bakabakemono wrote:

hi, from our queue
are you seriously waiting from our mod? oh I feel so guilty, sorry, the member were very very busy, they got exam and blablabla. k let's start
column: 1234

feel free to reject these mods

[MX]
- 00:08:134 - add note at 1
- 00:09:643 - ^ at 4
- 00:11:153 - ^ at 1
- 00:12:662 - ^ at 4
- 00:12:851 (12851|2,12851|1) - remove one
- 00:13:700 - add note at 1
- 00:14:172 - ^ at 1
- 00:15:681 - ^ at 2
- 00:17:190 - ^ at 4
- 00:20:115 - ^ at 1 or 2
- 00:22:002 - 00:22:190 - add note at 1
- 00:26:153 - ^ at 1
- 00:27:756 - add note at 3
- 00:27:851 - ^ at 4
- 00:43:889 - ^ at 2
- 00:49:926 - ^ at 3
- 01:10:021 (70021|2) - remove, ghost note
- 01:11:058 - add note at 3
- 01:11:813 - ^ at 2
- 01:12:190 - ^ at 3
- 01:14:832 - ^ at 4

I apllied all the mods, but I also applied most of the things in similar parts. (first part of the mod also apllied to kiai and so)

bakabakemono wrote:

incoming~ sorry, delay for 2 weeks orz
Column: 1234

mod, feel free to reject these mods

[General]
- I suggest to change the preview time here 01:20:021 -
- the hitsound volume in each diff is 100% lol. reduce it
- comment for NM and EZ: the pattern is good, but really monotone suggest to rearrange some part

[HD+]
- 00:03:794 (3794|1) - move to 1, since the pitch is the same with previous note
- 00:12:851 (12851|3) - remove, for consistency
- 00:18:889 - add note at 1
- 00:20:398 (20398|3) - remove, for consistency
- 00:32:190 (32190|1) - move here 00:32:096 - at col1 for consistency
- 00:32:379 - add note at 4 for consistency Uh?
- 00:34:549 (34549|1) - end here? 00:35:681 -
- 01:25:304 (85304|1) - move to 4? Rearrange something here :3

I think I added them all, but some things were a little bit confusing such as the red markeds...

[NM]
- 00:03:794 (3794|1) - same as HD+
- 01:07:379 (67379|0) - move here 01:07:190 - and change to LN?
- 01:17:002 (77002|1,77379|0,77756|3,78134|0) - remove?
- 01:30:587 (90587|1) - move to 1, for hand balance
- 01:44:172 (104172|2) - change to LN like HD+

All aplied and rearrange some things

[EZ]
- 00:03:794 (3794|1) - same mod as above
- delete this note 00:07:756 - 00:09:266 - 00:10:775 - 00:12:285 - 00:13:040 - 00:13:794 - 00:15:304 - 00:16:813 - for consistency with the other part, at the middle of the song and at the kiai, the sound is same, so the pattern should be same If you say so, then . Gotta make this diff a little bit funny I gues too xD

please reply these mods so I could know which part is helpful or not. sorry again

other diff is coming soon, sorry

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi kristal-san >.<)/
NM as requested from ❅ Верный Mania Queue ❅

General : ( ✔ )
Mapset : ( ✔ )
Metadata : ( ✔ ) seem fine, maybe
Timing : ( ✔ )
Audio : ( ✔ )
Background : ( ✔ )

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

EZ

00:41:907 (41907|2) move to 2, make variation pattern like 00:38:889
00:42:285 (42285|0) if you aggree suggest above, then 00:42:285 (42285|0) move to 3
00:42:662 (42662|2,42662|1,42851|3) move collum left
00:43:228 (43228|2,43417|1,43417|0) Ctrl + H
00:43:794 move this pattern for balance
01:01:907 (61907|0) move to 2, row balance
01:10:021 (70021|3) move to 1 ^
01:39:643 (99643|1) move to 3, avoid low jack All aplied, jacks avoided.

NM

00:56:247 (56247|3) it will be nice if it move to 2
01:13:983 (73983|0,73983|1) avoid same pattern like 01:13:606 diffirent rytim
01:15:492 (75492|0,75492|1) ^ for 01:15:115 Adjusted some things to avoid the same patterns ! Thanks
nice, solid diff

HD+

00:24:738 (24738|0) move to 4 Ok
00:31:153 (31153|3) move to 3, or 00:30:775 (30775|3) move to 3 for balance, your choice I willl take the second one, I think it fits better
00:58:323 (58323|3) move to 2, balance Sure
nice pattern :DDD

Nice Mapset, need it for rank :3 Gogogogo !!
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

blazziken wrote:

Luego te lo rankearan!!! :'3! Congrats!!

blazziken wrote:

Puedo hacer un mini mod???? hay un par de cositas que faltan por corregir D:!

blazziken wrote:

AQUI ESTA MI MINI MOD <3

SPOILER

4K MX

00:013:511 aquí tienes 2 opciones..... o acortar ese hold o quitar esa triple y ponerla en doble , porque ese minijack no debería ir (lo mismo para la otra parte de la canción en donde también quedo ese minijack) es mas que nada por estética además es como algo raro que hayan solo 2 minijacks en toda la canción xd

00:18:794 hasta 00:19:643 aquí puedes realizar un patrón de jumps intercalados con las notas intercaladas y terminarla con una triple , eso es para el redoble , también si haces esto fíjate en quitarle una nota a la ultima doble para que no te quede un minijack

00:41:530 cambia el LN que esta en la nota 4 hacia la nota 3 ya que la LN que esta mas adelante es mas aguda y la pusiste en la nota 4

00:43:040 cambia ese LN a la nota 2

00:55:021 hasta 00:55:870 aquí también puedes repetir ese patrón de dobles intercaladas pero que parta con la otra mano (?) (puedes hacer ese patrón aprovechando que no le marcaste la LN que siempre le marcaste para el Taaa TAAAAAAN

01:19:643 podrias cambiar ese LN a la nota 4 ya que es bien agudo el chillido de miku ahí

Nota general : hmmmm no estoy muy seguro pero parece que en varias de las LN hay como un error de Duración , parece que le pusiste una rayita mas de duración de lo que debería ser en algunas , esto al jugar el map pasa completamente desapercibido , pero en el editor se nota , quizás por eso se te junta la triple con el final del hold y te queda un minijack xd

Si te fijas son solo detalles pero que mejoran la estética del map (lo que si es importante son los minijacks y a ver si tomas en consideración hacer ese tipo de patrón que te dije para darle mayor énfasis a los redobles xd)

PDT: Me encantó el map xDDD! una de los mejores maps que he visto en mania 4k y que no sean converts del step xddd! Corto , no muy difícil pero preciso y bien hecho. <3

DE-CADE wrote:

i really like the song actually so i'll try to help you out a little

[MX]

00:18:889 (18889|0) - Delete this, i suggest you to follow drum pad here

00:19:266 (19266|3) - Move to 3
00:19:360 - Add to 4
00:19:549 (19549|3) - Delete
00:19:643 - Add to 4

00:32:473 - Add to 4 to accend drum

00:33:606 (33606|1,33794|2) - Move one column left, this one is pretty good to play also to avoid exceed note on col 2

00:34:172 (34172|1) - Move to 3
00:34:266 (34266|2,34360|1) - Move to one column to left

00:34:643 (34643|3,34738|2) - I suggest you to focus on vocal so plz delete these

00:36:058 (36058|1,36247|2) - Ctrl+H

00:42:851 - that shield isn't suit with , try something like this http://puu.sh/hWm2I/80e65bcd31.png

00:55:021 - Try represent the drumroll with pattern like this http://puu.sh/hWmbC/ab877b2396.png I changed something here, but I liked the piano pitch follow in this pattern

01:04:738 (64738|1) - since follow vocal very much, delete this should be fine

01:05:492 (65492|1,65587|2,65775|2,65870|1,66058|0,66153|3) - Ctrl+H

01:14:832 - Add to 3 as vocal I dont hear the vocal here

01:15:870 - http://puu.sh/hWmoi/664e777514.png

Hope that's help, Maybe i'll mod the others Of course it is, all the rest applied

Good Luck

Julie wrote:

posting this for the moment so I don't forget, I'll come right up when I finish this one I'm on :3!

2015-06-11 01:26 juankristal: 00:13:511 -
2015-06-11 01:26 juankristal: that is one of the issues that I dont know if I should fix it
2015-06-11 01:26 Julie: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587469 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [MX]]
2015-06-11 01:26 Julie: on this?
2015-06-11 01:26 juankristal: its like, weird, having that type of jack
2015-06-11 01:26 juankristal: yup
2015-06-11 01:26 juankristal: only 2 times in the song
2015-06-11 01:27 Julie: yeah cuz lack of space ;w;
2015-06-11 01:27 juankristal: yup :C
2015-06-11 01:27 Julie: while that part having more notes should be good
2015-06-11 01:27 Julie: dang
2015-06-11 01:27 Julie: yes these kind of stuff
2015-06-11 01:27 Julie: 4k orz
2015-06-11 01:28 juankristal: 00:55:775 - and parts like this one
2015-06-11 01:28 juankristal: the claps are doubles, but that one in particular is not a double, to fit the pattern better
2015-06-11 01:28 juankristal: because of the triple with finish HS
2015-06-11 01:28 juankristal: not sure if make the finish a double and keep the tril with doubles
2015-06-11 01:28 juankristal: or keep the pattern like that
2015-06-11 01:29 Julie: 00:55:304 -
2015-06-11 01:29 Julie: this one also alone
2015-06-11 01:29 Julie: 00:55:870 - and yea rather keep like that then 2 notes
2015-06-11 01:29 Julie: should have more impact there
2015-06-11 01:30 juankristal: ah? xD
2015-06-11 01:30 juankristal: I think I am lost xD
2015-06-11 01:30 Julie: you said claps are doubles?
2015-06-11 01:31 Julie: 00:55:304 - I see a single here~
2015-06-11 01:31 Julie: xD
2015-06-11 01:31 juankristal: yeah :c
2015-06-11 01:31 Julie: but yeah I'd rather keep, I think is better this way
2015-06-11 01:31 juankristal: 00:58:511 - and this ones
2015-06-11 01:32 juankristal: double holds
2015-06-11 01:32 juankristal: not sure
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: yeah
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: thats the part
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: I saw while you play
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: and was gonna copy paste here but you ninja me
2015-06-11 01:32 juankristal: ninja kristal
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: this is the only LN vocie with double one
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: feel random xD
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: LOL
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: yeah ninja
2015-06-11 01:32 juankristal: yup
2015-06-11 01:32 Julie: cuz all your vocal one LN
2015-06-11 01:33 Julie: xD
2015-06-11 01:33 juankristal: http://puu.sh/iktFr/d260d818f5.png
2015-06-11 01:33 juankristal: maybe that one is better
2015-06-11 01:34 Julie: 01:17:002 (77002|2,77379|1,77756|2,78134|1) - are these for vocal?
2015-06-11 01:34 Julie: yes that one on screenshot better
2015-06-11 01:34 Julie: a lots better :3
2015-06-11 01:34 juankristal: yup, those are for vocals
2015-06-11 01:34 Julie: 01:17:379 (77379|1,77756|2,78134|1) - the thing is this vocal is a longer then this 01:17:002 (77002|2) -
2015-06-11 01:34 juankristal: oh wow
2015-06-11 01:34 juankristal: they are shorts
2015-06-11 01:34 Julie: it go
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: han- chiiiiinoooooeeeeeeeeee
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: LOL
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: like here this 01:17:379 (77379|1) - to 01:17:756 -
2015-06-11 01:35 juankristal: 01:17:379 (77379|1) - ends on 01:17:756 -
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: yes
2015-06-11 01:35 juankristal: D
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: 01:17:756 (77756|2) - this to 01:18:134 -
2015-06-11 01:35 Julie: 01:18:134 (78134|1) - 01:18:511 -
2015-06-11 01:37 juankristal: 01:20:021 - triple?
2015-06-11 01:37 Julie: yes add anotehr note
2015-06-11 01:37 juankristal: I am not sure about mapping this part
2015-06-11 01:37 juankristal: 01:19:738 -
2015-06-11 01:37 juankristal: 01:19:738 -
2015-06-11 01:38 juankristal: 01:19:738 -
2015-06-11 01:38 juankristal: aahahahaha
2015-06-11 01:38 juankristal: missd
2015-06-11 01:38 juankristal: 01:19:926 -
2015-06-11 01:38 juankristal: the ln of the vocal
2015-06-11 01:38 Julie: should be fine, cuz if you really wanna stop at vocal
2015-06-11 01:38 Julie: then look at these
2015-06-11 01:38 Julie: 01:22:662 (82662|0) - example
2015-06-11 01:38 Julie: stop at blue line too
2015-06-11 01:38 Julie: xD
2015-06-11 01:39 juankristal: so I should map then? xD
2015-06-11 01:39 juankristal: my enlgishhhh DDDD:
2015-06-11 01:40 Julie: you should map?
2015-06-11 01:40 juankristal: this one ends on blue? 01:19:643 (79643|2) -
2015-06-11 01:40 Julie: this vocal part tricky, cuz like this one 01:21:153 (81153|3) - and 01:22:662 (82662|0) - different LN, I undersatnd why you do that when I edit, but when I 1st saw you play this diff I didn't undersatnd xD
2015-06-11 01:41 Julie: 01:19:643 (79643|2) - I think this one fine :3
2015-06-11 01:41 Julie: dont always have to end precisely on the vocal
2015-06-11 01:41 Julie: is not a tapable note, most important is that you know why you put it there
2015-06-11 01:42 juankristal: cool
2015-06-11 01:42 juankristal: then still the question
2015-06-11 01:43 juankristal: should I map in that part the clappys? xD
2015-06-11 01:43 juankristal: 01:19:734 - to 01:19:926 -
2015-06-11 01:43 Julie: 01:19:734 - <-- unsnap
2015-06-11 01:43 Julie: LOL
2015-06-11 01:44 Julie: this is your choice if you map :3
2015-06-11 01:44 Julie: it wont be ghost note so it should be fine
2015-06-11 01:44 Julie: one note on each line should be enough if you want to map it, to not overchord
2015-06-11 01:44 juankristal: I was thinking something like this: http://puu.sh/ikua8/c6d4a1cc0f.png
2015-06-11 01:45 Julie: also fine
2015-06-11 01:46 juankristal: cool
2015-06-11 01:46 juankristal: well, hope mx is good enought :#
2015-06-11 01:47 Julie: xD
2015-06-11 01:47 Julie: I really love it O.O
2015-06-11 01:47 Julie: this is crazy, I rarely see 4k not so random

