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Remilia_CO wrote:

It's a really good map XD

Extra
  1. 00:00:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - totally parallel and symmetry feels old, how about this, i like the symmetry
  2. 00:48:107 (3) - this angle looks odd.. how about move red point to 256,140 and move the end to 240,176
  3. 00:54:636 (2) - how about make it strait and move to 120,328 like that, will looks better not really
  4. 00:29:754 (6) - seems like player will easily forget or feel sudden by this note if it stack on the last one, why not move to another place or stack on 3 or 4. player has to be really bad to miss that stack
  5. 01:01:607 (2,3) - seems not some clear beats here.. ?
  6. 01:03:813 (6) - how about 188,216, 01:04:342 (2) - 324,236, 01:04:695 (4) - 352,148, 01:05:048 (6) - 380,60 i want 01:03:636 (5,6,7) - to be bigger than the first few after it
  7. 01:28:166 (1) - make the slider strait go back to 8 ? would be awkward to play
Insane
  1. 00:00:637 (1,2,3,4) - use strait slider? why?
  2. 00:10:342 (3) - no problem basically, but I feel it is odd to the music... strong vocal i think
  3. 00:48:813 (1,2,1,2) - feels too easy compare with other part, maybe not reverse and add a note at the end?
  4. 00:55:342 (5) - 316,224? why nazi without reason
Hard
  1. 00:04:872 (4) - stack with the tail of 00:03:460 (1) ? already stacked
  2. Blanket issue: 00:13:695 (8) - ?
  3. 00:19:695 - awkward pause. make it like this? following instruments
  4. 00:52:519 (6) - player feeling is weird here, might be better if not reverse and extend to where it should be. what's wrong with it
  5. 01:28:166 (1) - I'd like to ctrl+G no difference
Normal
  1. 00:10:507 - looks bad.. how so?
  2. 00:48:636 - feels odd and unnecessary. ^
  3. 00:02:048 (3) - this shape feels hard to join the whole map in many situation. ^
EASY
  1. 00:49:166 (1) - only this slider feels odd...oh, and the following one. why

Good luck XD

m1223961117 wrote:

From your Queue~

[Easy]
00:23:225 - Please add finish, whole diff doesn't fit music
00:32:401 (2) - make a good blanket:http://puu.sh/gjcil/cc7d410a5f.jpg
00:34:519 - Finish ^
00:37:342 (1) - make parallel: http://puu.sh/gjclZ/f8378e47cd.jpg
00:41:578 (2,3) - this is good for me, try it: http://puu.sh/gjco5/c427aed4d5.jpg
00:49:166 (1) - move to 00:48:989 - very nice
If I miss sounds, please check Hard mod
It's all, Good Easy :):)

[Normal]
00:16:872 (6) - try 1/1 slider
00:23:225 - Same ?
00:34:519 - Finish doesn't fit music
00:38:225 (2) - move to 00:38:401 - following vocals
00:43:872 (2) - same, 00:44:048 - ^
If I miss sounds, please check Hard mod

[Hard]
00:15:460 (3,4) - Follow DS makes sense as separated
00:17:578 - Finish doesn't fit music imo
00:23:225 - ^ ^
00:26:048 (1) - ^
00:33:813 (4,5,6,7) - This for you: http://puu.sh/gjcZC/bdac2dcec5.jpg why?
00:34:519 - Finish doesn't fit
00:42:636 - remove finish fits
00:51:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No sound this part??
00:57:107 - Finish not in music
00:59:931 - ^ ^
01:08:401 - ^ ^
01:22:519 - ^ ^

[Insane]
Sounds same as Hard
00:22:519 (5,6,7) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/gjdv4/a6ede8d264.jpg why?
00:53:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/gjdF6/9ea8fb1a03.jpg ^
:):):)

[Expert]
Sounds same as Hard
00:11:225 (3) - Stack better?? what's wrong with it?
00:18:725 (6) - move to 00:18:548 - following instruments
00:23:048 (9) - x-2, make straight
00:29:578 (5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/gje1o/a322deac3d.jpg, http://puu.sh/gje2C/2b2520fc3b.jpg make fun want both circles for emphasis
few problem, Nice :)

Good luck, death :D:D:D

CelsiusLK wrote:

k I'm gonna put my 555th post here :3

Hi xxdeathx

[General]
  1. add audioleadin around 1500 should be okay for this imo
  2. In easy,insane, expert osu notepad you have video code there but you don't have video file in song folder did you download with video?


