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Hatsune Miku - Stargazer

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Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Nice video and song :)

[General]
- Can you remove the audio from the vid ? it'll save some size if you remove it
- Why is crap as a Tag?

[Pruuu]
There are 6 unused timing section (cause they have the same setting as the timing section before them) :
SPOILER
- 01:03:973
- 01:43:358
- 01:53:204
- 02:47:050
- 02:54:743
- 03:08:281
cause they aren't used, might as well remove them all
00:30:743 (1) - shorten this slider to the previous white tick, if you follow this, add circle on where it end before
01:45:820 (5) - NC
02:37:512 (3) - delete the repeat then lengthen this to 02:38:127, then move 02:38:743 (4) to the previous red tick? basically following the lyric
02:44:743 (1) - how about move this to the previous red tick? it's long enough so it's not too sudden and then lengthen it if you move this

[Kid's Chuu]
Another 5 unused timing section :
SPOILER
- 01:03:973
- 01:43:358
- 01:53:204
- 02:47:358
- 02:54:743
00:46:743 (1) - lengthen this to the next white tick ?
02:12:281 (1) - it's better if this is end on the previous red tick
02:44:743 (1) - same as the spinner on Pruu
03:03:666 (1) - start and end this at the same time as in Garven's Unyuu, the current place isn't very nice
Combo mod
SPOILER
01:19:973 (1) - remove NC
02:05:820 (1) - ^
02:09:820 (1) - ^
02:35:358 (1) - ^ then add NC on 02:35:973 (2) ?
02:56:589 (1) - ^ then add NC on 02:57:204 (5)
03:01:512 (1) - ^ then add NC on 03:01:820 (6) ?

[Garven's Unyuu]
01:33:358 (7) - hmm.....change it into circle?
yeah the last section is fun, the only thing that bugs me is the two stack ~ increased spacing, but I blame my playing skill :P

[Uguu]
02:06:743 (3,4,5,6) - please stack the end better
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this is overkill :o
03:04:589 (1) - fade out this spinner just like in Garven's Unyuu, easy way to do it is too copy the timing point code from the osu notepad

Am I the only one who have fun playing this? (except for Uguu cause it's makes me go Uguu~)
Of course a Star from me :3
Good Luck
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[quote="Sallad4ever"
[Garven's Unyuu]
01:33:358 (7) - hmm.....change it into circle? Nah, but it did make me notice that the 1 and 2 of that combo were misaligned, so if anything, inspiration kudos. :P
yeah the last section is fun, the only thing that bugs me is the two stack ~ increased spacing, but I blame my playing skill :P Hehe, I was running out of ideas for a constant eighth note run. It's a nice challenge at the end of the song.
[/quote]

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31

Xgor wrote:

[31. Taiko]
Who is 31??
Anyways not gonna mod this
Me
samiljul is one Korean national holiday, and its March 1st (31) :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desu >w<
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
Fun maps :)
*sigh* I couldn't find anything to point out/comment on. Although why do you have "loli" and "crap" in tags- are they really necessary? And you don't have to add "Japanese" since BAT's add that to the genre when the map gets ranked.

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Unrelatedly, I found out that samijul wasn't in the tags, so I'll just put that in >w<

Also removing crap from the tags because people actually noticed.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
bleh diff names
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
IRC Modding is fun yo
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Garven

OD -1
Removed silent slider end thingies
Combo crap that doesn't really matter
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Suggested to re-map this~

Also, typod's Samiljul. Fixing :D~
Garven
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5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

CDFA wrote:

Garven

OD -1
Removed silent slider end thingies Have you noticed how RETARDED this sounds now (on the first one, anyway)? I'd rather keep this one in, considering how the vocal wavers out instead of wanting for the striking sound of a hit. Funny that there wasn't whining about the silenced spinners too.
Combo crap that doesn't really matter
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Suggested to re-map this~ With the lower OD, it is a bit harder to read. Gee. I'll keep for now, though, and if someone else wants it completely remapped I'll do it.
Updated a couple hit sounds that were either missed or changed on accident somehow.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Hard].osu
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - So I see you are trying to make the slider end on a red tick. Can you make or something, as long nothing touches a blue tick. Currently sounds like crap.
00:35:666 (1) - ^
00:38:743 (2) - ^
00:40:589 (1) - Extend or shorten by 1/4
01:01:512 (3) - Bad sounding
02:37:512 (3) - Sounds bad, but not as bad as everything before this.

Rest are all ok, but the last part on Insane is kinda overkill.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - So I see you are trying to make the slider end on a red tick. Can you make or something, as long nothing touches a blue tick. Currently sounds like crap.
00:35:666 (1) - ^
00:38:743 (2) - ^
00:40:589 (1) - Extend or shorten by 1/4
01:01:512 (3) - Bad sounding
02:37:512 (3) - Sounds bad, but not as bad as everything before this.

