This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 27, 2008 at 2:10:49 PM

Artist: Nana Kitade
Title: Kibou no Kakera
BPM: 124.91
Filesize: 15064kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Normal (2.56 stars, 299 notes)
2. Hard (4.44 stars, 474 notes)

Download: Nana Kitade - Kibou no Kakera
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Hmmm... Personally i find it a good job done. But hey! That will be for the admins to decide!
Erm. I geuss there's not much to say. You might know this song from Power Puff Girls Z. Weirdest anime ever!
But ya gotta love the intro! Wich is this. Wich is also why i made it.

This has some of the worst vocals I've ever heard.

Anyway, good to see you got the timing done well and video added, props for that.

[normal]
00:15:70- slider spam is kinda confusing, I think you should do something else here
00:38:03 (1) - quite a lot of repeats? you could put something else here also
00:50:16 (1) - probably start this slider @ 00:50:28
00:52:56 (3) - you can actually attach this note to the slider so that it perfectly overlaps the slider end. Try deleting this note and re-placing it
00:56:40 (2) - ditto (going to refer to this as overlap snap from now on)
01:01:57 (8) - don't have the end and start of a slider at the same point, it's just confusing to play
01:05:65 (12) - overlap snap
01:06:61 (13) - overlap snap

01:16:22 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing for this combo is significantly tighter than previously, it's quite cluttered like this. Either overlap the notes or space them out so that it's easy to see.
01:18:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:27:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same
01:27:27 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:30:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - same
not going to bring this up every time from here, you should be able to spot it in the editor

01:35:43 (4) - overlap snap
01:40:24 (8) - excessive reverses, maybe cut it down and add a spinner in there? or change it to some notes plus a spinner

02:19:14 (1,2,3,4) - ... more tight and cluttered spacing, continuing...
02:37:88 (14) - overlap snap

04:17:55 (0) - should end @ 04:21:63-

[hard]
00:24:70- add a break somewhere round here!
00:47:64 (1,2,3,4) - large spacing ok?
01:01:57 (10) - don't overlap starts and ends of sliders
02:33:79 (10) - ditto

02:51:81 (3) - overlap snap

03:07:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - large spacing ok?
03:42:05 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ditto

04:17:55 (0) - should end @ 04:21:63-

Star-worthy i guess, hate the vocals though! Some good patches of consistent beat spacing and good timing overall.