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Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks :)
fixed already.
acethical
star
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy
nice..

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00:06:007~00:09:237 这些circle建议重排下~
00:09:699(1) - clap
00:13:391(1) - ^
00:15:237(1) - finish
00:17:084(1) - clap
00:20:776(1) - ^
00:28:161(1) - finish
00:31:853(1) - ^
01:25:391(1) - clap
01:32:776(1) - finish
01:36:468(1) - clap
01:40:161(1) - finish
01:47:545(1) - ^
03:18:007(1) - 加finish在开始处

Starrr~
Kurai
Hi~
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine.

Hu... I love lthat ♥ Double Star~
Selee
咳 可以用中文么...
:D
[General] 音效可以考虑下么...尤其是easy 感觉好乱..

另外为什么不考虑做做看演唱部分..感觉光打节伴奏有些无聊...
非搬走的话..例子: [normal]
2:59:314 黄5往前挪1/2拍
3:00:500 补个note
3:01:161 ^
3:02:314 ^
这样子 会不会好打一些..
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks for above all :)
Eirene
first, you may set custom colors, it's a bit bright

[Normal] :
03:01:161 (9) - whistle sounds odd

[Easy] :
00:55:853 (1) - finish, not clap

it's hard to find mistakes with such a calm timeline :3
STAR
DJPop
~Easy~
00:35:545 (1) - remove new combo (optional)

~Normal~
01:13:391 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
01:20:776 (1) - ^
01:27:699 (4) - new combo
01:35:084 (4) - ^
01:42:468 (4) - ^
01:46:160 (4) - ^
01:52:160 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
02:36:468 (1) - ^
02:59:314 (5) - new combo
03:10:622 (5) - ^
03:28:391 (1,2,3,1) - move closer (optional)
03:29:776 (2) - stack on the end of sliders
03:31:622 (4) - ^


+Star
Topic Starter
vivicat
fixed already,thanks. :)
i use a new picture as the background.
Sakura
Umm i dont know if my osu! is being weird or what, but everytime i download there's an update availaible that kills the BG :<

[General]
Why isnt Easy completely mapped?

[Normal]
00:13:853 (2,3,4) - Are theese intentionally misaligned?
00:15:699 (2) - ^
00:18:237 (4) - ^

Ok that's all i could find, unfortunately i was told to not Star maps with half mapped difficulties so, sorry :< no star
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
The scorebar-kidanger, and scorebar-kidanger2 is missing

[File]
Your bg (BG.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 960x767)

[Easy]
00:13:391 (2) - New combo??
00:20:776 (2) - ^
00:51:237 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo??
00:56:776 (2) - This object is not stack perfectly with 1 at the end of slider, please stack it
01:03:237 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:622 (1) - ^
01:18:007 (1) - ^
03:05:084 (1) - ^
03:06:930 (3) - New combo??
03:18:007 (5) - ^
03:34:737 (1) - Move backward to white tick and extend??

[Normal]
01:21:699 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?
03:22:391 (2) - Stack with 1 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?
03:24:237 (4) - Stack with 3 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?

Good song
STAR
Garven
[General]
Delete .osb file in folder, then full submit (unless you plan on making a Story Board for this song). Make sure you check the folder each time you update your map, otherwise it will sneak back in there. It's annoying to keep track of. :( Geh, nevermind my ramblings.

[Easy]
00:17:084 (1) - On this slider, take out the red anchor in the middle. When you have the slider selected, right click on the control point. This will make it so it doesn't have that sharp angle that makes it stick out from the other sliders.
00:35:545 (6) - Same with this one - also as a general rule, I wouldn't use a red control point on the end of a slider.
01:05:084 (1,2) - Remove the whistle from the slider slides. They just sound bad.
01:06:930 (2) - Make this a bezier slider. Sharp angled sliders wouldn't really fit well with this song.
02:21:237 (2) - Remove red anchor on this slider.
No real issues with the difficulty - it's just nice to see some smooth sliders for this type of song.

[Normal]
The hit sounds feel a little too loud - especially in comparison to Easy's volume levels. Set Normal's to the same levels that Easy has. The claps stick out really bad, otherwise.
Same thing about the sliders in this difficulty - make them smooth. :D
03:21:699 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remove the claps from the ends of all these sliders. Too many claps otherwise.

