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Topic Starter
Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this
[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid?
00:18:763(3)^
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid?
[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid?
[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing
00:28:679(4)^
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid?
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3)
[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap
~You need to do a Insane diff
anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this
[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid?
00:18:763(3)^
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid?
[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid?
[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing
00:28:679(4)^
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid?
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3)
[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap
~You need to do a Insane diff
anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Topic Starter
kanpakyin wrote:
Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this
[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid? Done
00:18:763(3)^ Done
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid? Doneth
[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?Done
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight Fixed
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap Changed
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid? Moved
[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing Spaced
00:28:679(4)^ Done
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)? Wat?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid? Done
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3) Fixed....I think?
[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap I did, that's why the map is so loopey ~~
~You need to do a Insane diff D:
anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Topic Starter
Does anyone know a BAT that's takin requests?
Hi ^^
[Joker]
This difficulty has several spacing errors, please use only one "beat snap divisor"
00:44:817 (7) Add new combo
00:45:686 (1) Remove new Combo
00:50:034 (6) Add new Combo
01:23:948 (5) This object is too close to the previous object
01:31:775 (4) Add new combo
01:32:862 (1) Remove new combo
01:35:688 (4) Add new combo
01:36:123 (1) Remove new combo
[Ace]
00:24:381 (2) Spacing
00:33:946 (4)^
00:48:729 (2) This object is too close to the previous object
00:50:033 (4) Spacing
01:35:250 (1~) from here until the end came down spacing, why?
[Queen]
This difficulty is quite easy to be the hardest, try to put more triple and jumps.
00:38:729 (3) Spacing
00:59:600 (4)^
01:24:601 ~ It sounds as if a note should go here
01:37:862 (7) This object is too close to the previous object
Good song, but I think still has a long way.
Star
[Joker]
This difficulty has several spacing errors, please use only one "beat snap divisor"
00:44:817 (7) Add new combo
00:45:686 (1) Remove new Combo
00:50:034 (6) Add new Combo
01:23:948 (5) This object is too close to the previous object
01:31:775 (4) Add new combo
01:32:862 (1) Remove new combo
01:35:688 (4) Add new combo
01:36:123 (1) Remove new combo
[Ace]
00:24:381 (2) Spacing
00:33:946 (4)^
00:48:729 (2) This object is too close to the previous object
00:50:033 (4) Spacing
01:35:250 (1~) from here until the end came down spacing, why?
[Queen]
This difficulty is quite easy to be the hardest, try to put more triple and jumps.
00:38:729 (3) Spacing
00:59:600 (4)^
01:24:601 ~ It sounds as if a note should go here
01:37:862 (7) This object is too close to the previous object
Good song, but I think still has a long way.
Star
Joker~
I see nothing wrong with it.
Ace~
I feel horrible, but this is so well mapped I'm not seeing any issues!
Queen~
Only thing I didn't like about this was the clapping didn't continue through the song, other than that, it's prefect are really fun to play.
Sorry I'm not oh any help but so many people have looked at this!
If you wanna send me another map, please do so.
I see nothing wrong with it.
Ace~
I feel horrible, but this is so well mapped I'm not seeing any issues!
Queen~
Only thing I didn't like about this was the clapping didn't continue through the song, other than that, it's prefect are really fun to play.
Sorry I'm not oh any help but so many people have looked at this!
If you wanna send me another map, please do so.
[Joker]
00:17:859 (2,3) - these circle snap...
00:29:164 (3,4) - ^
00:32:642 (2,3) - ^
00:48:295 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:643 (2,3) - these circle snap...
01:05:252 (4) - 1 grid down
01:34:384 (4,5) - remove this circle and become slider?
[Ace]
00:57:642 (6,7) - remove these circle become slider
[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - not perfect stacked
00:50:034 (5,6) - spacing
00:17:859 (2,3) - these circle snap...
00:29:164 (3,4) - ^
00:32:642 (2,3) - ^
00:48:295 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:643 (2,3) - these circle snap...
01:05:252 (4) - 1 grid down
01:34:384 (4,5) - remove this circle and become slider?
[Ace]
00:57:642 (6,7) - remove these circle become slider
[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - not perfect stacked
00:50:034 (5,6) - spacing
hi, here's my mod 
orz.. I would like to suggest you resnap all notes in all diff....
Queen
00:16:989(1,2,3) make them even
00:29:816(7,8) stack them
00:40:034(6,7) spacing
01:07:209(1,2,3) stack them or make them even
01:08:513(5,6,7) spacing.
01:10:904(2,3,4) spacing, make them even
01:19:818(6,7) spacing
01:22:861(7,8) ^
01:23:514(8,9) ^
01:29:601(3,4) ^
01:36:123(3,4) ^
01:37:427(6,7) ^
Ace
00:48:294(1,2) spacing
01:04:816(3,4) ^
01:37:859(1,2) ^
Joker
01:34:384(4,5) it's a easy diff so remove the circle at 01:35:253 and extend the slider to here
that'a all
orz.. I would like to suggest you resnap all notes in all diff....
