Regraz wrote:

Fycho wrote:

1. Insane (4.71 stars, 624 notes)

真爱美丽

Hi!
Here's Regraz Mod! :3/

General

>>If you want to keep the tag 初音ミク, consider putting “Hatsune Miku”in the tags, too?

Easy

Rhythm
>>00:21:371 (1,2,3) - The rhythm sounds a little weird And the red-line 3/2 space from 2 to 3 is even harder to those newbie players than 1/2 under such a circumstance. Try this instead? http://puu.sh/fjUn7/66267c5322.jpg I know the use of 1/2 in Easy with such BPM is a little hard, but I think it is easier for newbie players to catch the rhythm for the accordance and consistency of the vocal and downbeats, also providing high readablity with the stack caused by the DS of 1/2. changed on my way
Structure
>>00:40:950 (4,1) - (Nazi) Avoid the slight overlap? It may somewhat causes the confusion of the rhythm even if the DS is stable.
Hitsound & Others
>>Dunno if this is ok now? 00:11:424 (1) - only 1/2 after its previous note. Same at 01:06:055 (3,1) -kept it

Normal

Rhythm
>>00:07:003 Consider mapping this sound out like this? http://puu.sh/fjWaH/5940943e89.jpg Leaving the sound unmapped feels a little weird cause there’s a strong music pitch varying sound. And it will only break the whitsle-pattern of your hitsound.我觉得没什么必要

Structure
>> (Nazi)【强迫症患者】01:25:161 (2,3) – 再摆歪一点或者摆成一条直线？
>> 01:34:003 (4) – HP-bar touching object.
>> 02:11:108 (1,2) –Blanket them?换成其他了
Hitsound & Others
>>Consider using smaller CS like 3.3? Since there’s an Easy and the CS of it is already 3.这个等我考虑考虑

Hard

Rhythm
>>00:50:108 (3) – Suggesting 1/1 slider here for keeping a consistency with 00:49:161 (1,2) -. Also making the sound at 00:50:582 a single note is nice imo. Same at latter sections.这样明显不好吧
>>01:06:450 Add a note here?原来有 不过删了 太难
Structure
>>Cannot understand clearly about the slightly DS variety. 有的时候1.1x 有的时候1.2x？是和滑条速度配合的吗？基本是
>>00:37:161 (2,1) – Hmm there’re some Nazis but I think it is necessary to mention this because this is too obvious.这离得太远了懒去动了
>>01:25:319 (3,1) – (Just personal reference) Maybe it will be of better performance when stacking them.nope I dont like that
Hitsound & Others
Nice

Insane

Rhythm
OK
Structure
>>00:13:003 (3,1) - ;w;
>>00:17:739 (2,3) – Why jump?I like
>>00:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) – Try this? http://puu.sh/fk3kx/fc27b5fa3b.jpg changed in another way
>>01:06:213 (2) – Better to keep regular DS here.后面的是串子 没事
>>01:19:003 (4,5) – Too sudden and large jump. Consider reducing it. Same at latter sections. Though it will provide better play-feeling to use jump to emphasize in silent/smooth music sections, these large jumps are really excessive. 这几个是强调鼓音的
>>01:32:108 (1,2) – Ctrl+G respectively for better flow不喜欢那样.
>>02:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) – Consider improving this stream shape?我觉得还行
>>02:47:582 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/fk4d9/283d972324.jpg
Hitsound & Others
OK

Good Luck！Really great map!

Crystal wrote:

[Insane]
00:09:687 (4) - 472|232, for better flow imo. flow更不好
00:38:582 (4,5,6) - Make them straight?先放着吧
01:06:371 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not smooth imo. 我喜欢这种http://puu.sh/fk6IZ/8515965cea.jpg
*02:12:055 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:21:213 (3,4) - It easily leads to a combobreak at slider, consider making the slider a bit more curved, or setting the circle to another place, which makes the flow angle a bit bigger.我觉得不会，打了也不会

[Hard]
00:37:003 - Add a circle? Here it is like a sudden surprising stop imo.没必要
01:42:687 - ^
02:54:213 (1) - 84|84, to adjust distance here. (If you change this, 02:54:687 (2) - 296|96.) yea