Rest are all ok, but the last part on Insane is kinda overkill.
All of those except 02:37:512 (3) - were unintentional~. Thanks for pointing them out >w<.
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
Joined June 2009
NaomiMinette
Orz, another Miku song =x

Blue = suggestions/minor issues
Green = might want to fix this
Red = you MUST fix this

[General]
Zzz... remove the audio from the video and delete the .osb then do another full submission NAO!

[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - This sounds weird when it hits the reverse arrow... Just make this slider shorter so that the reverse arrow's on a red tick (this would also make the next note easier to hit).
01:48:281 (1,1) - Overlapping sliders... In some cases this might be fine, but for here it's not since the first slider involved is partly covering up the next slider's start.
02:37:512 (3,4) - I dunno... Wouldn't it sound better if you just removed (4) then extended (3)'s slider so that the reverse arrow's on a white tick?

[Kid's Normal]
01:14:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The heck... Inconsistent spacing here.
02:01:204 (6) - Too close to (5)'s slider's end

[Garven's Hard]
Huh... Why is this the only difficulty with different combo colors? Shouldn't they all be the same for all diffs? (Personally, I like these better than the others :?)

00:47:358 (2) - Shouldn't there be a break after this?

There were also some issues with spacing (I don't mean the jumps), but I don't know what to say that would fix them :?

[Insane]
01:53:820 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
02:52:896 (9) - Stack underneath properly?

And... I don't mod Taiko diffs, sorry :? Anyway, that's it for now. ★~
Garven
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5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Blazevoir wrote:

[Garven's Hard]
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00:47:358 (2) - Shouldn't there be a break after this? Uh, no? Why would you?

There were also some issues with spacing (I don't mean the jumps), but I don't know what to say that would fix them :? Anything beyond my ghetto star at the end? You need to be a bit more specific, as your line implies that there are many throughout?
NaomiMinette
osu! Alumni
3,916 posts
Joined June 2009
NaomiMinette
I don't really know how to explain it, but it's like some of the hitcircle rings that appear after a note's been hit end up overlapping each other while the rest of the notes in that combo don't (or vice versa)...

Ahh forget it... It probably isn't that big of an issue anyway :?
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Psst, CDFA. Wanna know a secret?

SPOILER
On my diff: 02:27:358 (1) - Remove new combo
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
might do a diff for this still not sure
Edit also change topic name to match the beatmap's name
loser101_old
128 posts
Joined April 2010
loser101_old
nice song
nice video

Easy
Nothing

Kid's Normal
Same ^

31's Taiko
Too Hard

Garven's Hard
Nothing

Insane
Same ^
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
cool
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma

loser101 wrote:

words
I like the way you mod. <3

Easy:

00:38:127 (1) - unnecessary finishes.

Kid's Normal:

If you're gonna use the claps like that, use them correctly. The claps should go on every other white tick.

00:30:435 (1) - clap on the start of the slider.
00:32:589 (1) - remove clap.
00:33:819 (4) - clap on repeating.
00:35:050 (1) - remove clap.

~ and so on. Some of the whistles are also misused. Only put on parts like this 01:21:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and other high notes imo.

01:16:896 (6) - end 1/2 earlier.
03:04:589 (1) - maybe full silence would be good for the end of this?

Garven's Hard:

02:13:973 ~ since you mapped that quiet part, I think it's best that a silent slider-slide be added. :xxx
02:57:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i like this

Insane:

what the fuck this map is so mean ):

02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ABSOLUTELY NOT JUSTIN BIEBER
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - TWICE IS EVEN WORSE
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

pandabun wrote:

Garven's Hard:

02:13:973 ~ since you mapped that quiet part, I think it's best that a silent slider-slide be added. :xxx *looks at CDFA*
02:57:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i like this :D
Silent slider rolls.

Just change the timing section at the quieter part to soft C1 and it should be fine.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in folder.
*Vocaloid isn't a source. Move Vocaloid to tags please.
*Kotsuban-P is the creator of this song, so please list them as the source.
*I'm not sure whether there's a difference between "Stargazer" and "StargazeR" x:
*Offset looks perfect.

[Easy]
*Expected the slider velocity and distance spacing to be a bit lower to compensate for the fast bpm, but otherwise fine.

[Kid's Normal]
00:31:050 (2,3) - This didn't match the rest of the difficulty at all. There weren't any other 1/2 note streams like this, so I recommend just making this a slider (or at least stack them).
02:23:973 (1,2,3) - Similar to above, especially since it's hard to judge how many repeats are on (1). I recommend just deleting (2) to make this much easier.

[Garven's Hard]
*I love the combo colors (blues and purples are my favorites)
00:47:358 (2) - The silence from the end of the slider and the space afterwards sounds very awkward to me. x__x;
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4) - oh my god NO. Kick sliders are bad enough when they're spaced right next to each other. Spacing them far apart like this is just plain ridiculous.
*The ending was too insane for this diff imo.