Neku okazaki wrote:

Por si quieres checar el irc:

irc

03:20 *Neku okazaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/599931 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [EZ]]
03:20 juankristal: asd
03:20 Neku okazaki: Con desordenado me referia a este tipo de cosas
03:20 Neku okazaki: 00:13:228 - 
03:21 Neku okazaki: Ese en mi opinion va en el segundo carril
03:21 Neku okazaki: Que no se como se llame
03:21 Neku okazaki: Creo que se llama 1
03:21 juankristal: se llama como te guste decirle jaj
03:21 Neku okazaki: Si, si que se llama 1 xD
03:21 juankristal: algunos le dicen 1 otros 2
03:21 juankristal: depende si tomas referencia 0123 o 1234
03:22 Neku okazaki: Es 0123 lo correcto
03:22 Neku okazaki: http://puu.sh/iYESs/a76a088b0f.png
03:22 Neku okazaki: Quedaria así ^
03:22 Neku okazaki: Bueno depende cada quien como se tome la referencia
03:22 Neku okazaki: Por eso se escribe antes de cada mod
03:22 juankristal: Si, entendi lo que quisite decir jaj
03:22 Neku okazaki: Yo estoy tomando ahorita 0123
03:22 juankristal: oki
03:23 Neku okazaki: 00:46:058 (46058|1,46247|2,46436|3) - 
03:23 Neku okazaki: Este no lo veo como escalera
03:23 Neku okazaki: Quedaria mejor como lo hiciste en el anterior
03:23 Neku okazaki: 00:44:549 (44549|2,44738|1,44926|3) - 
03:24 Neku okazaki: Algo parecido
03:24 Neku okazaki: Si cambiaste el anterior tambien cambia este 00:47:568 (47568|1,47756|2,47945|3) - 
03:24 Neku okazaki: Si no lo cambiaste 00:47:568 (47568|1,47756|2,47945|3) - cambialo a 210
03:24 Neku okazaki: Si me estas entendiendo?
03:25 juankristal: Si, te estoy siguiendo
03:25 juankristal: Por que el ultimo a 210?
03:25 Neku okazaki: Despues de este puedes dejarlo en escaleras 00:52:096 (52096|0,52285|1,52473|2) - 
03:25 juankristal: para hacer 210 tengo que mover la nota anterior
03:25 Neku okazaki: el 210 es si no lo cambiaste
03:25 Neku okazaki: Para no hacer lo mismo
03:25 Neku okazaki: Es aburrido
03:25 Neku okazaki: Deja te mando foto
03:26 Neku okazaki: http://puu.sh/iYF2H/aa48a8c6a0.png
03:26 juankristal: si, estoy jugando con los patrones
03:26 juankristal: trato de no imitarlos nunca
03:26 Neku okazaki: Pero eso es arriesgado lo de 210
03:27 juankristal: el problema de hacer 210 eso es que hace un jack en blancas en la nota 2
03:27 Neku okazaki: Mejor cambialo como te dije al principio
03:27 Neku okazaki: Ya que estas pisando la nota anterior
03:29 Neku okazaki: 01:37:379 (97379|0,97568|1,97756|2,97945|3) - Este te recomiendo cambiarlo a 0213

Me quede en decirte que 01:37:379 (97379|0,97568|1,97756|2,97945|3) - puede ser 0213, en la Ez, claro


Ahi si quieres seguimos comentando el mapa otro dia

Harbyter wrote:

