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Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind

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swiftcat_old
nice song ,nice map~
aesopl19193
Hey~ Good map=]

Delete the .osb file then full submit plx

Suggestion only:
[Hard]
03:16:616 (X) - add note to fit the music?
03:29:078 (4) - add whistle at start?
03:30:924 (1) - ^

[Normal]
03:32:776 (4) - new combo?

Star. :)
Kasen
Nice song! i like it ;)
Star
roflninja
+10 offset?

[easy]

00:04:160 (1) - unsnapped
01:53:555 - try to remove this small break if possible? (imo)

[hard]

~all good
01:12:308 - small break again, try to remove (imo)

nice map ;)
AngelHoney
All

Lead-in 設置為0 (按F4 => Audio)
.osu文件 還是沒刪掉:< (刪掉以後 用Full Submission!!)

Hard

00:19:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5和6的間距不同?!
00:38:088 (1,2,3,4) - 貌似因為這個跳 很多人不能DT了吧XD
00:49:626 (4,5) - 間距怎麼突然變大了..
01:54:934 (1) - 因為中間的小點點..感覺這個slider看起來有點奇怪._.(從這開始的後面幾個slide 看起來一個比一個奇怪lol 改下造型?一般slider只要3個點就够了 如果要漂亮點的slider 可以去看下別人的map是怎麼弄的:3 雖然玩起來是沒差 但是美觀點更好XD
01:57:934 (4,5) - 和之前一樣 間距突然變大了D: (之前的一些3 4 都是正常間距 這裡突然變大了D: 可以的話 這裡在一些排列上改下 讓人感覺不會那麼突然
02:19:395 (1) - 稍微移開點 或者slider朝向改下 (這樣容易搶拍
02:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 123 和 456 這2組的間距怎麼突然又變小了..
02:32:318 (2,3) - 這2個是不是靠的有點近了(1和2 , 2和3 之間)
02:34:164 (1) - 和之前一樣
02:35:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和之前一樣
02:38:780 - 這段break time太長了:< (一般最多只能15秒)
02:58:395 - 這一段的音量太低了....
03:08:088 (3) - slider上的whistle去掉
03:18:703 (2) - 對準之前(1)的尾端 (一般可以這樣:把2給取消掉 然後重新下 鼠標移到slider的尾端附近時 會自動對準尾端:3
感覺在第一段kiai里 newcombo貌似太多了D:

Normal

00:55:857 (1) - 去掉newcombo
01:05:088 (1) - 去掉slider上的whistle
01:31:857 (5,1) - 互換newcombo
02:39:241 - 和hard一樣
03:15:703 (2,3) - 間距變大了?!

圖本身沒什麽大問題 不過有些地方間距有點亂(newcombo的使用也是)

star =w=
KEMONO_old
:) STAR
chocolate5215
给星给星


好可爱的歌 :lol:
打起来也很舒服~
banvi
Hello :D

Easy
00:06:019 (1) 1 grid left?(grid lv3)
00:20:789 (1) ^
00:33:712 (3) 1 grid down?
03:33:712 (2) 1 grid right?
Hard
00:59:558 (3) 1 grid right?
01:39:019 (1) 1 grid down&1grid left?
01:39:943 (5) 1 grid down?
01:40:173 (6) 2 grid down?
02:55:404 (4) 1 grid up?
03:13:173 (1) ^

Sorry for only nazi mod.
nicemap~
star & gl :D
Mystearica
我觉得整体音量应该大一点, 现在听不到什么呢. 看你了.

Try offset -5 ms. 感觉好像有第二个offset...

[Hard]

00:38:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - 觉得这里没必要跳
01:23:548 - 这里鼓开始打, 你可以用normal-hitnormal代替一个soft音档来下音效, 愿意么?

[Normal]

没什么问题, 音效上面同上面一样的建议.

加油.
Topic Starter
vivicat
all done >_>
加了鼓的音效>_>
Selee
Source改成Neko No Ongae Shi ? Tag加入The Cat Return? 貌似歌名也改成Kaze ni Naru比较好? 貌似Become the wind是翻译的翻译版

[Easy]
difficulty怎么像是normal难度的设定?...OA-3? HP Drain Rate-3?
01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - 全加上whistle效果试试看?
02:55:861 (4) - 按照之前的模式中间也加whistle?
纯建议...不过感觉速度实在是太慢了

[Hard]
Circle size+1? 感觉比较空...
好吧 还是纯建议
其实真正的问题一点都没有 :D

其实可以把太鼓音效加齐的...

