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MOSAIC.WAV - Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran (TV size)

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Kotomi-chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 15 de octubre de 2010 at 15:23:25

Artist: MOSAIC.WAV
Title: Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran (TV size)
Source: Sumomomo Momomo
Tags: vicho-kun opening
BPM: 184
Filesize: 17905kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kuzuryuu (5 stars, 300 notes)
  2. Minamoto (4,34 stars, 159 notes)
  3. Nakajima (4,93 stars, 200 notes)
  4. No Clan (2,46 stars, 104 notes)
Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran (TV size)
Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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12/10/2010 - mp3 change again~ Plz re-dl
I'm not sure of the offset, please mod that
20/09/2010 - Revived from graveyard
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Sumomomomomomo 2nd OP. (You ni sa-ku) otome no ryou-ran! (a-i su-ru) kimochi o ken-ran! (8)

~Progress~

Easy - [No clan] ~ done
Hard - [Minamoto] ~ done
Insane - [Nakajima] ~ done ~ Guest diff of Vicho-kun
Insane - [Kuzuryuu] ~ done
Lyrics ~ done

~Special Thanks~
Vicho, for the guest diff
S i R i R u ' s Storehouse, for the font and the white effect
Everyone was helped! And with only a play, thanks too :3
Kablo
Iroha, Sanae, Momoko and Tenchuu Senshi "Uma Kamen".

Easy for me.... Err... I mean... I want to make the easy beatmap. :3
And... I can help you with the normal, if you want.

PD: It's "Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran".
I'll edit this post to make a mod.
Vicho
Yo creo que el Offset está mal, intenta con 3,610

Nakajima

[llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll-45%-----------------------------]
Vicho
Leorda
BIVUENDO!!!

[SB]
1) Your SB Items need to shrink the canvas size, or else, the ancient machine will be low performance
Example, soitogetai no desu.png :


If you see the black space, you have to cut off.
The list you have to fix this :
  1. itsuka mitai kono yononaka de daremo nashienu yume no ato.png
  2. junpaku no iro wa.png
  3. ketsui no araware ga utsuri soshite.png
  4. setsu.png
  5. soitogetai no desu.png
  6. toki wa subureba wasurete shimau ai no katachi mo aru keredo.png
[Minamoto]
00:29:289 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short this spinner to previous white tick
00:47:631 (1) - Add a finish?
01:06:707 (3) - I think this slider doesn't fit to the vocal, move backward to blue tick?

[Kuzuryuu]
00:17:794 (9) - I think this object is hidden
00:29:289 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short this spinner to previous white tick
00:47:550 (1) - ^
00:59:207 (8) - I think this slider makes this slider ugly...... Make it curve
01:11:436 (3) - New combo?
01:26:354 (1) - I think this object is hidden

Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan
Ho ho ho all fixed (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
And the lyrics are finished, I think. Just... Someone map the easy! xD
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. when you change the volume, put the green line a bit before the note.
  2. [E][I][I][I] is very crazy Orz
  3. spacing is important, others are suggestions only :3
[Minamoto]:
  1. 00:20:403 (2,3,4) - spacing, quite confusing if spacing is changed in a combo color
  2. 00:22:033 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:24:968 (3,4,5,6) - ^ change the Grid Level to 3 and make some change. or just change the spacing of (1,2,3)
  4. 01:21:544 (1,2,3,4) - place them with pressing the 'shift' key
[Nakajima]:
  1. 00:24:316 (1,2) - spacing.
  2. 01:16:001 (7) - delete this?
  3. 01:02:305 (4) - left 1 grid and down 1 grid.
  4. 01:02:468 (5,6) - left 1 grid.
  5. 01:16:327 (1) - finish
[Kuzuryuu]:
  1. 00:11:925 (T) - no notes for the lyrics?
  2. 00:21:218 (1) - cancel the new combo
  3. 00:35:077 (1,1) - ^
  4. 01:21:544 (1,2,3,4) - place them with pressing the 'shift' key
  5. 01:26:354 (1) - a note or spinner is better
star~
wmfchris
General reminader: I know you're still working, but you'll need a easier difficulty lower than 3.00 star

[Kuzu]
0:17:061 (2) spacing
0:25:946 (7) spacing
0:44:859 (5) spacing
0:52:033 (4,2) left 1 grid to obtain symmetry
0:54:642 (4) up 1 grid?
0:58:066 Why break the kiai time?

