Doomsday93 wrote:

And Back again:

1. Offset: 23,832 (Yours looks a bit early to me)I liked it, Thanks xD

[EASY]

Yeah. This does feels a bit too hard for an easy. since you've set it so the spacing is so close together, it can make it awkward to make it easier. the fact that its so close together makes it hard to read. To be honest, I would recommend that you remap the easy with a slightly higher slider velocity, to make it clearer to read. Also, try to keep beats at least 1/1 away from each other (aka, if you put a beat on a white tick, try not to put a beat down until after the next white tick, if that made sense). Thats what people generally do in good easy difficulties.

Besides, BAT's will call you out on if since the easiest difficulty is over 3 stars, and this easy is 3.48 stars. Not that that matters to me.

Apart from that, nothing else bothered me.

Okay, Will remap with a bit higher speed!

[NORMAL]

Kinda like Easy, this feels pretty tough for a Normal. Again, through most of the map, the spacing is pretty cramped, which is awkward, and again, it makes some parts hard to read. I can't suggest much here unless you want to remap this too. You could always call it Normal+ if you really want to keep this. Okay, i'll probably rename this later.

02:11:842 (1,2) - having on slider after another like this can be tough to read for an inexperienced player (the kind that play normal difficulties). Maybe you could remove a repeat from both of these sliders? (And maybe you could put a beat down at 02:12:670. sounds like it would fit in well.) Fixed

[HARD]

Increase circle size by 1? Insane having a bigger circle size than Hard doesn't make that much sense
Done.

00:50:533 (2) - Make this slider shorter? It sounds like you made it a bit too long by accident. Hmm i don't think so, recheck with your new offset if it still sounds weird
03:47:523 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I found that this part was pretty odd. First up, I think this would work better if it used the spacing the rest of the map used. It can be awkward to read when its all bunched up like it is. Also, perhaps you could close the jump that comes in just after this bit? Its the only jump here, and it doesn't seem to be mapped to anything.
Distance Snap was kinda weird here, i'll fix those close notes

[INSANE]

Everything before 00:30:257 (8) - I see that you mapped 1/4 in this bit. Im not quite sure how to explain it actually, but it definately feels veeeery odd here. the rest of the intro after this bit works fine though. Maybe you could do something like that in the bit after this for the intro as well?
Bookmarked, will remap this later, thanks !

Some rough looking sliders, but nothing else bothered me too much.

Overall, its not too bad. Hard/Insane are generally fine, but Easy/Normal are a bit dodgy, mainly in the difficulty area. I would recommend remapping them with a slightly higher slider velocity to make them look cleaner for a start.

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Delete "Demetori - Crazy Xenomorph (Dragvon) [Lunatic.osb" Fixed
  • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level. Oh boy, i'm trying to xD
  • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize.

[Easy]

• • 02:15:980 (1) - End this slider here 02:16:808
  • 02:17:635 (3) - End this slider here 02:18:463
  • 02:19:291 (2) - End this slider here 02:20:118

I've decided to stick with those sliders for now, i'll may change it after a full check on easy

[Lunatic]

• • 00:23:637 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle here 00:23:844

strager wrote:

Easy
No, no, no. You know what's retarded? Fat, stubby, slow kick sliders in an Easy difficulty. This isn't Easy. This is I can't map outside of Insane difficulty.

(I stopped playing half way through. Too many 1/2's. Too much clutter.)

I don't think this song really needs an easier difficulty than your current Normal.
Indeed, the song itself don't "wanna be easy", i've asked for a guest easy difficult, i'll keep it for now while i'll fix it

Normal
Mess of notes. I really don't like this. Will fix the spacing later then

Make this shorter, please. Maybe two minutes long. Would the end of the easy fit?

Hard
See points 2, 4, and 5 under Lunatic.

02:15:980 (1,5) - I like these sliders. Heh i like them too :3 they look like neckties Dx
03:11:014 - Horrible. Bah. Don't make it so quiet, at least. I'm not so sure about this part, nothing to map >.>. Fixed volume.
03:49:178 (1,2) - Nasty overlap. Move (1) over to the right. Yes, I noticed this while playing. Yes, it affected my playing. No, I'm not being a nazi. If I was being a nazi, I would point out that 03:52:075 (2,3,4) isn't evenly spaced. Fixed~

Lunatic
Several things I disliked about this map:

1. It's hard to read.
2. The combo markers are all wrong.
3. It's hard to read.
4. It's not mapped to the end.
5. The combo markers are all wrong.

You can fix both 1 and 3 at the same time by setting the OD to 9. 2 and 5 will take a while; 4 should be relatively easy. Hmm fixed OD, but if i extend it won't the score get too much high? Also, i'll try to fix the combo markers

00:47:832 (8,9,10) - This is REALLY ugly. Stacked them

Other than that, I see no problems with this map, really.

