雨點><~~
forum
Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon
posted
Total Posts
81
我的建议：
[General]
[General]
- offset应该是1172吧
另外02:59:316这里为什么要换BPM
- 00:29:625(3):Finish
00:36:739(4,1):不要重叠
- 有些地方遮挡比较严重
00:49:574(2,3,4,5,6):不太明显
00:58:388:去掉Break
Taiko diffff .Star and mod in irc.
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Climbb's Taiko Oni].osu
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Climbb's Taiko Oni].osu
= =+
nice map
yeah Dark PHOENiX 
red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion
[general]
rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。
难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。
[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了……
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。
[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。
01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。
[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。
00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。
00:52:202 (5) - ^
sorry i cant mod taiko
nice map
star
red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion
[general]
rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。
难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。
[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了……
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。
[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。
01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。
[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。
00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。
00:52:202 (5) - ^
sorry i cant mod taiko
nice map
star
Topic Starter
kiddly wrote:
yeah Dark PHOENiX
red=you have to fix this
black=just suggestion
[general]
rank规定必须有一个小于等于3星的难度。 啊???不是3.5么?!!!!!!!!
难度跨度好大……如果需要的话我可以提供hard的diff。 如果你愿意做的话,我将十分感谢. 正好缺一个Stirring Moon难度
[Boring Moon]
slider tick:2比较好。 fixed
作为一个192BPM的简单难度最好还是不要出现二分拍了…… 尽量减少中.....
normal系音效的部分多用用whistle比较好。 fixing
[_lolipop Moon]
00:01:017 (1) - 最好不要出现在offset之前的note。统一把offset改成-65就行了。要改的话记得所有diff都要改。 额.....这个我有和别人讨论过 这是一个弱起小节 不这样的话 offset应该再往前数一个小节 这样就会出现负数.. 所以我觉得就这样比较好
01:20:192 (1,2,3) - 和前面一串分的开一点会比较好看。 fixed
01:30:863 - 01:50:038 (break) - 这break长的蛋疼……还是建议map掉。 分数会超的 > < 我也是忍痛删掉的
01:50:038 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人觉得稍微排下形状比较好。
[Crazy Moon]
00:01:017 (1,2) - 同上面一个难度相同的位置。
00:32:409 (7) - new combo比较好读。 fixed
00:52:202 (5) - ^ fixed
sorry i cant mod taiko
nice map
star
Thanks a lot.
关于三星那个是三妖告诉我的，我之前也有个最低难度3.5星的图.....应该就这样了.
只需要降到3.25以下，看上去就是3星了。
只需要降到3.25以下，看上去就是3星了。
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
星数的问题说过了233。。
kiai时间各难度请统一。
颜色不用自定义的么。。。
tag都小写，我印象有这条，貌似。。
[Boring]
00:19:728 (3) - 这里渐强吧。
00:55:914 (3) - 右一格（或者没那么多，0.8格什么的）
[_lolipop]
00:01:018 (1) - 起音建议三连。
00:07:976 (4) - whistle
00:58:079 (4) - 00:59:161 (1) break去掉，太短了
后面还有短break也请相同处理。复制段同处理……我懒了……
01:50:038 (1,2) - 这里开始你学学人家CJ...别在中间不挪窝
[CJ]
这很强力啊。满分。
02:26:532 (8) - 不过这slider碰血条了，大概率被挑，其他也有几处，这个最为严重。
[Taiko]
01:37:511 (595) - 换o ooo
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
星数的问题说过了233。。
kiai时间各难度请统一。
颜色不用自定义的么。。。
tag都小写，我印象有这条，貌似。。
[Boring]
00:19:728 (3) - 这里渐强吧。
00:55:914 (3) - 右一格（或者没那么多，0.8格什么的）
[_lolipop]
00:01:018 (1) - 起音建议三连。
00:07:976 (4) - whistle
00:58:079 (4) - 00:59:161 (1) break去掉，太短了
后面还有短break也请相同处理。复制段同处理……我懒了……
01:50:038 (1,2) - 这里开始你学学人家CJ...别在中间不挪窝
[CJ]
这很强力啊。满分。
02:26:532 (8) - 不过这slider碰血条了，大概率被挑，其他也有几处，这个最为严重。
[Taiko]
01:37:511 (595) - 换o ooo
Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.
mod
Thismap is great!
Of course , star & gl
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.
mod
SPOILER
Boring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.
Thismap is great!
Of course , star & gl
Topic Starter
banvi wrote:
Hello.
I don't know Touhou a little , but I like this song.
modSPOILERBoring Moon
00:14:780 (1) move 1 up?(spacing a bit far)
00:15:708 (4) move 1 left?(^)
00:42:306 (3) move 1 down?
_lolipop's
00:01:481 (4) move 1 left?(spacing a bit close)
01:07:048 (2) ^(^)
02:45:243 (3) move 1 right and 1 up?
