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Haruto
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 Mei 2015 at 19:18:15

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Title: &Z (TV size)
Source: アルドノア・ゼロ
Tags: Aldnoah.Zero Season 2 Opening Rock Mako Sakata NewIpas
BPM: 158
Filesize: 23972kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,45 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (2,54 stars, 202 notes)
  3. Ipas' Insane (3,85 stars, 275 notes)
  4. Mako's Light Insane (3,39 stars, 219 notes)
  5. Normal (1,91 stars, 137 notes)


Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size)
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DIFFICULTY SPREAD

Easy By Me
Normal By Me
Hard By Me
Mako's Light Insane By Mako Sakata
Ipas' Insane By NewIpas
Haruko's Muzukashii By Me and Niko-nyan
Niko's Oni By Niko-nyan

Big Thanks to the People Above :^) im very Gratefull to them ;w;
Endings of Aldnoah Zero S2

Genesis by xxdeathxGenesis (CtB) by Xinely
Ichigaki

Check Requested via PM


A check for timing


Timing :
  1. BPM : Clear
  2. Offset : 3163

Other :
  1. Uncheck 'Letterbox during breaks' and 'Widescreen support'
  2. Remove 'Anime Japanese Version' from tags


Please re-map, and good luck :)
Topic Starter
Haruto

Ichigaki wrote:

Check Requested via PM


A check for timing


Timing :
  1. BPM : Clear
  2. Offset : 3163

Other :
  1. Uncheck 'Letterbox during breaks' and 'Widescreen support'
  2. Remove 'Anime Japanese Version' from tags


Please re-map, and good luck :)
Fixed, Thanks Senpai :)
Rakuen
Sorry not accepting the gd request (I can't send you PM)
Topic Starter
Haruto

Rakuen wrote:

