Blue Dragon wrote:

pomuta please marry me, your maps are amazing

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. why it sounds like rainbow tylenol o3o haha, Because Same artist xD!! (Renard)

[Easy]

1. 00:04:783 (4) - suggest to place it like this, if you changed, fix the following ds sorry, keep is fine.
   
   eg

   

[Normal]

1. 01:17:983 (2,3) - use slider same as 01:16:063 (2,3,4) for consistency done.
2. 01:25:903 (5,6,7,8,1) - I dont know if this is difficult for a normal, so I think you can change some not into slider instead done more easy.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:343 (1) - curve down this slider for a better flow done.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:703 (4) - in my opinion I dont think it is good to reverse it twice, i suggest you to use the same pattern as 00:02:863 (4,5) i know, but, i want some pettern.
2. 00:21:343 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:54:703 (5) - try ctrl+g? i was testplay. but,keep.

nice diff and hitsound :3
sorry that i can't mod Die and I can't find much to mod ;w;
shoot star o////

1. 00:11:023 (6) - This seems a bit too close to (5). I tried to do a lot of stuff here but can't find a proper way to fix this ;_; but it currently plays weird
2. 00:13:423 (1) - maybe add a white sliderpoint at 404;348 to make the slider look a bit nicer?
3. 00:15:343 (1,2) - these aren't properly stacked
4. 00:16:783 (7,8,9) - something like this would make this pattern easier and nicer to read
5. 00:18:463 (5,6,7) - This plays a bit confusing, because it's a 1/4 difference then 1/2 with the same spacing. I suggest placing 00:19:063 (7) - at x92 y316 to make this pattern play/look nicer.
6. 00:20:383 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - amazing, but if you rotated this by 120 degrees (SELECTION), then it'd flow much better to 00:21:103 (1,2) -
7. 00:21:583 (3) - please move this to x308 y332 to make spacing consistent ;_; current really weird to play
8. 00:22:303 (1) - unnecessary newcombo
9. 00:26:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is currently VERY confusing to play. I did this to make it work better, try and see if it works for you:
   
   SPOILER

   (2): 152;288
   (4): 176;0
   (5): 223;225
   (7): 168;128
   (8): 392;8
   (10): 488;112
10. 00:31:423 (1) - unnecessary newcombo
11. 00:44:383 (1) - unnecessary newcombo
12. 00:46:303 (1) - ^
13. 01:05:503 (1,2) - I'd stack these, they currently seem a bit confusing

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Die]

1. 00:11:023 (6) - This seems a bit too close to (5). I tried to do a lot of stuff here but can't find a proper way to fix this ;_; but it currently plays weird done.
2. 00:13:423 (1) - maybe add a white sliderpoint at 404;348 to make the slider look a bit nicer? done.
3. 00:15:343 (1,2) - these aren't properly stacked umm,I hope fixed this.
4. 00:16:783 (7,8,9) - something like this would make this pattern easier and nicer to read really like it. done.
5. 00:18:463 (5,6,7) - This plays a bit confusing, because it's a 1/4 difference then 1/2 with the same spacing. I suggest placing 00:19:063 (7) - at x92 y316 to make this pattern play/look nicer. yeah,done.
6. 00:20:383 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - amazing, but if you rotated this by 120 degrees (SELECTION), then it'd flow much better to 00:21:103 (1,2) - fixed. and raise SD0.02 xD
7. 00:21:583 (3) - please move this to x308 y332 to make spacing consistent ;_; current really weird to play Oops, done!
8. 00:22:303 (1) - unnecessary newcombo done.
9. 00:26:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is currently VERY confusing to play. I did this to make it work better, try and see if it works for you: okay :3
   
   SPOILER

   (2): 152;288
   (4): 176;0
   (5): 223;225
   (7): 168;128
   (8): 392;8
   (10): 488;112
10. 00:31:423 (1) - unnecessary newcombo done.
11. 00:44:383 (1) - unnecessary newcombo done.
12. 00:46:303 (1) - ^ done.
13. 01:05:503 (1,2) - I'd stack these, they currently seem a bit confusing i see, done.

