1. Easy (1.58 stars, 75 notes)
2. Hard (4.62 stars, 199 notes)
3. Normal (3.53 stars, 126 notes)
4. Rox's Hard (4.42 stars, 142 notes)

• 00:17:245 (6) - remove new combo ?
  00:19:931 (5) - New combo ?
  00:48:862 (8) - ^

• 00:33:624 (1) - this spin need score 2000 or 2000+ in AUTO mode
  00:37:920 (7) - Move right
  00:19:393 (12) - Move Up

samipale wrote:

IKU >.<~

edit:只有对你有帮助的mod贴才需要给kudosu的。。

1. BPM: 111.73 offset: 799 然后把原来所有的时间都删掉重新设置下...然后Timing->Resnap All Notes.

1. 音量大小更改的綠線要比note提前一些
2. 如果是KIAI的綠線的話 在Note之前再加一根和KIAI綠線一樣的 然後不加KIAI mode即可
3. 整首歌的結束時間點在01:26:720會好一點

1. 這個歌前半部份Easy跟Vocal下note可能會比較難 我把前面一段亂做了下...可以做下參考
2. 00:51:546 (6) - 這個加一個back

1. 00:07:511 (2) - 這個形狀不太好看
2. 01:14:637 (6) - newcombo
3. 00:47:250 (T) - 加一個note

1. slider velocity建議提升到1.6 原來的有點慢 這樣的話 spacing用x1.2就可以了 如果更改的話 所有slider的長度需要再設置一邊
2. 01:13:295 (5) - 加一個back

xmikurux wrote:

挖好棒喔

Sekuyi wrote:

Green: Suggestions
Blue: Should fix this

[Easy]
- 01:06:582 ~ (2) maybe stack with (3)? as it is it doesn't look good :s~OK

[Hard]
- 00:55:036 ~ new combo?~OK

And something is wrong with the bpm and offset. You can hear it from the first beat on in hard. But I can't get the correct timing either...

Nice map, good job with the timing and beautiful song you have there! Have a star~*

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Ps.: Can I try making a Hard for this?

banvi wrote:

Hello.

mod

SPOILER

General
Timing is wrong in last half?_? I don't have timing skill. Sorry.
Anyway , I think , you should ask timing help.
And the volume of hitsounds is a bit big overal , please turn down -1 or -2.
Easy
01:13:237 (4,5,6,7) 2 grid up?(grid lv3)
Hard
I think okay.
Rox's hard
00:10:742 (4) 1 grid down?
00:15:302 (3,4,6,8)I think , the volume of these finish hitsound is big for music volume.
00:33:004 (3) 1 grid right?
01:17:260 (1) nice
Insane
00:05:914 (11) new combo? and add jump (11,12,13)? (my suggesion)

Nice map , star & gl

dvorak wrote:

Try bpm 111.838 / offset 2448
will go off at 81848 but It is impossible to handle after this timing cuz the change isn't flat.


To Aru > Toaru (source)

>To Aru is wrong to explain source, should be Toaru.

>On ly a few page are written as Toaru , and it was 1st uploader's fault who upload to youtube or torrent.
>If you feel nothing for "on ly" or "so me" , don't need to change.

>If I say more grammatically, Toaru is one word and rentaishi(連体詞) in lexical category.
>That doesn't exist in English. Toaru is new word, aru is used to rentaishi and bit different from toaru.
>This will be too long to write here, but I know native English speaker who can explain this problem.
>So talk with me in Japanese or let me get him to talk with.

>Well Number is Power? BATs are lazy to replace most of them? I welcome any grammatical rebuttal to this.

Neethime wrote:

:D IKU~这歌好听啊
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
试着在一些起始音的地方加finish音效(easy和hard里有些少)

[Easy]
副歌后面的normal音效也用和副歌相同的音量吧
从开到42秒这段为什么不加hitsound呢？试着加些whistle上去(这段的音量也可以试着+10？)暫時先不加 因為照banvi大的說法這裡hitsounds會太大聲
00:46:976 (5,1,2) - spacing,你不能在easy里放跳啊...orz~沒發現這裡有跳
01:21:848 (1) - 在01:26:408 结束

[Rox's Hard]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:12:373 (4) - 左一格，下一格
01:17:288 (1) - 同easy

[Insane]
00:17:201 (7) - new combo
00:40:270 (6) - ^
01:08:168 (7) - ^
01:21:848 (1) - 同easy

Nice map.
+Star

Frill wrote:

[General]

- index (4).jpg is resize 1024x768..As long as it see 1023x767~fix
- Please unite all dif kiai time. ~fix

[Easy]

00:11:031 - I think that this green line is needless. (It is adjusted with offset. )~I changed the red line volume
00:40:002 (5,6) - 1 grid down?~fix

[Rox's Hard]

00:56:339 (1) - ah..remove new combo?~fix
01:13:505 (1) - ^~fix
01:21:820 (1) - Volume is Please make it to the lowered feeling. ~fix

[Insane]

00:18:006 (8) - new combo~I temporarily set the new combo at 00:17:201 (7)

good map!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
你用的video并没有分离掉音轨，请把video消音以减少文件大小，这是必须的。另外不确定中文字幕是否合适…… ~消音
把roxkyuubiforever加进tags，其他如果你想加的话还可以参考若干电磁炮图的tags~OK
offset:+12，不排除BPM有误的可能~OK BPM我再問問其他人看看
kiai线和变换音量/音效不能用同一根绿线，请在kiai前加线来变更音效/音量然后以相同的音效进入kiai，以及之前Colin提过的音效绿线不要踩note的问题好像还没改掉。~OK 我以為是只有純改音量才不能踩 抱歉
don't change volume/hitsound sample and kiai time with the same timing point.