Sorry not accepting the gd request (I can't send you PM)
Why? Why You Can't Send me PM?
Hufft... its Okay Then :)
Julie
2015-02-07 10:19 Julie: oki np map
2015-02-07 10:19 Haruto_Aizawa: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/517589 Ayano Mashiro - ideal white (TV Size)]
2015-02-07 10:19 Haruto_Aizawa: ups
2015-02-07 10:19 Julie: heeh?
2015-02-07 10:19 Julie: thats mine
2015-02-07 10:19 Julie: LOL
2015-02-07 10:19 Haruto_Aizawa: sorry wrong XD
2015-02-07 10:19 Haruto_Aizawa: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/629139 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size)]
2015-02-07 10:19 Julie: LOL
2015-02-07 10:20 Haruto_Aizawa: i play in dark here, so i dont look the keyboard XD
2015-02-07 10:20 Julie: 1st
2015-02-07 10:20 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/624949 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [Easy]]
2015-02-07 10:20 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:20 Julie: press shift + ctrl + a
2015-02-07 10:20 Julie: and check the space box for distance spacing issue
2015-02-07 10:21 Julie: http://puu.sh/fAVeV.jpg
2015-02-07 10:21 Haruto_Aizawa: ouh i forgot that
2015-02-07 10:21 Julie: haha
2015-02-07 10:21 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:21 Julie: remember easy and normal same spacing
2015-02-07 10:21 Haruto_Aizawa: okau
2015-02-07 10:21 Haruto_Aizawa: *okay
2015-02-07 10:21 Julie: actually if you forgot ctrl go to File -> Open AImod
2015-02-07 10:22 Haruto_Aizawa: yes i know LD
2015-02-07 10:22 Haruto_Aizawa: :D
2015-02-07 10:22 Julie: http://puu.sh/fAVtj.png I don't suggest these SV change in easy
2015-02-07 10:23 Julie: it change the distance easily, 1x become a lots more closer
2015-02-07 10:23 Haruto_Aizawa: okay done
2015-02-07 10:23 Julie: you might seen note suddendly closer in ranking map, but those are because of the bpm change
2015-02-07 10:23 Haruto_Aizawa: ooohh
2015-02-07 10:23 Julie: put then 1x speed and you'll have to space all the note back to 1x spacing
2015-02-07 10:24 Julie: and I don't suggest it in normal too in-case hahaha xD
2015-02-07 10:24 Haruto_Aizawa: what the? i dont see that SV?
2015-02-07 10:24 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:24 Julie: don't change that http://puu.sh/fAVG7.png
2015-02-07 10:24 Julie: keep 1,0x on easy, and if can, keep in normal too
2015-02-07 10:24 Julie: hard and insane don't mind
2015-02-07 10:25 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:25 Julie: 00:22:151 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
2015-02-07 10:25 Julie: this is pretty ugly (sorry for the words) xD
2015-02-07 10:25 Haruto_Aizawa: its okay
2015-02-07 10:25 Haruto_Aizawa: :D
2015-02-07 10:25 Julie: 1st is overlap + can feel you didn't put enough time to make this + it feel crowded
2015-02-07 10:26 Julie: you have a lots of space, don't make new player turn around in that corner ^^
2015-02-07 10:26 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:26 Julie: 00:29:366 (4,5) - take more time doing this one, and also after you change speed back 1,0x these shouldn't be touching
2015-02-07 10:27 Haruto_Aizawa: cokay
2015-02-07 10:28 Julie: 00:34:303 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - woah look at that http://puu.sh/fAW9p.jpg
2015-02-07 10:28 Julie: hahah feel all sticked XD
2015-02-07 10:28 Haruto_Aizawa: what the?? okay okay
2015-02-07 10:28 Haruto_Aizawa: oh my goodness XD
2015-02-07 10:28 Julie: yes
2015-02-07 10:28 Julie: LOL
2015-02-07 10:29 Julie: you have lots of space, don't make them all sticked LOL
2015-02-07 10:29 Haruto_Aizawa: so i have to change it?
2015-02-07 10:29 Julie: yes
2015-02-07 10:29 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:29 Julie: between take your time fixing, rushing make quality worst
2015-02-07 10:29 Julie: and I'm not asking you to fix fast so can contine modding
2015-02-07 10:29 Haruto_Aizawa: rushing?
2015-02-07 10:29 Julie: um
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: don't go doing your slider fast
2015-02-07 10:30 Haruto_Aizawa: ouh,, no im not rushing XD
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: and pattern
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: haha
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: oki
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: cuz like a slider can take me 10minute to make for me =A=
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: example of how much time I take for my own map...really long ;w;
2015-02-07 10:30 Haruto_Aizawa: haha
2015-02-07 10:30 Haruto_Aizawa: wow
2015-02-07 10:30 Julie: 01:07:341 (8,1,2) - way to overlap
2015-02-07 10:31 Julie: when I 1st mapped, I map 4 level a days, but now I can't, I really focus on how I do stuff
2015-02-07 10:31 Haruto_Aizawa: well im in doing here XD
2015-02-07 10:31 Haruto_Aizawa: wow
2015-02-07 10:31 Julie: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2709567 look in-game, you see (2) while doing (8)
2015-02-07 10:32 Julie: yeah but that's only me taking a long time to map, a lots of experience mapper map so fast, I'm still not experience XD
2015-02-07 10:32 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm yeah youre right
2015-02-07 10:32 Haruto_Aizawa: its okay
2015-02-07 10:33 Haruto_Aizawa: practice makes perfect is it?
2015-02-07 10:33 Haruto_Aizawa: so, practice making some map
2015-02-07 10:33 Julie: I really feel 1x spacing is a bit to crowd, example 01:16:834 (1,2,3) -
2015-02-07 10:34 Julie: not only pratice, asking modder for your own map and helping other by modding their map help a lots
2015-02-07 10:34 Haruto_Aizawa: wait i still fixing the 00:32:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
2015-02-07 10:34 Julie: modding other beginner map and other experience mapper, can help you a lots, by seing the difference of quality
2015-02-07 10:34 Julie: actually can I ask you to put more spacing xD
2015-02-07 10:34 Julie: more then 1x?
2015-02-07 10:34 Julie: for everything
2015-02-07 10:34 Haruto_Aizawa: 1,2x?
2015-02-07 10:35 Julie: because look at your kiai, is pretty crowded, note touch each other not fun to play as a beginner (I play all level)
2015-02-07 10:35 Julie: Yeah 1,2x LOTS better
2015-02-07 10:35 Haruto_Aizawa: okay then i'll change it to 1,2x
2015-02-07 10:35 Julie: 01:24:809 (1,2,3,4) - meeh overlap
2015-02-07 10:35 Julie: ok take your time fixing this, call me back when done ^^
2015-02-07 10:36 Haruto_Aizawa: im still fixing that XD
2015-02-07 10:36 Julie: take your time! xD
2015-02-07 10:36 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:36 Haruto_Aizawa: anyway is that okay i turn the spacing 1,2x?
2015-02-07 10:36 Julie: yes a lots more better, mostly because of your kiai rhythm
2015-02-07 10:36 Haruto_Aizawa: i think it'll be make newbies confused
2015-02-07 10:36 Haruto_Aizawa: ouh, okay
2015-02-07 10:37 Julie: nop
2015-02-07 10:37 Julie: 1x all stick cause more confusion to newbies
2015-02-07 10:37 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:37 Julie: try playing easy ranked, you'll see they are a lots more space and no crowded or all touchy
2015-02-07 10:37 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:38 Julie: I play all level, so don't worry :3...well all level except extra orz
2015-02-07 10:38 Haruto_Aizawa: haha
2015-02-07 10:38 Haruto_Aizawa: test my extra diff, you'll be confused haha
2015-02-07 10:39 Julie: xD
2015-02-07 10:40 Haruto_Aizawa: so many jumps on it XD
2015-02-07 10:43 Haruto_Aizawa: hi julie
2015-02-07 10:43 Haruto_Aizawa: fixed at easy difficulty
2015-02-07 10:43 Julie: everything? O.O
2015-02-07 10:43 Julie: this really feel to fast LOL
2015-02-07 10:44 Julie: check no crowded stuff + try using all the space to map
2015-02-07 10:44 Haruto_Aizawa: btw those timing and [http://puu.sh/fAVtj.png SV], are they need to change or not?
2015-02-07 10:44 Julie: change to 1.0x
2015-02-07 10:44 Julie: then those note in this part
2015-02-07 10:45 Haruto_Aizawa: all of them?
2015-02-07 10:45 Julie: you will see the distance spacing change
2015-02-07 10:45 Julie: yes
2015-02-07 10:45 Julie: for easy
2015-02-07 10:45 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:45 Julie: and if you did for normal too, I suggest changing it back too
2015-02-07 10:45 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 10:54 Haruto_Aizawa: julie
2015-02-07 10:54 Haruto_Aizawa: 39619,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,30,0,0 is this okay
2015-02-07 10:54 Haruto_Aizawa: oops wrong
2015-02-07 10:54 Julie: O.O
2015-02-07 10:54 Julie: huuhh? LOL
2015-02-07 10:54 Haruto_Aizawa: 00:39:619 - is this okay? i make the SV 0,9
2015-02-07 10:55 Haruto_Aizawa: Normal difficulty
2015-02-07 11:02 Julie: I dont suggest it
2015-02-07 11:02 Julie: feel a bit random sv change there xD
2015-02-07 11:23 Haruto_Aizawa: julie sorry, your suggestion of making the spacing 1,2x is making the diffculty become normal (star rating 1,56) < if i use 1,2x spacing
2015-02-07 11:24 Haruto_Aizawa: actually , i can make the spacing 1,2x it makes easy become normal
2015-02-07 11:24 Julie: probably because of some rhythmn
2015-02-07 11:24 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm... maybe
2015-02-07 17:09 Haruto_Aizawa: hi julie
2015-02-07 17:09 Julie: yo
2015-02-07 17:09 Julie: everything done? :3
2015-02-07 17:09 Julie: so can continnue modding
2015-02-07 17:09 Haruto_Aizawa: gomen i was sleep
2015-02-07 17:09 Haruto_Aizawa: well it all done
2015-02-07 17:09 Haruto_Aizawa: done all
2015-02-07 17:09 Haruto_Aizawa: for normal and easy?
2015-02-07 17:10 Julie: oki
2015-02-07 17:10 Haruto_Aizawa: i think , i'll be make the spacing 1x
2015-02-07 17:10 Julie: just
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: try not in easy tos tick the note
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: can 1,1x
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: or cs a bit lower
2015-02-07 17:11 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: cuz if all note all stick is ugly x.x
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: I play a lots of easy xD
2015-02-07 17:11 Haruto_Aizawa: yeah it is xD
2015-02-07 17:11 Julie: ok let me check :3
2015-02-07 17:11 Haruto_Aizawa: yay all my anime download is finished, lol
2015-02-07 17:12 Julie: 00:05:062 (3,4) - like exemple for the rhythm in easy
2015-02-07 17:13 Julie: 00:06:201 - nice drum sound so gj on a note there, but if you since pattern look weird 00:05:062 (3) - can just make this longer
2015-02-07 17:13 Julie: :D
2015-02-07 17:13 Haruto_Aizawa: you know that i can make good pattern XD
2015-02-07 17:13 Julie: anyway just an example
2015-02-07 17:13 Haruto_Aizawa: i cant
2015-02-07 17:13 Julie: it take time
2015-02-07 17:13 Julie: and you'll find your own style :3
2015-02-07 17:14 Haruto_Aizawa: yeah :D
2015-02-07 17:14 Haruto_Aizawa: well i already find my own style, a roundabout slider XD
2015-02-07 17:14 Julie: 00:05:822 - since this sound not really important
2015-02-07 17:14 Julie: but thats a trick, since your said 1,2x make your stars higher