some little irc before bubbling

no kudosu

IRC

20:33 juankristal: haarbyyy
20:33 Harbyter: yoyo
20:33 Harbyter: what's up
20:34 juankristal: everything K, you?
20:34 Harbyter: yea
20:34 juankristal: I wanted to ask you if you still do checks for mania maps
20:34 juankristal: and also if you know about the nonstop bn quit lol
20:35 Harbyter: wut
20:35 Harbyter: nonstop bn quit?
20:35 Harbyter: btw what song
20:35 Harbyter: np it
20:35 juankristal: I mean, a lot of bn started to quit
20:35 *juankristal is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587467 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu]
20:35 Harbyter: yes
20:35 Harbyter: i was quitting too
20:36 Harbyter: but still receving lot of request
20:36 Harbyter: so i changed my mind
20:36 juankristal: oh
20:36 Harbyter: but still planning to quit
20:36 juankristal: but, why all want to quit?
20:36 juankristal: its because of qat?
20:36 Harbyter: mostly yes
20:37 juankristal: woah
20:37 juankristal: that sucks
20:38 juankristal: dark side of mania
20:43 Harbyter: xD
20:44 juankristal: Do you think its worth it trying to be a bn?
20:44 juankristal: I mean, I really would like to give it a try
20:45 juankristal: but since the qat situation and all this "dark" stuff
20:45 juankristal: not sure if I should just mod for my own
20:48 Harbyter: mmmm
20:48 Harbyter: you can try it
20:48 Harbyter: to experience it
20:48 Harbyter: but honestly
20:48 Harbyter: is kinda tired
20:49 juankristal: a lot of people pokes you :/
20:49 Harbyter: yup
20:49 Harbyter: you're like the
20:49 Harbyter: 11th request?
20:49 Harbyter: xD
20:49 juankristal: I think the best way to be a bn is to check only maps or songs that you like
20:49 juankristal: I mean, get the pokes, check them
20:50 juankristal: but only bncheck the ones that you really like
20:50 juankristal: otherway bn will explode
20:50 Harbyter: of course
20:50 Harbyter: i check only song that i like
20:50 Harbyter: still have to listen your song
20:50 Harbyter: i'm in multiplayer now
20:50 Harbyter: with friends
20:50 Harbyter: xD
20:50 juankristal: xDD
20:50 juankristal: no problem haha
20:50 juankristal: I think you modded that map
20:51 juankristal: that time when you werent a BN xD
20:51 juankristal: I remember the queue with one of your friends
20:51 Harbyter: oh
20:51 juankristal: crack was?
20:51 juankristal: I think it was crack
20:51 Harbyter: oh
20:51 Harbyter: uhhh
20:51 Harbyter: this song
20:51 Harbyter: i can give a try
20:52 Harbyter: i've modded it too
20:52 *Harbyter is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587469 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu]
20:52 juankristal: yup
20:52 juankristal: /
20:56 Harbyter: mmm
20:56 Harbyter: for the nm
20:56 juankristal: whoops
20:56 Harbyter: try some hand balance
20:56 juankristal: I saw a triple
20:57 Harbyter: with the LN
20:57 Harbyter: like the doubles with the LN
20:59 Harbyter: ok
20:59 Harbyter: too hard for me
20:59 Harbyter: xD
20:59 juankristal: xDD
20:59 Harbyter: well
20:59 juankristal: DT so tronk
20:59 Harbyter: for what i've see
21:00 Harbyter: pattern are oky
21:00 Harbyter: just some balance in the lv NM
21:00 Harbyter: there are lot of 12 34 chord
21:00 Harbyter: with LN
21:00 Harbyter: better shift the notes like 14 23 13 24
21:00 Harbyter: where you can
21:01 Harbyter: i can give to this a quick bubble
21:01 Harbyter: if i can't find any issue
21:01 Harbyter: xD
21:02 juankristal: lol xD
21:04 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/j7CbV/072ec3fd21.rar
21:04 Harbyter: here for you
21:04 Harbyter: fixed some delay on the hitsound
21:04 Harbyter: and cutted some silent lenght
21:06 Harbyter: 00:13:606 (13606|1) -
21:06 Harbyter: also
21:06 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587469 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [MX]]
21:06 Harbyter: see this
21:06 Harbyter: if you can shift the hitsound
21:06 juankristal: shift?
21:07 Harbyter: yup
21:07 Harbyter: separate the hitsound
21:07 juankristal: you mean separate WF notes, for example?
21:08 Harbyter: yea
21:08 Harbyter: make the F on another note
21:08 Harbyter: or the W on another note
21:08 Harbyter: xD
21:08 juankristal: oky
21:08 juankristal:
21:08 Harbyter: 00:21:813 (21813|0) -
21:09 Harbyter: no vocal here
21:09 Harbyter: betetr remove it
21:09 juankristal: sure
21:09 Harbyter: 00:22:756 (22756|0) -
21:09 Harbyter: this too
21:10 Harbyter: that ''nan'' is like a single spell
21:10 juankristal: oh
21:10 Harbyter: 00:28:134 (28134|2) - move this here 00:28:228 -
21:11 Harbyter: and mov ein col 4?
21:11 Harbyter: xD
21:12 juankristal: it can fit well xD
21:12 juankristal: and move 00:27:945 (27945|1) - to 3?
21:12 Harbyter: sure
21:12 Harbyter: why not
21:14 Harbyter: 00:32:473 -
21:14 Harbyter: no more vocal from here?
21:15 juankristal: mmmh
21:15 juankristal: blue ticks can be added, right?
21:16 Harbyter: 00:32:945 - 00:33:134 - 00:32:568 -
21:16 Harbyter: you missed those vocal
21:16 Harbyter: 00:32:756 (32756|2) - no vocal ehre
21:18 juankristal: fixed
21:18 Harbyter: 00:36:436 (36436|2,37190|3) -
21:18 Harbyter: suggest to remove those
21:19 Harbyter: so the remaining note will emphatize the vocal pretty well
21:19 Harbyter: you can try it
21:19 Harbyter: xd
21:19 juankristal: meh, its fine
21:20 juankristal: it was me trying to make some own music xD
21:20 juankristal: probably was not good to not follow correctly that part xD
21:20 juankristal: but this one too, right? 00:36:813 (36813|1) -
21:20 Harbyter: you can keep that one
21:21 Harbyter: you should mod it now with 0% sample volume
21:22 juankristal: playing that part feels a little bit weird
21:22 juankristal: at least for me
21:22 Harbyter: oh
21:22 juankristal: maybe its me
21:23 juankristal: I feel weird in both xD
21:23 Harbyter: ahahha
21:23 Harbyter: up to you xD
21:23 juankristal: your suggest and the map itself lol
21:23 Harbyter: you can still keep the nmotes
21:23 Harbyter: notes"
21:23 Harbyter: 00:39:832 (39832|1,39926|2) - ctrl h those
21:25 Harbyter: 00:58:511 (58511|2) - this shouldn't be a LN
21:25 Harbyter: 00:58:606 - here a vocal
21:25 Harbyter: turn in note and add here 00:58:606 -
21:25 juankristal: why not ln? D:
21:25 Harbyter: a note 4?
21:26 Harbyter: because it isn't a single long vocal
21:26 Harbyter: 00:58:606 - here there's another spell
21:26 juankristal: its like the baby is delayed
21:26 juankristal: to blue tick
21:26 juankristal: that is?
21:26 Harbyter: yes
21:26 Harbyter: 00:58:606 -
21:27 juankristal: yup
21:27 juankristal: I get it
21:27 juankristal: and the other ln is fine, right?
21:29 Harbyter: ye
21:29 Harbyter: 01:02:096 (62096|2,62190|3,62285|2) - switch column?
21:29 Harbyter: 01:02:473 (62473|3,62568|2,62662|1) - then this move one col on left
21:29 Harbyter: 01:02:379 - here you missed a vocal
21:29 Harbyter: add always in col 4
21:30 juankristal: switch column, ctrl + h and move to right, right?
21:30 Harbyter: is the same
21:30 Harbyter: xD
21:30 juankristal: xD
21:31 juankristal: and about the missed vocal
21:31 juankristal: I think there is no vocal there
21:31 Harbyter: i i
21:31 Harbyter: it is another spell that
21:31 Harbyter: not a single one
21:31 juankristal: oh crap
21:31 juankristal: jappanesse so stronk
21:31 Harbyter: no so stronk
21:31 Harbyter: but i like miku
21:32 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3421835
21:32 juankristal: is that fine?
21:32 Harbyter: my rubik i've almost mapped lot of vocal
21:32 Harbyter: xD
21:32 Harbyter: mmm
21:32 Harbyter: i think the jack
21:32 Harbyter: suits better
21:32 Harbyter: at that point
21:32 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/j7E9q/6e9ff86787.png
21:32 juankristal: jack in 4
21:33 juankristal: yeah, it suits better, kinda weird for the map but its fine
21:33 juankristal: because almost no jacks
21:33 Harbyter: nah
21:33 Harbyter: is fine
21:33 Harbyter: don't worry
21:33 Harbyter: xD
21:33 Harbyter: and that kinda of jack is really easy to hit
21:34 Harbyter: due to the good transition of the previous note
21:34 juankristal: cool :d
21:34 juankristal:
21:35 Harbyter: 01:03:983 (63983|0) -
21:35 Harbyter: col 4
21:35 Harbyter: 01:04:077 (64077|3) - col 3
21:35 Harbyter: 01:04:172 (64172|2,64360|0) - ctrl j
21:36 juankristal: sure
21:37 Harbyter: 01:07:096 (67096|2) - no vocal here
21:38 Harbyter: 01:10:304 (70304|1) - better move in 3
21:38 Harbyter: pitch is different from this 01:10:115 -
21:39 Harbyter: 01:11:058 (71058|2) - should be here in 1/3 01:11:090 -
21:39 Harbyter: 01:11:153 (71153|3) - no vocal
21:40 juankristal: 01:11:624 (71624|0) - 1/3 too?
21:40 Harbyter: NO
21:40 Harbyter: no
21:40 Harbyter: 1/4 is fine
21:40 juankristal: yeah
21:41 juankristal: idiot move by my part
21:41 juankristal: xD
21:41 Harbyter: 01:11:813 (71813|1) - no vocal
21:41 Harbyter: 01:12:285 (72285|1) -
21:41 juankristal: this is double? 01:11:907 (71907|2) -
21:41 Harbyter: no vocal this too
21:42 Harbyter: double?
21:42 juankristal: 01:11:530 (71530|2) -
21:42 juankristal: because this one is double
21:42 juankristal: I really dont know why that one is
21:42 Harbyter: didn't understand why you mapped it with double