[Mina], [Naka] Fine enough~

Star~

[E][I][I][I] is very crazy Orz
Seems [Mina] belongs to H and feels like H only?
Vicho

Colin Hou wrote:

[Nakajima]:
  1. 00:24:316 (1,2) - spacing. Fixed
  2. 01:16:001 (7) - delete this? No
  3. 01:02:305 (4) - left 1 grid and down 1 grid. Fixed
  4. 01:02:468 (5,6) - left 1 grid. Fixed
  5. 01:16:327 (1) - finish Fixed
Download: MOSAIC.WAV - Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran (TV size) (Kotomi-chan) [Nakajima].osu
Lunah_old
Hi

General
Map need a easier difficulty, because BATs cry
Use distance snap when you map

Minamoto
00:04:588 (1,1) - Why different spacing? :3 fix
00:20:566 (3,4) - Fix spacing (1 grid to right)
00:24:316 (1) - Fix spacing (2 grid to up)
00:24:805 (2) - Fix spacing (1 grid to up)
00:28:718 (2) - Fix spacing (1 grid to left)
00:32:631 (5) - Fix spacing (1 grid to left)
00:33:283 (6) - Fix spacing (1 grid to down)
00:43:066 (4) - Fix spacing (1 grid to up and 1 grid to right)
01:15:186 (2,3) - hm out of rhythm, try to move with 1/4 this only(?)

Nakajima
00:32:305 (8) - New combo here
00:37:196 (8) - New combo here
00:42:414 (6) - New combo here

Kuzuryuu
General : much spacing's errors, attention
00:13:555 (5) - Hitsound whistle
00:52:196 (1,2) - This not please, too confusing, move
00:54:805 (1,2) - ^


STARR* >////<
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

LoweH wrote:

Hi

General
Map need a easier difficulty, because BATs cry I'm doing the diff now xD
Use distance snap when you map I use the distance snap .-.


Minamoto All dif fixed

Kuzuryuu
General : much spacing's errors, attention It's a Insane ;D
00:13:555 (5) - Hitsound whistle Ok
00:52:196 (1,2) - This not please, too confusing, move No. >:T
00:54:805 (1,2) - ^ No. D:


STARR* >////<
Thanks for the star :)
sesito71
Holaa ^^

[Minamoto]

00:22:196 (3) - Spacing
01:15:104 (2) - Haz este slider que comience y acabé donde te indico: 01:15:131 - 01:15:349 ^^

[Nakajima]

00:47:713 (1) - Este spinner comiénzalo aquí: 00:47:631 y que acabe donde acaba ahora ^^

[Kuzuryuu]

00:16:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla el spacing en este stream
01:05:240 (1) - Muévelo un poco a la derecha (que quede alineado con el slider (3) y la nota (2))
01:14:533 (2) - Colócala bien debajo del slider.
01:15:186 (2,3) - Te digo lo mismo que en [Minamoto]
01:15:145 (2) - Pon esa nota en el tiempo que aparece al principio xD
01:15:308 (3) - ^

saluditos, y te doy estrellaaa ^^
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan
All fixed, and I'm making the easy diff (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Sure
[General]
Offset : 3283


[No clan]
00:19:425 (2) - spacing
00:24:153 (1) - ^
00:33:283 (3) - ^
00:38:175 (4,5) - stack it correctly at end of previous slider
00:42:414 (2) - spacing
01:14:819 (1,2,3) - use 1/4 beat snap divisor like Vicho-kun's diff.

Audio timing point mod (when audio sample set changing)
00:45:023 - move it to 00:44:859 (explain : If player click it a little bit fast, it cause weird sound)
00:47:142 - move it to 00:46:979
00:58:066 - move it to 00:57:903
01:00:023 - move it to 00:59:859
01:08:501 - move it to 01:08:338
01:10:457 - move it to 01:10:294

I gave you an idea, so I won't point it at other diff anymore.


[Minamoto]
00:23:012 (5) - spacing
00:26:273 (6) - How about change like this?
00:32:631 (5) - spacing
00:33:283 (6) - ^
00:56:517 (1) - move it to 00:56:599
01:14:819 (1,2,3) - use 1/4 beat snap divisor like Vicho-kun's diff.


