1. Beat Heaven (6.83 stars, 1522 notes)

Hollow Wings wrote:

nyan

ignorethis wrote:

这map很厉害啊 有种跟曲子电波非常合拍的感觉 我去。。。一个脑大大！！！OVQ

另外offset明显late 应该减个十毫秒左右 好，我重新调整一下timing。

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

beat heaven
00:04:805 (3,4) - 放两个单点就好了, 不要放滑条, 不要什么音都非填满不可 我知道不必要全都塞满，但这里其实电子琴的声音是比较改过vocal的，而我又跟的人声，无视那个那么明显的音不太好，所以就滑条尾带过一下（不然就放三连了）
00:11:096 (4) - ^ ^
01:19:321 (2) - 这个两倍速 然后那里叠一个note 好像比较适合这里 这里就想跟vocal了，比较强烈。后面那个嘎巴音就带过吧。
这个2+1的三连 可以两个键一起按233 怎么这么能玩233
02:34:902 (2,3) - 怎么不把2叠在滑条下面! 次奥！这里还挺安静的没必要跳那么大啦！OVQ
04:23:579 (3,4) - 04:24:354 (1) - 这都跑到followcircle外面了真的能连上吗! 若比，这里抄好接的好吗，真正容易断的地方是04:25:128 (1,2) - 啦。
04:48:838 (2) - 233 233
挑战人体极限 能打的人还不少。

那个蓝的combo color, 你可以屏幕左边的用绿的, 右边用蓝的啊23333 关于combo color和bg的关系，我是要做sb的，到时候放sb梗需要用到，所以就不改啦。

edit: 对了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/279051 求mod 好，回头看看。

[Seraphin] wrote:

uh oh...

N5U5M7R5 wrote:

is this going for rank? if not please use a 320kbps mp3 for this beautiful song yes it's for rank map.

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

好图不需要再改梗

当然我觉得这是创作(啥

01:40:014 (1,2,1) - 1到2为什么是左上呢？ 全图似乎这样的节奏只有这个是不同的flow 其他的都是较水平的（其实就是kiai
对于有实力的玩家这个好像也不影响可玩性.. 为什么要全都一样呢？


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十分抱歉……真的不知道该说什么好QAQ
但是虽然说不能学习HW，我也学到了很多！
mapping的红白会坚持自己的想法的！ 噗，太客气了233

希望可以找更会mod的人让这张图变得更好！

Its Depths wrote:

As Requested

Beat Heaven
00:26:852 (6) - ctl+g this? feels more fun to play here's not a heated part, so patterns shall be easier ones imo.

00:31:884 (4,5,1) - this feels awkward pls change hmm ok~

01:21:626 (1,2,3,4) - curve and angle these sliders, the straight feels really bland. the whole map's sliders are straight, on purpose. and this plays fine, too.

02:23:561 (1) - curve fits better here, straight feels overly boring same as above.

03:05:368 to 03:27:045 why only use straight sliders here? I think you have them curve to the pitch of the vocal. straight feels a bit boring same as above.

Really fun map

1. 感觉这个stack lixxxxxx(不会拼)设最低很危险诶;w;

1. 00:36:336 (1) - 不能稍微左上一点放个五角？
   
2. 01:19:303 (2) - 感觉ctrl+g更好点-。-
3. 01:22:400 (3) - 感觉和01:22:013 (2) - 太近了再往左上拉开一点？x=16 y=32的地方大概好点？
4. 01:41:755 (9) - 为啥突然下去了？不和前面的note摆直线吗;w;
5. 01:42:143 (1,2,1,2) - 总感觉并不太直，后面四个也是..稍微修一下吧
6. 01:53:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - 其实ctrl+g一下呢？就是01:52:981 (2,3,4,5) - 打完跳一下到左边=,=好像很有趣?!（就是后面也要修位置就是了
   
7. 01:58:206 (2) - 我是觉得把跳放在前面的节拍点会比较好，就是把这个note放到3的上面._.
8. 03:02:465 (2) - ^
9. 03:05:368 (1) - 这里后面的slider都好直啊;w;是偷懒吗?!!!一定是了!!
10. 04:28:400 (1,1,2,1,2) - not I say, really twisty ;w;
11. 05:18:529 (1) - mute

1. 00:03:626 (3) - maybe add a soft whistle here? the piano's pitch is changing drastically and i think it would fit. this note's somehow emphasized, I think (maybe do this for more of those kind of notes?)
2. 00:04:981 - I don't think that note should be on a sliderend. it's really emphasized so maybe tap this?
3. 00:08:078 (5) - maybe some hitfinish here? because of sound?
4. 00:11:174 - same as 00:04:981
5. 00:22:981 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this. This may be a bit difficult to read because you use a higher distance for 00:22:594 (1,2) - (those 1/4) than for the 1/2 afterwards. maybe make the 1/4 smaller or the 1/2 gap bigger?
6. 00:33:045 (3,4,3,4) - again this may be difficult to read because you stack 1/2 AND 1/4 (00:34:207 (6,7,8) - )
7. 01:13:400 - maybe add a circle here? the guitar is really loud and put it so it's good to map this, imo
8. 01:58:400 (3,4,1) - I don't understand the purpose of this jump. there's nothing becoming louder, no emphasize. just a sudden jump. doesn't fit the music, imo
9. 02:06:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe add some inheriting sections here and make a volume vortex? uhm...increase the volume slowly, maybe? i think that'd be nice
10. 02:18:432 - again maybe map the loud guitar here?
11. 03:16:594 (1,1) - i'm not sure if the slider should follow the spinner so fast.
12. 04:05:755 - add a soft whistle here because sound? the new beat begins here
13. 04:06:529 - ^ ( for all of those, actually)
14. 04:14:078 (4,5,6) - not sure about the readability of those notes again there's 1/4 jumps that are bigger or as big as the 1/2 ones and this is weird to read and play. (04:13:884 (3,4) - and 04:14:271 (5,6) - )
15. 04:15:432 (3,4,5,6) - ^