Most of these are just my suggestion feel free to apply the one you like since my mods is a bit subjective here

[Ex]
  1. 00:03:107 (5) - imo the beat at the head doesn't sound really impact or cymbal-like so use finish there kinda weird for me (copy-paste this to other diffs) idk it sounds a lot like a finish to me
  2. 00:09:989 (4,5,1) - imo I think if you move this up a bit it will flow a bit great the current one when I play it feel a bit like idk it not that bad but it make the flow to 00:10:519 (1) - pretty a bit awkward imo
  3. 00:10:166 (1,1) - I would focus on vocal here since the instrument here sound a bit unemphasized eventhough it on downbeat here 00:10:519 - and it really fit the SV change here imo thought about it but it should work either way and i like how the triple leads into a sped up slider in 00:09:989 (4,5,1) -
  4. 00:15:460 (6) - x60 y168 it make the flow here 00:15:460 (6,7) - pretty nice imo but it would overlap
  5. 00:22:695 (6,7,8,9) - Drop-off flow work really well here imo it really emphasis the change in music here but that just my opinion lol can't tell how that flows well
  6. 00:36:813 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm here would make the flow here 00:35:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - really great don't like it
  7. 00:50:754 (2,3) - Make spacing here same as 00:50:048 (4,1) - ? so it feel a bit consistent here since the beat sound same imo what do you mean
  8. 00:54:284 (1) - Curve this one upward so it flow with 00:54:636 (2) - nice ?
  9. 01:17:401 (5,6) - Ctrl+G rhythm here would make the flow here 01:17:401 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - nice tried both, like original better


[Insane]
  1. 00:15:813 (5) - Ctrl+G would make the flow here 00:15:460 (4,5) - nice don't think so
  2. 00:22:519 (5,6,7) - here you make a triplet but you don't do it in expert.... it make this looks a bit harder than expert which is weird o.o yeah but i'd rather take a triplet over a big jump anyday
  3. 00:31:519 (10) - x416 y72 ? so the flow here will be a bit better imo I don't see any reason to break a flow here 00:31:342 (9,10) - the music just goes on like what it is well break a flow here 00:31:519 (10,1) - would feel a bit better here imo o.o this isn't flow breaking at all. repeating a triangle is harder to read though.
  4. 00:36:636 (1,1) - You can blanket if you want lol can't do so without overlapping
  5. 00:52:695 (7,8) - Ctrl+G rhythm here really make the flow here feel great , variate , epic o.o but if you aware about the placement of 00:53:225 (1) - try this ? aren't they the same?
  6. 01:05:225 (7,8) - Ctrl+G rhythm here would make the flow here 01:05:048 (6,7,8,1) - nice imo definitely not


[Hard]
  1. 00:11:048 (8,1) - imo I don't really like how you overlap these well (8) really cover most of (1)'s area but that just me , it just not looking good for me but it up to you to keep it or not shouldn't be an issue, it's not exactly something like guineaQ's miiro
  2. 00:17:225 (6) - why this doesn't sound like insane and expert
  3. 00:23:931 (3) - Ctrl+G this then Ctrl+G 00:24:284 (4) - would improve flow here a bit


[Normal]
  1. 00:09:989 (2,3) - This rhythm sound a bit better imo
  2. 00:16:872 (6) - Ending this slider at 00:17:225 - and change the hitsound at tail to clap custom - soft hitsound1 sound better , it kinda weird to have drum - clap addition play here 00:17:401 - only once when you really focus on that in insane and expert
  3. 00:38:225 (2,3) - rather than focus the vocal here why don't you mostly focus the beat on white tick here it play a bit more smooth imo it'll sound so weird


[Easy]
  1. 00:49:166 (1) - Start this slider here 00:48:989 - instead ? so the polarity can be a bit better and the beat on white tick feel a bit more nice to follow than the ones on red tick
  2. 01:00:636 (2,3,4) - This sound better
    imo
  3. 01:08:048 (4) - 1/1 slider sound better here [sounds weird imo since the vocal is on a red tick so i decided to ignore it and give the player a break


My mods is mostly subjective here lol , sorry if some suggestions sound too harsh ; ;
Overall great mapset
Good luck :)

Edited : ByBy_ChAn are you stalking me ? lol
also this is the best part of the song 00:09:460 - to 00:10:519 - , I hear he sing "get ready to hype" lol
gratz on BN!

Yuthuil wrote:

from your queue - m4m

General: Hitsounds too loud? bg weird proportions, hitsound volume is fine and BG proportions don't have to be 16:9 or 4:3 if i'm wiling to accept letterboxing

easy:

00:30:284 (2,1) - make these line up properly for neatness? http://puu.sh/gjm0z/4d82ba950c.jpg
00:45:636 (1) - approach circles not supposed to exit the screen in easy? haven't heard of that
00:49:166 (1) - rhythm here feels weird, to click on the red tick when there's a white tick with a heavy beat following vocals
00:50:048 skip important beat you need to listen to the music to realize that it's not actually important at all here.
01:00:989 theres vocal and heavy beat here what? not nearly as strong as where i've mapped
01:20:401 (2) - too close to previous object imo, try moving to x276 y240 go look at distance snap first, it is not too close to anything.
01:23:931 (3,4,1) - complex rhythm, theres a reverse and a circle then another slider which goes back the way the reverse just came from what's wrong with it?

