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Tianshi - Kimi Ijou, Boku Miman

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Topic Starter
Colin Hou
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月26日 at 9:03:30

Artist: Tianshi
Title: Kimi Ijou, Boku Miman
Tags: Hatsune Miku Deco*27 AngelHoney
BPM: 140
Filesize: 11609kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. AngelHoney (4.93 stars, 509 notes)
  2. Easy (1.92 stars, 176 notes)
  3. Hard (4.59 stars, 328 notes)
  4. Normal (3.93 stars, 273 notes)
Download: Tianshi - Kimi Ijou, Boku Miman
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th map :3 Finally all elements finished!

Hatsune Miku song by a Chinese singer, Tianshi (member of dm123)
Actually it's just a birthday present that she recorded for her friend.

#10/5/05 Dang~Dang~Dang~ [AngelHoney] uploaded XD
#10/5/08 Orz [Normal] is finished and renamed to [Not Hard].
#10/5/15 Finally got [Normal] done.
#10/5/22 [Easy] done and some simple SB added. Maybe I'll add lyrics soon?
#10/5/24 Lyrics added. Then REDOWNLOAD is necessary.
#10/5/26 [Not Hard] is now [Hard] grab the latest.osu or rename it with your notepad.
AngelHoney
:) :)

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呼..終於做好了<3

Download: AngelHoney.rar
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
好图, 已更新~ :)

samipale wrote:

nobody knows how they made this!
ieggpain...
SamiPale
nobody knows how they made this!
banvi
Hello.
This song and map is nice! :)

modding ;)
Normal
00:16:737 (3) down 2 grid and right 1 grid?
00:38:594 (7) new combo
01:44:165 (2) right 1 grid?
02:04:737 (4) new combo?

Not Hard
00:42:237 (2) down 1 grid and left 1 grid?
02:08:165 (4) new combo?
03:03:022 (4) ^

AngelHoney
Because of grip level 2 , there are many small spacing miss .
While using geid level 3 , please check carefully.
For example , 00:25:522 (2,3) and 00:29:165 (3,4) etc...

I think too small. I'm sorry. :cry: @AngelHoney and Colin Hou

03:33:451 (1) finish the previous red line? (Look this spinner of normal and not hard, please.)

star☆
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

banvi wrote:

Hello.
This song and map is nice! :)

modding ;)
SPOILER
Normal
00:16:737 (3) down 2 grid and right 1 grid?
00:38:594 (7) new combo
01:44:165 (2) right 1 grid?
02:04:737 (4) new combo?

Not Hard
00:42:237 (2) down 1 grid and left 1 grid?
02:08:165 (4) new combo?
03:03:022 (4) ^

AngelHoney
Because of grip level 2 , there are many small spacing miss .
While using geid level 3 , please check carefully.
For example , 00:25:522 (2,3) and 00:29:165 (3,4) etc...
03:33:451 (1) finish the previous red line?
star☆
Good luck!
This map is still W.I.P, I'll check this modding after I finish [Easy] :3

とにかく ありがと!
h3k1ru
god, i love it =.=
AngelHoney
@banvi : No :(
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are somw suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Isn't the artist Mimu? I remember someone giving me this song and it said Mimu as the singer, feel free to ignore this if I'm wrong xD
- Try to put Inherited Timing sections before the note they work (talking about hitsounds). It will sound weird if the player hits the note earlier.

~Easy~
No problems, good job! x3

~Normal~
- That difference of stars between Easy and Normal... I don't know it looks weird ._.

01:55:737 (8) - Fix Spacing (I know it's intentional but they look like 1/2's :/
03:19:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - I somehow loved this pattern x3

~Not Hard~
02:52:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hidden Sliders :/ (specially 5 and 6)

~AngelHoney~
00:27:665 (4) - Fix spacing, looks like it's 1/4.
00:49:522 (3) - Looks so weird :/
01:11:165 (1) - Maybe too short... =x
01:54:022 (1,1) - Just make it a single spinner...
02:14:808 (9) - New Combo.
02:51:880 (1) - Really unexpected. Also it doesn't fit the music at all ._.

Cute song x333 *star*
AngelHoney
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

Beuchi-chan wrote:

SPOILER
Hi hi!! :)

Here are somw suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Isn't the artist Mimu? I remember someone giving me this song and it said Mimu as the singer, feel free to ignore this if I'm wrong xD Haha, I'm quite sure about the singer's name, a famous Chinese girl <3
- Try to put Inherited Timing sections before the note they work (talking about hitsounds). It will sound weird if the player hits the note earlier. I just put the KIAI sections on note, ones about hitsounds are put correctly.

~Easy~
No problems, good job! x3

~Normal~
- That difference of stars between Easy and Normal... I don't know it looks weird ._. my false ;_;

01:55:737 (8) - Fix Spacing (I know it's intentional but they look like 1/2's :/ done.
03:19:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - I somehow loved this pattern x3

~Not Hard~
02:52:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hidden Sliders :/ (specially 5 and 6) did a little change, kindal ess 'hidden' now

~AngelHoney~
00:27:665 (4) - Fix spacing, looks like it's 1/4.
00:49:522 (3) - Looks so weird :/
01:11:165 (1) - Maybe too short... =x
01:54:022 (1,1) - Just make it a single spinner...
02:14:808 (9) - New Combo.
02:51:880 (1) - Really unexpected. Also it doesn't fit the music at all ._.

