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Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2015-03-08T20:58:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月7日 at 20:52:57

Artist: Halozy
Title: Deconstruction Star
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Starry Presto すみじゅん Sumijun アサヒ Asahi ほたる hotaru 東方永夜抄～ Imperishable Night とうほうえいやしょう Eiyashou 上白泽慧音かみしらさわけいね Kamishirasawa Keine プレインエイジア Plain Asia th08 c79 ShallICompareThee SICT zun
BPM: 155
Filesize: 22350kb
Play Time: 05:20
Difficulties Available:

Beat Heaven (6.83 stars, 1522 notes)

Download: Halozy - Deconstruction Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Starry Presto ほたる Deconstruction Star

bg by me
sb by ShallICompareThee

nyan

with MillhioreF's help :3

Last edited by Hollow Wings 2015-11-07T12:58:02+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

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Nathan 2015-03-08T21:00:12+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
nyan

Archaeologian

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Joined April 2010

Archaeologian 2015-03-08T21:28:44+00:00

nyan

N5U5M7R5

N5U5M7R5 2015-03-10T21:24:04+00:00

nyan

Moecho

267 posts

Joined October 2014

Moecho 2015-03-10T22:20:18+00:00

nyan~

[ Mephisto ]

760 posts

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[ Mephisto ] 2015-03-11T15:39:51+00:00

nyan~

ignorethis

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2008

ignorethis 2015-03-11T16:40:29+00:00

这map很厉害啊有种跟曲子电波非常合拍的感觉

另外offset明显late 应该减个十毫秒左右

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2015-03-12T05:05:34+00:00

beat heaven
00:04:805 (3,4) - 放两个单点就好了, 不要放滑条, 不要什么音都非填满不可
00:11:096 (4) - ^
01:19:321 (2) - 这个两倍速然后那里叠一个note 好像比较适合这里
这个2+1的三连可以两个键一起按233
02:34:902 (2,3) - 怎么不把2叠在滑条下面!
04:23:579 (3,4) - 04:24:354 (1) - 这都跑到followcircle外面了真的能连上吗!
04:48:838 (2) - 233
挑战人体极限

那个蓝的combo color, 你可以屏幕左边的用绿的, 右边用蓝的啊23333

edit: 对了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051 求mod

Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2015-03-12T21:04:47+00:00

ignorethis wrote:
这map很厉害啊有种跟曲子电波非常合拍的感觉我去。。。一个脑大大！！！OVQ

另外offset明显late 应该减个十毫秒左右好，我重新调整一下timing。

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
beat heaven
00:04:805 (3,4) - 放两个单点就好了, 不要放滑条, 不要什么音都非填满不可我知道不必要全都塞满，但这里其实电子琴的声音是比较改过vocal的，而我又跟的人声，无视那个那么明显的音不太好，所以就滑条尾带过一下（不然就放三连了）
00:11:096 (4) - ^ ^
01:19:321 (2) - 这个两倍速然后那里叠一个note 好像比较适合这里这里就想跟vocal了，比较强烈。后面那个嘎巴音就带过吧。
这个2+1的三连可以两个键一起按233 怎么这么能玩233
02:34:902 (2,3) - 怎么不把2叠在滑条下面! 次奥！这里还挺安静的没必要跳那么大啦！OVQ
04:23:579 (3,4) - 04:24:354 (1) - 这都跑到followcircle外面了真的能连上吗! 若比，这里抄好接的好吗，真正容易断的地方是04:25:128 (1,2) - 啦。
04:48:838 (2) - 233 233
挑战人体极限能打的人还不少。

那个蓝的combo color, 你可以屏幕左边的用绿的, 右边用蓝的啊23333 关于combo color和bg的关系，我是要做sb的，到时候放sb梗需要用到，所以就不改啦。

edit: 对了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051 求mod 好，回头看看。

thanks for modding! (ar3姥爷的摸怎么越来越水233

Suikami

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Suikami 2015-03-13T12:48:15+00:00

nyan~
~~do you forget to convert this to ctb ?~~

[Seraphin]

240 posts

Joined October 2012

[Seraphin] 2015-03-14T00:22:06+00:00

uh oh...

