MEGAtive wrote:

Verneeeh~ o/ Muueeegooa~ :v
Mod dri queue. Lagunya keren. Lebih Energetic dri Penerbangan Terang :v Dan penuh tempat buat perangkap SV lololol pff..

[General]
Mapset: Love It
Graphic: 1366x768 Good
Hitsound: Kykny udh gk ad masalah
Timing: Kykny sempet ad masalah offset tuh tempo hari.... But noprob.
Metadate: Kykny sih udh bagus....

[HYPER]

Mods

00:11:483 - Ad Drum. Gk d tambah? added
01:05:077 ke 01:08:202 - Mungkin satu not bsa d rubah jdi LN 4/4 keep, krena ada SV jadi sulit ntar mainnya
01:42:498 - Kedengeran ad drum. Gk d tambah? added
01:52:498 - ^ ^
01:57:420 - ^ ^
02:02:577 ke 02:05:702 - Mungkin satu not bsa d jadiin LN 4/4 ngikutin Gitarnya.... keep, krena ada SV jadi sulit ntar mainnya
02:07:577 ke 02:10:702 - ^ ^
02:07:420 - Ad Drum. Coba d tambah not added

[STANDARD]

Mods

00:54:998 - Msih ad drum. Gk d tambah? fixed
01:42:030 (102030|2) - Gk ad drum. Pindah k 01:42:286 aj fixed
01:42:498 - Ad drum. ^
01:52:498 - ^ ^

Ambil Starku~ huehue~ ~(>.<~)

schwarzvgrune wrote:

EXTRA

00:12:108 (12108|1,12108|2) - 1 note is enough, no strong beat. actually it same with 00:11:483 (11483|1,11483|2) - they had same instrument but only hit with a lower power.
00:01:952 (1952|3,2264|2) - - pitch ascends, not descends, adjust accordingly oh sure^^
00:30:077 (30077|2,30077|0,30077|3,30233|1,30233|2,30389|0,30389|1,30545|3,30545|2,30545|0,30702|1,30702|2,30858|0,30858|1,31014|3,31014|0,31014|2) -
heavy on the left, repattern a bit you're right re-patterned~

00:33:202 (33202|1,34139|1,35702|2,36639|2) - consistently 2/4. slight difference in pitch its easy to confuse, try 25% changed too :3
00:38:202 (38202|1,39139|1) - ^
01:18:514 (78514|3) - wrong LN, no guitar melody here oh right, my bad
01:18:045 (78045|2) - should be 3 x 2/4 LN, the 2nd and 3rd are of the same pitch, but pressed twice, so you can either use 2 x 2/4 or use 1 x 4/4 rip my english ;w; sorry i can't understand this well but i made them like this (split those LNs) if possible, might you could show me the picture to explain your mod :3
01:19:139 (79139|2,79452|1) - like this, same pitch, but pressed twice, and you decided to use 2 different LN to express them accurately. rip my english * i don't understand it well. sorry :< *
01:20:077 (80077|0,80545|3,81014|2) - also like this *
01:23:514 (83514|2) - should also be 6/4 x 2, not 12/4 x 1, pitch here is the same, but pressed 4x *
01:22:577 (82577|3,83045|0) - this is the 1st two
01:26:014 (86014|2) - ^
01:27:577 - LN until 01:28:827 - there is no change. consistently sustained. same here, rip my english

02:25:389 (145389|3,145389|2,145702|2,145702|1) - use 3 notes, you've been using them 02:24:139 (144139|1,144139|3,144139|0,144452|3,144452|2,144452|0,144764|3,144764|0,144764|1) - i would keep them :3 since that 3 noters are for additional soft cymbal sound

recheck your LNs, there are some mistakes still. might you could show me where are they :3

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi verny~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~ hi grune-san
M4M o(≧v≦)o~~好棒
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in [b]Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？ no hitsound? sorry still WIP

[centre]

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )


mod is not complete yet, i'll continue in a bit
EDIT: mod done, there is one section that is unclear thus i cannot mod