Leorda wrote:

Oi

[File]
Your file size is unrankable, the maximum file of your beatmap is 10MB (current 10,8MB)
Hmm would that really be necessary? It's only 0,8 :3 i'll wait for an second opinion on this ^-^ (Btw, topic says: Filesize: 10466kb)
[Easy]*Done*
*) This diff is very hard for new player Yes, i'm trying to reduce the difficult >.<! I've even asked for a guest easy
*) Place the object at blue tick is makes confusing for new player As Lybydose said, "some parts of this song use a time signature that isn't supported in the editor" Some blue ticks sounds strange but they are supposed to fit x)

00:27:763 (6) - Too short for easy diff
00:36:038 (5) - ^
00:45:556 (5) - ^
01:02:314 (4) - ^
01:15:969 (1) - ^Fixed them, they were weird due to offset change
01:18:464 (5) - New combo?
01:18:877 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:20:119 (4) - New combo?
01:20:946 (1) - Remove new combo? Combos fixed
01:28:395 (1) - Move 1 grid up? Reallocated some notes
01:28:912 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe? It was supposed to be at 01:29:222, i extended it here to make it easier :3
01:51:153 (5) - New combo?
01:51:566 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:52:808 (4) - New combo?
01:53:635 (1) - Remove new combo?Combos fixed
02:01:601 (1) - I think this is not fit to song, replace with slider? Maybe? Similar to the last one
02:08:532 (5) - Make symetric?Is it better now?
02:15:153 (5) - Too short for easy diff Fixed
02:37:498 (5) - New combo, too long for easy diffdone

[Normal]*Done*
You better to check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) right now) Because it's so many spacing error, jump are not suitable for Normal diff
I've recheck it

00:24:038 (2) - Snap it to blue tick, it's really confuse
00:25:073 (6) - ^
00:26:107 (4) - ^
00:27:142 (8) - ^
00:28:383 (1) - ^
00:29:418 (5) - ^
00:30:452 (1) - ^
00:31:487 (5) - ^
00:33:349 (3) - ^
00:34:383 (1) - ^
00:35:418 (3) - ^
01:14:314 (2) - ^ I've checked those, when i've changed the offset forgot to fix, thanks xD
01:18:877 (1) - Move new combo to 01:19:705 (3)?
01:20:946 (1) - Move new combo to 01:20:119 (4)?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo? Fixed those combos

[Hard]*Done*
So FUN!!!!!

01:54:877 (3) - Stack with 01:54:049 (1)? Hmm nice, thanks xD
03:46:282 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:47:523 (3) - New combo? Fits better, thanks!

[Lunatic] *Done*
The HP Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Circle Size is same as [Hard], make it diffrent? Circle Size was different, but Doom said it woulb be better this way, as for the HP Drain and OD, i'll change them =p

01:52:808 (8) - New combo?
03:47:523 (5) - ^
Both fixed!
Not bad
STAR

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late ...
And sory again, but I like the map but I that's not fun to map an easy on. Yea i know xD!

[Easy]
01:29:222 (1) - Move 3/4 later and reduce by 3/4
02:01:601 (1) - ^ Both fixed

If you want to have 3.00 star, I advice you to do all of that :<
00:35:831 (4) - Remove and move 00:36:038 (5) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse
00:45:349 (2) - ^ with 00:45:556 (3)
00:53:625 (2) - ^ with 00:53:832 (3) Done all
00:49:383 (2) - Remove Done
00:55:900 (2) - Remove and move 00:56:107 (3) 1/2 earlier and add a reverse
00:57:969 (2) - ^ with 00:58:176 (3)
01:00:038 (2) - ^ with 01:00:245 (3) Done all
01:02:107 (2) - Remove and move 01:02:314 (3) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse Fixed
00:50:935 (3) - Remove 1 reverse Fixed
01:23:429 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:24:257 (2) - ^
01:26:740 (1) - ^
01:27:567 (2) - ^ All fixed
01:39:567 (3) - Remove and add circle
01:40:808 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:42:360 (2) - Remove
01:43:601 (3) - ^
01:44:843 (2) - ^
01:46:084 (4) - ^ All done
01:56:118 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:56:946 (2) - ^
01:59:429 (1) - ^
02:00:256 (2) - ^
02:09:360 (1) - ^
02:10:187 (2) - ^
02:11:015 (3) - ^All done
02:20:946 (4) - Reduce by 1/2
02:27:566 (2) - ^
02:34:187 (2) - ^ Done
02:39:153 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
02:39:980 (1) - ^
02:40:808 (1) - ^
02:41:635 (1) - Remove and add circle All done! Thanks a lot xD!


