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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 April 2015 at 12:16:04

Artist: amazarashi
Title: Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-
Source: 東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A
Tags: tokyo ghoul root a season 2 ending Seasons die one after another
BPM: 181
Filesize: 13140kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (3.18 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Insane (4.18 stars, 315 notes)
  4. Normal (2.01 stars, 131 notes)


Download: amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-
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MY FIRST RANKED MAP :3

*If you downloaded this map before 02/04/2015, please re-download it

東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A ED Theme
amazarashi - 季節は次々死んでいく -東京喰種トーキョーグール√A Edit-


Special Thanks to
  1. -Bakari-
  2. Atrue
  3. -Nya-
  4. Gaia
  5. Sieg
  6. KSHR
  7. Gamu
  8. wendao
  9. Haruto_Aizawa
  10. theramdans
  11. farel12345
  12. No Dap
  13. ByBy_ChAn
  14. -Dave Strider-
  15. RzHr
  16. CelsiusLK
  17. Sky Trias
  18. mrturtle99
  19. SoGa
  20. monstrata
  21. Setsurei
  22. Peachtrees
  23. Neil Leo
  24. Fort
  25. Sognux
  26. Squirrel
  27. jloughman14
  28. NeK0Nyqn
  29. JBHyperion


posted
so i played your insane diff the day before yesterday and i thought it was fine, but now i updated and it's all out of sync, just wondering what happened? i tested it a little bit and 180 bpm and 115 offset seem to be the best although i think i goes a little slower later (like 179 ish)
posted
I'm sorry. I changed the MP3 >_<
Please re-download >_<
posted
No problem man, i'm just glad there's someone who's actually making a Nice map with this beautiful song. :)
posted
Thanks :D
posted
Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General
  1. Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  2. Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  3. You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them

Easy
  1. 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  2. 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  3. 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic
  4. 00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal
  5. 00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano
  6. 00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess
  7. 01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
  8. 01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion
  9. 01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic
Continue later with Normal and Hard :3
posted
Umm,,,, sorry. I can't reply one per one of your mods. There's something i accept and i don't accept it. But for the general, i accept all of them.
Thanks!

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General
  1. Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  2. Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  3. You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them

Easy
  1. 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  2. 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  3. 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic
    ][img
    http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot381-0.jpg[/img:1337]
  4. 00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal
  5. 00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano
  6. 00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess
  7. 01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
  8. 01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion
  9. 01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic
Continue later with Normal and Hard :3
posted
from my queue!

Normal:
+maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song
+if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better
+removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to!

Hard:
+00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot)
+removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better
+removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better

i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck!
posted

-Dave Strider- wrote:

Your mods. Thanks :D
from my queue!

Normal:
+maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song - fixed
+if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better - fixed
+removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to! - yes, i don't have to change this :3

Hard:
+00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot) - fixed in another way :3
+removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better - fixed
+removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better - fixed

i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck! THANKS :D
Thanks for modding :3
posted
Mod
General
  1. Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg
  2. Centang "Letterbox during breaks"
  3. Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ?
  4. Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4?


Easy :
  1. 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ?
  2. 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan


Normal :
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - bad flow, ubah arahnya
  2. 00:26:790 (1,2) - ganti bentuk slidernya mungkin ? bentuknya ga ngejelasin suara apapun
  3. 00:43:364 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya
  4. 00:53:309 (1) - mungkin agak dibikin melengkung ke arah combo selanjutnya ?
  5. 00:55:630 (3,1) - perbaiki blanketnya
  6. 01:03:917 (1,2) - ^


Hard :
  1. 00:03:585 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya
  2. 00:29:276 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:55:630 (4,5,1) - mungkin dibuat blanket ? :D
  4. 00:48:834 (2,3,4) - geser kekiri dikit, http://puu.sh/fG84p/a82e6ab4dd.jpg


Insane :
  1. 00:15:851 (5,1) - perbaiki blanketnya
  2. 01:27:784 (1,2) - ganti spinner aja, buat nyamain semua diffnya
  3. 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped menurutku, dan ga terlalu cocok disini
  4. 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^... cuma saran, mungkin 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - diganti jadi 1 slider aja


GL :D semoga membantu
posted

RzHr wrote:

Mod
General
  1. Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg - di tempat aku cuma ada satu BG kok. hapus aja itu BG yg lama, yang tulisannya gak kebaca
  2. Centang "Letterbox during breaks" - okay
  3. Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ? - yes
  4. Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4? - changed to gray and added one combocolour


Easy :
  1. 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ? - gatau ke fix atau nggak, ck ulang mungkin :3
  2. 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan - Tiada cara untuk melakukannya ._.