BASIC

00:00:389 (389|0) - snap 00:01:483 - ? just for the sake of difficulty yup
00:11:639 (11639|3,11952|2) - same pitch, pressed twice, you use 2 different LN to express, on higher diffs you did not do this... so the LN seems to be very random for me at least. (i.e. being consistent would be good. if same pitch pressed multiple times is expressed as 1 LN then do so across the whole diffs? vice versa. it could be both ways.) i know what do you mind, for easy diff it's no problem if not following pitch, because amature/newbie play it and i always play this diff lol, i've to keep it
01:30:545 (90545|1,91014|2,91639|1) - ctrl H same reason as STD. fixed

02:07:577 (127577|1,128202|2,128827|3,129452|0,130077|1,130702|2) - you expressed this part only alternately on higher diffs, while as here, you expressed them consistently... i don't see any reason as to why would you alternately map them on higher diffs, i personally prefer consistent representation on a phase (except if the phase has changed) same reason like first mod, well i know it's incosistency part, but if mapper always make pattern like this again again and again, it's so boring~ like BN say to me, ok keep it

STD

its good already, the pattern could be better though... try to alternate between 12 and 34 (2 hands press alternately rather than stacked somewhere)
01:07:577 (67577|2,67577|3,68202|1,68202|0) -
01:05:702 (65702|0,65702|1,66327|2,66327|3) -

for example 01:00:077 (60077|3,60389|2,60702|0,61014|1,62577|3,62889|2,63202|0,63514|1) -
00:03:202 - up to you really... for example http://puu.sh/gXDaq/c89fec4d99.jpg keep, i will think again

01:10:077 (70077|0,70077|2,70233|1,70545|2,70702|1,70702|3,71170|2,71327|1,71639|0,71952|2,71952|1,72577|3,72577|1,72733|2,73045|1,73202|0,73202|2,73670|1,73827|2) - something like this is more balanced on both hands..

01:17:577 (77577|2,78045|3,78670|0) - this seems random to me, how about using short note instead?
01:17:577 - 2 x 2/4 ((dont use LN)
01:18:045 (78045|3) - 3x 2/4 dont use LN fixed
01:18:670 (78670|0) - this is correct

etc at the end you copy the pattern as well, a suggestions would be to overall make it balanced on both hands (2 hands pressed 2 notes if there are 2 notes)

HYPER

00:01:639 (1639|2,1952|1) - 2/4 length. fixed
00:21:327 (21327|2,21483|2,21639|2,21795|2) - so fast>_< how about to 2 ok
balanced press
00:19:452 - use 2 note? you express this beat with 2 note. repattern accordingly if you agree no, it already sync with LN
00:24:452 (24452|1,24452|0,24764|1,24764|0) - repattern to enable 2 hands to press this note, you do that here 00:26:952 (26952|3,26952|0,27264|0,27264|3) - 00:29:452 (29452|0,29452|2,29764|2,29764|0) - fixed
00:39:608 (39608|0) - 3 better balance ^
00:56:327 (56327|3) - this should be snapped, its different with 00:55:077 (55077|0,57577|1) -
that is the same with this 00:58:827 (58827|2) - keep
01:05:077 (65077|3,65077|1,66327|3,66327|2) - use LN as well? for consistency hmm, SV here.. so hard to play if change into LN again, you can try it
01:07:577 (67577|1,67577|3) - ^ ^
02:02:577 (122577|2,122577|3,123202|2,123202|1,123827|2,123827|3,124452|1,124452|2,125077|3,125077|2) - ^ ^
02:07:577 - ^ ^


\01:10:077 (70077|3,70702|2,71014|1,71795|0,72108|1,72577|3,73202|2,73514|1,74295|3,74608|2,75077|0,75702|1,76014|2,76795|1,77108|2) - (⊙o⊙)？ very random to me, i cannot tell which one you're following, the background guitar melody, or the low-pitched guitar bass accompaniments? they're mixed somehow, and a lot of snapping mistake. please repattern, or tell me which one you're following and i'll point out some of the mistake ah my bad, i will make this with another pattern