normal:

AR 4 perhaps, the bpm is not that high look at 170 bpm normals mapped this year or last year, none of them have an AR under 5, so suggesting AR4 is definitely not allowed. also, this is a little more difficult for a normal than usual so i am using 5.5 as a reasonable median between hard and easy

00:20:931 (2) - remove? sounds weird following instrument
00:23:225 (1,2) - perhaps too low, i was taught that in normal and easy the slider follow circle shouldnt go out of screen haven't heard of that, maybe i'll keep in mind for future maps although i was taught that all objects should be spread evenly across the screen.
00:41:578 (2) - feels a bit cramped shape of the slider fits the vocal
00:56:225 (4) - skims the hp bar no problem

hard:

00:04:166 (2,3,4) - is this a spacing error? no
00:04:872 (4,5,6) - I don't think there's much in the music that calls for an undistance snapped note grouping "the night" vocals together
00:57:107 (1,2) - copy two of one? what?

insane:

00:08:754 (4,2) - stack properly
00:10:342 (5) - no need to speed up? emphasizing vocal
01:06:460 (4,1) - try an overlap? http://puu.sh/gjneQ/06518a3f0a.jpg why would i want an overlap when it's already fine?

expert:

ar 9? trying a higher AR to compensate for the object density and jumps

00:48:813 (1,2,3) - even out spacing? doesn't matter that much

excuse the expert mod, i cant mod anything above insane :(important thing is that you tried

zj0924 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:48:813 (1) - polarity problem imo suggest follow vocal like this i wanted simpler rhythm that follows claps but i'll keep your idea in mind
  2. 01:01:166 (3) - suggest
  3. 01:08:401 (1,2,3) - distance could be better
  4. 01:20:401 (2) - 272 32 looks more tidy maybe i redid this part earlier too

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:872 (6) - I think stack to the next white tick is better redid this part
  2. 00:34:519 (1) - finish? doesn't fit music
  3. 00:38:401 (3) - lost a note? ?
  4. 00:42:107 (3) - suggest hmm i tried but there is no good way to rearrange the notes intuitively

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:989 (3) - suggest
  2. 00:17:225 (6) - try this? the last tick of the repeat slider is on the other side so that would be bad
  3. 00:23:225 (1) - finish doesn't fit music
  4. 00:26:048 (1) - ^
  5. 00:34:519 (1) - ^^
  6. 01:11:225 (1) - ^^
  7. 01:22:519 (1) - ^^
  8. 00:42:636 - clap is better than finish? i think it's finish sound
  9. 01:21:460 (2,4) - can stack better 241 183?

[Insane]
  1. really nice diff :) good flow! thanks
  2. 00:52:342 (5,6,7,8) - I prefer this one i hate circular circle jump patterns
  3. 00:55:166 (4) - 172 132? why?
  4. 00:08:754 (4,1,2) - could stack better?
  5. 00:24:636 (1,3) - ^362 128?
  6. 00:40:872 (3,1) - ^

Sorry for my short mod but really a nice map.Having received so many mods that I really can't find any big problems.Here are all my suggestions.Just wish you can mod my map and teach me mapping skill XD
:) GL!
Thanks for the mods everyone. No reply = fixed
posted
I downloaded this map without video lol , sorry