02:56:377 (7) move 1 right?
02:56:532 (9,10) compose with 02:57:306 (6,7,8) about spacing, please.
Crazy
I think okay.
Taiko
I can't mod Taiko.
Thismap is great!
Of course , star & gl
thanks for your modding.
Hiya
Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?
Couldn't really find anything major. Star
Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?
Couldn't really find anything major. Star
Topic Starter
babble wrote:
Hiya
Boring Moon
01:18:800 (1) - Add finish maybe?
Couldn't really find anything major. Star
thanks for your star~~.
只試了老闆的太鼓
意見如下:
01:00:052_(X) Add Kiai Time
01:20:346_(X) Add Normal Time
Star~
意見如下:
01:00:052_(X) Add Kiai Time
01:20:346_(X) Add Normal Time
Star~
(*´ｪ`*)
EDIT : sorry Double posted....
Topic Starter
8600,数字君 and S i R i R u thanks for your stars.
timing in taiko diff. is different......(1171 ms offset vs 1172 ms)
lolipop's
looks this diff. need a epilepsy warming.
01:10:141 (1) - ,02:29:316 (1) - : use soft override seems better.
I'd say... it messes up that you use such spacing and stacked notes in the end.... but yeah it is my own opinion.
lolipop's
looks this diff. need a epilepsy warming.
01:10:141 (1) - ,02:29:316 (1) - : use soft override seems better.
I'd say... it messes up that you use such spacing and stacked notes in the end.... but yeah it is my own opinion.
Just for a support this song ;_;?
Good luck yay!
Good luck yay!
Woah
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these
01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.
[STIRRING MOON]
Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though
[_LOLIPOP MOON]
01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?
[CRAZY MOON]
<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.
Nothing seems to bother me
[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]
Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.
Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.
Starred
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these
- Timing seems fine
- your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
- Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"?
01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.
[STIRRING MOON]
Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though
[_LOLIPOP MOON]
01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?
[CRAZY MOON]
<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.
Nothing seems to bother me
[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]
Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.
Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.
Starred
I'm a stupid lol
顺便把我的难度有些别扭的地方改了
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Crazy Moon].osu
顺便把我的难度有些别扭的地方改了
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Stirring an Autumn Moon (_lolipop) [Crazy Moon].osu
Topic Starter
thanks for your modding.Doomsday93 wrote:
Woah
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these[BORING MOON]
- Timing seems fine
- your "spotlight.png" is very big. its 1100x900, while the maximum size for storyboard elements is 800x600 I believe. you should shrink it down to fit that size
- Also, your Warning says "Waring". Shouldn't it be "Warning"?
01:18:800 (1) - Maybe this should start at 01:19:110? It seems to fit better there.
[STIRRING MOON]
Feels more like an insane than a hard. Nothing I can actually complain about though
[_LOLIPOP MOON]
01:30:863 (x) - This break here is massive, and it jumps in at an awkward time. It doesn't make much sense how this break starts. I guess that you put this in because your score was getting very high, but putting a massive break here doesn't work very well. Maybe you could have little breaks all over the map, rather than one big break in the middle?
[CRAZY MOON]
<3. I really like this map. I think this is the only map where I liked the whistles, meaning the hitsounds are great too.
Nothing seems to bother me
[CLIMBB'S TAIKO ONI]
Probably one of the more fun Taiko maps I've played. The patterns in this seem to make more sense to me. I couldn't see any problems worth talking about.
Awesome stuff. I really like Crazy moon. The other difficulties are nice also, but Crazy Jay's difficulties steals the show.
Starred
does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
Topic Starter
> < i'll fix it soon....abalee wrote:
does Crazy Jay's diff fixed?, "not downloaded yet" :/
and seems that "waring" haven't fixed too.
edit:fixed
lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
Topic Starter
thanksabalee wrote:
:o
lolipop's
01:29:472 (2) - isn't snapped
fixed.
NI HAO
[Skin]
You need a approachcircle.png and section-fail.png
[Boring Moon]
No Kiai?
00:36:430 (3,4,1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14740
00:38:285 (3) - New combo?
00:45:708 (2) - ^
00:52:203 (5) - ^
01:00:553 (1,2) - Move 2 grid left?
[Stirring Moon]
Stack Leniency lv. 0 is unrankable, increase it and No Kiai?
00:56:068 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
01:12:460 (4,5) - Move 2 grid right?
01:37:512 (1) - ^
[_lolipop Moon]
Remove "_lolipop" since this map is yours
00:04:728 (x) - Add note?
00:09:677 (x) - ^
01:04:110 (x) - ^
01:09:058 (x) - ^
02:23:285 (x) - ^
02:28:233 (x) - ^
[Crazy Moon]
Fine~
[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
The Slider Velocity must 1,40. Other are fine
Not bad
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR
[Skin]
You need a approachcircle.png and section-fail.png
[Boring Moon]
No Kiai?