Queen
00:16:989(1,2,3) make them even
00:29:816(7,8) stack them
00:40:034(6,7) spacing
01:07:209(1,2,3) stack them or make them even
01:08:513(5,6,7) spacing.
01:10:904(2,3,4) spacing, make them even
01:19:818(6,7) spacing
01:22:861(7,8) ^
01:23:514(8,9) ^
01:29:601(3,4) ^
01:36:123(3,4) ^
01:37:427(6,7) ^
Ace
00:48:294(1,2) spacing
01:04:816(3,4) ^
01:37:859(1,2) ^
Joker
01:34:384(4,5) it's a easy diff so remove the circle at 01:35:253 and extend the slider to here
that'a all
This mapset gives me a feeling that you're littering objects around. I see there are several spacing mods above, so I don't need to point out
examples:
<Queen>
01:08:513 (5,6,7) -
01:22:644 (7,8,9) -
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
01:36:992 (6,7) -
etc.
<Ace>
00:27:424 (6) - add clap at the end
also claps sound messy at times
<Queen>
01:12:426 (7) - move to long white tick and add a note at the current position
01:13:513 (1,2,3) - add normal hitsound fade-in (use inherited timing sections)
examples:
<Queen>
01:08:513 (5,6,7) -
01:22:644 (7,8,9) -
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
01:36:992 (6,7) -
etc.
<Ace>
00:27:424 (6) - add clap at the end
also claps sound messy at times
<Queen>
01:12:426 (7) - move to long white tick and add a note at the current position
01:13:513 (1,2,3) - add normal hitsound fade-in (use inherited timing sections)
Please excuse the delay. The accident at the Internet service provider. I hope for your understanding
Modding:
General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)
- Storyboarding (use Half Speed). sounds better :3
Timing:
Good
Joker:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (0,90)
- Approach (-1)
- Overall (-1)
- If you want sound mode, w
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00:17:859 (2,3) - I don't understand this. error with spaicing, then, correct (00:18:729 (3,4), 00:19:598 (4,1), 00:20:468 (1,2), 00:21:337 (2,3). correct all, ok D:) used on this place spacing 0,8x
/suggetion: 00:29:164 (3) - delete circle, 00:30:033 (4) - delete slider. 00:29:164 - add a spinner and finished on 00:30:903
00:48:295 (5) - new combo
00:49:165 (1) - delete new combo
01:06:122 (6) - rough slider. giving it elegance =
01:29:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,2,3,4,5) - clearly put the sliders under each other (wiyhout gridsnap)
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
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Ace:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (1,30)
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00:22:207 (3,4) - spaicing. huh, make it the same
00:37:424 - add a circle, no - better: 00:33:946 (4) - delete this
00:50:468 (5,6) - spaicing, oh, a lot of mistakes with spacings. fix it
00:57:859 (7) - move on 00:58:076
01:16:989 (6) - no
01:28:946 (1) - move on 01:28:729
01:29:163 - add a circle
01:07:859 (Timing Setup Panel) - hmm,can you delete here KIAI? (Applies to all diffs)
01:14:381 - (Timing Setup Panel) - now add KIAI
01:21:337 - (Timing Setup Panel) - delete KIAI
<Sound>
00:23:294 - R
00:28:511 - R
00:38:729 - delete R, put W
00:43:076 - delete E, put W
00:44:816 - delete E
00:54:816 - delete W+R
00:55:250 - R
00:55:685 - delete R
00:56:555 - R
01:28:946 - delete W+R
01:29:163 - R
Queen:
- Approach (+1)
- If you want sound mod, write on queue or pm
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00:18:729 (6) - Rough slider. a lot of sliders in this Diff - rough and clumsy. fix it
00:30:903 (Timing Setup Panel) - KIAI. Why is there? (on map meets at a time, can remove?, or do the same on Joker and Ace)
00:44:382 (8,1) - spaicing. use Distance Spaicing please
00:57:861 (3) - move on 00:58:078
01:09:600 - add a circle
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - =) nope, altered, it will not do
I note your major mistakes:
1) Spaicing errors at all diffs
2) Rough sliders. giving them a beautiful form
Cool map, star
Modding:
General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)
- Storyboarding (use Half Speed). sounds better :3
Timing:
Good
Joker:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (0,90)
- Approach (-1)
- Overall (-1)
- If you want sound mode, w
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00:17:859 (2,3) - I don't understand this. error with spaicing, then, correct (00:18:729 (3,4), 00:19:598 (4,1), 00:20:468 (1,2), 00:21:337 (2,3). correct all, ok D:) used on this place spacing 0,8x
/suggetion: 00:29:164 (3) - delete circle, 00:30:033 (4) - delete slider. 00:29:164 - add a spinner and finished on 00:30:903
00:48:295 (5) - new combo