00:50:754 (2,3) -
I mean organize the ds just like 00:50:048 (4,1) -
here 00:50:048 (4,1) - you use 1.73x ds so I suggest you use 1.73x ds here too 00:50:754 (2,3) - so that can make spacing and flow ( affect a bit ,I think ) a bit consistent since I find 00:50:225 (1) - sound just like 00:50:931 (3) -
posted
oh well it's hardly a difference and moving anything there would cause overlaps OVERLAPPERS afterwards
posted
2015-03-03 19:50 pishifat: did you really
2015-03-03 19:50 pishifat: just set random anime pics for your bgs lol
2015-03-03 19:50 xxdeathx: yeah?
2015-03-03 19:50 xxdeathx: ye lol
2015-03-03 19:50 xxdeathx: sadly this real anime is unkonwn
2015-03-03 19:50 xxdeathx: unknown
2015-03-03 19:50 pishifat: :(
2015-03-03 19:51 pishifat: nobody's gonna care but people will just be confused
2015-03-03 19:51 xxdeathx: :D
2015-03-03 19:51 xxdeathx: yeah :D
2015-03-03 20:35 pishifat: so where did you get your metadata
2015-03-03 20:36 xxdeathx: official site
2015-03-03 20:36 pishifat: obviously
2015-03-03 20:36 pishifat: can i see it or sth
2015-03-03 20:36 xxdeathx: sec
2015-03-03 20:36 xxdeathx: http://www.7-taizai.net/music/music2.html
2015-03-03 20:41 pishifat: from what i'm seeing
2015-03-03 20:41 pishifat: FLOW × GRANRODEO should be
2015-03-03 20:41 pishifat: FLOW×GRANRODEO
2015-03-03 20:42 xxdeathx: huh
2015-03-03 20:42 pishifat: http://i.gyazo.com/1a7e361ffd4152815a4db68a6a8ed41b.png this is that exact website too
2015-03-03 20:42 pishifat: and tiwtter https://twitter.com/flowxgranrodeo
2015-03-03 20:42 xxdeathx: i copied from http://www.7-taizai.net/music/index.html
2015-03-03 20:43 pishifat: oh i see
2015-03-03 20:43 pishifat: metadata is scum
2015-03-03 20:43 xxdeathx: lol
2015-03-03 20:44 pishifat: well i'm not gonna make a forum post about stuff
2015-03-03 20:44 pishifat: http://puu.sh/glDp1/712b26f5aa.txt
2015-03-03 20:44 pishifat: should tkae you like 2 seconds
2015-03-03 20:45 xxdeathx: nice
2015-03-03 20:52 xxdeathx: ok updated!
2015-03-03 20:52 pishifat: !!!!
2015-03-03 20:52 pishifat: asked satellite about metadata
2015-03-03 20:52 pishifat: no response yet
2015-03-03 20:52 pishifat: so waitz
2015-03-03 20:52 xxdeathx: aight
2015-03-03 20:59 pishifat: http://i.gyazo.com/2759edb1001257889acd9f078853b8f7.png looks like you win
2015-03-03 21:02 xxdeathx: yay
2015-03-03 21:03 pishifat: less yay
2015-03-03 21:03 pishifat: he's checking with someone else apparently
2015-03-03 21:03 xxdeathx: huh
2015-03-03 21:03 xxdeathx: lol
2015-03-03 21:05 pishifat: http://i.gyazo.com/1cf35c4a57e0816381d79b07ca606b78.png so wrecked
2015-03-03 21:06 xxdeathx: ouch
2015-03-03 21:13 xxdeathx: hey im in multi with guy
2015-03-03 21:13 xxdeathx: i should ask him
2015-03-03 21:13 xxdeathx: jk
2015-03-03 21:14 pishifat: if only
2015-03-03 21:14 pishifat: he wasn't the one to check it lol
2015-03-03 21:14 pishifat: http://puu.sh/glFjb/cc0343aef0.png
2015-03-03 21:14 xxdeathx: wowwww
2015-03-03 22:18 xxdeathx: ok hope you're still there
2015-03-03 22:19 xxdeathx: that multi took a while >.<
2015-03-03 22:19 pishifat: always
2015-03-03 22:19 pishifat: fix that title and you can have your bub
2015-03-03 22:19 xxdeathx: artist should be this? http://puu.sh/glITG/a74277e163.png
2015-03-03 22:19 pishifat: yep
2015-03-03 22:19 xxdeathx: isn't title correct?
2015-03-03 22:19 pishifat: title' sgood yup
2015-03-03 22:21 xxdeathx: added flow and granrodeo to tags too
2015-03-03 22:21 pishifat: soundsgood
2015-03-03 22:22 xxdeathx: updated


posted
posted
14:47 Xinely: let me eat my pringles before mod xD
14:47 xxdeathx: ok
14:51 Xinely: ok
14:52 Xinely: your BGs... lol
14:52 xxdeathx: moe!
14:52 Xinely: but unrelated with the source.. lol
14:54 xxdeathx: it's ok lol
14:54 xxdeathx: nothing in ranking criteria says this
14:55 Xinely: yeah but it's weird lol
14:55 xxdeathx: this anime is too unpopular so it has no good bg's
14:56 Xinely: it's..
14:56 *Xinely is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/540796 Ikimono Gakari - Netsujou no Spectrum]
14:56 Xinely: right?
14:56 xxdeathx: i hate that bg orz
14:56 Xinely: lol
14:57 xxdeathx: because it doesn't draw characters in the same art style as the anime
14:57 Xinely: ok then
14:57 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652467 FLOWxGRANRODEO - 7 -seven- -TV SIZE - [Easy]]
14:58 Xinely: 00:17:578 (1) - somehow i hear a weak cymbal music here, maybe finish 50%?
14:58 xxdeathx: finish 60% also ok
14:59 xxdeathx: gonna add for all diffs
14:59 Xinely: 00:21:813 (2,1) - i cant hear a cymbal sound here. well it's another story if you put finish for the vocal but imo better add finish in