如果你愿意去要一套电磁炮皮肤效果应该更好。

[Easy]
1.4 Slider Velocity+ 0.8x Distance Spacing对Easy来讲高了（尤其对比你1.4+0.7x的Hard），另这个难度中也有不少的段落更像Normal~OK
HP-1, OD-1~OK
00:14:787 (1) - 不对称的很严重~OK
00:37:856 (2,3) - 关掉grid snap左移到1正下方~將排版改了一下
00:41:075 (1) - 延长到00:44:294？（finish）~OK

[Hard]
为什么不用grid level 3呢？很多小的spacing不等，不一一指出了，例：00:30:345 (3,4,5) - 这里最明显~OK
00:33:296 (1) - spinner过短了~OK
00:58:242 (3,4) - 这两个不能同形状就真的很违和。。~OK
01:17:288 (1) - 这个spinner很没语言……至少等到最后变速段了再弄？转10秒这个压力很大啊~OK

[Rox's Hard]
00:15:323 (3) - this slider is offscreen... should fix.
01:21:848 (1) - end this at 01:26:676?

[Insane]
除了难度设定外没有感到这是Insane其實是因為之前看到有人發3個難度最好是easy/normal和hard insane比較好 才把他從hard改成insane 想辦法把它改難中~
00:47:244 - 加一拍？~OK
01:21:848 (1) - 结束在01:26:676~OK


实话讲我觉得hitsounds mod还言之过早。。。尤其Hard和Insane的mapset是否有必要再考虑下。另外也请不要什么发言都给kud，我mod总感觉有点不爽= =……这个感觉具体化而言就是一种我把一个mod按从[General]到[Insane]拆5个贴发出来的冲动…… 知道了!!(有一個是不小心按到的) 抱歉>< 面壁反省中

• • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • 00:21:237 (2) - This slider sounds bad: delete it and do something different.

• • 00:08:361 (9,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)

• • Offset: 2460 (resnap all notes)
  • 01:21:848 (1) - End this spinner here 01:26:688

kiddly wrote:

IKU的歌……不错呢

[Easy]
00:11:043 (1,2) - 我看了下整张图二分拍有spacing的地方就三个,你不如把他们全都stack了这样整张图整齐很多.~修正

[Hard]
改名叫normal,然后insane改名叫hard好了.~修正
关于mapset,作为hard OD感觉低了点作为normal HD又太高了……我建议降3格HD做normal好了.~修正
00:39:075 - 这线干吗用的,没看懂……
00:39:343 - ^ ~都刪掉了
如果上面两条线就是为了加一格音量的话那真没啥必要……都听不出来……

[Rox's Hard]
00:42:696 (1) - 在这放个note后面再接spinner会不会更好呢,前面也是这样做的.~修正
Just like 00:25:529 (4,1) .
其他挺好的.

[Insane]
OD-1,HD-1 or2.本来这首歌也不适合作难,没必要勉强做个insane的mapset.做hard就好了.~修正
节奏比较散的歌OD高了打起来非常非常非常不爽.~知道了!!
00:39:075 - 同hard.
00:39:343 - ^~都刪掉了
摆放方面说实话有些单调，可以参考你的guest diff,多用一些造型的slider.~好的

大概就这些.

3kinnagi wrote:

star for IKU and the nice map

Shockwave wrote:

The second ending of Index :3

Star and good luck with your first beatmap

Clare wrote:

來晚了 抱歉><"

[Easy]
恩..把Song setup-audio裡的lead-in 條到0
00:29:821 (5) - new combo
01:02:546 (1,2,3) - 怎麼突然間距變大了?(改間距後忘記改這邊 )
00:39:209 (T) - 這條音量線擺到Slider末端00:39:477 去是沒問題的爾且比較好,note把線放在前面是防止點早了但是slider不會有點早的問題 所以放上去沒問題=w=
我覺得easy難度note不要疊超過2個會比較好:3

[Normal]
00:29:821 (2) - 把這Slider改成一個note?然後00:30:357 (3) 放到00:30:089來,結尾00:31:430
00:47:525 (7) - 這個也是?改成一個note然後後面的00:48:061 放到00:47:793來 在這00:48:061折返,在00:48:329 結尾
01:08:716 (8) - 為什麼要用1/4拍呢?1/2拍不好嗎?

[Rox's Hard]
00:11:043 (T) - let the green line before the note
nice diff

[Hard]
很好,對我來說沒問題!

nice map!
star!

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
00:38:941 (4) - new combo

[Normal]
00:05:678 (6) - new combo
00:43:769 (1,2,3,4) - this feels too blind for a normal diff, maybe make it so that it is easier to read

[Rox's hard]
00:25:663 (1) - start on red tick at 00:25:797

[hard]
fine

all fix~
_________________

is this really your first map......my respect to ya and enjoy my star

thanks~