00:49:165 (1) - delete new combo
01:06:122 (6) - rough slider. giving it elegance =
01:29:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,2,3,4,5) - clearly put the sliders under each other (wiyhout gridsnap)
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
------
Ace:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (1,30)
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00:22:207 (3,4) - spaicing. huh, make it the same
00:37:424 - add a circle, no - better: 00:33:946 (4) - delete this
00:50:468 (5,6) - spaicing, oh, a lot of mistakes with spacings. fix it
00:57:859 (7) - move on 00:58:076
01:16:989 (6) - no
01:28:946 (1) - move on 01:28:729
01:29:163 - add a circle
01:07:859 (Timing Setup Panel) - hmm,can you delete here KIAI? (Applies to all diffs)
01:14:381 - (Timing Setup Panel) - now add KIAI
01:21:337 - (Timing Setup Panel) - delete KIAI
<Sound>
00:23:294 - R
00:28:511 - R
00:38:729 - delete R, put W
00:43:076 - delete E, put W
00:44:816 - delete E
00:54:816 - delete W+R
00:55:250 - R
00:55:685 - delete R
00:56:555 - R
01:28:946 - delete W+R
01:29:163 - R
Queen:
- Approach (+1)
- If you want sound mod, write on queue or pm
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00:18:729 (6) - Rough slider. a lot of sliders in this Diff - rough and clumsy. fix it
00:30:903 (Timing Setup Panel) - KIAI. Why is there? (on map meets at a time, can remove?, or do the same on Joker and Ace)
00:44:382 (8,1) - spaicing. use Distance Spaicing please
00:57:861 (3) - move on 00:58:078
01:09:600 - add a circle
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - =) nope, altered, it will not do
I note your major mistakes:
1) Spaicing errors at all diffs
2) Rough sliders. giving them a beautiful form
Cool map, star
oh...I think I have already modded once....
but many spacing problems are not fixed....
check AI mod...
no kds
but many spacing problems are not fixed....
check AI mod...
no kds
Hi there~~
[Joker]
The map is quiet unspaced - or said in another way, it doesn't have consistent distance snappings.
Try turning Distance Snap ON and go circle by circle fixing the spacing issues.
+Positive thing: the hitsounds sound good
35:251 (4) - Maybe a new combo here?
38:729 (7) - (^)
1:21:340 (1) - I'd add a clap in the end of the slider and leave the beggining with no hitsound. Same with slider 2.
1:28:731 (T) - The previous inherited timing section (that is now a bit after the spinner) should start here.
[Ace]
25:326 (3) - Why not stacking this under 1? Also, watch the spacing.
Please be careful with the spacing, again. Try to fix the wrong spacings. I'm not mentioning all of them because they are a loooot. Try using distance snap here, too.
[Killer Queen]
I like this one
1:00:469 (T) - Try starting the kiai here. Maybe in the other diffs too, to keep the consistency.
1:07:209 (1) - Try ending the kiai time here, and starting a new one at 1:14:383
1:21:122 (1) - End the kiai here
There are a lot of spacing issues here too. I suggest you to do the same thing I said before.
Fix all those things, mainly the spacing issues, and I'll star
Edit: As promised, here's my star
[Joker]
The map is quiet unspaced - or said in another way, it doesn't have consistent distance snappings.
Try turning Distance Snap ON and go circle by circle fixing the spacing issues.
+Positive thing: the hitsounds sound good
35:251 (4) - Maybe a new combo here?
38:729 (7) - (^)
1:21:340 (1) - I'd add a clap in the end of the slider and leave the beggining with no hitsound. Same with slider 2.
1:28:731 (T) - The previous inherited timing section (that is now a bit after the spinner) should start here.
[Ace]
25:326 (3) - Why not stacking this under 1? Also, watch the spacing.
Please be careful with the spacing, again. Try to fix the wrong spacings. I'm not mentioning all of them because they are a loooot. Try using distance snap here, too.
[Killer Queen]
I like this one
1:00:469 (T) - Try starting the kiai here. Maybe in the other diffs too, to keep the consistency.
1:07:209 (1) - Try ending the kiai time here, and starting a new one at 1:14:383
1:21:122 (1) - End the kiai here
There are a lot of spacing issues here too. I suggest you to do the same thing I said before.
Fix all those things, mainly the spacing issues, and I'll star
Edit: As promised, here's my star
Topic Starter
Thank you!narakucrimson wrote:
Hi there~~
[Joker]
The map is quiet unspaced - or said in another way, it doesn't have consistent distance snappings. ...I mapped this one with Distance Snap....
Try turning Distance Snap ON and go circle by circle fixing the spacing issues.