00:23:225 - because the music pattern is changed
15:01 xxdeathx: ok
15:01 Xinely: 00:25:695 - maybe add note here? somehow i feel something missed from the guitar's tone
15:02 xxdeathx: i removed finish on 00:21:813 - and added finish to 00:23:225 -
15:02 Xinely: ok
15:02 xxdeathx: hmm i wanna give player a break there
15:03 Xinely: 00:34:519 - i know no cymbal here but if we hear the drum's music. idk why i feel finish fits a lot here, try it?
15:04 xxdeathx: don't like the sound of it
15:05 Xinely: 00:42:107 - add whistle here for the vocal?
15:05 xxdeathx: ok
15:06 Xinely: 00:42:636 - hmm weak cymbal... idk you want to add finish for it or not but if you want, finish 35% then?
15:07 xxdeathx: ok
15:07 xxdeathx: other diffs have it, idk why it isn't here >.<
15:07 Xinely: xxbakax
15:07 xxdeathx: hitsound copier is baka
15:08 Xinely: 00:50:931 (2) - just my taste that i feel a little bit empty on the head.. maybe whistle? it fits with the vocaltoo
15:08 Xinely: xxcopierx
15:08 xxdeathx: ok
15:09 Xinely: 00:53:578 - unnecessary greenline /runs
15:09 xxdeathx: ok lol
15:10 Xinely: 01:00:636 (2) - forgot whistle? consistency with 00:54:989 - ? D:
15:10 xxdeathx: i usually dont check green lines because it's fun to keep for consistency
15:10 xxdeathx: ok
15:10 Xinely: 01:02:578 (1) - add whistle to emphasize the vocal as well
15:11 xxdeathx: ok
15:11 Xinely: 01:09:107 (2) - whistle.. lol
15:11 Xinely: 01:09:813 (3) - here too? XD
15:11 Xinely: 01:13:342 - i guess this one too lol
15:11 xxdeathx: ok
15:13 Xinely: 01:24:989 (4) - whistle in here is intentional? the music is same with 01:19:342 (4) -
15:13 xxdeathx: ok
15:13 Xinely: just it for easy.. design is neat ~
15:14 xxdeathx: ok
15:14 xxdeathx: :D
15:17 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/650735 FLOWxGRANRODEO - 7 -seven- -TV SIZE - [Normal]]
15:17 Xinely: 00:34:519 (1,2) - if you want to symmetry actually this one could be better.. just so nazii minor baka thing i found..
15:17 xxdeathx: didnt really want symmetry because you see 00:34:166 (7,2) - almost overlaps
15:18 Xinely: 1 grid almost overlap.. lol
15:18 Xinely: 00:42:107 - add whistle.. too empty for the vocal 8(
15:19 xxdeathx: ok
15:19 Xinely: 00:38:048 - 00:38:225 - imo you better swap the whistle, i mean just delete on 00:38:048 - and add for 00:38:225 - because the vocal
15:19 xxdeathx: all these hitsound changes you said in easy i added for all diffs
15:19 Xinely: oh did i say it? i forgot lol
15:19 xxdeathx: ok
15:20 xxdeathx: cause i added my self lol
15:20 Xinely: 01:02:225 (6,1) - the flower pattern's shape could be better imo http://puu.sh/goAYE.jpg
15:21 xxdeathx: flower?
15:21 Xinely: 01:09:636 (4) - maybe you forgot add whistle for this time
15:21 Xinely: 01:12:460 (3) - here too. the vocal is high lol
15:22 Xinely: why i only mod hitsound.. lol
15:22 xxdeathx: ok
15:23 xxdeathx: means nothing else :D
15:23 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/649539 FLOWxGRANRODEO - 7 -seven- -TV SIZE - [Hard]]
15:24 Xinely: 00:04:695 (3) - idk if you do intentional or not but even you want a jump, the design of 00:04:166 (2,3,4) - looks a little bit untidy, i'd

say to make the consistent spacing with move the (3) here
15:24 xxdeathx: i have the stack 00:03:460 (1,4) - though
15:25 Xinely: yep, i mean just move 00:04:695 (3) - 232,352 here
15:26 xxdeathx: move to 248, 252 so it stacks
15:26 Xinely: 00:05:401 (5) - 96,156 for consistency with above then?
15:27 xxdeathx: i want jump there
15:29 Xinely: ok then
15:30 Xinely: 00:18:284 (2,3) - i know what you follow here.. just.. okay it's just my feel that i feel they look weird to play actually..