Some nice and relaxing difficulties for a great song. Great job!
anonymous_old
General
The song is variable-BPM, or at least variable-offset. Please have someone good at timing time this map. Ask awp or Rolled, for example.

Easy
00:54:007 (1,2) - Too hard for an Easy. Remove the 1/2.
00:55:853 (1,2) - ^

I don't like any of the stacks like 02:18:468 (3,4). Just harms readability.

Normal
Rename to Hard.
I don't like the spinners for the most part. Too many of them. =X

01:23:545 - Break, please.

Otherwise, pretty nice.
[DBF]
[Easy]

00:09:699 (1) - add finish in end.
00:17:084 (1) - ^
00:30:930 (4) - ^
01:53:084 (6) - ^
02:07:853 (3,4) - spacing.
02:35:545 (1) - add finish.
03:34:622 (1) - ^

[Hard]

01:00:693 (3,4) - add whistles.
01:06:231 (5,6) - ^
01:06:924 (1) - ^
01:15:462 (4,5) - ^
02:37:385 (1) - finish.
03:08:078 (3) - whistle.
03:24:924 (6) - ^
03:32:770 (1) - finish.

Star~
dvorak_old
Ghibli yeahhhh

can't find any variable-bpm or wrong offset.
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
You have a beautiful beatmap here! I'm looking forward to it's approval so I can play it again. :)

Easy:
01:25:391 - 02:35:084 - I can see that your AI Mod tells you otherwise, but all up in here, it's veeeeeeerrrryyyyy smooshed feeling. Noobs can't read notes this close together, keep in mind. ... Just saying.
00:38:314 - Add a hit circle right in the middle of the board here.
Other than these, I couldn't find anything at all wrong with it! Good job!

Hard:
Awww, This one was so GREAT!
I tried so hard to find something wrong with it for you too... T_T
kino77
Nice one for the first map~ :3

[General]
offset 4190 resnap all notes and timing section
Move all timing section (volume changing) before note a little bit?

[Easy]
All fine~

[Hard]
Hitsound mod
SPOILER
00:58:847 , 00:59:078 - Whistle?
01:05:308 (2,3) - Remove whistle?
01:13:616 , 01:13:847 - Whistle?
01:20:078 (2,3) - Remove whistle?
01:27:924 (2,3) - ^
01:31:616 (3,4) - ^
01:35:308 (2,3) - ^
01:39:001 (3,4) - ^
01:42:693 (2,3) - ^
01:46:385 (2,3) - ^
01:50:078 (3,4) - ^
01:54:924 (1) - Whistle at start and end?
01:57:462 (3,4) - Remove whistle?
01:58:616 (1) - Whistle at start and end?
02:01:154 (3,4) - Remove whistle?
--Same as others 02:08:308 (2,3) - Why clap only here?
02:21:231 (3,6) - Remove whistle?
02:22:616 (1) - Whistle?
02:36:001 (3,6) - Remove whistle?
03:25:385 (1) - Whistle?
02:38:770 - Volume 35% and move it after spin little bit?
03:14:308 - Start KIAI here?
03:29:078 - Volume 25%?
03:38:424 - What's this timging section for?

Star~
Kiddo-Kun
[Easy]

00:35:545 (6) - New combo
01:03:237 (4) - ^
01:46:622 (1) - Remove new combo so it's the same as the rest
01:47:545 (3) - NC
01:50:314 (1) - Same for 01:46:622
01:51:237 (3) - NC
02:35:084 (5) - I grid left

[Hard]

00:42:231 (4) - Spacing
01:53:078 (3) - Ugly

Good job~
Star
Hiiragi_kagami_old
:lol:
star
swiftcat_old
nice song ,nice map~
aesopl19193
Hey~ Good map=]

Delete the .osb file then full submit plx

Suggestion only:
[Hard]
03:16:616 (X) - add note to fit the music?
03:29:078 (4) - add whistle at start?
03:30:924 (1) - ^

[Normal]
03:32:776 (4) - new combo?

Star. :)
Kasen
Nice song! i like it ;)
Star
roflninja
+10 offset?

