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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月4日 at 17:26:21

Artist: sweet ARMS
Title: Blade of Hope
Source: 新妹魔王の契約者
Tags: Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha The Testament of Sister New Devil opening tv size Iori Nomizu Togashi Misuzu Sadohara Kaori Misato xxdeathx mtbbsben
BPM: 188
Filesize: 2408kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.6 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Insane (4.64 stars, 269 notes)
  3. Normal (2.19 stars, 155 notes)
  4. xxdeathx's Hard (3.37 stars, 228 notes)


Download: sweet ARMS - Blade of Hope
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#11 The opening of <新妹魔王の契約者>: <Blade of Hope> by sweet ARMS

Easy/Normal/Insane by me
Hard by xxdeathx

mp3/video by Shad0w1and
video removed because of so many nsfw scenes.
dtable? lol.

SPOILER
师徒四人挑了经卷上了鼋背,真好似平地一般。老鼋开口发问:“圣僧,西方世界,可太平否?”“人人礼佛吃斋,真真个西方极乐。蒙如来赐我经卷5048卷,保我唐王社稷永安。”老王八沉吟半晌,忽然往水中一沉,把师徒四人掇进水中:“绝对不允许传播西方价值观的教材流入中国课堂!”
posted
又是一个段子手
posted
[ Easy ]
00:17:392 (2) - 这里来回那里没对到音感觉怪怪的 http://puu.sh/eMeD7/063ade80ab.jpg这样子试试?
[ Normal ]
00:44:520 (2) - 稍微下面去点感觉FLOW更顺
00:58:562 (1) - 我觉得这里这样听着更舒服点http://puu.sh/eMfjt/07ad17ec25.jpg
01:08:775 (1) - ↑
[ xxdeathx's Hard ]
00:57:126 (4,5) - 我觉得这两做blanket更好点
01:01:115 (5) - NC,01:01:434 (1) - 去NC
01:15:158 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个统一下间距吧
01:26:169 (3) - 这形状不太好略扭曲了点
posted
[General]
Tag:xxdeathx mtbbsben
好像不只是mp3音量小,sc1的clap音就感觉挺小的...

[Insane]
00:22:658 (2) - 只跟背景的钢琴(?)音的话,后面部分总觉得稍有点空。稍微跟一点歌词试试
00:25:211 (2) - ^
00:27:764 (2,3) - ^
00:30:317 (2) - ^
00:52:817 (1,2) - 这里实际上挺推荐把这俩合并成slider,速度可以再减,0.5或者更低都行,那样玩起来比较有感觉一点,但是考虑到你这边已经摆成这样了,好像不好改动了,就这样也ok。

[xxdeathx‘s Hard]
wa, death
00:22:498 (3) - change into this design 00:27:605 (3,4) - ? I think it will be better:D
00:36:381 - wtf, hey man, here's your note. Btw, I suggest you add note at 00:36:062 - and move slider 00:36:062 (6) - to 00:36:222 -
01:21:541 (1) - remove the whistle from slider's tail

[Normal]
00:42:924 (2) - 去掉中间锚点,挺别扭。。

[Easy]
nothing to say.

美丽,没啥问题啊。☆祝早rank~
posted
@[ Abhor ]:easy那个我觉得还是我的这个比较舒服,all fix in normal
@Kamio Misuzu: 那个clap我专门调了下音量的,因为原来的太响了……tag等death更新完我再加
Insane那里我图打不开……美丽,不过我还是觉得还是就跟钢琴吧,也算relax part
00:52:817 (1,2) - 我暂时没想到什么好方法改,先这么放着
normal那个无关紧要

thanks for modding
posted
[General]
  1. 現在的clap我覺得有點不明顯


[Insane]
  1. 00:07:339 (4,1) - 有點近 可以放遠點
  2. 00:41:488 (5) - drum clap?
  3. 00:51:700 (2,3,4) - 也許可以搞成下圖的樣子
  4. 00:55:211 - 空著有點奇怪
  5. 01:27:445 - 加條線讓spinner轉出分來的聲音變小?