01:17:577 (77577|1) - 2/4 x 2 LN, same pitch, pressed 2x. but i can understand why you use this. fixed
01:18:045 (78045|3) - this however, is incorrect, the pitch is not the same. 2/4 x 3, only the 2nd and 3rd are of the same pitch and pressed 2x, the 1st pitch is different ^

01:57:889 (117889|2,118514|1,119139|2,119764|0,120389|3,121014|1,121639|2) - use 2 notes? more emphasis, stronger beat

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

xLoupGarou wrote:

「Wafu ~ Queue」

Nyahaha, Well I really can't say anything so let me just start modding ;P [|0|1|2|3|]

Garou Mod

BEGINNER

00:00:389 (389|0) - First of all is the LN it would be nice if you end it here instead 00:00:389 (389|0) - because of the *clank* sound that continues it still keep

00:02:577 (2577|0) - Don't forget to delete this no, this high sound

00:01:483 (1483|1) - Move to 3 fixed

00:01:952 (1952|2) - Move to 1 ^

00:02:264 (2264|3) - Move to 2 ^

00:02:577 (2577|2) - Move to 3 ^

00:09:139 (9139|0) - Move to 1 ^

00:11:014 (11014|0) - Move to 2 so it would be easier for the player to anticipate the next note ^

00:11:952 (11952|2) - Move the LN to 0 ^

00:12:577 (12577|0) - Move the LN to 2 ^

00:14:452 (14452|3) - Move the LN to 0 ^

00:17:577 (17577|3,17577|0) - Ctrl + H ^

00:20:077 (20077|3,21327|0) - Ctrl + H ^

00:31:014 (31014|3) - Move to 2 ^

00:31:795 (31795|2,31795|0,32264|1,32264|3) - Ctrl + H ^

00:38:827 (38827|0) - Move to 2 ^

00:39:452 (39452|3,39452|0,39764|1,39764|2,40077|2,40077|3,40545|2,40545|1,41014|1,41014|0) - How about doing it like this > http://puu.sh/gYA9C/c3fd3b2891.png nice

00:47:577 (47577|1) - Move to 3 no, consistency part

00:49:139 (49139|2) - Move to 3 ^

00:51:639 (51639|1) - Move to 2 ^

01:24:764 (84764|1,84764|3) - Remove 1 note the sound is not like this 01:24:452 (84452|1,84452|3) - or you can follow this > http://puu.sh/gYAAS/b4328fb4a1.png ok

01:38:045 (98045|1,98045|2,98514|1,98514|3,98983|2,98983|0) - How about like this? wut?

STANDARD

In the first chorus the notes are in mayhem, 00:46:327 - instead of putting 2 notes in here why not put it in a sound/beat that is this > 00:46:014 - try to hear the difference but just this part try to listen the chorus again. 00:46:327 stream sound here, you can check in diff Hyper and 00:46:014 no hear sound like that

Also What I see is that your having a hard time making patterns, some parts are somehow breaking, some are in not in a proper hand balance although there are bad parts in mapping your LN placement a timing is great it just matches the song. hmm..


That all I can say,I don't really have a single ranked map so I won't mind if you decline most of my suggestions GOOD LUCK! thanks your mod is really helpful

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3

BEGINNER

00:00:389 finish this here 00:01:483 ok
00:29:764 (29764|2) - maybe change it to LN? your choice keep, consistency pattern
00:54:608 (54608|3) - I know you intended on starting this note there for the drum sounds, but i personally think it's better to start it here for playing 00:54:452. You did that in this part 01:41:952 keep, still diffirent stair sound
01:18:670 There is a LN in the guitar sounds in the previous notes, maybe switch keep
01:52:108 change starting point to here 01:51:952 ^
02:02:108 (122108|3) - change to 02:02:264 ^
02:16:327 add a note, the strength of the sound is similar to the previous ones that have two notes. added

STANDARD

00:10:545 I suggest you to place a note here in column 3 since you have also put a note in 00:11:170 that is similar. fixed
00:29:764 LN in column 3 no
01:18:827 add a short note ^
http://puu.sh/gZGdz/b9832e57d6.jpg i know you intended on making it easier than the HYPER difficulty, but i do not think those notes really fit the sound.
how about this?? fixed with another pattern