http://puu.sh/goBjU.jpg feels better for me
15:31 Xinely: but i know that's just my taste.. just throw my opinion xP
15:32 Xinely: 00:30:636 (2,3,4) - waaa so nazi, that 1,0x spacing from 2 to 3 looks clearly like inconsistency when i testplayed.. hmm try use 0,9x to make

it more consistent?
15:33 xxdeathx: ok fixing
15:33 Xinely: 00:35:931 (5) - NC for consistency? lol
15:36 Xinely: 00:42:107 (2) - i hope you dont forget to add whistle xD
15:36 Xinely: *didnt. rip english
15:36 xxdeathx: yeah
15:37 Xinely: 00:57:460 (2) - i think you forgot the clap on head
15:37 Xinely: owait.. i mean whsitle
15:39 xxdeathx: 1ok
15:39 xxdeathx: ok
15:39 Xinely: 01:08:225 (9) - somehow the flow from previous to this circle and then the flow on next jump, a little bit.. weird for me. imo you can

smoother it with move this circle to 84,112
15:40 Xinely: 01:09:107 (3) - whistle on head for the vocal? :D
15:41 xxdeathx: idk moving the circle like that makes it harder to play
15:41 xxdeathx: whistle was added from easy
15:41 Xinely: ok then
15:41 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/647685 FLOWxGRANRODEO - 7 -seven- -TV SIZE - [Insane]]
15:43 Xinely: hmm imo AR 9 is too fast here. i'd say AR 8,8 for Insane and Extra with AR 9 :<
15:44 xxdeathx: orz i'm not changing AR
15:44 xxdeathx: 170 bpm insane should have AR9
15:45 Xinely: actually not really but ok then
15:45 Xinely: btw did you ask QATs about the spread already?
15:45 xxdeathx: pishifat must have judged it
15:46 xxdeathx: but i mapped all diffs myself and was careful to balance spread
15:46 Xinely: 00:53:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd like to see 1/4 sliders repeat for 1-4 first to make it easier.. somehow i just a little bit worry with the

spread
15:47 xxdeathx: hmm
15:51 xxdeathx: i don't wanna kill the stream :/
15:53 Xinely: aa ok then
15:54 xxdeathx: :O
15:55 Xinely: k nerf that triplet /runs
15:55 xxdeathx: >.<
15:57 Xinely: just for Insane 01:26:931 (2,3,4) - if possible make 1/4 slider repeat here. when i have to catch this triplet and some notes after that

still calculated "not normal spacing".. a little bit hard imo
15:58 xxdeathx: i think it's acceptable advance in difficulty from hard
15:59 xxdeathx: hard has all these circles 01:26:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - at the end
15:59 xxdeathx: insane just has some more
15:59 xxdeathx: and expert is all circles at the end
15:59 Xinely: yeah but they're stacked.. just easy to catch.. maybe 2nd my personal worry lol
16:02 Xinely: ok i guess only that
16:03 xxdeathx: :S
16:03 Xinely: what does that emoticon mean. lol
16:03 xxdeathx: smiley
16:04 Xinely: .. lol
16:05 Xinely: ok then since most of us say diff spread is fine, i'll rank tomorrow
16:06 xxdeathx: how was expert :O
16:06 Xinely: i think diff spread is fine either
16:06 xxdeathx: yay :D
16:07 Xinely: did u poke alacat?
16:08 xxdeathx: have to forum pm
16:09 Xinely: wait let me ask alacat
16:10 xxdeathx: yeah forum pm alacat
16:10 xxdeathx: hope they reply overnight when i sleep
16:10 xxdeathx: if it's good, you can rank, otherwise tell me to change and rank after
16:11 xxdeathx: oh and 1 more thing i'm changing the hard BG xD
16:11 Xinely: i pm in game LOL
16:12 xxdeathx: rip
16:12 xxdeathx: they only take forum pm
16:14 Xinely: k go
16:14 Xinely: current is fine xD
16:18 xxdeathx: my osu freezes
16:18 xxdeathx: ok updated~
16:18 Xinely: lol
16:18 Xinely: ok
16:19 Xinely: you take my nap time.. </3
16:19 xxdeathx: D:
16:20 Xinely: my osu is baka.. all diffs are unsubmitted on your map.. i'll redl tomorrow
16:21 Xinely: im sleepy and tired as fark because my lessons orz :<
16:21 xxdeathx: oh :/
16:21 Xinely: owait i forgot to post
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Also in Easy, started 00:50:931 (2) - a 1/2 beat later at Lanturn's suggestion.
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okay let's try~
Qualified!~

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Now we can fly high~
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wth man this is the bg I once used for my across the line

lol

gz anyway
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Now we can fly high~
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cool bgs
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thanks guys

TT Mouse wrote:

Now we can fly high~
我起飞了
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xxdeathx wrote:

我起飞了
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anime nantasu no taizai
BG chu-2 byou wtf
gratz also
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Hi, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section.
Reason of Disqualification

  1. The map is wrongly timed, which violates the ranking criteria. Specifically, head of 00:11:578 (1) - and 01:10:607 (5,6) - are off. Moreover, starting from 01:10:872 (7) - , the drums are slightly late.
    I try to figure out the correct timing, but it's highly impossible to get it 100% accurate. Try to confirm with timing experts before putting it back on track.
    637,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70513,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1
    70591,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70662,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70860,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1
    Probably one more line is needed at 01:11:212 - to fix the big white tick.
  2. 00:11:578 (1) - This is slightly late, snap it at 00:11:534 - .