Fine, take a star and good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

lol i feel like its skystar or something

oh damn i just realized vincent was mapping this too LOL

Kibbleru wrote:

lol i feel like its skystar or something

oh damn i just realized vincent was mapping this too LOL
maybe you should give him some credit for the mp3, he DID BUY the CD in order to get the good quality mp3 >_<

CloudSplash16 wrote:

- ❤️ -

[General]

1. Remove all unused green lines in each diff.
2. Maybe add "shigure ui" in tags too.

[Easy]

1. Just my opinion: This map feels quite fast for Easy diff... Despite not having any 1/2, it feels more like an easier Normal. At high BPM, I think it is more suitable to have slightly lowered SV, since the absolute speed of sliders scales on BPM. Also, the map consists entirely of 1/1 and 3/2, which at such high BPM is hard for beginner players to keep up with. I think beginners will struggle to react fast enough.
2. 00:08:108 (4) - Whistle on head?
3. 00:22:161 (2) - On similar notes, you sometimes used whistle, and sometimes not, and seems a bit random. Is there some pattern that I am missing? You used whistle at head of 01:27:845 (2) and on 01:30:371 (2) so why not also on 00:22:161 (2) and 00:24:687 (2)
4. 00:23:266 (4) - Whistle on head? it matches with 00:25:792 (4) and 00:28:318 (4)
5. 00:33:687 (4) - I think clap here is not really appropriate, as it's not actually snare sound in music. It's more of a dull/low drum sound, and the map's hitsound pattern will also sound better without clap here.
6. 00:56:108 (4) - I think the finish on the end is a bit extra, not necessary.
7. 01:32:897 (2) - Whistle here too? It is the same as 00:27:213 (2)
8. 01:39:371 (4) - Same as 00:33:687 (4) and also, make 01:39:687 (1) hitsound match with 00:34:003 (1)
9. 01:48:055 (2,3) - How about moving them so the curve of (3) fits with (2) smoother: http://puu.sh/fp9Kd/8c5fa54d28.jpg
10. 01:53:108 (2) - The hitsound should match with 00:47:424 (2) I think.
11. 02:00:687 (2,3,4) - Hmm... placement here feels a bit weak. Like.. (3,4) doesn't feel very good to play. Better to have (3) above (4), maybe like: http://puu.sh/fpa6R/48a58a1757.jpg or http://puu.sh/fpabR/6d2be314f4.jpg
12. 02:11:739 (3,1) - I feel that players are very likely to hit (1) too early, because it is preceded by objects that are all offbeats, which can cause them to click at 02:12:371 or even if they know the rhythm, the lack of background beat may cause them to hesitate and not be able to click the circle in the right time. My first suggestion is this but maybe you don't like it because you want click on the last beat... so maybe you can extend (3) like this instead: http://puu.sh/fpaQj/9d8cf3c010.jpg I know it doesn't follow vocals that way, but it still goes fine with drum, and avoids confusing beginner players with that kind of rhythm change.
13. 02:57:529 (2,3) - 哇, spacing suddenly got big here. 哇
14. Note that some hitsound suggestions I made here may extend to other diffs too.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:161 (1,2) - Fix the distance spacing.
2. 01:17:897 (3,5) - Stack it?
3. 01:26:582 (4) - I think it's better to angle it a bit like this: http://puu.sh/fph75/148dec76d1.jpg It will give nicer motion from (3).
4. 02:50:108 (3,4) - Better to stack these, since the direction change is so sharp, and also consistent since you stacked in the other two kiai sections.

[Hard]

1. 00:19:318 (2) - Try to avoid putting the head so close to sliderbody of (1). You can move it to the left a bit and still keep distance spacing: http://puu.sh/fpke5/46c925e21f.jpg
2. 00:23:739 (5,5) - Doesn't really matter, but it just bothers me a bit that there aren't stacked
3. 01:19:161 (4) - Reverse works better here in my opinion. I actually thought it was that, the first time I played. It feels a bit similar to 01:17:424 (2,3)I think it's fine.
4. 01:55:792 (3) - Not sure if it's intended, but the sharp corner on the second node doesn't look good to me. I think it's better to move the third node right like this: http://puu.sh/fpkWT/63e821eb4d.jpg it's intentional:<<
5. 02:46:003 (3) - Just for appearance, I think it will look better if this is higher up, so (1,2,3) looks more even: http://puu.sh/fpljB/177170652c.jpg