Moe

99 posts

Joined December 2013

Moe 2015-03-14T15:51:07+00:00

好……整齐的滑条[惊]

pw384

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Joined January 2012

pw384 2015-03-15T04:25:05+00:00

nyan

Akiyama Mizuki

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Akiyama Mizuki 2015-03-15T07:37:30+00:00

[Seraphin] wrote:

uh oh...

HW loominarty mapper confirmd!!1!!!!!1!!!111!!!

N5U5M7R5

N5U5M7R5 2015-03-15T10:54:28+00:00

is this going for rank? if not please use a 320kbps mp3 for this beautiful song

shahme_old

shahme_old 2015-03-20T11:43:32+00:00

Nyan

Hakurei Yoru

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Hakurei Yoru 2015-03-20T14:04:04+00:00

好图不需要再改梗

当然我觉得这是创作(啥

01:40:014 (1,2,1) - 1到2为什么是左上呢？全图似乎这样的节奏只有这个是不同的flow 其他的都是较水平的（其实就是kiai
对于有实力的玩家这个好像也不影响可玩性..

……………………
十分抱歉……真的不知道该说什么好QAQ
但是虽然说不能学习HW，我也学到了很多！
mapping的红白会坚持自己的想法的！

希望可以找更会mod的人让这张图变得更好！

Pappy

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Joined August 2013

Pappy 2015-03-23T08:08:54+00:00

are you pregnant?

Last edited by Pappy 2015-04-01T18:00:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dk-_old

Dk-_old 2015-03-23T09:54:34+00:00

Crazy and very original as always~

BG is perfect too <3

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2015-03-25T11:19:43+00:00

这比源流怀古还要屌让我怎么摸，然而吝啬的我只射一颗星

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2015-03-26T21:13:44+00:00

As Requested

Beat Heaven
00:26:852 (6) - ctl+g this? feels more fun to play

00:31:884 (4,5,1) - this feels awkward pls change

01:21:626 (1,2,3,4) - curve and angle these sliders, the straight feels really bland.

02:23:561 (1) - curve fits better here, straight feels overly boring

03:05:368 to 03:27:045 why only use straight sliders here? I think you have them curve to the pitch of the vocal. straight feels a bit boring

Really fun map

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Topic Starter

Hollow Wings 2015-04-04T20:27:30+00:00

N5U5M7R5 wrote:
is this going for rank? if not please use a 320kbps mp3 for this beautiful song yes it's for rank map.

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
好图不需要再改梗

当然我觉得这是创作(啥

01:40:014 (1,2,1) - 1到2为什么是左上呢？全图似乎这样的节奏只有这个是不同的flow 其他的都是较水平的（其实就是kiai
对于有实力的玩家这个好像也不影响可玩性.. 为什么要全都一样呢？

……………………
十分抱歉……真的不知道该说什么好QAQ
但是虽然说不能学习HW，我也学到了很多！
mapping的红白会坚持自己的想法的！噗，太客气了233

希望可以找更会mod的人让这张图变得更好！

Its Depths wrote:
As Requested

Beat Heaven
00:26:852 (6) - ctl+g this? feels more fun to play here's not a heated part, so patterns shall be easier ones imo.

00:31:884 (4,5,1) - this feels awkward pls change hmm ok~

01:21:626 (1,2,3,4) - curve and angle these sliders, the straight feels really bland. the whole map's sliders are straight, on purpose. and this plays fine, too.

02:23:561 (1) - curve fits better here, straight feels overly boring same as above.

03:05:368 to 03:27:045 why only use straight sliders here? I think you have them curve to the pitch of the vocal. straight feels a bit boring same as above.

Really fun map

thx for modding!