21:42 Harbyter: xD
21:43 juankristal: i really dont know why too
21:43 Harbyter: think better remove the double
21:43 juankristal: I think it is piano
21:43 Harbyter: 01:12:190 (72190|2) - this should be in 1/3 too 01:12:222 -
21:43 juankristal: 01:19:077 (79077|1) -
21:44 juankristal: sure
21:44 Harbyter: 01:14:926 (74926|1) - col 4
21:44 Harbyter: 01:15:021 (75021|0,75115|1) - move one col on right
21:46 Harbyter: 01:17:002 -
21:46 Harbyter: this part
21:46 juankristal: done
21:46 Harbyter: is really weird
21:46 Harbyter: suggest to change it x.x
21:46 Harbyter: highly suggest
21:46 juankristal: x.x
21:47 juankristal: let me try something
21:47 Harbyter: 00:36:247 -
21:47 Harbyter: this pattern
21:47 Harbyter: is the most suitable
21:47 Harbyter: for that section
21:47 Harbyter: since it is the same pattern of the lyrics
21:47 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3421895
21:48 Harbyter: at this point too 00:40:775 -
21:48 Harbyter: but i didn't said it before
21:48 Harbyter: uh
21:48 Harbyter: is good too
21:49 Harbyter: 01:19:738 (79738|3,79832|0,79926|1) - you can also remove those
21:49 Harbyter: you the vocal will empathyze more
21:49 juankristal: I wanted to keep that clapstream
21:50 juankristal: if it isnt a reaally bad issue I would like to keep them
21:50 Harbyter: isn't a problem
21:50 Harbyter: but in my opinion removing those note at that point
21:50 Harbyter: feels more good
21:52 juankristal: but yeah
21:52 juankristal: it feels better
21:54 Harbyter: for vocal song sometime is better to ignore some sounds
21:54 Harbyter: for a good feeling when playing
21:54 juankristal: yeah
21:54 Harbyter: like those miku's song
21:54 Harbyter: ahhaha
21:54 juankristal: the problem is that I changed that pattern a looot of times
21:55 juankristal: it was in the first time I did it a 12 34 trill
21:55 juankristal: then a longer ln
21:55 juankristal: and then welp, a lot of stuff
21:55 juankristal: but yeah, ignoring that claps feels better
21:56 juankristal: one thing about 00:41:153 -
21:56 juankristal: I should delete one note of the triples?
21:56 Harbyter: better
21:56 Harbyter: a triple here seems like a little overchorded
21:57 juankristal: done
21:57 Harbyter: and those LN
21:57 Harbyter: 01:30:587 (90587|2,90964|1,91341|2,91719|0) -
21:57 Harbyter: better reduce it in 1/2?
21:57 Harbyter: 01:42:285 (102285|3,102662|3,103040|0) - like those
21:58 juankristal: oky
21:59 juankristal: and welp, those last ln, triples or doubles?
21:59 Harbyter: you can keep the triples there
21:59 Harbyter: is the end
21:59 Harbyter: the tension is high
21:59 Harbyter: is oky to me
21:59 Harbyter: xD
21:59 juankristal: I was thinking the same xD
22:00 juankristal: also W+C
22:00 Harbyter: ok
22:00 Harbyter: you can update it
22:00 Harbyter: lemme see
22:00 Harbyter: did you switched the hitsound before?
22:00 juankristal: sure
22:00 juankristal: the WF?
22:01 Harbyter: the hitsound file that i've sended to you
22:01 juankristal: I switched the WF and the WC ones
22:01 juankristal: ah, yeah
22:01 juankristal: the mp3
22:01 Harbyter: ok
22:03 juankristal: oh
22:03 juankristal: one thing
22:03 juankristal: 00:36:247 -
22:03 Harbyter: yea?
22:03 Harbyter: those LN are fine here
22:03 juankristal: 00:36:247 -
22:03 Harbyter: those vocal are like a staccato in 1/1
22:03 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3421966
22:03 Harbyter: nooo x.x
22:03 Harbyter: xD
22:04 juankristal: xDD
22:04 juankristal: okey, okey, I will keep the other ones xD
22:06 Harbyter: 01:04:455 (64455|3) - btw
22:06 Harbyter: i think this
22:06 Harbyter: there isn't a vocal
22:06 Harbyter: now that i listen it well
22:07 juankristal: its like a ln
22:07 juankristal: yeah
22:09 juankristal: dont think I have to ln the red one
22:09 Harbyter: mmm
22:09 Harbyter: na
22:10 juankristal: 01:03:165 (63165|2,63165|0) -
22:10 juankristal: that snap is correct?
22:10 juankristal: sakura told me about that one
22:10 Harbyter: yes
22:10 Harbyter: but why double
22:10 juankristal: yai
22:10 juankristal: xD
22:10 Harbyter: xD
22:10 juankristal: lol double
22:11 juankristal: xD
22:12 juankristal: the last thing I guess
22:12 juankristal: 01:26:058 (86058|3) -
22:13 Harbyter: 01:38:134 (98134|2) - this too?
22:13 juankristal: yeah
22:13 Harbyter: simple note?
22:13 Harbyter: xD
22:13 Harbyter: to avoid some problem
22:13 Harbyter: ahhaha
22:13 juankristal: yeah, I guess xD
22:14 juankristal: 01:20:115 -
22:14 juankristal: and that space?
22:14 Harbyter: no problem
22:14 Harbyter: is good to left some space
22:14 Harbyter: during those stream
22:15 juankristal: I said it because its only in the kiai
22:15 juankristal: 00:09:172 -
22:15 juankristal: for example that part doesnt have space
22:15 Harbyter: mmm
22:16 Harbyter: 00:13:700 (13700|0) -
22:16 Harbyter: just remove this
22:16 Harbyter: so this is consistent
22:16 Harbyter: cause you left space after the crash
22:16 Harbyter: the cymbal"
22:16 juankristal: 00:43:889 (43889|3) -
22:17 juankristal: 00:49:926 (49926|0) -
22:17 juankristal: those ones too, right?
22:17 Harbyter: 00:49:926 (49926|0) -
22:17 Harbyter: yea
22:17 Harbyter: 00:07:662 (7662|1) -
22:17 juankristal: cool
22:17 Harbyter: this too
22:17 Harbyter: if you want
22:17 juankristal: oky
22:18 juankristal: Should I update now?
22:18 Harbyter: yea
22:18 Harbyter: lemme test it now
22:19 juankristal: done
22:20 Harbyter: redl
22:22 Harbyter: good
22:22 Harbyter: rip acc
22:22 Harbyter: xD
22:22 juankristal: xDD
22:23 Harbyter: is the hd
22:23 Harbyter: always following the vocal?
22:23 juankristal: I think not allways
22:24 juankristal: only in kiai and some specific parts
22:24 Harbyter: mmm
22:24 juankristal: 00:31:719 -
22:24 Harbyter: you should keep the snap consistency
22:24 Harbyter: for example
22:24 Harbyter: 00:34:549 (34549|0) -
22:24 Harbyter: this LN
22:24 Harbyter: in the mx it ends before
22:25 Harbyter: 00:36:247 (36247|0,36624|1,37002|2,37379|3) - those too
22:25 Harbyter: end it in the blue
22:26 juankristal: yup
22:27 Harbyter: 01:06:247 (66247|3,67096|1) -
22:27 Harbyter: remove those
22:28 Harbyter: 01:10:964 -
22:28 juankristal: I am fixing the snaps
22:28 juankristal: and the overnotes
22:28 juankristal: 01:13:228 -
22:28 Harbyter: keep the rhytm with the bass at this point
22:28 Harbyter: suggest to not follow the vocal here
22:28 Harbyter: since here we got some 1/3 and is quite hard the rhytm
22:29 Harbyter: 01:17:002 (77002|1) - end this in the blue line too
22:29 juankristal: 01:13:228 -
22:29 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3422078
22:29 juankristal: wow this is a mess
22:29 juankristal: the osu screen link is for the bass
22:30 Harbyter: ok
22:30 juankristal: and the 1:13 mark is for the double in MX
22:30 juankristal: is correct?
22:30 Harbyter: wut
22:30 Harbyter: didn't understand
22:31 juankristal: in the mx diff
22:31 juankristal: 01:13:040 (73040|1,73040|3,73228|3,73228|0,73417|3,73417|1) -
22:31 Harbyter: o,o
22:31 Harbyter: still didn't understand
22:31 Harbyter: xD
22:32 juankristal: those notes
22:32 juankristal: are double notes
22:32 juankristal: are them ok?
22:32 juankristal: or should them be single notes xD
22:32 Harbyter: oh
22:32 Harbyter: is fine i think
22:32 Harbyter: this to empathyze more that vocal section
22:32 Harbyter: isn't a big deal
22:33 juankristal: oky
22:33 juankristal: welp, back to the HD one now
22:33 juankristal: another issue, should it be HD or HD+?
22:33 Harbyter: hd is fine
22:33 Harbyter: 01:19:549 (79549|1) - suggest to move down in the red line
22:33 Harbyter: 01:19:738 (79738|1,79832|2,79926|1) - removing those too
22:33 Harbyter: like in the mx
22:33 Harbyter: 01:19:643 (79643|2) - mov ein 1
22:34 juankristal: cool
22:36 Harbyter: 01:23:417 -
22:36 Harbyter: why the rhytm is different
22:36 Harbyter: 01:24:738 - here too
22:37 Harbyter: make the same as the other
22:37 Harbyter: the first
22:37 Harbyter: the second one
22:37 Harbyter: like here 01:36:813 -
22:38 juankristal: the first one is because it follows the vocal
22:38 juankristal: I think
22:38 Harbyter: better not
22:38 Harbyter: xD
22:38 juankristal: oky xD
22:40 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/j7J7r/417fd86350.png
22:40 Harbyter: 01:43:606 -
22:41 juankristal: done
22:42 juankristal: update then?
22:43 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/618329 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [NM]]
22:45 Harbyter: 01:34:738 (94738|3) -
22:45 Harbyter: y u disappear
22:45 juankristal: ty inet
22:45 Harbyter: u
22:45 Harbyter: 01:34:738 (94738|3) -
22:45 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/618329 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [NM]]
22:46 Harbyter: turn in 1/2 ln
22:46 Harbyter: xd
22:46 juankristal: sure xD
22:48 Harbyter: 01:42:662 -
22:48 Harbyter: here too
22:48 Harbyter: rerrange
22:48 Harbyter: put some 1/1 ln
22:49 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3422180
22:51 Harbyter: 01:16:813 - add note 3
22:52 Harbyter: 01:19:077 - add 2
22:52 Harbyter: 01:19:643 (79643|1) - move in 4
22:52 juankristal: sure
22:54 Harbyter: ok
22:54 Harbyter: you can update it
22:55 juankristal: updated