[Nakajima]
Fine~


[Kuzuryuu]
00:32:468 (5) - spacing
00:55:946 (2) - ^


STAR~* :D
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan
Fixed (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Sallad4ever
Oh this is on my next to watch list :) so I'm not downloading the video for now >.<

[General]
- the SB is lovely ;) but
Maybe I'm just trying to be perfect, so if you don't want to fix it I guess it's okay
- well you already have sumomomo momomo in source , so you don't need one in the tags
- maybe add the name of the three main heroine in the tags?
- Nakajima diff has different offset than the other, change it the same with other diff

[No Clan]
Because this is the easiest diff I didn't recommend to change the spacing very often through the diff
00:14:696 (2,3) - this use a 0,8x space but in 00:18:691 (1,2) - you use 0,5x space, better used fixed spacing throughout this diff
00:33:283 (3) - the spacing is too far

[Minamoto]
Ok I'm starting to sound like a parrot now, but some spacing here are placed too close or too far and it's not even a jump, I guess that's because of the level 2 grid, try using level 3 grid when placing the beats
put the timing section in 00:44:940 in the previous red tick
Combo mod
SPOILER
For this diff try following the combo pattern in Nakajima, it's more neat

[Nakajima]

Plays like hard but the diff setting is insane :o
Maybe decrease OD and HP drain by 1/2?
put the timing section in 01:10:702 to the previous red tick just to be more save

[Kuzuryuu]
Oh another streams map
Well maybe the combo is a bit messed up :o

Good luck with this ;)
star
Vicho
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

Sallad4ever wrote:

- well you already have sumomomo momomo in source , so you don't need one in the tags
There are differents ways to write it, so there are in the tags :3

All fixed! (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Fenya
me gusta sumomomo momomo xD
en este map no te avia dado una estrella asi que te la dare, me gusta el SB *---*

Star~
dvorak_old
MOSAIC!

Lyrics error on SB

6:706: 火繚乱! >佰火繚乱!
              ↑(must)
31:900: なにものにも染まりはしない > 何者にも染まりはしない (better)

1:00:870: 信じる女子<おなご>の思 > 信じる女子(おなご)の意思
                                         ↑(must)

13:500: 添い遂げたいのです - hidden by spin ?

47:304: 誘う - hidden by spin ?
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan

dvorak wrote:

13:500: 添い遂げたいのです - hidden by spin ?
47:304: 誘う - hidden by spin ?
No in all diffs :3
Also, fixed! Really thanks (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Leorda
Recheck time

[General]
According to video, the anime title is すもももももも, the romanji is Sumomomomomomo, the the source must be Sumomomomomomo (is awesome like that, lol)

[Skin]
No fail-background? It could be awesome if you add fail-background

[No clan]
Would be nice, if this rename to [No Clan] :|

00:18:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is makes me confusing, are you following vocal, rhythm, or beat?????
00:34:262 (6) - Mix it up with clap and finish are bad, remove clap or finish
00:53:501 (3,4) - This placement makes all beginner player confusing.....

01:14:859 (1,2,3) - Move forward to red tick

[Minamoto]
00:32:630 (5) - Cut short this slider to 00:32:956
01:12:005 (x) - Insert Break Time here, it long....

[Nakajima]
01:24:152 (1) - Cut short this spinner to 01:26:353? Like other diff?

[Kuzuryuu]
00:34:587 (1,1,1) - Make a jump?

Good job!
TerisKey
:) nice map
star~
wmfchris
FPRC16 called me for modding.

[Kuzu]
0:07:522 (5) spacing or pattern?
0:23:663 (5,6) left 1 grid
0:25:946 (7) right 1 grid
0:27:739 (6) right 1 grid
0:35:565 (1) suggestion: remove finish, the next (1) remove clap?
0:54:152 (1) up 2 grid?
1:07:848 (8) left+up 1 grid?
1:26:353 (1) You set a finish here... but the sound is too soft to be heard...

[Naka]
0:25:782 (5,6,7,8,9) up 1 grid...?
1:02:141 (3,4) (3) right 1 grid, (4) down 1 grid?
1:16:815 (2) down 1 / 2 grid?

star... and whhhat?!? I've modded this before? pink star then =D
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: i got about +15, and i think you need a timing expert to recheck it.
when you want to add hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W or E or R... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.

[No Clan]
Overall-1
00:28:718 (4) - 1 grid left.
00:47:142 (1,2,3,4) - use a slider instead?
01:04:588 (1,2,1) - spacing? don't change it in a Easy diff

[Minamoto]
emm use more sliders? and i feel the notes are too close to each other.
00:46:000 (6) - new combo?
00:59:532 (5) - ^

[Nakajima]
00:53:827 (2) - 1 grid up= =
01:02:631 (6,7) - 1 grid right.
01:09:968 (5) - new combo?
01:10:783 (9) - ^

[Kuzuryuu]
00:02:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - ... i don't think players can really read this at very beginning, slider streams is better imo.
00:23:663 (5,6) - 1 grid down.
00:42:413 (5,7) - not perfect stacked.
01:00:674 (1,2,3,4) - strange
01:14:043 (1,2) - stacing problem.
Vicho
Roddie
Requested by FPRC16 to mod your map.