Normal :
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - bad flow, ubah arahnya - okay
  2. 00:26:790 (1,2) - ganti bentuk slidernya mungkin ? bentuknya ga ngejelasin suara apapun - NOPE! Aku sengaja bikin ini slider, capek tau >_<
  3. 00:43:364 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya - okay
  4. 00:53:309 (1) - mungkin agak dibikin melengkung ke arah combo selanjutnya ? gatau ke fix apa nggak
  5. 00:55:630 (3,1) - perbaiki blanketnya - yes
  6. 01:03:917 (1,2) - ^ - :3


Hard :
  1. 00:03:585 (2,3) - perbaiki blanketnya - okeyy
  2. 00:29:276 (4,5) - ^ - fixed in another way :3
  3. 00:55:630 (4,5,1) - mungkin dibuat blanket ? :D - fixed in another way
  4. 00:48:834 (2,3,4) - geser kekiri dikit, http://puu.sh/fG84p/a82e6ab4dd.jpg - fixed


Insane :
  1. 00:15:851 (5,1) - perbaiki blanketnya - okay
  2. 01:27:784 (1,2) - ganti spinner aja, buat nyamain semua diffnya - :3
  3. 01:00:933 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped menurutku, dan ga terlalu cocok disini - everything has changed
  4. 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^... cuma saran, mungkin 01:13:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - diganti jadi 1 slider aja - noooo


GL :D semoga membantu - THANKS!
Thanks for mod
posted
[General]
  1. I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul •A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too
  2. Uncheck widescreen support
  3. The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:922 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?
  2. 00:22:978 (3,4) - How about make it like this so it can flow better ?
  3. 00:31:431 (4,5) - This should snap 1/4 , I guess
  4. 00:43:696 (5,1) - I don't see any reason to use jumps here
  5. 00:52:812 (4) - NC for change in spacing ?
  6. 00:53:972 - This beat can be emphasized more , it play better if you make this beat clickable
  7. 01:02:259 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm here and it flow better imo
  8. 01:07:232 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?
  9. 01:22:480 (1,2) - Bad overlap imo


[Hard]
  1. 00:08:061 (7) - x=196 for perfect square shape here 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) -
  2. 00:19:166 (5) - NC ?
  3. 00:28:779 (3,4) - The jumps here may be a bit too sudden for hard
  4. 00:55:961 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ?


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (4) - This sound better I guess


[Easy]
  • SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy
  1. 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ?


Good luck :)
posted

CelsiusLK wrote:

Mods
[General]
  1. I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul •A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too - fixed, so re-download it
  2. Uncheck widescreen support - unchecked
  3. The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds - consider this, if any modders commented this again, so i will search the hitsounds


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:922 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - OK
  2. 00:22:978 (3,4) - How about make it like this so it can flow better ? - OK
  3. 00:31:431 (4,5) - This should snap 1/4 , I guess - fixed in another way i think
  4. 00:43:696 (5,1) - I don't see any reason to use jumps here - No changes, this is good
  5. 00:52:812 (4) - NC for change in spacing ? - OK
  6. 00:53:972 - This beat can be emphasized more , it play better if you make this beat clickable - ok
  7. 01:02:259 (4,5) - Ctrl+G rhythm here and it flow better imo - ok
  8. 01:07:232 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - ok
  9. 01:22:480 (1,2) - Bad overlap imo - ok


[Hard]
  1. 00:08:061 (7) - x=196 for perfect square shape here 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - ok
  2. 00:19:166 (5) - NC ? - ok
  3. 00:28:779 (3,4) - The jumps here may be a bit too sudden for hard - ok
  4. 00:55:961 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow ? - ok, but it's more harder then :3


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:596 (4) - This sound better I guess - ok


[Easy]
  • SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy - tired to changes this, but it has been changed
  1. 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ? - i think this is good. No blanket


Good luck :) - THANKS! :3
THANKS FOR YOUR MODS!
posted
Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )

  • [General]
  1. Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;)
  2. Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768.
  3. Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;)
  4. Extra : Where's the hitsound ?
  • [ Easy]
  1. Where's the hitsound ?
  2. 00:57:287 (2,3) - Blanked
  3. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - you can mapped over here cause this is TV Size ;)
  4. 00:58:613 (1,2) - Swap NC
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - Straighten
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  3. 01:04:580 (2,3,4) - fix the flow please
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  2. 00:46:514 (4,1) - blanked
  3. 01:07:895 (5,6) - ^
  4. 01:09:221 (1) - remove NC here . NC should start at 01:09:552 (2)
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:05:491 - add not here
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)
  3. 00:58:199 - ^
  4. 01:22:149 (5) - Ctrl+G
  5. 01:24:469 (6) - ^


Sorry short modding .. :o
GL! NewIpas :D
posted

Sky Trias wrote:

MOD
Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )

  • [General]
  1. Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;)ok
  2. Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768. fixed
  3. Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;):3
  4. Extra : Where's the hitsound ?
will search for this. NOTE: I just use normal-htinormal for hitsounding now

  • [ Easy]
  1. Where's the hitsound ? will search for this
  2. 00:57:287 (2,3) - Blanked no
  3. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - you can mapped over here cause this is TV Size ;)no. I has mapped here before, but, it's not too balance with the song because the sound at this part is too low
  4. 00:58:613 (1,2) - Swap NC ok
  • [ Normal]
  1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3) - Straighten dunno if this fixed or not
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  3. 01:04:580 (2,3,4) - fix the flow please dunno how to fix it
  • [ Hard]
  1. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  2. 00:46:514 (4,1) - blanked no
  3. 01:07:895 (5,6) - ^ no
  4. 01:09:221 (1) - remove NC here . NC should start at 01:09:552 (2) ok
  • [ Insane]
  1. 00:05:491 - add not here ok
  2. 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - same as easy .. please mapped this part ;)same as easy
  3. 00:58:199 - ^ ok
  4. 01:22:149 (5) - Ctrl+G ok
  5. 01:24:469 (6) - ^ ok


Sorry short modding .. :oNo problem
GL! NewIpas :DTHANKS! :D
posted
Hi from my modding queue~
Easy
00:55:961 (1) - maybe take off NC here and put NC on 00:57:287 (2) - to match when singer switches phrases
Normal
00:26:458 (4) - I think there should be a clap here to match the HS rhythm
Hard
00:32:094 (6) - I think there should be a NC here
Insane
00:04:580 (1,2,3) - here I think the NC should start on 00:04:911 (3) - , not on 00:04:580 (1) -
00:32:094 (5) - I think this should be a NC

Sorry for short mod, but map looks nice, hope this gets ranked soon
posted

mrturtle99 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue~
Easy
00:55:961 (1) - maybe take off NC here and put NC on 00:57:287 (2) - to match when singer switches phrases ok
Normal
00:26:458 (4) - I think there should be a clap here to match the HS rhythm thanks
Hard
00:32:094 (6) - I think there should be a NC here ok
Insane
00:04:580 (1,2,3) - here I think the NC should start on 00:04:911 (3) - , not on 00:04:580 (1) - no changes
00:32:094 (5) - I think this should be a NC ok

Sorry for short mod (no problem), but map looks nice (thanks), hope this gets ranked soon (THANKS!)
Thanks for your modding :3 Also thanks for the STAR! :3
posted

[General]

  1. Consider to add a normal-slide1
  2. Add Audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000

[Easy]

  1. Maybe change it to AR3.5 or AR4 ?
  2. as general mentioned , i would add a normal-slide1 tho
  3. 00:03:585 (2,3,4) - get a hit-whistle for this one
  4. 00:05:574 (1) - Try to add a Finish here
  5. 00:10:878 (1,2,1) - u can try to add a finish on the slider-head
  6. 00:18:503 (3) - Delete this one , or just delete the clap .
  7. 00:17:177 if here has no note , why would u add a note here ?00:18:503 (3) - just for consistency , add on both side , or delete for both side
  8. 00:23:144 (2) - Maybe add a note here ?
  9. 00:29:110 Add a note here or just put this into a slider 00:28:779 (3) -
  10. 00:25:132 (1,2) - Swap NC here
  11. 00:27:453 (1,2) - Swap NC again
  12. 00:45:353 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  13. 00:53:309 (1) - Add a Finish on slider-head and just turn this slider in to a 1/2 slider
  14. 00:54:635 (2) - Finish
  15. 00:58:613 (3) - ^
  16. 00:59:276 (1,2) - Swap NC
  17. 01:01:265 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  18. 01:09:221 (1) - ^
  19. 01:11:873 (1) - ^
  20. 01:27:784 (1) - Maybe start at the red tick ? 01:27:619