2015-02-07 17:14 Haruto_Aizawa: some slidertick in there
2015-02-07 17:14 Julie: is mostly due to note like that 00:05:062 (3,4) -
2015-02-07 17:15 Julie: 00:13:796 (4) - this one is pretty hard, due to sound pretty low , idk if you accept red tick but the drum sound here 00:13:607 - is much higher
2015-02-07 17:16 Julie: 00:22:151 (4,1,2,3,4) - still to crowded
2015-02-07 17:16 Julie: 00:29:746 (5) - weird slider pattern LOL
2015-02-07 17:16 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm youre right about 00:13:607 (4) -
2015-02-07 17:17 Haruto_Aizawa: haha
2015-02-07 17:17 Julie: even if is on red stick, is way more easier to get due to the drum sound being really loud there
2015-02-07 17:17 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:17 Julie: or if you want everything on white stick , can do something about that part
2015-02-07 17:17 Julie: just note a note after the big drum sound
2015-02-07 17:18 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:19 Julie: in your map if you get modder, a lots of them will probably point out some stuff like 00:51:771 (5,1) - and say "blanket
2015-02-07 17:20 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm yeah
2015-02-07 17:20 Julie: blanket is something like that way http://puu.sh/fBUv1.jpg
2015-02-07 17:20 Haruto_Aizawa: your right
2015-02-07 17:20 Julie: ofc what I did now don't respect distance spacing
2015-02-07 17:20 Julie: but try doing something that respect distance spacing
2015-02-07 17:20 Julie: and when is crowd
2015-02-07 17:20 Julie: don't do something like
2015-02-07 17:21 Julie: http://puu.sh/fBUFh.jpg just for distance spacing
2015-02-07 17:21 Julie: a bit ugly
2015-02-07 17:21 Julie: and shift+ctrl+a OR file -> Open AImod, check again, you know what I thought you :3
2015-02-07 17:22 Julie: so yeah you have a bunch 00:55:189 (4,5) -
2015-02-07 17:22 Julie: I suggest fixing it by yourself cuz you'll probably see a bunch of modder pointing a lots of those out and say : blanket
2015-02-07 17:22 Julie: haha xD
2015-02-07 17:22 Haruto_Aizawa: fixed all of them XD
2015-02-07 17:22 Julie: already? O.O
2015-02-07 17:22 Julie: you mean all the one I point out?
2015-02-07 17:22 Haruto_Aizawa: fast is it?
2015-02-07 17:23 Haruto_Aizawa: yes
2015-02-07 17:23 Julie: 01:04:682 (4,5,6,7) - after finishing (4) you can see (7)
2015-02-07 17:24 Julie: 01:23:860 (5,6,1,2,3,4) -
2015-02-07 17:24 Julie: too crowded
2015-02-07 17:25 Haruto_Aizawa: c01:09:429 (3) - i want to have 2 notes in here but
2015-02-07 17:25 Julie: ^
2015-02-07 17:25 Julie: ?
2015-02-07 17:25 Haruto_Aizawa: it'll be make the starrating higher
2015-02-07 17:26 Haruto_Aizawa: 01:09:239 (3,4) - i want to add like [http://puu.sh/fBVx7/9c80582926.jpg this]
2015-02-07 17:26 Julie: you shouldn't focus on stars rating
2015-02-07 17:26 Julie: I think is probably the reason why you have so many crowded note
2015-02-07 17:26 Haruto_Aizawa: why?
2015-02-07 17:26 Julie: can focus on later
2015-02-07 17:27 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm... youre right too many crowded notes there XD
2015-02-07 17:27 Julie: most imporatnt
2015-02-07 17:27 Julie: is making an easy fun to play for beginners
2015-02-07 17:27 Julie: a 1,56 can be way more fun then a 1,30
2015-02-07 17:27 Julie: for beginners
2015-02-07 17:27 Julie: try modding a lots
2015-02-07 17:27 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:28 Julie: and I told you to play lots of ranked easy right? xD
2015-02-07 17:28 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:28 Julie: not the only one in case
2015-02-07 17:28 Haruto_Aizawa: yes XD
2015-02-07 17:28 Julie: ^^
2015-02-07 17:28 Julie: I can play some and let you see as well
2015-02-07 17:28 Julie: I play all level so I really have no problem playing easy, I love playing easy more then normal
2015-02-07 17:29 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/624951 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [Normal]]
2015-02-07 17:29 Haruto_Aizawa: haha , but most level that i play is normal with HD DT HR
2015-02-07 17:29 Haruto_Aizawa: wait
2015-02-07 17:29 Julie: oups 00:10:094 (1) - I think you moved accidently
2015-02-07 17:29 Julie: I play a lots no mods
2015-02-07 17:29 Julie: haha
2015-02-07 17:29 Julie: and focus on pattern
2015-02-07 17:29 Haruto_Aizawa: well, im a player and mapper XD
2015-02-07 17:30 Julie: 00:10:094 (1) - <-- fix this, you move it accidently LOL
2015-02-07 17:30 Haruto_Aizawa: wait
2015-02-07 17:30 Haruto_Aizawa: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/624949 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [Easy]]
2015-02-07 17:30 Julie: and then 00:09:429 (5,1,2) - fix spacing
2015-02-07 17:30 Julie: ohh
2015-02-07 17:31 Haruto_Aizawa: wait still fixing spacing
2015-02-07 17:31 Julie: oki call me back when done~ :3
2015-02-07 17:31 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:31 Julie: take your time
2015-02-07 17:32 Julie: dont rush
2015-02-07 17:32 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:32 Haruto_Aizawa: anyway do you understand what i say to you, sorry if my english badXCD
2015-02-07 17:32 Haruto_Aizawa: XD
2015-02-07 17:33 Julie: I undersatnd :3
2015-02-07 17:33 Haruto_Aizawa: [http://puu.sh/fBWH9/00d2313f4a.jpg is this okay?] 00:41:138 (5,1,2) -
2015-02-07 17:33 Haruto_Aizawa: some stacks in there
2015-02-07 17:34 Haruto_Aizawa: is that okay?
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: WOAH
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: no no no
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: crowded
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: xD
2015-02-07 17:34 Haruto_Aizawa: wow sorry okay i'll change it
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: hahaha
2015-02-07 17:34 Julie: you know what crowded is right?
2015-02-07 17:35 Haruto_Aizawa: too crowded too many notes in there
2015-02-07 17:36 Julie: also it doesn't look good sometimes when you see a note on another (not stack way)
2015-02-07 17:36 Julie: but like the one on your screenshot
2015-02-07 17:36 Julie: (5) is above (2) in a weird way @.@
2015-02-07 17:37 Haruto_Aizawa: haha lol
2015-02-07 17:41 Haruto_Aizawa: okay easy done
2015-02-07 17:41 Haruto_Aizawa: lets head back to normal :3
2015-02-07 17:43 Haruto_Aizawa: julie is error @.@
2015-02-07 17:43 Julie: me is error? O.O
2015-02-07 17:43 Haruto_Aizawa: no, the upload
2015-02-07 17:44 Haruto_Aizawa: the upload is error
2015-02-07 17:44 Haruto_Aizawa: i dont know why
2015-02-07 17:44 Julie: or
2015-02-07 17:44 Julie: relog?
2015-02-07 17:44 Haruto_Aizawa: hmm... its maybe because my connection, during connection in indonesia is too slow xD
2015-02-07 17:46 Julie: XD
2015-02-07 17:46 Haruto_Aizawa: i think lets just go to normal
2015-02-07 17:46 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/624951 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [Normal]]
2015-02-07 17:46 Julie: check the thing I point out above in normal
2015-02-07 17:46 Haruto_Aizawa: and after that i'll upload all of the mods
2015-02-07 17:47 Julie: 00:35:442 (2,3,4) - can make these symetric
2015-02-07 17:47 Julie: yeah
2015-02-07 17:47 Haruto_Aizawa: what do you mean symetric XD
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: 00:40:758 (5,1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3,4,6,2,3,5,2,3) - ok
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: wdf LOLOL
2015-02-07 17:49 Haruto_Aizawa: [http://puu.sh/fBYUN/92368ea17c.jpg check this why it always error]
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: all at the same point
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: yeah I think people have this problem lately
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: I seen one of my friend having that today
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: xD
2015-02-07 17:49 Julie: symetric like um wait
2015-02-07 17:50 Haruto_Aizawa: lol xD
2015-02-07 17:50 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:50 Julie: http://puu.sh/fBZwJ.jpg example
2015-02-07 17:50 Julie: and 00:40:758 (5,1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3,4,6,2,3,5,2,3) - better be fix, you should you all the space
2015-02-07 17:51 Julie: instead of jsut making player turn around that point for 20sec +
2015-02-07 17:51 Julie: just*
2015-02-07 17:51 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 17:53 Julie: 01:04:018 (3) - I think you accidednly move this one
2015-02-07 17:53 Julie: should be here 01:03:923 - lolol
2015-02-07 17:54 Julie: 01:11:898 (2,3,4) - make these symetric
2015-02-07 17:54 Haruto_Aizawa: what the??
2015-02-07 17:54 Haruto_Aizawa: accidently lol
2015-02-07 17:54 Julie: yeah since is on blue stick
2015-02-07 17:54 Julie: im pretty sure you wanted it to be on white stick for the drum,
2015-02-07 17:54 Haruto_Aizawa: i dont look at it XD
2015-02-07 17:54 Haruto_Aizawa: yes
2015-02-07 17:55 Julie: ^^
2015-02-07 17:55 Julie: since you been matching the drum pretty nice :3
2015-02-07 17:55 Julie: 01:17:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - woah woah woah suddenly to hard
2015-02-07 17:55 Julie: XD
2015-02-07 17:56 Haruto_Aizawa: well i follow kwan normal at xxdeath diffcultyXD
2015-02-07 17:56 Julie: 01:21:961 (4) - remove the finish in the begining of slider
2015-02-07 17:56 Julie: finish should just be at the end of slider
2015-02-07 17:56 Julie: 01:21:771 (3) - remove finish, replace by a clap
2015-02-07 17:56 Haruto_Aizawa: okay fixed
2015-02-07 17:56 Julie: ^^
2015-02-07 17:57 Haruto_Aizawa: fixed too
2015-02-07 17:57 Julie: 01:22:531 (5,1,2,3,4) - ok thats the end, can also feel a bit crowded
2015-02-07 17:57 Julie: use all the space :D
2015-02-07 17:58 Julie: look screenshot : http://puu.sh/fC0Np.jpg SO MUCH SPACE :D
2015-02-07 17:58 Julie: use it! XD
2015-02-07 17:58 Haruto_Aizawa: cuz it symetric right XD
2015-02-07 17:58 Julie: you can do symetric there
2015-02-07 17:58 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 18:01 Haruto_Aizawa: finish normal;
2015-02-07 18:01 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/629139 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) [Hard]]
2015-02-07 18:01 Julie: 00:06:391 (1) - http://puu.sh/fC1k7.jpg this is soooo AKWARD LOLOLLOL
2015-02-07 18:01 Haruto_Aizawa: okay
2015-02-07 18:01 Julie: I went mindblow for a moment
2015-02-07 18:01 Julie: xD
2015-02-07 18:01 Haruto_Aizawa: hehehe
2015-02-07 18:02 Haruto_Aizawa: what the okay okay i'll change it
2015-02-07 18:02 Julie: look like a note under
2015-02-07 18:02 Julie: but is not LOL
2015-02-07 18:03 Julie: 00:45:885 (2) - end of slider not snap
2015-02-07 18:03 Haruto_Aizawa: whoops
2015-02-07 18:03 Julie: hard is to sticked ><
2015-02-07 18:03 Haruto_Aizawa: okay i'll fix the sticked notes
2015-02-07 18:04 Julie: oki :3
2015-02-07 18:12 Haruto_Aizawa: hi julie , finished hard XD
2015-02-07 18:14 Haruto_Aizawa: okay all submited julie
2015-02-07 18:14 Haruto_Aizawa: and updated too