AH fixed and I uploaded <3

Cute song x333 *star*
Thx, Beuchi :D
Selee
star~
Teras
Hey!

To me.. The tag Deco*27.. Should maybe be in the Source instead.. As the Illustrator, composer, Lyrics is done by Deco*27.. Just my thought.

[Easy]

Fine and fun ~

[Normal]

^

[Not Hard]

^

[Angelhoney]

^

Sorry for being so late to reply. been busy because of alot of family related things.

I think that Beuchi found the restoring things that are wrong in this map. Because I didn't find anything myself.

So the only thing I can really do for you is to give you a well deserved star :(

STAR :)
soulfear
suggetion:up the maximum score.
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
Thanks you guys!
IceBeam
Hello Colin Hou.

[General]
You MUST add more hitsounds to your difficulties.That's the biggest problem I've spotted.
And all your difficulties do not have much difference.Maybe you should try to experiment with much more complicated rhytms? Well,it's just my desire.

[SB]
Just a suggestion- maybe change the word "Singer" to "Artist"?

[Easy]
00:42:880 (2) - Sounds a bit weird,maybe adding some hitsound or place it to 00:42:665? Sounds better to me.
00:59:165 (1) - Probably making a reverse-slider here?
02:47:594 (5) - It's really out of the lyrics.Maybe making 2 simple sliders? [02:47:594 - 02:48:022] & [02:48:451 - 02:48:880]
03:35:165 (1) - Ending spinner at 03:36:880?

[Normal]
Well,haven't spotted something wrong here.I'd added more New Comboes,but it's up to you.

[Not Hard]
01:42:022 (7) - Something wrong with it.Maybe remove and make a slider [01:42:022-01:42:451] and then a circle at 01:42:665?
01:48:879 (5) - Same here.Try to find something better.
02:06:880 (1) - I don't like such moments at all,but I wasn't suggesting.But this one really upsets me.Probably making a reverse-slider? Notes: 02:06:880,02:07:308,02:07:737.
02:09:451 (5) - Remove it.Do whatever you want,but when you should place a note here - 02:09:880.
02:46:737 - Ah,so cruel song.You may pass this,but same suggestions as above.

[AngelHoney]
Looks fine.

Good luck to your map,star~
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

SadKangaroo wrote:

SPOILER
Hello Colin Hou.

[General]
You MUST add more hitsounds to your difficulties.That's the biggest problem I've spotted.
And all your difficulties do not have much difference.Maybe you should try to experiment with much more complicated rhytms? Well,it's just my desire.

[SB]
Just a suggestion- maybe change the word "Singer" to "Artist"? It's fine, but I've lost my template so I cann't do this...

[Easy]
00:42:880 (2) - Sounds a bit weird,maybe adding some hitsound or place it to 00:42:665? Sounds better to me. Good idea.
00:59:165 (1) - Probably making a reverse-slider here? no.
02:47:594 (5) - It's really out of the lyrics.Maybe making 2 simple sliders? [02:47:594 - 02:48:022] & [02:48:451 - 02:48:880] I didn't follow the lyrics here...It would be too hard for a [Easy] diff.
03:35:165 (1) - Ending spinner at 03:36:880? changed to 03:36:772

[Normal]
Well,haven't spotted something wrong here.I'd added more New Comboes,but it's up to you.

[Not Hard]
01:42:022 (7) - Something wrong with it.Maybe remove and make a slider [01:42:022-01:42:451] and then a circle at 01:42:665?
01:48:879 (5) - Same here.Try to find something better. these two are the lyrics...
02:06:880 (1) - I don't like such moments at all,but I wasn't suggesting.But this one really upsets me.Probably making a reverse-slider? Notes: 02:06:880,02:07:308,02:07:737. No.
02:09:451 (5) - Remove it.Do whatever you want,but when you should place a note here - 02:09:880. No.
02:46:737 - Ah,so cruel song.You may pass this,but same suggestions as above. Orz.

[AngelHoney]
Looks fine.

Good luck to your map,star~
Thx for modding :3
SamiPale
Hi~

[StoryBoard]
01:12:451(Lyrics-1.png) - There is a wrong fade effect at 01:15:237

[Easy]
ouch Perfect >.<

[Normal]
Pretty good~
02:21:451(1,2,3,4) - Make the same inclination for these sliders?

[Not Hard]
00:38:594(7) - ...New Combo?
00:51:237(7,9) - Suggestion,add clap?
01:30:880(3) - nazi spacing..left 1 grid
01:42:880(8) - Hey man here's double notes,if you delete (8) you will see another @_@
02:23:165(1,2,3,4) - Make them symetric?(move 4,5)
03:06:451(2) - Almost a straight line <_<?(I mean the shape)
03:33:451(1,2,3,4) - Suggestion,add some default soft-whistle?