Also, Hola :3

Blue: Suggestions.
Red: Must be fixed.

No Clan:

00:05:891 (1)-Remove whistle and put finish instead?
00:47:304 (2)-Remove whistle and put clap instead?


Minamoto:

00:09:747 (2)-Add clap?
00:32:630 (5)-Move one grid up, so end of slider should be stacked with fading 3.

Nakajima:

00:30:185 (3)-Remove clap?

Kuzuryuu:

00:09:315 (2)-Add clap?

Looks alright.

Good luck getting this ranked! :)

Star!
MeLLoN
[Kuzuryu]

00:07:522 (5) - Spacing
00:32:956 (7) - ^
00:33:119 (7) - ^
00:33:282 (8) - ^
00:35:565 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:891 (1) - Spacing
00:39:641 (1) - ^
00:46:978 (1) - Remove new combo
00:57:250 (7) - Spacing
01:01:326 (3) - ^
01:23:500 (4) - ^

Nice~ star☆
Scar
Suggestions~

[Nakajima]
00:53:827 (2) - stack with 00:52:523 (5)

[Kuzuryuu]
00:58:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17494


don't kudo this nazi modding if you change anything
Topic Starter
Kotomi-chan
Thanks for modding~ fixed (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
ignorethis
nice sb <3

Most of the grid movements are just suggestions and mainly serve to make you map smoother and looks less sloppy.

<No Chan>
00:06:544 (2) - put it in the middle of two 1s
00:35:891 (1) - remove finish
01:05:240 (1,2) - move down a bit

<Minamoto>
00:28:717 (2) - to follow a constant distance, move this right a bit?
00:35:891 (1) - remove finish
00:52:522 (2) - move right a bit

<Nakajima>
Please check out the unsnapped notes in this difficulty!
00:25:294 (4) - move down a bit
01:02:957 (7) - move right a bit as to line up with 4

<Kuzuryuu>
00:23:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo move 3~6 up a bit
01:01:326 (3) - why is this so far from 2 D:

good map 8-)
Cyril Scarlet
sumomomomomomo ~~ (。ಥˇωಥ)
Fight69
Requested by FPRC16

I warn you, I suck at modding :<

[Nakajima]

00:53:827 (2) - 1 grid up ?

[Kuzuryuu]

00:34:587 (1) - This jump is a bit...weird for me o.o
00:39:478 (4,5,1) - Spacing are not the same between them
01:22:848 (3,4) - Spacing, compare with 01:21:543 (1,2,3)

If my mod is not useful, don't kudo it

~Star
Fenya

Fight69 wrote:

Requested by FPRC16
Porfin alguien me reconose *snif* *snif*

Fight69 wrote:

~Star
Creo que se le olvido la star ^^UU
orioncomet
High bpm is high >_<

[No Clan]
01:24:153 (1) - End this spinner at white tick

[Minamoto]
01:24:152 (1) - End this spinner at white tick

[Nakajima]
try resnap all note on this diff

[Kuzuryuu]
- I just a bit didnt like slow silders >_<
01:26:435 (1) - start this silder at white tick and end at 01:27:087 and silent last silder

:D Fighto If I comment this'd be long Orz
Fight69
Whoops, fail >.>
Vicho
Beuchi
Revived!!
James2250
-Odd artist?
-Some BAT's don't like backgrounds over 1mb, try and reduce the size of pause overlay
-Your mp3 is 320kbps, either find a new one that is between 128-256kbps or check my sig.
-sumomo mo momo isn't really needed in tags as it is basically in source
-HP Drain is pretty harsh on the last 2 difficulties to me

No Clan:
AR/OD -1 for the easiest difficulty
00:45:023 (1) - make this slider have less repeats, it might confuse beginners
00:47:142 (1,2,3,4) - redo so it suits an easy more
00:50:240 (1) - move this so the repeat from the slider isn't hidden
01:04:588 (1,2,1,2) - keep spacing equal

Minamoto:
Some notes are kind of close to the end of spinners for a non insane, might want to try and fix that

Nakajima:
00:25:130 (3,4) - spacing

Kuzuryuu:
00:17:549 (8) - I don't really like the slider here
00:21:380 (6,1,2) - odd place for jump
01:24:152 (2) - new combo

*star*
lovhin456
El mp3 que pediste, de 320kbps a 256kbps, el offset puede que cambie :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?en9g3k5inltl5tb
PS: Tal vez me pase por aqui otra vez para hacer un mod >w<
fartownik
From I actually noticed, the source should be "Sumomomo Momomo", with the space between.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sumomomo_Momomo


[Kuzuryuu]

Raise offset by 1ms so it's the same as in other diffs.