[easy]

00:04:160 (1) - unsnapped
01:53:555 - try to remove this small break if possible? (imo)

[hard]

~all good
01:12:308 - small break again, try to remove (imo)

nice map ;)
AngelHoney
All

Lead-in 設置為0 (按F4 => Audio)
.osu文件 還是沒刪掉:< (刪掉以後 用Full Submission!!)

Hard

00:19:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5和6的間距不同?!
00:38:088 (1,2,3,4) - 貌似因為這個跳 很多人不能DT了吧XD
00:49:626 (4,5) - 間距怎麼突然變大了..
01:54:934 (1) - 因為中間的小點點..感覺這個slider看起來有點奇怪._.(從這開始的後面幾個slide 看起來一個比一個奇怪lol 改下造型?一般slider只要3個點就够了 如果要漂亮點的slider 可以去看下別人的map是怎麼弄的:3 雖然玩起來是沒差 但是美觀點更好XD
01:57:934 (4,5) - 和之前一樣 間距突然變大了D: (之前的一些3 4 都是正常間距 這裡突然變大了D: 可以的話 這裡在一些排列上改下 讓人感覺不會那麼突然
02:19:395 (1) - 稍微移開點 或者slider朝向改下 (這樣容易搶拍
02:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 123 和 456 這2組的間距怎麼突然又變小了..
02:32:318 (2,3) - 這2個是不是靠的有點近了(1和2 , 2和3 之間)
02:34:164 (1) - 和之前一樣
02:35:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和之前一樣
02:38:780 - 這段break time太長了:< (一般最多只能15秒)
02:58:395 - 這一段的音量太低了....
03:08:088 (3) - slider上的whistle去掉
03:18:703 (2) - 對準之前(1)的尾端 (一般可以這樣:把2給取消掉 然後重新下 鼠標移到slider的尾端附近時 會自動對準尾端:3
感覺在第一段kiai里 newcombo貌似太多了D:

Normal

00:55:857 (1) - 去掉newcombo
01:05:088 (1) - 去掉slider上的whistle
01:31:857 (5,1) - 互換newcombo
02:39:241 - 和hard一樣
03:15:703 (2,3) - 間距變大了?!

圖本身沒什麽大問題 不過有些地方間距有點亂(newcombo的使用也是)

star =w=
KEMONO_old
:) STAR
chocolate5215
给星给星


好可爱的歌 :lol:
打起来也很舒服~
banvi
Hello :D

Easy
00:06:019 (1) 1 grid left?(grid lv3)
00:20:789 (1) ^
00:33:712 (3) 1 grid down?
03:33:712 (2) 1 grid right?
Hard
00:59:558 (3) 1 grid right?
01:39:019 (1) 1 grid down&1grid left?
01:39:943 (5) 1 grid down?
01:40:173 (6) 2 grid down?
02:55:404 (4) 1 grid up?
03:13:173 (1) ^

Sorry for only nazi mod.
nicemap~
star & gl :D
Mystearica
我觉得整体音量应该大一点, 现在听不到什么呢. 看你了.

Try offset -5 ms. 感觉好像有第二个offset...

[Hard]

00:38:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - 觉得这里没必要跳
01:23:548 - 这里鼓开始打, 你可以用normal-hitnormal代替一个soft音档来下音效, 愿意么?

[Normal]

没什么问题, 音效上面同上面一样的建议.

加油.
Topic Starter
vivicat
all done >_>
加了鼓的音效>_>
Selee
Source改成Neko No Ongae Shi ? Tag加入The Cat Return? 貌似歌名也改成Kaze ni Naru比较好? 貌似Become the wind是翻译的翻译版

[Easy]
difficulty怎么像是normal难度的设定?...OA-3? HP Drain Rate-3?
01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - 全加上whistle效果试试看?
02:55:861 (4) - 按照之前的模式中间也加whistle?
纯建议...不过感觉速度实在是太慢了

[Hard]
Circle size+1? 感觉比较空...
好吧 还是纯建议
其实真正的问题一点都没有 :D

其实可以把太鼓音效加齐的...

