hello,mod req via queue
[Timing]
offset is earlier, fix it with 3040 but change it after applied the mods[General]
ok![MX]
Column -1-2-3-4-
this mod will focus on pattern consistency and fixing the abuse of the note xD
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00:07:734 (7734|0,7734|3,7734|2) - pattern like this is a little overchorded ,suggest to change all of them in 2 notes cause the strong hit in this section are like here 00:07:923 - and here 00:08:678 - ,so suggest to add notes where you can hear that hit of cymbal and removing where there aren't ,if you agree with this then ----->
00:07:734 (7734|3) - delete
00:07:923 - add
00:08:678 - add
00:09:055 (9055|3) - delete
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now for those 1/2 LN 00:08:678 (8678|1,8678|3) - you put those LN for that long sound right?? Then they should end here 00:09:055 -
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00:09:244 (9244|2) - delete
00:09:433 - add 1
00:10:187 - add
00:10:565 (10565|0,10753|1) - delete
00:10:942 - add 4
00:11:697 - add
00:12:074 (12074|3,12263|1) - remove then fix the pattern for the LNs's end
00:12:451 - add
00:13:206 - add
00:13:772 (13772|2) - del
00:13:961 - add
00:14:716 - add
00:15:093 (15093|0,15282|1) - remove and fix the LNs's end here too
00:15:470 - add
00:16:225 - add
00:16:602 (16602|0,16791|2) - remove
00:16:980 - add
00:17:734 - add
00:18:112 (18112|1,18301|2) - remove
00:18:489 - add
00:19:244 - add
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00:29:904 - suggest to add 1 for the vocal,better don't break the rhytm here xD
00:31:508 (31508|2) - turn in 1/2 LN for the vocal
00:32:451 (32451|3) - delete ,overchorded
00:33:206 (33206|0) - this too
00:35:848 - add a note here
00:40:753 (40753|0) - LN for this vocal should end here 00:40:942 -
00:41:508 (41508|2) - LN for this vocal should end here 00:41:697 -
00:41:131 (41131|3) - LN for this vocal should end here 00:41:414 -
00:41:885 (41885|3) - LN for this vocal should end here 00:42:168 -
00:43:395 (43395|0) - move in col 2 and end the LN here 00:43:772 -
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00:43:772 - from here it repeat the overchorded use of the notes so if you applied the first mods do here too
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00:56:036 (56036|3) - move this note here 00:56:225 -
00:56:414 (56414|0) - delete
00:56:791 (56791|3) - move this note here 00:56:980 -
00:58:112 (58112|0,58206|0,58206|2,58301|3,58395|3,58395|1) - uhmm... little wrong this pattern ,suggest to CTRL+H then CTRL+G ,this one is more confortable and follow the pitch of the sound too
00:58:489 (58489|2,58489|0,58678|1,58678|3) - little strange here too xD , you mapped like this because of the wrong offset, but those vocal are long 1/2 so i suggest to turn those LN in 1/2 LN
00:59:055 (59055|3) - del
00:59:244 - add here
00:59:621 (59621|0) - move in 4
00:59:810 (59810|3) - del
00:59:999 - add 1
01:00:187 (60187|3) - move here 01:00:376 -
01:01:319 (61319|0) - del
01:01:885 (61885|2) - del
01:02:263 - add here
01:02:640 (62640|1,63395|2) - del
01:03:772 - add
01:04:150 (64150|2) - del
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open01:04:904 (64904|3,64904|2,64904|1,64999|0,65187|0,65187|1,65187|2,65282|3,65470|2,65470|3,65470|0,65565|1,65753|0,65753|3,65848|2,65848|1,66036|1,66036|0,66131|3,66131|2,66319|2,66319|0,66414|1,66414|3,66602|0,66602|1,66602|3,66697|2,66791|1,66791|0,66885|2,66885|3) -
hue try like this?? following your style this is the best placement for pattern consistency and amount of note for each sound
01:07:829 - add 3
01:08:112 (68112|3,68112|0) - delete
01:08:678 (68678|0) - move here 01:08:584 -
01:09:244 (69244|3,69244|0) - delete
01:10:753 (70753|3) - del
01:11:697 (71697|1,71697|2) - move here 01:11:602 - and rearrange in col 1 4
01:11:791 - add 2
01:12:640 (72640|3,72640|0) - del
01:12:829 - add 4
01:14:716 (74716|2) - del
01:15:470 (75470|2) - del
01:16:225 (76225|3) - del
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now i suggest to turn those note in 1/2 LN for the vocal
01:16:225 (76225|2,76414|3,76602|2,76791|1) -
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01:19:621 (79621|1) - end this LN here 01:19:999 -
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01:20:187 - starting again from here , notes are overchorded in some pattern ,fix like the previous two one
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01:30:565 (90565|2,90942|1,91319|2,91697|0) - those LN like in the previous pattern here 00:36:225 - should end here 01:30:848 - 01:31:225 - 01:31:602 - 01:31:980 -
01:44:150 (104150|3) - end here 01:44:433 -
that's all ,hope i'll be helpfull