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Hatsune Miku - Stargazer

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NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette
Orz, another Miku song =x

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
Zzz... remove the audio from the video and delete the .osb then do another full submission NAO!

[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - This sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow... Just make this slider shorter so that the reverse arrow's on a red tick (this would also make the next note easier to hit).
01:48:281 (1,1) - Overlapping sliders... In some cases this might be fine, but for here it's not since the first slider involved is partly covering up the next slider's start.
02:37:512 (3,4) - I dunno... Wouldn't it sound better if you just removed (4) then extended (3)'s slider so that the reverse arrow's on a white tick?

[Kid's Normal]
01:14:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The heck... Inconsistent spacing here.
02:01:204 (6) - Too close to (5)'s slider's end

[Garven's Hard]
Huh... Why is this the only difficulty with different combo colors? Shouldn't they all be the same for all diffs? (Personally, I like these better than the others :?)

00:47:358 (2) - Shouldn't there be a break after this?

There were also some issues with spacing (I don't mean the jumps), but I don't know what to say that would fix them :?

[Insane]
01:53:820 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
02:52:896 (9) - Stack underneath properly?

And... I don't mod Taiko diffs, sorry :? Anyway, that's it for now. ★~
Garven
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Garven

Blazevoir wrote:

[Garven's Hard]
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00:47:358 (2) - Shouldn't there be a break after this? Uh, no? Why would you?

There were also some issues with spacing (I don't mean the jumps), but I don't know what to say that would fix them :? Anything beyond my ghetto star at the end? You need to be a bit more specific, as your line implies that there are many throughout?
NaomiMinette
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NaomiMinette
I don't really know how to explain it, but it's like some of the hitcircle rings that appear after a note's been hit end up overlapping each other while the rest of the notes in that combo don't (or vice versa)...

Ahh forget it... It probably isn't that big of an issue anyway :?
Garven
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Garven
Psst, CDFA. Wanna know a secret?

SPOILER
On my diff: 02:27:358 (1) - Remove new combo
ztrot
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ztrot
might do a diff for this still not sure
Edit also change topic name to match the beatmap's name
loser101_old
128 posts
Joined April 2010
loser101_old
nice song
nice video

Easy
Nothing

Kid's Normal
Same ^

31's Taiko
Too Hard

Garven's Hard
Nothing

Insane
Same ^
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
cool
Takuma
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Takuma

loser101 wrote:

words
I like the way you mod. <3

Easy:

00:38:127 (1) - unnecessary finishes.

Kid's Normal:

If you're gonna use the claps like that, use them correctly. The claps should go on every other white tick.

00:30:435 (1) - clap on the start of the slider.
00:32:589 (1) - remove clap.
00:33:819 (4) - clap on repeating.
00:35:050 (1) - remove clap.

~ and so on. Some of the whistles are also misused. Only put on parts like this 01:21:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and other high notes imo.

01:16:896 (6) - end 1/2 earlier.
03:04:589 (1) - maybe full silence would be good for the end of this?

Garven's Hard:

02:13:973 ~ since you mapped that quiet part, I think it's best that a silent slider-slide be added. :xxx
02:57:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i like this

Insane:

what the fuck this map is so mean ):

02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ABSOLUTELY NOT JUSTIN BIEBER
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - TWICE IS EVEN WORSE
Garven
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Garven

pandabun wrote:

Garven's Hard:

02:13:973 ~ since you mapped that quiet part, I think it's best that a silent slider-slide be added. :xxx *looks at CDFA*
02:57:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i like this :D
Silent slider rolls.

Just change the timing section at the quieter part to soft C1 and it should be fine.
Derekku
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Derekku
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in folder.
*Vocaloid isn't a source. Move Vocaloid to tags please.
*Kotsuban-P is the creator of this song, so please list them as the source.
*I'm not sure whether there's a difference between "Stargazer" and "StargazeR" x:
*Offset looks perfect.

[Easy]
*Expected the slider velocity and distance spacing to be a bit lower to compensate for the fast bpm, but otherwise fine.

[Kid's Normal]
00:31:050 (2,3) - This didn't match the rest of the difficulty at all. There weren't any other 1/2 note streams like this, so I recommend just making this a slider (or at least stack them).
02:23:973 (1,2,3) - Similar to above, especially since it's hard to judge how many repeats are on (1). I recommend just deleting (2) to make this much easier.

[Garven's Hard]
*I love the combo colors (blues and purples are my favorites)
00:47:358 (2) - The silence from the end of the slider and the space afterwards sounds very awkward to me. x__x;
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4) - oh my god NO. Kick sliders are bad enough when they're spaced right next to each other. Spacing them far apart like this is just plain ridiculous.
*The ending was too insane for this diff imo.