Harbyter wrote:

hi juan, replace the hitsound again with those orz http://puu.sh/j8oK0/479d311e66.rar


yesterday i've converted those into mp3 instead of wav orzzz

Harbyter wrote:

fixed other little things

IRC

19:54 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587467 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [HD]]
19:54 Harbyter: ok
19:54 Harbyter: l'ets fix the last thing
19:54 Harbyter: so i can bubble it
19:54 Harbyter: let's
19:54 juankristal: okee
19:55 *juankristal is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587467 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [HD]]
19:55 Harbyter: 00:18:889 -
19:55 Harbyter: in the MX
19:55 Harbyter: we have a single note
19:55 Harbyter: but here two
19:56 juankristal: oh
19:56 juankristal: should I delete the HD one or add in the MX one?
19:56 Harbyter: delete hd
19:57 juankristal: done
19:58 Harbyter: now
19:58 Harbyter: check this
19:58 Harbyter: 00:18:323 (18323|1,18417|0,18511|3,18511|2,18606|1,18700|0,18794|3,18794|2,18889|0,18889|1,18983|3,18983|2,19077|1,19172|0,19266|3,19266|1,19360|2,19455|1,19549|0) -
19:58 Harbyter: and here 00:54:360 (54360|2,54455|1,54549|0,54643|3,54738|1,54738|2,54832|0,54926|3,55021|2,55115|3,55115|1,55209|0,55304|1,55398|0,55492|3,55587|2,55681|1) -
19:58 Harbyter: those are the same pattern
19:58 Harbyter: but the amount of the notes are incosistent
19:59 Harbyter: wanna fix?
19:59 Harbyter: if yes ic an suggest something
20:00 juankristal: oky
20:00 juankristal: tell me your suggest :3
20:00 Harbyter: 00:54:738 (54738|1,54832|0) - ctrl j
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:021 - add 1
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:209 (55209|0) - move in 3
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:492 - add 3
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:587 (55587|2) - move 2
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:681 (55681|1,55775|0) - move one col on right
20:01 Harbyter: 00:55:870 (55870|1) - move 1
20:02 Harbyter: 00:18:983 (18983|2) - remove
20:03 Harbyter: 00:18:983 (18983|3) - move in 3
20:03 Harbyter: 00:19:077 (19077|1) - mov ein 4
20:03 Harbyter: 00:19:549 (19549|0) - 3
20:03 Harbyter: 00:19:643 (19643|2) - 1
20:04 Harbyter: 00:55:021 (55021|2) - add hitsound clap
20:04 Harbyter: 00:18:889 (18889|1,19077|3,19172|0) - add clap
20:06 juankristal: keeping the jack here? 00:18:983 (18983|3,19077|3) -
20:06 Harbyter: what cjackj
20:06 Harbyter: send me a screenshot
20:06 juankristal: http://puu.sh/ja7oa/b3d49a9d5b.jpg
20:07 Harbyter: 00:18:889 - add 1
20:07 Harbyter: 00:18:983 (18983|3) - move in 3
20:08 juankristal: cool
20:08 Harbyter: 01:31:719 (91719|1) - shift the hitsound
20:08 Harbyter: 01:30:964 (90964|3,91341|0) -
20:08 Harbyter: those too
20:09 juankristal: done with all
20:09 juankristal: yeah
20:09 Harbyter: 01:19:077 (79077|1,79172|2) - maybe betetr ctrl h
20:09 Harbyter: xD
20:09 Harbyter: i think like this the flows is betetr
20:09 Harbyter: betetr
20:09 Harbyter: better
20:09 Harbyter: fuck my typo
20:10 juankristal: avoid jack
20:10 Harbyter: LOL
20:10 juankristal: okey xD
20:10 juankristal: LOLOO
20:10 Harbyter: 01:04:738 (64738|2) -
20:10 Harbyter: better remove
20:10 Harbyter: 01:13:794 (73794|3) - this too
20:11 Harbyter: 01:24:832 (84832|1,85021|3) - should be removed
20:11 Harbyter: since you started to follow the vocal here
20:11 Harbyter: then you can move this in 2
20:11 Harbyter: 01:24:926 (84926|2) -
20:11 Harbyter: 01:25:304 (85304|2) - this in 4
20:12 juankristal: that one on 4
20:12 juankristal: 01:25:492 (85492|3) -
20:12 juankristal: that one still 4?
20:12 Harbyter: yup
20:12 Harbyter: it still plays good
20:13 Harbyter: always hand balance
20:13 juankristal: 01:25:870 (85870|1) - to 1?
20:13 Harbyter: don't worry
20:13 Harbyter: nah
20:13 Harbyter: keep in 2
20:13 juankristal: oki
20:13 Harbyter: 01:29:738 (89738|0) -
20:13 Harbyter: remove no vocal
20:14 juankristal: jappanese again
20:14 Harbyter: 01:36:907 (96907|2,97096|2) - remove those too
20:14 Harbyter: 01:40:115 (100115|0) - this too
20:14 juankristal: 01:37:096 (97096|2) - that one too?
20:14 Harbyter: 01:41:813 (101813|0) - this too
20:14 Harbyter: yes
20:15 Harbyter: oh wait
20:15 Harbyter: 01:37:096 - readd here
20:15 Harbyter: remove this
20:15 Harbyter: 01:37:285 (97285|2) -
20:15 Harbyter: wrong copypaste before
20:16 Harbyter: 01:25:021 - readd here too
20:17 Harbyter: 01:25:209 (85209|1) - remove this
20:17 Harbyter: ok
20:17 juankristal: oki
20:17 juankristal: one thing
20:17 juankristal: 01:17:002 (77002|1) -
20:18 juankristal: Can I make it a 1/1? In both MX and HD
20:18 juankristal: I feel it can be better for play
20:18 Harbyter: sure
20:18 Harbyter: suggest to mvoe this
20:18 Harbyter: 01:16:624 (76624|3) -
20:18 Harbyter: in 1 too
20:18 Harbyter: the LN 01:17:002 (77002|1) -
20:18 Harbyter: in 4
20:19 juankristal: done
20:20 Harbyter: update it?
20:21 juankristal: 01:27:851 (87851|2) -
20:21 juankristal: should I delete that one?
20:21 Harbyter: uhhhh
20:21 Harbyter: nice one
20:21 Harbyter: didn't noticed
20:21 Harbyter: xD
20:21 juankristal: xD
20:21 Harbyter: yea better remove it
20:21 juankristal: keep the pattern that way?
20:21 Harbyter: well
20:21 Harbyter: i hope you rearranged the pattern
20:22 Harbyter: by yourself when removing the notes
20:22 Harbyter: c,c
20:22 Harbyter: or not?
20:22 Harbyter: xd
20:22 juankristal: I think I did...? xD
20:22 Harbyter: that's why i asked to update
20:22 Harbyter: so i can recheck the new pattern
20:22 Harbyter: xD
20:23 juankristal: 01:39:832 -
20:23 juankristal: this is the only one I didnt rearrange I think
20:23 Harbyter: 01:40:021 (100021|2) - move in 1
20:24 juankristal: updated
20:24 juankristal: check it
20:24 juankristal: I mean, I rearranged that one
20:24 juankristal: and then I updated xD
20:24 Harbyter: oh
20:24 Harbyter: last thing
20:24 Harbyter: 01:42:662 -
20:24 Harbyter: why no LN here
20:24 Harbyter: p,p
20:24 juankristal: LN with doubles is fine, right?
20:25 Harbyter: yes
20:25 juankristal: done
20:25 Harbyter: ok
20:25 Harbyter: update it
20:26 juankristal: updateed
20:26 juankristal: :3
20:27 juankristal: I am also not sure about this : 00:16:813 (16813|2,16907|3,17002|2,17002|1,17096|3) -
20:28 Harbyter: 00:40:021 (40021|2) -
20:28 Harbyter: remove this
20:28 Harbyter: is fine that
20:29 juankristal: 00:40:587 (40587|1) - remove this one too?
20:29 Harbyter: 00:45:681 (45681|1) - move in 1
20:29 Harbyter: mmm
20:29 Harbyter: ok
20:29 Harbyter: remove that one too
20:30 Harbyter: move in 4
20:30 juankristal: what should I move to 4? xD
20:31 Harbyter: 01:31:530 (91530|3) -
20:31 Harbyter: no
20:31 Harbyter: wait
20:31 Harbyter: lemme research it
20:31 Harbyter: orz
20:32 Harbyter: 00:53:323 (53323|1) -
20:32 juankristal: xD
20:32 Harbyter: 01:31:530 (91530|3) - this in 2
20:32 Harbyter: 01:31:624 (91624|0) - this in 3
20:32 Harbyter: 01:31:719 (91719|1) - 1
20:32 Harbyter: 01:37:285 (97285|2) - remove this
20:32 Harbyter: 01:37:379 (97379|1) - move in 4
20:33 Harbyter: ok
20:33 juankristal: that blue one is not the U?
20:33 juankristal: Of Uraomote
20:33 Harbyter: done
20:33 juankristal: 01:37:285 (97285|2) - that one
20:33 Harbyter: is come always from here 01:37:190 -
20:34 juankristal: okey
20:34 juankristal: its more like a quick ura, from the LN
20:34 Harbyter: is spelled ou
20:34 Harbyter: but is a o
20:34 juankristal: :O
20:34 juankristal: teach me how to Ura
20:34 Harbyter: listen mucho anime
20:34 Harbyter: and sing japanese song
20:34 Harbyter: xD
20:35 juankristal: mucho
20:35 Harbyter: hahaha
20:35 juankristal: I love to sing japanese songs x.x
20:35 juankristal: I love mucho
20:35 juankristal: <3
20:35 Harbyter: mucho mucho
20:35 Harbyter: okj
20:35 Harbyter: hd done
20:35 juankristal: italian and spanish are pretty similar lol
20:35 juankristal: yaai
20:35 juankristal: HD updated
20:37 Harbyter: 00:34:549 (34549|3) - remove
20:37 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/618329 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [NM]]
20:37 Harbyter: 00:34:738 - add here
20:37 Harbyter: keep the same rhytm here in NM
20:37 Harbyter: 00:35:492 (35492|1) - remove here too
20:38 juankristal: 00:43:040 (43040|2) - remove?
20:38 Harbyter: na
20:38 Harbyter: keep there
20:39 juankristal: oki
20:39 Harbyter: 01:04:926 -
20:39 Harbyter: now here
20:39 Harbyter: mmmmm
20:40 juankristal: mmmm
20:40 juankristal: You dont like that one xD
20:40 Harbyter: no
20:40 Harbyter: is pretty hard
20:40 Harbyter: here
20:41 Harbyter: people already getting used to the previous rhytm
20:41 Harbyter: and we got an irregulat 1/4
20:41 Harbyter: this will kill the novice
20:41 juankristal: I think it can be doubles
20:41 juankristal: I mean
20:41 juankristal: only 1 double per 1/4
20:41 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/ja9zj/4b36820a2a.png
20:42 juankristal: just as that one
20:42 juankristal: lol
20:42 Harbyter: xD
20:42 Harbyter: fix the hitsound rememebr
20:42 Harbyter: 01:05:209 (65209|0) -
20:42 juankristal: should I keep the clap¡
20:42 Harbyter: remove
20:42 Harbyter: the clap
20:42 juankristal: cool
20:42 juankristal: the other clap is fine, right?
20:42 Harbyter: mmm
20:42 Harbyter: yes
20:43 Harbyter: 01:06:624 (66624|3,66719|2) - ctrlh
20:43 Harbyter: ctrlj"
20:43 Harbyter: 01:06:813 (66813|1) - 1
20:43 Harbyter: 01:06:907 (66907|0,67002|1) - move 1 col on right
20:44 juankristal: wowo
20:44 juankristal: I lost myself lol
20:44 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/ja9M9/909b034fe4.jpg
20:44 juankristal: http://puu.sh/ja9Md/045e134612.jpg
20:44 juankristal: yeaaah
20:45 Harbyter: 01:44:172 -
20:45 Harbyter: remove one note here
20:45 Harbyter: p,p
20:45 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/ja9OL/0433961b8b.jpg
20:45 juankristal: sure
20:46 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/599931 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [EZ]]
20:46 juankristal: oki
20:46 Harbyter: 00:13:228 - add a note
20:46 Harbyter: 00:19:077 (19077|3) - move here 00:19:266 -
20:48 Harbyter: 00:54:549 - add 2
20:48 Harbyter: 00:54:738 (54738|1) - move in 1\
20:48 Harbyter: 00:54:926 - add 4\
20:48 Harbyter: 00:55:492 - add 2
20:48 Harbyter: rememebr to fix the hitsound
20:48 Harbyter: where you can
20:49 juankristal: such as...?
20:49 Harbyter: well
20:49 Harbyter: where you can
20:50 Harbyter: to keep the consistence with the other diff
20:50 Harbyter: xD
20:50 juankristal: you say keeping the same hitsound in the same note slot?
20:50 Harbyter: no
20:50 Harbyter: put the clap or whistle
20:50 Harbyter: if it miss
20:51 Harbyter: 01:07:945 (67945|2) - shift the hitsound
20:51 juankristal: okok
20:51 juankristal: done
20:51 Harbyter: remember all those things
20:51 Harbyter: it will be helpfull for the next map
20:51 Harbyter: so people will find less error
20:52 Harbyter: and maybe you can rank it faster
20:52 Harbyter: xD
20:52 juankristal: :O
20:52 juankristal: 01:22:285 (82285|3) -
20:52 juankristal: random W appears
20:52 Harbyter: 01:22:473 (82473|2) - should be here
20:52 Harbyter: 01:26:813 (86813|3) - here too
20:52 juankristal: yup
20:53 Harbyter: 00:49:266 (49266|0,49455|3) -
20:53 Harbyter: switch hitsound
20:54 juankristal: wow
20:54 juankristal: I dont know why I did that
20:54 juankristal: :C
20:54 Harbyter: p,p
20:54 Harbyter: xD
20:55 Harbyter: i think normal mod don't fix those things
20:55 Harbyter: is hard that someone suggest you to fix all those
20:55 Harbyter: you can rely only by yourself
20:55 juankristal: yeah, its hard to find someone who does it
20:56 juankristal: I think it takes a lot of time
20:56 juankristal: I got a .txt file where I write all this stuff
20:56 Harbyter: uh
20:56 Harbyter: ok
20:56 Harbyter: update it
20:56 Harbyter: last thing
20:56 Harbyter: is the metadata correct
20:56 juankristal: like, shifting hitsounds, and all that stuff
20:56 Harbyter: ?
20:56 Harbyter: you don't need to write it
20:56 Harbyter: just keep those thing sin mind
20:56 Harbyter: you'll get used to it
20:57 Harbyter: and then you won't do those things in the future
20:57 juankristal: yeah
20:57 juankristal: but still I wanna write them, just in case, if someday someone ask me for a megamod xD
20:57 juankristal: or something like that
20:57 Harbyter: ohh
20:57 Harbyter: xD
20:57 Harbyter: well
20:57 Harbyter: again
20:57 Harbyter: is the metadata correct?
20:57 Harbyter: i'm not good in metadata
20:57 Harbyter: :<
20:58 juankristal: kamikaze did the metadata
20:58 Harbyter: oh
20:58 Harbyter: oky
20:58 juankristal: https://projectdiva.wikispaces.com/List ... 8Extend%29
20:58 Harbyter: then update it
20:58 Harbyter: xD
20:58 juankristal: I think that was
20:58 juankristal: updated