[xxdeathx's Hard]
  1. 00:41:488 (1) - blanket with 00:41:009 (5) - ?
  2. 00:43:243 (4) - ummm, maybe can try this rhythm
  3. 00:46:674 (3,4) - stack with 00:46:275 (2) - tail?
  4. 00:52:020 - add note here
  5. 01:01:115 - 1/1 slider?
  6. 01:14:520 (3,3) - NC


[Normal]
  1. 00:32:711 - 漏了這個鼓點 有點可惜
  2. 00:58:881 (2,3,4) - 1/2的話應該放在00:59:041 - 00:59:679 - 吧 有人聲支持
  3. 01:09:094 (2,3,4) - ^


easy沒東西想說
good luck
posted
Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]
  1. 現在的clap我覺得有點不明顯 add some volume, same to the tick


[Insane]
  1. 00:07:339 (4,1) - 有點近 可以放遠點 1的音不是很重,我觉得可以
  2. 00:41:488 (5) - drum clap? nice
  3. 00:51:700 (2,3,4) - 也許可以搞成下圖的樣子 一下涨了0.02
  4. 00:55:211 - 空著有點奇怪 我比较喜欢这种停顿感
  5. 01:27:445 - 加條線讓spinner轉出分來的聲音變小? 感觉没啥用


[Normal]
  1. 00:32:711 - 漏了這個鼓點 有點可惜 主跟vocal
  2. 00:58:881 (2,3,4) - 1/2的話應該放在00:59:041 - 00:59:679 - 吧 有人聲支持 这里跟vocal显得有点奇怪 我个人认为
  3. 01:09:094 (2,3,4) - ^


easy沒東西想說
good luck
posted
:lol:

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[xxdeathx‘s Hard]
wa, death
00:22:498 (3) - change into this design 00:27:605 (3,4) - ? I think it will be better:D done
00:36:381 - wtf, hey man, here's your note. Btw, I suggest you add note at 00:36:062 - and move slider 00:36:062 (6) - to 00:36:222 - that note is pretty empty so i want to ignore it
01:21:541 (1) - remove the whistle from slider's tail done

美丽,没啥问题啊。☆祝早rank~

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]
  1. 現在的clap我覺得有點不明顯


[xxdeathx's Hard]
  1. 00:41:488 (1) - blanket with 00:41:009 (5) - ? done
  2. 00:43:243 (4) - ummm, maybe can try this rhythm want longer sliders for this part
  3. 00:46:674 (3,4) - stack with 00:46:275 (2) - tail? unstack for readability
  4. 00:52:020 - add note here doesn't sound right
  5. 01:01:115 - 1/1 slider? done
  6. 01:14:520 (3,3) - NC done


good luck
thanks for mods!

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Shinmai.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52817
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Blade of Hope
TitleUnicode:Blade of Hope
Artist:sweet ARMS
ArtistUnicode:sweet ARMS
Creator:Minakami Yuki
Version:xxdeathx's Hard
Source:新妹魔王の契約者
Tags:Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha The Testament of Sister New Devil opening tv size Iori Nomizu Togashi Misuzu Sadohara Kaori Misato
BeatmapID:606407
BeatmapSetID:263073

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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
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posted
You forgot to add the "(TV Size)" no kd.

Can I make the mania ?
posted

- Yuuto - wrote:

You forgot to add the "(TV Size)" no kd.

Can I make the mania ?
hmm i dont want to make a hybrid set now, sorry not accept other modes diffs.
and since the cd is not out, keep it the same as the video shows it better, so no need to add (tv size) currently.
posted
嗯,说好的mod,这次还是来晚了
以后再也不敢偷懒了QUQ

Insane
00:04:626 (3) - 做成和1一样的形状也不错

00:06:700 (2) - 头部加个whistle似乎节奏更连贯
00:11:807 (2) - 00:15:796 (2) - 也一样
后面的01:22:020 (2) - 是一个意见

00:24:094 (1) - 还是觉得尾部上扬比较好
试验型意见:不然把00:25:211 (2) - 往上移动一点距离
00:27:764 (2) - 和1的位置间隔也再大一些

00:30:317 (2) - 还是改成00:29:998开始到这里的滑条比较好

00:40:530 (1) - 加一个whistle似乎更好

00:41:966 (1) - 中部将sampleset改成drum
00:44:520 (1) - 也一样

00:43:243 (1) - 和00:44:520 (1) - 头部加whistle

00:49:626 (1,3) - 将whistle换成clap或者将sampleset改成normal同时去掉whistle

00:51:541 (1,2,4) - 这三个地方用whistle感觉更合适

01:10:051 (2) - 好像是少了whistle?