00:02:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Just delete it. This is not the best thing to start the map with.
00:08:661 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. Use 1,3x value as in the rest of the map.
00:29:531 (1) - The volume of the end of this spinner is too quiet. Raise it.
01:03:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing decrease and weird jump is odd. Change it.


[Nakajima]

Add kiai.


[Minamoto]

00:29:533 (1) - Raise the volume as in previous diff.
00:31:163 - Add a note.
00:32:141 (3) - End on the red tick.
00:42:577 (3) - ^
00:50:402 - Add a note/expand the spinner.


[No Clan]

00:18:853 (1) - Move 1/4 forward and cut it by 1/4.
00:47:304 (1,2,3,4) - Don't put 1/2 combos like this in an Easy diff.


That's all from me.
Map needs quite of polishing before it gets ranked.
However, I'll give you a star.
Sakura
[General]
Add Opening to tags? (since this is the 2nd opening for the anime)
Excuse me but i think lovhin456 messed something up with your mp3 http://puu.sh/hP1 64 bit rate =/
Add to the creator's words which diff equals Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane so people know? i don't mind it tho.
Some unsnapped timing sections across diffs, also Kiai should start here 00:50:402 on the long white tick.
Same for the kiai at 01:00:837 on all diffs except the guest diff.

[Storyboard]
Remove unnecessary transparencies from:
  1. Kotomi-chan.png
  2. jou.png
  3. dan.png
  4. jo.png
  5. zanzu.png
  6. white.png (apparently has some, not sure)
  7. shinjiru onoko no.png
  8. ishi.png
  9. tomo ni kono ranse ni tatte inori no senshi e ikimashou.png
[Kuzuryuu]
53 unsnapped notes (Timing > Resnap all notes)
01:26:597 (1) - This slider feels kinda random
Other than that, this diff is amazing, and fun <3

[Nakajima]
00:07:685 (6,7) - Sounds really awkward i recommend you remove (6) and start (7) where (6) used to be.
Nice to play too, i like it <3

[No Clan]
00:03:445 (1,1,1) - I recommend you space theese out more, because (2) on the last combo has the same distance so it may confuse someone.
00:11:435 (1) - Looks awkward maybe center it? or use a spinner or something?
00:28:880 (4,5,6) - Align with (4) with (2), unless it was intentional?

[Overall]
Very nice mapset, i like it, fun to play and fun to listen to the song, this sure brings back memories, anyways fix all that, specially the mp3, and get a new offset, then dont forget to resnap all notes and timing sections, then i may bubble this.
lovhin456

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Excuse me but i think lovhin456 messed something up with your mp3 http://puu.sh/hP1 64 bit rate =/
Really ??
Oh well, umm, deny my kudosu in that post then I guess.

Wait ... a ... wtf ?? I downloaded the map again and a 64 kbps mp3 is there, wtf ??!! I'm pretty sure I uploaded a 256 kbps ... ugghhh, maybe this link ...
http://www.4shared.com/audio/f-sU2O7h/S ... ening.html

Also ... weird, I tried to download from the first link I gave you and what I recieved was a 256 kbps mp3 with good quality ... I don't know what happened
:I

Also...why haven't I starred this yet ?!
Astom
Ia kotomin :3
Offset: 3.311 es lo mejor q pude sacar quisa alguien por ahi pille algo mejor :>

Aprovecha de cortar la transparencia de pause-back.png, pause-continue.png y pause-retry.png.

Y eso :> sldos ^^
Sakura
New offset is: 1,990 use the timing setup panel then "scale to new timing" before clicking ok, if your notes feel a bit off, ctrl+a to select them all then use j and k to move them back and forth 1 snap until you find their correct position, the first notes should look something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/30709 do the same for every diff, dont forget to resnap in case your forget and fix each timing section so that the hitsounds and kiai are correct kiai should be here now: 00:50:250 and 01:00:685, good luck fixing your map!

Edit: Astom ninja'd me lol, mine's a lot lower because i set the red line before the first note, but in reality is a few ms lower than Astom's
Sakura
Sumomo Momomo! <3
Enjoy
Verdisphena
ಠ_ಠ ~~
yaya
i think no soft-clap will be better..
Andrea
I'm fine with ranking this, but first before I'll do it let me know what do you think at what yaya said please.

EDIT: Mapper said she wanna keep claps like that so...

Ranked~
Verdisphena
Congratz (/・ω・)/
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