HYPER

00:13:514 (13514|2) - Delete, the sound is not strong enough for there to be 3 notes cymball here
00:14:452 add a note in 0 there's a stronger beat than putting 1 note already sync with LN
00:14:608 (14608|0) - move to 2 for a better pattern no unbalance
00:19:452 add a note in 0 same reason as above^
00:19:608 (19608|0) - move to 2 same reason as above^ LN here
01:00:389 01:01:014 01:01:639 01:02:264 01:02:889 01:03:514 01:04:139 01:04:764 how about adding a note to all these? i think these ones have a slightly stronger beat. ok
01:17:889 - missing a note put it in column 2 fixed
01:18:358 - same reason ^ place it in column 1 ^
01:18:983 - same reason ^ place it in column 1 ^
01:21:483 - add a note in column 2 you cannot ignore putting 2 notes on beats. ^
01:21:639 (81639|2) - move to column 0 ^
01:23:983 add a note in column 1 ^
01:24:139 (84139|1) - move to column 3 ^
01:26:483 do the same thing as above. ^
01:28:827 there's a beat, add a note ^
02:19:061 (139061|2) - i think this was a mistake, move to 02:19:139 ^

Nice song Excellent beatmap! Hope my mod helped Good luck on getting this to ranked sugoi~ nice mod

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Yo Verniy_Chan nya~ avalon-kun :v
mod as requested

OK, hitsound is good, no delay =w=)b well, this HS from my previous map :v and still need sample HS
testplay testplay . . . before reject xD dozo~

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nyaoo~

BEGINNER
00:00:389 (389|0) - i think LN end here 00:01:483 -
00:01:483 (1483|3) - make dis into LN ? end here 00:01:795 - ok
00:05:077 (5077|3,5389|1) - move to 2 and 4 ^
00:22:264 (22264|1) - to LN ? i hear long sound here ^
00:32:264 (32264|3,32577|2) - i hear a cymbal . . . well maybe need a cymbal HS too i think fix soon
00:59:764 - add note ? no
01:11:327 (71327|1,71639|0) - shift (geser) 1 column to right, after that . . . 01:11:952 (71952|1,71952|2) - move to 1 and 4 ok
01:14:139 (74139|3) - move to 2 and 01:14:452 (74452|2,74452|1) - shift 1 column to right fixed diffirent pattern
01:17:264 (77264|1) - move to 1 ? . . .more fun to plays no for me lol
01:18:514 (78514|1) - seems weird, delete it . . . and add note on 01:18:983 - for guitar and drum too fixed
01:39:764 (99764|2,100077|2) - move to 4 and 1 . .. try it fixed
01:57:577 (117577|2,117889|1) - ctrl G
ok, good yay

STANDARD
00:04:764 - add note for drum clap ok
00:09:764 - ^ ^
00:06:952 - and 00:07:264 - add note no
00:11:639 - and 00:12:264 - maybe add a single note too ? ^
00:15:545 (15545|0) - to 3 no, consistency part
00:20:545 (20545|0) - ^ fixed
00:22:264 - to LN (same as my suggestion on BEGINNER DIFF) ^
00:26:327 (26327|0) - to 4 for better balance keep
00:27:577 (27577|3) - to 1 ? ^
00:29:764 - add note ? no, still low
00:32:264 (32264|2,32577|3) - ctrl G . . . beware, swap the hitsound too
00:37:577 (37577|3) - to 1 fixed
00:40:077 (40077|2) - to 4 ^
00:54:608 (54608|2,54686|3,54764|1,54842|0,54920|2,54998|3) - ctrl G . .better flow xD
01:16:639 (76639|0) - to 3 no
01:17:577 - add note on 4 , for impact ^
01:19:139 (79139|3,79452|2,79764|1) - make this note to LN ?. . . maybe better i think no, conflict 01:19:764 (79764|1) stream long
ok, good . . maybe some part is a little difficult for Standard yup, already reduce difficult from previous mod

