• offset应该是1172吧
  另外02:59:316这里为什么要换BPM

• 00:29:625(3):Finish
  00:36:739(4,1):不要重叠

• 有些地方遮挡比较严重
  00:49:574(2,3,4,5,6):不太明显
  00:58:388:去掉Break

kiddly wrote:

yeah Dark PHOENiX

red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion

[general]

rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。 啊???不是3.5么?!!!!!!!!
难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。 如果你愿意做的话,我将十分感谢. 正好缺一个Stirring Moon难度

[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。 fixed
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了…… 尽量减少中.....
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。 fixing

[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。 额.....这个我有和别人讨论过 这是一个弱起小节 不这样的话 offset应该再往前数一个小节 这样就会出现负数.. 所以我觉得就这样比较好
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。 fixed

01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。 分数会超的 > < 我也是忍痛删掉的
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。

[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。
00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。 fixed
00:52:202 (5) - ^ fixed

sorry i cant mod taiko
nice map
star

banvi wrote:

Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.

mod

SPOILER

Boring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.

Thismap is great!
Of course , star & gl

babble wrote:

Hiya

Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?

Couldn't really find anything major. Star

1. Timing seems fine
2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"?

Doomsday93 wrote:

Woah

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems fine
2. your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
3. Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"?

[BORING MOON]

01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.

[STIRRING MOON]

Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though

[_LOLIPOP MOON]

01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?

[CRAZY MOON]

<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.

Nothing seems to bother me

[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]

Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.

Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.

Starred

abalee wrote:

does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.

abalee wrote:

:o

lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore

~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?

~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...

~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<

~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~

~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.

00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/

~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...

Good luck~ *star*

James wrote:

I dont have anything to say on this map...

Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.

Mapset is awesome also.

SB is cool.

Timing is perfect (for me)

im supposed to rank this.. BUT.

can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it

dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place

Colin Hou wrote:

萝莉萝莉包…一口一口咬…

Gabi wrote:

lolipop, this map is fucking fantastic, and i love that SB, so nifty ^^

so cool :3