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2015-04-05T08:38:09+00:00

Please use 東方Project for source~

Good luck!

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2015-04-18T19:51:26+00:00

[Beat Heaven]

不知道还做不做sb，不做widescreen还是关了吧
01:06:916 (2,3) - 这俩个用和这个同样的音效？ 01:06:142 (1) -
01:09:432 (2,3) - Ctrl+G 试试
01:25:497 (3,4,5) - （4）和（5）放近点？
01:35:949 (1,2,1,2) - 不能弄成从右到左的顺序连打吗。。
01:42:143 (1,2,1,2) - ^
02:17:561 (5,6) - Ctrl + G
02:18:529 (2) - ^

总之先水一发，可以的话 ~~求m4m~~

Shad0w1and

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Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2015-04-18T21:32:55+00:00

01:20:852 (1) - 太反人类了，感觉就算重在3上也好得多
04:41:950 (1,2) - 下移一格会好点吧
00:36:626 (3) - 这个相当难读，个人建议192,352
00:46:594 (6,7,8) - 注意DS，特别是打开Stack之后
00:54:529 (1) - 感觉太近了。437，262？
01:57:142 (2) - 建议重到滑条尾
02:28:981 (1) - 还是觉得DS不好。。
03:35:755 - 故意放掉的？
04:29:369 (1,2,1,2,1) - 最好别在这种地方切flow，04:35:561 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这地方就善良得多
04:42:820 (2) - 这note的前后DS要日天，还是连打啊
04:48:336 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - 1和1之间的DS误导，后面DS也反人类了点

不知道怎么下手。。就这样了
m4m:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300612

Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-04-19T06:05:32+00:00

[Beat Heaven]
00:08:078 (5) - 感覺會不太好讀
00:13:885 (3,4) - 也跟前面00:13:497 (1,2) - 加大間距?
01:52:208 (1,2,1,2) - 這個我覺得感覺跟面前面01:49:110 (1,2,1,2) - 之類的一樣做法...
02:58:787 (5,6,7,8) - 為何不是繞下去而是繞上來呢...
03:05:368 - 到 03:27:045 - 不扭點有趣的slider?

細心一看還真不讓人活了
很好所以摸有點水
先good luck

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2015-04-20T13:47:41+00:00

[Beat Heaven]

00:12:916 (5) - 这里的whistle加在00:12:723 (4) -
04:19:691 (1) - 这里打的时候很容易断 2次折返滑条速度又快感觉主要是两次折返会反应不过来
04:56:078 (1,2,3,4) - 这里间距可以比后面04:56:465 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微大一些和这里一样00:45:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
05:03:820 (1,2,3,4) - 这也是同理

sry for very short
真的太diao了 y-axis sliders 射~

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2015-04-20T14:19:26+00:00

[General]

感觉这个stack lixxxxxx(不会拼)设最低很危险诶;w;

[wa]

00:36:336 (1) - 不能稍微左上一点放个五角？
01:19:303 (2) - 感觉ctrl+g更好点-。-
01:22:400 (3) - 感觉和01:22:013 (2) - 太近了再往左上拉开一点？x=16 y=32的地方大概好点？
01:41:755 (9) - 为啥突然下去了？不和前面的note摆直线吗;w;
01:42:143 (1,2,1,2) - 总感觉并不太直，后面四个也是..稍微修一下吧
01:53:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - 其实ctrl+g一下呢？就是01:52:981 (2,3,4,5) - 打完跳一下到左边=,=好像很有趣?!（就是后面也要修位置就是了
01:58:206 (2) - 我是觉得把跳放在前面的节拍点会比较好，就是把这个note放到3的上面._.
03:02:465 (2) - ^
03:05:368 (1) - 这里后面的slider都好直啊;w;是偷懒吗?!!!一定是了!!
04:28:400 (1,1,2,1,2) - not I say, really twisty ;w;
05:18:529 (1) - mute

目测half-time我都打不动系列