这么好的歌就2个diff? (掀桌
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. KIAI sections should be same on all difficulties.
  2. Offset 6025
~Easy~
  1. 00:14:322 (2,3) - Wrong spacing.
~Hard~
  1. 00:35:091 (4,5) - Wrong stack.
  2. 01:07:630 (7,8) - Wrong stack.
  3. 01:39:014 (1,2) - ^
Topic Starter
vivicat

Selee wrote:

Source改成Neko No Ongae Shi ? Tag加入The Cat Return? 貌似歌名也改成Kaze ni Naru比较好? 貌似Become the wind是翻译的翻译版

[Easy]
difficulty怎么像是normal难度的设定?...OA-3? HP Drain Rate-3?
01:51:245 (1,2,3,4) - 全加上whistle效果试试看?
02:55:861 (4) - 按照之前的模式中间也加whistle?
纯建议...不过感觉速度实在是太慢了

[Hard]
Circle size+1? 感觉比较空...
好吧 还是纯建议
其实真正的问题一点都没有 :D

其实可以把太鼓音效加齐的...

这么好的歌就2个diff? (掀桌
找不到BAT根本没动力作图了 :( 费半天劲也很难RANK
愿意的话来做个GUEST DIFF吧._.
The 08 team_Bourdon
:D 給星~give a star~
deepsea
._.
Alace
Suggest add 10% volume to ALL taiko sectioms, the sample has a small volume
pretty nice first mapset
deepsea DAMN you, you bubbled it fitst ~_~
Selee
=w= 猫猫恭喜啦 坐等RANK
guest diff下次再说吧 >w<
Alace
I just play it for fun XD
i pick the hitsounds you need in this RAR, and i make a shirt section`s hitsound
take your time to fix it,
in fact, the hitsounds are already pretty good now
really love this song

Download: 14556 Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind.rar
Takuma
cute - a star for you.
Shinxyn
>.<

I guess you're not ganna follow Alace's suggestion? (cuz I do think the taiko hitsound sections are pretty quiet), and imo, I think the "katsu" (blue taiko note) hitsound would fit nicely...

Also on a side note-
Hard-
00:39:255 (1,2) - was this spacing on purpose? it reads fine since the slider is slow, but its the only one like this (too close)
00:55:871 (4,5) - ^ (a bit farther than the other notes)
Not worth popping over.... eh... please reply if you're ganna change or not, if not... then... hmm
Talked to Alace about this, and we'll pop for now >.< (cuz you're too busy to "fix" D:)

Ask me back for remod/rebubble/rank if you want :x
Topic Starter
vivicat

Shinxyn wrote:

>.<

I guess you're not ganna follow Alace's suggestion? (cuz I do think the taiko hitsound sections are pretty quiet), and imo, I think the "katsu" (blue taiko note) hitsound would fit nicely...

Also on a side note-
Hard-
00:39:255 (1,2) - was this spacing on purpose? it reads fine since the slider is slow, but its the only one like this (too close)
00:55:871 (4,5) - ^ (a bit farther than the other notes)
Not worth popping over.... eh... please reply if you're ganna change or not, if not... then... hmm
Talked to Alace about this, and we'll pop for now >.< (cuz you're too busy to "fix" D:)

Ask me back for remod/rebubble/rank if you want :x
I'll follow Alace's suggestion.I'm a little busy recently,and i'll fix this map next Monday >_>
Also thank you very much >_>
and...

I'm your fans Shinxyn >///<
Loliphilia
Which makes 51stars!
Shinxyn
Rebubbled~ :D!
Topic Starter
vivicat

Shinxyn wrote:

Rebubbled~ :D!
thanks > <
Alace
Just hold on
we will try to make hitsounds better

EDIT:bubble time
Shinxyn
Ya~ I knew the blue taiko note hitsounds would fit xD

Ranked~!
Selee
恭喜咯(^_−)−☆
deepsea
Damn it I am too slow.~_~

Anyway grats.
banvi
conglaz~ :)
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks every one ~~XD
Sallad4ever
oh didn't realize this is finally ranked :o

Congratz for your first ranked map :)
Topic Starter
vivicat

Sallad4ever wrote:

oh didn't realize this is finally ranked :o

Congratz for your first ranked map :)
oh sallad ~XD
i want thank you especially,for your help when i first begin this map
if not you,this will not be ranked,and i can't become a mapper
sorry for my poor english,and thank you again >.>
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