+Positive thing: the hitsounds sound good
35:251 (4) - Maybe a new combo here? Done
38:729 (7) - (^) Done
1:21:340 (1) - I'd add a clap in the end of the slider and leave the beggining with no hitsound. Same with slider 2. That clap at 1 comes from the previous slider. But done
1:28:731 (T) - The previous inherited timing section (that is now a bit after the spinner) should start here. Fixed(?)
[Ace]
25:326 (3) - Why not stacking this under 1? Also, watch the spacing. Too lazy and the spacing is good
Please be careful with the spacing, again. Try to fix the wrong spacings. I'm not mentioning all of them because they are a loooot. Try using distance snap here, too. I tripled checked the spacing with Distance Snap, check them yourself. Just because it looks like a huge gap or a small gap dosen't make it so.
[Killer Queen]
I like this one
1:00:469 (T) - Try starting the kiai here. Maybe in the other diffs too, to keep the consistency. Done?
1:07:209 (1) - Try ending the kiai time here, and starting a new one at 1:14:383
1:21:122 (1) - End the kiai here
There are a lot of spacing issues here too. I suggest you to do the same thing I said before. Checked everything and distance snapped. I wish you guys were clearer on where the problems are...
Fix all those things, mainly the spacing issues, and I'll star
Ace
00:37:433 (6) - add clap
Killer Queen
00:55:912 (4) - new combo
sound volume in soft term are too quiet for me
star
00:37:433 (6) - add clap
Killer Queen
00:55:912 (4) - new combo
sound volume in soft term are too quiet for me
star
[General]
If you noticed the skin 'bloody mess' in front of BSS notice, delete bloody mess folder inside of your osz file...
[Also, you need to full-submit after this :3]
[Joker]
Resnap please :3
00:21:346 (2,3,4) - 3-4 is with spacing problem orz
00:26:564 (4) - Move into center :3
[Ace]
00:24:390 (2,3,4) - Is 2-3 supposed spacing...?
00:41:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
00:58:737 (1) - This slider would be end on 01:00:476 :3 [Make it 1/4 longer]
01:04:390 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 supposed spacing...?
01:07:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
[Killer Queen]
00:18:303 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:20:694 (7,8,9) - ^
00:31:781 (3,4,5) - ^ but nazi
00:35:585 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:36:129 (6,7,8,9) - Some spacing issue...
00:38:303 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:151 - Wonder why Kiai start from here... orz
01:12:216 (6,7,8) - Some spacing issue...
01:26:781 (10,1) - Wonder about this jump ;_;
Well... Some spacing issues ;_;
Sorry for no star yet orz
If you noticed the skin 'bloody mess' in front of BSS notice, delete bloody mess folder inside of your osz file...
[Also, you need to full-submit after this :3]
[Joker]
Resnap please :3
00:21:346 (2,3,4) - 3-4 is with spacing problem orz
00:26:564 (4) - Move into center :3
[Ace]
00:24:390 (2,3,4) - Is 2-3 supposed spacing...?
00:41:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
00:58:737 (1) - This slider would be end on 01:00:476 :3 [Make it 1/4 longer]
01:04:390 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 supposed spacing...?
01:07:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
[Killer Queen]
00:18:303 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:20:694 (7,8,9) - ^
00:31:781 (3,4,5) - ^ but nazi
00:35:585 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:36:129 (6,7,8,9) - Some spacing issue...
00:38:303 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:151 - Wonder why Kiai start from here... orz
01:12:216 (6,7,8) - Some spacing issue...
01:26:781 (10,1) - Wonder about this jump ;_;
Well... Some spacing issues ;_;
Sorry for no star yet orz
Topic Starter
Had a bit of trouble understanding your mod, but hope I did good enough!arien666 wrote:
[General]
If you noticed the skin 'bloody mess' in front of BSS notice, delete bloody mess folder inside of your osz file...
[Also, you need to full-submit after this :3]
[Joker]
Resnap please :3
00:21:346 (2,3,4) - 3-4 is with spacing problem orz
00:26:564 (4) - Move into center :3
[Ace]
00:24:390 (2,3,4) - Is 2-3 supposed spacing...?
00:41:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
00:58:737 (1) - This slider would be end on 01:00:476 :3 [Make it 1/4 longer]
01:04:390 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 supposed spacing...?
01:07:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
[Killer Queen]
00:18:303 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:20:694 (7,8,9) - ^
00:31:781 (3,4,5) - ^ but nazi
00:35:585 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:36:129 (6,7,8,9) - Some spacing issue...
00:38:303 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:151 - Wonder why Kiai start from here... orz
01:12:216 (6,7,8) - Some spacing issue...
01:26:781 (10,1) - Wonder about this jump ;_;
Well... Some spacing issues ;_;
Sorry for no star yet orz
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