Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the late ...
And sory again, but I like the map but I that's not fun to map an easy on. Yea i know xD!

[Easy]
01:29:222 (1) - Move 3/4 later and reduce by 3/4
02:01:601 (1) - ^ Both fixed

If you want to have 3.00 star, I advice you to do all of that :<
00:35:831 (4) - Remove and move 00:36:038 (5) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse
00:45:349 (2) - ^ with 00:45:556 (3)
00:53:625 (2) - ^ with 00:53:832 (3) Done all
00:49:383 (2) - Remove Done
00:55:900 (2) - Remove and move 00:56:107 (3) 1/2 earlier and add a reverse
00:57:969 (2) - ^ with 00:58:176 (3)
01:00:038 (2) - ^ with 01:00:245 (3) Done all
01:02:107 (2) - Remove and move 01:02:314 (3) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse Fixed
00:50:935 (3) - Remove 1 reverse Fixed
01:23:429 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:24:257 (2) - ^
01:26:740 (1) - ^
01:27:567 (2) - ^ All fixed
01:39:567 (3) - Remove and add circle
01:40:808 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:42:360 (2) - Remove
01:43:601 (3) - ^
01:44:843 (2) - ^
01:46:084 (4) - ^ All done
01:56:118 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
01:56:946 (2) - ^
01:59:429 (1) - ^
02:00:256 (2) - ^
02:09:360 (1) - ^
02:10:187 (2) - ^
02:11:015 (3) - ^All done
02:20:946 (4) - Reduce by 1/2
02:27:566 (2) - ^
02:34:187 (2) - ^ Done
02:39:153 (1) - Remove 1 reverse
02:39:980 (1) - ^
02:40:808 (1) - ^
02:41:635 (1) - Remove and add circle All done! Thanks a lot xD!


If you do all of that, 3.00 Star o/ WOOT love ya <3

[Normal]
00:46:176 (1) - Move 1/2 later and reduce by 1/2 Fixed

[Hard]
01:38:636 (2) - Move on the blue tick
01:39:843 (7) - ^
01:41:084 (5) - ^
01:47:291 (5) - ^ All done

[Lunatic]
Fine, I Think...

[General]
I Think you must change The Name of Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard, Hard to Lunatic, Lunatic to Extra Done

TheVileOne wrote:

[b]Overall

There is absolutely no sound until 11:625. I highly recommend you cut the start of the song by at least 5 seconds so people will wait 5-6 seconds and hear noise and not 11 seconds.

Black background should fade into the song's background if that's at all possible.

Also the sound quality sucks. Hmm i won't fix those >.>

Normal

00:48:659 (1) - Why is this a new combo? Fixed

01:51:566 (2,3,4) - Harsh angle- overlap is ugly. I think you can mirror 01:51:980 (3,4) - to look like 1 and 2 to fix the overlap. *

You can realign the blue combo afterward if you want.

01:53:222 (2,4) - Shift 2 or the notes after 2 so it doesn't overlap 4. *Both Fixed

01:57:773 (1,2,3,4) - Too close to the previous combo? I suggest that you properly distance them to avoid the overlap and then just resnap all the notes up to the spinner.
Fixed

02:13:084 - Add a note?
02:13:911 - Add a note? In my last updated i removed them, so i won't put it back D:

Hard

00:27:245 (8) - Move this and all the notes after it right 1 unit. Centers everything and fixes the spacing. Uhh no
00:31:900 (6) - (Leave this note where it is. Shifting 5 will fix the spacing here. Don't worry if the distance snap cries fowl. It's a glitch.)

01:14:418 (2,3) - Move right 1 unit Done

01:29:015 (1) - Start here? 01:29:222 - (It meets the 2000 point limit) Done.

01:44:843 (3) - Move right 1 unit

01:46:084 (3) - This can be safely placed onto the new position regardless of distance snap. Did both

01:47:843 (1,2,3) - The reversers are placed wrongly. They reverse quicker so use a blue tick to repeat on. Reduce the size of both sliders.
Those are staying

02:01:704 (1) - Start here? 02:01:911 - (See the white tick pattern) Fixed

02:32:015 (2) - Make this line up with the slider end of 02:30:877 (4) - ? You did so here 02:33:670 (2) - Oh forgot that, fixed

03:11:014 (1) - End this on the previous white tick?? (03:12:462 -) Fixed

Lunatic

01:14:418 (2,3) - Move right 1 unit. Done

Eh not much to say. It's hard to mod.

Extra

00:26:935 (4,5,6) - Spaces should be equal when the pace is this fast. Fixed

02:51:773 (1,2,3) - Generally not a god idea to reverse this quickly.

02:52:394 (5,6,7) - ^ I'll keep them for now, if i find them too much annoying i'll stack them =p

03:46:282 (1,2) - Move up 1 unit? Done



Touhou fans will eat this up. Star.

OH-SHI- wrote:

Not bad I must say.

I...am pretty exhausted right now, but I'll pick on the things that really need attention. I liked Lunatic very much.
So here's what I found:

Lunatic: In general, I noticed some your notes were all shifted slightly to the left, I found it puzzling. Please make the
neccesary changes so they all appear on the right grids as they should. Spacing looked very inconsistent at
some places, but that's nitpicking on my part. Hmm i'm not sure if i fixed the right ones. If i didn't please show me an example >.<

Extra: So aggressive.
- 03:17:945 - your slider is using 1/2. Not good. It would be better if you went with 1/3 or something. It's more
intuitive since this track is mathcore, a bit complexed timed. Try doing what I did with the slider for
all parts similar to it.
I suggest this: (SS was here) Hmm this is exactly how it was before or there is something i'm not seeing?

- 03:15:255 - Now this, and the one slider and spinner that comes after, aren't very nice.
I did some tweaking to them, so here's what I suggest. Please look closely at the timeline, I shifted them, so take note.
(Another ss was here~)I've noticed the timeline, but have you changed the speed? for some reason i can't get a similar shape with a repetead slider :3

JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
OD is quite low for a normal.
02:01:911 (1) - This appears after the blue beats while it should be before, which is pretty stupid and confusing, Remove this spinner or increase OD. Hmmm incresed OD by 1, for now


[Hard] I will fix these later
Increase OD to avoid the map becoming a clusterfuck.
Increase distance spacing. Seriously, the part after the first break has all the beats sprawling around, with distances that are similar despite the timing.
02:28:394 (5) - Is this supposed to be a blanket slider? The overlap looks pretty fail. >_>


[Insane]
OD is good, spacing... At least use 1.0 god dammit Fixing~


[Extra]
I like this OD, and its also fast enough to counter the spacing problems.


Should be good... I guess?