[Insane]
*0.5x bpm section made zero sense since it was the only time you did it. All it did was break my combo and make me rage. :c
01:44:896 (7) - I couldn't tell that this was a slider due to (4)'d hitburst.
01:53:820 (1) - a bit ugly ):
02:25:050 (12,1) - watch yer spacing (1 looked like it was part of the stream)
*17-note stack/streams were evil ):
*jump/stacks at the end were super evil D:
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok did the crap and everything.
Garven
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Garven

Derekku wrote:

[Garven's Hard]
*I love the combo colors (blues and purples are my favorites) The set used to have two different backgrounds, thus the differences, though I guess CDFA hadn't changed them to uniformity yet.
00:47:358 (2) - The silence from the end of the slider and the space afterwards sounds very awkward to me. x__x; :/ I still like it much better silenced to me. The way the voice wavers off with not much else in the band to pick up that spot doesn't feel like it needs aural feedback to me.
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4) - oh my god NO. Kick sliders are bad enough when they're spaced right next to each other. Spacing them far apart like this is just plain ridiculous. I don't see how people have problems with these. The slider circle is huge with the large hit circles, so you end up with plenty of room to move your cursor while holding down the click/key.


*The ending was too insane for this diff imo. I was modeling it after CDFA's difficulty, so I ramped up the difficulty accordingly. I think the only hardish parts of it are the accelerated spacing stacks.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
God dammit I'm CDFA again.
Garven
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Garven
Better change all of those collab tags again.
EvianBubble
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Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Why hello there! How do you do :)

General
Delete .osb file

Easy
I thought the slider velocity would be a bit lower since the BPM is so high, but whatever
00:40:589 (1) - Move one grid left
00:44:281 (2) - This note is kinda low, maybe move it beside the ending of (1) instead?
01:13:820 (1) - This is just me but I don't really like sliders overlapping, so maybe move it around? Your choice though, it's not like it's super bad or anything
01:48:281 (1, 1 of next combo) - Yea, I think this just looks really bad, but there's not really a way around this one, huh? :S
... Yea, not much to say here :P

Kid's normal
Slider velocity still seems a bit fast to me :S
... I can't find anything else. Really nice map :)

Garven's hard
This map is EPIC *_* The part at the end seems pretty insane to me though, and I know it's been mentioned already so ... yea :P

Insane
This is definitely insane. In a good way though

Lol really good maps, there's barely anything to mod X_X. +1 star, I think you definitely deserve it :)
NotShinta
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NotShinta
kawaii
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Fixed most of Evian's things, and did some other changes.

Also ilu DC.
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH

Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Lesjuh wrote:

[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH

Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Too bad almost every BAT denies me >w<.

Also keeping those things because I'm an asshole.
James2250
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James2250
miku..why....(im like your white family) :P

Easy:
looks good

Normal:
looks good

Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better

Insane:
01:53:30 timing section isn't needed
02:48:896 (5) - would look better being symmetrical

nice map
*star*
GladiOol
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Joined August 2008
GladiOol
Drain Rate on Insane you slet.
Make it +3 or +4 !

Don't kudosu this, just fix what I posted.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
<3 low hp drain
Garven
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Garven

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed Oops
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier Wait... I just deleted it though. Ah, whatever.
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better Gives it the same look as the rest of the stacks that you just went through. Though it did make me notice how off the 03:04:281 (7,8,9) - stack was, so I fixed that.
Download: Hatsune Miku - StargazeR (CDFA) [Garven's Hard].osu
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ahai

[Easy]
Hmm, the slider velocity is low, but the slider ball are fast, can you lower it again?

01:11:666 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:18:743 (1) - Finish at start?
01:28:896 (1) - Perhaps move forward to next white tick and cut short? So they fit in vocal?
01:45:820 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:58:127 (4,5) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:56:281 (3) at end
02:03:050 (4) - New combo?
02:07:973 (4) - ^

[Kid's Normal]
00:35:973 (3) - Move 3 grid right?
00:45:512 (2) - Forgot put clap at end?
01:43:973 (2) - Move 1 grid left?
01:45:204 (3) - ^
01:47:050 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:49:820 (5) - Move 2 grid left?

[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern?
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end?
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left?

[Insane]
The whistle is toooooo many, so the sound is too loud

Good song
STAR
Garven
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Garven

Leorda wrote:

Ahai

[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern? Nah.
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end? Nah.
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it? I actually liked the effect of the arrows pointing to the next section. A transition, you could say.
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal I already got enough flak from my silent-end slider earlier. I'd do it to this one too if I added it - I'll just leave it for now, hehe.
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left? Look at it in play mode.

Good song
STAR
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Crapload of stuff with dtk's diff and leorda's modding.
Orgol
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Orgol
Star~★
Pettan_old
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Joined December 2009
Pettan_old
Star~ ;)
Bikko
151 posts
Joined January 2010
Bikko
Rule
  1. Do me a favor and prevent me from a heart attack by refraining from posting extreme stream songs.
  2. Sometimes I won't mod your mapset and just pass it. in this case, I'll announce you why I didn't mod your mapset.
[Insane] has many 1/4. It's in extreme stream song category because of 1/4 of 195BPM is humanly imposible without key or button. I need Guinness Record to play this.