Can I make a difficulty for this? It's going to take a long time, but I REALLY want to do it >:

deetz wrote:

[General]
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[Easy]
00:26:863 (2) - Flow break may confuse beginners, maybe do something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2898030

[Normal]
01:26:143 (7) - consider this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2898024

[Hard]
00:12:943 (5,6) - consider moving these up, imo it looks better without the slight overlap.
00:13:423 (1,2) - 2's head is far enough away from 1's tail that I misread it as being a 1/1 gap, consider moving it closer.
00:15:703 (2,3,4) - I love this sort of pattern
00:23:983 (3,4) - ctrl-g these separately for simpler flow (3) only done.
00:25:663 (4) - This slider ends on a big white tick and a strong note, please reconsider this rhythm you are correct but, keep now sorry!
Patterning in this diff is great but I think for future maps you should keep slider ends + strong notes in mind :3 by that I mean making sure that high/loud/emphasized notes in the music are clickable.

[Insane]
00:06:703 (4) - people don't usually expect more than one repeat and it ends on a strong beat. I think this sort of rhythm fits the style in this map better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2896599
00:21:343 (2) - same as before.
00:39:343 (1) - consider removing NC for nc pattern
00:43:183 (1) - unneeded NC

[Die]
00:13:423 (1) - This slider's shape really forces the player to move, and then you place the note in the opposite direction from where the player is being lead. Please reconsider the flow here :p if i get nice something...
00:31:183 (1) - unneeded NC?
00:46:423 (4) - ctrl-g for consistent spacing cool
00:49:903 (1) - consider doing the same thing you did at 00:55:663 (1) - to make the player click the beat
01:11:023 (1,2) - The spacing between these sliders is unclear, as you just used a similar spacing for a 1/4 gap at 01:10:303 (4) - . Consider increasing the distance between these two to prevent players releasing early. +0.01x only done.
01:22:183 (10,12) - I think this would make the spacing more consistent and fun. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2896655

Other than what I mentioned, all I can say is wow. good luck, I hope this gets ranked o_o
great song too

-H a y a- wrote:

[BD's Extra]
00:51:463 (6,7,8) - how about this? plays really badly
01:24:463 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I choose death! the other streams are harder ):

zj0924 wrote:

Hi！From my queue

[General]

1. I think Sound effect isn't suitable imo,kinda noisy...might consider lower them? sorry, i think fine.
2. Bpm should be 125 it's 250 fine.

[Easy]

1. 00:08:623 (5,6) - finish is abused imo consider remove finish except head of 00:08:623 (5) - no changed
2. 01:13:903 (5,6) - ^too noisy ^
3. 00:10:543 (2) - consider this?
   
   fine now.
4. 00:23:263 (3) - kinda crowded
   
   done.
5. 00:35:503 (3,1,2,3) - consider making a diamond? no.
6. 01:17:263 (2) - blanket....
   
   done.
7. 01:26:503 (1) - consider add green line at the end of spinner and volume to 5% instead soft.

[Normal]

1. 2.67star?This normal is too hard and diff spread between ez&nm is imbalance 250bpm mapping.
2. maybe you can consider lower sv...cuz 250bpm？Maybe 125bpm it's fine.
3. 00:05:743 (1,2) - flow can be improved？not bad imo.
4. 00:08:623 (2,3,4,5) - so many finish sorry.
5. 00:12:943 (6) - consider this？
   
   done.
6. 00:15:343 (1,2,3,4) - this flow is kinda awkward to play imo mouse played, i don't think so. but, seems agreed lol.
7. 00:53:023 (2) - ctrl+h for better flow? no
8. 01:03:823 (2) -
   
9. 01:13:903 (4,5,6,7) - noisy finish owo
10. 01:17:983 (2) -
    

done.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:863 (1) - consider nc for read map easily?
2. 00:04:783 (4) - ^
3. 00:06:703 (4) - ^ done
4. 00:27:223 (2) - current flow is kinda awkward
   
   umm, cosider.
5. 00:52:543 (3) - this plays kinda awkward imo i don't thinks so.

GL~

Dono027 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3

[Easy]

00:07:423 (3) - Delete the circle, that will be easier for new players ^^ done!
00:08:623 (5,6) - I think you can make a double reverse here, don't make the easy diff too hard for the new players double reverse have confuse imo.

