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Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size)

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Mok
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Mok
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 13 giugno 2010 at 10:23:57

Artist: Cristina D'Avena
Title: Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size)
Source: Corrector Yui
Tags: italian op project Kuroneko-sHerald
BPM: 127,97
Filesize: 14971kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Corrector Kuro (2,23 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Corrector Mok (2,85 stars, 151 notes)
  3. vs. Giganet (4,52 stars, 257 notes)
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size)
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Italian Opening for Corrector Yui.

[Corrector Kuro] (Guest's Easy) by Kuroneko-sHerald.
[Correcto Mok] (Normal) by me, tmokb93
[vs. Giganet] (Hard) by me, tmokb93.

Complete.
Enjoy please!
Last edited by Mok , edited 35 times in total.
Armin
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Armin
BPM:128
Offset:541
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
Garven
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Garven
Here are your hit sounds. Pretty basic ones for this type of song.

I really suggest that you find a higher quality mp3, though. If you do, and it ends up louder, adjust the hit sound volume accordingly.

Edit:

Uh, hopefully this one has the hitsounds in it. =/ Rename it by removing "backup" from the end of the file name.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [vs. Giganet].osu

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Mok]backup.osu
Sakura
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Sakura
[General]
Try stripping the audio from the video, the video file is too big, and the 320 BR mp3 isnt helping much to the file size either

[Corrector Kuro]
00:50:931 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:05:228 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:06:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:24:916 (1) - Ok NOW this is a good spinner, (more or less actually)
01:36:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:47:650 (1) - Another awkward spinner, although this one can be less awkward if you end it at: 01:49:291
01:54:212 (1) - Start this spinner at: 01:54:681

[Corrector Mok]
00:01:947 (2) - I really have no idea what this slider is following, maybe start it at 00:01:712, shorten it to 00:02:181 and add a repeat instead. I understand the map looks prettier like that, but at least make some sense with the song, this is a rythm game not a graphical design game >_<ok, maybe i went a bit too overboard there.
00:07:103 (1) - I think you will know what im going to say to this, however this somewhat makes sense, if only you could shorten it, maybe it would be better off as a slider that isnt as long instead.
00:10:853 (1) - ^
00:43:197 (2) - This slisder feels like it should start at: 00:43:431
00:50:814 (1) - Umm... yup you've guessed it! awkward spinner! however if you start it at: 00:53:041 and end it at the same place it makes more sense.
01:47:650 (1) - Ending this at: 01:49:291 would make more sense

[vs. Giganet]
00:55:384 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are all theese so offcenter? o.o
01:10:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend using a new combo on (2) or create a new pattern
01:11:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend making a diamond like pattern on the outside instead of a cross (switch 2 with 3)
01:21:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:30:541 (5) - New combo to fix spacing
01:31:478 (7,8) - Please dont use sudden 2x BPM sections
01:34:291 (3) - New combo to fix spacing
01:49:291 (5,6) - Spacing (no, you shouldnt have jumps inside combos)
01:51:634 (4) - New combo to fix spacing
01:58:900 (5) - Move a couple grids up to fix spacing (now that i notice why arent you using Lv 3 grid?)
02:01:478 (4) - New combo
Mok
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Mok
Fixed some for Corrector Mok and vs. Giganet.
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
Sorry for the wait :o
Hearing the italian version remember me of the indonesian version :D

[General]
- Remove the countdown for all diff
- Just as Sakura said remove the audio form the video, it'll help you reduce the overall size
- The song setup is interesting (only the circle size that increase)

[Corrector Kuro]
00:11:556 (1) - replace this, 3 circle stack then a slider will confuse novice, not to mention the sudden lyric change
00:26:322 (1) - a little off, maybe add a circle in 00:25:853 & 00:26:087 or forward this to 00:26:556 to follow the lyric
01:59:603 (x) ~ 02:00:072 (x) - how about adding another "gigadeath" notes here ?(circle or slider is up to you)
Combo mod
I'm not very familiar with italian, so you can ignore some that you think strange
SPOILER
00:03:353 (3) - NC to make it consistent with 00:10:853 (1,2,3)
00:07:103 (3) - ^
00:16:947 (4) - NC
00:18:353 (5) - ^
00:33:353 (2) - ^
00:37:103 (2) - ^
00:38:041 (3) - ^
00:39:212 (1) - remove NC
00:40:853 (5) - NC
01:35:228 (6) - ^
01:59:603 (4) - ^

[Corrector Mok]
- someone might complain about some jump, but I personally like it (this is Normal right?)