01:20:903 (2) - 加个whistle?

Easy
00:08:137 (3) - 和00:18:349 (3) - 头部加whistle似乎不错
01:23:456 (3) - 也一样

00:53:456 (1,2) - 实话说觉得这里的2很难受


01:03:030 (4) - 头部加whistle

音效方面其他的意见和Insane相同位置的一致

Normal
似乎没什么要改的地方-w-

xxdeathx`s hard
nice to see you again~

00:18:988 (1,2,3,4,5) -

00:19:945 (3) - I think it`s too noisy to use clap here...try whistle instead

00:28:243 (5,6) - this pattern is good,but it also sounds bad
how about just using a slider?

01:13:243 (6) - I prefer clap to finish
posted
Hi yuki :3/

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:807 - missed whistle? according to 01:24:573 -
  2. 00:11:328 (1,2,3) - I find this rhythm more easier to play for new players because of polarity issue :3 but you might need to rearrange a lot.
    actually it seems you did it here 01:24:094 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:21:541 - volume here is way too low imo. maybe 30% is better to actually hear the whistle
  4. 00:38:775 (3) - the shape is too sharp imo. just use a curve to match the shapes around this slider?
  5. 00:48:349 (3) - I wouldn't do this, but I guess you know what you're doing
  6. 00:43:881 - clap sounds nice since I hear in music
  7. Just where I would add whistles if this was my map :3 feels too empty for me
    SPOILER
    00:55:371 -
    00:57:924 -
    00:59:200 -
    01:00:477 -
    01:02:232 -
    01:03:030 -
    01:05:583 -
    01:08:137 -
    01:09:413 -
    01:10:690 -
    actually too lazy to check all but all other diffs can use whistle here too if you liked :3
    including 00:11:807 -
  8. 01:29:759 - nothing really important but only easy diff has the 5% line here lol
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:200 (1) - this slider actually should end at 00:29:679 - :3
  2. 00:41:966 - I really think you can add more hitsound in this calm part. really sounds empty same to insane
    SPOILER
    00:42:605 - clap sounds good. I hear in music :3
    00:43:881 -
    00:45:158 -
    00:45:637 - drum sample?
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:264 - there is no clap in the music. this clap is just confusing players with erratic hitsounding
  2. 00:10:211 (4,5) - I kind of wish the flow kept going downward. just a suggestion even though I know you hate my flows
  3. 00:20:424 (4,5) - perhaps you can put them right in the middle of 00:19:945 (3,6) - for better spacing. unless you really want that 00:20:743 (5,6) - spacing
  4. 00:31:036 (1) - for the sake of better reading alternative rhythm
  5. 00:35:903 (5) - move it a little more to the left so the flow is more comfortable. around 192 / 44 I guess
  6. 00:36:381 - tbh this gap really kills
  7. 00:50:903 (3,4) - you should increase spacing here because even though the spacing is consistent, 00:49:626 (1,2,3) - big gaps like this will make players hit 00:51:222 (4) - earlier than they should.
  8. 01:00:956 - you should map here because after 00:58:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern, the momentum should be kept imo, instead of pause
  9. 01:11:169 - same goes here
  10. 01:15:158 (1,2,1,2) - flow is kind of hard for a hard diff?
  11. 01:16:754 (2) - move it a little bit to the left? too much spacing here from 01:16:434 (1) - and to 01:17:073 (3) -
  12. 01:26:169 (3) - unrankable wobble
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:541 (1) - I don't know if I'm deaf, but I really think this should end at 00:22:020 - . I hear piano ..
  2. 00:24:094 (1) - same
  3. 00:26:647 (1) - ^
  4. 00:34:786 (2) - move it a little to the left? spacing is too close with 00:34:307 (1) -
  5. 00:41:966 (1,2,3) - becuase of your stack leniency, the stack is broken in game and makes me bother. manual stack ?
  6. 00:49:786 (2,4) - nazi stack
really nice map :3 I loved the slider jumps in insane diff ~~