GL haruto :3!! get more modder and help other can improve your own map :D
Ciyus Miapah
i lold why extra is in here, even this slow song lol, its kind like airman map

Extra:
note:
- since 00:03:163 (1) - is your new combo, try too keep them consistent. so people will be happy playing a consistent map (and since this song didnt much have complex rhythm i think you need to remap your patterning).
- Your map gap looks too sudden i think, you do some "low spacing sliders" then suddenly do some airman jump, its too suden i think. maybe balancing your spacing with high jump can make this map really Hard
- 00:50:822 (1,2) - i will never do this thing. ever~
- some pattern are less sense, and i think you didnt really have some solid patterning here, i can say this extra maps is random thing, sorry :<

00:06:201 - probably you need NC in here, but idk why you NC in 00:05:632 (1) -
00:08:860 (1) - use slider in here looks weird i think, maybe use 1/2 pattern can be help ( 00:09:239 - NC here in this timeline)
i will mod your map if your map have good consistency. good luck!

dont kd this okay.
Topic Starter
Haruto

Fort wrote:

i lold why extra is in here, even this slow song lol, its kind like airman map

Extra:
note:
- since 00:03:163 (1) - is your new combo, try too keep them consistent. so people will be happy playing a consistent map (and since this song didnt much have complex rhythm i think you need to remap your patterning).
- Your map gap looks too sudden i think, you do some "low spacing sliders" then suddenly do some airman jump, its too suden i think. maybe balancing your spacing with high jump can make this map really Hard
- 00:50:822 (1,2) - i will never do this thing. ever~
- some pattern are less sense, and i think you didnt really have some solid patterning here, i can say this extra maps is random thing, sorry :<

00:06:201 - probably you need NC in here, but idk why you NC in 00:05:632 (1) -
00:08:860 (1) - use slider in here looks weird i think, maybe use 1/2 pattern can be help ( 00:09:239 - NC here in this timeline)
i will mod your map if your map have good consistency. good luck!

dont kd this okay.
Fixed,
Already Removed Extra and Changed to Insane+
Ciyus Miapah
wow this is impressive, your mapset gap is like perfect for rank maps :3

go go
Sky Trias
as #Request via PM

Here's my mod :D

  • [General]
  1. Title : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) (you sure about this?)
  2. Audio under 20% not rankable. Please raise the audio.
    [Audio Lead-In]
  3. Easy & Hard difficult : There is only 695 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  4. Insane difficult : There is only 315 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  5. Normal difficult :There is only 505 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  • [ Easy]
  1. 00:00:695 (1) - spinner start on 00:00:126
  2. 00:03:163 (1,2) - straighten
  3. 00:17:214 (5) - move down a bit , maybe (x: 96 y : 304) , and adjust the spacing 00:18:353 (6)
  4. 00:22:151 (4,1) - i think just make blanked over here not straighten the flow will better
  5. 00:26:328 (1,2) - just blanked over here
  6. 00:28:227 (3) - just make a simple curve!i don't like the slider lol
  7. 00:30:885 (6) - i think put this to 00:31:265 - and consider the spacing with 00:29:746 (5) - and 00:32:404 (7)
  8. 00:39:619 (2) - put in (x: 320 y: 40) ?? and just move a bit 00:39:999 (3) - and 00:40:758 (4)
  9. 00:55:189 (4) - improve the curve ?
  10. 01:07:341 (8) - curve ? i think just straight slider will better
  11. 01:23:860 (5,6,1,2) - i think this polarity is too hard for easy :(
  12. 01:26:708 (1) - spinner start here : 01:26:518 - and end in 01:28:227
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:00:505 (1) - same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:16:834 (7,8) - blanked , 00:17:594 (8) - improve the curve lol
  3. 00:28:986 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
  4. 00:30:505 (4) - can you make same as 00:28:986 (2) - ?? and make the this mirror
  5. 00:43:417 (4) - Ctrl+ G ?
  6. 01:00:126 (1) - same ^
  7. 01:06:391 (6) - 2 times repeat ? i think 1 will better and put the slider here : 01:06:581
  8. 01:18:923 (2,3,4) - whoops too hard ;w;
  9. 01:26:708 (1) - same as easy
  • [ Hard]
  1. same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:09:050 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing please
  3. 00:12:277 (7) - i think move this to (x: 420 y: 268) will better
  4. 00:13:037 (9,10) - blanked
  5. 00:12:657 (8) - move to (x: 292 y: 288)
  6. 00:16:455 - add not
  7. 00:19:872 (3,4) - i think this need to blanked will be better ;)
  8. 00:25:948 (4) - what ? can you make same like this ?
  9. 00:27:277 (7) - move down a bit ?
  10. 00:35:632 (5,1,2) - sound weird if you make like this
    i think this will make better ?
  11. 00:38:670 (6) - really weird here , can you improve the slider ?
  12. 00:39:619 (8) - give spacing
  13. 00:57:277 (4,5,6,7) - hmm changing the DS ? i think just make same like 00:55:189 (3,4,5,1) - will better :P
  14. 01:15:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what!? this not rankable bro :(
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:00:315 (1) - same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:27:657 (5,6) - remove
  3. 00:32:784 (7) - Ctrl+G ?
  4. 00:39:999 (1) - same ^
  5. 00:40:758 (2) - ^
  6. 00:47:214 (5) - ^
  7. 00:58:037 (5) - remove
  8. 01:26:518 (1) - spinner stop here 01:28:227
    the pattern is okay , but you need more creativity ;)i think this diff to boring lol


OK then! That's all i can mod for now :D
GL! Haruto_Aizawa :)
Nathan
Yo from modding queue (>w<)

[General]
  1. Seems good
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:163 (1) - Head should be placed more around the center for beginner players to reorient themselves easier after a spinner
  2. 00:08:480 (3) - Slider ends on a strong downbeat makes it awkward to play, to make it emphasized more shorten the slider to 1/1 and add two 1/1 beat circles after
  3. 00:10:379 (1) - This just straight up sounds off with the drums in the background, cut 1/2 a beat off the start
  4. 00:26:708 (2) - This also leaves the downbeat unstressed, shorten to 1/1 and a add a circle after
  5. 00:30:885 (6) - Shouldn't be 2/1, it's completely leaving out the drums here, shorten to 1/1, may have to add something after though
  6. 00:51:771 (5) - Shorten to 2/1, leaving out drums again
  7. 00:53:670 (2) - Shorten to 1/1, same reason
  8. 00:55:189 (4) - Make it 2/2 and add a 1/2 slider a beat after
  9. 01:03:163 (1,2) - Flip these in timing to have the downbeat emphasized
  10. 01:21:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not quite sure about a rhythm like this in easy tbh
  11. 01:26:138 (4) - Remove finish
  12. 01:26:708 (1) - Have the spinner start on 01:26:518 and end in 01:28:227 with a finish at the end


Sorry if it feels like im overriding your rhythm in this difficulty, but your missing a lot of important notes with your extended sliders
here's a quote from Kibbleru's userpage

Kibbleru wrote:

A simple guideline to using them is.
Ask yourself;
Am I going to miss a beat if I use this extended slider?
Does the extended slider actually make sense as to it emphasizes a held sound? (If not then make the first slider 1/2)
Is the ending sound actually strong enough to deserve something clickable on its own? (If not then just use a 1/1 slider)
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:163 (1) - Place more around the center same reason as in easy
  2. 00:16:834 (7,8) - Could blanket these
  3. 00:19:303 - Should have a note
  4. 00:25:189 (1,3) - Wouldn't do that, this may confuse new players, plus it just looks messy
  5. 00:38:480 (2,4) - ^
  6. 01:18:923 (2,3,4,5) - Definitely hard to read for newbie players
  7. 01:21:771 (3,4) - Flip in timings for downbeat emphasis
  8. 01:25:569 (4) - Remove finish
  9. 01:26:708 (1) - Same thing as in easy
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:163 (1,2,3,4) - Need to completely reposition these imo, 00:03:353 (2) just looks out of place since it's not entirely overlapped on the tail of 00:03:733 (4) but you shouldn't completely overlap them because it'll be hard to read
  2. 00:08:860 (4,5) - Flip these in timing for downbeat emphasis and add a finish on the circle
  3. 00:13:227 (10) - NC here, goes wayyyyy to long
  4. 00:27:277 (7) - Should be turned into two circles with a finish on the second
  5. 01:26:328 (6) - Remove finish
  6. 01:23:100 (7,8,9,6) - Same thing mentioned in first bullet point

    This difficulty kind of follows a different rhythm compared to normal and hard, it feels really weird not sure how to explain >w<
    Also this needs a lot of visual improvement, there's a lot of random and pointless overlaps
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:163 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 and add a circle on the downbeat, also add a finish on that circle
  2. 00:25:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The entire rhythm here just sounds overmapped
  3. 00:39:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nothing in the music that calls for a stream, also overmapped
  4. 01:06:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mapped to nothing
  5. 01:14:936 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ mapped to nothing

    The rhythm in this difficulty is also weird, some parts your only mapping to the beat really and nothing else which leads it to being overmapped, stick to mapping to the drums. I can't really mod much else because some parts really need to be remapped in terms of rhythm, also this really needs some visual improvements.

Good luck with your map~
[ Shamwow ]
from my queue

Normal:
+00:39:999 (4,5,6) - this pattern that goes until 00:59:746 is too repetitive and long and seems boring to play
+01:02:974 (1,2) - this part would go better if it was just one slider that goes from 01:03:163 to 01:03:543 -

Hard
+00:24:050 (6,1) - this overlap looks weird
+it would sound better if you made 00:24:050 (6) shorter by one tick and moved 00:24:619 (1) to 00:24:429
+move 00:36:391 (2) to 00:36:581
+remove 00:39:619 (8) and move 00:39:050 (7) to 00:39:239
+make 01:03:923 (3,4) one slider?
+01:15:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard diffs shouldn't have streams like this
+remove 01:24:050 (1) and move 01:23:480 (9) to 01:23:670 , then add a circle at 01:23:480

good luck!
-Tochi
From my modding queue


  • General

  1. Please add NC on (big) white ticks, not on a random red tick.

  • Insane

  1. 00:13:417 - Add a note here, there's clearly a sound here.
  2. 00:22:720 (2,1) - Why the suddenly DS change?
  3. 00:24:619 (2) - This note looks like you placed randomly, please move it to x188 y168.
  4. 00:27:467 (4) - NC, and press Q here 00:28:037 (1) -
  5. 00:26:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Using the same pattern when there's a new combo/beat looks awkward. Please consider changing 00:27:467 (4,5,6) -
  6. 00:30:315 - Add note, this is where the vocal ends on this section.
  7. 00:32:024 (5) - NC.
  8. 00:33:543 (5,1) - Swap NC, so NC starts on 00:33:543 (5) -
  9. 00:35:062 (8) - NC, and press Q here 00:35:442 (1) -
  10. 00:39:144 (2) - Delete. Stream start here 00:39:239 (3) - Remember to adjust the DS.
  11. 00:45:315 (4) - NC, and press Q here 00:46:075 (1) -
  12. Fix he NC's on the rest of the map. Remember tha they should be on white ticks.
  13. 01:01:265 (2,4) - Stack properly.
  14. 01:02:974 - 01:02:974 (1) - There's no sound here 01:02:974 - People will get confused! Remove the reverse, and move it so it start here 01:03:163 -
  15. 01:08:860 (1,1,1) - Why do you add NC's here? Please remove them.
  16. 01:26:518 (1) - Spinner should end here 01:28:227 -

  • Hard

  1. 00:00:695 (1) - Spinner is too late, it should start here 00:00:315 - as the Insane diff.
  2. 00:03:733 (4) - Why does it overlap so hard with 00:03:353 (2,3) - ?? This is unrankable! Please change the direction.
  3. 00:13:037 (9,10) - This is a random placement, you shouldn't overlap the circle like that.
  4. 00:14:176 (11) - NC
  5. 00:24:619 (1) - Why NC, and this is unrankable! Please don't overlap things like this!
  6. 00:46:455 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid this overlap.
  7. 01:02:974 (1) - There's no sound here 01:02:974 - please delete the slider, and add circle here 01:03:163 -
  8. 01:10:189 (4,5,6,1,2) - Same as 00:03:733 (4) -
  9. 01:23:100 (7,8,9) - You do it again >.>

  • Feedback

    I don't like how you make the sliders start on red ticks, and i don't like the copy/pasting on same position. It's hard to read, and it can be an unrankable issue, also the NC's. I think it still need alot of work.
Topic Starter
Haruto
THANKS GUYS FOR YOUR MODS
IM VERY APPRECIATE THAT :oops::)



as #Request via PM

Here's my mod :D

  • [General]
  1. Title : SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size) (you sure about this?) See The Album that i buy >
  2. Audio under 20% not rankable. Please raise the audio.
    [Audio Lead-In]
  3. Easy & Hard difficult : There is only 695 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  4. Insane difficult : There is only 315 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  5. Normal difficult :There is only 505 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
  • [ Easy]
  1. 00:00:695 (1) - spinner start on 00:00:126 gasalah? harusnya kan disini 00:00:505
  2. 00:03:163 (1,2) - straighten
  3. 00:17:214 (5) - move down a bit , maybe (x: 96 y : 304) , and adjust the spacing 00:18:353 (6)
  4. 00:22:151 (4,1) - i think just make blanked over here not straighten the flow will better
  5. 00:26:328 (1,2) - just blanked over here
  6. 00:28:227 (3) - just make a simple curve!i don't like the slider lol
  7. 00:30:885 (6) - i think put this to 00:31:265 - and consider the spacing with 00:29:746 (5) - and 00:32:404 (7)
  8. 00:39:619 (2) - put in (x: 320 y: 40)baru tau juga `-` ?? and just move a bit 00:39:999 (3) - and 00:40:758 (4)
  9. 00:55:189 (4) - improve the curve ?
  10. 01:07:341 (8) - curve ? i think just straight slider will better
  11. 01:23:860 (5,6,1,2) - i think this polarity is too hard for easy :(
  12. 01:26:708 (1) - spinner start here : 01:26:518 - and end in 01:28:227
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:00:505 (1) - same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:16:834 (7,8) - blanked , 00:17:594 (8) - improve the curve lol
  3. 00:28:986 (2) - Ctrl+G ?baru tau aku bisa begini `-`
  4. 00:30:505 (4) - can you make same as 00:28:986 (2) - ?? and make the this mirror
  5. 00:43:417 (4) - Ctrl+ G ?
  6. 01:00:126 (1) - same ^
  7. 01:06:391 (6) - 2 times repeat ? i think 1 will better and put the slider here : 01:06:581
  8. 01:18:923 (2,3,4) - whoops too hard ;w;
  9. 01:26:708 (1) - same as easy
  • [ Hard]
  1. same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:09:050 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing please
  3. 00:12:277 (7) - i think move this to (x: 420 y: 268) will better
  4. 00:13:037 (9,10) - blanked
  5. 00:12:657 (8) - move to (x: 292 y: 288)
  6. 00:16:455 - add not
  7. 00:19:872 (3,4) - i think this need to blanked will be better ;)
  8. 00:25:948 (4) - what ? can you make same like this ?
  9. 00:27:277 (7) - move down a bit ?
  10. 00:35:632 (5,1,2) - sound weird if you make like this
    i think this will make better ?
  11. 00:38:670 (6) - really weird here , can you improve the slider ?
  12. 00:39:619 (8) - give spacing
  13. 00:57:277 (4,5,6,7) - hmm changing the DS ? i think just make same like 00:55:189 (3,4,5,1) - will better :P
  14. 01:15:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what!? this not rankable bro :(
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:00:315 (1) - same as Easy , spinner start here : 00:00:126
  2. 00:27:657 (5,6) - remove
  3. 00:32:784 (7) - Ctrl+G ?
  4. 00:39:999 (1) - same ^
  5. 00:40:758 (2) - ^
  6. 00:47:214 (5) - ^
  7. 00:58:037 (5) - remove
  8. 01:26:518 (1) - spinner stop here 01:28:227
    the pattern is okay , but you need more creativity ;)i think this diff to boring lol