00:36:430 (3,4,1) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14740
00:38:285 (3) - New combo?
00:45:708 (2) - ^
00:52:203 (5) - ^
01:00:553 (1,2) - Move 2 grid left?
[Stirring Moon]
Stack Leniency lv. 0 is unrankable, increase it and No Kiai?
00:56:068 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
01:12:460 (4,5) - Move 2 grid right?
01:37:512 (1) - ^
[_lolipop Moon]
Remove "_lolipop" since this map is yours
00:04:728 (x) - Add note?
00:09:677 (x) - ^
01:04:110 (x) - ^
01:09:058 (x) - ^
02:23:285 (x) - ^
02:28:233 (x) - ^
[Crazy Moon]
Fine~
[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
The Slider Velocity must 1,40. Other are fine
Not bad
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR
star~
star
給個STAR
Topic Starter
thanks for your moddings and stars.
all fixed. waiting for bat.
all fixed. waiting for bat.
great
Hi!~
Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?
~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...
~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<
~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~
~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.
00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/
~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...
Good luck~ *star*
Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?
~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...
~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<
~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~
~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.
00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/
~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...
Good luck~ *star*
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot.Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hi!~
Remember these are just suggestions that you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- Diff spread is ugh ugh ugh >.< [Stirring Moon] plays like a Hard, but you have still 3 Insane diffs on the mapset (yeah, Taiko aren't exceptions)...
- Use the same combocolours in all diffs?
~Boring Moon~
- Maybe you should map at least the same length as [Stirring Moon]...
~Stirring Moon~
- This diff makes a huge jump on difficulty from Normal... >.<
~Climmb's Taiko Oni~
Crazy! No problems here~
~Lunatic Moon~
- The low Stacking Leniency makes some things like 00:04:574 (6,1) harder to see than they should be, I suggest increasing it.
- Add an Epilepsy Warning to this diff, please.
00:30:553 (4) - This jump is too harsh imo...
02:49:419 (1) - This needs a better warning, it's too sudden :/
~Crazy Moon~
- What is the warning for? =x I think it's more useful for that crazy spaced part on [Lunatic Moon]...
Good luck~ *star*
star~
来一颗?
epic 
<Lunatic Moon>
I think normal hitsoundset fit the song well (whistle finish and clap)
some soft parts are too quiet, like 00:04:884 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:15:708 (1) - this sounds too loud in the soft part IMO
00:39:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - remove claps?
01:09:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - too quiet to hear XD
(這曲子整體來說音量與節奏都算是沒有太大起伏,所以不太適合soft跟normal過度的切換,尤其是在高潮的部份把音效換成soft的話,
打擊感都會跑掉了,因為BPM很高的關係,串燒裡加clap聽起來就會太大聲了)
Feel free to fix, if you don`t want to change anything, i will just bubble it
EDIT:oh yeah bubbled
I think normal hitsoundset fit the song well (whistle finish and clap)
some soft parts are too quiet, like 00:04:884 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:15:708 (1) - this sounds too loud in the soft part IMO
00:39:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - remove claps?
01:09:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - too quiet to hear XD
(這曲子整體來說音量與節奏都算是沒有太大起伏,所以不太適合soft跟normal過度的切換,尤其是在高潮的部份把音效換成soft的話,
打擊感都會跑掉了,因為BPM很高的關係,串燒裡加clap聽起來就會太大聲了)
Feel free to fix, if you don`t want to change anything, i will just bubble it
EDIT:oh yeah bubbled
两倍<3
I dont have anything to say on this map...
Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.
Mapset is awesome also.
SB is cool.
Timing is perfect (for me)
im supposed to rank this.. BUT.
can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it
dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place
Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.
Mapset is awesome also.
SB is cool.
Timing is perfect (for me)
im supposed to rank this.. BUT.
can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it
dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place
Topic Starter
thanks. fixedJames wrote:
I dont have anything to say on this map...
Its so freaking awesome, especially those whistles. PLUS I like the group.
Mapset is awesome also.
SB is cool.
Timing is perfect (for me)
im supposed to rank this.. BUT.
can you do something about the circle skins? I cant see the repeating slider arrows whenever i try playing it
dont tell me to "remove the skins while playing if you cant see it " because you put the skins in the first place
perfect. bubbled again.
ranked
萝莉萝莉包…一口一口咬…
lolipop, this map is fucking fantastic, and i love that SB, so nifty ^^
so cool :3
so cool :3
lolipop is the 神sber lolGabi wrote:
lolipop, this map is fucking fantastic, and i love that SB, so nifty ^^
so cool :3
Master SBer!
You have earned my appraisal.
Pardon me that I didn't get to it sooner. As you see now, I'm late.
Congrats!
Congrats!
Oh shit, I'm slow. Awesome idea with sb and amazing Crazy Jay diff!
My fav map!