    Actually from the Kiai time u can use 2/4 claps tho

[Normal]

  1. 00:05:574 (1) - Finish
  2. 00:10:878 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:204 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:530 (1) - Whistle on repeat and maybe change the additions to drum
  5. 00:16:182 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:16:845 (2) - i would put this slider to a opposite way instead
  7. 00:18:503 (3) - Move this one blanket with 00:16:182 (1) - and then stack this two 00:18:503 (3,2) -
  8. 00:22:480 (2) - Whistle on slider-head
  9. 00:23:475 (3) - Whistle
  10. 00:25:132 (2) - ^
  11. 00:28:779 (3) - Maybe u can change this slider to 2 notes
  12. 00:29:442 (4) - NC
  13. 00:32:094 Can i ask for what is this inherited Points working ? if it doesn't work dat much , pls delete it
  14. 00:43:364 (2,3) - Blanket it and then blanket this one 00:44:690 (4,1) - u will get such pattern
  15. 00:50:657 (1) - Maybe add a finish here
  16. 00:53:309 (1) - ^
  17. 00:56:956 (2) - Delete this slider and add a note here 00:57:121 (2) -
  18. 00:57:287 (3) - Finish
  19. 00:58:613 (5) - Finish and NC
  20. 01:13:862 Add a 1/1 slider or maybe just add 2 notes 01:14:193
  21. 01:25:132 (1) - Finish

[Hard]

  1. Why don't u just start using 2/4 claps at the begin
  2. 00:04:248 (3,2) - Just stack these two in
  3. 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer this instead a square
  4. 00:45:188 (7) - Nazi , put this a little up
  5. 00:52:978 (3,4) - Why is this 2 stacked ? spread it out .
  6. 00:58:282 (4) - Clap on head and Finish on tail
  7. 01:03:585 (1) - It's a bit weird starting 2/4 clap lmao ,why don't u just start from the kiai lol
  8. 01:27:784 Maybe just change the sample set to Soft ?

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:094 (1,2) - Actually u don't have to jump here . Maybe is just too sudden for a begin
  2. 00:14:856 (1,2,3,4) - Since these set add clap , why don't u do the same thing to 00:16:679 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - ?
  3. 00:52:812 (1,2) - Don't stack this 2 , if u didn't stack this one 00:53:143 (3) - ,there is a cymbal sounds tho
  4. 00:55:298 (3) - Use this rhythm ? 00:54:635 (1,2) -
  5. 01:00:602 (4) - Maybe Ctrl + G this one
End , good map and good song tho , i wanted to do this but seems like someone do it >_>

Good luck ;w;
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SoGa wrote:

MOD

[General]

  1. Consider to add a normal-slide1
  2. Add Audio lead-in to 1500 or 2000

[Easy]

  1. Maybe change it to AR3.5 or AR4 ?
  2. as general mentioned , i would add a normal-slide1 tho
  3. 00:03:585 (2,3,4) - get a hit-whistle for this one
  4. 00:05:574 (1) - Try to add a Finish here
  5. 00:10:878 (1,2,1) - u can try to add a finish on the slider-head
  6. 00:18:503 (3) - Delete this one , or just delete the clap .
  7. 00:17:177 if here has no note , why would u add a note here ?00:18:503 (3) - just for consistency , add on both side , or delete for both side
  8. 00:23:144 (2) - Maybe add a note here ?
  9. 00:29:110 Add a note here or just put this into a slider 00:28:779 (3) -
  10. 00:25:132 (1,2) - Swap NC here
  11. 00:27:453 (1,2) - Swap NC again
  12. 00:45:353 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  13. 00:53:309 (1) - Add a Finish on slider-head and just turn this slider in to a 1/2 slider
  14. 00:54:635 (2) - Finish
  15. 00:58:613 (3) - ^
  16. 00:59:276 (1,2) - Swap NC
  17. 01:01:265 (1) - Finish on slider-head
  18. 01:09:221 (1) - ^
  19. 01:11:873 (1) - ^
  20. 01:27:784 (1) - Maybe start at the red tick ? 01:27:619

    Actually from the Kiai time u can use 2/4 claps tho

[Normal]