OK then! That's all i can mod for now :D
GL! Haruto_Aizawa :)

Okay All Diff was Fixed Thanks for the Mod Trias :D
Thanks Trias-san
really appreciate the mods :oops:
Yo from modding queue (>w<)


General

Seems good




Easy

00:03:163 (1) - Head should be placed more around the center for beginner players to reorient themselves easier after a spinner
00:08:480 (3) - Slider ends on a strong downbeat makes it awkward to play, to make it emphasized more shorten the slider to 1/1 and add two 1/1 beat circles after
Image
00:10:379 (1) - This just straight up sounds off with the drums in the background, cut 1/2 a beat off the start
Image
00:26:708 (2) - This also leaves the downbeat unstressed, shorten to 1/1 and a add a circle after
Image
00:30:885 (6) - Shouldn't be 2/1, it's completely leaving out the drums here, shorten to 1/1, may have to add something after though
00:51:771 (5) - Shorten to 2/1, leaving out drums again
00:53:670 (2) - Shorten to 1/1, same reason
00:55:189 (4) - Make it 2/2 and add a 1/2 slider a beat after
Image
01:03:163 (1,2) - Flip these in timing to have the downbeat emphasized
01:21:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not quite sure about a rhythm like this in easy tbh
01:26:138 (4) - Remove finish
01:26:708 (1) - Have the spinner start on 01:26:518 and end in 01:28:227 with a finish at the end


Sorry if it feels like im overriding your rhythm in this difficulty, but your missing a lot of important notes with your extended sliders
here's a quote from Kibbleru's userpage
Kibbleru wrote:
A simple guideline to using them is.
Ask yourself;
Am I going to miss a beat if I use this extended slider?
Does the extended slider actually make sense as to it emphasizes a held sound? (If not then make the first slider 1/2)
Is the ending sound actually strong enough to deserve something clickable on its own? (If not then just use a 1/1 slider)



Normal

00:03:163 (1) - Place more around the center same reason as in easy
00:16:834 (7,8) - Could blanket these
00:19:303 - Should have a note
00:25:189 (1,3) - Wouldn't do that, this may confuse new players, plus it just looks messy
00:38:480 (2,4) - ^
01:18:923 (2,3,4,5) - Definitely hard to read for newbie players
01:21:771 (3,4) - Flip in timings for downbeat emphasis
01:25:569 (4) - Remove finish
01:26:708 (1) - Same thing as in easy




Hard

00:03:163 (1,2,3,4) - Need to completely reposition these imo, 00:03:353 (2) just looks out of place since it's not entirely overlapped on the tail of 00:03:733 (4) but you shouldn't completely overlap them because it'll be hard to read
00:08:860 (4,5) - Flip these in timing for downbeat emphasis and add a finish on the circle
00:13:227 (10) - NC here, goes wayyyyy to long
00:27:277 (7) - Should be turned into two circles with a finish on the second
01:26:328 (6) - Remove finish
01:23:100 (7,8,9,6) - Same thing mentioned in first bullet point

This difficulty kind of follows a different rhythm compared to normal and hard, it feels really weird not sure how to explain >w<
Also this needs a lot of visual improvement, there's a lot of random and pointless overlaps




Insane

00:03:163 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 and add a circle on the downbeat, also add a finish on that circle Sorry About This, but what about the Drum sound on here > 00:03:923 -
Image
00:25:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The entire rhythm here just sounds overmapped
00:39:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nothing in the music that calls for a stream, also overmapped
01:06:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mapped to nothing
01:14:936 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ mapped to nothing

The rhythm in this difficulty is also weird, some parts your only mapping to the beat really and nothing else which leads it to being overmapped, stick to mapping to the drums. I can't really mod much else because some parts really need to be remapped in terms of rhythm, also this really needs some visual improvements.



Good luck with your map~

Thanks For The Mod i think i'll search someone who wants to guest difficulty
thanks and I Really Appreciate your mods :oops:
from my queue

Normal:
+00:39:999 (4,5,6) - this pattern that goes until 00:59:746 is too repetitive and long and seems boring to play
+01:02:974 (1,2) - this part would go better if it was just one slider that goes from 01:03:163 to 01:03:543 -
You're RIGHT!! thank you very much! Fixed and Updated

Hard
+00:24:050 (6,1) - this overlap looks weird
+it would sound better if you made 00:24:050 (6) shorter by one tick and moved 00:24:619 (1) to 00:24:429
+move 00:36:391 (2) to 00:36:581
+remove 00:39:619 (8) and move 00:39:050 (7) to 00:39:239
+make 01:03:923 (3,4) one slider?
+01:15:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard diffs shouldn't have streams like this
+remove 01:24:050 (1) and move 01:23:480 (9) to 01:23:670 , then add a circle at 01:23:480

good luck!
Thanks for your Mod, i really Appreciate that! i'll mod your map, this week, be patience then ;)
From my modding queue

General

Please add NC on (big) white ticks, not on a random red tick.



Insane

00:13:417 - Add a note here, there's clearly a sound here.
00:22:720 (2,1) - Why the suddenly DS change?
00:24:619 (2) - This note looks like you placed randomly, please move it to x188 y168.
00:27:467 (4) - NC, and press Q here 00:28:037 (1) -
00:26:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Using the same pattern when there's a new combo/beat looks awkward. Please consider changing 00:27:467 (4,5,6) -
00:30:315 - Add note, this is where the vocal ends on this section.
00:32:024 (5) - NC.
00:33:543 (5,1) - Swap NC, so NC starts on 00:33:543 (5) -
00:35:062 (8) - NC, and press Q here 00:35:442 (1) -
00:39:144 (2) - Delete. Stream start here 00:39:239 (3) - Remember to adjust the DS.
00:45:315 (4) - NC, and press Q here 00:46:075 (1) -
Fix he NC's on the rest of the map. Remember tha they should be on white ticks.
01:01:265 (2,4) - Stack properly.
01:02:974 - 01:02:974 (1) - There's no sound here 01:02:974 - People will get confused! Remove the reverse, and move it so it start here 01:03:163 -
01:08:860 (1,1,1) - Why do you add NC's here? Please remove them.
01:26:518 (1) - Spinner should end here 01:28:227 -



Hard

00:00:695 (1) - Spinner is too late, it should start here 00:00:315 - as the Insane diff.
00:03:733 (4) - Why does it overlap so hard with 00:03:353 (2,3) - ?? This is unrankable! Please change the direction.
00:13:037 (9,10) - This is a random placement, you shouldn't overlap the circle like that.
00:14:176 (11) - NC
00:24:619 (1) - Why NC, and this is unrankable! Please don't overlap things like this!
00:46:455 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid this overlap.
01:02:974 (1) - There's no sound here 01:02:974 - please delete the slider, and add circle here 01:03:163 -
01:10:189 (4,5,6,1,2) - Same as 00:03:733 (4) -
01:23:100 (7,8,9) - You do it again >.>



Feedback

I don't like how you make the sliders start on red ticks, and i don't like the copy/pasting on same position. It's hard to read, and it can be an unrankable issue, also the NC's. I think it still need alot of work.