HYPER
00:01:483 (1483|3) - LN end here 00:02:577 - fixed
00:01:483 - try this, more fit i think http://puu.sh/gZLFJ/4c0881313d.jpg nice, fix with another pattern
00:04:452 (4452|1,4530|0,4608|1,4686|2) - hmm . . . what is meaning for ? . . . i didn't hear any 1/4 sound here guitar stream sound
00:06:952 - same reason ^ ^
00:09:452 (9452|1,9530|0,9608|1,9686|0) - nah this is clear . . . i hear 1/4 sound there. ..good -_-
00:11:170 (11170|2,11248|1) - if you follow the guitar, i think its better to make LN instead . . .cuz 1/4 is really weird xD ok
00:22:264 - to LN ? this time no, limited note place
00:43:905 (43905|0) - snap to 00:43:827 - make 2 notes instead, for drum fixed
01:05:077 (65077|1,65077|3,66327|3,66327|2) - why not LN ? ... or 01:05:702 (65702|1,65702|2,66952|1,66952|2) - change to SN
01:10:077 - lol this part is harder than this 01:42:577 - and yeah, the tempo is different , slow tempo is harder than high tempo ? lmao XD remap orz
01:10:077 - until 01:16:639 - hmm, maybe better to be remapped xD . . . come on . . . xD ^
01:42:889 - , 01:43:514 - , 01:44:139 - , 01:44:764 - suggest to add note . . . for make this more challenging, this is kiai time anyway added
01:58:202 - , 01:58:827 - add note like you do in this 01:57:889 - ^
02:06:248 - add note, i hear 1/4 sound here ^ ^
02:11:248 - same, 1/4 sound here ^
02:21:248 - add note too, 1/4 sound ^
02:22:342 (142342|1) - delete ok
02:22:889 - 02:23:202 - 02:23:514 - add note for evry SN like you did i here 02:24:139 - ^

OK maybe this mapset need more improvement roger >.<)7
good luck Verniy_Chan yup

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

xD . . . i hope my mod still useful . . yup~ useful :3
cuz another mod is come before me =_= >.<)a gomen~

- R e b a - wrote:

Hi~ came to mod from queue

Columns: 0 | 1 | 2 | 3

Muu's EXTRA

00:21:483 (21483|3) - delete same with v
00:21:639 (21639|0) - delete, placing two notes there does not really fit in there. actually they're for kick sound same with 00:18:983 -
01:15:897 ~ 01:16:170 - change them to beat notes, the place where the sound really matches with those notes are only here 01:16:170 ~ 01:16:327 sure thing ^^ because someone said that too, beside that i doubt this myself xD hihi
01:30:077 delete one note. owh sure you're right^^ deleted on 3
01:30:389 delete one note. i would keep this :3
01:33:514 add a note in column 3 i would keep this too, it has same sound with 01:32:889 and ^

Nice song Excellent beatmap! Hope my mod helped Good luck on getting this to ranked

Muu-chan wrote:

update desu~ sorry for delay verniy chan hihi
http://puu.sh/h04sL/d328be9a31.osu

edit: woops kelupaan sedikit verniy chan, tolong add note di kolom 1 yh 00:11:327 - xD
makasih verniy chan :3

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

HYPER

00:11:170 (11170|2) - change to NM like another pattern and 00:11:327 - add one keep
00:44:295 - add two added
01:19:295 - ,01:19:608 - ,01:19:920 - add one all added

I'm sorry I can not be much help no preoblem des~, good mod
really nice song! \(>w<)/
Good luck

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Muu's EXTRA

00:04:608 (4608|1,4608|2) - remove one actually it is the same kick as 00:03:983 - and other kick sound :3 so i would keep this
00:09:998 - ,00:09:920 - ,00:09:842 - there's have sound uh yes you're right, but i think it would be too hard if i add them :<
00:53:514 (53514|3) - remove it is for kick sound :3 like you could see, i put 3 notes for kick in this section ^^
01:12:772 (72772|3,72811|2,72850|1,72889|0) - I don't understand it... ay, it is 1/8 desu :3 there're 1/8 there
01:25:077 (85077|2) - move to 3 for balance oh sure moved^^
01:25:702 (85702|2) - move to 1 ^ moved too
01:15:858 (75858|0,75897|3,75936|2,75975|1,76014|0,76053|3,76092|2,76131|1,76170|0,76209|3,76248|2,76287|1,76327|0,76327|3) - ^ same desu^^

ModernTiger wrote:

Hello, I'm here to M4M, by Moe Hunter Mania Queue!
Please note that all the list below are just suggestions. If the suggestion feels useless, feel free reject that.
If change is strongly suggested, I'll check that as a ★.

