Derekku wrote:
[Garven's Hard]
*I love the combo colors (blues and purples are my favorites) The set used to have two different backgrounds, thus the differences, though I guess CDFA hadn't changed them to uniformity yet.
00:47:358 (2) - The silence from the end of the slider and the space afterwards sounds very awkward to me. x__x; :/ I still like it much better silenced to me. The way the voice wavers off with not much else in the band to pick up that spot doesn't feel like it needs aural feedback to me.
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4) - oh my god NO. Kick sliders are bad enough when they're spaced right next to each other. Spacing them far apart like this is just plain ridiculous. I don't see how people have problems with these. The slider circle is huge with the large hit circles, so you end up with plenty of room to move your cursor while holding down the click/key.
*The ending was too insane for this diff imo. I was modeling it after CDFA's difficulty, so I ramped up the difficulty accordingly. I think the only hardish parts of it are the accelerated spacing stacks.
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Better change all of those collab tags again.
Why hello there! How do you do 
General
Delete .osb file
Easy
I thought the slider velocity would be a bit lower since the BPM is so high, but whatever
00:40:589 (1) - Move one grid left
00:44:281 (2) - This note is kinda low, maybe move it beside the ending of (1) instead?
01:13:820 (1) - This is just me but I don't really like sliders overlapping, so maybe move it around? Your choice though, it's not like it's super bad or anything
01:48:281 (1, 1 of next combo) - Yea, I think this just looks really bad, but there's not really a way around this one, huh? :S
... Yea, not much to say here
Kid's normal
Slider velocity still seems a bit fast to me :S
... I can't find anything else. Really nice map
Garven's hard
This map is EPIC *_* The part at the end seems pretty insane to me though, and I know it's been mentioned already so ... yea
Insane
This is definitely insane. In a good way though
Lol really good maps, there's barely anything to mod X_X. +1 star, I think you definitely deserve it
General
Delete .osb file
Easy
I thought the slider velocity would be a bit lower since the BPM is so high, but whatever
00:40:589 (1) - Move one grid left
00:44:281 (2) - This note is kinda low, maybe move it beside the ending of (1) instead?
01:13:820 (1) - This is just me but I don't really like sliders overlapping, so maybe move it around? Your choice though, it's not like it's super bad or anything
01:48:281 (1, 1 of next combo) - Yea, I think this just looks really bad, but there's not really a way around this one, huh? :S
... Yea, not much to say here
Kid's normal
Slider velocity still seems a bit fast to me :S
... I can't find anything else. Really nice map
Garven's hard
This map is EPIC *_* The part at the end seems pretty insane to me though, and I know it's been mentioned already so ... yea
Insane
This is definitely insane. In a good way though
Lol really good maps, there's barely anything to mod X_X. +1 star, I think you definitely deserve it
kawaii
Shohei Ohtani
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH
Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH
Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Shohei Ohtani
Too bad almost every BAT denies me >w<.Lesjuh wrote:
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH
Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Also keeping those things because I'm an asshole.
miku..why....(im like your white family)
Easy:
looks good
Normal:
looks good
Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better
Insane:
01:53:30 timing section isn't needed
02:48:896 (5) - would look better being symmetrical
nice map
*star*
Easy:
looks good
Normal:
looks good
Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better
Insane:
01:53:30 timing section isn't needed
02:48:896 (5) - would look better being symmetrical
nice map
*star*
Drain Rate on Insane you slet.
Make it +3 or +4 !
Don't kudosu this, just fix what I posted.
Make it +3 or +4 !
Don't kudosu this, just fix what I posted.
Download: Hatsune Miku - StargazeR (CDFA) [Garven's Hard].osuJames2250 wrote:
Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed Oops
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier Wait... I just deleted it though. Ah, whatever.
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better Gives it the same look as the rest of the stacks that you just went through. Though it did make me notice how off the 03:04:281 (7,8,9) - stack was, so I fixed that.
Ahai
[Easy]
Hmm, the slider velocity is low, but the slider ball are fast, can you lower it again?
01:11:666 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:18:743 (1) - Finish at start?
01:28:896 (1) - Perhaps move forward to next white tick and cut short? So they fit in vocal?
01:45:820 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:58:127 (4,5) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:56:281 (3) at end
02:03:050 (4) - New combo?
02:07:973 (4) - ^
[Kid's Normal]
00:35:973 (3) - Move 3 grid right?
00:45:512 (2) - Forgot put clap at end?
01:43:973 (2) - Move 1 grid left?
01:45:204 (3) - ^
01:47:050 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:49:820 (5) - Move 2 grid left?
[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern?
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end?
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left?