[Insane]
*0.5x bpm section made zero sense since it was the only time you did it. All it did was break my combo and make me rage. :c
01:44:896 (7) - I couldn't tell that this was a slider due to (4)'d hitburst.
01:53:820 (1) - a bit ugly ):
02:25:050 (12,1) - watch yer spacing (1 looked like it was part of the stream)
*17-note stack/streams were evil ):
*jump/stacks at the end were super evil D:
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok did the crap and everything.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Derekku wrote:

[Garven's Hard]
*I love the combo colors (blues and purples are my favorites) The set used to have two different backgrounds, thus the differences, though I guess CDFA hadn't changed them to uniformity yet.
00:47:358 (2) - The silence from the end of the slider and the space afterwards sounds very awkward to me. x__x; :/ I still like it much better silenced to me. The way the voice wavers off with not much else in the band to pick up that spot doesn't feel like it needs aural feedback to me.
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4) - oh my god NO. Kick sliders are bad enough when they're spaced right next to each other. Spacing them far apart like this is just plain ridiculous. I don't see how people have problems with these. The slider circle is huge with the large hit circles, so you end up with plenty of room to move your cursor while holding down the click/key.


*The ending was too insane for this diff imo. I was modeling it after CDFA's difficulty, so I ramped up the difficulty accordingly. I think the only hardish parts of it are the accelerated spacing stacks.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
God dammit I'm CDFA again.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Better change all of those collab tags again.
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Why hello there! How do you do :)

General
Delete .osb file

Easy
I thought the slider velocity would be a bit lower since the BPM is so high, but whatever
00:40:589 (1) - Move one grid left
00:44:281 (2) - This note is kinda low, maybe move it beside the ending of (1) instead?
01:13:820 (1) - This is just me but I don't really like sliders overlapping, so maybe move it around? Your choice though, it's not like it's super bad or anything
01:48:281 (1, 1 of next combo) - Yea, I think this just looks really bad, but there's not really a way around this one, huh? :S
... Yea, not much to say here :P

Kid's normal
Slider velocity still seems a bit fast to me :S
... I can't find anything else. Really nice map :)

Garven's hard
This map is EPIC *_* The part at the end seems pretty insane to me though, and I know it's been mentioned already so ... yea :P

Insane
This is definitely insane. In a good way though

Lol really good maps, there's barely anything to mod X_X. +1 star, I think you definitely deserve it :)
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
kawaii
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Fixed most of Evian's things, and did some other changes.

Also ilu DC.
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH

Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Lesjuh wrote:

[Insane]
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - THAT'S CRUEL BRAH
02:59:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - NOOO NOT TWICE BRAH

Yeah that's about everything I have to say. Time to get some BATs~
Too bad almost every BAT denies me >w<.

Also keeping those things because I'm an asshole.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
miku..why....(im like your white family) :P

Easy:
looks good

Normal:
looks good

Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better

Insane:
01:53:30 timing section isn't needed
02:48:896 (5) - would look better being symmetrical

nice map
*star*
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
Drain Rate on Insane you slet.
Make it +3 or +4 !

Don't kudosu this, just fix what I posted.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
<3 low hp drain
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

James2250 wrote:

Hard:
02:47:36 timing section isn't needed Oops
move 02:47:358 timing section 1/4 earlier Wait... I just deleted it though. Ah, whatever.
03:02:435 (2,3,4,) - could be stacked slightly better Gives it the same look as the rest of the stacks that you just went through. Though it did make me notice how off the 03:04:281 (7,8,9) - stack was, so I fixed that.
Download: Hatsune Miku - StargazeR (CDFA) [Garven's Hard].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ahai

[Easy]
Hmm, the slider velocity is low, but the slider ball are fast, can you lower it again?

01:11:666 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:18:743 (1) - Finish at start?
01:28:896 (1) - Perhaps move forward to next white tick and cut short? So they fit in vocal?
01:45:820 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:58:127 (4,5) - Not stacked perfectly with 01:56:281 (3) at end
02:03:050 (4) - New combo?
02:07:973 (4) - ^

[Kid's Normal]
00:35:973 (3) - Move 3 grid right?
00:45:512 (2) - Forgot put clap at end?
01:43:973 (2) - Move 1 grid left?
01:45:204 (3) - ^
01:47:050 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:49:820 (5) - Move 2 grid left?

[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern?
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end?
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left?

[Insane]
The whistle is toooooo many, so the sound is too loud

Good song
STAR
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Leorda wrote:

Ahai

[Garven's Hard]
00:32:127 (2) - Maybe, don't stack with 1? Like other pattern? Nah.
00:51:666 (1) - Clap at end? Nah.
02:13:204 (B) - This break are too short, remove it? I actually liked the effect of the arrows pointing to the next section. A transition, you could say.
02:15:358 (4) - Replace with slider? If replace it, try following long vocal I already got enough flak from my silent-end slider earlier. I'd do it to this one too if I added it - I'll just leave it for now, hehe.
03:04:281 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid left? Look at it in play mode.

Good song
STAR
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Crapload of stuff with dtk's diff and leorda's modding.
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
Star~★
Pettan_old
31 posts
Joined December 2009
Pettan_old
Star~ ;)
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