[General]
Seems OK in here!

[Patterns]

HYPER

00:04:452 (4452|1,4530|0,4608|1,4686|2) - Make a long note here. keep
00:16:327 - Make a long note here. Also 00:16:952 ^
00:24:295 (24295|1) - Move note 2 to 1. ^
00:24:452 (24452|2,24452|0,24764|0,24764|2) - Move notes 1,3 to 2,4 fixed
00:25:077 (25077|1,25077|3) - Move notes 2,4 to 1,3 ^
★00:39:452 (39452|0,39530|1,39608|2,39764|3,39842|2,39920|1) - Unnecessary notes. Or, it should be more faster. (1/16) hmm.. i will ask someone for this
★00:55:077 (55077|0,56327|3,57577|1) - Electric guitar sound is during. Long notes should be more longer. (+1/8) fixed
01:58:202 (118202|0) - Add a note at 2 no
01:58:514 (118514|2) - Move a note 3 to 4 fixed
01:58:827 (118827|3) - Move a note 4 to 1 ^
02:01:327 (121327|0) - Add a note at 2 no

Draftnell wrote:

Hello Verniy >w<

Izin nge MOD :3

BEGINNER

hee ? gak ada masalah for this diff >w<hore~ \(>w<)/

STANDARD

00:16:952 (16952|2) - move to 4 no, consistency part
00:43:983 (43983|0) - ^ fixed
00:44:139 (44139|3) - ^ to 1 ^
01:57:420 - missing note ? added
02:02:264 - umm kasih note 2 deh >w< ^

good pattern hyype

HYPER

00:02:420 (2420|1) - delete fixed
00:39:530 (39530|1) - delete ^
00:39:842 (39842|2) - ^ ^
02:02:108 - add note 1 no, 1 note cukup
02:02:186 (122186|2) - delete no, stair sound dr note diatas
02:02:264 - add note 1 no

ok that's all
and this song its arghh >w< very very cool
take my STARS WARS.. ok hore again~ :3

GOOD LUCK

ModernTiger wrote:

Hello, I'm here to M4M, by Moe Hunter Mania Queue!
Please note that all the list below are just suggestions. If the suggestion feels useless, feel free reject that.
If change is strongly suggested, I'll check that as a ★.

Muu's EXTRA

00:27:264 (27264|1,27264|2,27264|3) - There are vocals here. Add some notes.
★00:39:530 (39530|1,39608|2,39686|3) and 00:39:842 (39842|3,39920|2,39998|1) - Unnecessary notes. Or, it should be more faster. (1/16) desu yo xD i also doubt about this :3 so i decided to delete note on 00:39:530 and 00:39:842 - also add a note on 00:39:373 - i think it is much better :3
00:45:077 - Too monotonous. Follow electric guitar or vocal.
01:42:577 - Same as above.

i would keep the rest^^ hihi

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Pls update first^^ then forum PM or in-game PM me if all updated. I'll MOD it right away >w<)b

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Normal MOD]

[Muu's EXTRA]
01:16:209 (76209|3,76287|1) - Remove not necessary this makes it unbalance and dis is a ghost notes

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[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Normal MOD]

As for my opinion the difficulty names are better to be normal font what i mean is just like this..
BEGINNER = Beginner
STANDARD = Standard
HYPER = Hyper
Muu's EXTRA = Muu's Extra
Just like the other ranked mapsets and to be formal XD hmmm~ ok

|1|2|3|4|
[BEGINNER]
Notice this first 02:18:827 (138827|1,138827|3,139295|1,139295|3) - this is not necessary to be stacked because of their rhythm/beats so... 02:18:045 (138045|0,138045|2,138827|1,138827|3) - Ctrl + H to make a consistent and continuous pattern. fixed