  1. 00:05:574 (1) - Finish
  2. 00:10:878 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:204 (1) - ^
  4. 00:13:530 (1) - Whistle on repeat and maybe change the additions to drum
  5. 00:16:182 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:16:845 (2) - i would put this slider to a opposite way instead
  7. 00:18:503 (3) - Move this one blanket with 00:16:182 (1) - and then stack this two 00:18:503 (3,2) -
  8. 00:22:480 (2) - Whistle on slider-head
  9. 00:23:475 (3) - Whistle
  10. 00:25:132 (2) - ^
  11. 00:28:779 (3) - Maybe u can change this slider to 2 notes
  12. 00:29:442 (4) - NC
  13. 00:32:094 Can i ask for what is this inherited Points working ? if it doesn't work dat much , pls delete it
  14. 00:43:364 (2,3) - Blanket it and then blanket this one 00:44:690 (4,1) - u will get such pattern
  15. 00:50:657 (1) - Maybe add a finish here
  16. 00:53:309 (1) - ^
  17. 00:56:956 (2) - Delete this slider and add a note here 00:57:121 (2) -
  18. 00:57:287 (3) - Finish
  19. 00:58:613 (5) - Finish and NC
  20. 01:13:862 Add a 1/1 slider or maybe just add 2 notes 01:14:193
  21. 01:25:132 (1) - Finish

[Hard]

  1. Why don't u just start using 2/4 claps at the begin
  2. 00:04:248 (3,2) - Just stack these two in
  3. 00:07:563 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer this instead a square
  4. 00:45:188 (7) - Nazi , put this a little up
  5. 00:52:978 (3,4) - Why is this 2 stacked ? spread it out .
  6. 00:58:282 (4) - Clap on head and Finish on tail
  7. 01:03:585 (1) - It's a bit weird starting 2/4 clap lmao ,why don't u just start from the kiai lol
  8. 01:27:784 Maybe just change the sample set to Soft ?

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:094 (1,2) - Actually u don't have to jump here . Maybe is just too sudden for a begin
  2. 00:14:856 (1,2,3,4) - Since these set add clap , why don't u do the same thing to 00:16:679 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - ?
  3. 00:52:812 (1,2) - Don't stack this 2 , if u didn't stack this one 00:53:143 (3) - ,there is a cymbal sounds tho
  4. 00:55:298 (3) - Use this rhythm ? 00:54:635 (1,2) -
  5. 01:00:602 (4) - Maybe Ctrl + G this one
End , good map and good song tho , i wanted to do this but seems like someone do it >_>

Good luck ;w;
I'm sorry, i can't reply your mods. But, you can take a look what i accept and i don't accept
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soooo late lol~ From my queue :3 Good luck! Nice song.

[General]

00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - Why is there a break here... You don't need a break on a TV-Size...
01:17:177 - 01:25:132 - Again Why are there breaks? Especially on the Easy and Normal, it feels weird to have another 8 second break only to have to play another 3 notes on Easy. Don't be lazy and map these out :P.

[Insane]

00:06:237 (1,2) - This is really undermapped compared to the rest of your intro in the section... Really consider making these two 1/1 sliders 1/2 sliders etc... more consistent with the rest of your rhythmic pattern.
00:32:094 - This is already a TV-size, you don't need to have a 10 second break. Please map this out, even if it's with a simpler rhythm.
00:51:983 (1,2,3) - These aren't evenly spaced. Scale them out and you'll see.
01:00:933 (5) - Ctrl+G bettter flow into 1 too.
01:03:088 (2) - Why not take slider 1 and Ctrl+J instead? It would flow better.
01:14:856 - Map a slider here too? And shorten 01:14:525 (9) - ? You can use two 1/2 sliders instead of a 1/1 slider, so there isn't such an awkward gap before going into 01:15:188 (1) -

[Hard]

00:10:215 (4,5) - Check stacks.
00:15:519 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make 3, 4, parallel to 1, 2?
00:46:016 (3,4) - This plays kind of awkwardly... You should shorten 00:46:016 (3) - to a 1/2 slider and begin the next slider at 00:46:348 - . That way you can map 00:46:679 - . Which begins on the next measure instead of mapping it to a slider-end.
01:26:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe this arrangement might look better. Up to you~

[Normal]

00:26:790 (1,2) - Why wiggle sliders on a Normal? It's basically the same as a change in SV which isn't recommended on Normal. Also, you don't use these wiggle sliders for the same melody in 00:16:182 (1,2) - . So this creates an inconsistency that you should also consider.
00:55:630 (3,1) - Wouldn't hurt to blanket them
00:58:613 (1) - Remove NC.
01:13:199 (5,6) - Check blanket.

[Easy]

00:15:519 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
00:17:508 (2,1) - ^
01:25:795 (2,3) - ^

Not much wrong rhythmically on Easy, nice.
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