[vs. Gigadeath]
00:03:119 (1,2,3) - reposition this pattern the same with the other pattern, because this is the only one the goes from out to in
01:31:478 (3,4) - the 2x slider is surprising and kinda out of place, because this is the only 2x slider
01:13:431 (5) - kinda an anti-jump
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:14:369 (1) - NC

Those gigdeath can't leave my head now :o
Good luck
Star~
*GigaDeath*
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
CIAO

Ah, Corrector Yui, my favorite anime

[File]
When I download with video, it's over 20MB, can you compress the filesize?

[Corrector Kuro]
00:22:103 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:25:853 (x) - Add note?
00:39:212 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:38:041 (3)?
00:47:650 (x) - Add note?
01:05:228 (1,1) - Can you combine this spinner into one?
01:33:119 (3) - Move this to next white tick and cut short to 01:33:822, and the add note to 01:33:119?
01:36:869 (1) - Move this to next white tick and cut short?
01:59:486 ~ 02:00:189 - Feels empty :

[Corrector Mok]
00:35:462 (1) - Why this slider is suddenly came to normal hitsound?
00:39:212 (1) - ^
01:24:447 (1) - Move this to next white tick and cut short?

[vs. Giganet]
00:03:119 (1,3) - Can you flip this? So the pattern looks nicer?
00:08:041 (x) - Add note?

Not bad
STAR
Mok
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Mok
Fixed mine :3
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Sakura301 wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]
00:50:931 (1) - Awkward spinner Changed.
01:05:228 (1) - Awkward spinner Changed.
01:06:869 (1) - Awkward spinner I don't change it.
01:24:916 (1) - Ok NOW this is a good spinner, (more or less actually)
01:36:869 (1) - Awkward spinner I don't change it.
01:47:650 (1) - Another awkward spinner, although this one can be less awkward if you end it at: 01:49:291 It follows vocal.
01:54:212 (1) - Start this spinner at: 01:54:681 Same here

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]
00:11:556 (1) - replace this, 3 circle stack then a slider will confuse novice, not to mention the sudden lyric change Done.
00:26:322 (1) - a little off, maybe add a circle in 00:25:853 & 00:26:087 or forward this to 00:26:556 to follow the lyric Done.
01:59:603 (x) ~ 02:00:072 (x) - how about adding another "gigadeath" notes here ?(circle or slider is up to you) Done. It's Giganet anyway.
Combo mod

SPOILER
00:03:353 (3) - NC to make it consistent with 00:10:853 (1,2,3) Done.
00:07:103 (3) - ^ Done.
00:16:947 (4) - NC No.
00:18:353 (5) - ^ No.
00:33:353 (2) - ^ No.
00:37:103 (2) - ^ Done.
00:38:041 (3) - ^ Done.
00:39:212 (1) - remove NC Done.
00:40:853 (5) - NC Done.
01:35:228 (6) - ^ Done.
01:59:603 (4) - ^ Done.