[STANDARD]
00:11:639 Add note to |2| for snare added

[HYPER]
00:04:530 (4530|0,4686|2) - Remove not necessary because this is a ghost notes then 00:04:608 (4608|1) - Move to |3| for pattern fixed

00:09:530 (9530|0,9686|0) - Remove not necessary same reason as above then 00:09:608 (9608|1) - Move to |1| for pattern keep, i think this pattern sound still like 00:07:030 (7030|3,7186|3)

00:15:233 (15233|1) - Move to |4| instead for pattern and hand balance/Comfortable hand coordination keep for a while

00:21:952 (21952|2,22264|1,22264|2,22577|1) - I highly suggest to make this long notes instead for guitar pitch Visualization of my suggestion fixed

00:57:733 (57733|3) - Move to |3| for pattern and hand balance/Comfortable hand coordination keep

02:02:186 (122186|2) - Remove not necessary because this is a ghost note ok

More LiSA!!! Nice map!! >w<)b hyype~
This is my first time to give star since i've become BN here take this go for rank! >w<)/ hyype~ Lv.2 \(>.<)7
I support this Good luck!~ =w=)b hyype~ Lv.max \(>w<)/

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Muu-chan wrote:

gomen dlm bentuk text ;w; kalau verniy chan kerepotan, nnti aku ganti bentuk rar deh :3
desu

Starry- wrote:

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1. Don't really see why you wouldn't want to put it here 00:45:077 - or 00:44:920 -

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Hmm.. Why is the diff names Beginner -> Standard -> Hyper -> Extra? Seems really weird.
Go for something like, Easy Normal Hard Insane, or Beginner Standard Hyper Another (only really used for songs from rhythm games though).

Consider increasing the drain rate on Extra to something from 8.1~8.5. The map is pretty basic, contains mainly chords which brings drain up easily, so higher drain fits better with the spread.

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[Extra]

The intro hitsounds sound a bit too loud.

As a general start, a lot of the patterns (especially in the start) have a lot of unnecessary jacks which don't play particularly well.

For example, something like this:
00:02:577 (2577|1,2577|0,2577|2) - ...

Before

could easily be turned into something like this:

After

Which makes it a lot more balanced and feels nicer to play. The 3 note jacks just seem unnecessary.

00:21:327 (21327|1) - ... A pattern like this could be cleaner:

Ex.1

00:22:733 (22733|3,23045|0,23202|3,23358|0,23670|3,23827|0,23983|3,24139|0) - CTRL+H this. Trust me. Balance becomes a lot better.

00:31:717 (31717|1) - Ghost

01:12:733 (72733|0,72772|3,72811|2,72850|1,72889|0) - This doesn't play well, and the noise is too quiet imo. You can also hear the small jittery drum noise later on too, so there's no point mapping to this in 1/8.

01:17:420 (77420|2) - Add a note at 1, kick

01:34:373 (94373|1,94452|2,94608|2,94686|1,94764|2,94842|1,94920|2,94998|1,95077|2) - The trill inbetween both hands doesn't play too well here ;_;.

01:42:108 (102108|3,102186|2,102264|1,102342|0,102420|1,102498|2,102577|3,102577|1,102577|0) - This is a big drum roll, it can be emphasised more.
Try something like this: (The handswapping emphasises the drum well.)

Ex.2

Or, if you want to go for something more smoother, try this.

Ex.3

[Hyper]

00:11:170 (11170|2) - This should be a normal note, since the other guitar sounds 00:10:077 (10077|0,10233|1,10545|0,10702|2,10858|1) - aren't LNs.

00:13:514 (13514|2) - Remove, not strong enough for 2 notes and you use 2 notes later.

00:21:327 (21327|1,21405|3,21483|1,21561|3,21639|1,21717|3,21795|1,21873|3) - Aa this doesn't play too well, best to make it a trill on right hand only, or to spread it out in 3 cols.

00:42:577 (42577|2) - You can end this LN in earlier red tick.