这么好的歌就2个diff? (掀桌
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. KIAI sections should be same on all difficulties.
  2. Offset 6025
~Easy~
  1. 00:14:322 (2,3) - Wrong spacing.
~Hard~
  1. 00:35:091 (4,5) - Wrong stack.
  2. 01:07:630 (7,8) - Wrong stack.
  3. 01:39:014 (1,2) - ^
Topic Starter
vivicat

Selee wrote:

Source改成Neko No Ongae Shi ? Tag加入The Cat Return? 貌似歌名也改成Kaze ni Naru比较好? 貌似Become the wind是翻译的翻译版

[Easy]
difficulty怎么像是normal难度的设定?...OA-3? HP Drain Rate-3?
01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - 全加上whistle效果试试看?
02:55:861 (4) - 按照之前的模式中间也加whistle?
纯建议...不过感觉速度实在是太慢了

[Hard]
Circle size+1? 感觉比较空...
好吧 还是纯建议
其实真正的问题一点都没有 :D

其实可以把太鼓音效加齐的...

这么好的歌就2个diff? (掀桌
找不到BAT根本没动力作图了 :( 费半天劲也很难RANK
愿意的话来做个GUEST DIFF吧._.
The 08 team_Bourdon
:D 給星~give a star~
deepsea
._.
Alace
Suggest add 10% volume to ALL taiko sectioms, the sample has a small volume
pretty nice first mapset
deepsea DAMN you, you bubbled it fitst ~_~
Selee
=w= 猫猫恭喜啦 坐等RANK
guest diff下次再说吧 >w<
Alace
I just play it for fun XD
i pick the hitsounds you need in this RAR, and i make a shirt section`s hitsound
take your time to fix it,
in fact, the hitsounds are already pretty good now
really love this song

Download: 14556 Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind.rar
Takuma
cute - a star for you.
Shinxyn
>.<

I guess you're not ganna follow Alace's suggestion? (cuz I do think the taiko hitsound sections are pretty quiet), and imo, I think the "katsu" (blue taiko note) hitsound would fit nicely...

Also on a side note-
Hard-
00:39:255 (1,2) - was this spacing on purpose? it reads fine since the slider is slow, but its the only one like this (too close)
00:55:871 (4,5) - ^ (a bit farther than the other notes)
Not worth popping over.... eh... please reply if you're ganna change or not, if not... then... hmm
Talked to Alace about this, and we'll pop for now >.< (cuz you're too busy to "fix" D:)

Ask me back for remod/rebubble/rank if you want :x
Topic Starter
vivicat

Shinxyn wrote:

>.<

I guess you're not ganna follow Alace's suggestion? (cuz I do think the taiko hitsound sections are pretty quiet), and imo, I think the "katsu" (blue taiko note) hitsound would fit nicely...

Also on a side note-
Hard-
00:39:255 (1,2) - was this spacing on purpose? it reads fine since the slider is slow, but its the only one like this (too close)
00:55:871 (4,5) - ^ (a bit farther than the other notes)
Not worth popping over.... eh... please reply if you're ganna change or not, if not... then... hmm
Talked to Alace about this, and we'll pop for now >.< (cuz you're too busy to "fix" D:)

Ask me back for remod/rebubble/rank if you want :x
I'll follow Alace's suggestion.I'm a little busy recently,and i'll fix this map next Monday >_>
Also thank you very much >_>
and...

I'm your fans Shinxyn >///<
Loliphilia
Which makes 51stars!
Shinxyn
Rebubbled~ :D!
Topic Starter
vivicat

Shinxyn wrote:

Rebubbled~ :D!
thanks > <
Alace
Just hold on
we will try to make hitsounds better

EDIT:bubble time
Shinxyn
Ya~ I knew the blue taiko note hitsounds would fit xD

Ranked~!
Selee
恭喜咯(^_−)−☆
deepsea
Damn it I am too slow.~_~

Anyway grats.
banvi
conglaz~ :)
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks every one ~~XD
Sallad4ever
oh didn't realize this is finally ranked :o

Congratz for your first ranked map :)
Topic Starter
vivicat

Sallad4ever wrote:

oh didn't realize this is finally ranked :o

Congratz for your first ranked map :)
oh sallad ~XD
i want thank you especially,for your help when i first begin this map
if not you,this will not be ranked,and i can't become a mapper
sorry for my poor english,and thank you again >.>
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