same thing about this 1/8 slider, 1/4 might be better.
02:09:323 (3,4) - This looks strange, maybe move/redraw 02:09:563 (4) - to make it looks more symmetrical (like earlier ~ 01:04:043 (3,4) - )
02:39:323 (3) - Add finish.
02:39:563 (x) - Note?
02:43:163 (5) - Add finish instead of clap imo.
02:43:403 (1) - Remove new combo? (Following your pattern)
02:47:003 (2) - Add finish.

Minor suggestions, okay here's my star.

Done!
Thanks for modding

Hi

[Easy]
00:27:323 (2) - Remove New combo
00:35:483 (2,4) - Add clap
01:37:883 (3) - Move 1/2 earlier
01:40:763 (2,4) - Add clap

[DC]
Fine

[Insane]
02:09:563 (4) - Bad jump é_è

Nice job for a first map
Star~

Done.Thanks for modding!

Random modding

[Easy]
01:53:723 (4) - One grid left

[Normal]
Overall Difficulty +1 please, hard to read with that low OD
01:07:643 (2) - Clap -> Finish?
02:12:923 (2) - ^

[DCiNiS]
End the Kiai time at 171,323 ms.

[Insane]
Just a general suggestions.. You have set of triplets with three different spacing. First, you have 00:10:763 (4,5,6) with 0.4x spacing. Then, there's 00:15:323 (6,1,2) - with 0.8x spacing. And there's also 00:40:283 (6,7,8) with 0.5 spacing. This quite shocked me... especially with the 0.4x and the 0.5x one. Perhaps convert 00:10:763 (4,5,6)'s spacing from 0.4x to 0.5x?
Also, end the Kiai time at 171,323 ms.

Star. Can't find much with this map... Good luck getting this ranked
And I include a trimmed mp3, which you might want to use to reduce filesize.

Download: Raised on rock.mp3

Done, thanks for modding.

Hi!

I've seen one mistake o.o you have the two mp3 in the folder, delete "raised on rock.mp3" and delete the .osb file and full submit

Scorpions

Rename DCiNiS to DC's Hard~

Ahh... forgot that I meant to mod this once it was completed. :c

[General]
*Delete the unnecessary .osb and full submit.
*Delete the mp3 that you're not using and full submit. (Personally, I say stick with the longer one since cropping it just for one extra minute isn't really worth it. Just keep the mp3 that seems to be high quality and has a set offset)
*Kiai should be snapped to the white ticks (mainly the case in the latter two difficulties)
*I found it strange that 02:35:483 was a new kiai section. It's just the bridge of the song, so I would've just added a single fountain to the end of the last spinner for a nice ending effect (since the whole song isn't mapped).

[Easy]
*The following is mostly a combo mo (which I usually don't do), but the diff was so slow/easy that I said "oh well" xp
00:30:683 (6) - I'd make this the start of the new combo (as it's a new measure)
00:32:363 (3,4) - perhaps make this a slider?
00:44:363 (5,6) - ^
00:57:083 (4,1) - the empty space here baffles me :/ At least add a tiny break or something that's not so... empty =x
01:37:883 (3,4) - spacing?
01:07:163 (2) - perhaps make this the new combo instead?
01:09:083 (6) - ^
01:32:123 (1) - I really don't see a point in this being a combo of its own, but okay
01:35:963 (5) - have this as the new combo?
01:54:923 (2) - ^
01:56:843 (1) - remove combo
01:59:003 (8) - new combo
02:00:923 (1) - remove combo
02:02:363 (4,1) - empty space ):
02:12:443 (2) - new combo instead of previous
02:14:363 (6) - new combo instead of the next note

[Normal]
00:57:083 (1,1) - empty space :[
02:02:363 (1,1) - ^

[DCiNiS]
00:59:483 - No note accompanying the kiai might seem a bit strange, but I suppose it's fine. (same for the other two spots)
*authentic o:

[Insane]
00:57:083 (1,1) - empty :v
02:02:363 (1,1) - ^

Not bad. :p

Kiiiiiinda late but...Oh well, thanks derekku for the mod, i really appreciate it.

Nice map and song.

osu! needs more English songs. D:

Star!

Hey o/

1. Sounds like the offset is a little early (I got offset: 9,567)
2. There is a good 30%-ish of the mp3 that isn't used. Perhaps you could cut off the bit of the mp3 that isn't used to save some space?

[EASY]

Can't say I like that copy/paste. Copying a whole verse/chorus doesn't end well

I dunno. Personally, I think this is a tad tough to be the easiest difficulty. It works well as it is, but I think it's a bit too hard. I'm not sure what you could do though. You could tone it down but I don't think that would end well, and I don't think a 5th diff is a good idea. Hmm.

02:02:363 (5,1) - A minor thing, but could you move these 2 beats together? In an easy, a gap like this would confuse newer players.

[NORMAL]

Seems technically alright, even though it's mostly stuck on straight vertical and horizontal lines, which gets boring quickly. Suffers from the massive copy/paste as well.

[DC'S HARD]

Seems pretty clean. Still a fair bit of Copy/Paste but that comes with the mapping style. It's still interesting though so it's all good.

[INSANE]

It's a little overmapping I think, but it's pretty playable. Still got the copy/paste, but it's not too bad.

This might not be the most amazing map knocking around, but it's pretty playable. the non-DC difficulties are stuck to straight a lines a little too much though. It's worth experimenting with different patterns to put notes in to make them more interesting. Either way, It's a solid little map you got here. Awesome song too. I might look for some more Scorpions stuff myself actually.

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