Good luck >w<!!
posted
easy
fine

normal
00:12:286 (3) - 尾巴加个whistle玩起来比较好控制节奏
00:30:317 (2) - 有点坑,最好缩短 1/2 或者note不要了延长1/2
00:53:934 (2) - 不太好,不如连后面 的note也删了放两个1/2滑条

hard
00:05:105 (4) - i prefer a click at 00:05:264
00:36:062 (6) - why not add a reserve
01:26:169 (3) - ...........this is kinda ugly


insane
kiai 段whistle太少了 跟人声多加点
00:26:647 (1) - 这个应该在前面的红线结束,白线另外加节奏吧
00:21:541 (1) - 这个也是,还有几个
01:13:243 (3,4) - drum音效
00:52:179可以接着四个四个一组摆啊

再见
posted
Hi! M-jam!
As requested. :3
[General]
1. Is the wide-screen support necessary? If not, uncheck it.

2. Suggest making the start point of each diff consistent. [death那个和Insane怎么突然开始多了个转盘?最好统一一下?]

[Easy]
1. 00:06:222 (1) - Try this rhythm? Followed all the obvious sounds. http://puu.sh/f8jF1/e403af4256.jpg

2. 00:16:434 (1) - ^

3. 00:48:349 (3) - It seems so curved since the slider is already that short. [这么短还弯看着有点太扭曲了qwq]

Nice!

[Normal]
1. (Nazi) 00:13:881 (1,2) - Blanket

Same as Easy, really solid, nothing to say.

[xxdeathx's Hard]
1. 00:10:211 (4,5) - Why the DS here suddenly gets larger?

2. (Nazi) 00:19:466 (2,3) - stack better.

3. 00:36:381 Consider adding a note. Leaving it empty here plays a little weird.

4. 00:37:817 (3,4) - same as point 1.

5. 00:56:009 (1,2) - Put them a little further from each other.

6. 00:58:562 (1) - Not necessary NC. Or maybe cancel the next NC.

7. 01:08:775 (1) - ^

8. 01:26:169 (3) - Consider this, re-point changes the speed of a certain part of the slider.

Well, maybe consider more at DS, somewhere in this diff, the DS is not clear for reading, anyway this diff is a decent one! :3

[Insane]
写了三条才发现都是Nazi,所以就不写了。这个真挑不出来什么。

Good luck! >w<

Edit:啊啊啊Sry Easy里面第一条的图没有挂上,现在电脑又不在身边。。明早我会把图不上的
啊真的对不起,失误了
posted

Kuuhaku wrote:

嗯,说好的mod,这次还是来晚了
以后再也不敢偷懒了QUQ


xxdeathx`s hard
nice to see you again~

00:18:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - done

00:19:945 (3) - I think it`s too noisy to use clap here...try whistle instead clap belongs there

00:28:243 (5,6) - this pattern is good,but it also sounds bad
how about just using a slider?i like to follow vocals too

01:13:243 (6) - I prefer clap to finish added both (because finish is in music)

No Dap wrote:

Hi yuki :3/
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:264 - there is no clap in the music. this clap is just confusing players with erratic hitsounding removed
  2. 00:10:211 (4,5) - I kind of wish the flow kept going downward. just a suggestion even though I know you hate my flows gonna try this
  3. 00:20:424 (4,5) - perhaps you can put them right in the middle of 00:19:945 (3,6) - for better spacing. unless you really want that 00:20:743 (5,6) - spacing redid this part due to earlier mod
  4. 00:31:036 (1) - for the sake of better reading alternative rhythm done
  5. 00:35:903 (5) - move it a little more to the left so the flow is more comfortable. around 192 / 44 I guess done
  6. 00:36:381 - tbh this gap really kills lol it's distance snapped though
  7. 00:50:903 (3,4) - you should increase spacing here because even though the spacing is consistent, 00:49:626 (1,2,3) - big gaps like this will make players hit 00:51:222 (4) - earlier than they should. done
  8. 01:00:956 - you should map here because after 00:58:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern, the momentum should be kept imo, instead of pause that pattern is really hard (has the biggest influence on star rating) so i'd like to give players a break after it
  9. 01:11:169 - same goes here
  10. 01:15:158 (1,2,1,2) - flow is kind of hard for a hard diff? seems fine
  11. 01:16:754 (2) - move it a little bit to the left? too much spacing here from 01:16:434 (1) - and to 01:17:073 (3) - lowered spacing
  12. 01:26:169 (3) - unrankable wobble fixed
Good luck >w<!!