01:13:514 (73514|0) - Move to 3

01:16:014 (76014|3) - Move to 0 (these two suggestions prevent 1/2 trill on either hand)

02:11:170 (131170|3) - Move to 2
02:11:248 (131248|2) - Move to 3
02:11:327 (131327|3) - Move to 2
02:11:483 (131483|2) - Move to 3 - imo plays better like this.

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Seems like Extra needs the most attention right now.
Rest of the diffs look pretty solid too.

Goodluck!

Starry- wrote:

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1. Don't really see why you wouldn't want to put it here 00:45:077 - or 00:44:920 -

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Hmm.. Why is the diff names Beginner -> Standard -> Hyper -> Extra? Seems really weird.
Go for something like, Easy Normal Hard Insane, or Beginner Standard Hyper Another (only really used for songs from rhythm games though). i will ask for GD owner for name diff (Extra)

Consider increasing the drain rate on Extra to something from 8.1~8.5. The map is pretty basic, contains mainly chords which brings drain up easily, so higher drain fits better with the spread. hmm... (think long~ lol)

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[Hyper]

00:11:170 (11170|2) - This should be a normal note, since the other guitar sounds 00:10:077 (10077|0,10233|1,10545|0,10702|2,10858|1) - aren't LNs. fixed

00:13:514 (13514|2) - Remove, not strong enough for 2 notes and you use 2 notes later. hmm, ok

00:21:327 (21327|1,21405|3,21483|1,21561|3,21639|1,21717|3,21795|1,21873|3) - Aa this doesn't play too well, best to make it a trill on right hand only, or to spread it out in 3 cols. fixed

00:42:577 (42577|2) - You can end this LN in earlier red tick. ^

01:13:514 (73514|0) - Move to 3 moved

01:16:014 (76014|3) - Move to 0 (these two suggestions prevent 1/2 trill on either hand) ^

02:11:170 (131170|3) - Move to 2 ^
02:11:248 (131248|2) - Move to 3 ^
02:11:327 (131327|3) - Move to 2 ^
02:11:483 (131483|2) - Move to 3 - imo plays better like this. ^

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Seems like Extra needs the most attention right now.
Rest of the diffs look pretty solid too. hype \(>w<)/

Goodluck!

Muu-chan wrote:

edit: kelupaan sedikit verniy chan ><"
tolong dihapusin note ini dong 01:12:655 (72655|1) & 01:57:264 (117264|3) - terus note 01:12:733 (72733|3) - tolong dipindahin ke kolom 2 yh verniy chan makasih ><"

arviejhay wrote:

hello u req via pm

1,2,3,4

[Beginner]
00:02:889 (2889|1,3514|2) - ctrl + J? keep
00:11:639 (11639|3,12264|1) - ctrl + J ok
00:36:952 (36952|2,37264|2) - move 1 column to the left if possible. If you apply it, 00:38:827 (38827|1) - move this to 3 fixed
00:40:545 (40545|3,40545|2,41014|0,41014|1,41327|2) - ctrl +H ok
00:44:764 (44764|1,45389|2) - ctrl + J no, consistency part
00:55:077 (55077|1,55702|0) - ctrl + J 00:56:327 (56327|2) - then move to 4, then 00:56:952 (56952|3) - move to 3 then 00:57:577 (57577|1,58202|0) - ctrl + J fixed
01:05:077 (65077|2,65702|1) - ctrl + J keep
01:20:077 (80077|3,80545|1) - move to 1 and 4 fixed
01:38:514 (98514|3,98514|1,98983|2,98983|0) - ctrl + J, its boring if the patterns are repeated ok
01:52:577 - same as 00:55:077 (55077|1,55702|0) - mod yup for consistency
02:16:014 (136014|0,136014|2,136327|1,136327|3) - ctrl + J then 02:16:795 (136795|0) - move to 2 ok

[Standard]
00:32:577 (32577|0) - move to 2 then moved
00:32:889 (32889|1) - move to 3 (apply it even you didn't apply the first one.) ^
01:24:764 (84764|1) - move to 1 no

The rest seems ok to me

That's all i can find
good luck!