[General]
Try stripping the audio from the video, the video file is too big, and the 320 BR mp3 isnt helping much to the file size either
[Corrector Kuro]
00:50:931 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:05:228 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:06:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:24:916 (1) - Ok NOW this is a good spinner, (more or less actually)
01:36:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:47:650 (1) - Another awkward spinner, although this one can be less awkward if you end it at: 01:49:291
01:54:212 (1) - Start this spinner at: 01:54:681
[Corrector Mok]
00:01:947 (2) - I really have no idea what this slider is following, maybe start it at 00:01:712, shorten it to 00:02:181 and add a repeat instead.I understand the map looks prettier like that, but at least make some sense with the song, this is a rythm game not a graphical design game >_<ok, maybe i went a bit too overboard there.
00:07:103 (1) - I think you will know what im going to say to this, however this somewhat makes sense, if only you could shorten it, maybe it would be better off as a slider that isnt as long instead.
00:10:853 (1) - ^
00:43:197 (2) - This slisder feels like it should start at: 00:43:431
00:50:814 (1) - Umm... yup you've guessed it! awkward spinner! however if you start it at: 00:53:041 and end it at the same place it makes more sense.
01:47:650 (1) - Ending this at: 01:49:291 would make more sense
[vs. Giganet]
00:55:384 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are all theese so offcenter? o.o
01:10:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend using a new combo on (2) or create a new pattern
01:11:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend making a diamond like pattern on the outside instead of a cross (switch 2 with 3)
01:21:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:30:541 (5) - New combo to fix spacing
01:31:478 (7,8) - Please dont use sudden 2x BPM sections
01:34:291 (3) - New combo to fix spacing
01:49:291 (5,6) - Spacing (no, you shouldnt have jumps inside combos)
01:51:634 (4) - New combo to fix spacing
01:58:900 (5) - Move a couple grids up to fix spacing (now that i notice why arent you using Lv 3 grid?)
02:01:478 (4) - New combo
Try stripping the audio from the video, the video file is too big, and the 320 BR mp3 isnt helping much to the file size either
[Corrector Kuro]
00:50:931 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:05:228 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:06:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:24:916 (1) - Ok NOW this is a good spinner, (more or less actually)
01:36:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:47:650 (1) - Another awkward spinner, although this one can be less awkward if you end it at: 01:49:291
01:54:212 (1) - Start this spinner at: 01:54:681
[Corrector Mok]
00:01:947 (2) - I really have no idea what this slider is following, maybe start it at 00:01:712, shorten it to 00:02:181 and add a repeat instead.
00:07:103 (1) - I think you will know what im going to say to this, however this somewhat makes sense, if only you could shorten it, maybe it would be better off as a slider that isnt as long instead.
00:10:853 (1) - ^
00:43:197 (2) - This slisder feels like it should start at: 00:43:431
00:50:814 (1) - Umm... yup you've guessed it! awkward spinner! however if you start it at: 00:53:041 and end it at the same place it makes more sense.
01:47:650 (1) - Ending this at: 01:49:291 would make more sense
[vs. Giganet]
00:55:384 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why are all theese so offcenter? o.o
01:10:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend using a new combo on (2) or create a new pattern
01:11:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, i recommend making a diamond like pattern on the outside instead of a cross (switch 2 with 3)
01:21:869 (1) - Awkward spinner
01:30:541 (5) - New combo to fix spacing
01:31:478 (7,8) - Please dont use sudden 2x BPM sections
01:34:291 (3) - New combo to fix spacing
01:49:291 (5,6) - Spacing (no, you shouldnt have jumps inside combos)
01:51:634 (4) - New combo to fix spacing
01:58:900 (5) - Move a couple grids up to fix spacing (now that i notice why arent you using Lv 3 grid?)
02:01:478 (4) - New combo