[Insane]
The whistle is toooooo many, so the sound is too loud
Good song
STAR
[Easy]
Hmm, the slider velocity is low, but the slider ball are fast, can you lower it again?
01:11:666 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:18:743 (1) - Finish at start?
01:28:896 (1) - Perhaps move forward to next white tick and cut short? So they fit in vocal?
01:45:820 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:58:127 (4,5) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:56:281 (3) at end
02:03:050 (4) - New combo?
02:07:973 (4) - ^
[Kid's Normal]
00:35:973 (3) - Move 3 grid right?
00:45:512 (2) - Forgot put clap at end?
01:43:973 (2) - Move 1 grid left?
01:45:204 (3) - ^
01:47:050 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:49:820 (5) - Move 2 grid left?
[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern?
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end?
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left?
[Insane]
The whistle is toooooo many, so the sound is too loud
Good song
STAR
Leorda wrote:
Ahai
[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern? Nah.
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end? Nah.
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it? I actually liked the effect of the arrows pointing to the next section. A transition, you could say.
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal I already got enough flak from my silent-end slider earlier. I'd do it to this one too if I added it - I'll just leave it for now, hehe.
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left? Look at it in play mode.
Good song
STAR
Star~ 
Rule
Yeah, I can mod your map except [Insane]. but Unfortunately, I started up this diff first to mod your map. in that moment, I lost my all motivation to mod your map. I'm terribly sorry.
You didn't disrerad my rule only except this, and this mapset is looks good. I can give you star. good luck.
- Do me a favor and prevent me from a heart attack by refraining from posting extreme stream songs.
- Sometimes I won't mod your mapset and just pass it. in this case, I'll announce you why I didn't mod your mapset.
Yeah, I can mod your map except [Insane]. but Unfortunately, I started up this diff first to mod your map. in that moment, I lost my all motivation to mod your map. I'm terribly sorry.
You didn't disrerad my rule only except this, and this mapset is looks good. I can give you star. good luck.
General~
Man, we alredy discussed about the title. StargazeR, with a capital "R" is not this song, it's a mix (this mix)
Easy~
00:30:743 (1) - The finish at the start is out of place.
00:38:743 (2) - I can hear a soft finish in the music at the end of this slider. You may want to add one.
00:44:281 (2) - Here too. Anyway, clap + whistle? Choose just one ;_;
01:03:358 (4) - This is a weird clap considering that (1)'s end, (2)'s end and (3)'s repeat dont have any clap and follow the same note.
01:13:820 (1) - Srsly? add a finish at the start
01:26:743 (4) - Why do you break (3)'s clapping pattern? Add the clap at the start for consistency.
02:25:204 (1) - Place this at the center (Y axis) of the screen. Also, add a finsih at the start.
02:28:281 (5) - Remove tha claps at the start and end?
02:43:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finish abuse. Ugly imo, but do what you want.
Taiko~
01:05:127 (187) - Move 1/4 early? (to the red tick) ?
01:13:820 (14) - Finish?
01:23:666 (80) - ^?
02:25:204 (15) - ^?
02:35:050 (64) - ^?
Normal~
The spacing between notes it's too wide for a normal imo...
00:32:589 (1,2) - switch claps (unclap 1, clap 2)
00:35:050 (1,2) - ^ (do not touch (2)'s end)
01:18:743 (3) - Add a finish at the start?
01:53:204 (1) - Clap at the end
02:25:204 (2) - Finish at the start
02:30:127 (2) - Finish?
02:56:589 (4,1,2) - Make this spacing like the spacing between 02:54:743 (1,2,3)
03:04:589 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.
Hard~
This sucks
(lol no :3)
03:04:743 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.
Insane~
00:46:589 (1) - If anything, this spinner should start at 00:47:358, as miku starts holding a note there. If you'll follow the guitar, make it start at 00:46:743.
01:03:973 (1,2,3,4) - I still dont like tghis speedup at the slow section. Oh, add a finish at (1)'s start
01:06:435 (1,1) - These finishes are weird. The spinner start has the finish in the music. My suggestion: Add a circle at 01:06:435, make the first spinner end at 01:07:666 - and the second one end at 01:08:896. That way the finishes will feel ok.
01:18:743 (4) - Finish at the start
01:38:435 (1) - ^
02:30:127 (2) - ^
02:35:050 (1) - Finish
02:39:973 (5) - Finish at the start
02:47:358 (1) - ^
02:51:973 (8) - Place it under (6) just like (6) is placed under (4)
03:02:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Flip vertically?
03:04:589 (1) - Oh c'mon! <_<
Completely overmapped. Such a fast paced song does not need this amount of 1/4 to be insane.