[Insane]

1. 00:17:739 (2) - Sounds empty. Add a whistle on the end?
2. 00:45:845 (4) - This part flows better if you move this up a little bit: http://puu.sh/fpnjF/bf0c9fe8a2.jpg Just very little.
3. 00:51:529 (4) - This is overlapping with the hp bar. If possible, try to avoid this.
4. 00:56:424 (4,1) - Hmm.. stack doesn't fit well here imo. I think 1/2 slider rhythm would be much better. I think it works well
5. 01:27:529 (3,4,1) - Movement here feels a bit awkward. I think flow will be much better if you move (4) like this: http://puu.sh/fpnWR/74227f4022.jpg
6. 02:06:055 (1) - This is touching hp bar. Can move it down a bit?
7. 02:24:845 (4) - Maybe try Ctrl+G. it plays not good
8. 02:43:161 (2) - I think move this down, since (2,3) spacing is a bit too small compared to the others before it.
9. 02:47:266 (4,5,1) - Feels very strange in my opinion. I think it's better to move (5) like this: http://puu.sh/fpoGl/997c6e3062.jpg

Good luck!

Adol Christin wrote:

水摸一发，不用在意。

Insane

1. 00:40:634 (3) - 感觉可以再放的远一点。这里鼓点比较强，但间距跟kiai里很多没那么强的地方比还小一些。我觉得现在可以了

Hard

1. 00:43:634 (4) - 我觉得还是不叠起来好，叠起来突然刹一下，有点难受。这个没事
2. 01:17:424 (2,1) - 这两个碰到了，AR8还是看得清的。改了
3. 01:19:161 (4) - 试试把这个旋转180度，然后DS跟下一根滑条的。手感会好一些。不好
4. 01:51:687 (3) - 试试ctrl+g？不好，我改了后面的滑条
5. 02:56:739 (1,2) - 这个不平行是有意为之吧？（以防万一确认一下）顺便改了这里的ds

Normal

1. 00:33:371 (5) - 这里DS突然变0.8*了。fix
2. 02:27:055 (5) - 这里用一拍的滑条感觉更好。1/2的好

Fycho wrote:

Extra by Amamiya Yuko

lkx_Shore wrote:

SB Elements Not .png
sb\aisbg2.jpg
sb\aisbg1.jpg
现在SB能用jpg了?...

Easy:
没起作用的绿线：
00:11:266
00:31:476
00:39:055
01:14:424
02:22:634

Normal:
没起作用的绿线：
00:11:266
01:37:161
01:44:739音效我懒得弄工具查了，应该没问题?
话说n到h是不是有点危险.

Xgor wrote:

I'm an idiot

Xgor wrote:

Posted this for the wrong map before, but this time it's correct.

Well before you do that there is something that needs to be done... and that is having a SB that's more optimized!

First of all, you haven't disabled the background. How to do it here(t/55177).. As it's covered up for the entire map it only takes up 1.33x SB load.
Secondly when you change so that aisbg2.jpg is show you don't remove aisbg1.jpg from the storyboard thus having another 1.33x unnecessary SB load for those parts.

These two problems makes it so that this SB has 4.0 SB load for most of it's playing time when if optimized it should run between 1.33-1.5x.
With that issue in mind I'm gonna pop it for now.

Also you might wanna remove the unnecessary transparency in the lyric images while you're at it.

1. od7 is a bit low for me, 7.5 or 8 instead?

1. AR9.5 is too much imo, use AR9.3 looks better to me.

Avishay wrote:

Speed-ranking drama incoming?

Avishay wrote:

00:05:266 (2) - Can someone explain me why?

Avishay wrote:

What's up with changing the SV to 0.75 from 1.2 near the end of every kiai?

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Avishay wrote:

Speed-ranking drama incoming?

It is distasteful of you to say something like that, and shows you're just looking for trouble. There's nothing wrong with maps getting ranked fast.

Avishay wrote:

00:05:266 (2) - Can someone explain me why?

I think it would help if you could explain what you are confused about.

Avishay wrote:

What's up with changing the SV to 0.75 from 1.2 near the end of every kiai?

It makes perfect sense, as the song goes to a heavier half-time feel there. I would do the same if I mapped it.

Why are players always trying to cause trouble for mappers?