Leorda wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]
00:22:103 (1) - Remove new combo? No.
00:25:853 (x) - Add note? Done.
00:39:212 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:38:041 (3)? Done.
00:47:650 (x) - Add note? Done.
01:05:228 (1,1) - Can you combine this spinner into one? Changed in another way.
01:33:119 (3) - Move this to next white tick and cut short to 01:33:822, and the add note to 01:33:119? Done without the new note.
01:36:869 (1) - Move this to next white tick and cut short? No, because it follows the vocal
01:59:486 ~ 02:00:189 - Feels empty : Filled XD
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
Colin Hou
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[General]:
  1. the volume of hitsounds is a bit low.
[Corrector Kuro]:
  1. 00:18:353 (8) - new combo?
  2. 01:41:087 (T) - add a note here
  3. 02:02:650 (5) - i suggest use finish on both circles
[Corrector Mok]:
  1. 02:02:650 (5,6) - it's now whistle and finish... how about 2 finish?
[vs. Giganet]:
  1. slider velocity feels a little low, this makes the notes seem crowed.
  2. 00:32:650 (T) - a note here
  3. 01:31:478 (3) - oh a trap.
  4. 02:02:650 (3,4) - 2 finish
  5. many spacing changes in this diff. but this is an [Insane], so they're fine.
another Italian amine song XD

star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

Colin Hou wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]:
  1. 00:18:353 (8) - new combo? No.
  2. 01:41:087 (T) - add a note here Done.
  3. 02:02:650 (5) - i suggest use finish on both circles Done.
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
[DBF]
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[DBF]
[Overall]
Maybe rename diffs? Like [Normal] [Hard] [Insane] and etc.

[Corrector Kuro]
00:10:150 (4) - add clap.
00:18:353 (8) - ^
00:49:056 (7) - add finish.
01:02:650 (1) - add finish in end.
01:05:931 (4) - add finish in start.
01:16:478 (6) - ^
01:41:791 (7) - ^
[Corrector Mok]
00:59:603 (5) - add finish in end.
01:04:291 (4) - ^
01:13:666 (3) - ^
01:16:478 (1) - ^
01:44:134 (3,4) - spacing.
[vs. Giganet]
overall difficulty +2, imo.
00:32:181 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - remake that, very confused spacing, let's make line.
00:40:853 (1) - add finish.
00:41:322 (5) - ^
00:56:791 (4,5) - ^
01:00:540 (7,8) - ^
01:04:291 (8,9) - add finish and fix spacing (so close).
01:11:791 (1,2) - add finish.
01:15:541 (3,4) - ^
01:18:822 (1) - ^

Star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald

[DBF] wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]
00:10:150 (4) - add clap.
00:18:353 (8) - ^
00:49:056 (7) - add finish.
01:02:650 (1) - add finish in end.
01:05:931 (4) - add finish in start.
01:16:478 (6) - ^
01:41:791 (7) - ^
All Done.

Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
mks_old
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mks_old
Yui vaii!
[_Edward_]
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[_Edward_]
Ahaha yui...che bei tempi!
DJPop
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I heard the rock-buster sound from Rock Man X :D


~Corrector Kuro~
00:03:353 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:05:462 (2) - new combo
00:07:103 (1) - remove new combo
00:10:853 (1) - ^
00:18:353 (8) - new combo
00:22:103 (1) - remove new combo
00:37:103 (1) - ^
00:40:853 (1) - ^
01:35:228 (6) - new combo
01:41:322 (6) - ^
02:02:650 (5) - ^ (optional)

~Corrector Mok~
00:00:541 (1,4) - make it more symmetry
00:18:822 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:44:603 (3) - new combo
00:48:821 (3) - ^
01:04:291 (4) - ^
01:09:447 (6) - ^
01:16:478 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:19:291 (2) - new combo
01:21:634 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:38:041 (1,1,1) - ^
01:40:853 (2) - new combo
01:43:900 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv2)
01:45:306 (5) - new combo
01:46:009 (1) - remove new combo

~vs. Giganet~
00:01:478 (4) - new combo
00:01:712 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:619 (4) - new combo
00:33:119 (2) - ^
00:33:353 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
00:41:791 (1,3) - make it more symmetry
00:59:135 (4) - new combo
01:04:759 (9) - ^
01:08:041 (1) - remove new combo
01:31:478 (3) - new combo
01:34:291 (3) - ^
01:35:697 (1,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv1)
02:01:009 (3) - new combo


+Star
Kuroneko-sHerald
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DJPop wrote:

I heard the rock-buster sound from Rock Man X :D


~Corrector Kuro~
00:03:353 (1,1) - remove new combo Done.
00:05:462 (2) - new combo No.
00:07:103 (1) - remove new combo Done.
00:10:853 (1) - ^ Done.
00:18:353 (8) - new combo Done.
00:22:103 (1) - remove new combo Done.
00:37:103 (1) - ^ Done.
00:40:853 (1) - ^ Done.
01:35:228 (6) - new combo Done.
01:41:322 (6) - ^ Done.
02:02:650 (5) - ^ (optional) Done.
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
Andrea
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[Corrector Kuro]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno.