Im Sorry abou the NC issues
i'll fix that later
anyway thanks for all of your mods
and im really appreciate your mods :oops:
Shiranai
Will mod this later on tomorrow as your asking
Cape bgt malem ini baru nyampe apartmen😩
Topic Starter
Haruto

Mako Sakata wrote:

Will mod this later on tomorrow as your asking
Cape bgt malem ini baru nyampe apartmen😩
Kak mako?
Okay Then
Kak, kalo besok kayanya aku gak online, takut kena marah ortu >w<
jadi nanti kaka post aja di forum ini
kalo udah hari sabtu kuliat :):D;)
Shiranai
Okee deeeh😁
Kasian kena marah mama yaa haha XD
---
Hallooo kak~
Some sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Tentang AudioLeadin, bisa ditambah dari 0 menjadi 2000 buat persiapan sebelum awal lagu, soalnya yang sekarang ini terlalu terburu2 menurut aku. Cara nambah audioleadin:
    1. buka File
    2. pilih "Open .osu on Notepad" ada di bagian bawah
    3. terus kalo udah dibuka di notepad, coba liat ke bagian general kan ada audioleadin itu diganti nilainya jadi 2000
  2. Tentang combo colors:
    1. Warna putih tidak disarankan dipakai karena pas kiai bisa terlalu silau dan tertulis juga di rules kalo ga salah, solusinya mungkin Combo 1 bisa digelapin sedikit
    2. Ada warna yang keliatan gelap banget, contoh Combo 3, 5, 6. Terutama itu Combo 6, soalnya pas nanti main approach circlenya ga begitu keliatan susah untuk diprediksi, solusinya mungkin bisa dibuat agak terang atau diganti warna lain
  3. Untuk metadata kayanya Clear! ya kak ga ada masalah, aku ga ngerti lagu anime soalnya
  4. Untuk file mp3 sama backgroundnya Clear! juga


[Easy]
  • Main:
  1. Udah tau kan ya kak kalo Easy dan Normal itu minimalnya ngikutin Distance Spacing, Cuma ngingetin aja supaya jarak antar notesnya diperiksa lagi, contohnya ini 00:18:353 (6) - ini 00:24:809 (3) - dan mungkin masih banyak lagi, menurut aku karena ini diff easy dengan pengaturan DSnya 1,1x jadi ya ikutin aja buat readablelity pas main, coba periksa AiModnya kak http://puu.sh/fLEMf/096bbb759f.jpg
  2. 00:03:163 (1) - Menurut aku sih yang itu lebih nyaman kalo dibuat curve, terus mungkin bentuknya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/fLCY1/652c86ff3b.jpg
  3. 00:12:277 (3,1) - Ga salah sih cuma kayanya agak sedikit maksa patern di situ terlebih lagi overlapnya
  4. 00:20:632 (3) - Biar flownya lebih enak itu kayanya bisa di Ctrl+J kak, kalo yang sekarang kayanya terlalu persis sama kaya ini 00:19:113 (1) -
  5. 00:23:670 (2) - Ini juga kayanya Ctrl+J terus Ctrl+< biar flownya enak http://puu.sh/fLDAt/8b186ef3a0.jpg terus melanjuti gambar yg di samping, coba ubah yang ini 00:25:189 (4) - jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/fLDHV/212fbaabae.jpg jadi kan enak kak keliatannya ga tabrakan/overlapping antara notes 00:23:670 (2,4) -
  6. 00:44:936 (1) - Menurut aku itu didelete aja deh kak, mending ikutin suara vokalisnya langsung yang ada di sini 00:45:315 (2) - jadi pemain pemula juga ga susah ngira nadanya
  7. 00:51:012 - Kalo yang itu malah agak janggal kalo kosong, mending ditambah satu circle deh biar nyambung nadanya
  8. 00:56:328 (5) - Lebih rapih kayanya kalo itu diubah jadi curve terus blanket sama ini 00:55:189 (4) - http://puu.sh/fLE8h/c313dba759.jpg
  9. 00:59:366 (2) - Tuhkan spacingnya lebar banget, contohh yang itu terlalu jauh kalo dibanding sama nada2 sebelumnya, mending ikutin DS kak
  10. 01:05:822 (5) - Ini malah terlalu deket, move down sedikit sesuain sama DSnya
  11. 01:09:999 (1) - Mending ini dijadiin curve kak, terus blanket sama ini 01:11:138 (2) - http://puu.sh/fLErF/2ae0288bb8.jpg
  12. 01:17:594 (2,4) - Sebenernya overlap kaya gitu cukup mengganggu buat aku tapi berhubung banyak banget yang kaya gitu haha, mungkin bisa di kurangi kak biar lebih rapih mapnya
  13. 01:26:328 (8,1) - Jarak antara circle sama spinner terakhir terlalu dekat di timeline, mungkin ini 01:26:328 (8) - bisa didelete, terus spinnernya dimulai dari sini 01:26:328 - disesuain sama musikalisasinya berakhir di sini 01:28:227 -
  14. 01:28:417 - Green linenya ga kepake didelete aja

    Hitsound:
  15. 00:03:163 (1) - Bagian awalnya bisa dikasih finish, supaya ngefeel sama suara simbalnya
  16. 00:09:239 (4) - Tambah clap kak, soalnya suara drumnya lumayan kuat bukan cuma simbalnya aja
  17. 00:12:277 (3) - Untuk clap yang ada di reverse arrow kayanya ga perlu deh kak, soalnya di situ kaya downbeat gitu jadi kesannya malah aneh menurut aku kalo diisi
  18. 00:17:594 - Bisa ditambah suara slider tick s:C3 kak kaya yang ini 00:05:062 (3) -
  19. 00:27:467 (3) - Tambah finish kak, ada suara simbal gitu di sana
  20. 01:02:024 (4) - Suara clapnya harusnya ada di bagian akhir slider kak bukan di awal, menurut aku suaranya lebih kuat di akhir
  21. 01:03:923 (2) - Daripada pake clap suaranya lebih pake finish deh kak


[]
To be continue! Aku cape hahaha tunggu aku mood lagi ya kaaaak
No kudosu yet, gonna finish this later
Topic Starter
Haruto

Mako Sakata wrote:

Okee deeeh😁
Kasian kena marah mama yaa haha XD
Hehe Yaa Gitu deh T_T
---
Hallooo kak~
Some sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Tentang AudioLeadin, bisa ditambah dari 0 menjadi 2000 buat persiapan sebelum awal lagu, soalnya yang sekarang ini terlalu terburu2 menurut aku. Cara nambah audioleadin:
    1. buka File
    2. pilih "Open .osu on Notepad" ada di bagian bawah
    3. terus kalo udah dibuka di notepad, coba liat ke bagian general kan ada audioleadin itu diganti nilainya jadi 2000FIXED!
  2. Tentang combo colors:
    1. Warna putih tidak disarankan dipakai karena pas kiai bisa terlalu silau dan tertulis juga di rules kalo ga salah, solusinya mungkin Combo 1 bisa digelapin sedikit
    2. Ada warna yang keliatan gelap banget, contoh Combo 3, 5, 6. Terutama itu Combo 6, soalnya pas nanti main approach circlenya ga begitu keliatan susah untuk diprediksi, solusinya mungkin bisa dibuat agak terang atau diganti warna lain
  3. Untuk metadata kayanya Clear! ya kak ga ada masalah, aku ga ngerti lagu anime soalnya
  4. Untuk file mp3 sama backgroundnya Clear! jugaFIXED