[AngelHoney]
opps good~ only nazi...
00:07:737,00:07:790(T) - Are these TimeSection used to cause KIAI?But I see nothing D:
00:59:594(2) - Make this curver?When I play it seems just a line
02:00:665(9) - I heard a clap...But I can't find clap at the same place in the other part,perhaps add more or remove this?
03:12:665(3) - nazi spacing..but it's not a big deal
03:23:594(3) - a missed clap?
03:23:915(4) - oops nazi spacing,right 1 gird looks more beautiful?

03:26:594 - At this part I heard some sounds by Storyboard but also feel expected sliders at those space @_@ If me I'll delete 03:26:058(14,15) and add a circle at 03:26:165 stacking (13)'s end,but it's up to you


Nice song and Awesome map~
oh I've starred,so kudosu star go go go
AngelHoney
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
All fixed

U R damn pro >:0
Leorda
NI HAO

[Storyboard]
Your SB elements have an unneeded space, you have to cut it down, otherwise, the game will be higher performance while play this map

[Easy]
00:35:165 (3) - Overlapped by previous slider is not quite right, IMO
00:50:594 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:49:737 (3)?
00:57:880 (1,2) - Add a whistle, depending on the song, lol
00:58:737 (4) - ^
01:56:165 (1,2) - ^
01:57:022 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:57:880 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and end??
00:58:522 (2) - Add a whistle at the end??
01:51:451 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:50:165 (4)?
01:56:165 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and end??
01:56:808 (2) - Add a whistle at the end??
02:10:737 (6) - New combo?
02:24:880 (6) - Why this object is silence?

[Not Hard]
00:57:879 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and end??
00:58:522 (2) - Add a whistle at the end??
01:56:165 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and end??
01:56:808 (2) - Add a whistle at the end??

[AngelHoney]
Some little dating IRC Modding about Combo, Hitsound, and Style Stuff

Good song
STAR
AngelHoney
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
@Leorda:

About the SB, if I just remove the blanks, then I have to repair almost all the SB events and it just cost me almost 5 hours to make them. In pictures of png format, blanks cost quite little space and the result may be, 'Colin spent another 5 hours (or more) on SB and he turned down 200KB (or less) size of the map sets...'. So I want to just keep it like what it is now.

And fixed some places due to your post, thx :3

AH's diff updated.
kino77
好图~!各方面都很赞~SB尤其好~!

[SB]
01:15:237 - 歌词突然就消失了而不是减淡的

[Easy]
03:33:344 - Voulme 60%
03:35:165 (1) - End with red tick?

[Normal]
Same as Easy~

[Hard]
Same as Easy~

[AngelHoney]
01:10:308(5) - Whistle?
03:35:165 (1) - End with red tick?

Star+Kudosu star~! :)
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
@kino77

SB的问题sami提出来后我改掉了的...重新传下好了 音量减到70%和AH的一致 其余的没动

AH的难度等回复 :3
Doomsday
Hey

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. Timing looks good
  2. In the storyboard, the images for the lyrics have a lot of transparent pixels in them, wasting valuable memory space when the storyboard is played. Perhaps you could crop them out?
[EASY]
Nothing special, but its an easy, and it works

03:35:165 (1) - Should this be 1/4 longer? looks too short.

[NORMAL]
Pretty repetitive, with all those sliders, but it works fairly well.

03:35:165 (1) - Same as in Easy. Shouldn't this be 1/4 longer?

[NOT HARD] I would just change the name of this to "Hard".
Probably my favourite map of yours. Good stuff

02:24:880 (1) - This spinner feels really out of place to me. It comes out of nowhere. I would remove this and put something else here (or just leave it empty).
03:35:165 (1) - Same as in Easy. Shouldn't this be 1/4 longer?

[ANGELHONEY]
It's overmapped, but it isn't too overmapped. Its still pretty fun.

01:04:308 (1) - I can see what you are trying to do with these spinners, but they just don't work well. Short spinners like that rarely work well imo. Perhaps you could delete them and replace them with something else?
01:11:165 (1) - ^
02:57:451 (1) - ^
03:04:308 (1) - ^
03:33:451 (1) - Same as in Easy. Shouldn't this be 1/4 longer?

Very nice. This is probably my favourite map of yours. Keep it up ;). Hitsounds were pretty good too.

Starred
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
@Doomy

All things fixed in my diff and the last spinner in AH's.

About the SB, it will be another huge work for me and tests are approching. If things are acceptable (or I'm too lazy), I feel like to keep it like that. :3

Thx for modding :D
Mayoi Neko
>A</
yaya
yo . nice job
nothing wrong found
bbled
Topic Starter
Colin Hou

yaya wrote:

yo . nice job
nothing wrong found
bbled
thx :)
Andrea
Wow, great map. I love it, seriously.

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Colin Hou
X3 thx

Genre: Novelty (Japanese)
Andrea
Done.
Mystearica
这个很可爱
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