00:16:947 (4) - New combo.
00:18:353 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo.
00:41:791 (1) - Finish ad inizio slider.
01:20:228 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo.
01:22:806 (1) - ^ ... E l'inizio slider ha un brutto suono.
01:56:791 (1) - Leva il clap e metti un finish.
02:02:650 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo.

[Corrector Mok]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno.

Le sezioni di timing "Normal" hanno il volume un pò troppo alto. Abbassalo.

00:10:853 (1) - Spinner troppo tosto per una Normal.
00:25:853 (1) - ^
01:43:900 (2,3) - Spostali 1 quadrato sopra con il grid level a 2.

[vs. Giganet]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno.

Le sezioni di timing "Normal" hanno il volume un pò troppo alto. Abbassalo.

00:22:103 (6) - New combo.
00:32:884 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo.
01:13:431 (5) - New combo per leggere meglio il jump.
01:31:478 (1,2) - Potresti aggiungere qualche warning? Sono totalmente inaspettati.
02:02:650 (3) - New combo.
Mok
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Mok

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Corrector Mok]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno.

Le sezioni di timing "Normal" hanno il volume un pò troppo alto. Abbassalo.[/color] Ok

00:10:853 (1) - Spinner troppo tosto per una Normal.
00:25:853 (1) - ^^
01:43:900 (2,3) - Spostali 1 quadrato sopra con il grid level a 2.Ok[/color]

[vs. Giganet]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno.

Le sezioni di timing "Normal" hanno il volume un pò troppo alto. Abbassalo. Ok[/color]

00:22:103 (6) - New combo.
00:32:884 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo. Ok
01:13:431 (5) - New combo per leggere meglio il jump. Ok
01:31:478 (1,2) - Potresti aggiungere qualche warning? Sono totalmente inaspettati. Non mi piacciono, basta il new combo per segnalare qualcosa, e inoltre non ne ho mai fatto uso.
02:02:650 (3) - New combo. Ok[/color]
Kuroneko-sHerald
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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Corrector Kuro]

Questa difficoltà non ha il preview point. Aggiungine uno. Fatto.

00:16:947 (4) - New combo. Fatto.
00:18:353 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo. Fatto.
00:41:791 (1) - Finish ad inizio slider. Fatto.
01:20:228 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo. Fatto.
01:22:806 (1) - ^ ... E l'inizio slider ha un brutto suono. Modificato.
01:56:791 (1) - Leva il clap e metti un finish. Fatto.
02:02:650 (1) - Rimuovi la new combo. Fatto.
Download: Cristina D'Avena - Yui, Ragazza Virtuale (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Corrector Kuro].osu
Andrea
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Alright then.

Bubbled~
Gens
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BPM: 127.974
Offset: 551

Yes, apparently it needs to be that precise.

;_;@CRAWL-like Insane (it isn't as bad though, just 2x sliders ffffffffffff)

[Corrector Mok]

01:10:150 (1) - Should be better if it finished at 01:11:791.
01:47:650 (1) - Same as above, just at 01:49:291 instead.

That's it.
Gens
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Gens wrote:

;_;@CRAWL-like Insane (it isn't as bad though, just 2x sliders ffffffffffff)
In case you didn't get the point in this, here:

01:31:506 (1,2) - Don't really follow the music, plus the song doesn't call for a slider speed change. In most cases it will make the player rage. I suggest you remove them.

EDIT: Rebubbled!
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