If you do all of that, 3.00 Star o/ WOOT love ya <3

[Normal]
00:46:176 (1) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/2 Fixed

[Hard]
01:38:636 (2) - Move on the blue tick
01:39:843 (7) - ^
01:41:084 (5) - ^
01:47:291 (5) - ^ All done

[Lunatic]
Fine, I Think...

[General]
I Think you must change The Name of Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Lunatic, Lunatic to Extra Done

TheVileOne wrote:

[b]Overall

There is absolutely no sound until 11:625. I highly recommend you cut the start of the song by at least 5 seconds so people will wait 5-6 seconds and hear noise and not 11 seconds.

Black background should fade into the song's background if that's at all possible.

Also the sound quality sucks. Hmm i won't fix those >.>

Normal

00:48:659 (1) - Why is this a new combo? Fixed

01:51:566 (2,3,4) - Harsh angle- overlap is ugly. I think you can mirror 01:51:980 (3,4) - to look like 1 and 2 to fix the overlap. *

You can realign the blue combo afterward if you want.

01:53:222 (2,4) - Shift 2 or the notes after 2 so it doesn't overlap 4. *Both Fixed

01:57:773 (1,2,3,4) - Too close to the previous combo? I suggest that you properly distance them to avoid the overlap and then just resnap all the notes up to the spinner.
Fixed

02:13:084 - Add a note?
02:13:911 - Add a note? In my last updated i removed them, so i won't put it back D:

Hard

00:27:245 (8) - Move this and all the notes after it right 1 unit. Centers everything and fixes the spacing. Uhh no
00:31:900 (6) - (Leave this note where it is. Shifting 5 will fix the spacing here. Don't worry if the distance snap cries fowl. It's a glitch.)

01:14:418 (2,3) - Move right 1 unit Done

01:29:015 (1) - Start here? 01:29:222 - (It meets the 2000 point limit) Done.

01:44:843 (3) - Move right 1 unit

01:46:084 (3) - This can be safely placed onto the new position regardless of distance snap. Did both

01:47:843 (1,2,3) - The reversers are placed wrongly. They reverse quicker so use a blue tick to repeat on. Reduce the size of both sliders.
Those are staying

02:01:704 (1) - Start here? 02:01:911 - (See the white tick pattern) Fixed

02:32:015 (2) - Make this line up with the slider end of 02:30:877 (4) - ? You did so here 02:33:670 (2) - Oh forgot that, fixed

03:11:014 (1) - End this on the previous white tick?? (03:12:462 -) Fixed

Lunatic

01:14:418 (2,3) - Move right 1 unit. Done

Eh not much to say. It's hard to mod.

Extra

00:26:935 (4,5,6) - Spaces should be equal when the pace is this fast. Fixed

02:51:773 (1,2,3) - Generally not a god idea to reverse this quickly.

02:52:394 (5,6,7) - ^ I'll keep them for now, if i find them too much annoying i'll stack them =p

03:46:282 (1,2) - Move up 1 unit? Done



Touhou fans will eat this up. Star.

OH-SHI- wrote:

Not bad I must say.

I...am pretty exhausted right now, but I'll pick on the things that really need attention. I liked Lunatic very much.
So here's what I found:

Lunatic: In general, I noticed some your notes were all shifted slightly to the left, I found it puzzling. Please make the
neccesary changes so they all appear on the right grids as they should. Spacing looked very inconsistent at
some places, but that's nitpicking on my part. Hmm i'm not sure if i fixed the right ones. If i didn't please show me an example >.<

Extra: So aggressive.
- 03:17:945 - your slider is using 1/2. Not good. It would be better if you went with 1/3 or something. It's more
intuitive since this track is mathcore, a bit complexed timed. Try doing what I did with the slider for
all parts similar to it.
I suggest this: (SS was here) Hmm this is exactly how it was before or there is something i'm not seeing?

- 03:15:255 - Now this, and the one slider and spinner that comes after, aren't very nice.
I did some tweaking to them, so here's what I suggest. Please look closely at the timeline, I shifted them, so take note.
(Another ss was here~)I've noticed the timeline, but have you changed the speed? for some reason i can't get a similar shape with a repetead slider :3

JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
OD is quite low for a normal.
02:01:911 (1) - This appears after the blue beats while it should be before, which is pretty stupid and confusing, Remove this spinner or increase OD. Hmmm incresed OD by 1, for now


[Hard] I will fix these later
Increase OD to avoid the map becoming a clusterfuck.
Increase distance spacing. Seriously, the part after the first break has all the beats sprawling around, with distances that are similar despite the timing.
02:28:394 (5) - Is this supposed to be a blanket slider? The overlap looks pretty fail. >_>


[Insane]
OD is good, spacing... At least use 1.0 god dammit Fixing~


[Extra]
I like this OD, and its also fast enough to counter the spacing problems.


Should be good... I guess?