here the bubz ~

Yuii- wrote:

No Kudos

IRC mod of all the difficulties.

We polished some patterns, changed some things aaand we are ready to go ~!

damn logs

2015-07-24 18:48 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/599931 wowaka - Uraomote Rabazu [EZ]]
2015-07-24 18:48 juankristal: 1x1?
2015-07-24 18:48 Yuii-: 00:13:606 (13606|2,13606|0) - Es necesario el uso de dobles? Para la dificultad que estás intentando mappear, hacer 2 dobles no me parece del todo correcto, por otra parte, tampoco creo que haya que hacer semejante hincapié en un beat bajo
2015-07-24 18:50 Yuii-: 00:18:323 (18323|3) - Esto de dónde salió? Durante toda la primera parte venías ignorando este beat y de repente rompiste con el patrón
2015-07-24 18:51 Yuii-: 00:31:719 (31719|3) - Esto es un tanto innecesario en mi opinión, también moviría 00:31:719 (31719|2) - un casillero más a la derecha en caso que coincidas conmigo
2015-07-24 18:51 juankristal: respecto al primero, lo maximo para EZ en mi opionion son 3 dobles seguidas, esa es doble por el platillo
2015-07-24 18:51 Yuii-: pero es muy bajo
2015-07-24 18:52 juankristal: realmente no creo que sea tan dificil, por eso. Si bien el platillo en general es bajo en toda la cancion
2015-07-24 18:52 Yuii-: oki entonces, np!
2015-07-24 18:52 juankristal: hay algunos platillos aun mas bajos y ahi no uso dobles, las que tienen F son dobles en la mayoria de los casos
2015-07-24 18:53 Yuii-: 00:55:870 (55870|2,55870|3) - Ojo con esto, cuando te dije lo de que era "innecesario" quizás me equivoqué, ahora entendí qué quisiste hacer, sin embargo los hitsounds que usaste para esta sección no son los mismos que los anteriores, ya que agregás un Whistle de por medio
2015-07-24 18:54 juankristal: el W está tambien en el anterior crash
2015-07-24 18:54 Yuii-: 01:25:870 (85870|2) - De esto dudo
2015-07-24 18:55 juankristal: De ese clap?
2015-07-24 18:55 Yuii-: De la nota en general
2015-07-24 18:55 Yuii-: Del clap es otra cosa
2015-07-24 18:55 Yuii-: No parece que haya un beat para marcar ahí... o estoy loco
2015-07-24 18:56 juankristal: esta siguiendo el vocal ahi
2015-07-24 18:56 juankristal: lo que si es verdad de lo que decis es que hay un jack 1/1
2015-07-24 18:56 juankristal: es decir 01:25:497 (85497|2,85875|2) -
2015-07-24 18:56 Yuii-: El tema es que... es la ÚNICA nota que ponés en ese patrón durante TODA la dificultad
2015-07-24 18:56 juankristal: asi que lo voy a mover para que quede escalonado
2015-07-24 18:56 Yuii-: Es inconsistencia eso y es unrankable
2015-07-24 18:57 juankristal: 01:37:384 -
2015-07-24 18:57 juankristal: aca tambien está !
2015-07-24 18:57 juankristal: se mantiene durante esas secciones de Kiai unicamente
2015-07-24 18:57 Yuii-: Estoy ciego
2015-07-24 18:57 juankristal: es el unico estribillo de la cancion
2015-07-24 18:57 Yuii-: Lo de la escalera estaría bien, entonces, sí
2015-07-24 18:58 juankristal: asi que por eso solamente esta en esas partes, el "ura o mo te "
2015-07-24 18:58 juankristal: pero lo del jack si, tenes razon con eso y lo acomode igual al otro patron, pero invertido
2015-07-24 18:58 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3436666
2015-07-24 18:58 juankristal: algo asi quedo
2015-07-24 18:58 Yuii-: 10 puntos!°
2015-07-24 18:59 Yuii-: Pasamo al MN
2015-07-24 19:02 Yuii-: 00:07:945 (7945|0,7945|2) - cuestionable que no estés haciendo dobles en 00:09:643 - tampoco. Yo agregaría una nota en (2)
2015-07-24 19:03 juankristal: seguro?
2015-07-24 19:03 juankristal: Creo que le erraste a la nota jaj
2015-07-24 19:03 Yuii-: estamos en el mismo mapa?
2015-07-24 19:03 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/618329 wowaka - Uraomote Lovers [NM]]
2015-07-24 19:03 juankristal: las dobles siempre coinciden con el Clap y los claps son siempre en ticks blancos
2015-07-24 19:03 juankristal: sep
2015-07-24 19:03 juankristal: y me mandaste un tick rojo
2015-07-24 19:04 Yuii-: No tiene porqué ser Clap
2015-07-24 19:04 Yuii-: Whistle + Finish?
2015-07-24 19:04 juankristal: de que parte me estas hablando ahora? jaj
2015-07-24 19:04 juankristal: el finish va solo para los crash
2015-07-24 19:05 Yuii-: http://puu.sh/jbBUI/2f152e3290.png
2015-07-24 19:05 juankristal: basicamente, sonidos como 00:07:573 -
2015-07-24 19:05 Yuii-: Claro, el tema es que juega mal el hecho que estés marcando TANTO un beat fuerte e ignorando el otro... o no ignorando, peeero... no marcándolo tanto
2015-07-24 19:06 juankristal: pasa que es una normal jaj
2015-07-24 19:06 juankristal: no puedo poner tanto doble
2015-07-24 19:06 Yuii-: Buen punto
2015-07-24 19:06 juankristal: si pongo esa nota doble tendria que marcar todos los W que hay en la cancion basicamente
2015-07-24 19:07 Yuii-: 00:42:851 (42851|1) - whistle?
2015-07-24 19:07 juankristal: las que si puedo doblar son las que vienen antes de las LN
2015-07-24 19:07 Yuii-: nah, esas están bien
2015-07-24 19:08 juankristal: Esa parte ese W
2015-07-24 19:08 juankristal: si te fijas, despues de la intro hasta esa parte no hay ningun Whistle
2015-07-24 19:08 juankristal: la verdad, no se por que, pero el punto es que estaba asi y por eso no tiene W esa parte
2015-07-24 19:08 Yuii-: Pero hay un beat
2015-07-24 19:08 Yuii-: Bueno, dejalo si querés
2015-07-24 19:08 juankristal: y volvemos a lo de antes, seria inoncistente
2015-07-24 19:09 juankristal: porque todos los beats anteriores de esa seccion no fueron marcados con W
2015-07-24 19:10 juankristal: o sea, las marcaria, pero como nadie en ningun mod me marco eso y Usagi que me hizo basicamente los HS no me marco esas secciones, preferiria no jugarla
2015-07-24 19:10 Yuii-: Ahora viene lo jodido... 01:05:209 (65209|1,65209|0) - esto no suena. El beat está claramente en 01:05:304 - y lo ignorás. Mi recomendación: http://puu.sh/jbCeS/a1b841a0de.png
2015-07-24 19:10 Yuii-: Está perfecto, no cambies si no sentís que no hay necesidad
2015-07-24 19:11 juankristal: pasa que estoy marcando otra cosa sobre lo que sugeris
2015-07-24 19:12 juankristal: o sea, yo no estoy marcando el beat en esa parte, estoy marcando el vocal, es por eso que las notas estan medio "raras"
2015-07-24 19:12 Yuii-: Pero ignorar beats es lo peor que podés hacer
2015-07-24 19:12 juankristal: mi idea principal era marcar todos los vocales, pero si venia de un ritmo constante y pasar a algo como esto:
2015-07-24 19:12 Yuii-: Tipo.. regla número uno
2015-07-24 19:12 juankristal: http://puu.sh/jbCnU/3d179e9723.jpg
2015-07-24 19:12 Yuii-: 01:24:172 (84172|3) - un poco overextend el LN este, no? intentá terminar en 01:24:360 -
2015-07-24 19:12 juankristal: seria bastante jodido para una nm
2015-07-24 19:13 Yuii-: Lo mío le reduce la dificultad de hecho
2015-07-24 19:13 juankristal: Si, el star ratio lo baja
2015-07-24 19:13 juankristal: pero es mas dificil leer eso
2015-07-24 19:14 juankristal: el star ratio prioriza densidad de notas y no lectura
2015-07-24 19:14 Yuii-: Eso lo entiendo, aún así esa parte suena un poco rara
2015-07-24 19:14 Yuii-: Lo dejo a tu criterio
2015-07-24 19:14 juankristal: respecto a esa LN neh, está bien creo yo. Es clara la diferencia de duracion entre esa que me marcaste y 01:21:158 (81158|3) -
2015-07-24 19:14 juankristal: y por eso no la hice terminar ahi
2015-07-24 19:15 Yuii-: el tema es que está "tapando" 2 partes del vocal juntas
2015-07-24 19:15 juankristal: Tapando?
2015-07-24 19:15 Yuii-: Claro, con un único LN marcás 2 partes del vocal
2015-07-24 19:15 Yuii-: Porque son 2 sonidos distintos
2015-07-24 19:16 juankristal: un chate-e
2015-07-24 19:16 juankristal: eso decis, no?
2015-07-24 19:16 Yuii-: Aaaalgo así
2015-07-24 19:17 juankristal: tendria que aprender fonetica ponja para decirte realmente jaj
2015-07-24 19:17 juankristal: pero eso se da en todas las LN
2015-07-24 19:17 Yuii-: 01:38:134 (98134|3) - mover a 2 quizás? el spacing digamos que no funciona en esta sección
2015-07-24 19:17 Yuii-: 01:21:153 (81153|3) - pasa que acá lo hacés bien, a eso me refiero
2015-07-24 19:17 Yuii-: Podrías hacer un 1-1-1
2015-07-24 19:17 Yuii-: en vez de 1 short y 2 largos
2015-07-24 19:18 juankristal: pasa que, esa ultima ES efectivamente mas corta
2015-07-24 19:18 Yuii-: Seguro, no lo discuto, el tema es que la que marco yo tiene un problema parecido
2015-07-24 19:18 juankristal: ademas, en todas las diffs se mantienen asi las LN, tambien intento mantener la consistencia entre todas
2015-07-24 19:19 Yuii-: Eso se cambia con un botón (?
2015-07-24 19:19 juankristal: u.u
2015-07-24 19:19 juankristal: 01:21:158 - escucha eso con 25%
2015-07-24 19:19 juankristal: 01:22:950 - La realidad es que la LN que marcaste vos termina en azul
2015-07-24 19:20 Yuii-: Claro, pero en azul sería bien de conchudo terminarlo
2015-07-24 19:20 juankristal: y la dejo hasta tick blanco porque es una paja
2015-07-24 19:20 juankristal: claro
2015-07-24 19:20 juankristal: ni en la MX termina en azul
2015-07-24 19:20 Yuii-: Bueno, no change entonces
2015-07-24 19:20 Yuii-: Total es preferencia, supongo
2015-07-24 19:21 juankristal: es para mejor jugabilidad, si se quiere
2015-07-24 19:21 juankristal: es mucho mas facil para un newbie meter una LN 1/1 que una 1/2
2015-07-24 19:21 juankristal: asi que ante la posibilidad de hacerla mas larga
2015-07-24 19:21 Yuii-: tá
2015-07-24 19:21 Yuii-: en esa diff nada más
2015-07-24 19:21 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587467 wowaka - Uraomote Lovers [HD]]
2015-07-24 19:21 Yuii-: 01:21:153 (81153|3) - w?
2015-07-24 19:23 juankristal: Por?
2015-07-24 19:24 Yuii-: hay un beat
2015-07-24 19:24 Yuii-: 01:25:304 (85304|3) - quizás en 3 juegue un mejor papel, imo
2015-07-24 19:24 juankristal: la nota simple?
2015-07-24 19:25 Yuii-: sé
2015-07-24 19:25 juankristal: esa me la dijo el buen harby
2015-07-24 19:25 juankristal: para mejor balance de manos mejor tenerla en 4
2015-07-24 19:25 Yuii-: 01:37:379 (97379|3) - 2 para seguir el patrón de la escalera?
2015-07-24 19:25 juankristal: que mal que sono eso
2015-07-24 19:26 juankristal: esa no esta en 2 porque seria un triple jack 1/2 con ln, medio complejo
2015-07-24 19:26 Yuii-: Es un Hard... jajaja
2015-07-24 19:26 juankristal: pero le hice un cambio nomas
2015-07-24 19:26 Yuii-: oka
2015-07-24 19:26 juankristal: para que quede como escaleroso
2015-07-24 19:26 juankristal: pero evitando eso
2015-07-24 19:27 Yuii-: Oki, además de eso nada más
2015-07-24 19:27 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/587469 wowaka - Uraomote Lovers [MX]]
2015-07-24 19:27 Yuii-: última
2015-07-24 19:27 Yuii-: 00:13:606 (13606|2,13606|3,13606|1) - 4 no es mucho acá?
2015-07-24 19:28 juankristal: en la HD tambien son 4
2015-07-24 19:28 juankristal: lo discuti mucho con mucha gente eso igual, a mi no me resulta demasiado copado tampoco
2015-07-24 19:28 juankristal: Queda medio "feo" 00:13:516 (13516|2,13611|2) -
2015-07-24 19:29 juankristal: pero originalmente el map tambien tenia una nota 00:13:705 - ahi
2015-07-24 19:29 Yuii-: Y si sacás la nota de arriba de esa
2015-07-24 19:29 Yuii-: Así evitás el doble click en esa nota¡
2015-07-24 19:29 juankristal: podria justificarse por "jugabilidad"
2015-07-24 19:29 Yuii-: También podrías hacerlo en la HD de paso
2015-07-24 19:30 juankristal: pero lo mismo de la otra vez
2015-07-24 19:30 Yuii-: 00:36:530 (36530|1) - Yo lo veo un tanto overmapped, no sé qué te parece
2015-07-24 19:30 juankristal: sacar 1 nota de eso me fuerza a sacar 1 nota de tooodas las triples de la cancion casi
2015-07-24 19:30 Yuii-: Nah, porque ahí usás quadra
2015-07-24 19:30 Yuii-: +No afectaría a los demás triplets
2015-07-24 19:31 juankristal: es que "teoricamente hablando" eso es una triple tambien
2015-07-24 19:31 juankristal: porque solo tocas 3 a la vez
2015-07-24 19:31 juankristal: la otra la soltas
2015-07-24 19:31 Yuii-: hmmm sí
2015-07-24 19:31 Yuii-: Bueno, está bien
2015-07-24 19:31 juankristal: igual pienso como vos, no me termina de cerrar
2015-07-24 19:32 juankristal: pero tampoco es tan grave, alguien que puede hacer una MX hace eso de taco
2015-07-24 19:32 juankristal: inb4 DQ
2015-07-24 19:33 juankristal: y a lo otro
2015-07-24 19:33 juankristal: si, tampoco me gusta, se lo comente a harby, el lo recomendo
2015-07-24 19:33 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3436783
2015-07-24 19:33 juankristal: lo cambie a eso
2015-07-24 19:33 Yuii-: Genial, eso me gusta
2015-07-24 19:34 juankristal: dios
2015-07-24 19:34 juankristal: no puedo jugar
2015-07-24 19:34 juankristal: wtf
2015-07-24 19:34 juankristal: editor de mierda
2015-07-24 19:35 Yuii-: Bueno...
2015-07-24 19:35 juankristal: ahi ta
2015-07-24 19:35 Yuii-: actualizá e intentamo
2015-07-24 19:35 juankristal: me copo, quedo cheto
2015-07-24 19:39 juankristal: banca
2015-07-24 19:39 juankristal: http://puu.sh/jbE4Y/2199fbd5eb.png
2015-07-24 19:39 juankristal: okwat
2015-07-24 19:41 juankristal: banca
2015-07-24 19:41 juankristal: que me falta reajustar el kiai
2015-07-24 19:41 juankristal: con el fofset
2015-07-24 19:42 Yuii-: Hay tiempo
2015-07-24 19:43 juankristal: lo del kiai salto sakura
2015-07-24 19:43 juankristal: diciendo que no hace falta que sea sonsistente
2015-07-24 19:43 juankristal: *consistente
2015-07-24 19:44 Yuii-: Ajá
2015-07-24 19:44 Yuii-: De todas maneras no importa
2015-07-24 19:44 Yuii-: Porque la metadata estaba mal, fue un ajuste adicional
2015-07-24 19:44 Yuii-: No fue el motivo principal
2015-07-24 19:44 juankristal: sisi
2015-07-24 19:44 juankristal: se entiende, sep
2015-07-24 19:45 juankristal: bueno, despues de arreglar unos cuantos hitsounds super randoms
2015-07-24 19:45 juankristal: arreglar el offset, el snap
2015-07-24 19:45 juankristal: la metadata
2015-07-24 19:45 Yuii-: está updatea3?
2015-07-24 19:46 juankristal: seep
2015-07-24 19:46 Yuii-: OD8.5 en MC?
2015-07-24 19:46 Yuii-: MX
2015-07-24 19:46 juankristal: mmmh
2015-07-24 19:46 juankristal: banca
2015-07-24 19:48 juankristal: neh, no creo
2015-07-24 19:48 juankristal: a lo sumo bajarle un poco a la HD
2015-07-24 19:48 Yuii-: oki!
2015-07-24 19:48 Yuii-: Por ciertooooooooooo
2015-07-24 19:48 Yuii-: oooo
2015-07-24 19:48 juankristal: ooo
2015-07-24 19:48 Yuii-: El Kiai debería terminar en 01:44:177 -
2015-07-24 19:49 juankristal: Se?
2015-07-24 19:49 Yuii-: Sí, es donde se da el "Hit" final
2015-07-24 19:49 juankristal: pero eso no haria que el hitsound salga a menos volumen?
2015-07-24 19:49 juankristal: ok
2015-07-24 19:49 Yuii-: Nah, nah
2015-07-24 19:50 juankristal: updatea3
2015-07-24 19:51 Yuii-: Bubble #1
2015-07-24 19:51 juankristal: peola

RE-BUBBLE #1!!
Congratulations <3

Yuii- wrote:

Surprise, motherfucker

Bubble P-P-Popping for the following reasons:

1. Incorrect Metadata: The original Romanised Title should be: Uraomote Lovers
2. Incorrect Timing: The correct offset should be 3.045.
3. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: The Kiai in the difficulties is not the same and there're no GDs at all.
4. More things you have to take into consideration for the tags. Consider adding Unhappy Refrain Rabazu Genjitsutouhi-P Arcade F 2nd Miku Flick/02 Balloom

Moreover, I think that there should be a certain buffed to the NM difficulty as it appear to be a minimum gap with the HD diff.