[Easy]
  • Main:
  1. Udah tau kan ya kak kalo Easy dan Normal itu minimalnya ngikutin Distance Spacing, Cuma ngingetin aja supaya jarak antar notesnya diperiksa lagi, contohnya ini 00:18:353 (6) - ini 00:24:809 (3) - dan mungkin masih banyak lagi, menurut aku karena ini diff easy dengan pengaturan DSnya 1,1x jadi ya ikutin aja buat readablelity pas main, coba periksa AiModnya kak http://puu.sh/fLEMf/096bbb759f.jpg
  2. 00:03:163 (1) - Menurut aku sih yang itu lebih nyaman kalo dibuat curve, terus mungkin bentuknya bisa kaya gini http://puu.sh/fLCY1/652c86ff3b.jpg
  3. 00:12:277 (3,1) - Ga salah sih cuma kayanya agak sedikit maksa patern di situ terlebih lagi overlapnya
  4. 00:20:632 (3) - Biar flownya lebih enak itu kayanya bisa di Ctrl+J kak, kalo yang sekarang kayanya terlalu persis sama kaya ini 00:19:113 (1) -
  5. 00:23:670 (2) - Ini juga kayanya Ctrl+J terus Ctrl+< biar flownya enak http://puu.sh/fLDAt/8b186ef3a0.jpg terus melanjuti gambar yg di samping, coba ubah yang ini 00:25:189 (4) - jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/fLDHV/212fbaabae.jpg jadi kan enak kak keliatannya ga tabrakan/overlapping antara notes 00:23:670 (2,4) -
  6. 00:44:936 (1) - Menurut aku itu didelete aja deh kak, mending ikutin suara vokalisnya langsung yang ada di sini 00:45:315 (2) - jadi pemain pemula juga ga susah ngira nadanya
  7. 00:51:012 - Kalo yang itu malah agak janggal kalo kosong, mending ditambah satu circle deh biar nyambung nadanya
  8. 00:56:328 (5) - Lebih rapih kayanya kalo itu diubah jadi curve terus blanket sama ini 00:55:189 (4) - http://puu.sh/fLE8h/c313dba759.jpg
  9. 00:59:366 (2) - Tuhkan spacingnya lebar banget, contohh yang itu terlalu jauh kalo dibanding sama nada2 sebelumnya, mending ikutin DS kak
  10. 01:05:822 (5) - Ini malah terlalu deket, move down sedikit sesuain sama DSnya
  11. 01:09:999 (1) - Mending ini dijadiin curve kak, terus blanket sama ini 01:11:138 (2) - http://puu.sh/fLErF/2ae0288bb8.jpg
  12. 01:17:594 (2,4) - Sebenernya overlap kaya gitu cukup mengganggu buat aku tapi berhubung banyak banget yang kaya gitu haha, mungkin bisa di kurangi kak biar lebih rapih mapnya
  13. 01:26:328 (8,1) - Jarak antara circle sama spinner terakhir terlalu dekat di timeline, mungkin ini 01:26:328 (8) - bisa didelete, terus spinnernya dimulai dari sini 01:26:328 - disesuain sama musikalisasinya berakhir di sini 01:28:227 -
  14. 01:28:417 - Green linenya ga kepake didelete aja SEMUA FIXED :D

    Hitsound:
  15. 00:03:163 (1) - Bagian awalnya bisa dikasih finish, supaya ngefeel sama suara simbalnya
  16. 00:09:239 (4) - Tambah clap kak, soalnya suara drumnya lumayan kuat bukan cuma simbalnya aja
  17. 00:12:277 (3) - Untuk clap yang ada di reverse arrow kayanya ga perlu deh kak, soalnya di situ kaya downbeat gitu jadi kesannya malah aneh menurut aku kalo diisi
  18. 00:17:594 - Bisa ditambah suara slider tick s:C3 kak kaya yang ini 00:05:062 (3) -
  19. 00:27:467 (3) - Tambah finish kak, ada suara simbal gitu di sana
  20. 01:02:024 (4) - Suara clapnya harusnya ada di bagian akhir slider kak bukan di awal, menurut aku suaranya lebih kuat di akhir
  21. 01:03:923 (2) - Daripada pake clap suaranya lebih pake finish deh kak


[]
To be continue! Aku cape hahaha tunggu aku mood lagi ya kaaaak
No kudosu yet, gonna finish this later
FIXED ALL, Thanks For your Mods, really appreciate that :)
Can You Gave me Star for This? Pleaseee :) < I dont Force you to Give Ks on my Map :)
Sky Trias
Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

Here's my GD!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62974
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:&Z (TV size)
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Creator:Haruto_Aizawa
Version:Trias's Insane
Source:アルドノア・ゼロ
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Topic Starter
Haruto

Sky Trias wrote:

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

Here's my GD!

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260,292,36581,6,0,P|312:284|352:312,1,85
424,356,36961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,236,39619,6,0,B|136:288|136:288|200:224|244:252,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,248,40379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,320,40758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,208,42277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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240,248,43416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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267,113,44936,2,0,L|188:84,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,244,46170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,112,47024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,47214,6,0,P|332:80|424:84,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,284,48543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,212,48733,6,0,L|232:220,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,49113,2,0,P|124:240|132:180,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,49493,2,0,P|164:48|84:36,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,50062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,50252,6,0,L|40:312,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,50632,2,0,L|152:168,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,51012,2,0,P|256:116|284:204,1,170,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,284,51581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,348,51771,6,0,L|424:340,1,85
420,240,52151,2,0,L|304:248,1,85
236,284,52531,2,0,P|204:216|224:176,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,348,53100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,53290,6,0,P|468:304|500:260,2,85
316,348,53860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,284,54050,2,0,P|164:296|148:324,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,54429,2,0,P|104:248|80:296,1,85
140,348,54809,6,0,P|188:280|136:208,1,170,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,180,55379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,92,55569,2,0,L|200:120,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,203,56138,2,0,L|52:180,2,85
220,256,56708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,212,56898,2,0,P|344:156|336:116,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,40,57277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,212,57467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,320,57657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,264,57847,6,0,P|48:196|56:160,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,320,58417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,272,58607,2,0,P|316:204|308:168,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,320,59176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,308,59366,2,0,L|180:224|180:184,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,59936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,60126,2,0,P|440:220|416:180,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,124,60505,2,0,P|330:115|289:125,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,60885,2,0,P|180:256|244:324,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,312,61455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,61644,6,0,L|432:184,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,84,61834,2,0,L|372:124,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,84,62214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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108,156,63733,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,180,63923,2,0,P|88:244|92:300,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,324,64303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,280,64493,2,0,P|316:272|356:288,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,64872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,248,64967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,236,65062,2,0,P|468:164|456:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,65442,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,76,65537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,84,65632,2,0,P|356:124|356:168,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,244,66012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,212,66201,2,0,P|156:200|112:208,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,66581,2,0,P|208:168|200:124,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,72,66961,5,4,0:0:0:0:
20,128,67151,2,0,P|12:169|24:209,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,276,67531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,300,67720,2,0,P|240:332|248:372,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,340,68100,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,332,68195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,324,68290,2,0,P|408:280|404:240,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,180,68670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,168,68765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,68860,2,0,P|396:136|360:144,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,69239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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264,160,69429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,256,69809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,256,69904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,248,69999,6,0,P|384:208|376:160,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,88,70379,2,0,P|296:68|240:80,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,70758,2,0,L|96:204,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,71328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,132,71518,2,0,L|420:204,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,72088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,84,72277,2,0,L|256:180,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,136,72847,6,0,P|360:180|352:228,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,73417,2,0,P|152:180|160:228,2,85,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,76,73986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,74176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,74366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,232,74746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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112,288,75031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,276,75126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,75220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,252,75315,2,0,P|100:200|124:160,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,75695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,75790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,132,76074,6,0,P|412:184|388:224,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,280,76455,2,0,P|284:304|208:304,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,288,76834,2,0,P|96:236|104:192,1,85
392,88,77214,2,0,P|412:140|404:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,304,77594,2,0,P|52:252|60:208,1,85
436,68,77974,2,0,P|456:120|448:164,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,248,78353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,78543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,340,78733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,304,78923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,79113,2,0,P|72:176|76:132,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,79493,2,0,P|160:132|156:176,1,85
120,256,79872,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,252,80062,2,0,P|200:256|232:220,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,256,80442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,252,80632,2,0,P|312:256|280:220,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,156,81012,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,68,81201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,81391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,156,81581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,256,81771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,81866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,81961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,82056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,82151,6,0,P|304:344|356:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,320,82531,2,0,P|444:256|428:224,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,82910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,156,83100,2,0,P|208:156|164:184,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,83480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,312,83670,2,0,P|36:260|52:212,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,152,84050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,84239,2,0,P|240:80|292:92,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,84619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,212,84809,6,0,P|440:256|432:312,2,85,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,85379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,180,85569,2,0,P|224:204|184:200,2,85
364,132,86138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,80,86328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,84,86518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,140,86708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,86898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,308,87088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,344,87277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,87467,5,0,0:0:0:0:
361,295,87561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,276,87656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,256,87751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,235,87846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,214,87941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,193,88036,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Thank You Very Very much Senpai :)
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