Star(gazer), cuz Garven's Hard is amazing
Man, we alredy discussed about the title. StargazeR, with a capital "R" is not this song, it's a mix (this mix)
Easy~
00:30:743 (1) - The finish at the start is out of place.
00:38:743 (2) - I can hear a soft finish in the music at the end of this slider. You may want to add one.
00:44:281 (2) - Here too. Anyway, clap + whistle? Choose just one ;_;
01:03:358 (4) - This is a weird clap considering that (1)'s end, (2)'s end and (3)'s repeat dont have any clap and follow the same note.
01:13:820 (1) - Srsly? add a finish at the start
01:26:743 (4) - Why do you break (3)'s clapping pattern? Add the clap at the start for consistency.
02:25:204 (1) - Place this at the center (Y axis) of the screen. Also, add a finsih at the start.
02:28:281 (5) - Remove tha claps at the start and end?
02:43:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finish abuse. Ugly imo, but do what you want.
Taiko~
01:05:127 (187) - Move 1/4 early? (to the red tick) ?
01:13:820 (14) - Finish?
01:23:666 (80) - ^?
02:25:204 (15) - ^?
02:35:050 (64) - ^?
Normal~
The spacing between notes it's too wide for a normal imo...
00:32:589 (1,2) - switch claps (unclap 1, clap 2)
00:35:050 (1,2) - ^ (do not touch (2)'s end)
01:18:743 (3) - Add a finish at the start?
01:53:204 (1) - Clap at the end
02:25:204 (2) - Finish at the start
02:30:127 (2) - Finish?
02:56:589 (4,1,2) - Make this spacing like the spacing between 02:54:743 (1,2,3)
03:04:589 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.
Hard~
This sucks
(lol no :3)03:04:743 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected.
Insane~
00:46:589 (1) - If anything, this spinner should start at 00:47:358, as miku starts holding a note there. If you'll follow the guitar, make it start at 00:46:743.
01:03:973 (1,2,3,4) - I still dont like tghis speedup at the slow section. Oh, add a finish at (1)'s start
01:06:435 (1,1) - These finishes are weird. The spinner start has the finish in the music. My suggestion: Add a circle at 01:06:435, make the first spinner end at 01:07:666 - and the second one end at 01:08:896. That way the finishes will feel ok.
01:18:743 (4) - Finish at the start
01:38:435 (1) - ^
02:30:127 (2) - ^
02:35:050 (1) - Finish
02:39:973 (5) - Finish at the start
02:47:358 (1) - ^
02:51:973 (8) - Place it under (6) just like (6) is placed under (4)
03:02:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Flip vertically?
03:04:589 (1) - Oh c'mon! <_<
Completely overmapped. Such a fast paced song does not need this amount of 1/4 to be insane.
Star(gazer), cuz Garven's Hard is amazing
Krisom wrote:
Hard~
This sucks >:( (lol no :3) *showers with kudosu*
03:04:743 (1) - If youre going to make this slient, remove the finish, it's totally unexpected. I don't even remember putting that in. I might have done it since even at the lowest volume you can hear the soft hit pretty easily, so I stuck on a finish. Eh, go ahead and remove it, CDFA.
Star(gazer), cuz Garven's Hard is amazing Aww shucks
Shohei Ohtani
Krisom said Stargazer, he's always right.
Anyways, do a full submit. Error loading audio.
Anyways, do a full submit. Error loading audio.
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why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
Shohei Ohtani
HereCDFA wrote:
Wait, where~.samiljul wrote:
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why taiko map have 1/4 finish.... plz fix it
01:23:666 (80) -
[Easy]
02:25:204 (1) - Why is the start of this silenced? Add an inherited timing section before this note that isn't muted.
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1) - You sure you don't want to shorten the jumps in this section?
Your mp3 bitrate is too high. Max is 256kbps.
Edit: Now add +30ms to the offset. (9,850)
02:25:204 (1) - Why is the start of this silenced? Add an inherited timing section before this note that isn't muted.
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1) - You sure you don't want to shorten the jumps in this section?
Your mp3 bitrate is too high. Max is 256kbps.
Edit: Now add +30ms to the offset. (9,850)
Bubbled
Shohei Ohtani
Rebubbled but if you really don't care about your map, I'll grave it for you. Nvm, I can't grave~
slider mod>_>
rank
Shohei Ohtani
Oh dear god...
...Oh yeah, gratz on dat rank
...Oh yeah, gratz on dat rank
;D Grats!
(my goodness so many new Miku maps lately)
(my goodness so many new Miku maps lately)
This isn't as bad as my miku map I win HA!....oh wait......I just made myself sad..... 