I will be handle this mapset in the few hours via IRC with you.

Harbyter wrote:

EDIT : finally, after 2 days qualified~


gratz juan

Kaito-kun wrote:

Felicidades Juan . Al fin, ya era hora de que la rankearas, llevas desde Enero en esto XD

Kyousuke- wrote:

Gratss!

Harbyter wrote:

EDIT : finally, after 2 days qualified~


gratz juan

Rakuen wrote:

Harbyter wrote:

EDIT : finally, after 2 days qualified~


gratz juan

Hey! Make sure you put a NEW POST if you qualify after hours or days, I cant track because of the new lovely system!

Double post should be fine!

Julie wrote:

CONGRATZ JUAN!! >w<

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Feerum wrote:

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Hello juankristal! Hi Feerum <3
Eheheheheee. Surprise \:D/ I had some time and i remember that you asked me to Mod this. Unfortunately i had to reject this in the Past because.. well, you know. But i like you. You're really cool and it was really fun to talk with you while Stalking Starry- So yeah, i will take a look into your Map. <3
So, let's begin!
Please Notice: It could be a short Mod because it's already pretty modded and it was even Qualified.

General

Artist: Right
Title: Alright. I have check the Title, in the Wiki and other Sides the Title is "Ura-omote Lovers" with a "-" Please check this.
Source: Looks right
Tags: Looks right
AiMod: Looks right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: ----

EZ

00:21:535 (21535|1,21724|2,22101|1,22290|2) - I suggest to CTRL + G here. For some more variation in the Pattern. When you accept this move 00:22:667 (22667|1) - to 1.
00:29:271 (29271|0) - Suggest to move this to 3 better Balance.
00:59:271 (59271|2) - Move to 2
01:00:026 (60026|3) - Move to 1 // The reason is you have a lot of chords here on the right hand. It would balance it a bit better.
01:04:931 (64931|0,65309|2,65309|3,65497|1,65875|0,66063|3) - CTRL + H here. The same reason. All the time your Chords here are on the Right hand.
Remaining looks good

Everything here was fixed, also mixed some things for hand balancing

NM

00:42:667 - and 00:42:856 - i suggest to add a note. Even in the EZ you have here notes. Because its NM i suggest to add only one Note each. I did something different here trying to follow the vocals in a different way and thats why I will think about adding something here.
00:44:743 (44743|1,44931|2) - Suggest to CTRL + G here for better balance.
00:54:365 - heres a Suggestion for better Balance and even Pitch!

Screen

^Awesome
01:22:478 (82478|2,82667|3) - Maybe CTRL + G Here? If you accept this you should move 01:23:045 (83045|2) - to 2.
01:28:139 (88139|0,88328|2,88516|1,88705|0) - What could be kinda fun to play is when you make these to a trill like 01:26:629 (86629|2,86818|3,87007|2,87195|3) - so move:
01:28:139 (88139|0) - To 2
01:28:328 (88328|2) - To 1. Try it :3
Thats all for the NM

No answer means fixed of course, really like the trill thing :3

HD

00:09:554 (9554|2,9648|1) - Move both one col to the right for better balance.
00:11:535 (11535|2) - Move to 2 for better balance.
00:12:290 (12290|1,12384|0) - Move both two col to the right and then 00:12:478 (12478|2) - to 1. Again better balance.
00:13:045 (13045|1) - Maybe move to 1? Or 00:13:233 (13233|1) - to 1:D. Up to you :3
00:14:177 (14177|3,14271|2) - CTRL + G better Pitch.
00:28:139 (28139|2) - Move to 3 for balance.
00:33:611 (33611|2) - Move to 4 and then 00:33:799 (33799|3,33988|2) - both one to the left.
00:47:007 (47007|0,47101|1) - Both one to the right, then 00:47:195 (47195|2,47290|1) - both one to the left. Better Balance :3
01:14:743 - Missing note? Look here 01:15:497 - and 01:16:252 -. Whoops
01:20:686 (80686|2,80780|1) - Move both one to the left and then 01:20:969 (80969|0) - to 2. The Chord emphasize pretty good the vocal.
01:22:195 (82195|1,82290|2) - Both one to the right and then 01:22:478 (82478|3) - to 3. Same reason
01:26:818 (86818|2) - Maybe to 2 for balance?
01:37:761 (97761|0,97950|0,98139|0,98328|0,98516|0) - Column 1 kills me. Maybe try to rearrange these a bit?
Remaining looks fine.

MX

WoW. Pretty much focus on Vocals. Alright, never have Mod such a Map but i try it!
00:11:441 (11441|1,11535|2,11629|1) - CTRL + H here for more balance.
00:15:875 (15875|1) - Suggest to move this one to 4 for more hand balance.
00:24:177 - Maybe something like this? For more balance:

Screen

00:28:516 - I think a Chord is here not needed. I dont really hear something that you could emphasize with it.
00:29:460 (29460|1,29554|2) - Move both one col to the right, 00:29:837 (29837|2) - this one to 4, 00:29:931 (29931|0) - to 3, 00:30:026 (30026|1,30120|2) - both one to the left aaaand 00:30:214 (30214|1) - to 3. Long suggestion but it gives lot of balance.
00:31:346 (31346|1,31441|2,31535|1) - Suggest to CTRL + H here for more balance.
00:45:497 (45497|0,45592|1,45686|3,45686|2) - CTRL + H and 00:45:780 (45780|1) - to 4. Better balance.
00:58:045 (58045|3) - Delete this one? Why do you have here two chords in 1/4 Beat Mapped. Don't really understand this and its the only one like this.
01:03:170 (63170|0) - Is this Note Wrong snapped? Nope
01:11:095 (71095|2,72227|2) - ??? Uhm.. i suggest you ask someone for this. I know you try to follow here the Vocal but these three notes are the only one in the whole song you mapped in 1/3 Beat. Yup, those 3 are the only 1/3 vocal snap
01:14:743 - Missing note?
01:20:309 (80309|1,80403|2) - CTRL + G for more balance.
01:23:422 (83422|1,83516|2) - CTRL + G here. Same reason.
01:26:629 (86629|2) - Maybe move better to 4?
01:29:271 (89271|2,89365|3,89460|2,89554|3,89648|2) - Suggest to swap columns here.
01:37:950 (97950|3) - maybe move to 3? I like to keep it in 1-4 for balance
01:40:026 (100026|2,100120|0) - CTRL + G here and then 01:40:214 (100214|2) - to 2 and then 01:40:309 (100309|1,100403|2) - both one to the right.

Alright! I have try it. Cool song. Cool Map. You really deserve it to get this Ranked. Try to avoid to many notes on one Column, especially in the MX.
I feel so observed while modding because of this BG...... xD Miku is watching you, babe
Good luck with this. Take a Star because you really have done a lot of work already in this Map :3

Thanks for the star too

Shift AC wrote:

WHY IS THIS NOT RANK YETTTT ???

This is a totally awesome map. I actually an a video for this on my fanpage: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MYgx_jL9Tj8

Really hope it will be rank. Great Job in mapping.

Yuii- wrote:

Round 2, Juani?

puxtu wrote:

Took you long enough

1|2|3|4

1. 00:32:384 - add note on column 3 here? For vocal sound.
2. 00:35:592 - add note here on column 1? For vocal/piano sound, seems unique to play.
3. 00:37:573 - actually there is a sound here, since i saw you also map 00:36:441 (36441|1,36818|3,37195|2) - .
4. 00:38:799 (38799|1,38894|0,38894|2,39177|1,39271|0,39271|2) - the flow looks kinda weird if you map it similar each other. may be try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137837 .
5. 00:40:780 (40780|0,41158|0) - this one too, kinda weird if you place them on the same column since the sounds and vocals are different each other. Maybe ctrl+h 00:40:969 (40969|2,41063|1,41158|2,41158|0,41346|3) - could help.
6. 00:55:780 - idk if this is intended but i saw you actually didn't intentionally avoid using mini jack like 00:19:554 (19554|0,19648|0) - so i think it is fine to add one more note.
7. 00:58:139 (58139|0,58233|3,58328|0,58422|3) - eh, for me the flow looks weird if you map these notes as thrill pattern, probably change the pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137915 ?
8. 01:00:403 (60403|3,60592|3) - is this intended? Move this to column 3 might help to follow the flow better though since the vocal pitch here is actually lower than 01:00:403 - .
9. 01:01:535 (61535|0) - move to column 4 for hand balance and to avoid same pattern with 01:01:912 (61912|2,61912|0) - for variation.
10. 01:07:195 (67195|1) - maybe move to column 1 for hand balance because 01:06:629 (66629|3,66724|2,66912|2,67007|3) - looks kinda heavy on the right side.
11. 01:12:478 (72478|0) - move to column 2? For pattern variation, since it has same pattern with 01:12:101 (72101|0,72101|3) - .
12. 01:17:384 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137974 probably could helps to follow the vocal better.
13. 01:21:535 (81535|3) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
14. 01:23:705 - not sure why you mapped this part with double since the previous part that similar with this was mapped with single note only.
15. 01:25:026 - this one too, same as above.
16. 01:27:761 (87761|2) - move this to 01:27:856 - since there is vocal sound there.
17. 01:29:271 (89271|3) - move this to column 3? Seems more neat for me.
18. 01:32:290 - , 01:33:799 - , 01:35:309 - , 01:38:328 - , 01:39:837 - 01:41:346 - i have no idea why the patterns start from those parts were mapped with different note amount, kinda inconsistent for me since these parts actually have similar vocal, hi-hat, etc.
19. 01:42:290 (102290|3,102667|3) - the flow looks weird if you placed these LN on the same column, maybe swap 01:42:290 (102290|3,102478|2) - , the column i mean could help to follow the flow better.

1. 00:11:535 (11535|0) - move this to column 3 could help for the pattern variation imo, since you jacked 00:10:026 - and 00:08:516 - on column 1.
2. 00:13:045 (13045|1) - maybe move this to column 3? For consistencty with other parts that similar with this one.
3. 00:14:554 - , 00:17:573 - these parts as well, like above.
4. 00:22:290 (22290|1) - move this to column 4 to avoid same pattern with 00:22:667 - could help for the pattern variation imo.
5. 00:28:328 - add one more note here on column 3 to make it become a double like you did at 00:27:573 - .
6. 00:39:271 - maybe add one more note here? like you did at 00:37:761 - , 00:34:743 - , etc.
7. 00:43:422 (43422|2) - move this to column 2 for hand balance?
8. 01:03:233 (63233|2) - move this to column 4 for hand balance?
9. 01:04:743 - suggest to add one more note here, kinda weird to play if you keep this like this imo, also for consistency with 01:01:724 - .
10. 01:07:573 - you can add one more note here for the snare/clap (maybe? idk the name lol) sound.
11. 01:07:950 - add one more note here for cymbal?
12. 01:23:988 (83988|0) - maybe move this to column 3? since you didn't jack 01:23:988 (83988|0) - , 01:22:478 - .
13. 01:25:686 (85686|0,85875|1) - if you map this one like this, then i would suggest to move 01:25:309 (85309|3) - to column 3, might need to remap the pattern before this part a little though.
14. 01:27:573 (87573|2,87761|2) - i don't think this jack is necessary, maybe remap this part a little?
15. 01:29:460 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196995 plays better imo.
16. 01:30:214 (90214|0,90592|0) - the flow looks weird if map this on the same column, since the vocals are different each other.
17. 01:32:101 - add one more note here for cymbal.
18. 01:35:309 (95309|0) - move this to column 3, much easier to play.