Additional Modding

[General]
  1. Just being a curious kid, what's the purpose of those HD backgrounds from different animes?
[Expert]
  1. I find the clap doesn't fit with the snare to a certain extent, an alternative would be the normal-hitnormal.
  2. 00:01:607 (4) - 00:01:872 - 00:02:931 - 00:03:019 (4) - 00:03:284 - 00:04:431 (4) - 00:04:519 (5) - 00:05:754 - 00:07:254 (4) - 00:07:519 (6) - 00:08:578 (4,5) - 00:08:931 - Prefer adding drum finish for kick drum since the main instrument you are mapping on is drum. Using hitsounds to distinguish them can enhance the layering of the song, especially 00:21:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and something similar. Also, soft whistle in the kiai doesn't match with the pitch of music, doing the two kinds of drums mentioned above are good enough from my perspective. And as there are too many kicks, please check them yourself D:
    What I said about hitsounds can be applied on all diffs.
  3. 00:11:578 (1) - Give them a perfect stack.
  4. 00:17:048 - Lower the volume a bit as these objects are full of hitsounds, 80% make them too fruitful.
  5. 00:33:989 (7,8,9,10,11) - Standing around doesn't play well in Extra as it doesn't require movements, I would prefer jumpy circles which follow the vocal here. ;w;
  6. 00:36:195 - Missing a bass drum which is heavier than 00:36:107 (2) - sounds bad.
  7. 00:38:401 (3) - For this stanza, use the drum finish for kick drums (white ticks) and this whistle http://puu.sh/gyx0w/f7a4319adc.wav for hi-hats (red ticks).
  8. 00:42:989 (1,2,3) - Transition over here is bad from drum to vocals. Rhythm in Insane is better.
  9. 00:48:813 (1) - I realize the stressed vocals sound quite out compared to that of 00:48:813 - , so I suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2882613 .
  10. 00:50:048 (4,1,2,3) - These look like a randomly-placed trapezium. 00:52:519 (6,7,8) - may try an equilateral triangle.
  11. 00:53:225 - Soft whistle.
  12. 01:07:519 (3) - The vocal is of high density, split them into something more clicky?
  13. 01:10:872 - Move the finish to 01:11:225 - where I heard a cymbal.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:872 (1,2,3) - looks untidy with varying spacing. http://puu.sh/gyxUJ/b4b73ef055.jpg
  2. 00:08:225 (2,3,4) - ^ I guess you are rushing to get your map qualified -x-
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:813 - Prefer adding a circle here for the vocal as I have clicked earlier several times when test playing since I have misunderstood you follow the vocals strictly. Same applies on 00:45:460 - .
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:872 (5) - Can make it harder by doing this: http://puu.sh/gyyKh/57fea570b5.jpg as Hard is quite difficult with those continuous harsh jumps.
  2. 00:20:931 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/gyyQK/7531ff9a25.jpg Same for 00:30:813 - .
  3. 00:39:813 - 00:45:460 - Circle.

One more general opinion on Easy, some places sound so choppy and hollow with no objects like 00:33:813 (4) - when the density of music is still high. Better capturing those by using long slider instead of the skipping strategy.
Lastly, sorry for the last-minute-disqualification.
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I Tried to Do Timing ! if u wanna try it ! Just add These Red Lines !
11225,307.692307692308,4,2,1,70,1,8
11532,399.201596806387,4,2,1,70,1,8
11931,352.941176470588,4,2,1,80,1,0
70166,347.021399652979,4,2,1,70,1,9
70513,315.789473684211,4,2,1,70,1,9
70670,363.636363636364,4,2,1,70,1,9
70851,374.064837905237,4,2,1,70,1,9
71225,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1


But Anyways it's Better To Have The MP3 Fixed Instead of Multiple BPM points just go poke someone Pishi for it ! because in the easy ! this revers 01:10:519 (4) - can't be snapped !
and also after each red line in the kiai you need to add 1,15x SV green line in Hard / Insane / Extra

Edit : 01:11:225 (1) - You Forgot Finish

kd pls ಠ_ಠ

Good luck for Re-rank o/
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Well you can skip the beat here in lower diffs 01:10:578 - , 01:10:666 - , 01:10:842 - ( I think the drum here is 1/12 (!?) (without red timing point)) so I suggest to ignore that in lower diffs

Here is the timing I got (Why I didn't notice about that 1/12 (?) drum and some beat that feel off when I mod this ? )
[TimingPoints]
637,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
11225,312.337324310255,4,2,1,70,1,0
11930,352.941176470588,4,2,1,80,1,0
70341,320.855614973262,4,2,1,70,1,1
70661,387.096774193548,4,2,1,70,1,1
71193,379.746835443038,4,2,1,70,1,1
71928,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1