Tsukuyomi wrote:

hard
00:05:105 (4) - i prefer a click at 00:05:264 i like clicking for main melody
00:36:062 (6) - why not add a reserve what does reserve mean
01:26:169 (3) - ...........this is kinda ugly changed because unrankable

再见

Regraz wrote:

Hi! M-jam!
As requested. :3

[xxdeathx's Hard]
1. 00:10:211 (4,5) - Why the DS here suddenly gets larger? jump

2. (Nazi) 00:19:466 (2,3) - stack better. ok

3. 00:36:381 Consider adding a note. Leaving it empty here plays a little weird. i hope to keep it empty to comply with DS, maybe add note later

4. 00:37:817 (3,4) - same as point 1. small jump to emphasize vocal

5. 00:56:009 (1,2) - Put them a little further from each other. a little

6. 00:58:562 (1) - Not necessary NC. Or maybe cancel the next NC. cancel next nc

7. 01:08:775 (1) - ^ ^

8. 01:26:169 (3) - Consider this, re-point changes the speed of a certain part of the slider. yeah fixed because it was unrankable

Well, maybe consider more at DS, somewhere in this diff, the DS is not clear for reading, anyway this diff is a decent one! :3
thanks all modders!

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324,176,67179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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156,20,68775,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,120,69094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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386,85,69732,5,8,2:0:0:0:
394,2,69892,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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512,200,71009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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124,192,72286,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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212,260,72924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,284,73243,1,12,0:0:0:0:
136,136,73562,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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388,344,75477,2,0,P|378:304|350:276,1,81.5999975097657,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,75796,6,0,P|189:283|217:311,1,81.5999975097657,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,28,77711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,88,79945,2,0,B|212:68|212:68|152:80,1,136,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,116,80424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,332,83456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,276,83615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,152,85849,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87445,12,0,89839,0:0:0:0:
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Kuuhaku

Kuuhaku wrote:

Insane
00:04:626 (3) - 做成和1一样的形状也不错 这也无所谓.-.
00:06:700 (2) - 头部加个whistle似乎节奏更连贯 k
00:11:807 (2) - 00:15:796 (2) - 也一样 ^
后面的01:22:020 (2) - 是一个意见 ^
00:24:094 (1) - 还是觉得尾部上扬比较好
试验型意见:不然把00:25:211 (2) - 往上移动一点距离 就这样吧……不想改
00:27:764 (2) - 和1的位置间隔也再大一些 i like stack
00:30:317 (2) - 还是改成00:29:998开始到这里的滑条比较好 i prefer mine
00:40:530 (1) - 加一个whistle似乎更好 k
00:41:966 (1) - 中部将sampleset改成drum k
00:44:520 (1) - 也一样 k
00:43:243 (1) - 和00:44:520 (1) - 头部加whistle k
00:49:626 (1,3) - 将whistle换成clap或者将sampleset改成normal同时去掉whistle k
00:51:541 (1,2,4) - 这三个地方用whistle感觉更合适 k
01:10:051 (2) - 好像是少了whistle? 没少 这里本来就不加
01:20:903 (2) - 加个whistle? k

Easy
00:08:137 (3) - 和00:18:349 (3) - 头部加whistle似乎不错 k
01:23:456 (3) - 也一样 k

00:53:456 (1,2) - 实话说觉得这里的2很难受 类似的挺多的 我觉得还行

01:03:030 (4) - 头部加whistle k

音效方面其他的意见和Insane相同位置的一致
No Dap

No Dap wrote:

Hi yuki :3/

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:807 - missed whistle? according to 01:24:573 - added
  2. 00:11:328 (1,2,3) - I find this rhythm more easier to play for new players because of polarity issue :3 but you might need to rearrange a lot.
    actually it seems you did it here 01:24:094 (1,2,3) - it's fine, i dont like kinda similar things :3
  3. 00:21:541 - volume here is way too low imo. maybe 30% is better to actually hear the whistle k
  4. 00:38:775 (3) - the shape is too sharp imo. just use a curve to match the shapes around this slider? k
  5. 00:48:349 (3) - I wouldn't do this, but I guess you know what you're doing ok i remove the reverse
  6. 00:43:881 - clap sounds nice since I hear in music add drum instead because of former mod
  7. Just where I would add whistles if this was my map :3 feels too empty for me
    SPOILER
    00:55:371 -
    00:57:924 -
    00:59:200 -
    01:00:477 -
    01:02:232 -
    01:03:030 -
    01:05:583 -
    01:08:137 -
    01:09:413 -
    01:10:690 -
    actually too lazy to check all but all other diffs can use whistle here too if you liked :3 added
    including 00:11:807 -
  8. 01:29:759 - nothing really important but only easy diff has the 5% line here lol that's just used for silence the spin.
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:200 (1) - this slider actually should end at 00:29:679 - :3 yes u r right
  2. 00:41:966 - I really think you can add more hitsound in this calm part. really sounds empty same to insane
    SPOILER
    00:42:605 - clap sounds good. I hear in music :3 mostly use drum now
    00:43:881 -
    00:45:158 -
    00:45:637 - drum sample?
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:541 (1) - I don't know if I'm deaf, but I really think this should end at 00:22:020 - . I hear piano ..
  2. 00:24:094 (1) - same
  3. 00:26:647 (1) - ^ yes you are right, i'm deaf..
  4. 00:34:786 (2) - move it a little to the left? spacing is too close with 00:34:307 (1) - that's fine for me when playing~
  5. 00:41:966 (1,2,3) - becuase of your stack leniency, the stack is broken in game and makes me bother. manual stack ? k
  6. 00:49:786 (2,4) - nazi stack fixed
really nice map :3 I loved the slider jumps in insane diff ~~ :)

Good luck >w<!!
Tsukuyomi

Tsukuyomi wrote:

easy
fine

normal
00:12:286 (3) - 尾巴加个whistle玩起来比较好控制节奏 k
00:30:317 (2) - 有点坑,最好缩短 1/2 或者note不要了延长1/2 延长1/2了
00:53:934 (2) - 不太好,不如连后面 的note也删了放两个1/2滑条 改成和后面一段一样的节奏了

insane
kiai 段whistle太少了 跟人声多加点 added
00:26:647 (1) - 这个应该在前面的红线结束,白线另外加节奏吧
00:21:541 (1) - 这个也是,还有几个 都改了
01:13:243 (3,4) - drum音效 k
00:52:179可以接着四个四个一组摆啊 算丽

再见
Regraz

Regraz wrote:

Hi! M-jam!
As requested. :3
[General]
1. Is the wide-screen support necessary? If not, uncheck it. closed

2. Suggest making the start point of each diff consistent. [death那个和Insane怎么突然开始多了个转盘?最好统一一下?] 加了spin的话easy和normal后面留的时间不够啊

[Easy]
1. 00:06:222 (1) - Try this rhythm? Followed all the obvious sounds. http://puu.sh/f8jF1/e403af4256.jpg 想想算了,keep it easy

2. 00:16:434 (1) - ^ ^

3. 00:48:349 (3) - It seems so curved since the slider is already that short. [这么短还弯看着有点太扭曲了qwq] fixed in former mods

Nice!

[Normal]
1. (Nazi) 00:13:881 (1,2) - Blanket fixed

Same as Easy, really solid, nothing to say.

[Insane]
写了三条才发现都是Nazi,所以就不写了。这个真挑不出来什么。 :)

Good luck! >w<

Edit:啊啊啊Sry Easy里面第一条的图没有挂上,现在电脑又不在身边。。明早我会把图不上的
啊真的对不起,失误了


thanks for modding~
updated
posted
[Insane]
00:07:339 (4) - 突然急刹的感觉很呛 建议保持大间距
00:17:551 (4) - 同↑
00:18:509 (4) - 稍微再远点到DS1.7-1.8
00:31:036 (1) - 二连或许是个好选择
00:34:786 (2,3,1) - 各自 CTRL+G
00:41:647 (6) - CTRL+G

other diffs all fine
于是我机智地水了一摸
posted
The normal looks solid just a little touch up. Best one i have seen so far. The hard needs some work too on the timing and sliders.
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Verry good, needs to get ranked.
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why xxdeathx isn't in the tags?
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