[Normal]

00:24:223 (4,5) - Make a slider circle is nice imo.
01:25:903 (5,6) - Make a slider, a player can be confused here yep, it's bit hard. but, challenge part newbie.

[Hard]

00:08:623 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make very hard patterns, approach the 4 sliders nice low part. it's fine.
00:52:543 (3) - Can you place the circle at the end of the slider ? i like keep.



(P.S : If you want an other mod, go in the modding queue of my friend, Prismetical : t/380498/start=30 )

1. 00:07:663 (1) - thats so weird and confuse, rotate from selection centre 90º degrees
2. 00:13:423 (1) - plis no, ctrl + h, and move x99 y276 stack
3. 00:45:343 (9,10,11,12) -TOO strong, keep calm thats a insane XD, make something more easy to read and better flow

1. 00:08:503 (4) - ta meio feio essa nota aqui, stacka em cima do próximo ou do anterior
2. 00:18:103 (4) - coloca um slider no lugar dessa nota começando na anterior ou simplesmente tira ela, não tem som nenhum
3. 00:20:023 (4) - ^^ same
4. 00:43:363 - a falta da nota aqui e 00:43:603 - ta soando ruim, almenta os 2 sliders 1 tique
5. 01:26:383 (1) - poe no meio soh pra da aquele gás

1. 00:08:623 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm i think if u ctrl+ j, move to x0 y225, and correct 00:09:583 (1) - maybe invert, will flow better at gameplay
2. 00:14:743 (5,6,7,8,9) - no have sound changes here, then i suggest make same distances
3. 00:22:063 (1,2) - would be nice replace this for a 1/2 slider (starting at the first ending at hit 2)
4. 00:26:863 (1) - this revese slider dont fit good to song, then i suggest make a normal slider and add a hit on midle or another place at 00:27:223 (2) - , and 00:27:463 (3,4) - remove, and at 00:27:343 - duplicate the 00:26:863 (1) - plus ctrl h. No hits at 00:27:703 -.
5. 00:31:183 (7,8,9,10) - realy?
6. 00:40:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - if the difficulty lives up to name it will happens at 16 long 250 bpm stream X.X rip every finger man ( less reimu and rafis, did u see they streaming? :O)
7. 01:25:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - that pattern would be better in a X format flow
8. 01:14:143 (1,2) - make it mirror of 01:13:903 (1,2) -

Good Luck

suricate1 wrote:

Hello M4M
General
Easy, Normal and Hard looks fine at visuals and flow, but i think the AR are a little bad.

Easy
AR:4 looks better　done

Normal
Ar:6 please, sliders are too fast for ar5 okay

Hard
AR:8,5 at least, this diff is almost a insane =x keep

Insane

1. 00:07:663 (1) - thats so weird and confuse, rotate from selection centre 90º degrees rhythm is still same, i think fine imo.
2. 00:13:423 (1) - plis no, ctrl + h, and move x99 y276 stack no
3. 00:45:343 (9,10,11,12) -TOO strong, keep calm thats a insane XD, make something more easy to read and better flow orz

Die

1. 00:08:623 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hmm i think if u ctrl+ j, move to x0 y225, and correct 00:09:583 (1) - maybe invert, will flow better at gameplay
2. 00:14:743 (5,6,7,8,9) - no have sound changes here, then i suggest make same distances
3. 00:22:063 (1,2) - would be nice replace this for a 1/2 slider (starting at the first ending at hit 2)
4. 00:26:863 (1) - this revese slider dont fit good to song, then i suggest make a normal slider and add a hit on midle or another place at 00:27:223 (2) - , and 00:27:463 (3,4) - remove, and at 00:27:343 - duplicate the 00:26:863 (1) - plus ctrl h. No hits at 00:27:703 -.
5. 00:31:183 (7,8,9,10) - realy?
6. 00:40:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - if the difficulty lives up to name it will happens at 16 long 250 bpm stream X.X rip every finger man ( less reimu and rafis, did u see they streaming? :O)
7. 01:25:903 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - that pattern would be better in a X format flow
8. 01:14:143 (1,2) - make it mirror of 01:13:903 (1,2) -
   No changed Die diff. i kill people :0
   

Good Luck