Will post some suggestions about rhythm in lower diffs later

NO KDS
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D:
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IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section.
Reason of Disqualification

  1. The map is wrongly timed, which violates the ranking criteria. Specifically, head of 00:11:578 (1) - and 01:10:607 (5,6) - are off. Moreover, starting from 01:10:872 (7) - , the drums are slightly late.
    I try to figure out the correct timing, but it's highly impossible to get it 100% accurate. Try to confirm with timing experts before putting it back on track. discussed in game with pishifat and added a little more
    637,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70513,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1
    70591,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70662,352.941176470588,4,2,1,60,1,0
    70860,352.941176470588,4,2,1,70,1,1
    Probably one more line is needed at 01:11:212 - to fix the big white tick.
  2. 00:11:578 (1) - This is slightly late, snap it at 00:11:534 - . ok

Additional Modding

[General]
  1. Just being a curious kid, what's the purpose of those HD backgrounds from different animes? because it's moe and read map description! (this anime is very unknown so there are no decent bg's i can find. all bg's i found are shitty)
[Expert]
  1. I find the clap doesn't fit with the snare to a certain extent, an alternative would be the normal-hitnormal.
  2. 00:01:607 (4) - 00:01:872 - 00:02:931 - 00:03:019 (4) - 00:03:284 - 00:04:431 (4) - 00:04:519 (5) - 00:05:754 - 00:07:254 (4) - 00:07:519 (6) - 00:08:578 (4,5) - 00:08:931 - Prefer adding drum finish for kick drum since the main instrument you are mapping on is drum. Using hitsounds to distinguish them can enhance the layering of the song, especially 00:21:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and something similar. Also, soft whistle in the kiai doesn't match with the pitch of music, doing the two kinds of drums mentioned above are good enough from my perspective. And as there are too many kicks, please check them yourself D: Sorry, I considered these suggestions but I really prefer to keep my hitsound structure as simple and clean as possible so it's easier for me and modders to manage.
    What I said about hitsounds can be applied on all diffs.
  3. 00:11:578 (1) - Give them a perfect stack. how do i do that >.<
  4. 00:17:048 - Lower the volume a bit as these objects are full of hitsounds, 80% make them too fruitful.
  5. 00:33:989 (7,8,9,10,11) - Standing around doesn't play well in Extra as it doesn't require movements, I would prefer jumpy circles which follow the vocal here. ;w; ok undermapped in favor of jumps
  6. 00:36:195 - Missing a bass drum which is heavier than 00:36:107 (2) - sounds bad. i don't even hear it at all when playing
  7. 00:38:401 (3) - For this stanza, use the drum finish for kick drums (white ticks) and this whistle http://puu.sh/gyx0w/f7a4319adc.wav for hi-hats (red ticks). ok, i will go with this because the section is very different
  8. 00:42:989 (1,2,3) - Transition over here is bad from drum to vocals. Rhythm in Insane is better. i don't get what's bad about it?
  9. 00:48:813 (1) - I realize the stressed vocals sound quite out compared to that of 00:48:813 - , so I suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2882613 . done
  10. 00:50:048 (4,1,2,3) - These look like a randomly-placed trapezium. 00:52:519 (6,7,8) - may try an equilateral triangle. i think i rearranged this pattern after previous mod
  11. 00:53:225 - Soft whistle. don't like the sound of it
  12. 01:07:519 (3) - The vocal is of high density, split them into something more clicky? What does that mean, high density? I like the longer sliders here
  13. 01:10:872 - Move the finish to 01:11:225 - where I heard a cymbal. added finish instead of removing since i hear it on both

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:872 (1,2,3) - looks untidy with varying spacing. http://puu.sh/gyxUJ/b4b73ef055.jpg this is intentional
  2. 00:08:225 (2,3,4) - ^ I guess you are rushing to get your map qualified -x- What are you talking about? This arrangement is intended and neat to me.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:813 - Prefer adding a circle here for the vocal as I have clicked earlier several times when test playing since I have misunderstood you follow the vocals strictly. Same applies on 00:45:460 - . ok
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:872 (5) - Can make it harder by doing this: http://puu.sh/gyyKh/57fea570b5.jpg as Hard is quite difficult with those continuous harsh jumps. done
  2. 00:20:931 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/gyyQK/7531ff9a25.jpg Same for 00:30:813 - . did for first one, don't know how it applies to second one
  3. 00:39:813 - 00:45:460 - Circle. i think it's important to keep polarity here

One more general opinion on Easy, some places sound so choppy and hollow with no objects like 00:33:813 (4) - when the density of music is still high. Better capturing those by using long slider instead of the skipping strategy. fine, i fixed most using circles though
Lastly, sorry for the last-minute-disqualification.
thank you for kwan mod >.<

Also thanks for you two's help. I managed to find ways to have sliders in that part in easy/normal!
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