Dammit Setz, when am I going to see the money?
General- To be honest, this mapset lacks something imo, I don't know what to say. I feel like it's not better than what you usually do, even a bit worse, but the reason is probably because I always judge your maps on your Insane diffs, and not the other ones, although a Hard does allow to map the most out of this song.
- No fycho style snares completely tearing apart the song?
Hard- The thing I didn't like about this map is that you sometimes seem to ignore vocals or other sounds which I would've given priority, and instead you used a 1/2 rhythm of sliders and circles. But I can't really judge this, because it's still your point of view to the map of what you'd map and what you'd not.
- The map contains a lot of linear patterns, which I do not prefer, but even so, a lot of them are like this http://puu.sh/fk9oL/fad8e924aa.jpg, while a more regular curve would look better, or at least to me.
- Sometimes a curved slider would look better than straight ones, eg here 02:00:936 (3,6) - , though that's up to you
00:44:909 (4,1) - Stack pl0x?
00:56:827 (3) - Curve a bit like this to make a better movement from (2)
http://puu.sh/fka0z/a5c21584d5.jpg01:07:101 (4) - Not that it really matters, but what's with al the curvepoints lol, it makes these type of slider kinda look weird near the tail
01:24:772 (5,6,1) - Make the distances between the slider heads the same for a better look?
01:28:060 (1) - I think a 1/1 slider would work out a lot better, because of the violin pattern in the song itself, and assuming that you mapped the next 1/1 sliders to the guitar strokes.
01:39:567 (6,7,8) - I think a regular triangle would look and play better, but if you want to emphasize the 2 - w/e sound that is - , why not stack them? Though the jump does make sense, I don't like the current shape the circles make here
01:42:854 (1,2) - You mapped to the vocals perfectly every downbeat here, except for these sliders. Why not use the same rhythm as 01:40:389 (1,5) - etc? At this point 01:52:717 (1,2) - it makes sense
02:00:115 (1) - Same about the slider, unless you like them ofc.
02:02:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wouldn't a regular pentagon look better? (basically move 5, the overlap wouldn't be visible)
02:08:128 (2) - Move down for a better flow
02:09:978 (1,3) - Stack pl0x, my eyes
02:14:293 (5,6) - You could switch the slider and the circle on the timeline to emphasize the claps in the BG more (and you did use circles here 02:24:156 (5,6) - )
02:17:375 (1) - You kind of ignore the vocal on the red tick with the return of the slider
02:19:841 (1) - This seems like a very strong beat in the song, wouldn't it be better to use a 1/1 slider instead? (for the vocals, and the chord change overall)
02:26:621 (7,8,1) - Equal distances?
02:32:169 - You could move the break to this point.
02:54:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same patterns as you did here? 00:28:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
03:08:334 (6) - Move to the right and down for better flow?
03:33:813 (1) - Same as 01:28:060 (1) -
03:45:526 (7,8) - Same about the shape
03:56:005 (4) - Wow my eyes
04:00:936 (4) - You are hurting me
04:06:690 (6) - Let this one blanket 04:07:101 (1) - So the flow would be better as well
04:12:238 (2) - You could use a 1/1 slider here, or if you want to map this guitar note, 04:12:443 (2) - you could leave out this one, it seems kind of unnecessary to me, and it would emphasize the strong beat.
04:24:361 (1) - Same about ignoring the red tick
04:25:594 (3) - Idk why but the slider end feels wrong, because of the vocals. You could use 3 1/2 sliders instead (you used those more throughout the song)
04:29:293 (1,3) - y u no blanket. i think 04:29:293 (1) - to 04:29:909 (2) - would play better as well
04:45:731 (3,4,1) - Distances pls?
04:49:019 (1,2) - Blanket pls?
04:51:484 (5) - You used this circle nicely to map the long violin note, but you used a spinner in the end, which makes sense. But you could try to move the spinner to 04:58:882 - and let it end at 05:03:813 - or map a circle on 04:58:882 - followed by that spinner
Normal- Not my visual style, but I think you used the limited complexity well for the rhythms in the song
- The 1/1 feels wrong sometimes, and I know that it might fit some sounds in the song but then again, vocals>BG music anytime. Again, up to you
00:37:512 (2,3,4) - You make a nice triangle here but not here 00:22:717 (2,3,4) - or 00:32:580 (2,3,4) - ?
01:04:019 (2) -
http://puu.sh/fkgOb/e43f13032a.png01:12:032 (3,4) - Looks a bit uhm..meh to me. Curve them a bit or something
01:36:690 (3,4,1,2) - 01:39:156 (3) - Make this a nice square?
02:02:991 (2) - You use this slider to emphasize the claps but not here? 02:04:224 (4) - Idk if those 1/1 circles are any better
02:17:375 (1) - maybe a 3/2 slider would fit here (for the vocals), followed by a circle of course
02:32:169 - same thing about the break
02:55:799 (5,1) - I think you are going to confuse players with using the sliders like this. (is this what they call "polarity"). Also I don't think the slider starts are mapped tot the right sound . This 04:47:169 (1,2,3) - would be better
02:58:060 (3,4) - This looks so plain... Why not curve them or something?
Same thing about the end.
Wow this mod took me longer than pretty much any mod I did before.
Good luck and have a star