1. 00:07:950 (7950|2,8139|3) - swap the column, looks better imo and more balance.
2. 00:11:724 (11724|1) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
3. 00:18:516 (18516|3,18516|1,18705|2,18894|1,18894|3,19082|2,19271|3,19271|1) - i have no idea why this part should be mapped with this repetitive pattern, might need to remap this part a little.
4. 00:19:837 (19837|0) - delete this, for consistency with 00:22:856 - , 00:24:365 - etc.
5. 00:23:611 (23611|1) - move this to column 4, since you mapped 00:21:724 (21724|2,22101|1) - , 00:20:214 (20214|2,20592|1) - , etc with different column each note.
6. 00:36:252 - i know if you mapped the LNs like this to simplify the pattern, but however inconsistent with other diffs, for example, with HD diff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197052 .
7. 00:47:573 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197066 looks better, also actually a mirrored pattern from 00:46:063 - .
8. 00:49:460 (49460|0) - move to column 3 for hand balance.
9. 01:04:365 (64365|2) - move to column 1, would be cool since it is a mirrored pattern from 01:02:856 - .
10. 01:04:931 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197084plays better for me at least.
11. 01:06:629 (66629|2,66724|3,66818|0,66912|1,67007|2) - i would rather to simplify this to 121 (note amount) 1/2 beat pattern, suddenly map the 1/4 is kinda hard to play.
12. 01:24:931 (84931|3,84931|1,85686|3,85686|1,86063|3,86063|1) - kinda noticeable for me when testplaying this diff, might need to give some variation.
13. 01:30:403 (90403|2) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
14. 01:38:705 (98705|1) - move to column 4 for hand balance maybe?
15. 01:42:101 (102101|3) - this one too, like above but move to column 1?

1. 00:17:195 (17195|2) - move to column 4? Since column 4 looks kinda empty here.
2. 00:20:026 - until 00:35:875 - actually i kinda unsatisfied to see the patterns almost look similar with NM diff (at least the note amount almost the same), maybe it is fine to keep it like this, but i suggest to make it different though.
3. 00:49:837 (49837|0,50214|1) - swap the column for note variation, since i saw you use too many [13] and [24] around this part.
4. 00:56:252 - until 01:04:554 - same like before.
5. 01:07:195 - i believe EZ pattern is actually harder than NM at this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197145 .
6. 01:12:101 (72101|3,72101|1,72856|3,72856|1) - kinda noticeable for me when testplaying this diff, could be better to make some variation here.
7. 01:14:554 (74554|3) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
8. 01:20:780 - , 01:22:290 - , 01:23:799 - , etc, you use too many stairs pattern that cause the pattern looks boring to play, might be better to make some variation here.

Dellvangel wrote:

Finally i'm here. Sorry for the wait.

1|2|3|4

[MX]

1. 00:32:384 - add note on column 3 here? For vocal sound. The reason why I am using the doubles on 1/2 here for the vocals is mostly just a simplification, it might be a vocal in the middle as you point out but I think with the way the patterns are displayed previously it would be more intuitive to leave it as it is.
2. 00:35:592 - add note here on column 1? For vocal/piano sound, seems unique to play. I think there isnt a noticeable sound over there, not sure.
3. 00:37:573 - actually there is a sound here, since i saw you also map 00:36:441 (36441|1,36818|3,37195|2) - . That one is the piano so the long note in the column 1 over there is also kinda replicating the piano
4. 00:38:799 (38799|1,38894|0,38894|2,39177|1,39271|0,39271|2) - the flow looks kinda weird if you map it similar each other. may be try this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137837 . Made some change too, almost an identical.
5. 00:40:780 (40780|0,41158|0) - this one too, kinda weird if you place them on the same column since the sounds and vocals are different each other. Maybe ctrl+h 00:40:969 (40969|2,41063|1,41158|2,41158|0,41346|3) - could help. Made some change over here, trying to go more for pitch.
6. 00:55:780 - idk if this is intended but i saw you actually didn't intentionally avoid using mini jack like 00:19:554 (19554|0,19648|0) - so i think it is fine to add one more note. Yes, it is intented. The reason why I used the minijack before is because the previous section isnt as dense as this one (plus here the piano intensity is decreasing, not increasing, which leads me to think that a jack would be confusing).
7. 00:58:139 (58139|0,58233|3,58328|0,58422|3) - eh, for me the flow looks weird if you map these notes as thrill pattern, probably change the pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137915 ? I agree, keeping the trill motion, but not making it a trill.
8. 01:00:403 (60403|3,60592|3) - is this intended? Move this to column 3 might help to follow the flow better though since the vocal pitch here is actually lower than 01:00:403 - . Its probably lower yeah, changed.
9. 01:01:535 (61535|0) - move to column 4 for hand balance and to avoid same pattern with 01:01:912 (61912|2,61912|0) - for variation. done
10. 01:07:195 (67195|1) - maybe move to column 1 for hand balance because 01:06:629 (66629|3,66724|2,66912|2,67007|3) - looks kinda heavy on the right side. But it is on the left hand already!
11. 01:12:478 (72478|0) - move to column 2? For pattern variation, since it has same pattern with 01:12:101 (72101|0,72101|3) - . sure
12. 01:17:384 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7137974 probably could helps to follow the vocal better. I had that previously, dunno why I changed.
13. 01:21:535 (81535|3) - move to column 1 for hand balance. Make it a 2
14. 01:23:705 - not sure why you mapped this part with double since the previous part that similar with this was mapped with single note only.
15. 01:25:026 - this one too, same as above.
16. 01:27:761 (87761|2) - move this to 01:27:856 - since there is vocal sound there.
17. 01:29:271 (89271|3) - move this to column 3? Seems more neat for me.
18. 01:32:290 - , 01:33:799 - , 01:35:309 - , 01:38:328 - , 01:39:837 - 01:41:346 - i have no idea why the patterns start from those parts were mapped with different note amount, kinda inconsistent for me since these parts actually have similar vocal, hi-hat, etc.
19. 01:42:290 (102290|3,102667|3) - the flow looks weird if you placed these LN on the same column, maybe swap 01:42:290 (102290|3,102478|2) - , the column i mean could help to follow the flow better.

So the reason why I ended up doing the doubles thing in the end is because its the only chorus with vocals so I wanted to do some emphasys in what is for me the stronger vocals. If you find it inconsistent (which probably is tbh) I dont mind changing it.

EDIT 1/31/2017:

[HD]

1. 00:11:535 (11535|0) - move this to column 3 could help for the pattern variation imo, since you jacked 00:10:026 - and 00:08:516 - on column 1. Well, I jacked them because I want them jacked as the sound is kinda the same one in terms of instrument usage. Will move to 4 tho, as all the jacks were on column 1 so far.
2. 00:13:045 (13045|1) - maybe move this to column 3? For consistencty with other parts that similar with this one. The reason why the jack is previously here is for the new sound that is introduced on that section.
3. 00:14:554 - , 00:17:573 - these parts as well, like above. this are fixed
4. 00:22:290 (22290|1) - move this to column 4 to avoid same pattern with 00:22:667 - could help for the pattern variation imo. sure
5. 00:28:328 - add one more note here on column 3 to make it become a double like you did at 00:27:573 - .oki
6. 00:39:271 - maybe add one more note here? like you did at 00:37:761 - , 00:34:743 - , etc. alright
7. 00:43:422 (43422|2) - move this to column 2 for hand balance?
8. 01:03:233 (63233|2) - move this to column 4 for hand balance? done both but this one was 1/3
9. 01:04:743 - suggest to add one more note here, kinda weird to play if you keep this like this imo, also for consistency with 01:01:724 - .Its following vocals, thats why there is a break over there. The MX diff has the same break.
10. 01:07:573 - you can add one more note here for the snare/clap (maybe? idk the name lol) sound. I think its just a drum. The reason why its not a double is because it has an LN and holding + double nopnop
11. 01:07:950 - add one more note here for cymbal? oki
12. 01:23:988 (83988|0) - maybe move this to column 3? since you didn't jack 01:23:988 (83988|0) - , 01:22:478 - .aite
13. 01:25:686 (85686|0,85875|1) - if you map this one like this, then i would suggest to move 01:25:309 (85309|3) - to column 3, might need to remap the pattern before this part a little though. did something
14. 01:27:573 (87573|2,87761|2) - i don't think this jack is necessary, maybe remap this part a little? I think this jack has enought of a break and also follows the pitch of the vocal sorta.
15. 01:29:460 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196995 plays better imo. oke
16. 01:30:214 (90214|0,90592|0) - the flow looks weird if map this on the same column, since the vocals are different each other. done
17. 01:32:101 - add one more note here for cymbal. killer, nope, didnt do it before either
18. 01:35:309 (95309|0) - move this to column 3, much easier to play k.

[NM]

1. 00:07:950 (7950|2,8139|3) - swap the column, looks better imo and more balance. sure
2. 00:11:724 (11724|1) - move to column 1 for hand balance. oke
3. 00:18:516 (18516|3,18516|1,18705|2,18894|1,18894|3,19082|2,19271|3,19271|1) - i have no idea why this part should be mapped with this repetitive pattern, might need to remap this part a little. alright
4. 00:19:837 (19837|0) - delete this, for consistency with 00:22:856 - , 00:24:365 - etc. ye
5. 00:23:611 (23611|1) - move this to column 4, since you mapped 00:21:724 (21724|2,22101|1) - , 00:20:214 (20214|2,20592|1) - , etc with different column each note. interesting catch
6. 00:36:252 - i know if you mapped the LNs like this to simplify the pattern, but however inconsistent with other diffs, for example, with HD diff I dont believe in this type of "consistency" between diffs when it comes to simplification but for both of us to be happy I just made them 1/1 LNs instead of 1/2 LNs (would even make it easier).https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197052 .
7. 00:47:573 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197066 looks better, also actually a mirrored pattern from 00:46:063 - .sure
8. 00:49:460 (49460|0) - move to column 3 for hand balance.
9. 01:04:365 (64365|2) - move to column 1, would be cool since it is a mirrored pattern from 01:02:856 - . both ok
10. 01:04:931 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197084plays better for me at least. It does, lol. Made it slightly different
11. 01:06:629 (66629|2,66724|3,66818|0,66912|1,67007|2) - i would rather to simplify this to 121 (note amount) 1/2 beat pattern, suddenly map the 1/4 is kinda hard to play. I think its edgy but its fine, given the previous 1/4 things. Will think
12. 01:24:931 (84931|3,84931|1,85686|3,85686|1,86063|3,86063|1) - kinda noticeable for me when testplaying this diff, might need to give some variation.
13. 01:30:403 (90403|2) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
14. 01:38:705 (98705|1) - move to column 4 for hand balance maybe?
15. 01:42:101 (102101|3) - this one too, like above but move to column 1? some changes to balance here have been applied

[EZ]

1. 00:17:195 (17195|2) - move to column 4? Since column 4 looks kinda empty here.
2. 00:20:026 - until 00:35:875 - actually i kinda unsatisfied to see the patterns almost look similar with NM diff (at least the note amount almost the same), maybe it is fine to keep it like this, but i suggest to make it different though. I think with the previous changes of NM the difference should be noticeable
3. 00:49:837 (49837|0,50214|1) - swap the column for note variation, since i saw you use too many [13] and [24] around this part. changed from many [13] and [24] to many [12] and [34] should be easier.
4. 00:56:252 - until 01:04:554 - same like before.
5. 01:07:195 - i believe EZ pattern is actually harder than NM at this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197145 . It looks like but I think its not. Mostly due to the fact that it is being REALLY consistent in the EZ diff to keep up with stuff like that when in the NM you are jumping from a hard 1/4 section into a bit of a calm part.
6. 01:12:101 (72101|3,72101|1,72856|3,72856|1) - kinda noticeable for me when testplaying this diff, could be better to make some variation here.
7. 01:14:554 (74554|3) - move to column 1 for hand balance.
8. 01:20:780 - , 01:22:290 - , 01:23:799 - , etc, you use too many stairs pattern that cause the pattern looks boring to play, might be better to make some variation here. previous stuff is okey. This one I am not sure, didnt want it to make it hard. Changed

I personally think this map is not ready tbh (the pattern still can be improved with some mods imo), could be better if you find a couple of mods before call me back.