Yeah, I can mod your map except [Insane]. but Unfortunately, I started up this diff first to mod your map. in that moment, I lost my all motivation to mod your map. I'm terribly sorry.

You didn't disrerad my rule only except this, and this mapset is looks good. I can give you star. good luck.
Krisom
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Krisom
General~
Man, we alredy discussed about the title. StargazeR, with a capital "R" is not this song, it's a mix (this mix)

Easy~
00:30:743 (1) - The finish at the start is out of place.
00:38:743 (2) - I can hear a soft finish in the music at the end of this slider. You may want to add one.
00:44:281 (2) - Here too. Anyway, clap + whistle? Choose just one ;_;
01:03:358 (4) - This is a weird clap considering that (1)'s end, (2)'s end and (3)'s repeat dont have any clap and follow the same note.
01:13:820 (1) - Srsly? add a finish at the start
01:26:743 (4) - Why do you break (3)'s clapping pattern? Add the clap at the start for consistency.
02:25:204 (1) - Place this at the center (Y axis) of the screen. Also, add a finsih at the start.
02:28:281 (5) - Remove tha claps at the start and end?
02:43:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finish abuse. Ugly imo, but do what you want.

Taiko~
01:05:127 (187) - Move 1/4 early? (to the red tick) ?
01:13:820 (14) - Finish?
01:23:666 (80) - ^?
02:25:204 (15) - ^?
02:35:050 (64) - ^?

Normal~
The spacing between notes it's too wide for a normal imo...
00:32:589 (1,2) - switch claps (unclap 1, clap 2)
00:35:050 (1,2) - ^ (do not touch (2)'s end)
01:18:743 (3) - Add a finish at the start?
01:53:204 (1) - Clap at the end
02:25:204 (2) - Finish at the start
02:30:127 (2) - Finish?
02:56:589 (4,1,2) - Make this spacing like the spacing between 02:54:743 (1,2,3)
03:04:589 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.

Hard~
This sucks >:( (lol no :3)
03:04:743 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.

Insane~
00:46:589 (1) - If anything, this spinner should start at 00:47:358, as miku starts holding a note there. If you'll follow the guitar, make it start at 00:46:743.
01:03:973 (1,2,3,4) - I still dont like tghis speedup at the slow section. Oh, add a finish at (1)'s start
01:06:435 (1,1) - These finishes are weird. The spinner start has the finish in the music. My suggestion: Add a circle at 01:06:435, make the first spinner end at 01:07:666 - and the second one end at 01:08:896. That way the finishes will feel ok.
01:18:743 (4) - Finish at the start
01:38:435 (1) - ^
02:30:127 (2) - ^
02:35:050 (1) - Finish
02:39:973 (5) - Finish at the start
02:47:358 (1) - ^
02:51:973 (8) - Place it under (6) just like (6) is placed under (4)
03:02:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Flip vertically?
03:04:589 (1) - Oh c'mon! <_<
Completely overmapped. Such a fast paced song does not need this amount of 1/4 to be insane.

Star(gazer), cuz Garven's Hard is amazing
Garven
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Garven

Krisom wrote:

Hard~
This sucks >:( (lol no :3) *showers with kudosu*
03:04:743 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected. I don't even remember putting that in. I might have done it since even at the lowest volume you can hear the soft hit pretty easily, so I stuck on a finish. Eh, go ahead and remove it, CDFA.

Star(gazer), cuz Garven's Hard is amazing Aww shucks
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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
NOTE TO FUTURE MODDERS: Is the song Stargazer, or StargazeR?
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Krisom said Stargazer, he's always right.

Anyways, do a full submit. Error loading audio.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
K all fixed.
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
?
why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

samiljul wrote:

?
why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
Wait, where~.
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31

CDFA wrote:

samiljul wrote:

?
why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
Wait, where~.
Here
01:23:666 (80) -
Shohei Ohtani
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Shohei Ohtani
awwrite.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
[Easy]
02:25:204 (1) - Why is the start of this silenced? Add an inherited timing section before this note that isn't muted.

[Insane]
02:54:743 (1) - You sure you don't want to shorten the jumps in this section?

Your mp3 bitrate is too high. Max is 256kbps.


Edit: Now add +30ms to the offset. (9,850)
Shohei Ohtani
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Shohei Ohtani
Whee >w<
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Bubbled
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Fixed that one slider thing.

Graving this now unless someone really cares that much.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Rebubbled but if you really don't care about your map, I'll grave it for you. Nvm, I can't grave~
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
slider mod>_>
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
desu
James
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James
rank
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
If a BAT could give James kudosu, as he did a small IRC mod (-1 Drain on Garven's diff, and removing some small breaks), that'd be sexy.

Also >www<
Krisom
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Krisom
Oh dear god...


...Oh yeah, gratz on dat rank
Derekku
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Derekku
;D Grats!

(my goodness so many new Miku maps lately)
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
That ending <3.
ztrot
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ztrot
This isn't as bad as my miku map I win HA!....oh wait......I just made myself sad..... :(
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