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Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon

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_lolipop

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.

mod
SPOILER
Boring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.

Thismap is great! :)
Of course , star & gl ;)

thanks for your modding.
Babble
Hiya

Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Couldn't really find anything major. Star :D
Topic Starter
_lolipop

babble wrote:

Hiya

Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Couldn't really find anything major. Star :D


thanks for your star~~.
uranuss8600
:)
Numbers 596108
只試了老闆的太鼓
意見如下:
01:00:052_(X) Add Kiai Time
01:20:346_(X) Add Normal Time

Star~
Cyril Scarlet
(*´ェ`*)
Cyril Scarlet
EDIT : sorry Double posted....
Topic Starter
_lolipop
8600,数字君 and S i R i R u thanks for your stars.
abalee
timing in taiko diff. is different......(1171 ms offset vs 1172 ms)

lolipop's
looks this diff. need a epilepsy warming.
01:10:141 (1) - ,02:29:316 (1) - : use soft override seems better.
I'd say... it messes up that you use such spacing and stacked notes in the end.... but yeah it is my own opinion.
arien666
Just for a support this song ;_;?

Good luck yay!
Doomsday
Woah

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing seems fine
  2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
  3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"? :P
[BORING MOON]

01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.

[STIRRING MOON]

Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though

[_LOLIPOP MOON]

01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?

[CRAZY MOON]

<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.

Nothing seems to bother me

[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]

Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.

Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.

Starred
Crazy Jay
I'm a stupid lol
顺便把我的难度有些别扭的地方改了



Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Crazy Moon].osu
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Doomsday93 wrote:

Woah

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing seems fine
  2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
  3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"? :P
[BORING MOON]

01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.

[STIRRING MOON]

Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though

[_LOLIPOP MOON]

01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?

[CRAZY MOON]

<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.

Nothing seems to bother me

[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]

Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.

Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.

Starred
thanks for your modding.
abalee
does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
Topic Starter
_lolipop

abalee wrote:

does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
> < i'll fix it soon....

edit:fixed
kino77
Star~
abalee
:o

lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
Topic Starter
_lolipop

abalee wrote:

:o

lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
thanks


fixed.
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
You need a approachcircle.png and section-fail.png

[Boring Moon]
No Kiai?

00:36:430 (3,4,1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14740
00:38:285 (3) - New combo?
00:45:708 (2) - ^
00:52:203 (5) - ^
01:00:553 (1,2) - Move 2 grid left?

[Stirring Moon]
Stack Leniency lv. 0 is unrankable, increase it and No Kiai?

00:56:068 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
01:12:460 (4,5) - Move 2 grid right?
01:37:512 (1) - ^

[_lolipop Moon]
Remove "_lolipop" since this map is yours

00:04:728 (x) - Add note?
00:09:677 (x) - ^
01:04:110 (x) - ^
01:09:058 (x) - ^
02:23:285 (x) - ^
02:28:233 (x) - ^

[Crazy Moon]
Fine~

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
The Slider Velocity must 1,40. Other are fine

Not bad
(((((っ´Θ`)っ <- STAR
SamiPale
> < _lolipop is big bad egg
tankms
star
Tomoka Rin
star~
[Wriggle]
This is a great beatmap.

star
abcde1234qaz
star :P :P :P
f0012979
Star >w<
spboxer3
給個STAR
Topic Starter
_lolipop
thanks for your moddings and stars.
all fixed. waiting for bat.
tsuka
great
Beuchi
Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?

~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...

~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<

~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~

~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.

00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/

~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...

Good luck~ *star*
Topic Starter
_lolipop

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore :P

~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?

~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...

~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<

~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~

~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.

00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/

~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...

Good luck~ *star*
Thanks a lot.
Kamina
Selee
;)
Girls Dead Monster
star~
lovless
来一颗?
aspara
epic :oops:
eveless
:)
Alace
<Lunatic Moon>
I think normal hitsoundset fit the song well (whistle finish and clap)
some soft parts are too quiet, like 00:04:884 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:15:708 (1) - this sounds too loud in the soft part IMO
00:39:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - remove claps?
01:09:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - too quiet to hear XD
(這曲子整體來說音量與節奏都算是沒有太大起伏,所以不太適合soft跟normal過度的切換,尤其是在高潮的部份把音效換成soft的話,
打擊感都會跑掉了,因為BPM很高的關係,串燒裡加clap聽起來就會太大聲了)

Feel free to fix, if you don`t want to change anything, i will just bubble it

EDIT:oh yeah bubbled
[Aramary]
Post subject: Re: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon

两倍<3
James
I dont have anything to say on this map...

Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.

Mapset is awesome also.

SB is cool.

Timing is perfect (for me)

im supposed to rank this.. BUT.

can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it

dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place
Topic Starter
_lolipop

James wrote:

I dont have anything to say on this map...

Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.

Mapset is awesome also.

SB is cool.

Timing is perfect (for me)

im supposed to rank this.. BUT.

can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it

dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place
thanks. fixed
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